Kimagure Orange Road
"The Wake-Up Kiss!"
Volume 13, Story 5
WB Volume 7, Story 16
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Ramon Galindo
Scott Henry
Last revision : 08-26-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 311 (91) are only in the WBs!
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p 311 (91)--TITLE PAGE
[A joyous Hikaru, in a dress and hat, dances about. She holds her hat down
with one hand and puts the other hand in her skirt pocket.]
MAIN TITLE (at top)
The Wake-Up Kiss! o-mezame #KISS#!
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
Showing a Beaming Face and SOKOnuke EGAO ni MIserarete
Spinning Round and Round extreme smiling-face are-displaying-(and)
in Love!
kurukuru maware KOIGOKORO!
turn-round-and-round love/love's-awakening
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p 312 (92)
1
[View of the tennis courts. Two girls walk by as a boy plays at the net.]
Hikaru: [off]
S-Sempai!! se sempai_!!
2
[Isolated shot of a sign in the hallway.]
sign:
Ladies' Dressing Room JOSHI KOUISHITSU
Akane: [off]
Kyousuke!! KYOUSUKE_!!
3
[Akane and Hikaru stand at the open door and stare at Kyousuke. He stands in
his T-shirt and briefs. Beside him is Madoka, who holds his shorts. Both
stare back in nervousness.]
Akane:
What's this?! nani yo kore wa?!
what this (T)
Hikaru:
C-can't be... ma masaka...
4
[Split panel. Top--Kyousuke looks back in horror. Bottom--Madoka sweats and
stares.]
narration:
H-how will I explain this do do-- SETSUMEI shiyou kono JOUTAI...
situation...? how shall-explain this-situation
There's no excuse to make!! i--wake no shiyou ga nai!!
excuse (nom) shall-make (S) not-have
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p 313 (93)
1
[Akane launches herself at him, glaring and grabbing him by the lapels.]
Akane:
Kyousuke! KYOUSUKE_
Someone like you... anta tte HITO wa...
you (T) person (T)
Even though you have hikaru-chan to yu-- KANOJO ga
a girlfriend like girlfriend-called-Hikaru (S)
Hikaru-chan!!
ari-nagara!!
although-have
What are you doing, looking nani shite n no kono kakkou wa_!!
like this?!! what doing (?) this-appearance (T)
2
[Akane stomps on the back of Kyousuke, who now lies on the floor. Hikaru
clenches her fists to her cheeks and shuts her eyes.]
Akane: _____
You scummy guy! You're the kono SAITEI OTOKO kasu_!!
pits!! this lowest/the-pits man dregs/scum
Akane FX: ____ ____
boka suka
Hikaru:
You're dirty, Sempai! SEMPAI FUJUN desu
impure/foul are
I hate you!! DAI_KIRAi!!
Kyousuke:
ate ate
3
[Tight shot of Kyousuke as he takes his beating.]
Kyousuke:
WAHHH!! waa_!!
I'M SORRY-Y-Y!! gomennasaai!!
4
[Oops, the previous 3 panels were a dream... Here, Kyousuke stands and
contemplates his options. Beside him, Madoka drops her gaze.]
narration:
...is how it's doomed to ......to naru koto wa HISSHI!
turn out! turn-out (nom) (T) inevitable
Kyousuke FX: _____
gokun
Madoka:
Actually... jitsu wa...
5
[Tossing her hair back, Madoka holds up the empty cup of coffee.]
Madoka: ________ ____
I goofed and spilled this atashi ga kono ko--hi-- doji tte
coffee... I (S) this-coffee blunder (T)
koboshichatta no yo ne--
spilled-(finality) (rhet)
6
[Kyousuke portrait--he stares off-panel, wide-eyed.]
7
[Akane portrait--blank stare.]
8
[Hikaru portrait--blank stare.]
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p 314 (94)
1
Hikaru: [happily]
Ohh. naan da
Was that it? so-- datta no kaa
like-so was (?)
Akane:
Don't surprise us like that, bikkuri sasenai de yo ne~~~~_!
okay! don't-make-surprised (rhet)
2
[Kyousuke stares off-panel.]
3
[His pov of Madoka, who gives him a soft smile.]
4
narration: ___
Ayukawa... Defended me...! AYUKAWA ga... ore no koto
(S) about-me
kabatte-kureta...!
defended/protected-(me)
5
Hikaru: [wide-eyed]
But, Sempai. Why are you demo do--shite SEMPAI
in the ladies' dressing but why
room?
JOSHI KOUISHITSU nanka ni...?
somehow-in-ladies-dressing-room
[Kyousuke turns and stares at Hikaru, in shock.]
6
Akane: [merrily]
I'm sure it isn't like sonna no KImatte-ru ja nai!
that! that-kind-of (nom) is-sure-to-be is-not
Besides, being absent do--se sosokkashii KYOUSUKE no koto
minded, Kyousuke probably anyhow absent-minded about-Kyousuke
mistook this for the men's
side and came in! DANSEI YOU to machigatte
for-men's-use make-a-mistake-(and)
HAItte-kita n desho_!
came-in (poss-explan)
7
[Smiling, Akane points a finger at him. Hikaru claps the palms of her hands
to her cheeks in embarrassment. Kyousuke blushes.]
Akane:
But I wonder if it wasn't demo HONTOU wa
really to come and see but real (T)
Hikaru-chan?!
hikaru-chan ni Ai ni kita n ja nai
came-to-see-Hikaru (explan/neg)
no ka na_?!
(nom) I-wonder
______
Because you're a lech!! koitsu sukebe da kara!!
this-fellow lech is that's-why
Hikaru:
Oh no-o-o. ya da--
Really, Sempai! SEMPAI ttara
I'm so embarrassed. hazukashi--
Kyousuke: _
Th-that's not i-i-it! chi chigau yoo~~~~
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p 315 (95)
1
[He again looks over at Madoka, nervously.]
Kyousuke: ___
Ah! ha_
2
[His pov of her. She frowns at him.]
3
[A view of the courts. Two women play a match.]
4
[Kyousuke stands outside with racket in hand.]
Kyousuke:
(Oh boy. (yareyare
For a while there, I was ICHIJI wa do-- naru koto
worried about how that for-a-time (T) how become (nom)
would turn out...
ka to OMOtta kedo...
thought/worried-that but
But, I'm saved!) tasukatta!)
5
Akane: [brightly]
Well, shall we begin the sate to sorosoro KOUHAN -SEN
second half of the match well now latter-half game
now?!!
hajimeyo-- ka!!
shall-begin (?)
____ ____
A kiss! A kiss by the KAtta HOU wa kisu yo kisu!
winning side! won side (T) kiss
Don't forget, hm! WASUrenai de ne!
6
[In a repeat of the first half, Hikaru clings to his arm and beams up at him.
He smiles nervously back.]
Hikaru:
Let's win for sure, 'kay, ZETTAI KAchimasho-- ne! SEMPAI_!!
Sempai!! absoluteness shall-win
Kyousuke:
Y-yeah... ha haa...
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p 316 (96)
1
[Sitting on a bench, he studies the watch once more.]
Kyousuke:
But... shikashi...
Why didn't this watch kono TOKEI do--shite UGOkanakatta
work? this-watch why not-ran/worked
n darou
(poss-explan)
2
[Unnoticed by Kyousuke, Grandpa drapes his arms over the back of the bench
that Kyousuke sits on and looks over Kyousuke's shoulder.]
Grandpa:
Because it's a watch. TOKEI na n ja kara
watch is (explan) that's-why
____
Naturally, if the spring neji ga kirereba TOmaru no wa
winds down, it stops. screw (S) if-run-out stopping (T)
TOUZEN no koto ja
proper/natural thing is
Kyousuke: [staring at the watch]
Oh, that's it. I see! a soo ka naruhodo!
watch FX:
guriguri
3
[Kyousuke turns to look in surprise back over his shoulder.]
4
[Kyousuke grimaces. Grandpa flashes a "V" sign.]
Kyousuke:
Ojiichan! oji--chan
Grandpa:
Hi! yo_!
5
Kyousuke:
Why are you here?! do--shite koko ni?!
why at-this-place
Shouldn't you be back home mo-- inaka ni kaetchatta
in the country by now? already in-the-country returned-home-
(finality)
n ja nakatta no?
(nom) wasn't
Grandpa:
I noticed I'd forgotten that sono TOKEI WASUreta koto ni KIzuite
watch, and came rushing that-watch forgotten thing notice-(and)
back.
awatete hikikaeshite-kita n ja yo
in-a-flurry came-back (explan)
6
[Kyousuke holds it out to him.]
Kyousuke:
Here you go! kaesu_!
give-back
Grandpa: [smiling]
That's okay, that's okay. i-- kara i-- kara
You hold it! omae ga motte-ore!
you (S) be-holding
7
Grandpa:
That you're using the Power omae ga SEKKYOKU-TEKI ni
assertively is good for you. you (S) positively/forcefully
_chikara_
NOURYOKU o TSUKAou to yu-- no wa
shall-use-the-Power that-means
i-- KEIKOU ja
good tendency/inclination/ is
disposition
Use it to your heart's janjan TSUKAinasai!!
content!! rapidly/without-a-break use-(command)
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p 317 (97)
1
[Grandpa takes a seat at the bench and holds the watch out to Kyousuke.]
narration:
Well... Either way, the maa... dotchi michi SHIAI wa
game is still being played, well either way game (T)
and I need it in order to
win... mada tsuzuite-iru n da shi
still is-continuing/ (explan) and-besides
going-on
KAtsu tame ni wa
for-the-sake-of-winning (T)
HITSUYOU na n da kedo...
need/requirement am (explan) but
Grandpa: ____
Here. Take it! hore motte-ke!
2
Kyousuke: [solemnly]
Then, let me borrow it ja mo-- chotto dake KAshite-kudasai!
for just a little while then a-bit-more just lending-(please)
more, please! _____
gohon
3
[Akane walks by, and smiles at Grandpa.]
Akane:
Ah! Ojiichan! a_ oji--chan!
4
[View of an empty umpire's chair.]
tennis ball FX: [off] _______
po----n
5
[Madoka returns the ball.]
narration:
And then... soshite...
___ ______
It came time when the KYOUSUKE - hikaru -GUMI ga wan-pointo
Kyousuke-Hikaru team Kyousuke-Hikaru-group (S) one-point
was one point away from
getting the victory... Irereba KAchi ga KETTEI
if-put-in win (S) decision/conclusion
to yu-- JOUKYOU ni narimashite...
called into-circumstances turning-into
Madoka FX: ___
pan
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p 318 (98)
1
[Kyousuke stretches to his left to reach it. Hikaru turns to watch.]
Kyousuke FX: ___
da_
2
Kyousuke: [off]
Oh!! otto!!
3
Kyousuke:
(I can't lose this point, (koko de otoshite
can I!) at-this-place letting-fall/losing
naru mono ka!)
turn-out (neg-rhet)
4
[Tight shot of the watch in his hand.]
watch FX: ______
kachi_
5
[Kyousuke portrait--the watch has reached "I".]
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p 319 (99)
1
[His body continues to fall.]
narration:
Wh-what's going on here?! ko kore wa do-- shita koto da?!
this-(one) (T) what's-the-matter
Time isn't stopping at JIKAN ga TOmaru dokoro-ka...
all... time (S) stop not-at-all
2
[View pulls back. Kyousuke is still laid out horizontally, reaching for the
ball with his racket.]
narration:
M-my body isn't moving!! o ore no KARADA ga UGOkanai!!
my-body (S) not-move
3
[The ball lands outside the line.]
ball FX: _____
po--n
4
Hikaru: _____
Hooray! It's out!! yatta! autoo!!
5
[Madoka portrait--a gentle smile...]
6
[...which turns into wide-eyed surprise at what she sees cross-court.]
Kyousuke FX: [off] _____
dosa_
7
Hikaru: [staring off-panel]
Se... Sempai... se... SEMPAI...
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p 320 (100)
1
[The three race over to the stricken Kyousuke. He's frozen in the stretched-
out position.]
Hikaru:
Sempai!! SEMPAI!!
2-4
[Kyousuke's face fades from view in these three panels.]
narration:
M-my consciousness... i...ISHIKI ga...
consciousness (S)
Is quickly fading away...! dondon TOOku natte-yuku...!
quickly/rapidly go-and-become-distant
5
[A set of fractured panels...]
Hikaru: [off]
Sempai!! sempai!!
What's wrong?! do--shita n desu ka?!
Sempai! sempai!
Akane: [off]
Kyousuke! Kyousuke!! KYOUSUKE_ KYOUSUKE!!
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p 321 (101)
1
[Another set of fractured panels.]
Akane: [off]
Kyousuke! KYOUSUKE!
Hikaru:
Sempai! SEMPAI!
2
[Hikaru kneels beside him and touches his forehead. His eyes are wide-open
and glassy. Akane looks down in worry. Madoka stares in shock.]
Hikaru:
Sempai... SEMPAI..........
3
[Concern is written all over Hikaru's and Akane's faces.]
Hikaru:
Sempai... SEMPAI...
What happened? dou shichatta no?
Akane:
Dunno... saa...
This guy gets strange koitsu tokidoki okashiku naru
sometimes, so... this-guy sometimes become-strange
kara naa
that's-why (rhet)
4
Akane: _chikara_
Anyhow, this is due to mata do--se NOURYOKU no sei de......
the Power again... again anyhow Power 's fault being
Hikaru:
Huh?! The Power?! e_ chikara?!
5
Akane: [running off]
N-no, it's nothing. i iya nan demo nai
I'll go call a doctor. atashi o-ISHA-san demo
I doctor or-something
yonde-kuru wa
go-and-call
Hikaru:
I'll go, too! atashi mo!
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p 322 (102)
1
[Madoka kneels beside Kyousuke.]
2
[Grandpa joins her.]
Grandpa:
Now then, let me see. dore dore
3
[She looks down, very worried. Grandpa rubs his chin and studies the
situation.]
Madoka:
Kasuga-kun... KASUGA-kun..........
Grandpa:
Hmm. I see... fumu naruhodo...
4
[Grandpa looks up to see the worried Madoka stroking Kyousuke's head.]
5
Grandpa:
You seem very worried... yohodo SHIMPAI to mieru...
very with-worry appear
Madoka:
What? e?
6
[Split panel. Each other's povs. Grandpa and Madoka exchange looks.]
Grandpa:
Yes... It's written all sou... KAO ni kaite-aru
over your face. on-face is-written
7
[Smiling, she looks down.]
Madoka:
Because he's my friend... TOMODACHI da kara...
friend is that's-why
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p 323 (103)
1
[Grandpa drops his gaze, solemnly.]
Grandpa:
Then, let me just say this. ja hitokoto dake iwasete-morau
then just-a-single-word let-say
This condition probably kono JOUTAI wa o-ISHA-sama
won't be cured by a doctor. this-condition/situation (T) doctor
demo naose wa shinai darou
even cure (T) poss-not-do
2
[Grandpa's pov of Madoka. She looks back with worry.]
3
[Standing, Grandpa looks up at the sky.]
Grandpa:
Neither a doctor nor the o-ISHA-sama demo KUSATSU no YU demo
hot springs of Kusatsu can doctor either 's hot-springs
cure lovesickness...
demo KOI no YAMAI wa naosenai...
or love 's sickness (T) can't-cure
4
[Madoka's pov as Grandpa looks at her from the corner of his eye.]
Grandpa:
But... demo...
Maybe you can cure him in anta shidai de wa
an instant--it all depends you depend-on because (contrast)
on you.
tachimachi naoseru
immediately/in-an-instant can-cure
ka mo shiren
it-may-be
5
Grandpa:
Maybe there's a witch doko-ka ni MAHOU-tsukai ga
somewhere, and Kyousuke at-somewhere magician/sorceror (S)
was caught by a spell...
otte KYOUSUKE wa
is-there-(and) (T)
aru MAHOU ni kakatta
by-a-(certain)-magic was-taken-ill
no ka mo shiren...
(nom) it-may-be
Madoka:
A witch? MAHOU-tsukai?
6
Grandpa: [smiling]
Yeah... sou...
Like Snow White. SHIRA-YUKI -HIME no yo-- ni na
white-snow princess as/like is
I wonder how Snow White do-- sureba SHIRA-YUKI -HIME no
was awakened? how if-do Snow-White (nom)
ME o SAmasu koto ga dekita ka noo?
was-able-to-wake-up I-wonder
7
[Grandpa's pov of Madoka, who looks back at him.]
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p 324 (104)
1
[Grandpa turns away.]
Grandpa:
Isn't there something you anta ga KYOUSUKE ni...
could do for Kyousuke, as you (S) to-Kyousuke
though he was Snow White?
SHIRAYUKI-HIME ni shite yareru
as-Snow-White can-do
koto wa na n darou?
(nom) (T) are (poss-explan)
Whether or not Kyousuke anta no KIMOchi shidai de wa
wakes up depends entirely your-feelings depending-on (contrast)
on the feelings you have.
KYOUSUKE mo ME o samasu hazu ja yo
too wake-up likelihood be
2
[He walks away, smiling.]
Grandpa:
Because... naze nara...
That's what I--that evil sono WARUi MAHOU-TSUKAi no
witch--am saying... that-evil-witch (nom)
washi ga itte-iru koto na n ja
I (S) am-saying (nom) is (explan)
kara nou
that's-why
___ ___ ___
fo_ fo_ fo_
3
[Madoka portrait-expressionless.]
4
[Madoka portrait--she breaks out in suppressed laughter.]
Madoka: ___
pu_
5
[She looks over her shoulder and smiles.]
narration:
Pretty... nakanaka...
________
...unique ojiisama, hm. yuni--ku na oji--sama ne
A witch...huh. MAHOU-tsukai...ka
6
[She studies Kyousuke once more.]
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p 325 (105)
1
Madoka:
(The truth is that (HONTOU wa UNDOUBUSOKU no
Kasuga-kun, who's out of in-fact lack-of-exercise (nom)
shape, probably fainted
because he's anemic...) KASUGA-kun no koto HINKETSU de
about-Kasuga-kun anemic on-acc't-of
KI demo USHINAtta n deshou kedo...)
fainted-or-something (poss-explan) but
2
[Madoka profile.]
narration:
Should I believe him... SHINjite-mite-mo...
even-tho-try-and-believe
...I wonder. ii ka na...
okay I-wonder
3
[Hikaru looks back wide-eyed at Grandpa.]
Hikaru:
WHA-A-AT?! e~~~~_
SNOW WHI-I-ITE?! SHIRAYUKI-HIME~~~~_?!
4
[A view looking up at the blue skies.]
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p 326 (106)
1
[Madoka bends over Kyousuke.]
2
[And brings her face close to his.]
3
Hikaru: [off]
SEMPA-A-AI!! sempa--i!!
[Madoka sits bolt-upright, blushing and wide-eyed.]
Madoka heartbeat FX: _____
doki_
4
[Hikaru races towards them, a girl with a mission...]
Hikaru footsteps FX: ___ ___ ___ ___
ta_ ta_ ta_ ta_
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p 327 (107)
1
[As she approaches near, Madoka leaps to her feet and backs away.]
Hikaru:
SEMPAI! sempai!
Madoka FX: _____
sasa_
2
[With a smile, Hikaru plants a kiss on his cheek.]
Hikaru: ____
Please wake up with this SHOURI no kisu de ME o samashite-kudasai!!
victory kiss!! by-victory-kiss wake-up-(please)
kiss FX: ____
chu_
3
Akane: [wide-eyed]
OHH, SO BOLD!! otto daita~~n!!
[She and Madoka stare off-panel.]
4
[Kyousuke rises, looking a bit groggy. Hikaru is beside him, smiling.]
Kyousuke:
Hm?! n_?
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p 328 (108)
1
Kyousuke: ___
H-huh? I... a are ore......
What was I doing? nani shite-ta no?
Hikaru:
I did it!! yatta--_!!
2
[View of a nearby building.]
Akane: [off] ____
With a victory kiss, Snow SHOURI no kisu de SHIRAYUKI-HIME no
White woke up!! by-victory-kiss Snow-White 's
ME mo sameta_!!
awakened
3
[Kyousuke stares at a smiling Akane, and points to his face.]
Kyousuke:
Victory... SHOURI tte...
___
We...?! ore-tachi ga..........?!
Akane:
Yup. sou
______ ____
Madoka-chan's shot was out, madoka-chan no shotto ga auto ni natta
so you automatically won!! Madoka's-shot (S) was-out
n de JIDOU-TEKI ni anta-tachi no
cause automatically you-(and-assoc) 's
KAchi tte koto yo_!!
win (T) (nom)
4
[View of the clubhouse.]
Akane: [off]
Congratulations, you two. omedeto-- o-futari-san
_______
Hey! Japan's Number One iyo_ kappuru NIHON ICHI!
Couple!
__________
pachipachi
5
[His pov of Madoka, who looks at him.]
narration: ____
But... For Ayukawa to hit demo... auto da nante AYUKAWA
one out. but out is the-likes-of
___________
Her control should have kontoro--ru wa yokatta hazu...
been great... control (T) was-good likelihood
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p 329 (109)
1
[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]
Grandpa: [off] __ __ __ __ ___
wa ha ha ha ha_
2
[With a smile, Grandpa idly tosses the watch in the air.]
Grandpa:
There wasn't any need for nanno koto wa nai
that at all. not-at-all there-is-no-need
If a minute passes by, IP-PUN tateba MOTO ni
you'll return to normal... one-minute if-elapse to-the-origin
modosu to yu-- koto wa...
return in-that-case
Those girls had no way of ano KO-tachi ni wa
knowing that, but... to-those-girls (contrast)
SHIru yoshi mo nai ga...
there-is-no-knowing but
Grandpa:
"Magic," too, can be MAHOU tte yu-- no mo
romantic, can't it? magic called (nom) too
__________
romantikku de i-- ja nai ka
romantic is-(and) nice is-not (?)
3
Grandpa:
As I recall... TASHIka ni...
____
Such a miss by that ano AYUKAWA-kun ni anna misu wa
Ayukawa-kun seems so by-that-Ayukawa that-kind-of-miss (T)
unusual...
mezurashii mitai ja no~~
unusual/strange seems
Kyousuke:
It's Hikaru-chan, so... hikaru-chan da kara..........
I wonder if she held back. ENRYO shita no ka naa
refrained-(fron) I-wonder
4
Grandpa: [smiling]
Well, either way you were maa dotchi ni shite-mo
awakened by a girl's kiss. well in-either-case
____
ONNA no KO no kisu de ME ga sameta
by-girl's-kiss awakened
n ja kara
(explan) that's-why
So you're a lucky guy. omae wa KAHOU-MONO ja yo
you (T) fortunate/lucky-person are
5
[Grandpa smiles and rests a hand on Kyousuke's shoulder. Kyousuke smiles
down at that hand.]
Grandpa hand FX: ___
pon
narration:
Can't beat ojiichan! oji--chan ni wa.......... KAtemasen!
to-ojiichan (contrast) not-defeat
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Kimagure Orange Road 7 (End) kimagure orenji - ro--do 7 (KAN)
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