Hi my name is Phil Smith. I am i friend of Joes and will be writing the magazine this week.
The Xtreme ICW has really hit of, with some decent roleplayers and good events. Joe works hard on this E-Fed and at least once a day goes on chats to get more members.
New signings
There haven't been any real new signings really apart from Vamp. Cyclone Jack recently joined but apart from them two the other members have been here for some time.
Roleplayers
Metamorphosis
Metamorphosis was one of the first to arrive in the ICW? He is quiet a good roleplayer and promises for his roleplays to be longer in the future. He uses good punctuation and can spell pretty good, the only thing he should work on is talking about more things rather then the same things all the time.
Vamp
This man has just joined and is already doing great roleplays! They are lengthy and have good quality in them. He is a real asset in this fed and should be good to use in main events and future fueds. The only thing that i can see wrong with his roleplays is when he speaks he sometimes just puts it in a diffirent colour rather then a new paragraph which i prefere.
Cyclone Jack
Joined about 2 days ago and is already roleplaying like mad. His roleplays are a decent size, and make me laugh, especially his debut. He uses good words for his roleplays and knows what he is talking about. The only thing he needs to work on is making each speech a bit longer.
Wolverine
An all round good roleplayer. His roleplays are interesting to read and he was the first to join this fed. He obviousley has experience in efeds and is good at playing a part in them. He should just roleplay a little bit more and he would be fine.
Powerhouse
Powerhouse has nice roleplays that have little bits of speech and then a big bit which is easy to read and the actual roleplays are quiet good and enjoyable. I think the only draw back to him is he needs to roleplay a little more. He coudld really make it big in this fed.
Smurf King
This man has a somewhat strange gimmick but no doubt it is quiet good and is funny too. His roleplays keep me gripped and they are not too short either. He has good punctuation and spelling as far as i know and could definatly be Intercontinental championship material. The only thing he needs to work on his the same as what Cyclone should work on.
Sabre
This mans roleplays were very good quality and i was glued to the screen. He uses very good spelling and punctuation and obviousley is very mature. He however needs to work on something and that is to roleplay more! If he wants to win his matches he has got to roleplay that little bit more. I am not to keen on how he sets out his roleplays but if he wants to do that then that is fine with me.
Ki
Now im not to sure about this guy and whether i should talk about him in great detail, seeing as he has probably for some reason left. His roleplays were okay but just needed some length to them.
Destroyer
He can roleplaying in lenth and his roleplays are interesting too. He should roleplay a tad more however but when he does they are fine. One thing i think is that he should take out some of those pictures i mean, i reckon the limit should be 5 pics to a roleplay, but he used about 10.
9mm
This mans roleplaying is top notch. He seems to know a lot about roleplaying and does it very well. He responded to the attack very well, unlike some roleplayers who might come out and not even mention it! The only little flaw is that he sometimes makes some silly mistakes in spelling and if he corrected them then his roleplays would take him very far in the fed!
Denise
This women has done some good roleplayins in the past, she hardly makes any spelling mistakes and is very good at getting a point across. She just needs to roleplay a little more and if she doesn't today i can see her name going on orange!
H-Bomb
This girl is a very good roleplayer and shows it by doing so many. Most women if feds do one roleplay and never roleplay again. But this women has shown she is loyal and continues to roleplay. She deserves that title and maybe if she can improve a little on length a mans title too!
That is it from me and the Xtreme ICW Magazine. Come back next week for another ICW Magazine!!!!!
