Hitomi Kansaki: Rock Star By: Stephanie Brown aka kasumi chan
e-mail: moon_princess_serena_@hotmail.com
disclaimer: i do not own escaflowne, if i did i'd buy an island. and i don't own prozzak or any of the other bands i took lyrics from... so no sueing please!!! hey i'm just a kid? what do you want????
type: havrn (hitomi and von romance novel)
scenario: it's been a few years since Hitomi ever saw Von... 2 to be exact... now hitomi is a big star! she has her own band called "ah my goddess" (copywrite) and she is the lead singer and guitar player. (yeah i know... it's going out on a limb... but i had a vision!) but in the middle of a rehearsel she and the members of her band get mystialy zapped to new fanaila! what will happen? what if a man showes up... with wings? looking for his long lost daughter... the one who was promised to von before his birth? to find out read... hitomi Kansaki: rock Star
CHAPTER 1 infatuation
Hitomi jumped around the stage at their rehersal. Ammano sat on a chair watching. hitomi did a guitar solo then reached for the mike... "i-n-f-a-t-u-a-t-i-o-n, i've got this little problem that i can not control you put my heart in jail but now it's on parol. you thought that you had left me alone in the rain but i saw you and my dead heart started up again... i do not wa wa wa want you... i do not ne ne ne ne need you... i just like the way you walk the way you move the way you talk oh yeah... and i can't let go! infatuations got a hold on me.. wa oh wa oh a midnight flight to insecurity... and i an't let go... and your making me loose my grip on reality... in fa fa fa fatuation!" J the percussionist let loose on the drums... ammano didn't really like him. his hair was never verry tiidy, and he always wore his clothes to baggy. even his scool uniform. "you said that you loved me but that was long ago and if i asked you out again would you still say no? is your heart fillled up with ice is your glare still cold or have you changed since then filled it up with gold?" the background singer melanie jumped in now. ammano didn't think much of her either... she reminded him of a character he saw on a tv show called friends... pheoby. really dumb... but she can sing! "i do not wa wa wa want you! i do not ne ne ne need you! i just like the way you talk the way you move the way you walk oh ya... and i can't let go infatuations got a hold on me!!! wa oh wa oh a midnight flight to insecurity and your making me loose my grip on reality... infatuation! in fa fa fatuation!" Last but not least her pal Simon went nuts on the keybord. he was really smart... some people would call him a nerd... untill they saw him at the piano. the song ended and hitomi whiped a bit of sweat away from her forhead. Ammano clapped. "verry nice..." hitomi smiled and jumped down... they did look kinda funny. she was in her track clothes, everyone else was still in there uniforms. "what did ya think?" ammano frowned. "it was good... but don't you think..." hitomi looked at him. "well i just mean that you should concentrate on school... and track a bit more..." hitomi let out a sigh. simon started playing mozart. "well... it was good... but this is your last year in school! you have to start thinking about your future! and stop hanging ot with your orphan friends..." hitomi frowned. "well they are," started ammano. "simons an orphan... J's parents beat him... and no one knows about melanie." hitomi frowned again. "it's just some dumb fantasy..." j lept down... "hey why don't you just leave hitomi alone jerk..." ammano blinked. "are you talking to me you smelly piece of crap...?" j smiled. "no thats the mirror talking." melanie giggled. "you want to fight!?" cried ammano. hitomi stepped between them. "stop it! we all know j will beat the crap out of you ammano... just go. i have to get to track practise." j smiled. "any time ammano." ammano shruggeed and walked off. "hmph... Ah my Goddess will be big... then will see" cried melanie sticking out her toung. simon just kept playing. "he's right you know..." hitomi looked up. "we are just a pile of useless crap." hitomi frowned. "don''t you dare say that! now i have to get to practise... you guys just chill a bit ok?" the 3 nodded as hitomi ran off to her track meet.
CHAPTER 2 jack
von sighed. "isnt this wonderful lord von?" cried the 16 year old cat girl. mearl. von let out a sigh. "depends on what your definition of wonderful is..." mearl laughed. Von was now king... and was beeing forced to take a wife... soon. Mearl was hoping to be picked... so she was being very nice. right noe a man was playing his strangely shaped instrument and singing. something fluttered down from the upstairs room... a man ain a hood left quickly. the object fell right into mearls lap. she looked at it. "what a silly thing..." she said turning it over. she gasped and dropped it. von looked across at her from the place he sat at the table. "something wrong Mearl?" the pendent he always wore... given to him as a gift from a young girl long ago... began to glow. von looked at it. "the pendents reacting to something..." he looked at mearl... she pointed to a piece of paper on the table.. quivering.. von picked it up. "it's a tarot card... like the ones Hitomi used..." Mearl shook her head. "no... flip it over..." Von did... his eyes widend. the card dropped from his hand. "b-but..." mearl nodded. it was the angel card! a sigh escaped von... not a relaxed sigh...a scared sigh. he picked it up again. "is it one of hitomis lord von??" asked mearl. von shrugged. "mearl it's been 2 years... their is no way this could be hitomis..." sudenly the doors flew open. a man in a hood and cape stood there. he streched out his hand and pointed to von. "here here, what is the meaning of this?" asked von. his guards started running towards the man. wings shot from the mans back... "stop!" cried Von. the men fell to their knees. Von stood up and drew his sword. "who are you..." the man was silent. "i have come to see you... i have journeyed here from the mystic moon..." an odd hush fell over everyone in the room. von eyed the man. he removed his hood to reveal an old face... he looked like Vons first general... allen shezar... only with brown hair streaked with grey. "who are you?" asked von standing up. mearl lept under the table. "King von of Fanalia... i have come to ask your help, and in return i shall grant you what you want..." von blinked. "are you from alanta... like me?" the man shook his head. "sorry, i have been rude." he fell to his knees and bowed. "my name is Jack... yes am from alanta..." mearl jumped up. "but didn't you just say you were from the mystic moon?" she yelled pointing an accusing finger at him. he stood up tall. "yes..." mearls eyes narrowed. "oh." the man smiled. "i went to the mystic moon to find my daughter... the promised one..." another hush and gasp fell over everyone except von and mearl who didn't know what he ment. "my daughter has great power... she was stolen from me as a child... and her mother as well. her mother was transported to the mystic moon where she lost her memories of me... but not her daughter. my daughter lived here for 5 years... i searched for her... but when who ever took her found out... they sent her to the mystic moon... back with my wife. i have spent countless years on ym search. my heart aches... so i come to you... Lord von." he bowed yet again. von nodded. "i see... but why me?" the man again stood up. "it's simple... you have wings..." von blinked. "you are 1/2 human... like her. " again more blinking. "what do you speak of old man..." he sighed. "your mother... " von jumped up. "my mother?!" he nodded. "i saved her life once... she said that i was ever in her need to let her know... i am now in her need... your need." he tossed a pendent shaped like a feather to von. his eyes widend. "what he speaks is true... this belonged to my mother... you may stay... Jack, my servents shall grant you a bed room... and food." he smiled. "and i shall grant you what you long..." he made a few acient sighns with his hands,, "it shall be deliverd tonight..." Von laughed. "what i want old man... can never be delivered." he turned his back and was led away buy the servent... mearl stuck her tounge out at him. (^-^)
CHAPTER 3 rehearsel
Hitomi stood in the garage her band had practised in.. she looked up at the night stars... the only one here so far was simon. he played alone on the piano. "i guess the others arent coming today." hitomi sighed. she didnt hear him. her life was so stress ful lately. especially her love life... it's not like amano gave her her kiss yet either. she sighed. "hitomi?" hitomi turned. "sorry simon... i was uh... zoneing out." he laughed. "i was thinking tonight we should practise with our eyes cosed... it helps us remember the music notes, the feel of our instruments... and we can focus on practising... and what it would be like to be on stage." hitomi smiled. simon was so smart... and cute but afraid to show his brains...he was wearing a light blue shirt with baggy jeans... and of course his adorable glasses. hitomi her self was actually dressed casually. she wore a pink noodle top., with a short leather skirt and tall black boots. she had her famous gym bag by her with some warmer close just incase she got cold. "that would be great simon..." he smiled. "your zoning again." hitomi blushed. "simon do you mind if i pick a song to start with?" simon smiled and handed her a blind fold... yes... she was thinking of von. "sure..." she sighed. they just relized their love for each other... when... she had to leave. she sighed and picked up her guitar. simon sat at the piano. they both put their blindfolds on... "you ready?" hitomi smiled and started playing the guitar... simon reconized it and started playing along... they just kept playing the same song over. to get used to it. hitomi loved being alone with simon. he was so easy to be around. somewhere else the clock was ticking close to 12. Hitomi kept singing, "What do you do when your best friend one day? somebody taked their life away. don't wanna wake up... monday morning. and how are you supposed to deal with everything you got to do... when you can barely belive it's true... don't wanna wake up monday morning. and i don't think that i can go to school today... without you, without you with out you without you monday morning..." because of their blindfolds... Hitomi and Simon didn't notice the room was glowing.
CHAPTER 4 HITOMIS FIRST CONCERT
Von sat in the ball room. the old man sat behind him, mearl was stareting to fall asleep. "i don't see why i must be awake..." said von eyeing jack. jack just smiled."you'll want to be here when your wish comes true... 5 minutes to 12." von sighed. "this is absurd... i can't believe i'm going threw with this..." now mearl WAS asleep. most of the guards were too. von removed his pendent and made the light dance across the wall making rainbows everytime the moonlight shown threw it. suddenly the pendent began to swing in a circular motion. light strted to spew from it... jack let out a cackle. von eyes widend as he was enveloped in white... everyone was alert except mearl... asleep ;) von jumped up. he could here music... what was going on? "and missing you is something that i never ever thought i'd have to do... you were always there i was there for you too... don't wanna wake up monday morning.." a brilliant female voice wrang out over the light. than beautiful sounds! (guitar, and piano) Von could hardly believe what he was seeing as the light grew dim. or what he was hearing. ""and of all the evil souls that do survive how could this world take such a beautiful life... don't wanna wake up monday morning. and i dont think that i could go to school today.. with out you without you without you without you... without you without you... monday morning..." then something happend. standing in the room, dancing around singing... holding an absurd item in her arms was hitomi! next to her was a young man playing a piano. "it's a guitar..." smiled jack. von blinked. hitomi and the boy were both wearing blind folds. hitomi was dressed so strangely... but it looked great. a thousand thoughts ran threw his head... hitomi still not knowing wear she was kept singing, and simon kept playing. "somethings coming over me i'll never feal the same... and the same world that brought you in is gonna take you away... and if there is away that you can here me when i pray... whe i wake up monday morning...hmmm hmmh mmmhmm." she danced around some more. von was still in shock... could this be? "without you! without you without you without you.... without you without you without you monday mornig!" mearl yawned and streched. her eyes widend. "hitomi!!!!" she cried. hitomi and simon stooped playing. "hitomi was that your mom?" hitomi was silent. "no... oh my gosh... theirs only one cat girl i know with that name..." she pulled of her blind fold. her eyes wet with tears. "mearl!" mearl jumped up and knocked her down. "hoh did you get here?" mearl smiled. "no... how did you get here?" hitomi blinked. she jumped up... fear in her eyes. "what?!" she cried looking around. simon removed his blind fold... "hitomi... whats going on here?" just then Allen appered. "von is everything o-k i he..." he dropped his sword. "hitomi?" he asked eyes wide. Von was still in shock. the old man just smiled. "who is this...?" asked mearl jumping over sniffing simon. "ah... hitomi... i think i've been playing too long... there is a giant cat girl sniffing me. is it just me... or IS A GIANT CAT SNIFFING ME?" mearl purred. "your cute... is he your boyfriend hitomi?" hitomi and simon blushed. "uh..." hitomi was interupted by allen. "hitomi how did you get here!" he cried running up to her. "i don't know... one minute simon and i were just practising for our band... the next i'm here1 oh dear. did you hear us allen?" allen smiled. "wait..." said simon. "von... allen... mearl... is this fanalia?" hitomi blinked. "your story you wrote... for that school contest... about going off to this strange planet. it was true wasnt it hitomi?" hitomi was silent and nodded. all of a sudden the clinking of piano keys could be heard. all eyes turned to mearl. "uh..." simon smiled. "it's called a piano... want me to show you?" mearl nodded scooting over. simon sat down and began to play... (eyes on me for thoes who are interested) hitomi looked over at him. he smiled. "simon... that's our song..." simon just smiled again. "is von here?" she asked. allen stepped back to reveal a stunned looking von. "hitomi.... how... how did you get here?" jack walked past... i think you know the answer to that." he wispered. "who are you..." said hitomi loudly. everyone looked at her looking at jake. "huh?" hitomi frowned. "you... i saw you in a vision... with a baby." jacks eyes widend. "pay no mind jack... hitomi is just in shock..." jack smiled. "no matter.," he continued to leave the room. hitomi just looked at him.
CHAPTER 6 reunion
Hitomi sat next to von, allen, mearl, and simon. they had spent the whole night catching up. hiomi even went to great lengths and explaned it all to simon. she told them all about their band... oh my godess, but also had to explane about there instruments and what a band was! von noticed the way Hitomi and simon sat so close... how they wrere so free around eachother. allen noticed von noticing this. mearl was just to tired to notice anything. "von... i think that's enough for tonight... ladies do need sleep." von laughed. "yes... cats too." everyone laughed except mearl who was konked out. von smiled. "will you join us for breakfest?" he asked then thought. "will you stay with me?" he blurted out. hitomi blushed. "er uh, what von means is that he request you stay in the castle..." hitomi smiled sweetly. "if his majesty requests... i can not refuse." von smiled. "you there, servent, show them to their rooms." the young girl nodded. "but sir... their is only 1 room available... the others are still be redone." hitomi smiled. "that's o-k, we can share one." she said looking at simon. he laughed. "yeah... so long as i don't have to sleep by the door!" she laughed and stood up. the little slave girl (slave is such a mean word! but it's true... but lets just say von is a nice master... and treats them all equal) led the way. von sighed and picked up mearl. "what a strange day... jack seemed rather interested in hitomi don't you think?" allen smiled. "jealous von?" von blinked. "of jack???" allen laughed. "no... of simon..." von was quiet. "why should i be jealous..." he mummbled. allen was silent. "just wondering. it sure is nice too have everyone togeather... it's been so long since we have seen lady hitomi... does she not look different von." von was silent. "her clothes sure do!" allen laughed
it was sunrise. von awoke. he could here something. he changed into his clothes and headed down the hall. it was coming from the ball room. as he enetered it he reconized the music... it was the piano.. simon was playing it wial hitomi leaned over it watching him. (eyes on me) the song sounded familliar. von was about to leeave when mearl squeased threw his kneese and jumped at hitomi. hitomi laughed. "dance with me mearl!" she danced around the room. big sewat drop on mearl as she was beeing flung around. but she began to laugh as hitomis sence of humar. van smiled. soon he was laughing. Hitomi was so happy it made people laughed. suddenly she stopped dropingmearl she fell to her knees. she didn't blink. "hitomi?" simon ran over. "are you having a vission?" von blinked. "you know about her vissions." simon nodded. hitomi blinked and jumped up. "it happened again. ... that man and the baby... he had wimgs... nno! their taking the baby from him... no why?!" she fell again. jack ran in the room. "whats going on?" allen close behind. jack fell. "no... don't take her from me!!! no!!!" allen lept to his side. "it's almost as if there conected somehow... hitomi wake up." cried simon. hitomi was shaking... "no.. poor baby.." she cried. "no... not my wife and my child... no!!!!" cried jack. as if on que they both stood up and snapped out of it. "i had a vision..." said both. allen blinked helping mearl up. "owe..." she said rubbing her bottom. Hitomi let out a cry... tears welled up in her eyes. simon got to her side before von could. "it's hitomi... poor hitomi..." von sighed.
CHAPTER7 matchmaker allen
allen and von were carrying hitomi to her room. simon was trying to calm jack down. von knew he could carry hitomi without help... but allen insisted. "von... i'm not so sure you want to help jack..." von looked up. "he brought hitomi tom... and saved my mother..." allen nodded. "yes but do you know what he means by she is promised to you? his daughter is promised... to you. in other words when we find her... you 2 shall be married." vons eyes widened. "but... he only want to find her not make me marry her..." allen shook his head. "that may be... but it was decided before your birth." von sighed. "i refuse to marry someone i don't know..." allensmiled. "but i thimk you do know her..." von looked up. allen looked at hitomi. von gasped. "what? hitomi? don't be a fool... jack is not her father." allen smiled. "you never know... hitomi never spoke of her father... isn't it strange they had visions at the same time...?" von shook his head. "hitomi has no wings!" allen sighed. "that may be... but her mother was a human... you never know.." von sighed. "well you have not given me your opinon about marryin her." he said laying her in a bed. "marry? well... she's not his daughter so no bother!" allen laughed. "von... it's been oubuios what you feel." von blinked. "what i feel means nothing to her... she loves the simon..." allen frowned as they closed hitomis door. "but what if she dosent..." von hit him. "stop it allen. do not mess with my emotions..." he took off dow the hall. allen just stood there. "oh van... the eyes are the window of the soul..."
Hitomi awoke... thimking she saw von, then blinked and relized Simon and mearl were watching her. simon placed a cool cloth on her head. mearl smiled. "hello!!" she cried. hitomi sat up. "huh wheres von?" mearl frowned. "lord von is upset..." hitomi blinked. "because of me???" mearl sighed. "if only..." she mumbled. "no, he just found out he's going to have to marry that tram who turns out to be jacks daughter... remember? i told you we were searching for her?" hitomi nodded. all was silent for a wial. " are you feeling any better lady hitomi?" hitomi looked up to see allen. he smiled. "yes... i am." allen bowed and kissed her hand. she laughed. "i'll never get used to that..." said simon with a laugh. "Lord Von is having a ball in your Honor, all of new fanalia rich or poor are coming, even prince Shied..." hitomi was silent.. memories of allens link to sheid... "it will be nice to see him... is your crew coming?" allen nodded. "yes... amd Malerna... she's had a baby. dryden is coming too!" hitomi smiled. "dryden... the mermaid guy right?" asked simon. hitomi nodded. allen and mearl soon left. simon sat on the end of hitomis bed. "i'm glad your feeling better... but how... are you going o get home...?" hitomi smiled. "i don't know... i was brought here for a reason last time... once my purpose was served i was brought home... just like my grandmother... so i guess as soon as i serve what ever purpose that i need to here." simon was silent. "hitomi... i would like to stay..." hitomi looked up. "it's just that... i don't have a place on earth, and i... i ddon't have a family... but its beautiful here! i want to stay and journey this place... play my music for people all over. it's just like your story of this place... ever since you read it in english class... i was mezmorized! i think its also one of the things that made me like you." hitomi smiled. "the choice is yours simon." simon smiled and hugged her. "if your cat friend saw us now..." hitomi laughed. "you know... i think she may like you..." simon laughed. "wow... back home cats hate me!!!" hitomi laughed. simon stood up. "well i'll leave you to rest... oh hitomi...?" hitomi smiled. "yes?" "well... the way you read your story... you sounded so passionet when you talked about von..." hitomi blinked. "maybe it's the way you 2 look at each other... or how happy he was to see you... is their something between you two?" memories flooded back to her... she sighed. "you'll have to excuse me simon... i'm feeling faint."
CHAPTER 8 the dreams are just a memory a way
"your daughter was taken from you? thats awful..." jack nodded. he had just finished telling hitomi of his loss. they were walking in the garden... von and allen running along sparing with each other. "no... i never really knew my daughter..." hitomi sighed. "it must be awful for her... i grew up without a dad... my mom insit on not telling me what happend to him... sio i don't ask. my whole life i've wonderd what it would be like to have a dad... i wonder if she feels the same way?" jack sighed. "well, until you find your daughter i'll be your daughter!!!" jack laughed. "heh heh." hitmo smiled. "im serious!!!" he laughed again. "ok, you be my daughter and i'll be your dad,"he put his arm around her. she laughed too. both dreaming of what it would be like to have a daughter/father. then hitomi saw mearl on a tree... she was picking apples. but she slipped! soon she was hanging on by the limb. "lord von!!!" she cried. von looked up. but when he did hitomi was allready running towards mearl. "lord von save me!" von took of 2. hitomi was faster. von couldn't even believ it... it wa like she had sprouted wings and took off. mearl slipped and fell.. hitomi dove... and cought her in her arms. they both tumbled down laughing. von was still running. he couldn't stop! he was going to bang into them! hitomi and mearl were now on there backs rubing their heads. "lord von!" cried mearl jumping up. unfourtnantly she tripped von trying to hug him. he went tumbling down. right ontop of hitomi! "look out!" he cried trying not to laugh at the stupid situation mearl had gotten them all in. hitomi put her arms up to block her face... down came von. the wind was knocked out of hitomi... but still she laughed. when sheopened her eyes there was vons laughing face. mearl ontop of him, rubing her knee. she lept up and von rolled over. still laughing. hitomi stood up and brushed herself off. "owe... gee your welcome mearl." mearl jumped again. "simon!" she cried running up. there was simon coming out of some bushes. "sorry guys, i was checking out these beautiful roses when i heard LORD VON!!! so i came to see what was going on!" even jack and allen were laughing now. "hitomi8, you must se these flowers..." hitomi followed simon. "hey..." started von. "thoes are mysitc flowers... my mother planted them." hitomi smiled. "we have thease back on the mystic moon... we call them roses." von studied the light in her eyes. "you like roses hitomi?" she nodded. she looked at them... and had a vivion...
CHAPTER 9 hitomis vision
flames? no... lights. it was the party. von was falling... falling from the balconey... he would hit the rocks below!!! why did he not fly? maybe he couldn't fly... hitomi had to save him! she was running... but she couldn't reach... and he fell....
"hitomi are you o-k?" hitomi shook her head quick at the site of mearls face. simon stepped up behind her. "another vision?" hitomi nodded. "oh simon..." she hugged him... "somehings gonna happen tonight." to everyone else it just looked like simon was caught by the romance of the mystic flowers... to hitomi... she was trembling inside.
hitomi looked at her dress... she made it just for the ball! it had only taken her a few hours. it reminded her of a wedding gown. long and white with beautiful bows... and glass slippers. she had a long silk sash wrapped around her arms. "i feel pretty." simon came up behind her. "you should... you look pretty." she smiled. he looked the same... except tidy, "shall i escort thee oh lady to thy ball?" hitomi laughed as he took her hand. "you may young sir." he led her out the room door. "are you still nervous about your prediction..?" she looked at him. "i will not take my eyes off von tonight... if anythng happend to him... i wouldn't forgive myself..
allen sat next to von who sat in his thrown greeting guests as they came in. something caught his eye. he turned to see hitomi glittering in a beautiful gown, being led by simon down the stairs. allen stood up. "well... isnt she a beauty..." he took hitomis arm as she giggled. "we might have to share her..." he said winking to simon. simon just smiled. mearl grabbed his arm. "hi!" she had her hair pulled back, and was wearing a blue dress. she pulled simon away. "dance with me...!" simon sweat dropped. allen smiled. "guess it's just the 2 of us, shall we dance?" hitomi smiled. "we shall!" she was surprised at how well allen danced. he didn't even step on her feet! von jut sighed at this. it was even worse that mearl wasnt bugging him! he was having a zone out period. for some reason... ever since hitomi left he had never been able to open his wings. maybe that was his mother coming back to hin. but the other night he was able to save a drowning man. maybe he was cursed. maybe e could only open his wings if it was for someone else... maybe he was just to scared to... he sighed watching couples dance... he felt a hand on his shoulder. jack. he smiled. "jack, i found some scrools that may be of use to you." jack looked up. "eh?" von nodded. they continued to have a conversation about it...
simon and hitomi were finally dancing. i mean finally! they never even danced at the mystic moon. hitomi layed her head on his shoulder. he smiled. "this place is so beautiful... but i think von may be getting jealous of us." hitomi looked up. "huh why?" simon smiled. "he's leaving the rroom." hitomi didn't even think that von could be going out on the balconey... she was just to... in love. she never thought of beeing in love with simon... especially since she held a special place for von... but ever since they began dancing... she'd been lost in his eyes. mearl was playfully dancing with allen. a waltz was playing, and all the guesta were having fun. simon and hitomi danced close... simon leaned down and wispered in her ear. "lets go outside." she sighed. "mmm... sure.." he smiled and led her to the garden. they walked along. "i thought we could dance out here... it's so beautiful... and we can still here the music." she smiled up at him. "you really like it here don't you..." she said starting to dance. "yes... it's almost like a paradise." hitomi shuttered. "it wasn't always... their was a war..." simon nodded. "i remember... your story." hitomi smiled.
von saton the balconey watching the 2 dancing... arms wrapped around each other... they looked so much in love. von remembered the time he cuaght allen and her kissing... after the rain. it almost killed him. he sighed leaning against the rail watching them. a shrill laugh was heard from hitomi. he smiled. he hadnt heard her laugh that way for a wial. the rail he leaned on began o shake... then it crumbled. von lost his balance... "oh no..." he slipped... but just grabbed onto the edge of the balconey. one arm dangling. he looked down to see the ocean and jagged rocks below... "i've got to ffly." he cried. "i've got to..." allen walked out. "von... von where are you... VON!" he tried to reach for vons hand but as he did part of the balconey caved. "the whole balconeys gonna fall!" he cried. people bagan to gather at the entrance. "you've got to fly..." von looked up with fear in his eyes. "i... i can't... i don't know whats wrong!!!" fear in allens eyes. mearl came over. "Lord von!!!" she cried tears in her eyes. "mearl stay back, the balconey can cave way anysecond!" mearl backed up. "you've got to save him allen." Vons hand slipped. "noooo!!!!" down below... hitomi and simon were about to kiss when hitomi looked up. "no... my vision..."
CHAPTER 10 the true role refersal
"no... von!!!" hitomi started running. "oh my gosh, hitomi... you wont make it!" von started falling down the cliff. hitting his back on the side of it as he fell. "no..." hitomi ran faster... "oh God... if your there... please help me save von..." she began to run faster and faster. she tore the skirt from her dress, verry short now. she ran. von flailed his arms wildley. he had to reach something... grab anything... why wouldn't his wings work? hitomi ran... tears streaming down her face... "VON!!!!" a tense pain ran threw her back... and wings shot out... she lept into the air. "Von... i'll save you..." he reached out his arm. wings... was jack trying to save him? "von... please... no..." that voice... it was hitomi. hitomi started to fall with him. her wings went strait behind her back. she grabbed hold of him. his pendant shown bright. "h..hitomi?" she smiled. she opened her wings... feathers flew everwhere. von couldn't believe what he was eeing. hitomi... had wings? all along? or did jack use some sort of magic?" hitomi now flew upstrait. she landed on the balconey. allens face was one of the many with a look of shock and wonder. von held hitomi for a second... "hitomi... your..." she fell to the ground... and fainted. then vons wings shot from his back...
simon ran up to hitomi. "hitomi...!" he cried holding her up. she blinked. "j..j..." simon nelt. "what are you trying to say?" "j..ja..jack. i need jack." jack himself was stunned. he rushed to her side. "i thought von andi were the last of our kind..." hitomi reached up. "the man... with the beird... he took me away from you." jack eyes widend. "what... what are you saying hitomi?" "momma was so sad... he took me away. i searched for you... papa..." she fainted again. jack stood up trembling... then fell back. allen caught him. "woa... what is it?" jack rubbed his head... "hitomis... hitomi is my daughter!" a gasp was heard. von just stood there looking over. "i remember... i remember the man taking me papa... momma and i searched for you. grandma said i should try to use the pendent to look for you. but i could never find you... you were here." jack fell and held her in his arms. "hitomi..." tears streamed down his face. little sparkling feathers flew all over. "i've found you..." he embraced her. "i've found... my daughter. my little hitomi..." most women were now in tears... oh and mearl too. vons feathers began to fall too. he nelt down. "she could have been killed... i couldn't open my wings... she saved me... hitomi has wings..." hitomi ooked up at him. "wings? i... yes... i couldn't let you die von." she stood up and took hold of his shirt. "i don'tknow wha happend. they just shot from my back... i must thank you... if not for you... i would have not seen or met mmy father..." she hugged him. it shocked him at first. "i... if not for you i would be dead hitomi...." he smiled recalling what hitomi had said when she saw his wings. "your wings... are beautiful.."
Chapter 11 to be or not to be
Hitomi stared at her reflection in the mirror. "oh simon... i feel so weird." he stepped up beside her. "i... i'm soryy... i kind of got a little out of control this eavning... sorry." hitomi looked up. "no... i mean about my ... wings... and my dad." simon sighed. "i see..." she looked up. "and von..." he knew she would say that. hitomi sat on her bed and picked up her pillow. "i'm grateful for finding my dad... but wings? oh i don't know. i always wondered why i could preidict the future... and how i could have visions... read tarot cards... and use my pendent. but wings... it's so... for the alantains... not for me. all they do is scare me." simon frowned and sat next to her. "hitomi, your wings helped you to do something wonderful today.... save vons life. surley deep in your heart you must have known." she sighed. "i used to have dreams of people with wings... and of my father... this is so different. when i first saw vons wings... they were beautiful! they still are. but when i see mine... nothing. and i feel so dishonest that i never knew about them when we fought the great war. i could have stopped it sooner... and i would have stayed." simon was silent. "this just feels wrong... what will von think of me now? he shall despise me." she stood up. "i could have helped him so many times... everything always came down to him saving me... i hate these wings... i hate them!!!!!" they shot back in her back leaving only a few feathers in the air. Von stepped in her room from the hall way where he was standing listning. "hitomi... your wings are beautiful..." she looked up with hate, and tears in her eyes. simon stood up. "er-hem... well... i'm gonna go see what that cat girl is up to..." he left the room. hitomi turned away and looked out the window. she didn't want to face von. tears trickling down her face. "hitomi..." she spun around. "no... don't say anything.. i.. don't think i can do this... i can't talk to you right now... i.. i.." she collasped crying in his arms. shaking... and crying. "hitomi..." mummered von sitting down. she stained his shirt with tears. "please hitomi... you have to hear this from someone... your wings are so beautiful... why are you ashamed of them...?" he cupped her face in his hand. she looked up. "oh von..." her eyes grew teary again. "i.. i... if only i had known! i could have helped stop the war... i could have solved part of the mystery of you moms dissaperance... i could have found my father! i could have..." he put his finger on her mouth to silence her. "i hate thease stupid wings..." von shook his head. "no... your wings add to your beauty... they helped you save me... they helped you find your father. don't pout on things that can not be changed... i can show you how wonderful they are..." he took her hand. "what...?" he smiled. "i'm gonna proove to you... that your wings are a blessing, not a curse." his wings shot up. she looked at him. "hitomi..." he sighed and concentraited on it... they soon shot out too. "now take my hand..." she looked up at him. "come on... take my hand and where 1/2 way there." she smiled and placed her hand in his. he brought her to the window... "here we go..." he lept with her. at first hitomi had a bit of trouble... but she soon got used to it... after seeing what the ocean and stars held... she had to try. vonheld her hand and flew into the stars with her. it was so amazing... "von... you were right... wings... wings are beautiful..." she said admiring there reflection in the water as dolphins lept threw with mermaids on there fins. von spun hitomi around. she laughed. a shrill wind blew and hitomi tumbled into von... they went down a bit... just above the water.. a few waves bumped their toes. they laughed... then looked in each other eyes... they were close... von held both her hands and gazed into her eyes. he had just relized he loved her... when she left. he thought for good. he couldn't let her go again... at least not with out telling her... hitomi stared into thoes piercing eyes. his shirt torn... hers too. another wind blew forcin von closer to hitomi. the crescent moon hung above... the crashing of the waves... and the blowing of the wind... and the beating of their hearts... was all that was heard. Hitomi knew what would happen... not just bbecause she wanted it to... she felt Von did too. he pulled his face to hers. he looked at her for a few second and touched her face. she placed her hand over his blushing. "von..." she started... but was caught by his kiss. it surprised her at first. really shocked her. her hands flew to her face.. but then she relized he was kissing her. she lowered them and returned the kiss... it was passionate. her hands went up his back and touched his wings. how soft they were. like his soul. they broke the kiss only for a second... and the action was repeated. she placed her head on his chest. "hitomi... i've seen so many women... and nothing happens... but when i see you.." he touched his heart. "it hurts..." hitomi blushed. the pendent began to glow... as a little rain began to fall. "we... better get back." hitomi nodded. and so they flew togeather... all the way back to the castle...
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EPILOGE (did i spell that right???)
she made her way down the beautifuly decorated isle. her dress flowing behind her, beeing careful not to trip. mearl walked proudly behinf in a stunning white dress carrying the train in one arm, and the other around simon. simon held a silk pillow with a ring. accompaniying hitomi was jack. her father. tears filled his eyes. he just found his daughter and noe he had to give her away. from somewhere unknown. prehaps heaven, vons parents watch with exitement. hitomis mother is allready standing on the castle altar. smiling from ear to ear. her long lost husband jack walks up and kisses her. tears stream down her face. little children stan around, with all of fanaila watching. hitomi couldn't look more beautiful. she holds beautiful white roses in her arms. mearl begins to dry a little. allen stands guard. smiling for hitomi. somewhere else malerna and driden stand with their baby. smiling at each other. and across the room is this liitle prince sheid. bowing with honour. hitomi takes thoes last 2 steps of hher new women hood. and gazes into the eyes of the man she is to spend her life with. jacks wings come from his back as the priest begind the sermon. hitomi hears nothing, but the sound oh her own heart, in time with vons. he smiles at her, placing the ring on her finger. she blushes. she had know idea it would be just like on the mystic moon. a crown is placed on vons head. he makes a pout so only hitomi can see. she tries not to laugh. a beautiful tiara is placed on hers. her heart is beating more rapidly now... as the priest gets ready to say thoes words.... the wings burst from von and hitomi... not evavn ruining there outfits. she draws a breath... his hands grow cold... their hearts beat. "you may now kiss the bride." it seems to go so slow to them, but for thoes watching it is beautiful. their lips lock as tears stream down the courts faces. allen looks away. mearl smiles and clings to simon. the kiss is broken and i cheer runs out. laughter is heard, and confetti is thrown. music began to play, as the king an queen take their first dance as rulers of fanalia...
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