Kimagure Orange Road
"The Promotion Red Zone"
Volume 15, Story 6
WB Volume 9, Story 3
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Matthew Akira Klippenstein
Last revision : 08-31-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 61 (121) are only in the WBs!
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p 61 (121)--TITLE PAGE
[A tanned and sultry Madoka rests her chin in her hands and gazes back at us.]
MAIN TITLE (at top) _____ _____
The Promotion Red Zone SHINKYUU reddo - zo--n
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
A Secret Whisper, A Doll HIMITSU no SASAYAki
of Seduction. secret/private murmur/whisper/soft-nothing
_do--ru_
YUUWAKU #DOLL#
temptation/seduction
_______
It Seems Like the Balance KOKORO no baransu KUZUre -sou...
of My Heart Is Crumbling... heart 's balance crumble look-as-if
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p 62 (122)
1
[Exterior night view of the Ayukawa residence. A light is on in an upper-
floor window.]
narration:
Finally, tomorrow is the ashita de iyoiyo GAKUNEN -MATSU
last day of final exams... at-tomorrow at-last school-year end-of
______
tesuto mo SAISHUU-BI...
test too final-day
2
[Studying at a low table, Madoka looks over at Kyousuke. Kyousuke is lying
on the floor, smiling and reading manga.]
Kyousuke: ______
I've been studying with you tesuto CHUU wa MAIBAN ko-- yatte
like this every night during during-test (T) every-night doing-like-this
the exams...! ______
AYUKAWA to tesuto BENKYOU de arimasu...tto!
with-you test study are
Kyousuke FX: ____ ____
goro goro
3
Madoka:
"We" aren't studying at ZENZEN BENKYOU shite-nai
all! -at-all not-studying
____
ja nai boku!
are-not "I"
Madoka: _____
You're only reading manga. manga bakari yonde
only-manga reading
[He blushes.]
Kyousuke sit up FX: _____
gaba_
4
Madoka: [angrily]
Do you have any questions? nani-ka SHITSUMON wa?
something a-question (T)
You *have* come here to BENKYOU shi ni kite-ru n desho!
study, haven't you?! to-study are-coming (poss-explan)
Kyousuke: [embarrassed smile]
Yes. I don't understand hai kono MONDAI ga do--shite mo
this problem at all. this-problem (S) by-no-means
wakarimasen
not-understand
5
Madoka:
And so... da kara
___ ___
kon kon
Kyousuke: ____
A cold? kaze?
6
Madoka:
Y-yeah... u un...
But it's nothing serious. demo TAIshita koto nai wa yo
but serious-thing isn't-there
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p 63 (123)
1
[Exterior shot of the lit window at the Ayukawa residence.]
narration:
And the night grows late... to YORU wa fukete...
night (T) growing-late
Kyousuke: [off]
Oh no! It's already this ikene! mo-- konna JIKAN
late! already this-kind-of-time
2
[Madoka leans towards him and rests her hand on his cheek. He stares back,
wide-eyed and blushing.]
Madoka:
Why don't you... Stay over? tomatte...ittara?
= if-go-and-stay-over
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
dokin
3
[Back to reality. Kyousuke stares up at the ceiling, wagging a pencil that
he's holding in his teeth.]
Kyousuke:
(That... Would never (nante... naru wake nai ka?)
happen, would it?) the-likes-of become have-no-reason (?)
Madoka:
? ?
4
[Exterior night view of the front gate to the Ayukawa residence.]
Kyousuke: [off]
Then, good night! ja o-yasumi!
5
[Exterior view of the Ayukawa residence. The upstairs light is still on.]
6
[Kyousuke looks back, smiling.]
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p 64 (124)
1
[Another view as he looks up at Madoka's lit window.]
2
[He smiles and continues to look back over his shoulder as he walks away.]
narration:
Let's be together... issho ni...
In 3rd-year, okay, Ayukawa? 3-NEN ni narou ne AYUKAWA
in-3rd-year shall-become
3
[Madoka continues to study, but has to stop and cough.]
Madoka:
Well... I have to study, sate to... JIBUN no BENKYOU mo
too. self 's study too
yaranakutcha na to
not-do ?????
___ ___
kon kon
4
[Exterior view of her lit window.]
Madoka: [off] ___ ___
kon kon
5
[Exterior day shot of a school building.]
narration:
And then, the next day... soshite YOKUJITSU----
6
[Students study at their desks. One girl mumbles her differentials. A guy
goes through his English slapstick flash cards.]
7
[Komatsu is the only one not studying. Carrying a soccer ball and a manga,
and wearing an evil grin, he pesters a guy.]
Komatsu: _______ ______
Hey-y-y. Let's play catch! o--i kyatchi bo--ru shiyo-- ze
hey catch ball shall-do !
Feeling cold? samui?
_____
Then, how about manga. ja manga yo mo--
then more
Hey, let's play! hora asobo-- zee!
look shall-play !
manga: _______
Shounen Jandee SHOUNEN jande--
guy: [irritated]
You... omae na--
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p 65 (125)
1
[Komatsu inspects the notebook of another guy.]
Komatsu:
How amusing. omoshire-- naa
_ __ __ __ __
Ah ha ha ha ha! a ha ha ha ha
Kyousuke:
(.......... (..........
He has a lot of time to kekko-- yoyu-- ga
spare.) quite margin/time-to-spare (S)
aru n da na)
have (explan)
2
[Komatsu finally gets around to Kyousuke.]
Komatsu:
You! Give it up too, i--kagen omae mo akiramero yo~~~~~~_!
already-y-y! moderate you too shall-give-up/
resign-yourself
Komatsu FX: _____
munzu
3
Komatsu:
Let's do 2nd-year issho ni mo-- ichido 2-NENSEI
together once more! together once-more 2nd-year
yarou na_!
shall-do
Kyousuke:
No! ya da ne_!
4
narration:
I'm definitely... Going to ZETTAI ni... AYUKAWA to 3-NEN ni
3rd-year with Ayukawa! absolutely with-Ayukawa into-3rd-year
naru n da mon!
turn-into (is-the-reason)
[He looks off-panel.]
5
[The teacher enters the room.]
narration:
But... shikashi...
Ayukawa's so late... AYUKAWA osoi naa..........
door FX: _____
gara_
voice:
Rise! kiri--tsu
6
[Kyousuke scans his test page.]
Kyousuke:
(Great! (yokatta!
The problem I couldn't do yuube dekinakatta MONDAI
last night isn't here!) last-night couldn't-do problem
DEte-nai ya!)
has-not-appeared
narration:
But... shikashi...
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p 66 (126)
1
[Kyousuke leaves school, casting a glance up at one of the buildings.]
narration:
Ayukawa... AYUKAWA wa...
...in the end, didn't come to--to-- sono HI konakatta
that day. in-the-end that-day didn't-come
2
[Tight shot of his feet as he shuffles off.]
narration: ______
Does being absent from KYOU no tesuto KESSEKI to yu-- koto wa...
today's test mean... today 's test absence in-that-case
She flunked?! RAKUDAI?!
flunk
No, she still has the makeup ii ya mada TSUISHI ga aru ka...
exam... still makeup-exam (S) have (?)
But... demo...
3
[He rings her doorbell.]
doorbell FX: ___ _____
pin po--n
doorbell FX: ___ _____
pin po--n
4
[View pans back. He stands at her front gate, pressing the doorbell.]
doorbell FX: ___ _____
pin po--n
sign:
Ayukawa AYUKAWA
narration:
Maybe no one's here? DARE-mo inai no ka na?
nobody -here I-wonder
5
[He opens the gate and lets himself in.]
Kyousuke:
.......... ..........
Excuse me. SHITSUREI shimasu
gate FX: ____
kii_
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p 67 (127)
1
[View from within the house as he walks in through the front door. A girl,
in view from the waist down, is at the phone, dressed only in blouse and
panties.]
door FX: _____
gacha
Madoka:
Okay. It's tomorrow, then? hai ja asu desu ne
then tomorrow is (rhet)
2
[Kyousuke gapes at the view. Still on the phone, Madoka turns to look.]
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
doki_
Madoka:
Yes, I'm all right. hai DAIJOUBU desu
______
I'll take the test. tesuto ukemasu
3
[He blushes and waves a greeting.]
Kyousuke:
Hi! ya_!
Madoka: ___
Ah! ha_
4
[She pulls down her blouse to try to cover up and lets out a shriek. He
flies back.]
Madoka:
KYAAAA! kya--_!
5
[Isolated view of a piano and wall painting.]
Kyousuke: [off] ____
You overslept... Because kaze de... nekonde-ta?!
of a cold?! because-of-cold was-oversleeping
6
Madoka:
But... demo...
I can get up now. mo-- okireru yo
It looks like the fever NETSU mo to--ge o koshita
has broken... fever and crisis (O) pulled-thru/passed
mitai da shi
seems consider
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p 68 (128)
1
[He visualizes Madoka coughing the night before.]
narration: ___
It's my fault!! ore no se-- da!!
my-fault is
I made her stay up kinou anna YORU
late with me like that yesterday that-kind-of-night
yesterday.
osoku made tsukiawasechatta kara
until-late made-keep-company that's-why
2
narration: ___ ____
I made Ayukawa's cold ore ga AYUKAWA no kaze kojirasechatta
worse!! I (S) 's cold could-aggravate
n da!!
(explan)
Kyousuke:
I'm sorry... gomen...
___
It's my fault. ore no se-- da ne
3
Madoka FX: _____
niko_
4
Madoka:
I reported my absence just IMA KESSEKI TODOKE DAshite n da
now. now report-of-absence sending-out (explan)
Tomorrow I take the makeup asu TSUISHI da tte atashi hitori...
exam alone... tomorrow makeup is (T) I 1-person
5
Kyousuke:
Tomorrow?! ashita?!
And just by yourself?! shikamo hitori dake_?!
moreover 1-person just
Th-that's terrible!! ta...TAIHEN da_!!
6
Kyousuke:
But you still have to mada nete-nakya dame da yo_!!
rest!! still must-be-sleeping are
Madoka:
Y-yes. u...un
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p 69 (129)
1
[He rises to his feet.]
Kyousuke:
Anyone else home?! IE no HITO wa?!
house 's person (T)
Madoka:
No. inai
Kyousuke:
Doctor? ISHA wa?
Madoka:
On vacation! YASUmi!
Kyousuke:
Where's Hikaru-chan? hikaru-chan wa?
Madoka: ____
She's resting from a cold!! kaze de nete-ru!!
cold on-account-of is-sleeping
2
narration: ___
I can't let Ayukawa fail re no sei de AYUKAWA o
because of me! I have to ecause-of-my-fault (O)
take responsibility!
RAKUDAI nante saserarenai
fail the-likes-of can't-let
SEKININ toranakutcha!
must-take-responsibility-(for)
[He strikes a decisive pose.]
Kyousuke: ___
I'll tend to you! ore ga KANBYOU suru yo!
I (S) nurse/tend
Madoka: [wide-eyed]
O-okay. ha hai
3
[He marches into the kitchen.]
Kyousuke:
That's it. so-- da
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I'll make you some egg tamago -ZAKE o tsukurou!
sake! egg-sake (O) shall-prepare
I'll borrow your kitchen. DAI-DOKORO kariru yo
kitchen borrow
4
[He pokes his head into the refrigerator. Madoka stands behind him.]
Kyousuke: ______
Let's see. Eggs and etto tamago ni o-SAKE...
liquor... let's-see egg and liquor
Madoka:
Shall I help? tetsudao-- ka?
5
[He ushers her out of the kitchen.]
Kyousuke:
That's okay. Rest!! i-- kara nete-te_!!
6
Kyousuke:
Let's see. Liquor... Here etto o-SAKE... kore da
it is. let's-see liquor this is
[He reaches up for a bottle of "Camus" set on a shelf.]
7
[He pours some into a sauce pot...]
bottle FX: ________
tokutoku
8
[Which he lifts up to his lips with a smile.]
Kyousuke:
Well then, let's have a dore AJI MI o...
taste... well-then a-taste see (O)
Kyousuke FX:
zu_
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p 70 (130)
1
[Face flushed, he pours the bottle into the pan. His eyes are unfocused.]
Kyousuke FX: _____
hikku
Kyousuke:
Maybe a bit more? mo-- chotto ka na?
a-bit-more I-wonder
bottle FX: ________
tokutoku
2
FX: [off] ______
gachan
Madoka:
? ?
[Madoka looks over at the open door to the kitchen.]
3
[She enters the kitchen to find Kyousuke lurching towards her.]
Kyousuke FX: _____
fura_
4
[He puts an arm around her. She looks into his eyes.]
Madoka heartbeat FX: _____
doki_
Kyousuke: ___
It's my fault... ore no se-- de...
____
Making you catch a cold konna kaze hikasete...
like this... this-kind-of-cold making-catch
I'm sorry! gomen yo!
Kyousuke FX:
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p 71 (131)
1
[She realizes his hand is resting on her rear end.]
Madoka:
W-wait. Your hand... chi chotto TE ga_...
Kyousuke hand FX:
sawa_
2
[She looks closely at his face.]
Madoka:
! !
3
Madoka: [thrusting him away]
Wah! You stink of liquor!! uwa_ o-SAKE kusa_!!
! liquor = stink
You're drunk, aren't you! yotte-ru no ne----_!
4
[Her pov of the drunken bozo.]
Kyousuke FX: _____
hikku
5
[He clutches his head and cries up to the ceiling.]
Kyousuke:
Ahhhh! a~~~~_!
___ ____
What a stupid guy I was!! ore wa nante baka na OTOKO
I (T) what! stupid-guy
datta n da~~~~~~_!!
was (explan)
6
Kyousuke: ___ ____
I'll definitely cure you of kitto ore ga KIMI no kaze o
your cold!! surely I (S) your-cold (O)
naoshite miseru kara_!!
cure-(and) show that's-why
___
Yeah. That's my... sou sore ga ore no...
like-that that (S) my
___
My... ore no~~~~_
7
[With a goofy smile he fills a glass that Madoka holds in her hand.]
Kyousuke:
Well, drink, drink!! sa-- nonde nonde!!
__ __ __ __
wa ha ha ha
bottle FX: ________
tokutoku
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p 72 (132)
1
[She watches as he stands in the middle of the kitchen and slugs down the
bottle.]
Kyousuke FX:
n_ n_ n_
____ ____
goku goku
2
Madoka:
(What the heck did this guy (......nani shi ni kita n daro?
come for?) what to-do came (poss-explan)
kono OTOKO wa...)
3
[Exterior shot of the Ayukawa residence.]
Kyousuke: [off] ___ ___ ___ __
Wah! ha! ha! ha! wa_ ha_ ha_ ha
Kyousuke: [off]
It's liquor! SAKE da--_!
Most delightful liquor! SAKE motteko--i!
FX: [off] ________
kacha--n
4
[With his arm around her shoulder, Madoka helps Kyousuke walk down the street.]
Kyousuke: _____
hikku!
Kyousuke footstep FX: ___
za_
5
[View from behind the pair as Madoka turns her face aside to cough.]
Madoka FX: ___ ___
kon kon
6
[Sunlight streams over the top of the Kasuga apartment building. In an inset,
a red-faced Kyousuke comes awake. He is still dressed in his school uniform
from the night before and appears to be lying on the floor.]
Kyousuke: ___
Ah!?! ha_?!
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p 73 (133)
1
[He rises to a sitting position, looking blearily about.]
Kyousuke: ___
What the heck... Was I ittai... ore wa nani o yatte-ita
doing? in-the-world I (T) what (O) was-doing
n darou?
(poss-explan)
Kyousuke FX: _____
muku_
2
[He winces and clutches his head.]
Kyousuke FX: _____
zuki_
Kyousuke:
Ow-ow-ouch... itete...
Huh!?! ha_?!
3
[Standing, he sees Madoka lying on the floor, covered in a blanket and with
a folded towel across her forehead. Her face looks feverish and she's out
cold.]
4
narration:
Ayukawa...?! AYUKAWA...?!
5
[He staggers at a yell from behind him.]
Akane: [off]
HEY! KYOUSUKE!! kora_ KYOUSUKE_!!
6
[Turning, he sees his two cousins standing with arms crossed and looking
angry. Akane is dressed in school uniform; Kazuya in shorts, shirt and
jacket.]
Kyousuke:
Akane... Kazuya. akane... KAZUYA
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p 74 (134)
1
Akane:
What the hell did you do?! anta ittai nani shita no?!
you in-the-world what did (?)
Kyousuke:
Wh-what do you mean, na nani tte...?!
"what"?! what (quote)
2
Akane:
Kurumi-chan and Manami-chan kurumi-chan-tachi oto--san to
said they were going on a (and-assoc) with-father
trip with your father, so
they asked me to take care RYOKOU ni iku tte yu-- n de
of you... on-trip go say-that ('cause)
anta no SEWA tanomarete-kita
your-care came-and-was-asked
n da kedo...
(explan) but
3
[Their view of Madoka.]
Akane: [off]
But when I got here, kitara madoka-chan sugoi NETSU
Madoka-chan was lying at when-come terrible-fever
the front door with a
terrible fever... DAshite GENKAN de taorete-iru shi...
exhibit-(and) at-the-door are-lying and
Akane: [off]
And you were drunk and anta wa yopparatte nete-ru
asleep... you (T) are-drunk-(and) are-sleeping
shi...
and-besides
4
[Kyousuke facial portrait--face flushed.]
narration:
Wha... na...
What the hell...!! nante koto da...!!
5
[He hangs his head and closes his eyes. Akane bends to look sternly up at
his face.]
Akane:
Hmm... So this is what fu--n sore de kono arisama tte wake?!
happened?! and-so these- (T) reason
circumstances
There are limits to i--kagen ni mo hodo ga aru wa ne
carelessness, you know. to-irresponsibility too there-are-limits
You... anta tte HITO wa...
you (T) person (T)
6
[Akane looks over at the unconscious Madoka.]
Akane:
To take a test in this kono yo--dai ja
condition... It's in-this-condition-(of-patient)-(T)
impossible! ______
tesuto nante... MURI yo!
test the-likes-of impossible
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p 75 (135)
1
[He falls backwards, arms spread and grimacing at the ceiling.]
narration:
If Ayukawa doesn't take the KYOU no TSUISHI ukerarenakattara
makeup exam today, won't today 's makeup-exam if-not-taken
she flunk?!
AYUKAWA wa RAKUDAI?!
(T) flunk
Ahh, I utterly despise a-- mou JIKOKEN'O no KYOKUCHI!!
myself!! now self-abhorrence 's the-extreme
2
[Looking at Akane, he has an idea.]
3
Akane:
Hm? n?
4
Kyousuke:
As I recall... Ayukawa tashika... TSUISHI wa AYUKAWA
said that she was taking as-I-recall makeup-exam (T)
the makeup exam alone...
hitori dake da tte itte-ta yo na...
just-1-person is was-saying-that
5
Kyousuke:
(That's it!!) (so-- da_!!)
6
[Exterior view of a school building.]
7
[A teacher enters a classroom.]
door FX: _____
gara_
8
sensei:
! !
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p 76 (136)
1
[Madoka sits at a desk.]
sensei:
Let's see... etto...
You're... Ayukawa-kun. AYUKAWA-kun... da ne
2
[Tight shot of a towel being wrung.]
towel FX: ____
gyu_
3
[Kyousuke sets it on Madoka's forehead. She still lies unconscious.]
narration:
Good thing Akane was akane ga ite HONTOU ni yokatta!!
here!! (S) being-there really was-good
_chikara_
Good thing she has the NOURYOKU ga atte HONTOU ni yokatta!
Power! Power (O) having really was-good
4
Kyousuke: [to Kazuya]
"Akane, I'm counting on akane tanonda zo!
you!!"
Tell her that to TSUTAete-kure
telepathically, Kazuya. (quote) communicate-that-(to-us)
___________
KAZUYA terepashi-- de
by-telepathy
5
[Akane wets her pencil tip with her tongue while staring hard at the test
page.]
@Madoka: [telepathically]
(Roger! (ryo--kai!
Leave it to me!! makasenasai!!
This is for the sake of kore mo itoshiki madoka-chan
my beloved Madoka-chan!) this too dear
no tame da mono!)
for-sake-of is reason
@Madoka FX: _____
pero_
6
narration:
Akane and Kazuya are akane to KAZUYA wa itoko de
cousins, and they have and (T) cousins are-(and)
the Power. _chikara_
NOURYOKU o motte-masu
Power (O) are-possessing
Akane has the Power of akane wa HENSHIN NOURYOKU!
Transformation!
However, it can only be tadashi AITE ga hitori TOKI ni
used on one person at a however partner (S) 1-person at-time
time...
shika tsukaenai......
can-only-use
___________
Kazuya has the Power of KAZUYA wa terepashi-- NOURYOKU!
Telepathy! ____
He's a kid, but he's a koitsu wa gaki da kedo
very powerful ESPer!! this-fellow (T) kid is but
nakanaka no DAI- CHOU-NOURYOKU-SHA
very/pretty great super-ability-person
na n da!!
is (explan)
[Kazuya smirks at Kyousuke, who yells back.]
Kazuya:
She says this is gonna cost o-REI wa TAKAku tsuku tte!
you big time! reward/thanks (T) high cost (quote)
Kazuya: ____
That goes for me, too! boku mo ne!
I too
Kyousuke:
Yes, yes... hai hai...
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p 77 (137)
1
narration:
But anyway, I'm demo tonikaku kore de hitoANSHIN...!!
relieved...!! but anyway with-this I'm-relieved
Kyousuke: ___
Whew! ho_
2
Kazuya:
Oneechan says she doesn't one--chan ga MONDAI marude
understand the problems (S) problem completely
at all!
wakannai tte sa!
not-understand (quote)
[Kyousuke jets upward, splintering the ceiling off-panel.]
Kyousuke FX: _______
zuba--n
3
[With face flushed, he rubs his head.]
Kyousuke:
Arrgghh. ee--i
H-how come doesn't she na nande wakannai n da
understand? why not-understand (explan)
She's also in 2nd-year! ONAji 2-NENSEI no kuse ni...!
same 2nd-year 's although
[Kazuya stands there solemnly, arms crossed and gaze lowered.]
Kazuya:
After all... yappari...
In the end, she's your shosen oni--chan no itoko da ne
cousin, oniichan. in-the-end 's cousin is
4
[@Madoka sits and stares at her test page. In her telepathic speech bubble is
a fretting portrait of Akane.]
Akane: [telepathically]
(Because I'm... (datte atashi...
because I
Not taking this class.) kono KYOUKA totte-nai no yo ne)
this-course-of-study am-not-taking
5
[Face crazed, he cries out.]
Kyousuke:
I-it's all over!! mo moo dame daa----_!!
already no-good is
wahi------
6
[Against a backdrop of a desolate Mojave desert, with small UFOs and stars
crashing down, Kyousuke kneels and clutches his head. Kazuya calmly stands
there and stares at him.]
Kazuya:
Can't you answer them, oni--chan ga tokeba i-- n ja nai?
oniichan? (S) if-answer okay (explan/neg)
___
I'll ask you the questions. ore ga MONDAI kiku kara sa
I (S) question ask that's-why
Kyousuke:
Eh?! e?!
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p 78 (138)
1
[Kyousuke sweats and nervously stares at the palms of his hands.]
Kyousuke:
But, I-I don't have much demo a anmari JISHIN
self-confidence. but -so-much self-confidence
___
nai ......ore
not-have I
[Kazuya crosses his arms, and lowers his gaze.]
Kazuya:
Sure enough, you're yappari one--chan no itoko da ne...
oneechan's cousin... 's cousin are
2
[Kazuya bops him on the back.]
Kazuya:
Serves you right!! JIGOUJITOKU!!
Hey! Take responsibility hora JIBUN de SEKININ toro-- ne!
for yourself! look for-self shall-take-responsibility
Kazuya FX: ___
pon
Kyousuke:
An irresponsible guy, MUSEKININ na yatsu ni kagitte
of all people, tells me irresponsible-fellow of-all-(people)
something like that...
sonna koto yu-- n da yo na...
that-kind-of-thing say (explan)
Kyousuke FX: _____
boso_
3
[Kyousuke smiles nervously and heads for his room. Kazuya waves a clock in
one hand.]
Kyousuke: ___
Then... I'll get a few ja... ore chotto SANKOU-SHO
reference books. then I a-bit reference-books
motte-kuru
fetch
Kazuya:
You don't have time to sonna koto yatte-ru JIKAN
do something like that. that-kind-of-thing are-doing time
nai yo
not-have
Hurry!! HAYAku!!
4
[He stares down at a notebook in his hand.]
Kyousuke:
Yeearrgghh. e--i
I have no choice but to mou yarukkyanai_!!
do it now!! now = must-do
dramatic FX: ___
ba_
5
Kyousuke:
(Ooo! Wh-what's this (u_ ko kono MONDAI wa_?!)
problem?!)
Kyousuke FX: _____
pita_
6
Kyousuke: [off] ______
(It's the test problem I (tesuto ZEN'YA tokenakatta
couldn't solve that previous test last-night couldn't-solved
night!!)
MONDAI da_!!)
problem is
7
[Tight shot of his hand holding the mechanical pencil. The pencil tip rests
on the paper. In the background is a facial portrait of a smiling Madoka.]
Kyousuke:
(But... If I don't solve (shikashi... kore o tokanakya
this, Ayukawa can't get to but this-(one) (O) if-not-solve
3rd year!!)
AYUKAWA wa 3-NENSEI ni narenai
(T) to-3rd-year can't-become
n da------_!!)
(explan)
pencil FX:
gu_
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timer FX: ____________
jiririririri
sensei:
All right. That's all. yoshi koko made
2
[Split panel. At top, @Madoka wipes her brow. Below, Kyousuke closes his
eyes and breathes a sigh.]
@Madoka:
Phew. fuu
narration:
It's over... owatta...
3
Kazuya:
.......... ..........
Were you able to solve it? toketa?
Kyousuke: [staring at the ceiling]
.......... ..........
I did what I needed to ichio-- yaru kotaa yatta yo
do for now at least. for-the-time-being do did
4
[Madoka sits up.]
Madoka FX: ___
su_
Madoka:
What's... nani ga...
Over? owatta no?
5
Kyousuke: __ __ __ __ __
Ha ha ha ha ha! ha ha ha ha ha
Nothing, nothing! nan demo nai nan demo nai!
Kyousuke:
You're awake?! ME sameta?!
6
[He looks at her with concern.]
Kyousuke:
How are you feeling? doo? guai wa...
how condition (T)
Madoka:
Yeah... Pretty good. un... daibu ii
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1
[She turns away from him and looks weakly up at the ceiling.]
Madoka:
Huh? Come to think of are? so-- ieba atashi
it, I have a makeup exam huh come-to-think-of-it I
today...
KYOU TSUISHI ja...
today makeup-exam = is-not
[Kyousuke's face contorts.]
Kyousuke: __ __ __ __
No. That's. Uhh. Ha ha iya-- sore wa sono ha ha ha ha
ha ha!
Kyousuke FX:
otto----_
Madoka FX:
kuru_
2
[Madoka facial portrait--she's surprised.]
Kyousuke: [off]
I heard you don't have to! sonna HITSUYOU nai tte!
that-kind-of-need not-have (quote)
__ __ __ __
Ha ha ha ha! ha ha ha ha
Sensei said your regular SENSEI ga AYUKAWA wa HEIJOU -TEN ga
scores were okay, so you teacher (S) (T) everyday marks (S)
didn't have to take the ______
exam... Ha ha ha ha! ii kara tesuto ukenakutte ii
okay that's-why not-take-test okay
__ __ __ __
tte... ha ha ha ha
(quote)
3
Kyousuke: __ __ __
Ha ha ha... ha ha ha...
Madoka:
Really...? ......sou
? ?
4
[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]
Kyousuke: [off]
Hey... Lie down. hora... yoko ni natte
look lying-down-on-one's-side/
becoming-sideways
Would you like something nani-ka taberu?
to eat?
Madoka: [off]
Yeah... ......un
5
[View of a cherry blossom branch.]
6
[Two schoolgirls stand outside at school.]
narration: ____
The following week, sono ISSHOUKAN -GO kaze mo
Ayukawa's cold got better... whose after-that-(one)-week cold too
yokunari AYUKAWA wa...
get-better (T)
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[His pov of Madoka as she stands in school uniform and waves.]
narration:
It looks like she can move do--yara BUJI SHINKYUU dekiru
up to the next class without it-looks-as-if safety able-to-go-up
a hitch...!
mitai desu......!
seems
2
[View pans back to show him at a 2nd-floor classroom window, looking out at
her as she waves up from the ground below.]
narration: ___
But as for me... shikashi kanjin no ore wa
but important/essential 's me (T)
to yu-- to...
when-say-that
3
[Kyousuke looks over at Komatsu and Hatta. All are taking exams, but Komatsu
is trying to peek at Hatta's. Hatta pulls his test paper away.]
narration:
Basically, it's impossible daitai TSUISHI ga AYUKAWA
that Ayukawa would be the generally makeup-exam (S)
only one!
hitori no wake ga nai!
1-person (nom) it's-impossible-(that)
Komatsu:
Lemme look! misero yo~~!
4
[View from the back of the class at a teacher seated before a blackboard.
The backs of three sweating heads are seen, and since one is blond, it can't
be that just the three amigos are taking this makeup exam.]
narration:
That was a test for those are wa KESSEKI-SHA no tame no
who were absent... that-(one) (T) absent-person for
______
tesuto de atte...
test be-(and)
But makeup exams in IPPAN ni TSUISHI to yu-- to...
general... generally makeup-exams when-say-that
______
The test results were tesuto no KEKKA SAITEN sarete
rated and were finally test as-a-result-of be-given-marks-(and)
displayed, and...
yo--yaku yatte-kuru wake de...
at-last turn-up reason is-(and)
blackboard:
General Makeup Exam IPPAN TSUISHI
generally makeup-exam
For those with red marks AKA TEN no MONO -nomi
only. red mark 's person only/merely
Time limit: 60 minutes SEIGEN JIKAN 60-PUN
limit time 60-minutes
5
[Looking out the window, Kyousuke is witness to the wind flipping up Madoka's
skirt. His eyes bulge.]
Kyousuke:
! !
narration:
Ahhhh... aa...
Anyway, spring is already tonikaku HARU wa mou
here, right before my very anyway spring (T) already
eyes!
ME no MAE made kite-ru
even-before-a-person's-eyes is-coming
to yu-- no ni...
say-that even-tho
skirt FX: ___
go_
Madoka:
Kya! kya_!
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