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Catching A Breeze Did a sudden thought occur to you that you were alienated?
Did you ever look up in a summer's night sky And wonder how the stars shine so brightly?
Did you ever wonder why they shine so brightly, As to why shine only at night?
Did you ever stroll around a park at dusk, Catching the last of the sun's rays?
Did you ever wonder, how it felt To always see the sun all the time instead?
Did you ever poner why such simple things Make themselves the way in which they are so complicated?
Did you ever consider what you truly love And why you love it so much?
Did you ever glance back at what you lived through And suddenly see that you aren't what you thought?
Did you ever play a game that had no meaning Yet you played it anyway despite of it?
Did you ever read anything that you thought was Wise, but turned out to be a folly?
Did you ever question how we live knowingly But yet, we really don't?
Did you ever?
Jennifer Tsang, written on Oct. 9, 2000
Grade: 10
Division: 378
Div. Teacher: Mr. Borck
English Teacher: Mr. Gagliano

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