We've all seen them. Some of us have had the cojónes (or lack of intelligence) to read them. There are even those who get off to things like this, but I'd rather not think about that. What I'm talking about are these so called "erotic stories." Third-rate hack writing that's worse than anything you ever read in a dirty magazine. A story that sounds like it was pasted together using phrases from the boxes of porn movies. The following is one such story which was pulled off of some lame ass jack-story site hosted by "groups" like "Erotic Entertainment Unlimited" and "Sensual Stories Incorporated." It's too bad the writing isn't as professional-sounding as the names of the producers. I searched for "erotic stories" and literally clicked the first thing that came up. Under the categories it listed for me, (how professional), I chose "lesbians" (why not?) and then on the sub-category list, it was easy to find the one most deserving of a written thrashing.
Incest.
What follows is the story, un-altered, but with my comments in bold, and Jon's italicized. Godspeed.