Kimagure Orange Road
"Under the Tree of Memories"
Volume 15, Story 7
WB Volume 9, Story 4
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi

Translation by : Tonghyun "Vajra" Kim (17 April 1992)
Special thanks to : Peter Payne, Kevin Quinn
Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
                                 Craig Nishida
                                 Matthew Akira Klippenstein

Last revision : 09-01-95

Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:
     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu

NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
      extras to those of you not having them.
      Example: The subtitles on page 84-85 (144-145) are only in the WBs!
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p 83 (143)

1
[Kyousuke lies asleep on his back under a large tree in a park.]
narration:
  Spring break has arrived...     HARU YASUmi  ga   kimashita...
                                  spring-break (S)  came

2
Kyousuke:
  ZZZ                             #ZZZ#

3 (inset)
[Tight shot of a foot.]
foot FX:
                          su_

3
[Someone with long black hair takes the end of that hair and tickles his nose.]
tickle FX:                        _____ _____
               kocho kocho

TITLE:
  Under the Tree of Memories      OMOiDE   no KI   no SHITA de
                                  memories 's tree 's below

4 (inset)
Kyousuke:                                ________
  Ah...  Ah-choo!                 fu...  akkushon!

4
[He looks over at the girl who kneels beside him.]
Kyousuke:
  Hey-y-y, who is it?!!           koraa  dare da_!!

Madoka:                           _ __ __ __ __
  Ah ha ha ha ha!                 a ha ha ha ha

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p 84-85 (144-145)--TITLE PAGES

[Two-page title page spread.  Madoka sits on the grass beside him, knees
 pulled up.  Kyousuke sits up.]

MAIN TITLE (at top)
  Under the Tree of Memories      OMOiDE   no KI   no SHITA de
                                  memories 's tree 's below

Madoka:
  If you take a nap in a place    konna tokoro de     utataneshite-ru to
  like this, you'll catch a       in-place-like-this  if-are-taking-a-nap
  cold.                           ____
                                  kaze  hi--chau         yo
                                  cold  catch-(finality)

SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
  It's Easy to Feel the           KANji-yasui              no    yo
  Spring of Awakening.            easy-to-feel/experience  (nom)

                                  MEzame    no HARU   wa
                                  awakening 's spring (T)

  To Catch Hold of a              ITAZURA         soyoKAZE   TSUKAmaete...
  Mischievous Gentle              mischief/       a-breeze/  catching-hold-of
  Breeze...                       practical-joke  light-wind

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p 86 (146)

1 and 2
[Identical panels.  Kyousuke stares back at us wide-eyed.]

3
[Madoka stands up and smiles down at his blank face.]
Madoka:
  What are you doing?             nani  shite-ru   no?
                                  what  are-doing  (?)

Kyousuke:
  Eh?                             e?

4
[He lies back and looks up at her.]
Kyousuke:
  As you can see, I was taking    mite    no to--ri  hirune
  a nap*.                         seeing  just-as    an-afternoon-nap

Madoka:
  In the middle of the day?       konna      mappiruma kara?
                                  like-this  at-broad-daylight

5
[He waves a forefinger.]
Kyousuke:
  That's why it's called a        da kara  hirune            tte yu--
  nap*.                           and-so   an-afternoon-nap  called

                                  n da    yo
                                  (explan)

<*Commentary (CN):  Specifically, Kyousuke says he's taking an *afternoon
 nap*.  In other words, a "siesta.">

Madoka:
  ......  I see.                  ......  naruhodo

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p 87 (147)

1
[She looks down at him in slight surprise.]
Madoka:
  Ah!  Those words!               a  sono KOTOBA!

Kyousuke:
  Eh?                             e?

2
Madoka:
  That's why it's called a        da kara  hirune            tte yu--
  nap...  Hmm.                    and-so   an-afternoon-nap  called

                                  n da    yo...  ka
                                  (explan)       (musing-to-self)

3
Madoka:
  It's the same...                ONAji da...

Kyousuke:
  ?                               ?

4
[A view looking upwards into the tree.]
Madoka: [off]
  What's more...                  sore ni...

  ..........                      ..........

  It's even the same place.       BASHO mo   ONAji  da
                                  place too  same   is

5
[Madoka walks a short distance off, looking up at the sky.]
Madoka:
  Such fond memories...           natsukashii naa

  This place hasn't changed       koko       wa   ano TOKI kara
  a bit since then.               this-place (T)  from-that-time

                                  zenzen        kawatte-nai    no ne
                                  -at-all  hasn't-changed

6
[Madoka portrait--she looks dreamily up at the sky.]

7
Kyousuke:
  Uhh...  The same?               ano...  ONAji tte...

  With whom was it the same?      DARE to   ONAji  na  no?
                                  with-who  same   is  (?)

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p 88 (148)

1
[She casts a glance back at him over her shoulder.]

2
[She closes her eyes.]
Madoka:
  A certain someone...            aru HITO...

3
[In an inset, Kyousuke stares in surprise at her.  In the panel, he smiles
 and raises a forefinger.]
Kyousuke:
  I got it!                       wakatta_!

  Since you said, "it's the       ONAji  to yu--   kara ni wa
  same," it must be your          same   say-that  since
  first love!!
                                  HATSU-KOI  no HITO!!
                                  first-love 's person

Kyousuke:                                                      __
  Maybe I was being a bit         chotto  zu--zu--shikatta  ka na!
  cocky!                          a-bit   was-impudent      I-wonder

4
Madoka:                           ___ _____
  Pin-pon!         pin po--n!

[He tosses both arms up in victory.]

Kyousuke:
  Hooray-y-y!  I got it-t-t!!     yatta------_!  atari da------_!!

5
Kyousuke:
  EH?                             e?

6
[Madoka drops her gaze and turns away.]
Madoka:
  Putting it that way, it         to ieba      kikoe wa i--  kedo...
  sounds nice...                  if-say-that  sound-good    but

  But it isn't really like        sonna i-- mon            ja nai
  that...                         that-kind-of-nice-thing  is-not

                                  n da      kedo  ne
                                  (explan)  but

narration:
  Ehhhh?!                         e----_

  Can't be, really?!              masaka HONTOU ni?!

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p 89 (149)

1
[With back to the tree, she looks off-panel.]
Madoka:
  To tell you the truth,          HONTOU  yu-- to ne  KYOU   koko de
  we promised to meet here        true    if-say      today  at-this-place
  today, in a few years
  time...                         SUUNEN -buri ni        sono HITO to
                                  in-several-years-time  with-that-person

                                  Au       YAKUSOKU  datta  n da
                                  to-meet  promise   was    (explan)

  Under this tree...              kono KI   no SHITA de...
                                  this-tree 's under

2
[She touches a message carved into the bark of the tree.]
Madoka:
  He saved my life.               atashi no INOCHI  no ONJIN           na  no
                                  my-life           the-one-who-saved  is

  But before I could even         da kedo  o-REI   o  iu   mamonaku
  thank him, he was gone.            but   thanks (O) say  soon/before-long

                                  inaku        natte
                                  isn't-there  becoming

  Instead, here...                sono kawari  koko ni..........
                                  instead      at-this-place

Madoka FX:                        ___
                          su_

3
[Kyousuke portrait.]

4
writing:
  Here again, in six years.       ROKU-NEN -GO ni  mata   koko de
                                  in-6-years       again  at-this-place

  To Madoka.                      madoka e
                                  to-Madoka

5
[He steps up to the tree and reads the writing.]
Kyousuke:
  Here again...  In six           6-NEN -GO ni...  mata   koko de
  years.  To Madoka...            in-6-years       again  at-this-place

                                  madoka e...
                                  to-Madoka

6
[View looking up at the sky.]
Madoka: [off]
  And so...                       da kara......

  I came here today to say the    sono TOKI  ienakatta           o-REI   o
  thanks that I wasn't able       that-time  wasn't-able-to-say  thanks (O)
  to say back then...
                                  KYOU   iou to OMOtte        kite-mita
                                  today  intend-to-say-(and)  came-to-see

                                  n da      kedo...
                                  (explan)  but

  But it happened so many         nanNEN mo MAE no koto      da  shi
  years ago, I didn't             about-many-years-previous  is  consider
  possibly think he'd come...
                                  masaka      sono HITO   ga  kite-ru
                                  impossible  that-person (S) is-coming

                                  to wa OMOwanakatta  kedo...
                                  didn't-think-that   but

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p 90 (150)

1
[She smiles and tries to stifle a laugh.  Kyousuke drops his gaze and looks
 irritated.]
Madoka:
  But for you to be               KASUGA-kun ga   ite
  here taking a nap,                         (S)  be-here-(and)
  Kasuga-kun...
                                  hirune shite-ru             nante         ne
                                  are-taking-a-afternoon-nap  the-likes-of

Madoka FX:                        ___
                            pu_

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                         musu_

Kyousuke:
  S-sorry, huh.                   wa...WARUkatta     ne
                                       was-to-blame

2
[She starts to walk off.  Did I mention she's wearing a delightfully tiny
 miniskirt?]
Madoka:
  See ya!                         ja ne!

  I was on my way to do some      atashi  KAiMONO  no  TOCHUU
  shopping...                     I       shopping 's  in-the-midst-of

                                  da  shi...
                                  am  and-besides

3
Kyousuke:
  ..........                      ..........

4
[He stares at the writing.]
Kyousuke FX:
                          ji--_

5
Kyousuke:
  What shitty handwriting!        hettakuso na    JI_!
                                  terrible/sucky  characters

6
[Kyousuke kicks at a tuft of grass.]
narration:
  But...  Even though he          shikashi...  sono OTOKO
  saved her life, to think        but          that-man
  he was trying to meet her
  here again...                   ikura      INOCHI no ONJIN     to wa ie
                                  as-far-as  one-who-saved-life  although

                                  mata   koko de        AYUKAWA ni ao--
                                  again  to-this-place  shall-meet-Ayukawa

                                  nante...
                                  the-likes-of

  Wasn't there an ulterior        SHITAGOKORO demo atta
  motive?!                        had-a-secret-design-or-something

                                  n ja nai     ka?!
                                  (neg/explan) (?)

Kyousuke FX:                      ___
                         za_

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p 91 (151)

1
[His view across a field at a small stand of trees.]
narration:
  Although I'm sure that          AYUKAWA ni  sonna KI nado
  Ayukawa wouldn't have           by-Ayukawa  even-that-kind-of-feeling
  such feelings, he better
  not have been thinking          aro--       hazu ga nai
  about meeting her again         shall-have  not-have-likelihood
  condescendingly, and
  hitting on her, huh.            ni shite-mo
                                  just-think/also-consider

                                  ONkisegamashiku  SAIKAI shite
                                  condescendingly  meet-again-(and)

                                  semarou            nante
                                  shall-press-close  the-likes-of

                                  KANGAete-ta         n ja nai daro--   naa
                                  was-thinking-about  (poss-explan/neg) (rhet)

  That scumbag!!                  iyarashii YATSU_!!
                                  lewd      fellow

2
Kyousuke FX:
                          jiro_

3
[He glares at a passing guy.]
narration:
  Is it *him*?                    aitsu ka?

4
[He glares at a passing Hikaru-chan.]
narration:
  Or *hi...*                      soretomo  ai...
                                  or        

5
Hikaru:
  Sempai!                         sempai_!

6
[She smiles and flashes him a "peace" sign.  Hikaru is in a long-sleeved
 striped top, pants, striped socks and shoes.]
Hikaru:                                               _______
  When I went to ABCB just        sakki               abakabu ni  ittara
  now, Madoka-san told me         a-little-while-ago  to-ABCB     when-go
  you were here...
                                  madoka-san ga   SEMPAI  koko ni iru
                                             (S)          is-here

                                  tte oshiete-kurete...
                                  telling-(me)-that

  What are you doing in a         nani shite-ru   n desu    kaa?
  place like this?                what are-doing  (explan)  (?)

                                  konna TOKORO de
                                  at-place-like-this

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p 92 (152)

1
[Hikaru looks up dreamily.]
Hikaru:
  This park, I'm pretty sure,     kono KOUEN wa   tashika...
  is...                           this-park  (T)  certain

2
[A view looking up at the tree.]
Hikaru: [off]
  Oh.  This tree...               a  kono KI...

  I heard about it from           MUKASHI   madoka-san kara  ki--ta koto aru
  Madoka-san a long time          long-ago  from-Madoka      have-heard
  ago...
                                  kedo...
                                  but

  So this is it, hm.              kore        na  no    ne
                                  this-(one)  is  (nom) (rhet)

3
[View looking down from up in the tree.  Hikaru looks up.  Kyousuke stands
 nearby and looks at Hikaru.]
Hikaru:                                           ________   ____
  This is the tree where          madoka-san ga   fa--suto - kisu  shita
  Madoka-san had her first                   (S)  first-kiss       did
  kiss!
                                  tte yu--  KI!
                                  called    tree

4
[Kyousuke stands stunned.]

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p 93 (153)

1
Kyousuke:
  Eh?                             e?

2
[He smiles nervously and rests a hand behind his head.  Hikaru blushes
 furiously and claps her hands to her cheeks.]
Kyousuke:
  What did you say just now?      nante  itta  no   IMA
                                  what!  said  (?)  now

Hikaru:
  Kyaa!  I'm so embarrassed.      kya--  hazukashi--

Hikaru:                                                    ________   ____
  I mean, Madoka-san had her      da kara  madoka-san ga   fa--suto - kisu
  first kiss.                     and-so              (S)  first-kiss

                                  shita  n desu
                                  did    (explan)

  Under this tree!                kono KI   no SHITA de!
                                  this-tree 's below

3-8
[A sequence of six panels, alternating between Madoka in the embrace of a
 generic guy (their lips gradually approach one another's) and a facial
 portrait of a shocked Kyousuke.]

9
[View looking up at a tree-framed sky.  In his speech bubble, Kyousuke clutches
 his head.]
Kyousuke:
  E-EHHHH!?!                      e e--_?!

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p 94 (154)

1
[View of treetops and sky.]
narration:
  Ayukawa had...?!                AYUKAWA ga...?!

2
[Exterior view of an apartment building.]
narration:                        ________   ____
  Her first kiss...?!             fa--suto - kisu o...?!

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p 95 (155)

1
[Exterior view of the Kasuga apartment building.]

2
[Kyousuke walks in the front door.]
door FX:                          _____
                           gacha

3
[View zooms in.  He is unhappy.]
door FX:                          _____
                            batan

Kyousuke:                         ________   ____     ________
  First kiss...  First...         fa--suto - kisu...  fa--suto...

Kyousuke FX:                      _____ _____
                   butsu butsu

4
[Without turning to look, he walks past his smiling and waving Grandpa.]
Grandpa:
  Hey, Kyousuke!                  iyo--  KYOUSUKE

  I'm making myself at home!!     o-jama      shitoru                 zo
                                    obstacle   = am-doing  !!

Kyousuke:                         _____ _____
                   butsu butsu

narration:
  Spring break...                 HARU YASUmi...

  Trouble-maker ojiichan is       osawagase no oji--chan ga   kite-imasu
  here.                           disturb/  's           (S)  is-coming
                                  agitate

5
[Manami rushes out of the kitchen, holding a ladle in hand.  Kyousuke merely
 glances at her.]
Manami:
  Where have you been,            doko   itte-ta     no yo--  oni--chan!
  oniichan?!                      where  were-going

  Ojiichan was waiting            oji--chan zu~~~~tto  matte-ta    no yo
  a-a-all this time!                            was-waiting
                                             all-the-time

  He said he wanted to see        oni--chan ni Aitai     tte!
  you!                                      want-to-see  (quote)

Manami footsteps FX:              ___ ___ ___
                  to_ to_ to_

6
[He falls on his back in bed.]
Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                          dosa_

narration:
  ..........                      ..........

  That's why I went out.          da kara    SOTO ni     DEte-ta
                                  therefore  to-outside  was-going-out

                                  n da
                                  (explan)

Kyousuke:
  Phew!                           fuu_

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p 96 (156)

1
[He visualizes Hikaru and Madoka from earlier in the day.]
Hikaru: [flashback]                               ________   ____
  This is the tree where          madoka-san ga   fa--suto - kisu  shita
  Madoka-san had her first                   (S)  first-kiss       did
  kiss!
                                  tte yu--  KI!
                                  called    tree

Madoka: [flashback]
  A certain someone...            aru HITO...

2
[He rests his head back in his hands and closes his eyes.]
narration:                        ___
  There's no reason to            ore ga   SHIMPAI suru  koto nai
  worry.                          I   (S)  to-worry      not-have-a-thing

                                  ja nai ka

  It's Ayukawa we're talking      AYUKAWA no koto  da  shi...
  about...                        about-Ayukawa    is  consider

  And that happened a long        sore  mo   MUKASHI  no...
  time ago...                     that  too  long-ago 's

  Everyone has a memory or        DARE ni  datte  OMOiDE no hitotsu ya
  two.                            by-who   even   memory 's one     and

                                  futatsu  aru   mono  sa
                                  two      have  thing

  That's right!                   so-- sa!

  Can't fault her.                iroiro   ara--  ne
                                  various  fault  (rhet)

Kyousuke:                         _____
  Heh heh.                        fufun

3
[His face turns into a frown.]
narration:
  I shouldn't be concerned!!      KI ni shicha ikenai_!!

4
[A very big frown...]
Kyousuke:
  ..........                      ..........

5
[Madoka and some guy begin to kiss.  The guy has one of those black bars
 covering his eyes (to protect the innocent).]
inset FX:                         ____
                           chu_

6
[He sits up, fists clenched and his face a grim mask.]
Kyousuke:
 (But still, I'm worried!!)       (yappari  KI ni naru------_!!)
                                   still    am-worried

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                        gaba_

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p 97 (157)

1
[Kyousuke realizes Grandpa is in his room, leaning back against the closed
 door.]
Grandpa:                          ___ ___ __
  Ho! ho! ho!                     ho_ ho_ ho
                                                  ____________
  What a greatly-troubled         NAYAmi   o--ki  jenere--shon  ja nou
  generation.                     trouble  huge   generation

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                           giku_

Kyousuke:
  When did you...                 itsu no mani...

2
Grandpa:
  What's distressing you so       nani  o   sonna ni   NAYAnde-oru?
  much?                           what (O)  that-much  are-suffering

Kyousuke:
  ..........                      ..........

  Nothing really...!              betsu ni~~~~_!

3
Grandpa:
  Oho!                            ho_!

4
[Grandpa zips over and elbows him in the side.]
Grandpa:
  So, your heart was broken,      sate wa  SHITSUREN demo shita
  wasn't it?!                     so       brokenhearted-or-something

                                  n jaro~~~~_?!
                                  (poss-explan)

Grandpa:
  Ehh?  How about it?             kunu~~    do-- ja    hora_!
  Hey!                               how  is    look!

Grandpa FX:
                     tsun tsun

5
[Kyousuke drops his gaze and looks unhappy.]
Kyousuke:
  ..........                      ..........

  It's none of your business,     oji--chan ni wa          KANKEI nai desho!
  ojiichan!                       to-ojiichan  (contrast)  poss-not-have-
                                                           connection

  Please go away!                 atchi     itte-kudasai!
                                  that-way  going-(please)

Kyousuke FX:                      ______
                     ijiiji

6
Grandpa:
  I'm going shopping for a        chotto  KAiMONO   iku  n de
  bit, so I came to invite        a-bit   shopping  go   ('cause)
  you.
                                  omae o   sasoi ni   kita  n ja
                                  you (O)  to-invite  came  (explan)

7
[Smiling, Grandpa points at the front of a book he holds in one hand.]
Grandpa:
  This gourmet book says          KINJO ni      umai       manju-- o
  there's a shop that sells       in-vicinity/  delicious  manjuu (O)
  delicious manju nearby!         in-neighborhood

                                  Utte-ru     MISE ga  aru      tte
                                  is-selling  shop (S) there-is (quote)
                                       ______
                                  kono gurume HON ni    KAite-aru
                                  in-this-gourmet-book  is-written

                                  kara        na_
                                  that's-why    !

  Let's go together!              issho ni  iko--   yo!
                                  together  shall-go

 are buns filled with a variety of stuff--the most
 common being a sweet bean-jam paste.>

Kyousuke: [yelling]
  If you wanna go, go by          ikya               i--   ja nai desu ka
  yourself!                        = if-go  fine

                                  hitori de!
                                  by-one-person

book:
  Shuueisha's Manju of Japan      SHUUEISHA  NIHON  manjuu
                                       Japan

  Everything you always           HYAKKA         manjuu  dasu!!
  wanted to know about manju!!    many-subjects          bring-out/publish

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p 98 (158)

1
[On the street in front of the Kasuga apartment building, Grandpa hauls off
 a reluctant Kyousuke.]
Grandpa:                                                   _mon_
  I'm not of this town, so        washi wa   kono MACHI  no MONO
  I don't know that place         I     (T)  this-person 's person
  very well.
                                  ja nai  kara        BASHO ga
                                  am-not  that's-why  place (S)

                                  yoku wakaran
                                  well not-know

  Oh, anyway just come!           ma  i-- kara  koi            tte!
                                      okay      come-(command)

Grandpa FX:
                           gui_

Kyousuke:
  Oh! oh! oh!                     to_ to_ to_

2
[Kyousuke raises his eyes to the sky.]
Kyousuke:
  This is no time to be           manju--  kutte-ru   BA-AI     ja nai
  eating manju!                            am-eating  occasion  is-not

                                  no ni!
                                  even-though

3
[Kyousuke's pov.  He's looking across the street at a park.  On this side of
 the street are various stores.]

4
[Kyousuke stares wide-eyed at the open book held in his hands.]
Kyousuke:
  Huhhh?  This shop is near       are--  kono MISE  sakki               kita
  the park I just came from!             this-shop  a-little-while-ago  came

                                  KOUEN no CHIKAku  na  n da!
                                  park  's nearby   is  (explan)

5
[Their pov of a donut and coffee shop.]
Grandpa: [off]
  Here it is.                     koko ja yo

Kyousuke:[off]
  Ojiichan, there's no manju      oji--chan  manju--YA    nante
  shop here...                               manjuu-shop  the-likes-of

                                  nai         ja...
                                  isn't-here

6
[Kyousuke looks up from the open book in his hands.]
Grandpa:
  Kyousuke, close your eyes       KYOUSUKE  chotto  ME o tsubutte-miro!
  for a moment!                             a-bit   close-eyes-(and-find-out)

Kyousuke:
  My eyes?  Okay, but...          ME?  i-- kedo...

Kyousuke:
  Why...                          nande mata....
                                  why   again

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p 99 (159)

1
[He closes them.]
Kyousuke:
  ?                               ?

Grandpa: [off]
  Okay?  Don't open your eyes     ii ka    washi ga   3 tsu  kazoeru AIDA
  until I count three!!           okay     I     (S)         count   interval

                                  ME o akeru  n ja nai     zo
                                  open-eyes   (explan/neg) !!

2
[Panels 2-3 are grey panels.]
Grandpa: [off]
  Three.                          SAN

3
Grandpa: [off]
  Two.                            NI

Grandpa: [off]
  One.                            ICHI

4
Grandpa:
  All right!                      yoshi!

5
[Kyousuke looks up to find himself standing before a different shop.]
Kyousuke:
  Huh?                            are?

sign:
  Motozaki  Manjuu             MOTOZAKI  manjuu
                                  

banner:
  Manju                           manjiu

6
[Grandpa enters the shop.  Still holding the book, Kyousuke just stands and
 stares.  From one side, a small, blonde, long-haired girl rushes up.]
Grandpa:
  Hey, give me some manjuu!       o--i  manju-- kure--_!

narration:
  Was there a building like       konna TATEMONO         atta      kke?!
  this here?!                     this-kind-of-building  was-here  (?)

little girl footsteps FX:         ___ ___ ___
                  ta_ ta_ ta_

7
[The little girl ends up tripping over Kyousuke's legs.  Kyousuke drops the
 manju book he was holding.]
little girl:
  Kya!!                           kya_!!

little girl/Kyousuke FX:
                            don

Kyousuke:
  Ah!                             a_!

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1
[The little girl lies flat on her face on the pavement, arms spread wide.
 Kyousuke rises on one elbow and looks over at her unmoving body.]
Kyousuke:
  Ah!  Oh no-o-o!                 a_  ikkene--_!

  Is she going to cry...?!        NAku  ka na......?!
                                  cry   I-wonder

little girl:
  ..........                      ..........

2
[The little girl wears a dress.  She bears a strong resemblance to Kazuya's
 girlfriend, Kyouko--except this girl is more feminine.  Here, she lifts up
 her face.  Tears well in her eyes.  Her nose is bruised.]
little girl:
  I...  I won't cry...!           na...  NAkanai mon...!

little girl FX:                   _____
                  muku_

little girl tears FX:             _____
                           poro_

3
[Kyousuke helps her to her feet.]
Kyousuke:
  I'm sorry!                      gomen!
                                  ____
  Are you...  All right?          kega... shinakatta  kai?
                                  not-injured         (?)

little girl:
  ..........  Uh-huh.             .......... un

4
[Just then, Kyousuke spies a long-haired brunette girl walk by.]
Kyousuke:
  Hm?                             n?

brunette girl FX:                 _____ _____
                    kotsu kotsu

5
[He looks across the street.  At the entrance to the park stands the girl,
 looking off to one side.]
Madoka FX:                        _____ _____
                       kyoro kyoro

Kyousuke:
 (Huh?  Ayukawa?!)                (are?  AYUKAWA?!)

6
Kyousuke:
 (..........                      (..........

  It looks like she's             DARE-ka  o   matte-ru    mitai da)
  waiting for someone.)           someone (O)  is-waiting  seems

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1
Madoka: [flashback]
  We promised to meet.            sono HITO to      Au       YAKUSOKU  datta
                                  with-that-person  to-meet  promise   was

                                  n da
                                  (explan)

  Under this tree...              kono KI   no SHITA de...
                                  this-tree 's under

Kyousuke: [flashback]
  Here again...  In six           6-NEN -GO ni  mata   koko de
  years.  To Madoka.              in-6-years    again  at-this-place

                                  madoka e
                                  to-Madoka

2
[Kyousuke races off.]
Kyousuke FX:                      ___
                            da_

narration:
  She came to meet him, after     yappari    Ai ni    kita  n da!!
  all!!                           after-all  to-meet  came  (explan)

3
[The little girl spots the fallen book.]

4
[She raises it high and cries out after him.]
little girl:
  ..........                      ..........

  You forgot something!           wasuremono--_!

5
[Grandpa exits the store, looking embarrassed and carrying a small package.]
Grandpa:
  Hey, Kyousuke.                  o--i  KYOUSUKE

  Do you have some money?         omae  o-KANE  motte-nai  ka
                                  you   money   not-having (?)
                                  _____
  I forgot to bring my            saifu   o   wasurete-kichimatta_!!
  wallet!!                        wallet (O)  came-and-forgot-(finality)
                                         ___ ___ ___
  Ohhhh.  Ha! ha! ha!             iya--  ha_ ha_ ha_

6
Grandpa:
  Kyousu...                       kyo--su...

  ......  Huh?                    ......  are?

  Hmm.  Where'd he go?            hate  doko   itta?
                                  hmm   where  went

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p 102 (162)

1-3
[Panels 1-3 show his surroundings streaking past as he runs.]
narration:
  If I'm not mistaken...          tashika ni...

  In this park, Ayukawa...        kono KOUEN no NAKA ni  AYUKAWA wa...
                                  within-this-park               (T)

4
[Kyousuke pauses as he hears something off-panel.]
man: [off]
  I wanted to see you...          Aitakatta...

Kyousuke:
  !                               !

5
[Wide-eyed, he peers through the bushes.]
Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                         gasa_

Madoka: [off]
  I was sure...                   yappari..........

6
[View pans back.  Madoka is in the tight embrace of a guy (who we can't see
 because she's in the way).  Kyousuke can only gape.]
Madoka:
  ...you'd come.                  kite-kureta no ne

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1
[His pov.  Rising on tiptoe, she kisses the guy.  The video seems to be
 breaking up.]

2
[He focuses in on the kiss.]

3
[Kyousuke's stunned face.]

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