Kimagure Orange Road
"Heart on Fire!"
Volume 17, Story 2
WB Volume 9, Story 16
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Matthew Akira Klippenstein
Last revision : 09-02-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 322 (26) are only in the WBs!
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p 322 (26)--TITLE PAGE
[View from behind as Mitsuru stands under a spotlight and addresses the huge
audience.]
MAIN TITLE (at top) ______ __ ____
Heart on Fire! ha--to - on - faia!
Mitsuru:
Yesterday, I arrived at kinou boku wa kono MACHI ni kite
this town and ran across yesterday I (T) to-this-town come-(and)
a certain couple. _______
aru kappuru ni DEAimashita
a-certain-couple met/ran-across
SUB-TITLE (at bottom) _________
A Happening Always Suddenly hapuningu wa itsu demo
Turns Up...!! happening (T) at-any-time/always
TOTSUZEN ni yatte-kuru...!!
suddenly turn-up
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p 323 (27)
1
[Kyousuke in shock.]
2
[The audience grows restless. People talk amongst themselves.]
crowd FX: ____ ____
zawa zawa
3
[Three girls turn towards girl 2.]
girl 1:
What's the matter with do-- shita_ mitsuru
Mitsuru?
girl 2: __________
Shhhh! shi------_
girl 3:
Mitsuru's saying something. mitsuru ga nani-ka itte-ru--
(S) something is-saying
girl 4:
What's that? nani nani?
4
[Kyousuke is transfixed.]
narration: _ ___
I-it's about me!! o ore no koto da!!
5
[He rushes down the aisle.]
Kyousuke FX: ___
da_
narration:
I'm not gonna let him say nna koto iwaseru ka----_!!
something like that!! let-say/tell
thing-like-that
sign:
Emergency Exit HIJOUGUCHI
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p 324 (28)
1
producer:
Does the new musical KONDO no SHINKYOKU
composition this time this-time 's new-musical-composition
include a narration at _____ __________
the beginning, manager?! atama ni nare--shon ga HAItte-ru
at-head narration (S) is-including
__________
n desu ka?! mane--ja--
(explan) (?) manager
manager:
No, no! We didn't talk chigau chigau konna no
about this beforehand!! wrong this-kind-of (nom)
uchiawase shite-nai zo!
not-being-prearranged-(with-me) !!
2
[Kyousuke, staring up at the stage, pushes his way through the crowd.]
Kyousuke:
I-I'm sorry. Please let su suimasen chotto to--shite-kudasai!!
me through!! sorry a-bit let-pass-(please)
3
[Mitsuru drops his gaze.]
Mitsuru:
Because I met them, I had KAREra ni DEAtta koto de
an unusual experience--as them met (nom) on-account-of
if I was hit on the head _______
with a hammer. boku wa hamma-- de ATAMA o
I (T) by-hammer head (O)
tatakiwarareta you na
was-being-struck like
TAIKEN o shimashita
had-an-unusual-experience
4
[Madoka stares hard.]
5
[From behind two people in the audience, Kyousuke stares upward. The two
look back at him.]
narration:
He's... aitsu...
_chikara_ ____
Going to talk about the NOURYOKU no koto o barasu tsumori da!!
Power!! about-the-Power (O) disclose intention is
Kyousuke:
Shit. chikusho--
_____ _______
I really should have honto ni hamma-- motte-kurya yokatta!
brought a hammer! really hammer should-have-brought
6
[Profile of Mitsuru.]
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p 325 (29)
1
Mitsuru:
Thank you... arigatou...
Thanks to them, I woke okage de boku wa ME ga sameshita
up. thanks-to I (T) woke-up
2
[Kyousuke stops, stunned.]
3
[Madoka looks a bit surprised.]
4
[View from the front rows, looking up at Mitsuru on stage.]
banner: ______ ______ ____
Yamato TV. *You*--A Star yamato terebi kimi koso sutaa TANJOU
Is Born. Audition Caravan. TV you indeed birth-of-a-star
_________ ________
o--dishon - kyaraban
audition caravan
crowd FX: _____
zawa_
Mitsuru:
From today on, I think I'd KYOU o motte tada no ONNAttarashi no
like to give up being an today (O) taking ordinary-playboy 's
ordinary playboy idol star. ______
aidoru o HENJOU shitai to OMOimasu
idol (O) want-to-send-back/ think-that
give-up
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p 326 (30)
1
Mitsuru:
I have... A girlfriend boku ni wa... KOUKOU JIDAI kara
with whom I've been going to-me (contrast) from-high-school-time
out ever since high school.
zuutto tsukiatte-iru KANOJO ga
all-the-time is-going-with girlfriend (S)
imasu
is-here
2
[A row of girls look on in dismay.]
girls:
Wha-a-a-at?! e~~~~~~_
3
[A view of a TV camera.]
girls:
No-o-o! iya~~~~_
4
[The two men start pointing.]
producer:
What's he talking about? aitsu nani i--dasu n da
this-guy what begin-to-speak (explan)
______
Stop the camera! kamera tomero
manager:
Someone shut him up!! DARE-ka mitsuru o damarasero!!
somebody (O) make-shut-up
5
[The girls in the crowd turn angry, raising fists and throwing objects.]
girl 5:
No-o-o! Mitsuru-u-u!! iya------_ mitsuru----_!!
girl 6:
I won't forgive you-u-u! yurusena----i!
girl 7:
I don't wanna hear it-t-t! kikitakuna----i!
girl 8:
Break up! wakarete--!
6
[An empty aluminum soft-drink can bounces off Mitsuru's shoulder. He
flinches.]
can FX: ___
kon
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p 327 (31)
1
[View looking up at the ceiling.]
Mitsuru: [off] ______
I wanted to become a boku wa suta-- ni naritakatta...
star... I (T) a-star wanted-to-become
2
Mitsuru: ____________
I wanted to bask in the supottoraito o abite
spotlight and sing! spotlight (O) bask-(and)
UTA o utaitakatta!
song (O) wanted-to-sing
Mitsuru:
All of that... sore mo subete...
that-(one) too wholly
3
[He kneels...]
4
[...and sits back on the floor, dropping his head.]
Mitsuru:
...was for her. KANOJO no tame ni...
her for-sake-of
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p 328 (32)
1
crowd FX: ________
shi----n
2
[A soft smile comes over Madoka's face.]
3
[Kyousuke is stunned.]
4
narration:
Ohh. He... hee-- aitsu...
Was going to talk about ano shiori tte KANOJO no koto o
his girlfriend, that that-Shiori (quote) about-girlfriend (O)
Shiori?
shaberu tsumori... datta no ka
chatter/let-slip intention was (?)
5
[He wipes his brow.]
Kyousuke:
Phew! fuu_
narration:
I'm glad... yokatta......
_chikara_ ____
He wasn't going to tell NOURYOKU KEKKYOKU barete wa
about the Power after all. Power after-all disclosing (T)
inakatta n da
wasn't-there (explan)
6
Mitsuru:
And, from now on, I'll soshite kore kara wa HONTOU no
sing... and/then from-now-on (T) true 's
____
puro KASHU to shite
as-pro-singer
Mitsuru:
...for everyone as a real minasan no tame ni UTAimasu!
pro singer! for-the-sake-of-everyone sing
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p 329 (33)
1
Mitsuru:
I'm starting out fresh! ICHI kara DENAOshimasu!
one from start-afresh
Please... Allow me to UTAwasete...kudasai!!
sing!! let-sing please
2
[The crowd is silent.]
3
man 1:
Hayakawa Mitsuru... Has HAYAKAWA mitsuru tte...
a lot of guts, huh.
YUUKI aru n da na
courageous/brave (explan) (rhet)
man 1 FX: _____
boso_
man 2: ______
Yeah. When an idol singer un aidoru KASHU ga KOIBITO SENGEN
announces he has a lover, idol-singer (S) sweetheart-declaration
his popularity plummets.
nante shichattara NINKI
the-likes-of when-do-(finality) popularity
____
nante gataOchi
the-likes-of fall-suddenly
It's fatal. INOCHItori da mon na
fatal is reason
4
man 1: ___
If that was me, I wouldn't ore dattara ienai yo na
be able to say it. me if-it-is can't-say
man 2: ___
As a man, now I think ore OTOKO to shite aitsu o
better of him. I as-a-man that-guy (O)
minaoshita
changed-for-the-better/thought-better-of
man 2 FX: _____ _____
pachi pachi
5
man 3: ___
Me too. ore mo
crowd FX: _____ _____ _____
pachi pachi pachi
man 4: ___
Me too. ore mo
6
[The crowd cheers and waves.]
man 5:
Do your best, Hayakawa gambare yo------ HAYAKAWA mitsuru--_!!
Mitsuru!!
crowd: _____
WAHHH! wa--_
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p 330 (34)
1
[Mitsuru stands and sings.]
2
[A view of a girl, sitting quietly in her seat near the back of the
auditorium.]
sign:
Emergency Exit HIJOUGUCHI
3
[View zooms in. It is Shiori, who sits with her hands in her lap and gaze
dropped.]
4
[View zooms in on her hands resting in her lap. They are splattered with
tears.]
Shiori tears FX: ___ ___
po_ po_
5
[Facial portrait. Her head has dropped, eyes are closed. Tears pool in them.]
narration:
Kazuto... ......KAZUTO
6
[Tight shot of someone's head and someone else's shoes.]
producer: _____
This'll be cut. We can't katto da konna mono
telecast something like cut is this-kind-of-thing
this!
HOUEI dekiru ka!
can-telecast (?)
producer: __________
Right, manager?! ne-- mane--ja--!
manager:
Y-yeah... ha haa...
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p 331 (35)
1
[Isolated shot of the speakers on stage.]
2
announcer: [off]
Well, it's time to announce sate SHINSA KEKKA no HAPPYOU desu
the judges' decisions. judge's-decision 's announcement is
First... mazu...
The judges' Special Prize. SHINSAIN TOKUBETSU SHOU
judge special-prize
Kyousuke: ___
Ah! ha_
3
Kyousuke:
(That's right! Ayukawa!! (so-- da AYUKAWA!!
Although she said she had UTAu tsumori nai nante
no intention of singing... sing intention not-have the-likes-of
ittoki-nagara...
although-say-(for-future-sake)
What the heck was she do-- yu-- tsumori na n darou?!)
trying to pull?!) what-kind-of-intention is (poss-explan)
4
[Filler art. Mitsuru sits on the stage, page 327, panel 4.]
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p 332 (36)
1
[Beaming, Kurumi and Hikaru hold trophies.]
Kurumi: _______
Lucky-y-y! rakki--!
Hikaru:
We're happy with second atashi-tachi nakayoku NITOU-SHOU
prize. we on-good-terms 2nd-prize
2
[Kyousuke and Manami smile and clap.]
announcer: [off] _guranpuri_
Now... At last, the sate... iyoiyo TAISHOU no
announcement of the Grand now finally Grand-Prix-(French) 's
Prize winner.
HAPPYOU desu
announcement is
Kyousuke/Manami FX: _____ _____
pachi pachi
3
Hatta:
Wh-what'll we do? do do-- shiyou
___
I'm sure it's us!! kitto ore-tachi da ze!!
surely we are !
Hatta/Komatsu heartbeat FX: ____ ____ ____
doki doki doki
Komatsu: _____
Settle down. Have you gone ochitsuke toire itte-kita ka?
to the restroom? settle-down toilet went-and-gone (?)
Brushed your teeth? HA migaita ka?
cleaned-teeth (?)
You mustn't say anything komban wa nante itcha dame
like "good evening"!! good-evening the-likes-of mustn't-say
da zo
is !!
4
announcer: [off] _guranpuri_
The Grand Prize...! TAISHOU......!
5
[Kyousuke clenches a fist and looks onstage with great worry.]
narration:
Wh-what if... mo moshiya...
It's Ayukawa's group?! AYUKAWA-tachi de wa?!
What'll I do? do-- shiyou
_guranpuri_
I want Ayukawa to get the AYUKAWA ni TAISHOU totte hoshii kedo...
Grand Prize... by-Ayukawa Grand-Prix getting want but
6
narration:
But, if that's the case... demo so-- suru to..........
but like-that if-do
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p 333 (37)
1
[Exterior view of a sign and door backstage.]
sign:
Dressing Room C GAKUYA #C#
posted sign:
General Participants IPPAN SHUTSUJOU-SHA
2
[Madoka stands and bends over a seated Yukari.]
Madoka:
Are you all right, DAIJOUBU? yukari-san
Yukari-san?
Yukari:
...... Uh-huh. ...... un
___ ___
kon kon
3
[Yukari looks up, weakly.]
Yukari:
I'm sorry, Madoka-chan. gomen ne madoka-chan
It must have been a lot atashi no KAWAri ni TAIHEN na
of trouble, being asked as-my-substitute serious/troublesome
to stand in for me.
DAIYAKU tanonjatte
stand-in depending-on/asking-(finality)
4
[Their pov of a worried Shuu. He smokes a cigarette.]
Shuu: ____
Really, Yukari. Don't go mattaku TOTSUZEN kaze nanka hiku na
catching colds so suddenly. really suddenly don't-catch-some-cold
yo na-- yukari
____
I was worried. Really. asetta yo maji de
was-worried for-real/no-shit
Telling me you've lost TOUJITSU ni natte KOE ga DEnai
your voice on *the* day... become-the-(appointed)- lose-one's-voice
day-(and)
nante i--DAshite sa
the-likes-of beginning-to-say
5
Yukari: [smiling]
But, Madoka-chan's singing demo madoka-chan no UTA HONTOU ni
was really great. but 's song really
______
suteki datta yo
wonderful was
Madoka:
Oh, come on! matamata!
Please don't make fun of shiro--to o karakawanai de kudasai na
an amateur. an-amateur (O) don't-tease/make-fun-of-
(please)
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p 334 (38)
1
[Profile view of Shuu. He stares at the ground, in thought.]
2
[He turns his back on the rest.]
Shuu: __
Hey, we're leaving!! oi hikiageru zo!
others: [off]
Wha-a-at!?! e~~~~~~_?!
3
bass player:
What a waste! mottainai
The judges haven't made mada SHINSA no HAPPYOU ga...!!
their announcement yet!! still judge 's announcement (S)
Yukari:
Yeah. so-- yo
_guranpuri_
What'll you do if we win TAISHOU dattara do-- sun no yo!
the Grand Prize?! Grand-Prix if-it-is what do
4
[He turns on them.]
Shuu: ____ ____
You idiots!! baka yaro!!
Madoka isn't a regular madoka wa ore-tachi no SEISHIKI no
member of our group!! (T) our regular 's
_______
memba-- ja nai n da zo!
member is-not (explan) !!
5
[Shuu smiles softly at his cousin.]
Shuu:
Right?! na_
6
[Madoka gently smiles back.]
Madoka FX: _____
kokun
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p 335 (39)
1
[Shuu turns his back on the others once more.]
Shuu:
It's like Hayakawa Mitsuru HAYAKAWA mitsuru mo itte-ta ja nai ka
was saying. too was-saying
2
[He turns to face them, with a small smile.]
Shuu:
We can start out fresh mata DENAOsha i-- n da
again. again start-afresh okay (explan)
3
[A man runs up to the producer with a sick expression on his face.]
go-fer:
It's another serious matamata TAIHEN de~~su
problem, Mr. Producer. once-again serious is
_____________
purodyu--sa--
producer:
What is it this time?! KONDO wa nan da?!
this-time (T) what is
4
go-fer: _guranpuri_ _____
The Grand Prize band has... TAISHOU no bando ga...
Gone home! KAEtchaimashita!
___ ___
haa haa
5
producer: [sickly incredulous]
WH-WHA-A-AT?!! na nani~~~~~~_!!
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p 336 (40)
1
narration:
Later on... GOJITSU......
[People stream out of the auditorium.]
narration:
In the end... It was KEKKYOKU... TAISHOU wa
announced that no one in-the-end grand-prize (T)
qualified for the grand
prize... GAITOU-SHA -nashi to
the-person-qualified with-no
HAPPYOU sare...
is-announced
2
[View of a pair of buildings.]
narration:
Because of Hayakawa HAYAKAWA mitsuru no KOIBITO SENGEN
Mitsuru's announcement 's sweetheart-declaration
that he had a lover, and _________
other stuff cropping up nado hapuningu ga
one after the other... and-so-on happening (S)
ZOKUSHUTSU shita tame ka...
appeared-one-after-the-other because-of
building sign: ______
YTV--Yamato TV #YTV# yamato terebi
3
narration:
...the program wasn't BANGUMI wa #TV# de wa
telecast... program (T) on-TV (contrast)
HOUEI sarenakatta...
wasn't-telecast
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p 337 (41)
1
[Exterior view of ABCB.]
2
[Hikaru sings onstage on one of ABCB's TV monitors.]
3
[View pans back. The monitor sits on the counter. Hikaru leans her elbow on
it, winks and flashes a "V" sign. Kurumi sits at the counter and watches,
wide-eyed. Both are dressed in school uniforms.]
Kurumi:
Kyaaaa! Hikaru-chan looks kya----_ hikaru-chan KImatte-ru jan
so sharp. ! is-sharp
Hikaru: ________ ______ ______
Thank you. Peace, peace. sankyu-- pi--su pi--su
4
[View from behind the monitor as Kurumi looks at it in horror. Manami smiles.]
Kurumi:
Gyaaaa! I'm not that gya----_ atashi konna ni
fat! ! I this-much
futotte-nai yo--_
not-have-put-on-weight !
Manami: ______
I hear that TV makes you terebi tte futotte
look fatter. TV (T) put-on-weight-(and)
utsuru n da tte
be-reflected-(in) (explan) (I-hear)
5
[View looking up at the sky.]
Kurumi: [off]
But Hikaru-chan a little datte sakki no hikaru-chan
while ago didn't look but a-little-while-ago 's
that fat.
sonna ni futotte-nakatta yo
that-much wasn't-putting-on-weight
Manami: [off]
Then, you're eating too ja yappari anta ga tabe-sugi
much after all. then after-all you (S) eat-too-much
na no yo
are
Manami/Hikaru: [off] ___ __ __
Kya ha ha! kya ha ha
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p 338 (42)
1
[View looking up at a power pole.]
Kyousuke: [off]
Ohhhh! hee----_
2
[Madoka, in apron, and Kyousuke stand outside ABCB.]
Kyousuke: _____
Hayakawa Mitsuru sent us HAYAKAWA mitsuru ga ano bideo o
that video?! (S) that-video (O)
todokete-kureta no?!
sent-(us)
3
[View looking through trees at the clear and sunny sky.]
Kyousuke: [off]
But... It's too bad, huh. demo... ZANNEN da ne
4
Kyousuke: ___
I... Definitely thought ore... ZETTAI AYUKAWA no UTA
your singing should have I absoluteness 's singing
won the Grand Prize! _guranpuri_
TAISHOU da to OMOtte-ta
grand-prize is was-thinking-that
no ni naa----_
even-though (rhet) !
Madoka:
Huh? e?
5
[Madoka smiles softly.]
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p 339 (43)
1
[Her apron goes flying in the air.]
Madoka:
I'm... atashi wa...
________
The Phantom Singer, Ayukawa MABOROSHI no shinga-- AYUKAWA madoka!
Madoka!
..........da yo!
apron FX: ___
ba_
2
[She strikes a dramatic pose.]
3
[Kyousuke blushes slightly and stares blankly.]
4
Madoka FX: ___
pu_
5
[View looking up over the top of ABCB.]
Madoka: [off] _ __ __ __ __
Ah ha ha ha ha! a ha ha ha ha
narration:
That's true, isn't it! so-- da yo ne!
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p 340 (44)
1
[The two stand outside, Madoka holding her apron in one hand. Sunlight falls
gently upon the two figures.]
narration:
Ayukawa wouldn't become AYUKAWA ga KASHU ni nanka naru
a singer...would she! (S) become-some-singer
hazu..........nai yo na!
should not
narration:
But... demo......
___
Once in a while, right ore no MAE dake de wa
there in front of me, I'll just-in-front-of-me (contrast)
hear the singing of...
tama ni wa kikasete yo ne
occasionally singing-for
That... ano..........
2
[Madoka sings on the TV monitor.]
narration: _boisu_
...beautiful voice! kawaii KOE!
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At bottom: [wideban only] ______ ______
Kimagure Orange Road 9 (End) kimagure orenji - ro--do 9 (KAN)
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