Kimagure Orange Road
"A Room for Just the Two"
Volume 17, Story 5
WB Volume 10, Story 3
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Matthew Akira Klippenstein
Last revision : 09-08-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 45 (85) are only in the WBs!
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p 45 (85)--TITLE PAGE
[Madoka reclines and looks pensive.]
MAIN TITLE (at top) _heya_
A Room for Just the Two futari dake no SHINSHITSU
2-people just 's bedroom/room
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
A Whimsical Girl Who Likes hitori ga SUki na no
to Be Alone... 1-person (S) liking (nom)
_ga--ru_
kimagure SHOUJO...
whimsical girl
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p 46 (86)
1
[Exterior view of Akane's house.]
2
[View of a lit window.]
3
[View down a winding hallway towards the stairs.]
4
[View of Akane's lower legs.]
Akane footsteps FX: ___ ___
ton ton
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p 47 (87)
1
[Kyousuke follows Akane down the hallway.]
2
[Kyousuke portrait.]
3
[The two girlfriends follow nervously behind.]
4
[Kazuya smiles and trails them all with the camera.]
5
[Kyousuke blushes.]
narration:
Th-that Akane... a akane no yatsu..........
6
[Profile view of a defiant-looking Akane.]
narration:
Even if this is only ikura ENGI to wa ie
acting... A girl asking how-much acting although
me--a guy--into her room
at night... ONNA no KO ga JIBUN no HEYA ni
girl (S) in-own-room
___
YORU OTOKO de aru ore o
night man is me (O)
sasou to yu-- no wa.....
shall-invite the-fact-that
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p 48 (88)
1
[The brunette turns to the blonde.]
brunette:
H-hey. That Akane said ne nee akane no yatsu atashi-tachi ga
she'd show us what we that-Akane we (S)
wanted to see most of
all... ICHIBAN mitai mono misete-kureru
most want-to-see thing show-(us)
tte itta kedo
said-that but
2
brunette: [blushing] ___
But I wonder... Is it yappari... are no koto kashira
THAT, after all? after-all about-THAT I-wonder
3
blonde:
Y-yeah! so so-- yo!
___
I'm sure it's *THAT*. kitto sono are yo
surely that-*THAT*
4
[Their pov of an excited Kazuya.]
Kazuya: ___
Hey hey, what's "that"?! nee nee are tte nani?!
5
[They flinch, eyes goggling.]
brunette/blonde:
EH!?! e_?!
6
[They exchange smiles.]
brunette/blonde: _ ___
"Th-that" is... Umm... a are tte... sono
__ __ __
ho ho ho
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p 49 (89)
1
[They smile at him. The blonde pats him on the head.]
brunette: ____
Well, it might be a little maa boku mitai na KODOMO ni wa
hard for a child like you, well "I" like to-child (contrast)
even if we explained it...
Ho ho ho! setsume-- shite-mo chotto muzukashi--
even-if-explain a-bit difficult
__ __ __
ka mo nee ho ho ho
it-is-possible (rhet)
blonde:
Yeah... so-- yo
__ __ __
It's one of life's SEIMEI no SHIMPI na no yo ho ho ho
mysteries. Ho ho ho! life 's mystery (nom)
2
[Kazuya thinks about it.]
Kazuya:
...... Hmm. ...... fu--n
3
Kazuya: [brightly]
Then... ja...
It's about "C" after all?! yappari #C# no koto na no ka!
after-all about-"C" is (?)
4
brunette/blonde:
Oh my! n maa_!
5
[View down a hallway. This is a remarkably spacious home. Too bad half of
it is hallways... ^_^]
6
[View down another hallway towards a door.]
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p 50 (90)
1
[We approach the closed door.]
2
[Akane stops in front of the door and spins around.]
Akane:
Now! sate to!
3
[She looks down blankly at Kazuya, still holding his camera.]
Akane:
Hm? n?
3
Akane: [angrily]
What are you...?! nani yo-- anta wa------_
what you (T)
Kazuya: ___
Eh?! No... I'm... Uhh... e_ iya... ore wa sono...
5
Akane:
Children should be KODOMO wa mo-- nenasai_!
asleep already! child (T) already sleep-(command)
[Kazuya high-tails it outta there.]
6
[Smiling, Akane ushers Kyousuke into her bedroom.]
Akane:
Well, in you go, Kyousuke. sa KYOUSUKE dake NAKA ni do--zo
Just you. just within if-you-please
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p 51 (91)
1
[Akane sticks her head out the open door...]
Akane:
Then, good ni-i-ight! ja oyasumi nasa--i
2
[...before closing it.]
door FX: _____
batan!
3
[The two girls stare at the closed door in surprise.]
4
[They stare at each other blankly.]
brunette/blonde:
Huh? are?
5
[They stare at the door again.]
6
blonde: [pounding the door]
W-wait a minute. What?!! chi chotto nani yo_!! akane
Akane!
You're not letting us in?! atashi-tachi Irete-kurenai wake?!
we can't-let-in reason
door FX: ___ ___
don don
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p 52 (92)
1
[Akane leans against the other side of the door and yells.]
Akane:
Why do I have to show that nande soko made anta-tachi ni
much to you guys? why that-far to-you-(plural)
misenakya ikenai no yo
must-show
2
brunette:
S-sure... That's true, so... sorya so-- da kedo
but...
3
Akane:
Well?! Now... You dou?! kore de... mitomeru wa yo ne!!
believe, don't you?!! how with-this/now acknowledge (rhet)
4
blonde:
...... Y-yeah. ...... u un
Akane: [off]
Then, good night!! ja ne oyasumi----_!!
5
blonde: ___
Damn. That Akane! che akane no yatsu!
6
[The girls turn to leave, but stop when they hear...]
voice: [off]
Ohh... an
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p 53 (93)
1
[Their pov of the closed door.]
voice: [off]
No! No good, no good! dame yo dame dame
Not there. Higher! soko ja nai no motto UE no ho-- yo
that-place is-not more high
2
[The two girls smile sickly.]
brunette/blonde heartbeat FX: _____
dokin
3
[They edge closer to the door.]
voice: [off]
Ooo . There. aan soko soko
There.
4
brunette/blonde:
Wh-what's this...?! ko kore wa..........?!
blonde FX: _____
5
[They press their ears against the wall.]
brunette/blonde FX:
koso~~~~
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p 54 (94)
1
voice: [off]
Harder, harder-r-r. motto motto TSUYOkuu
[The two are scandalized.]
2
blonde: ____________
Even if he is a boyfriend, ...ikura bo--ifurendo demo
you don't go that far. no-matter-what-kind-of-boyfriend
koko made wa shinai wa yo
as-far-as-here (T) not-do
brunette:
...... Really. ...... nee
3
[The two stagger back.]
voice: [off]
That's it. Yes, yes. so-- yo sou sou
You're pretty good, aren't anta tte jouzu nee
you . you (T) good-hand/skill (rhet)
4
brunette: [kicking the door]
What's this?! nani yo_!
Aren't you guys going a anta-tachi chotto yari-sugi na
bit too far?!! you-(plural) a-bit do too-much are
n ja nai no_!!
(neg/explan) (?)
door FX: ___
don
5
[The two do pratfalls.]
voice: [off]
Ahh, that feels wonderful!! a-- KIMOchi ii_!!
It's like I went to heaven! TENGOKU e itchai -sou!
to-Heaven go-(finality) look-as-if
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p 55 (95)
1
[Exterior shot of a lit window.]
brunette/blonde: [off]
Whew! fuu_!
2
[The two girls drop their gazes.]
brunette:
I think... atashi...
Doing something like this nanka konna koto shite-ru no
has begun to lose its some thing-like-this am-doing (nom)
purpose.
munashiku natte-kichatta
in-vain/to-no-purpose began-turning-into
blonde:
.......... I think so, atashi mo
too.
3
[The two walk down the hall.]
blonde:
I'm going home and write KAEtte #C-C-B# ni mata
another fan letter to CCB! go-home-(and) to-CCB again
_________
fanreta-- kakotto!
fan-letter write
brunette:
I'm going home and go to atashi wa KAEtte nuigurumi
bed, hugging my stuffed I (T) go-home-(and) stuffed-doll
doll.
daite neyou tto
hug-(and) shall-sleep
4
[The two stop and stare at each other.]
blonde/brunette:
Huh?! Don't you have a ara?! anta KARE ga iru
boyfriend? you boyfriend (S) there-is
n ja nakatta no?
(neg) (?)
5
[View through a window of the hallway. We see Akane's closed bedroom door.]
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p 56 (96)
1
[A corner of her room.]
2
[Akane lies on her back, asleep, in bed. Kyousuke sits on a chair and watches
over her, wide-eyed.]
3
[Akane's TV is on. A commercial is running. A young man works on the back
of his grandma.]
young man: [TV]
Does it itch here, obaachan? kayui no wa koko kai oba--chan
itching (T) here (?)
young man FX: ________
poripori
screen titles: ______
When an itch strikes-- kayui TOKI ni wa kinkon
Kinkon when-itch (contrast)
young man: [TV] ______
At a time like this, if we konna TOKI kinkon ga areba nee...
only had Kinkon... time-like-this (S) if-have (rhet)
4
[Akane rolls over on her side, still asleep.]
Akane FX: __________
munyamunya
5
narration:
What the...? ...nan da
Does this mean that, in the KEKKYOKU OTOKO o HEYA ni Ireru
end, letting a guy into her in-the-end man (O) in-room let-in
room was a show on Akane's
part that took all her to yu-- koto ga akane ni totte no
strength...?! the-fact-that (S) in-Akane's-case (nom)
se-- ippai no mie
with-all-her-might 's show/vanity
datta tte koto ka...?!
was that-mean
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p 57 (97)
1
[He rests his cheek in his hand and thinks it over.]
narration: ___
It seems... I was ore...chotto KITAI shi -sugita
anticipating things a I a-bit look-forward-to overly
little too much...
mitai......
seem
2
Kyousuke: [angrily]
Akane!! akane_!!
3
[He drops his eyes.]
Kyousuke: ___
*I'm* a guy!! ore datte OTOKO da zo_!!
even-I man am !!
4
[He opens his eyes and leans toward her, glaring.]
Kyousuke:
Is it okay? i-- no ka
okay (nom) (?)
___
I'm gonna sleep here!! ore koko de nechau
me to-here sleep-(finality)
kara na_!!
that's-why (rhet)
5
[She rolls over onto her other side, still asleep.]
Akane FX: _____ _____
goro_ munya
6
[She talks in her sleep.]
Akane:
Sure... ii yo...
But wake me up on time sono kawari ashita chanto
tomorrow... but/instead tomorrow correctly
okoshite ne
waking-up (rhet)
I'm bad at waking up. atashi neoki warui n da
I bad-at-waking-up (explan)
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p 58 (98)
1
[He rises and smiles down at her.]
Kyousuke:
Okay, okay... hai hai...
2
[Something catches his eye up on the ceiling.]
3
[Pov shifts. It is a huge poster of Madoka, seated in her warm-weather school
uniform. It is affixed to the ceiling above Akane's bed.]
4
[He closes his eyes.]
Kyousuke:
With that... I'm the one ...kore ja kowaku tte
who'd be too afraid to go with-this-(T) afraid
to sleep. ___
ore no HOU ga nemure ya shinai
my-direction (S) not-sleep
5
[A closer view of Madoka's poster.]
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p 59 (99)
1
[Panels 1-2 comprise a single view of Akane's house.]
Kyousuke: [off]
Good night... oyasumi
2
Kyousuke: [off]
...Akane. akane...
3
[The sun rises over Akane's house.]
birds FX: [off] ___ ___
chi chi..
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p 60 (100)
1
[View of a school building.]
2
[Akane and her two friends walk home together.]
brunette: [smiling]
Is that it, Akane? naan da akane
Then, you're saying you ja ano mama nechatta
fell asleep back then? then as-that-was slept-(finality)
tte wakee?
(quote) reason
blonde:
And on top of that, that shikamo ano KO itoko datta noo?!
guy was your cousin?! moreover that-boy cousin was (?)
3
Akane: [miffed]
You guys also lied about anta-tachi koso KARE ga iru
having boyfriends... you-(plural) indeed boyfriend (S) is-there
___
nante uso tsuichatte
the-likes-of telling-lie-(finality)
So don't talk big, huh! mie haranai de yo nee!
don't-show-off/don't-be-vain (rhet)
4
[View of the sky.]
brunette/blonde: [off]
The same goes for you! sore wa o-tagai-sama_!
that-(one) (T) (hon)-mutual-(hon)
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p 61 (101)
1
blonde:
So, in the end, none of ja minna KEKKYOKU KARE nanka
us have boyfriends? then all in-the-end boyfriend or-such
inakattatte wake kaa
even-tho-wasn't-there reason (?)
2
[The three touch their hands in the middle of a circle.]
brunette:
All right?! ii?!
We won't ever get atashi-tachi ZETTAI nukegake shite
boyfriends before the we absoluteness steal-a-march/
others do! get-a-scoop
KARE nanka tsukuranai koto!
boyfriends or-such not-make (nom)
blonde:
I swear it!! chikatta!!
3
[A view from in front as the three girls walk home down a street.]
blonde:
C'mon-n-n, really?! ya da-- HONTOU?!
narration:
And... sate......
4
[View pans back. Three boys stand, talking amongst themselves in the
direction the girls are taking.]
boy 1:
They're here!! They're kita zo kita zo
here!! came !!
boy 2:
Tsutomu, you call out to tsutomu omae ga KOE kakero yo na
them. you (S) call-out
Tsutomu: ____
Ehh? Me-e-e?! e-- oree?!
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p 62 (102)
1
[The pov rises high. We look down upon the three girls walking towards the
boys. The girls still haven't noticed what lies ahead.]
narration:
A vow of burning ATSUi YUUJOU no CHIKAi...
friendship... hot friendship 's oath/vow/pledge
Who knows how long it will doko made tsuzuku no yara...
last...? how-far continuing/lasting have-no-idea
Because... naze nara...
[Two boys push their blond friend forward.]
Tsutomu:
I-I understand! wa wakatta yo!
boy 1:
Well, go! saa ike yo!
2
[With surprise, the three girls notice what lies ahead.]
3
[View looking up at tree and sky.]
Tsutomu: [off]
E-excuse me! a ano----_!
Tsutomu: [off]
We're from Taiyou High boku-tachi TAIYOU KOUKOU no mono
School... we high-school 's persons
na n da kedo...
are (explan) but
narration:
Maybe the summer for Akane akane-tachi no NATSU wa mou
and her friends has already Akane-(and-assoc) 's summer (T) already
arrived right before their
eyes... ME no MAE made kite-iru no ka mo...
right-in-front- is-coming it-is-
of-eyes possible
4
[Exterior view of a camera store.]
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p 63 (103)
1
[An angry clerk paws through a set of developed pictures. Kazuya staggers
back.]
clerk:
What the...! nan daa----_
____ ______
Although you're just a kid, gaki no kuse ni konna sukebe na
all you took were lecherous although-kid this-kind-of-lecherous
pictures like this...
SHASHIN bakari totte
pictures only taking
____
You precocious brat! kono mase gaki
2
[A view of the pics. Leg and torso shots of Akane and her friends.]
3
[Kazuya turns around to see Kyousuke staring in through the front door of the
store.]
Kazuya: ___
Huh!?! ha_?!
Kyousuke FX:
ji~~~~_
4
Kyousuke:
Pervert!! #H#_!!
5
[View looking up at trees and sky.]
narration:
It looks like the bet's kake mo do--yara HIkiwake
ended in a draw, too...!! bet too it-looks-as-if a-draw/tie
mitai desu...!!
seems
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