Kimagure Orange Road
"The Girls' Battlefield: Hawaii!"
Volume 14, Story 7
WB Volume 8, Story 11
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation by : Hitoshi Doi (30 Oct 1989)
Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Matthew Akira Klippenstein
Scott Henry
Frederick Gallagher
Last revision : 08-27-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 211 (127) are only in the WBs!
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p 211 (127)--TITLE PAGE
[Madoka stands in shirt and pants, one foot set in front of the other. One
hand is behind her back, the other holds a hat to her head.]
MAIN TITLE (at top) _____
The Girls' Battlefield: ONNA no SENJOU hawai!
Hawaii! girl 's battlefield Hawaii
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
The Midsummer Sun. MANATSU no TAIYOU
midsummer 's sun
To Take You As an Ally and MIKATA ni tsukete
Play with 16-Beat Love*... to-friend/ally stick/follow-(and)
______
16 bi--to no HIASObi shitai!
16-beat (nom) want-to-play-with-fire/love
<*Translation note: = "play with fire" also connotes
"play with love".>
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p 212 (128)
1
[A view of the "Wikiwiki" shuttle bus dropoff point at the main terminal at
Honolulu International Airport.]
2
[Madoka's pov of a somewhat smirking Sayuri and a speechless Kyousuke.]
3
[Their pov of a stunned Madoka.]
4
Madoka:
Ka... Kasuga-kun! ka......KASUGA-kun!
5
[He forces a smile. Might work if Sayuri wasn't clinging to his arm...]
Kyousuke:
H-hi! ya...yaa!
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p 213 (129)
1
[Sayuri approaches Madoka with a smile.]
Sayuri:
Ohh! To meet you here... a--ra! konna TOKORO de
at-place-like-this
o-Ai suru nante...
be-meeting-(humble-form) the-likes-of
2
Sayuri: [smirking]
...is such a coincidence. KIGUU desu wa ne
3
Madoka:
My sister's wedding atashi wa ANEKI no KEKKON-SHIKI o
is taking place in Hawaii, I (T) older-sister 's wedding (O)
so I've been here since the _____
day before yesterday. hawai de yaru n de
in-Hawaii do ('cause)
ototoi kara kite-ru no
from-day-before-yesterday am-coming
_______
It's been a while since hisabisa ni amerika ni iru
we've gotten together with after-a-long- in-America are-here
our parents, who are here separation
in America!
RYOUSHIN mo issho no KAZOKU MIZUirazu
my-parents too together family by-ourselves
tte yatsu ne!
(quote) thing (rhet)
4
Kyousuke:
Eh?! e?!
5
[He looks relieved.]
Kyousuke:
(O-ohh. (na... nan da
So that's what it was.) so-- yu-- koto datta no ka)
that-kind-of-thing was (?)
___
ho_
6
[Madoka aims a smile his way. Sayuri looks, too.]
Madoka:
And yourselves...? sochira wa mata......
you (T) moreover
Madoka FX: _______
chirari
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p 214 (130)
1
Kyousuke FX: _____
gokun
2
[She turns away, and smiles blithely back at him over a shoulder.]
Madoka: ______ __________
You're with a wonderful suteki na pa--tona-- to go-issho de
partner. wonderful/ partner with together being
great/splendid
[He waves his arms spastically.]
Kyousuke FX:
atafuta
Kyousuke: _____
N-no! This is the i_ iya! kore wa kuizu no...!!
quiz's...!! this-(one) (T) quiz 's
3
[Smiling, Sayuri appears at his side and takes his arm once more.]
Sayuri: ___________ ______ _____
I won a trip for two to atashi hamba--ga-- - shoppu no kuizu de
Hawaii in a quiz at a I in-hamburger-shop's-quiz
hamburger place! _______ _____
kappuru no hawai RYOKOU ga
couple 's Hawaii-trip (S)
atatchatta n desu!
hit-(finality) (explan)
____
And so I came with my sore de kare to issho ni
boyfriend. and-so with-boyfriend together
_
kita n desu yoo
came (explan)
Isn't that nice? i-- desho--
Madoka: [dropping her gaze]
Oho-o-o! ho----_!
4
[The two exchange pleasant smiles. Pretty scary. Kyousuke looks at Madoka.]
Madoka:
Congratulations. sore wa... omedetou
Madoka/Sayuri FX: ________
nikoniko
Sayuri:
Thanks! doomo!
5
[His eyes grow large and his face colors.]
6
[He stares hard at Madoka, who doesn't meet his eye. He struggles to keep
his composure...]
Kyousuke:
URGGHHH... gu...
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p 215 (131)
1
[...because Madoka is grinding the point of her high heel into his foot.]
Madoka high-heel FX: ____ ____
giri giri
2
[He finally hops about, clutching that foot in pain.]
Kyousuke:
Ow-ow-ow-ouch! atetetete!
narration:
Sure enough, she's mad! yappari okotte-ru yo~~~~_!
sure-enough is-angry
3
[Madoka walks off without a backward glance.]
Madoka:
See you. ja ne
Kyousuke:
Ah! Wait! a_ matte!
4
Kyousuke:
D-do you have anything ki...KYOU wa nani-ka YOTEI aru no?
planned for today? today (T) something a-plan have
5
[Madoka looks back over her shoulder.]
6
Madoka:
Nothing special today... KYOU wa betsu ni...
I thought I'd just wander achi kochi mite arukou ka
around... look-this-way-and-that-(and) shall-walk (?)
to OMOtte-ta toko da kedo...
was-thinking-that occasion is but
7
[He runs up to her with an almost frantic smile.]
Kyousuke:
H-hey! Then, if it's okay, ne nee_ ja yokattara
why don't we go around ! then if-okay
together for the rest of
the day?! KYOU ICHINICHI issho ni KOUDOU shinai?!
all-day-today together not-act/move
Madoka:
Huh?! e?!
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p 216 (132)
1
Sayuri: [smiling]
Yeah, yeah, Ayukawa-sa-a-an. so-- so-- AYUKAWA-sa--n
Let's do that!! so-- shimasho_!!
Sayuri:
We just got here today, so atashi-tachi KYOU kita bakari da
I'd like to ask that you we today came just are
guide us, if it's okay with _____
you. shi yokattara gaido
and-besides if-okay guide
o-NEGAi shitai wa
request want-to-do
2
[Kyousuke claps his hands together before him.]
Kyousuke:
Please! tanomu_!
Sayuri:
Okay?! ne_
3
Madoka:
Well, okay... maa i-- kedo..........
4
Kyousuke: ___
(After all, I came to Hawaii (nantatte ore wa AYUKAWA no koto ga
because I was worried to after-all I (T) about-Ayukawa (S)
death about Ayukawa!) _____
SHIMPAI de SHIMPAI de hawai made
worry-(and) worry-(and) to-Hawaii
kita n da mon!)
came (is-the-reason)
5
Sayuri:
(If I don't take down this (koitsu no MAE de kono OTOKO o
guy in front of her, coming in-front-of-this-girl this-guy (O)
to Hawaii will have been _____
pointless!) Otosanakereba hawai made kita
if-not-capture/take to-Hawaii came
IMI ga nai mon!)
have-no-meaning reason
6
[Madoka portrait.]
7
[She stares at the letter in her hand...]
8
[...and puts it into her handbag.]
letter FX: _____
sasa_
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p 217 (133)
1
[View of a palm tree eclipsing the sun.]
2
[Shot of the street signs at the corner of Beach and Kalia (in Waikiki).]
3
[Looks like a view down Kalakaua Avenue in Waikiki--but trust me, traffic is
never this light there. Nor is the speed limit 50 mph! ]
4
[Sayuri returns with two drinks.]
Sayuri:
Whew! It's so hot. fuu atsui atsui
5
[She hands one to Madoka, who sits on a bench. Kyousuke sits on another.]
Sayuri:
Here you are! doozo!
Kyousuke: ___
Huh? Where's mine? are ore no BUN wa?
my portion (T)
6
[Sayuri blushes in embarrassment and claps a hand to her mouth.]
Sayuri:
Oh, that's right. a so-- ka
Oh no-o-o. ya daa
I forgot and only bought atashi ukkari futatsu shika...
two... I absent-mindedly two only
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p 218 (134)
1
Madoka:
I don't need one! atashi iranai!
2
Sayuri: [smiling]
No, please, please! a do--zo do--zo!
3
[Tight shot of a drink with two straws.]
Sayuri: [off] ________
Since I have two straws... sutoro-- futatsu aru kara...
straw two have that's-why
We can do it this way... atashi-tachi wa ko-- shite...
we (T) like-this do-(and)
straw FX: __ ___
pa shu
4
[Sayuri raises the drink and gazes into Kyousuke's eyes. He kinda looks like
a frightened deer.]
Sayuri:
And drink together in nakayoku nominasho!
friendship! in-harmony shall-drink
5
[Kyousuke tries to look out the corner of his eyes off-panel.]
Kyousuke FX:
soo----_
6
[Madoka stares at the two lovebirds. Kyousuke sits stock-still as Sayuri
smiles and clings to his arm.]
Madoka:
.......... ..........
7
[Madoka ignores them and takes a hard pull at her drink.]
narration:
Somehow, I think it was nan-da-ka issho ni KOUDOU suru
a mistake to go around somehow together act/move
together...
tte no wa machigai datta
(quote) (nom) (T) mistake was
yo-- na KI ga...
looks-like = think
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p 219 (135)
1
[View across the city from atop some hotel.]
2
[Sayuri approaches Madoka with a camera and a smile.]
Sayuri:
Oh, could you, ple-e-ease?! chotto o-NEGAi shima--su!
3
[Madoka's pov of Sayuri clinging to Kyousuke's arm. Kyousuke looks like he'd
rather be elsewhere.]
Sayuri wave-and-wink FX:
4
[Madoka frowns over the top of the camera.]
5
[View through the camera's viewfinder. She aims for a shot above their heads.]
camera FX: ______
pasha_
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p 220 (136)
1
[A mini-mall, probably still in Waikiki.]
2
[Aloha shirts hang from racks.]
3
[Sayuri and Madoka look at some blouses. Kyousuke stands idly behind them.]
Sayuri:
Wow! So cute . wa--_ kawaii
4
[He smiles at a blouse he's pulled off the rack.]
Kyousuke:
(I bet this would look good (kore nanka kitto AYUKAWA ni
on Ayukawa...) this somewhat surely on-Ayukawa
niau darou naa...)
poss-suit (rhet)
5
[He smiles nervously at Madoka.]
Kyousuke: _____
Ayukawa, this is perfect... kore AYUKAWA ni pitta...
this-(one) for-you = perfectly
Madoka:
Huh? e?
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p 221 (137)
1
[Smiling brightly, Sayuri takes the blouse out of his hands.]
dress FX: ___
pa_
Sayuri:
Wahhh! Thanks! waa----_ arigatou
You chose it just for me, atashi no tame ni ERAnde-kureta no ne!!
hm!! for-me chose-(for-me)
2
Kyousuke FX: ______
chira_
3
Madoka:
.......... ..........
4
[He grimaces and clutches at his head.]
narration:
O-oh no. ma mazui
If this keeps up, I'm in kono mama ja ikenai!
trouble! if-this-keeps-up bad
___ _____
I didn't come to Hawaii for ore hawai ni konna tsumori de
this!! I to-Hawaii for-this-kind-of-intention
kita n ja nai n da mon!!
came (explan/neg) (is-the-reason)
5
[Madoka profile.]
narration:
If I don't do something nantoka shinakya kore ja AYUKAWA ga......
now, Ayukawa will... somehow if-not-do now-(T) (S)
6
[Sayuri looks back over her shoulder at Madoka, who is staring hard at
Kyousuke.]
Sayuri FX: ___
Ah! ha_
Madoka FX:
ji--
7
[Sayuri starts to look very worried.]
Sayuri:
(Oh no! (ikenai!
If that girl comes at me ano ONNA ni BOURYOKU de korareru to
with a fury, there's no by-that-girl by-force if-is-coming
way I can win...
kanau wake nai
be-fulfilled have-no-reason
n da shi......
(explan) and-besides
I'll just hide behind koko wa kono OTOKO no ushiro ni
this guy then...) here (T) behind-this-guy
kakurete...)
hiding
8
[Glancing Madoka's way, Sayuri takes Kyousuke by the arm.]
Sayuri:
Cute clothes like these ko-- yu-- kawaii FUKU wa
aren't suited for a certain this-kind-of cute-clothes (T)
someone with a fierce
personality, are they?! dare-ka-san mitai ni
like-a-certain-someone
kitsui SEIKAKU no HITO ni wa
strong/ character/ 's person (IO) (con-
fierce personality trast)
niaimasen yo nee----_
not-suit (rhet)
Kyousuke:
Eh?! e?!
9
[Madoka starts to look a bit worried.]
Madoka:
.......... ..........
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p 222 (138)
1
[This panel is the right-half of a 2-page panel. View across the waters off
Waikiki Beach towards Diamond Head.]
2
Sayuri: __ __ __ __
(Well! Tee hee hee hee... (saate! fu fu fu fu...
Now I'll show you my true kore kara ga atashi no HONRYOU HOKKI!)
skills!) from-now-on (S) my display-of-skill/
in-own-element
3
[Sayuri watches Madoka and Kyousuke as they walk together on the beach.]
Sayuri:
(Watch. (mitenasai
Now for the coup de kore de todome o sashite-yaru
grace...!!) now give-(her)-the-finishing-blow
n da kara......!!)
(explan) that's-why
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p 223 (139)
1
[This is the left-half of a 2-page panel.]
2
[Sayuri changes into her swimsuit.]
Sayuri undress FX: ___
ba_
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p 224 (140)
1
[She stands and bends down at the waist to look him in the eye. Kyousuke,
seated on the sand, looks up.]
Sayuri:
Won't you please teach me OYOgi o OSHIete-kudasaranai?
how to swim? swim (O) not-teach-(please)
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
doki_
2
[She pulls him away. He looks back towards Madoka, who has changed into her
black bikini.]
Sayuri:
C'mon, hurry-y-y. saa HAYAkuu
Kyousuke:
Ah... Yeah... a... un...
3
[Sayuri frolics with a hesitant Kyousuke in the shallow surf.]
Sayuri: ______
Kyaa! kya--_
waves FX: _____ _____
basha basha
4
[Madoka sits and watches, unhappily.]
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p 225 (141)
1
Madoka:
! !
2
Madoka: [smiling]
Hmm... fumu...
3
[Kyousuke towels his face dry. Sayuri approaches on one side as Madoka sits
on the other.]
Sayuri:
Say, I have a favor to ask... nee o-NEGAi ga aru no...
say request (S) have
Madoka:
Oh, me, too! ara atashi mo!
Kyousuke: [swiveling his head]
Eh?! Eh?! e_ e
4
[Isolated shot of the edge of the water.]
wave FX: _____
zaa--
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p 226 (142)
1
[Yabba dabba... Madoka presents her back to us and undoes her bikini top--
lots of curves on this goddess! She looks back at us over her shoulder.
Sayuri likewise unties her top straps of her one-piece swimsuit, showing
lots of cleavage and curves.]
Madoka/Sayuri: _______
Could you put suntan oil sanoiru... nutte-kurenai?
on me? suntan-oil not-smear-(for-me)
Madoka/Sayuri swimsuit tops FX: _____
hara_
2
[Kyousuke's eyes shine with the megawatt lust of a teenage boy.]
Kyousuke:
EH?! e_
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
doki_
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p 227 (143)
1
Kyousuke:
Eh?! Eh?! e_ e_?
2
Kyousuke: [smiling nervously]
Th-then, one at a time... ja jaa JUMBAN ni...
then in-turn/order
3
Sayuri: [angrily]
Choose one or the other!! dotchi-ka hitori ni shite_!!
either-one for-one-person
4
[View pans back and up. Kyousuke stands frozen. Sayuri stands and faces him.
Madoka kneels with her back towards him and smiles.]
narration: ___
Usually, I'm so itsu-mo nara YUUJUUFUDAN no ore
indecisive... usually if-it-is indecisive (nom) I
da kedo...
am but
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p 228 (144)
1
[With a look of fierce determination, he unscrews the cap off a bottle of
suntan lotion...]
narration:
But today, it's a bit KYOU wa hitoAJI chigau zo!!
different!! today (T) a-touch different !!
suntan oil cap FX: ____
kyu_
2
[...and kneels before Madoka's back.]
Kyousuke FX: ____ ____
peta peta
Madoka:
Thank you very much! do--mo arigato!
3
[Sayuri is aghast.]
Sayuri FX: ___
gan
4
Sayuri: [running away]
Damn! chikusho--
How vexing!! kuyashi--!!
Sayuri footsteps FX: ___ ___
ta_ ta_
5
[Her arms crossed over her chest, Madoka kneels in front of Kyousuke on the
sand. Kyousuke rubs oil on her back.]
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p 229 (145)
1
[Their view of the ocean.]
waves FX: __ __ __
za za za
2
[Kyousuke smiles as he rubs her back.]
Kyousuke: ___
Because, uhh... I was da kara sono... ore AYUKAWA no koto ga
worried about you and... because umm I about-you (S)
Umm...
SHIMPAI de...... sono...
worry-(and)
There's nothing between sayuri-chan to wa HONTOU ni
Sayuri-chan and me... with-Sayuri (contrast) really
nani-mo...
anything
narration:
Making her jealous by AYUKAWA no KARADA o hatta SHITTO ga
putting oil on Ayukawa's 's body (O) put jealousy (S)
body somehow makes me
awfully happy today! nan-da-ka totemo ureshii KYOU no
somehow awfully-happy today 's
____
boku desu!
me am
Madoka:
Oho. And so? hohoo sore de?
2 (inset)
[Sayuri smiles from behind a palm tree at a passing stud muffin.]
Sayuri:
(Kyaaaa! (kya----_
What a hunk!! i-- OTOKO!!
This is truly Hawaii.) sassuga hawai ne)
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