Kimagure Orange Road
"The Hawaii Everyone's Longing for!"
Volume 14, Story 6
WB Volume 8, Story 10
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi

Translation by : Hitoshi Doi (30 Oct 1989)
Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
                                 Craig Nishida
                                 Matthew Akira Klippenstein
                                 Frederick Gallagher

Last revision : 08-27-95

Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:
     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu

NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
      extras to those of you not having them.
      Example: The subtitles on page 191 (107) are only in the WBs!
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p 191 (107)--TITLE PAGE

[Madoka kneels in a black bikini at the beach.]

MAIN TITLE (at top)                                    _____
  The Hawaii Everyone's           akogare           no hawai!
  Longing for!                    a-longing-(for)/  's Hawaii
                                  a-thirst-(for)

SUB-TITLE (at bottom)                                _________
  An Actress for Just One         hito NATSU dake no akutoresu
  Summer--Acting out a            just-one-summer 's actress
  Dazzling Love...
                                  mabayui    KOI   o   ENjiru no...
                                  dazzling/  love (O)  performing/acting
                                  blinding

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p 192 (108)

1
[A shot looking straight up at the sun.]
FX:
                      jiwari...



2
[Kyousuke walks down the street, staring at the sidewalk.]
Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                        fura_

3
[He puts a hand to his forehead.]
narration:
  Hello everyone.  This is        mina-san  konnichi wa  KYOUSUKE desu...
  Kyousuke...                     everyone  hello                 is

4
narration:
  Summer vacation is supposed     TANOshii hazu       no NATSU YASUmi
  to be fun.                      fun      likelihood 's summer-break

  Then why am I feeling so        naze  konna ni    GENKI ga nai no ka  tte?
  down, you ask?                  why   this-(much) depressed       (?) (quote)

5
narration:
  It's all because of what        ototoi no        ano AYUKAWA  no
  Ayukawa said the day before     the-day-before-  that-Ayukawa 's
  yesterday...                    yesterday

                                  hitokoto ga   subete no RIYUU...
                                  a-word   (S)  whole-reason

6
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]

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p 193 (109)

1
[His pov of Madoka, dressed in her ABCB apron.]
Madoka:                                                     _______
  Starting tomorrow, I'm          atashi  ...ashita kara    amerika e
  planning to go to America       I          from-tomorrow  to-America
  for about a month!
                                  hito-GATSU hodo  iku  YOTEI   na no!
                                  about-a-month    go   a-plan

2
[Pov shifts.  We look down at the two.  Kyousuke sits at the counter, stunned.
 Madoka does dishes behind the counter.]
Kyousuke:
  EH!?!                           e_?!

3
[Cracks appear on this panel.  It is a facial portrait of Kyousuke.]
glass FX:                         ______
                         pishi_!!

4
glass FX:                         _____ _____
                    pishi pishi

5
[The panel shatters completely.]
glass FX:                         ________
                       pasha~~n

narration:
  This world has become           kono YO    wa   YAMI        da......
  pitch-black...                  this-world (T)  pitch-dark  is

6
[He aims a grimace at the ceiling.  Behind him, he visualizes a black-bikini-
 clad Madoka at the beach.]
narration:
  A summer without Ayukawa        AYUKAWA no  inai        NATSU   nante
  isn't summer at all!                    (S) isn't-here  summer  the-likes-of

                                  NATSU   nanka    ja nai  yo----_!!
                                  summer  somehow  is-not

dramatic FX:                      _______
                       do~~~~n

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p 194 (110)

1
narration:
  Well, but I bet she's going     maa  demo  kitto   oto--san ya oka--san ni
  to see her father and           but   surely  by-father-and-mother
  mother, so there's nothing
  to be done about it, is         Ai ni iku          n daro--       kara
  there!                          going-to-meet/see  (poss-explan)  that's-why

                                  sho-- ga nai  kedo  ne!
                                  can't-help    but   (rhet)

Madoka:                                                        _____
  Before that, I think I'll       sono MAE ni  ISSHUUKAN hodo  hawai ni
  stop by in Hawaii for about     before-that  about-a-week    in-Hawaii
  a week and get a nice tan!
                                  yotte          yaite       ko--
                                  stop-by-(and)  burn-(and)  like-this

                                  to OMOtte-ru      n da!
                                  am-thinking-that  (explan)

2
Kyousuke:
  EH?                             e?

3
[She leans toward him, with a merry look on her face.  He smiles back
 nervously at her.]
Madoka:
  Do you want to go, too,         KASUGA-kun mo iku?
  Kasuga-kun?

Kyousuke:                         __         _ __ __ __ __
  Ah...  No...  Ah ha ha ha       ha...  ie  a ha ha ha ha...
  ha...

4
[Kyousuke facial portrait--he is stricken.]
narration:                              ______
  A young girl alone on a         WAKAi musume ga   hito-GATSU mo
  trip to America for a           young-girl   (S)  one-month  too
  month...                        _______
                                  amerika  hitori      TABI  nante......
                                  America  one-person  trip  the-likes-of
                                                          _____
  What's more, one week in        shikamo   ISSHUUKAN wa  hawai...?!
  Hawaii...?!                     moreover  one-week  (T) Hawaii

5
narration:
  Someone as beautiful as         AYUKAWA hodo no BIJIN    nara...
  Ayukawa...                      as-beautiful-as-Ayukawa  if-it-is

  Won't be left alone by          muko-- no OTOKO datte  hottokanai     yo
  the guys over there.            even-guys-over-there   not-leave-alone

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                            gokun

6
[Against the backdrop of a quasi-American flag (it's got too many stripes,
 and too few stars) a couple of hunks tower over a cringing Madoka.]
narration:
  Blue eyes that press close!     semaru                AOi ME!
                                  draw-near/urge-to-do  blue-eyes
                                  ________                   _____
  Buff blond boys.                mukimuki         KIMPATSU  bo--i
                                  bulging-muscles  blond     boy
                                                               ______
  Raging gaijin  power!!             raging/turbulent  foreigner  power

Madoka:                           ________
  Kyaaaa!                         kya----_



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p 195 (111)

1
[Back to the present.  Kyousuke has stopped in the street, holding both fists
 to his mouth, and sweating it.]
Kyousuke:
  Ah!?!                           ha_?!

2
[A man in anguish...]
narration: [both narration boxes combined]
  Ahhhh, I'm dying of worry       aa  yappari    AYUKAWA no koto ga......
  over Ayukawa, after all!!           after-all  about-Ayukawa   (S)

                                  SHIMPAI de  SHIMPAI de
                                  worrying    worrying

                                  ite-mo tatte-mo irarenai...!!
                                  be-quite-restless/impatient

Kyousuke FX:
                kuraa  fura_

3
Kyousuke:                                                    _______
 (I used up all my savings on     (CHOKIN  wa   KYONEN    no okinawa
  last year's Okinawa trip...)     savings (T)  last-year 's Okinawa

                                  RYOKOU de  tsukai kitchatta   shi......)
                                  on-trip    used-up-(savings)  and-besides

Kyousuke:                         _____
  Ahhhh...                        haa~~

Kyousuke FX:                      ____ ____
                   tobo tobo

[Sayuri spots him walking off with his shoulders hunched.]

4
[Sayuri is in shorts and shirt, looking cute as ever.]
Sayuri: [smiling]
  Hey-y-y!                        araa_

5
[She runs up past him and turns to give him a smile.  Kyousuke hardly sees
 her.]
Sayuri:
  It's been a while!              o-hisashiburi~~_!

Kyousuke:
  H-hi...                         ya...  yaa......

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p 196 (112)

1
[Hmm.  I don't think I've ever been here before...  Exterior shot of a fast
 food place.  Anyway, its logo is the "Golden Arch".]
sign:                             __________ _________
  NcDonald's Hamburgers           nakudonaru hamba--ga  #NcDonald's#

2
[Kyousuke and Sayuri stand at the counter.  Sayuri smiles at him.]
narration:
  But...                          shikashi...

  This isn't the time to be       konna koto          shite-ru  BA-AI
  doing something like this!      this-kind-of-thing  am-doing  occasion

                                  ja nai  ttsu--    no ni......
                                  is-not  say-that  even-tho

3
[Tight shot of a card with rub-off squares held in Sayuri's hand.]
Sayuri: [off]
  What's...  This?                kore...  nani?

card: [partial view]                 ___
  ...iz                           ...izu

Kyousuke: [off]                   _____
  Isn't it a quiz?                kuizu desho?

4
Kyousuke: [smiling]
  I'll give that to you.          ageru yo  sore
                                  give      that-(one)

Sayuri:
  Thanks .          do--mo 

5
[View looking down at the two seated at a table.  Hm, NcDonald's looks the
 same the world over...  ^_^]
Sayuri:
  ..........                      ..........

6
Sayuri:                                                      _
  You're very depressed,          zuibun  GENKI nai  desu  nee
  aren't you.                     very    depressed  are   (rhet)

7
[Her pov of Kyousuke's profile.  He looks at her out of the corner of his eye.]
Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                          pikun

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p 197 (113)

1
[View across the restaurant.]
Sayuri: [off]
  Yesterday...  When I            atashi...  kinou      CHIJIN no MIOKUri de
  went to Narita Airport          I          yesterday  for-friend's-sendoff
  to see my friend off, I
  unexpectedly...                 NARITA KUUKOU ni   itta  TOKI  gu--zen ni...
                                  to-Narita-Airport  went  time  by-chance

2
[His pov of Sayuri.]
Sayuri:
  Ran into her...                 ano HITO...  AYUKAWA-san ni atchatta!
  Ayukawa-san!                    that-person  met-Ayukawa-(finality)

3
[Her pov of Kyousuke.  He blushes slightly and studies her solemnly.]

4
[She sips from her drink and smiles softly at him.  He studies the ceiling.]
Sayuri:
  Is that the reason?             sono sei...  ka na?
                                  that-cause   I-wonder

Sayuri FX:
                           jirori

5
Kyousuke: [face flushed and nervous]
  Wha...  What are you talking    na...  nanno koto          dai......!!
  about...!!                             what-kind-of-thing  is

crows-in-background FX:
                            kaa_

6
Sayuri:
  Apparently she's going          nan demo  NATSU YASUmi CHUU   wa
  to be in America for the        all       during-summer-break (T)
  entire summer break!                          _______
                                  zutto         amerika ni itte-ru
                                  all-the-time  is-going-to-America

                                  mitai desu  nee!
                                  seems       (rhet)

Sayuri FX:                        _____
                           niya_

Sayuri:
 (Ahh, good riddance,             (a--  jitsu ni  seisei shita......
  really...                             really    felt-relieved

  I hope that girl never          EIKYUU ni  KAEtte-konakya    i--  no yo
  comes back!)                    for-good   if-not-come-back  okay

                                  anna ONNA!)
                                  that-kind-of-woman

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p 198 (114)

1
[Sayuri looks off to one side and ponders.]
narration:
  But...                          shikashi...

  Without that girl around        ano ONNA  ga   inaku       natte
  it seems this guy's become      that-girl (S)  isn't-here  becoming
  easier to take down...
                                  kono OTOKO  otoshi-yasuku  wa   natta
                                  this-guy    easily-capture (T)  became

                                  yo-- da       kedo...
                                  it-looks-like but

  But it isn't worth the          ano ONNA no ME no MAE ja  nakya
  trouble of taking him           in-front-of-that-girl     if-is-not
  down if it's not done
  in front of that girl...        otosu    hariai tte mono ga......
                                  capture  thing-that's-worth-the-trouble

2
[Her pov of the average-looking, puzzled Kyousuke.]
narration:
  If I had to say it, with        Itte-mireba
  that girl gone...               if-I-were-to-say-it

                                  ano ONNA  ga  inakerya...
                                  that-girl (S) if-isn't-here

  A guy of this caliber is        BETSU ni   do--- tte  koto nai  no   yo ne
  nothing special!                specially  what  (T)  nothing   (nom)

                                  kono TEIDO  no OTOKO!
                                  this-degree 's man

3
[A view up at the sky past towering palm trees.]
narration:
  If I was going to take this     otosu    n      nara      isso......
  guy...                          capture  (nom)  if-it-is  preferable
                                  _____
  It would be better to chase     hawai made  oikakete-itte
  after her to Hawaii, thumb      to-Hawaii   go-running-after-(and)
  my nose and do it in front
  of her...                       ano ONNA no ME no MAE de
                                  in-front-of-that-girl

                                  atetsuke ga mashiku...
                                  with-cutting-sarcasm

4
[Sayuri is lost in dreams.]
narration:                                          _____
  But, Hawaii...                  sore ni shite mo  hawai   kaa......
                                  but/still         Hawaii  (muse-to-self)

narration:
  It must be full of great        i-- OTOKO  ippai    iru daro--      naa...
  guys...                         nice-guys  full-of  poss-there-are  (rhet)

5
[Similar background as before.  Against a backdrop of a quasi-American flag, a
 couple of hunks tower over an ecstatic Sayuri.]
narration:
  Blue eyes that press close!     semaru                AOi ME!
                                  draw-near/urge-to-do  blue-eyes
                                  ________                   _____
  Buff blond boys.                mukimuki         KIMPATSU  bo--i
                                  bulging-muscles  blond     boy
                                                               ______
  Raging gaijin power!!           dotou no          GAIJIN     pawa--!!
                                  raging/turbulent  foreigner  power

Sayuri:                           ______
  Kyaaaa!           kya--_ 

6
[On either side of the table, the two stare up at the ceiling, dreamily.]
Sayuri/Kyousuke:                  _____
  Hawaii, hmm...                  hawai kaa......

Sayuri/Kyousuke:                  _____
                         boso_

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p 199 (115)

1
Sayuri FX:                        _____ _____
                         goshi goshi

Kyousuke:
  ..........                      ..........

2
Kyousuke:
  What are you doing?             nani yatte n no?

3
[She looks down at the card on the table in front of her.]
Sayuri:                                                 _____
  The quiz just now.  If I        sakki              no kuizu  kore
  rub this and win, maybe I       a-little-while-ago 's quiz   this-(one)
  can get another hamburger...                                    ___________
                                  kosutte    atari ga  DEru to    hamba--ga--
                                  rub-(and)  a-hit (S) if-appear  hamburger

                                  mo--     1-KO         toka yu-- yatsu...
                                  another  1-(counter)  they-say-that

Sayuri FX:                        _____
                           bo--_
                                  _____ _____
                         goshi goshi

Kyousuke: [wincing]
  It's not that easy to win       nakanaka      atannai  n da      yo ne
  something like this.            (not)-easily  not-hit  (explan)

                                  ko-- yu--    no    tte
                                  this-kind-of (nom) (I-hear)

4
[Tight shot of the card.]
Sayuri:
  OH?!                            a?!

5
[She holds it up to her face, smiling.]
Sayuri:
  I won!!                         atatchatta!!
                                  _______
  Lucky-y-y .       rakki-- 

Kyousuke:
  Eh?                             e?

6
Sayuri:                                ______
  If you match this mark...       kono ma--ku ga   sorou to......
                                  this-mark   (S)  if-match

  Let's see...                    e----tto...

Sayuri:
  It's probably nothing           do--se  taishita mon    ja nai n desu  yo...
  special...                      anyhow  special  thing  is-not (explan)

7
dramatic FX:                      _____
                       pita_

card:                               _____   _________
  * One week trip for two to      * hawai   kappu--ru  ISSHUUKAN  RYOKOU
    Hawaii                          Hawaii  couple     one-week   trip
                                                               _________
  * A present--Kusatsu Hot        * KUSATSU ONSEN  YU no HANA  purezento
    Sulfur Springs                    hot-   sulfur      a-present
                                            springs
                                    ___________
  * One more hamburger            * hamba--ga-- mou      IK-KO
                                    hamburger   another  1-(counter)

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p 200 (116)

1
[The two stare down at the card, incredulous.]

2
[Both flinch back, sending their drinks flying.]
Sayuri/Kyousuke:
  I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!             uso~~~~_

3
[Two male employees gather around Sayuri.  Kyousuke can only watch from a
 distance.]
NcDonald's worker 1:
  You're kidding!                 uso--_

Sayuri:
  Oh no-o-o!                      ya da--_

NcDonald's worker 2 FX:           ________
                       buriburi

narration:
  Ahh...  If I had that,          aa...  are        ga   areba
  I could have gone to                   that-(one) (S)  if-have
  Ayukawa...
                                  AYUKAWA no tokoro ni  iketa     no ni...
                                  to-Ayukawa's-place    could-go  even-tho

4
[He starts to get up from his seat.]
narration:
  But I gave that ticket to       da kedo  ano KEN      sayuri-chan ni
  Sayuri-chan...                     but   that-ticket  to-Sayuri

                                  ageta  n da      shi...
                                  gave   (explan)  and-besides

narration:                                 ___               _______
  It doesn't concern me any       mou      ore ni wa         kanke-- nai
  more.                           any-more to-me  (contrast) have-no-relation

  Anyhow, I'm sure she'll         do--se  ONNA no KO ka OYA KYOUDAI to
  go with a girlfriend or         anyhow  with-girl-or-parents-or-sibling
  someone from her family...
                                  iku ni kimatte-ru......
                                  be-sure-to-go

Kyousuke:
  That was nice.  See ya...       yokatta ne    ja......

5
[With a merry smile, Sayuri hooks her arm around his.]
Sayuri FX:                        _____  __
                   niko_  su

6
[Brightly, she announces to all present...]
Sayuri:
  I'll go with him!               atashi  KARE to   ikimasu!
                                  I       with-him  go

crowd:
  OHHHH!                          o----_

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p 201 (117)

1
[A worker hands over a clipboard for Sayuri to sign.]
narration:                                  ____
  This was an unexpected          tana kara bota mochi              to wa
  piece of good luck!!            an-unexpected-piece-of-good-luck  (define)

                                  kono koto...!!
                                  this-thing
                                            ___      _______     _____
  But to think it's a trip        shikashi  ore to   kappuru de  hawai
  for two to Hawaii with          but       with-me  by-couple   Hawaii
  me...
                                  da  nante......
                                  is  the-likes-of

narration:
  What's this girl thinking?!     do-- yu--     tsumori   na  n da
                                  what-kind-of  intention is  (explan)

                                  kono KO?!
                                  this-girl

2
Kyousuke:                                                 ______
 (During that time, we'll stay    (kari ni mo       ONAji hoteru no
  in the same room of the same     even-for-a-time  same-hotel   's
  hotel, won't we?!)
                                  ONAji HEYA ni  TOmaru  n darou?!)
                                  in-same-room   stay    (poss-explan)

Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            ____ ____
                     doki doki

3
[He turns aside and winces.]
Kyousuke:
 (What's more, Ayukawa's          (sore ni   muko-- ni  wa
  over there, too...               moreover  over-there (contrast)

                                  AYUKAWA datte  iru       wake   da shi...
                                  even-Ayukawa   is-there  reason is consider

  I don't know how this'll        wake          ga  wakannaku nari   -sou!!)
  turn out!!)                     circumstances (S) not-know  become  look-
                                                                      as-if

4
[Isolated shot of a tray carrying a styrofoam burger container and a drink.]

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p 202 (118)

1
[He nervously addresses Sayuri.]
Kyousuke:
  Well...  I...  Appreciate       sa...  KI...mochi wa   arigatai    kedo...
  this...  But, I...                     feelings   (T)  appreciate  but
  After all...                    ___
                                  ore...  yappari......
                                  I       after-all

Sayuri:
  ..........                      ..........

2
narration:
  I want to see Ayukawa!!         AYUKAWA ni Aitai!!

  But...  To use this girl        shikashi...  sono  tame ni
  for that...                     but          that  for-the-sake-of

                                  kono KO    o   RIYOU suru   nante...
                                  this-girl (O)  use/exploit  the-likes-of
                                  ___
  My conscience won't allow       ore no RYOUSHIN ga   yurusanai  yo!
  it!                             my-conscience   (S)  not-allow

[While he's thinking to himself, Sayuri turns back to the employee.]

3
Sayuri:
  Excuse me...  We're still       ano...  atashi-tachi  mada
  high school students, and               we            still
  since we aren't lovers
  or anything, can we get         KOUKOUSEI             da   shi
  separate rooms?                 high-school-students  are  and-besides

                                  KOIBITO DOUSHI    demo nai     kara
                                  couple-of-lovers  or-  aren't  that's-why
                                                    something

                                  HEYA BETSUbetsu ni   narimasen      kaa?
                                  into-separate-rooms  not-turn-into  (?)

4
Kyousuke: [wide-eyed]
  S-separate?                     be...BETSUbetsu?

5
narration:                                        ___
  With this word, the reason      kono kotoba de  ore ni  nokosareta
  and conscience I had left       by-this-word    by-me   was-left
  were completely swept away!!
                                  RISEI  ya  RYOUSHIN   wa   subete
                                  reason and conscience (T)  wholly

                                  futtonde-shimatta!!
                                  was-blown-away-(finality)

[Kyousuke waves tiny flags amidst falling confetti and streamers.]

Kyousuke party popper FX:         ___
                            pon!

6
[With a knowing look, Sayuri crosses her arms and looks off-panel.]
Sayuri:
 (From this guy's personality,    (kono OTOKO no SEIKAKU kara   shite
  I'm sure that by saying          from-this-guy's-personality  doing
  this, he'll be hooked...
                                  ko--       ittoitara
                                  like-this  if-say-(for-future-sake)

                                  hikkakatte-kuru      ni chigainai......
                                  come-and-be-hooked/  am-sure
                                  caught

  In a way, he's the type that    iwaba       TAIGI MEIBUN  to yu-- yatsu ga
  needs a justification!)         in-a-sense  a-just-cause  called  thing (S)
                                               _____
                                  HITSUYOU na  taipu  ne!)
                                  necessary    type   (rhet)

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p 203 (119)

1
[A jumbo jet takes off.]
747 FX:                           ____
                         goon

2
[Kyousuke and Sayuri chat in their plane seats.]
narration:                                                  _______
  And so, this impromptu          kaku shite  kono SOKUSEKI kappuru  wa
  couple set off for dreamy       thus doing  this-improvised-couple (T)
  Hawaii...                               _____
                                  YUME no hawai e...
                                  to-dreamy-Hawaii

3
[The plane's tires hit the runway at Honolulu International Airport.]

4
[View of two 747's at adjacent gates at the airport.]
narration:
  ...and arrived!!                yatte-kita  no deshita...!!
                                  came-over   (explan)

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p 204 (120)

1
[A Madoka full-portrait runs down the right half of this page.  She stands
 in a mini-jumpsuit.]

2
[A view inside the airport.]
narration:                                                _______
  Going to America without        RIYUU    mo   iwazu ni  amerika nante
  giving any reason...            a-reason too  unsaid    America the-likes-of

  Everyone's probably             yappari    minna     bikkuri shite-ru daro--
  surprised.                      after-all  everyone  poss-am-surprising

                                  na

3
[Master smiles and waves.]
narration:                                    ________
  Especially Master, who's        TOKU ni     masuta-- ni wa
  put out because I'm absent      especially  to-Master   (contrast)
  from ABCB...                    _______
                                  abakabu  YASUnde
                                  ABCB     take-a-break-(and)

                                  me--waku kakechau    shi...
                                  troubled-(finality)  and-besides

4
[Hikaru smiles.]
narration:
  And Hikaru...  And..            hikaru...  soshite...

5
[Profile of Madoka.]
jet FX: [off]                     ______
                         gooooo

6
[She drops her gaze.]
narration:
  ...Kasuga-kun...                KASUGA-kun...

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p 205 (121)

1
[The two wait with a suitcase at curbside.  Just *one* suitcase?]
narration:
  F-finally, we're here!!         tsu tsui ni  kichatta!!

Kyousuke:
  ..........                      ..........

Sayuri: [looking around]
  Oo-wahhh!  Only newlyweds,      uwa--_  SHINKON-san      bakari  ne_!
  hm?!                                 !  newlyweds-(hon)  only    (rhet)

2
[Kyousuke looks around.  A couple walks by.]
Kyousuke:                         __ __ __
  Ha ha ha...                     ha ha ha...

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                         chira..

3
[Smiling, she wraps a hand around his arm.]
Sayuri:
  But if we try like this,        demo  atashi-tachi mo   ko--
  even we...                      but   we           too  like-this

                                  yatte-miru to..........
                                  if-have-a-try

4
[She looks up into his eyes.  Oh, she's VERY good, Sayuri-chan is...]
Sayuri FX:                        ___
                          su_

5
[And blesses him with a newlywed smile.  He blushes.]
Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            _____
                          doki_

Sayuri FX:
                           ji----_

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p 206 (122)

1
[A couple of beautiful and tanned, bikini-clad and flower-lei-bedecked girls
 greet Kyousuke.]
pretty wahine*:                   _______
  Alo-o-ha!         aro--ha 

<*Hawaiian for "girl".  ^_^>

2
[One drapes a lei around his neck...]

3
[...and kisses him on the cheek.]
pretty wahine FX:                 ____
                           chu_

Kyousuke:
  Oo-wah!                         uwa_

4
[He turns to Sayuri in embarrassment.]
Kyousuke:                                _____
  This is just a greeting in      kore.. hawai ja      aisatsu    ga wari
  Hawaii!!                        this   in-Hawaii-(T) a-greeting 
                                                                   substitute

                                  na  n da     yo ne!!
                                  is  (explan)
                                  __ __ __ __ __
  Ha ha ha ha ha!                 ha ha ha ha ha

5
Sayuri:
  Is that so?                     so-- na no?

  Then maybe I should greet       jaa   atashi mo   aisatsu shichao--
  you, too?!                      then  I      too  shall-greet

                                  ka na----_?
                                  I-wonder

6
Kyousuke: [flinching]
  Eh?!                            e_?

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p 207 (123)

1
[Madoka walks along with a letter in her hand.]

2
[Tight shot of the letter.  It's addressed to Kyousuke.]

3
[She approaches a mailbox...]

4
[...and starts to insert the letter into the slot.]
letter FX:                        ___
                          su_



5
[Madoka is surprised by something seen off-panel.]

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p 208 (124)

1
[Closeup of Sayuri, eyes closed, kissing a blushing Kyousuke on his cheek.]
Sayuri kiss-on-cheek FX:          ____
                          chu_

2
[View pans back to show Madoka staring at the two, and frozen in the act of
 mailing off the letter.]

3
[View pans back further.  Madoka stands there with the letter in her hand.
 Kyousuke stares wide-eyed back at her.  Sayuri hasn't noticed Madoka yet.]

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p 209 (125)

1
[Madoka's pov of the two.  Sayuri looks back, surprised.  Kyousuke starts
 looking horrified.]
Kyousuke:
  ..........?!                    ..........?!

2
[Their pov of Madoka.  She is stunned.]

3
[View looking up at the vapor trail of a departing jet.]
narration:
  Th-this is terrible...!!        ko...kore       wa   erai koto ni
                                       this-(one) (T)  into-terrible-thing

                                  natta...!!
                                  turned-into

jet FX:                           _______
                     kiiiiin

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