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wrote in Poetic_Death
August 24, 2005, 03:56am
Posts: 9

Just Wondering...(New Member)

Just Wondering...

Ever Wonder what it's like to die?

To have one of those

Near death experiences

That people talk about?

Ever wonder what it would be like?

To feel your last breath?

To feel your heart slow down,

And finally stop?

I mean,

Do you suppose you can feel that?

Do you suppose your mind still works?

Do you think you'd feel insane?

Or would you just think

It's all a dream!


Would it not be creepy?

To see your own body below you?

Do you think you'd try to get back in?

Or do you suppose...

You just...

I dunno...

Float there,

Looking at yourself?


Is this really happening?

Do you suppose it would scare you?

Do you think you'd tell 'god' that you would change...

If only he would just let you go back?

Do you think you would even know

What was happening?

Would you be able to comprehend

The sheer magnitude of it all?

Come here.

Let's find out...

Let me know how it goes.

Asmodeus Amanti



Prince of Blasphemy
Posts: 394

August 24, 2005, 06:28:am

I've had a few dreams before that felt like near death experiences. I guess dreams can't compare to the real thing though. Don't think I really wanna find out what's out there beyond death just yet though. I much prefer keeping it a mystery. It's more intriguing that way. Anyway, Fantastic Poem. I loved the flow and the over-all alluring yet menacing feel to it. Excellent job.


Posts: 13

August 24, 2005, 02:49:pm

i agree with pyromantic here. excellent job. i'd like to see more of you.

[salvation of self in a land of destruction for all] [god what fools we've been]


Posts: 10
August 24, 2005, 06:39:pm

Thank you both for your comments, it's appreciated I have many so I will be posting more !

Asmodeus Amanti^^

" I cut her throat and watched her bleed"


Good. Bad.
I'm the guy with the gun.

Posts: 1077

August 24, 2005, 07:08:pm

I loved it, very well done Asmodeus_Amanti.

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