Kimagure Orange Road
"Escape, Escape!"
Volume 18, Story 3
WB Volume 10, Story 10
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Leo Hourvitz
Matthew Akira Klippenstein
Bart Bonneau
Last revision : 09-21-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 185 (47) are only in the WBs!
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p 185 (47)--TITLE PAGE
[Wearing large earrings and with her hair pulled up wildly by an elastic
hairband, Madoka lifts a finger to her lips.]
MAIN TITLE (at top)
Escape, Escape! NIgero ya NIgero!
SUB-TITLE (at bottom) _aya_
Bewitching, Gleaming, YOU shiku
Secret Rouge! = mysterious/fascinating
= bewitching/attractive
______
KAGAYAke HIMITSU no ru--ju!
shine/gleam secret/private rouge
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p 186 (48)
1
[The rowboat explodes from the impact of the bolt.]
explosion FX: ______
doooon
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p 187 (49)
1
[Kyousuke rematerializes about 3 meters above one of the islands. He carries
Madoka under his arm.]
Kyousuke/Madoka teleport FX: ____
shu_
2
Kyousuke/Madoka FX: [off] _____
dosa_
3
[He looks over at the burning boat, which lies perhaps 100-meters offshore.]
Kyousuke:
Phew! .......... In the fuu_ .......... KAN IPPATSU!
nick of time!
4
[Madoka sits up and stares at him.]
Madoka:
.......... ..........
_____ _ryoku_
What amazing jumping sugoi jampu CHIKARA nee
strength... amazing jump strength/ability (rhet)
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p 188 (50)
1
[They get to their feet.]
Madoka:
Every now and then, you do TOKIdoki KASUGA-kun tte wake no wakannai
some amazing things that sometimes (T) unreasonable/
seem to make no sense, nonsense
Kasuga-kun.
yo-- na sugoi koto su n da ne
it-looks-like amazing-thing do (explan)
Kyousuke:
...... Ha ha. ...... ha ha
narration: _chikara_
I can't possibly say it masaka NOURYOKU no okage da
was due to the Power... impossible due-(owing)-to-Power
to wa Ienai shi...
(quote) (T) can't-say and-besides
2
[Both stare up at the dark skies.]
Kyousuke:
Still, that lightning... sore ni shite mo ano KAMINARI...
still/but that-lightning
Was no ordinary lightning... tada no KAMINARI ja...
ordinary lightning = is-not
3
[The hole in the cloud brightens once more.]
thunder FX: ___
go_
4
[Staring at the sky, he races towards Madoka. She stands and stares upward.]
thunder FX: ____ ____
goro goro
Kyousuke:
Look out! abunai!
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p 189 (51)
1
[Another bolt is fired...]
lightning: ___
ka_
2
[...striking the ground near where they stood. Madoka and Kyousuke run.]
explosion FX: ______
baaaan
Madoka:
Kyaa!! kya--_!!
3
[They stop and stare up at the crackling skies.]
Kyousuke:
H-hey! This lightning is ne nee kono KAMINARI chotto HEN yo_!!
a little strange!! this-lightning a-bit strange
lightning FX: ___ ___
zu_ zu_
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p 190 (52)
1
[Another bolt lands nearby. Kyousuke dives across Madoka, knocking her out
of the way and shielding her with his body.]
lightning FX: ___
ba_
Kyousuke:
Wah!! wa_!!
2
[Kyousuke looks up in realization.]
narration:
Ah, that's it...!! a so-- ka...!!
I've remembered ojiichan's oji--chan no KOTOBA OMOiDAshita zo!!
words!! 's words remembered !!
3
[He runs, pulling Madoka along by the wrist. He keeps a watchful eye on the
sky.]
narration:
That's no lightning!! are wa KAMINARI nanka
that-(one) (T) lightning the-likes-of
ja nai_!!
is-not
4
[The hole brightens once more.]
narration:
There's a Guardian on these kono SHIMA ni wa BANNIN ga
islands, and if a stranger on-these-islands (contrast) watchman (S)
who lacks the Power tries _chikara_
to come to these islands... ite NOURYOKU o motanu
is-here-(and) Power (O) not-have
yosomono ga SHIMA ni HAIrou to suru to...
stranger (S) to-islands if-try-to-come-in
5
narration:
Then the Guardian's Sword of BANNIN no HIKARI no KEN ga
Light will strike him... watchman 's light 's sword (S)
sono MONO ni osoikakaru...
at-that-person make-an-attack-on/fall-upon
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p 191 (53)
1
Kyousuke:
(But... (demo...
Why... naze...
Shouldn't anyone come to kono SHIMA ni HAItcha dame na n da?!)
these islands?!) on-these-islands mustn't-enter is (explan)
2
[The two continue to run.]
Kyousuke:
(What the hell is on these (kono SHIMA ni wa...
islands?!) on-these-islands (contrast)
ittai nani ga aru
what-in-the-world (S) is-here
to yu-- n da?!)
say-that (explan)
3
lightning FX: ___
zu_
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p 192 (54)
1
Madoka: [wide-eyed]
Hey! You know, it's nee_ yappari ano KAMINARI marude
like that lightning is ! sure-enough that-lightning just-like
striking down, aimed at
me... atashi no koto neratte
about-me take-aim-at-(and)
ochite kite-ru mitai...
fall-(and) is-coming seem
2
narration:
There's no possible way masaka...
I could tell Ayukawa about impossible
an ESPer family legend _uchi_
like this... konna CHOU-NOU-IKKE no
this-kind-of super-ability-family 's
i--tsutae nanka AYUKAWA ni
legend and-such to-Ayukawa
hanaseru wake nai shi na...
can-speak reason not-have consider
3
Kyousuke:
Are you carrying something nani-ka KINZOKU-SEI no mono
metallic?! something metallic-make 's thing
MI ni tsukete-nai?!
on-body not-carrying-about/wearing
4
[She pulls out and stares at the pendant.]
Madoka:
Ah... This. a... kore
5
Kyousuke:
Hurry and take that off! hayaku sore o hazusu n da_
quickly that-(one) (O) take-off (explan)
Madoka:
But this is something demo kore wa sekkaku KASUGA-kun ga...!!
special that you...!! but this (T) especial (S)
6
[Another bolt is fired from that hole in the clouds.]
lightning FX: ______
pishan
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p 193 (55)
1
[View looking up at trees and sky.]
Kyousuke: [off]
Over here, over here. kotchi kotchi
2
[The two race towards a well...]
Kyousuke:
It's a well! IDO da!
3
[...and look inside.]
Kyousuke:
It's an empty well!! kara IDO da!!
empty/vacant well is
Inside! kono NAKA e!
to-this-inside
4
[Another bolt is fired...]
lightning FX: ________
pisha--n
5
[...striking the well.]
explosion FX: ___
don
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p 194 (56)
1
[At the bottom of the well, Madoka and Kyousuke cover their heads with their
arms.]
pebbles FX: ____ ____ ____
para para para
2
pebble FX: ____ ____
koro koro
3
[They look up at the sky.]
Kyousuke:
.......... We're saved. .......... tasukatta
4
[View of the shattered well and the ominous skies.]
5
[Rain begins to fall...]
rain FX: ___ ___
po_ po_
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p 195 (57)
1
[Kyousuke looks up and holds out his palms.]
rain FX: ___ ___
po_ po_
2
[Heavy rain falls into the well.]
rain FX: _______
za----_
3
Kyousuke:
Oo-wahhh! uwa~~~~_!
If this keeps up, we'll be kono mama ja bishonure
drenched!! if-this-continues be-wet-through
da yo_!!
are
[Madoka gets on her hands and knees and explores a dark corner of the well.]
Madoka:
Kasuga-kun. Wait a minute. KASUGA-kun chotto
4
[She points to an opening in the wall.]
Madoka:
Look at this! konna tokoro ni hora...!
at-place-like-this look
5
Madoka:
A cave opening... YOKOANA ga... aite-iru
cave/tunnel (S) is-opening/beginning
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p 196 (58)
1
[A light shines in the inky blackness.]
Kyousuke: [off]
At the other end... ANA no mukou ni...
hole 's on-other-side
I see a light! akari ga mieru!
light (S) is-seen
2
[They kneel at the opening.]
Kyousuke:
It's connected to the SOTO to tsunagatte-iru n da
outside. from-outside is-connecting-with (explan)
3
[Panels 3-4 are a single view of the top of the well. Lightning continues to
flash in the distance.]
Kyousuke:
Shall we go and look? itte-miyou ka
shall-go-and see (?)
If we stay here like this, kono mama koko ni iru to
we'll get drenched... like-this-is at-this-place if-stay-here
zubunure ni natchau shi
become-drenched-(finality) and-besides
4
Kyousuke:
And if we come out from IMA koko kara DEru to mata
here right now, the now from-here if-emerge again
lightning will target us
again. KAMINARI ni nerawarechau yo
by-lightning be-aimed-at-(finality)
5
[Kyousuke looks back at Madoka as she gingerly slides into the opening.]
Kyousuke:
Careful! KI o tsukete!
Madoka foot FX: ___
ton
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p 197 (59)
1
[The two walk down the roughly cylindrical cave.]
2
Kyousuke:
There's a lot of space in NAKA wa kekkou hiroi n da
here. inside (T) quite large/roomy (explan)
3
Madoka:
It looks like this cave HITO ga...hotta ANA mitai ne
was dug by people. person (S) dug hole seems
4
[He stops to study the wall.]
Kyousuke:
Maybe coal or something konna tokoro ni SEKITAN demo
was found here... in-place-like-this coal or-something
DEta no ka na...
was-found/came-out I-wonder
Or a gold mine?! soretomo KINZAN?!
or-else gold-mine
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p 198 (60)
1
Kyousuke/Madoka FX: ___ ___
ko_ ko_
2
[Kyousuke stops to ponder the ceiling. Madoka looks off-panel.]
Kyousuke:
(Ojiichan didn't mention (oji--chan kono ANA no koto wa
anything about this cave, about-this-cave (T)
but...
nani-mo itte-nakatta kedo...
anything didn't-say but
Maybe... moshi-ka-shite...
The Guardian of those koko ga sono SHIMA no BANNIN
islands lives here?) here (S) those-islands 's watchman
no sumi ka?)
(nom) live (?)
Kyousuke/Madoka FX: ___ ___
ko_ ko_
3-4
[The ceiling, walls and floor contain openings to side-tunnels.]
5
[Kyousuke stops to look down one such hole in the floor.]
Kyousuke:
Spooky, huh... KIMI warui na...
It's like it goes to the marude CHI no SOKO made
center of the earth. just-like earth 's to-bottom
tsuzuite-ru mitai da
is-leading-to seems
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p 199 (61)
1
[A view down the tunnel.]
FX: [off] ___ ___ ___
ko_ ko_ ko_
2
Kyousuke/Madoka:
?! ?!
3
[They look to either side.]
Kyousuke:
F-footsteps?! a ASHIOTO?!
FX: [off] ___ ___
ko_ ko_
4
FX: [off] ___ ___ ___ ___
ko_ ko_ ko_ ko_
5
Kyousuke:
It's getting closer. dondon CHIKAzuite-kuru
FX: [off] ___ ___
ko_ ko_
6
[Madoka clings to his shoulder.]
Kyousuke/Madoka FX: _____
goku_
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p 200 (62)
1
FX: [off] ___ ___ ___ ___
ko_ ko_ ko_ ko_
2
[The footsteps stop. They look to either side.]
Kyousuke:
Where the hell is it ittai doko kara kuru n da
coming from? in-the-world from-where come (explan)
The footsteps came that ASHIOTO wa sugu soko made
close! footsteps (T) right-up-to-that-place
CHIKAzuite-iru no ni...
is-drawing-near even-though
Madoka:
No one's around. dare-mo inai ne
3
[Unknowingly, Madoka stands perilously close to a hole in the tunnel floor.]
4
[A closer view of her leg.]
5
[A hand reaches out and latches onto her ankle.]
hand FX: _____
munzu
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p 201 (63)
1
[Madoka looks down.]
Madoka:
Huh!?! ha_?!
2
[She grabs at the side of the hole as she falls in.]
Madoka FX: ____ ___
dan_ zu_
3
[Kyousuke turns...]
Kyousuke:
? ?
4
[...but Madoka has fallen completely in. Someone has grabbed both her legs
and pulled her in.]
Madoka:
Kyaaaaa!! kya----_!!
fall FX: _________
za------_
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p 202 (64)
1
Kyousuke:
AYUKAWA!! AYUKAWA!!
2
[Kyousuke peers into the hole.]
Kyousuke:
AYUKAWA!! AYUKAWA!!
Kyousuke FX: _____
petan
3
[As he looks down with horror into the hole, four lights begin to shine in
the darkness behind him.]
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p 203 (65)
1
[The lights resolve into four of the six eyes of a three-headed giant.]
Madoka: [off]
KYAAAAAA! kya------_
Kyousuke:
AYUKAWA-A-A!! AYUKAWA----_!!
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