Kimagure Orange Road
"Emotional Expression 100%!"
Volume 13, Story 8
WB Volume 8, Story 3
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation by : Dave Mou (28 July 1991)
Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Frederick Gallagher
Matthew Akira Klippenstein
Last revision : 08-26-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 47 (151) are only in the WBs!
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p 47 (151)--TITLE PAGE
[Sitting in a long slip or nightgown, Madoka looks up at us with a smile.]
MAIN TITLE (at top)
Emotional Expression 100%! KANJOU HYOUGEN 100%!
feelings/emotion/ expression/
passion/sentiment manifestation
SUB-TITLE (at bottom) _____ __ ____
I Won't Fall in Love chotto ya sotto ja notto - in - rabu!
So Easily! -easily not-in-love
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p 48 (152)
1
[Exterior night shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]
narration:
It's said that humans... NINGEN wa...
Are creatures of emotion. KANJOU no DOUBUTSU da
emotions/passions 's animal are
to iwaremasu
is-said-that
2
[Wide view of the apartment. Kurumi lies on a pillow on the floor and watches
TV. Kyousuke and Takashi sit at the table in pajamas. Kyousuke watches his
sister while Takashi is hidden behind his newspaper. Manami washes dishes at
the sink.]
Manami washing-dishes FX: ____
ja--
TV FX: [off] __________ _________
chakachaka chakachan
3
[Panels 3-5 are split-panels. The TV screen on the right and Kurumi's face on
the left. Here, a guy, who wears a goofy costume with his face framed in the
palm of a large open hand, stares out from the TV. Kurumi laughs.]
comedian FX:
paa~~~~_
comedian: ___ ____
I am so-o-o-o stupid. aho cha ima n nen pa--
dummy ??? ????????? ding-a-ling/idiot
de n nen
being ?????
Kurumi FX: ________
kerakera
4
[TV--A young woman clings to the back of a bleeding and bandaged guy. Kurumi's
eyes tear up and she raises both hands to her mouth.]
girl:
You mustn't die!! SHInja dame_!!
girl:
Hey-y-y, hey! o--i oi!
Kurumi FX:
gussun
5
[TV--A newscaster reads the news. Kurumi is enraged.]
supertitle: _________
announcer FU/FUU/KAZE anaunsa--
announcer
announcer:
There's been another mata shite-mo TOOriMA -SATSUJIN ga
unexplained murder. again even-if-do a-phantom-murder (S)
Okorimashita
occurred/happened
Kurumi FX: ___ ___
pun pun
Kurumi:
Unforgiveable!! ma~~ttaku yurusenai wa ne~~~~_!!
at-all can't-forgive
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p 49 (153)
1
Kyousuke FX: ________
niyaniya
2
[An enraged Kurumi advances on her grinning brother.]
Kurumi:
What? nani yo--
________
Smirking at people... HITO no koto niyaniya mite~~~~
about-people grinning/smirking
It gives me the creeps!! ya na kanji ne~~_!!
unpleasant feeling (rhet)
3
[Resting chin in hand, he smiles at Kurumi.]
Kyousuke:
You're completely omae tte tsukuzuku
unsophisticated, aren't you. you (T) thoroughly/utterly
TANJUN da na--
simple/unsophisticated are (rhet)
Kurumi anger FX: ______
kachin
Kurumi:
Wha-a-at?!! nani o~~~~_!!
4
Kyousuke: [smiling]
Don't get mad. okoru na yo
I didn't mean it in a bad KESshite WARUi IMI de
way at all. by-no-means/in-no-way bad meaning
itte-ru n ja nai
am-saying (nom) is-not
n da kara
(explan) that's-why
Kurumi: [hands on hips]
Then, what DID you mean? jaa do-- yu-- IMI yo
then what-kind-of-meaning
5
Kyousuke:
All I'm saying is that you KANJOU ga KAO ni
show your emotions quite emotions/passions (S) on-face
easily.
DE-yasui tte itte-ru dake da yo
easy-to-appear am-saying-that just is
6
Kyousuke:
You laugh easily... WARAi-yasui...
You get mad easily... okori-yasui...
You cry easily... NAki-yasui...
Perhaps showing your KIDOAIRAKU ga hakkiri shite-ru no wa
feelings so easily just feelings (S) are-doing-clearly (nom) (T)
proves you're still a kid.
maa KODOMO ppoi SHOUKO... ka mo ne
child-like proof/evidence maybe
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p 50 (154)
1
[He leans back with a smug look. Kurumi, furious, gets in his face.]
Kurumi:
You're rather simple, too, oni--chan datte so--to-- TANJUN ja nai!!
oniichan!! even-oniichan rather simple
Kyousuke: ___
I'm an adult, so it'll ore wa OTONA da kara
take more than just that I (T) adult am that's-why
to agitate me.
chotto ya sotto no koto ja
by-simple-thing-(T)
DOUjinai yo
not-agitated
2
[She starts rolling up her sleeves.]
Kurumi:
All ri-i-ight!! Tha-a-at itta wa ne------_!! yo----shi!!
does it!!
3
[She tickles his ribs from behind. Kyousuke strives to keep his composure.]
Kurumi FX: __________
kochokocho
Kyousuke chair FX: _____
gata_
Kyousuke: ____
Urp! upu_
4
Kyousuke: [looking barely under control]
I'm okay. It doesn't HEIKI HEIKI
bother me.
5
[Now sitting on the floor, he grimaces as Kurumi tries something new.]
Kurumi: [pinching his cheek]
Well! How's this?! ja_ kore wa do-- da_
this-(one) (T) how is
Arg! ei_
Kurumi FX:
gyu~~_
Kyousuke FX:
nikoniko
Kyousuke:
Nothing, nothing. nanno nanno
Manami: [crossing her arms]
(...... There they go (...... mata hajimatta)
again.) again started
6
Kurumi:
Yeearrrgggh. e~~~~~~i
Then THIS will settle the naraba kore de KImari da!!
issue!! if-it-is with-this settlement is
Kurumi FX:
munzu
[It's the famous Kurumi neck-lock, 180-degree up-and-over back-slam!]
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p 51 (155)
1
[She arches her back and knees, lifting her brother up and over her head,
slamming him into the floor behind her.]
Kyousuke FX: _____ _____
zuban guki_
Kyousuke:
OOF! guo~~_
2
[Tight shot of what's left of Kyousuke.]
Kurumi: [off]
Huh...? are...
He's out cold. nobichatta
3
[Manami raises her jubilant sister's arm.]
Manami:
A victory for Kurumi-i-i!! kurumi no KAchi~~~~!!
Kurumi: [smiling]
See? hora ne--
Oniichan tried to do more oni--chan yasegaman suru kara yo
than he can bear. try-to-endure- that's-why
beyond-one's-strength
4
[Kyousuke sits on the floor in his room and rubs the back of his neck in
agony.]
Kyousuke:
Ow-ow-ow-ouch. atetetete
narration:
Something seems out of doko-ka zurechatta mitai...
whack... somewhere slipped-out-(finality) seems
5
[He opens his eyes wide in realization.]
Kyousuke: ___
(Ah! Speaking of necks out (ha_ KUBI ga zureta to ieba......)
of whack...) ! neck (S) slipped speaking-of
narration:
What'll I do if my Power itsu-ka mitai ni mata
starts going out of whack before/at-one-time like again
again like before?* _chikara_
NOURYOKU ga zure-hajimechattara
Power (S) if-start-to-slip-(finality)
do-- shiyou?*
6
[He levitates a dumbbell with the Power.]
7
[He lies in bed, pulling up the covers and looking relieved.]
Kyousuke:
(Whew! I'm glad. It looks (ho_ yokatta nantomo nai mitai)
like nothing's wrong at whew! was-good isn't-there-at-all seems
all.)
narration:
After all, tomorrow, nantatte ashita wa hikaru-chan to...
Hikaru-chan and I... after-all tomorrow (T) with-Hikaru
note at bottom:
*See Compilation Volume 4, *DAI-4 KAN SHUUROKU
"The Girls' Day Temptation"! volume-4 gather
"YUUWAKU hinamatsuri" o MIte-kure~~!
The Girls' Day Temptation (O) see
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p 52 (156)
1
[Kyousuke walks outdoors, hands in his pockets.]
narration: ______
Have a date! de--to na n da shi!
date is (explan) consider
2
[He comes upon Hikaru, sitting in the park, reading a manga.]
Hikaru FX: ________
kusukusu
3
Kyousuke: [smiling]
Sorry to keep you waiting. o-matase
Hikaru:
Sempai. SEMPAI
4
Hikaru FX: _____
kusu_
Kyousuke:
What's so amusing? nani ga okashii no?
what (S) amusing
5
Hikaru: _____
Ah, no. This manga is very a ie kono manga kekko-- okashikutte
funny... no this-manga quite amusing-(and)
manga:
Hamaguri hamaguri orenji ro--do
Orange Road. clam orange road
Kyousuke:
Let me see. dore
6
[Kyousuke reads. Hikaru beams.]
sign:
Entry by Vehicles Prohibited SHARYOU -NYUU KIN...
vehicles entry prohibition
Hikaru:
Isn't it funny?! ne_ okashi-- desho!
7
[Kyousuke's face flushes and he gets teary-eyed. His body trembles. Hikaru
stares at him blankly.]
Kyousuke tears-pooling FX:
jiwa~~~~_
____ ____
poro poro
Hikaru:
? ?
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p 53 (157)
1
[He turns to Hikaru and wipes a tear from his eye. Hikaru holds the book and
stares at him blankly.]
Kyousuke: ___
The parts where the hero SHUJINKOU ga aho tte tokoro ga
is an idiot are great. the-hero (S) idiot (T) points (S)
yokatta yo
was-good
gusun
Hikaru:
.......... ..........
2
[Kyousuke walks off a bit, rubbing his eyes and still crying. Hikaru swivels
her head from him to the open book in her hands.]
Hikaru:
Why is he crying? nande NAite n daro?
why crying (poss-explan)
_____ _____
This should be a "gag" kore wa gyagu manga no
manga! this-(one) (T) gag manga (nom)
hazu na no ni...
should-be even-though
3
[An idea suddenly hits her, and she turns to gape off-panel.]
Hikaru:
(Ah! I see!!) (ha_ so-- ka!!)
Hikaru
(Maybe this manga... (moshi ka shite kono manga...
it-is-possible this-manga
Concealed beneath the mere tada no o-WARAi no NAKA ni totetsumonaku
laughter is an incredibly mere laughter 's within incredibly
profound and sorrowful ______
theme... FUKAi KANAshii te--ma ga
deep/profound sad/sorrowful theme (S)
kakusarete-iru no de wa......
is-hiding (nom) being (T)
And Sempai understands SEMPAI ni wa sore ga
that!) by-Sempai (contrast) that-(one) (S)
wakaru n da wa!)
understands (explan)
4
[Kyousuke stops in the middle of a sniffle and stares up at the sky in
puzzlement.]
Kyousuke:
Huh? are?
___
I wonder why I'm crying? ore nande NAite-ru no ka na?
I why am-crying I-wonder
5
[He turns to find a blushing Hikaru clasping her hands before her and gazing
at him in worship.]
Hikaru:
Truly... Sempai. sasuga... SEMPAI
Hikaru FX:
6
[She slams into him, in glee.]
Hikaru:
Sempai, you're very smart!! SEMPAI tte suggoku ATAMA i-- n desu ne!!
(T) great smart (explan)
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p 54 (158)
1
[View looking up at a billboard.]
billboard:
Time of a Certain Love aru AI no TOKI
a-certain love 's time
Love means never having to <--- this is in English
say you're sorry.
vertical sign:
Golden Movie ...KIN EIGA FUUKIRI
Premiere gold cinema/movie release-of-first-run
horizontal sign: _________ ______
Golden Hall go--ruden ho--ru
2
[Inside the darkened theater, Hikaru looks up at the screen with tears in her
eyes and both hands to her mouth. Kyousuke's face is unreadable.]
Hikaru FX:
kusun
3
[The house lights come on and Hikaru turns to look at him. His face is a mask
of fury.]
Hikaru:
? ?
Kyousuke FX: _______
musu~~_
4
[He storms off. Hikaru calls out after him.]
Hikaru:
! !
Kyousuke FX: ________
sutasuta
Hikaru:
S-Sempa-a-ai!! se sempa~~i!!
5
[They're outside now, and he's still walking ahead of her.]
Hikaru:
What's the matter? do-- shita n desu
Wasn't it entertaining? omoshirokunakatta n desu kaa?
wasn't-entertaining/pleasant (explan) (?)
Kyousuke FX: _____
pita_
6
[He turns, and with a look that could melt steel, yells out...]
Kyousuke:
IT WAS! I'M VERY TOUCHED!! iya tottemo KANDOU shita!!
very was-affected/touched
[Hikaru does a spectacular pratfall.]
Hikaru pratfall FX:
kuru_
7
[He shouts up to the heavens, fists clenched.]
Kyousuke: ______
Especially the ending! TOKU ni rasuto!
especially last
____________
Why did they have to die?! nande SHInjau n da bakayaro~~~~!!
Stupid jerks!! why die- (explan)
(finality)
[From her post-pratfall kneeling position on the sidewalk, Hikaru looks up at
him in slight wonder.]
Hikaru: ___
(Ah! I-I see!!) (ha_ so so-- ka!!)
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p 55 (159)
1
[She ponders the sky.]
Hikaru: ______
(I bet Sempai felt so sorry (kitto SEMPAI hiroin-tachi ga
for the hero and heroine surely heroine-(and-assoc) (S)
that he got angry at the
people who made that movie!) amari ni mo kawaiso -sugiru n de
too-much too pitiable to-excess 'cause
ano EIGA tsukutta HITO-tachi ni
that-movie made at-people
HARA ga tatta n da!)
got-angry (explan)
2
[He suddenly comes to himself.]
narration: ___ ___
Ah! Why... Am I getting ha_ ore...nande okotte n daro?
mad? ! I why getting-mad (poss-explan)
3
[He turns to Hikaru, to find her clasping her hands before her and gazing with
dewy eyes into his own.]
Hikaru:
Sempai, you're so sweet... SEMPAI tte yasashi-- n desu nee...
(T) sweet/gentle (explan) (rhet)
Kyousuke: ___
Ah! ha_
4
[Exterior shot of a coffee shop.]
Kyousuke: [off]
Ehhhh!?! e~~~~_?!
5
[The two are seated across from each other at a table.]
Kyousuke: ___ _____ _____
I read a "gag" manga and ore ga gyagu manga yonde
cried, and saw a sad movie I (S) gag-manga read-(and)
and got angry?!
NAitari kanashi-- EIGA mite
cry-(and) sad movie watch-(and)
OKOttari shite-ta~~~~_?!
got-mad-(and)
6
[A pretty waitress carrying a tray approaches Kyousuke from behind.]
Kyousuke:
? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
waitress FX: _____
fura_
waitress:
Ah! a_
7
[A plate of spaghetti goes a-flying.]
Kyousuke: [off]
Oo-wah! uwa_
platter of spaghetti FX:
doba_
waitress: [off]
Kya! kya_
8
[The waitress kneels and wipes at his crotch with a towel. Hikaru angrily gets
to her feet.]
waitress:
I-I'm sorry-y-y!! su suimase~~n!!
Hikaru:
What the hell are you anta SEMPAI ni nante koto sun no yo!!
doing to Sempai?!! you to-Sempai what! thing doing
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p 56 (160)
1
Kyousuke: ___ ___ __ ___ ___ __
Wah! ha! ha! ha! ha! ha! wa_ ha_ ha ha_ ha_ ha
[Both girls stare at him blankly.]
2
Kyousuke:
Please be careful. KI o tsukete-kudasai yo
Really-y-y. mattaku~~
___ ___ ___ __ ___ ___ ___ __
Wah! ha! ha! ha! ha! ha! wa_ ha_ ha_ ha ha_ ha_ ha_ ha
ha! ha!
3
[Tight shot of Hikaru and the waitress. They haven't stopped staring.]
Kyousuke: [off]
Hee-ee-ee! hi~~~~~~_
Ouch... It's like my kurushi~~~~ o-naka ga yojire sou
stomach's all twisted. painful stomach (S) twist seem
__ __ __ __ __
Hee ha ha ha ha! hi ha ha ha ha
waitress FX: _______
poka~~n
4
[He snaps out of it.]
Kyousuke: __ __ __
Ha ha... Ah!?! ha ha... ha_?!
narration: ___
Huh? Why... are? ore...
Am I laughing? nande WARAtte n daro?
why laughing (poss-explan)
5
[He looks across the table to see Hikaru leaning across with a smile.]
Hikaru:
Sempai, you're so-o-o SEMPAI tte tottemo KOKORO ga hiroi
big-hearted. (T) awfully have-a-broad-heart
n desu ne
(explan) (rhet)
Indeed! sasuga da wa~~_
indeed is
6
[Out on the street, the two smile and wave their goodbyes.]
narration:
H-how strange... o okashi-- naa..........
Hikaru:
Sayonara. sayonara
7
[He stands and ponders.]
narration:
When I should be laughing, WARAu tokoro de KANAshindari......
I feel sad... laugh occasion at be-sad-(and)
When I should feel sad, KANAshimu tokoro de okottari
I get angry, and then, be-sad occasion at get-mad-(and)
when I should get angry,
I laugh... soshite okoru tokoro de
and/then get-mad occasion at
WARAttari... to...
laugh-(and)
What the heck is going on? do-- natte n da ittai?
what becoming (explan) in-the-world
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p 57 (161)
1
narration:
All I can think is that marude KIDOAIRAKU ga zurete-iru
my feelings are completely utterly feelings (S) is-slipping
out of whack!
to shika KANGAerarenai!
only-am-thinking-about
If it's just something like KI to RAKU to wa nita you na mono
joy and pleasure, then... joy-and-pleasure (T) looked-like thing
hitotsu to sureba...
if-make-into-one/if-make-no-distinction
2
[Kyousuke rubs his neck. A diagram appears off to his side--a triangle, with
arrows pointing from one corner to the next.]
diagram:
JOY KI
<= <= <= <=
GRIEF ===> ANGER AI ===> DO
narration:
Is this the way things are ko-- yu-- fuu ni zurute-iru
out of whack...? in-this-kind-of-way is-slipping
tte wake ka......
(T) reason (?)
narration:
Maybe that means... to yu-- koto wa hyottoshite...
that-means maybe
3
[Flashback--Kurumi ferociously back-slams him.]
Kyousuke FX: [flashback] _____
zuban
narration: ______
The shock yesterday kinou no shokku de
scrambled my emotions?! on-account-of-yesterday's-shock
KANJOU ga zurete-shimatta
emotions (S) slipped-(finality)
n ja nai darou ka?!
(neg/explan) poss-be (?)
4
[He runs off.]
Kyousuke:
Th-this is awful-l-l!! ta...TAIHEN daa~~~~~~_!!
I have to hurry and fix HAYAku KUBI no zure o naosanakutcha
my messed-up neck! fast neck 's slip (O) must-cure
Kyousuke FX: ___
da_
5
Kyousuke:
(If I should meet Ayukawa (konna TOKI ni AYUKAWA ni demo
at a time like this...) at-this-kind-of-time (IO) or-
someone
Aou mono nara...)
if-should-meet...then
Kyousuke footsteps FX: ___ ___ ___ ___
ta_ ta_ ta_ ta_
6
[Naturally...]
Madoka: [off]
KASUGA-KUN! KASUGA-kun!
Kyousuke FX: ______
pitari
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p 58 (162)
1
[A full-portrait of a somber-looking Madoka runs down the right half of the
page. She stands in miniskirt, blouse, light coat and flats.]
2
[View pans back. They stand and face each other on the sidewalk.]
narration:
Ahh... We met. a... Atchatta
sign:
Famous Music MEIKYOKU <2-kanji>
famous-music a-name?
3
Kyousuke:
HM? n?
4
[Madoka portrait--unhappiness.]
5
[A view looking up at the sky.]
Kyousuke: [off]
Ehhhh?!! e~~~~_!!
________
Master is in the hospital?! masuta-- ga NYUU-IN shita tte~~~~~~_?!
(S) was-hospitalized (quote)
6
[View looking off towards some apartment houses.]
Madoka: [off]
I'm worried, so I thought SHIMPAI da kara toriaezu
I'd go see him at once... worry am that's-why at-once/in-haste
itte-miyou to OMOtte...
shall-go-and-see thinking-that
7
Madoka:
I hope it's nothing DAIJI ni itaranakya i-- n da kedo
serious, but... serious if-not-end-up okay (explan) but
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p 59 (163)
1
[He glares into both fists and yells out...]
Kyousuke:
SHIT!! chikushou_!!
[Madoka is stunned at the outburst.]
2
Kyousuke: ___
AH! ha_
3
[He slaps a palm to his forehead.]
narration:
Sh-shoot!! shi shimatta!!
Scrambled again!! mata zurete-shimattaa!!
again slipped-(finality)
Madoka:
(..........) (..........)
4
[Exterior shot of a hospital.]
Master: [off]
Oh-h-h! iya----_
It's nothing serious. taishita koto ja nai n da yo
serious thing is-not (explan)
___ ___ ___
Wah! ha! ha!! wa_ ha_ ha_!!
sign:
Suzuki Hospital SUZUKI BYOUIN
5
[The two stand in a hospital room. Master lies back in bed, his right leg
in a cast from foot to knee and elevated in a sling.]
Master: [smiling] ____
I was a bit clumsy and chotto doji tte koronde HONE ni
fractured a bone falling, a-bit blunder (T) falling bone (IO)
and just to be safe I ____
entered the hospital. hibi ga HAItte ne
crack (S) coming-in
DAIJI o totte NYUUIN shita tte
playing-safe was-hospitalized (T)
wake sa
reason
Well, maybe it'll take a maa ZENCHI ISSHUUKAN tte
week to heal completely... complete-recovery a-week (quote)
toko ka na~~
case I-wonder
6
Madoka:
I'm glad... yokatta...
Really, don't make us mattaku SHIMPAI sasenai de kudasai yo
worry. really don't-make-worry please
7
[She turns towards Kyousuke.]
Madoka:
Right...? nee...
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p 60 (164)
1
[Pov shifts. Kyousuke stands, looking sad and teary-eyed. Madoka and Master
stare at him blankly.]
Kyousuke:
Ohh. naan da
____
This wasn't serious...? taishita kega ja nakatta no kaa...
serious-injury was-not
Kyousuke FX: _______
gakkuri
2
[His pov of her. She studies him closely.]
Madoka:
.......... ..........
3
Kyousuke: ___
AH! ha_
4
[Kyousuke and Madoka exit.]
Madoka:
Bye. Take care. ja o-DAIJI ni
5
[Out in the hall, she glares at him.]
Madoka:
Hey...! chotto..........!
Kyousuke:
Y-yes. ha...hai
6
Madoka:
That rather impolite sakki no FUKINSHIN na
attitude back there...!! a-little-while-ago 's imprudent/indiscreet
TAIDO...!!
behavior/attitude
What was that? are nani yo
that-(one) what
7
[She crosses her arms and frowns.]
Madoka: ____
You looked like you marude OO- kega shita
preferred he was seriously just-like seriously-injured
injured.
ho-- ga yokatta to yu--
was-better say-that
KAO shite-ta ja nai
was-expressing
Kyousuke:
Ah! That's not it!! a_ are wa chigau n da_!!
! that-(one) (T) mistake (explan)
8
[She stands and ponders him. Behind her, an evil-looking brat approaches.]
Madoka:
(Come to think of it, I'm (so-- ieba TASHIka ni
sure Kasuga-kun wouldn't come-to-think-of-it certain
usually react that way.
fudan no KASUGA-kun ja anna
by-usual-Kasuga (T) like-that
HANNOU shinai wa yo ne
not-react/respond
I wonder if he's been o-SAKE demo nonde-ru no ka na?)
drinking?) liquor or-something is-drinking I-wonder
little brat running FX: ____ ____ ____
bata bata bata
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p 61 (165)
1
[Another full-portrait of Madoka, splashed over the entire length of the page.
The boy has flipped up her skirt.]
Madoka:
KYAA! kyaa_
skirt FX: _____
buku_
2
[Kyousuke portrait--he blushes and looks aghast.]
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
dokin
3
[The boy and two of his friends run away.]
little brat: _____ _____
This oneechan has pink kono one--chan pinku no panti da ze--_
panties! this-oneechan pink 's panties are !
Madoka:
Hey-y-y! koraa_
little brats running FX: ____ __ __ __
suta ta ta ta
4
[Madoka turns to see Kyousuke yucking it up.]
Kyousuke:
Wah ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha wa ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha
ha ha ha!
Madoka FX: ___
ki_
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1
[His true emotions are displayed on his face drawn in his speech bubble.
There, he's mad. But what Madoka sees is a guy laughing hard.]
Kyousuke:
Wh-what the hell is that na nante koto suru n da
brat doing?!! what! thing do (explan)
ano bo--zu_!!
that-kid
Kyousuke: ___ ___ ___ ___ ___
Wah! ha! ha! ha! ha! wa_ ha_ ha_ ha_ ha_
2
[Snapping out of it, he turns to look at her over his shoulder.]
Kyousuke: ___
Ah! ha_
3
Madoka FX:
jiro_
4
[Exterior view of the hospital.]
Madoka: [off]
YOU'RE THE PITS! SAITEI ne!
Madoka FX: _______
supa--n
Kyousuke: [off]
Ouchhh! a ita~~_
sign:
Suzuki Hospital SUZUKI BYOUIN
5
[He runs after her outside. She heads up the stairs of a pedestrian overpass.]
narration:
What'll I do? do-- shiyou
I have to apologize!! ayamaranakya_!!
Madoka footsteps FX: ___ ___
kan kan
6
[Split panel. Right--his face wears an anguished look. Left--it changes
slowly...]
7
[...to one of rage. Again, his true face appears on his speech bubble. There,
he's wincing.]
Kyousuke:
I'm sorry for laughing!! WARAtte WARUkatta yo~~!!
laughing was-in-fault
___
Sorry. I'm feeling strange gomen KYOU wa ore okashii n da!!
today!! sorry today (T) I strange (explan)
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1
[Still wearing an angry look, he grabs her by a wrist.]
Kyousuke FX:
gu_
2
Madoka: [angrily]
What sorta behavior is nani yo sono TAIDO!!
that?!! what that-behavior/attitude
Is that the sort of face sore ga HITO ni ayamaro--
you use to apologize to that-(one) (S) to-person shall-apologize
someone?!
to yu-- KAO_?!
say-that face
3
[She pulls her hand back.]
Madoka:
With that kind of face, I sonna KAO sarecha
couldn't forgive you even are-making-that-kind-of-face (T)
if I wanted to...
yurushitakutte-mo yurusena...
even-tho-want-to-forgive can't-forgive
Madoka hand FX: ___
ba_
4
[View from the street looking up at the stairs.]
Madoka: [off]
AH! a_
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1 (inset)
[Losing her balance, Madoka begins to fall down the stairs.]
Madoka FX: _____
fura_
1
[Kyousuke lunges forward and grabs her from behind. He cups both her breasts.
Madoka's eyes grow large.]
Kyousuke:
LOOK OUT! abunai
Kyousuke/Madoka's breasts FX: _____
munzu
2
[View looking up at the sky.]
Madoka: [off]
KYAA! kyaa_
Madoka/Kyousuke FX: [off] ___
don
3
[She turns away from him. Kyousuke starts falling backward down the stairs.]
Kyousuke FX: ____ __ ___
fura ra ra_
Kyousuke:
WAH! WAH!! wa_! wa_!!
Oh oh oh! to to to_
4
[He slams backwards against the stairs...]
Kyousuke fall FX: ________ ______
gorogoro dondon
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p 65 (169)
1
[...finally coming to a rest way down at the bottom.]
Kyousuke FX: _____
dosa_
2
[Madoka has her eyes covered.]
3
[View from behind her looking down the flight of stairs. He lies unmoving
at the very bottom.]
4
[Face flushed, she removes her hands and stares down in horror.]
Madoka:
Ka... ka...
5
[She runs down.]
Madoka footsteps FX: ___ ___ ___
kan kan kan
6
[Finding her shoes in the way she takes them off on the fly...]
7
[...and tosses them high over her shoulder.]
Madoka FX: ___
poi
8
[View looking up the stairs, over the prone body of Kyousuke. She practically
flies down the stairs.]
Madoka:
Kasuga-kun! KASUGA-kun!
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1
Madoka: [kneeling beside him]
Pull yourself together, shikkari shite KASUGA-kun_!!
Kasuga-kun!!
2
Madoka:
I understand... wakatta kara...
I forgive you now... mo-- yurusu kara...
now forgive that's-why
3
Kyousuke:
...... Really? ......HONTOU?
4
[Madoka portrait--she gazes down in worry.]
5
Madoka:
Feeling all right? nantomo nai?
doesn't-hurt-at-all
Kyousuke: [looking dazed]
Y-yeah. u...un
6
[View looking off towards some buildings.]
Madoka: [off]
Did it hurt? itakatta?
narration:
It looks like Ayukawa AYUKAWA... yurushite-kureta mitai...
forgave me... forgave-(me) seems
Kyousuke: [off]
I-I'm all right! da...DAIJOUBU!
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1
[He stands and laughs, embarrassed.]
Kyousuke:
I'm glad... yokatta...
__ __ __
ha ha ha
narration:
It looks as if my neck, do--yara KUBI no zure mo
which was out of whack, somehow/it-looks-as-if neck 's slip too
is back to normal from
the shock just now! IMA no shokku de MOTO ni
by-shock-right-now to-origin
MODOtte-iru!
is-returning
2
[He stares in surprise at something off-panel.]
3
[She smiles at him. He looks up, off-panel, and smiles.]
Madoka:
What are you smiling for? nani WARAtte n no?
what smiling
Kyousuke:
Ha ha... ha ha..
4
Kyousuke: [off]
Ohh? Isn't that a girl's are~~ asoko no ONNA no KO no KUTSU
shoe up there? huh there 's girl 's shoes
ja nai?
is-not
[Madoka blushes.]
5
[View shifts. In the foreground is Madoka's shoe, suspended from a branch.
Far below, the two stand. Kyousuke looks up. Madoka kicks back a bare heel
of her foot and studies it.]
narration:
Clearly expressing human NINGEN no KANJOU tte
emotions seems best... human 's feelings/emotions (T)
Right?!
SUNAO ni DAsu no ga
obediently/ exposing/showing (S)
meekly/gently
ICHIBAN mitai... desu ne!
best seems is (rhet)
Kyousuke:
Who in the world put it ittai DARE ga anna tokoro ni...
in a place like that...? in-the-world who (S) to-place-like-that
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