Kimagure Orange Road
"The Strange Watch"
Volume 13, Story 4
WB Volume 7, Story 15
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi

Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
                                 Craig Nishida
                                 Ramon Galindo

Last revision : 08-26-95

Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:
     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu

NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
      extras to those of you not having them.
      Example: The subtitles on page 291 (71) are only in the WBs!
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p 291 (71)--TITLE PAGE

[Madoka stands in a leopard-spotted swimsuit, in thigh-deep water at the
 beach.  With eyes closed and hands at her sides, she tilts her head back
 slightly.]

MAIN TITLE (at top)               _______
  The Strange Watch               fushigi na  TOKEI
                                  strange/    clock/watch
                                  mysterious/marvelous

SUB-TITLE (at bottom)             _________
  It Appears that Even the        kokonatsu  IRO shita  YOUSEI ni
  Hands of a Clock Are Stopped    coconut    colored    by-sprite/fairy/elf
  by the Coconut-Colored
  Sprite...                       TOKEI no HARI sae   TOmari -sou......
                                  clock 's hand even  stop    it-looks-as-if

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p 292 (72)

1
[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]
narration:
  Ojiichan has finally gone       oji--chan ga   yo--yaku  inaka e
  home to the countryside, and              (S)  finally   to-the-country
  peace has returned to the
  Kasuga household!               kaette        KASUGA-KE ni      HEION ga
                                  return-(and)  to-Kasuga-family  calm  (S)

                                  modotte-kimashita!
                                  started-returning

2
[Tight shot of a watch that sits in Kyousuke's hand.]
narration:
  But...                          demo...

  There's just one thing he       tada    hitotsu  WASUreMONO        ga......
  forgot...                       merely  one      thing-left-behind (S)

3
[Kyousuke and his sisters stare at the watch he holds up in his hand.]
Kyousuke:
  What is it?                     nan daro?

  It looks like a watch...        TOKEI no yo-- da     kedo
                                  watch it-looks-like  but

Manami:
  It's stopped...                 TOmatte-ru yo~~

  Is it broken?                   kowarete n ja nai no?

4
Manami:
  Oniichan, you're going out      oni--chan  kore kara    DEkakeru
  now, aren't you?                           from-now-on  go-out/set-off

                                  n desho
                                  (poss-explan)

  Why don't you deliver it to     oji--chan ni  TODOkete-agetara?
  ojiichan?                       to-ojiichan   if-deliver-(to-him)

  If you hurry, he might still    ISOgeba   mada   EKI ni      iru
  be at the station.              if-hurry  still  at-station  is-there

                                  ka mo shirenai  wa yo
                                  it-may-be

Kyousuke: [holding a tennis racket]
  Okay...                         ......un

5
[He runs down the sidewalk.]
Kyousuke:
                    ha_ ha_

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p 293 (73)

1
[At the station, he swivels his head, searching.]
train/whistle FX: [off]           _______________  _______
                urururururururu  pi----_

2
Kyousuke:
  He isn't here...                inai ya...

3
[Kyousuke watches a train pulling out from the platform.]
train doors FX:                   ____
                           puan

train FX:                         _____ _____
               goton goton

4
Kyousuke:
  It looks like he's already      mou      itchatta         mitai da na...
  gone...                         already  went-(finality)  seems

train/station FX:                 _____
                         ga--_

sign:
  Station                         EKI

5
[Shot of the men's room sign.]

6
[Grandpa, his face red with rage, kicks at the door of a stall.]
Grandpa:
  Yeeargh!  Hurry up and get      e~~~~i   HAYAu  DEn      kai
  out of there.                   yeeargh  fast   come-out

person in toilet stall FX:        _____
                     puri_

person in toilet stall:
  S-sorry-y-y.                    su suimase~~~~n

Grandpa kick FX:                  ____
                           doga!

7
train FX: [off]                   _______  _____
                gatatan  goton

Grandpa:
  O-oh no.                        i...ikan

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p 294 (74)

1
[He searches the wide sleeves of his robe.]
Grandpa:
  Th-that's it!!                  so so-- ja!!

  At a time like this...          konna TOKI...

  If I have that watch...         ano TOKEI  ga   areba......
                                  that-watch (S)  if-have

Grandpa FX:                       ________
                   gosogoso

2
Grandpa:
  That's strange...  It's not     okashii...  nai!
  here!

3
[Smiling up at the sky, Kyousuke makes his way down the sidewalk.]
narration:
  Today, I'm playing tennis       KYOU  wa   akane hikaru-chan soshite
  with Akane, Hikaru-chan and     today (T)                    and
  Ayukawa!                                                     ______
                                  AYUKAWA to    4-NIN de       tenisu!
                                          with  with-4-people  tennis

4
[Pov shifts.  In the foreground, Kyousuke stares at the watch in his hand
 while walking down the sidewalk.  Across the street, Hikaru walks in the
 same direction.]
narration:                        _go--ruden'ui--ku_
  It looks like it'll be the      OUGON SHUUKAN       mattadaNAKA no
  awesome event in the middle     Golden-Week         the-midst-of
  of Golden Week!                           ______
                                  SAIKOU no ibento ni nari -sou desu!
                                  become-awesome-event      looks-as-if

sign on tree:
                           HAHA    o   I(RI)-KI(RERU)            ni
                                  mother (O)  (all)-are-able-to-get-in (IO)

                                  shiyou...
                                  shall-do

5
[Hikaru's face brightens as she notices who's across the street.]
Hikaru:
  SEMPAI!                         sempai!

6
[Unaware of Hikaru, he continues to stare raptly at the watch.]
Kyousuke:
 (Still, this watch...            (sore ni shite mo  kono TOKEI...
                                   but/still         this-watch
                                  _______ ______
  It looks like a stopwatch...    sutoppu-uotchi ni mo   mieru  kedo...
                                  by-stopwatch      too  looks  but
                                                     _____
  But what's this button?)        nan  daro?    kono botan  wa...)
                                  what poss-be  this-button (T)

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p 295 (75)

1
[His thumb rests on the button on the watch.]

2
[Waving and smiling, Hikaru races across the street.]
Hikaru:
  Sempa-a-ai!                     sempa--i!

3
[Kyousuke turns at the sound of...]
car brakes/tires FX: [off]        ________
                      kikikiki

Kyousuke:
  !                               !

4
[Pov shifts.  A car bears down on a frightened Hikaru.  Inside, the driver
 grimaces and braces for the impact.]
car brakes/tires FX: [off]        _______
                     kikiki_

5
[Kyousuke facial portrait--stark horror.]
Kyousuke:
  H-HIKA...                       hi hika...

6
[His thumb pushes down on the watch button, in reflex.  The single hand of
 the watch begins to move from the "XII" position.]
watch FX:                         _____
                           kachi

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p 296 (76)

1
[Hikaru freezes and faces the oncoming car...]

2
[Same as panel 1.  That is, Hikaru freezes...period.  A spectator and the car
 are also unmoving.]

3
Kyousuke: [staring]
  ...ru-chan.                     ......ru-chan

4
[He swivels his head at his fellow pedestrians.  All are unmoving.]
Kyousuke:
  ..........                      ..........

5
Kyousuke:
  Th-they're frozen.              to...TOmatte-ru
                                       are-stopped

narration:
  Wh-what the hell is going       do do--  natte     n da      ittai?!
  on?!                               what  becoming  (explan)  in-the-world

6
[Kyousuke stares at the watch in his hand.  The single hand is now between
 "I" and "II".]
watch FX:                         ____ ____ ____
             chi_ chi_ chi_

7
[He looks about again.]
narration:
  This watch, which was           sakki made                TOmatte-ita
  stopped until a moment          until-a-little-while-ago  was-stopping
  ago, is...
                                  hazu       no     TOKEI ga...
                                  likelihood (nom)  watch (S)

  Even though everything          mawari       wa   subete  TOmatte-iru
  around me has stopped,          surroundings (T)  all     are-stopping
  only this watch has started
  running...                      no ni        kono TOKEI dake ga
                                  even-though  only-this-watch (S)

                                  UGOki     HAJImete-iru......
                                  movement  is-beginning

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p 297 (77)

1
[He decides to do something about Hikaru, and trots out onto the street.]
Kyousuke:
 (That's right!                   (so-- da!

  Hikaru-chan...)                 hikaru-chan o......)

2
[He carries her frozen form in his arms and returns to the sidewalk.]
Kyousuke:
  Upsy-daisy.                     dokkoishotto

3
[No sooner does he get there when the car once more springs into action.]
car FX:                           ________  ______
         buoooooo  kyukyu

4
[Standing on the sidewalk, Kyousuke looks about at the moving people.  Hikaru
 slumps in his arms.]
bicycle FX:                       _____
                           sha--

car FX:                           ____ ___
                        buro roo

pedestrian staring at the accident:
  ?                               ?

5
[Kyousuke facial portrait--he looks wide-eyed off panel.]
FX:                               _______  ______
                           papaa--  kaaaaa

crowd FX:                         ____ ____
                   zawa zawa

6
[Still being carried, Hikaru stares into Kyousuke's eyes.]
Hikaru:
  S-Sempai!!                      se sempai!!

narration:
  Everything's moving.  What      UGOkidashita     ittai
  the heck is this?!              started-running  in-the-world

                                  kore       wa   do-- yu-- koto?!
                                  this-(one) (T)  what-kind-of-thing

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p 298 (78)

1
[She hugs him tight around the neck in glee.]
Hikaru:
  WO-O-ONDERFUL, SEMPAI!!         suteki--_ sempai!!

2
[Everyone stares at him in amazement.  Well, except for Hikaru, who's still
 being carried in his arms and is nestling contentedly against him.]
crowd FX:
         zawa zawa...  yan'ya yan'ya

man:
  That's an amazing boy.          sugoi    SHOUNEN  da
                                  amazing  boy/lad  is

3
[She opens her eyes and gazes into his.]
Hikaru:
  You saved me!                   atashi o   TASUkete-kureta  n desu   ne!
                                  me    (O)  saved-(me)       (explan)
                                                                     ________
  Faster than the eye can see!    ME ni mo tomaranu                  supi--do!
                                  not-even-attract-(one's)-attention speed
                                                         ___________
  Sempai, you're just like        SEMPAI tte  marude     su--pa--man
  Superman!!                             (T)  just-like  Superman

                                  mita  mitai~~~~_!!
                                  saw   seems

4
[Blushing, Kyousuke glances at the watch in his hand.]
Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                            chira

5
[The single hand is stopped at the "XII".]

6
[Against the backdrop of a partly cloudy sky, Kyousuke bears his blissful
 bundle of blonde bubblyness.  ^_^]
narration:
  Maybe...                        moshikashite...

  It was because of this          minna     TOmatchatta        no    wa
  watch that everyone froze?      everyone  stopped-(finality) (nom) (contrast)

                                  kono TOKEI no...sei?
                                  this-watch 's   fault

7
[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]
Grandpa: [off]
  Oh no-o-o.                      iyaa~~~~

  That was a valuable thing       DAIJI na                    MONO   o
  I left behind.                  important/serious/valuable  thing (O)

                                  WASUrechimatte                      no~~
                                  forgetting/leaving-behind-(finality)

  Actually, that watch...         jitsu wa  ano TOKEI...
                                  actually  that-watch

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p 299 (79)

1
[Grandpa's pov of a stunned Manami and Kurumi.]
Kurumi:
  Wha-a-at?!  A watch that        e~~~_  JIKAN o   TOmeru  TOKEI?!
  stops time?!                        !  time (O)  stops   watch

2
Grandpa:
  To be precise, if someone       SEIKAKU ni yu-- to
  who possesses the Power uses    to-be-exact/correctly-speaking
  that special watch, then        _chikara_
  time will run fast just for     NOURYOKU o   motte-iru      MONO   ga
  him.                            Power   (O)  is-possessing  person (S)

                                  ano TOKUSHU na TOKEI o   TSUKAu to
                                  that-special-watch  (O)  if-use

                                  sono MONO dake    JIKAN no NAGAre ga
                                  only-that-person  passage-of-time (S)

                                  HAYAku naru    n ja     yo
                                  fast   become  (explan)

Grandpa:
  As I recall, time is            TASHIka      1-BYOU   ga  1-FUN AIDA ni
  controlled so that a second     as-I-recall  1-second (S) for-1-minute
  feels like a minute...
                                  KANjiru          you ni
                                  feel/experience  as/so-that

                                  CHOUSEI shite-atta  n ja      ga......
                                  was-regulated       (explan)  but

3
Grandpa:
  But...                          shikashi...

  If Kyousuke has gotten hold     are         o   KYOUSUKE ga
  of that...                      that-(one) (O)           (S)

                                  motte-itta to    naru to
                                  if-carried-away  then

  Then there's only one thing     hitotsu dake      KI ga kari na koto ga
  that worries me...              just-one-(thing)  disturbing-thing   (S)

                                  aru...
                                  there-is

  That is...                      sore wa......

4
[View of the tennis courts.]

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p 300 (80)

1
[Another view of the tennis courts.]

2
[Kyousuke and Hikaru arrive.  While Kyousuke is busy staring at the watch,
 Hikaru clings happily to his arm.]
narration:
  No way...                       masaka...

  That this watch stops           kono TOKEI ga   JIKAN o  TOmeru nante...
  time...                         this-watch (S)  time (O) stop   the-likes-of
                                        ____
  Can't be...                     sonna baka na

3
[His pov of Akane (in shorts and tanktop) and Madoka (in miniskirt tennis
 whites).]

4
[Akane grins knowingly and elbows him in the chest.  Kyousuke staggers back.]
Akane:
  Hey, hey.                       oya oya

  Getting friendly and walking    nakayoku       UDE nanka KUnjatte
  arm-in-arm--you're doing        on-good-terms  somehow-walking-arm-
  pretty well!                                   in-arm-(finality)

                                  nakanaka yaru  jan_!
                                  do-well

Akane elbow FX:                   ____
                          don_

5
[He lands on his back.]
Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                 suten

6
[Tight shot of the watch in his hand.]
watch FX:                         ______
                          kachi_

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p 301 (81)

1
[He stares up at Akane, her figure frozen in a friendly nudge-nudge pose.
 Behind her, Hikaru stares at him, wide-eyed.]

2
[Same as panel 1.]

3
[He gapes at the watch in his hand.]
narration:
  Are you kidding?!               uso_?!

watch FX:                         ____ ____ ____ ____
         chi_ chi_ chi_ chi_

4
[Getting to his feet, he approaches the frozen Madoka.]
narration:
  I don't really understand       naze da ka           wakaranai       kedo
  it, but everything stops        without-knowing-why  not-understand  but
  while this second hand goes
  'round.                         kono BYOUSHIN    ga   ISSHUU suru AIDA
                                  this-second-hand (S)  while-go-round

                                  TOmatchau        n da
                                  stop-(finality)  (explan)

5
[He waves a hand in front of Madoka's face.  No response.]
Kyousuke hand FX:                 ___ ___
                     sa_ sa_

6
[He stares down at her tiny skirt.]

7
[He kneels to get a look up her skirt.]
Kyousuke FX:
                     soo~~_

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p 302 (82)

1
[Standing again, he knuckles his head.]
Kyousuke:                          ___
 (Ah!  No, no.                    (ha_  ikan ikan
                                  ___
  Why am I like this lately?      ore tte  do--shite  SAIKIN  ko--
                                  I   (T)  why        latest  like-this

                                  na  n darou
                                  am  (poss-explan)

  Think about it!)                hanse----_!)
                                  reconsider/reflect

narrative:
  Mustn't misuse it!!             AKUYOU       wa   ikenai!!
                                  misuse/abuse (T)  bad

Kyousuke head FX:                 ___
                           kon

2
[Kyousuke and Hikaru have changed into tennis clothes and face off against
 Madoka and Akane.]

3
[Akane raises a forefinger and addresses the others.]
narration:                        ______                        ______
  The game turned out to          ge--mu wa   akane no GOUIN na ti--mu
  be doubles, because of          game   (T)        's by-force team
  Akane's forceful choosing
  of teams...                     wake    ni yori
                                  reason  as-a-result-of
                                  ________
                                  daburusu to narimashite...
                                  turn-out-doubles-(and)

Akane:                                  ______
  It's no fun just playing        tada  ge--mu o suru  to yu-- no    mo
  a game, so I have a             only  playing-game   called  (nom) too
  suggestion...
                                  omoshirokunai    shi
                                  not-interesting  and-besides

                                  soko de  hitotsu  TEIAN      ga  aru
                                  so-then  one      suggestion (S) have

                                  n da      kedo...
                                  (explan)  but

4
Akane:                                  ______      __________
  That partners on the winning    KATTA ti--mu wa   pa--tona--  DOUSHI
  team bless each other with      won   team   (T)  partner     comrade
  a kiss.                                      ____
                                  SHUKUFUKU no kisu o suru  tte yu-- no wa
                                  blessing  's kiss         that-means

  How's that?                     doo?

Kyousuke: [recoiling]
  Ehhhh!?!                        e------_?!

5
[Akane leans toward and smiles at Madoka, who flinches slightly.]
Akane:                                _____
  Don't you think that's a        i-- aidea  da  to OMOwanai?!
  good idea?!                     good-idea  is  not-think-that

  Right, Madoka-chan?!            ne-- madoka-chan_!
                                  _ __ __ __
                  u fu fu fu

6
[Hikaru beams and clings to Kyousuke's arm.]
Hikaru:                                _____
  That's a wo-o-onderful idea!    sono aidea  suteki--_!
                                  that-idea   wonderful/splendid

  Let's win for sure, 'kay,       zettai        KAchimasho  ne--
  Sempai?!                        absoluteness  shall-win   (rhet)

                                  sempai_!

Kyousuke: [nervous and wide-eyed]
  Y-yeah...                       ha haa...

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p 303 (83)

1
[Kyousuke looks over at Madoka.]
Madoka FX:
                          ji----_

Kyousuke heartbeat FX:
                          doki_

2
narration:
  This is no joke.                jo--dan ja nai yo

  If I win, then I'll have to     moshi  KAchi demo  sureba
  kiss Hikaru-chan in front       if     win   even  if-do
  of Ayukawa!
                                  AYUKAWA no MAE de    hikaru-chan to...!
                                  in-front-of-Ayukawa  with-Hikaru

3
[Akane hits a vicious overhand.]
Akane FX:                         _____
                          pakon

4
[A determined Kyousuke returns it.]
narration:
  But if the other side           da kedo  muko--     ga   KAtte-mo
  wins, Ayukawa and                  but   other-side (S)  even-tho-win
  Akane will kiss...                                             ____
                                  akane no yatsu to  AYUKAWA ga  kisu nante...
                                  that-Akane     and         (S) kiss

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                         pako_

Kyousuke:
  I won't allow that!!            sasete      tamaru ka!!
                                  letting-do  (unbearable)

5
[Hikaru leaps back to reach for the ball.]
Hikaru:
  AH!                             a

Hikaru FX:                        _____
                         fura_

6
[Tight shot of the watch in his hand.]
watch FX:                         ______
                          kacha_

7
[He walks over to Hikaru and, from behind, gently adjusts her posture.]
narration:
  If I straighten her up like     ko-- yatte       okoshite-agereba
  this, she won't get hurt,       doing-like-this  if-set-(her)-upright
  and besides that, we won't      ____
  lose the point, either...       kega o shinakute sumu        shi
                                  can-do-without-getting-hurt  and-besides

                                  TEN   mo   otosazu       ni...
                                  point too  not-lose/miss

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p 304 (84)

1
[He tumbles and she falls back on top of him.]
Hikaru/Kyousuke FX:
                      tsuru  dotte~~n

Kyousuke:
  WAHHH!                          waa_

2
[Lying flat on his back, he stares up, goggle-eyed, at the frozen Hikaru lying
 on top of him.]
Kyousuke:
  H-hey...                        chi chotto...

  Th-this is...                   ko kore wa...

Kyousuke FX:                      ________
                    jitabata

3
[Looking aside, he notices that the ball that Hikaru had been reaching for has
 landed on the court.]
ball FX:                          _______
                             po----n

narration:
  O-oh no!!                       shi shimatta!!

  They've started moving!         UGOki-dashita!
                                  started-to-move

4
[View pans back to show Akane and Madoka observing the two lying on the court.
 Akane grimaces.]
Akane:
  Hey-y-y, quit making out in     chotto--  konna tokoro de
  a place like this!!                       at-this-kind-of-place

                                  ichatsukanai de    yo----_!!
                                  don't-flirt-around       !

5
[He stands, but Hikaru drapes her arms over his shoulders and gazes with
 meaningful eyes into his.]
Hikaru:
  Ohh, really, Sempai...          maa  SEMPAI ttara......

Hikaru FX:                        ______
                         uttori

Kyousuke FX:                      _______
                          po~~~~_

Kyousuke:
  Th-this was a m-mistake!!       chi chigau  n da     ko kore       wa_!!
                                      mistake (explan)    this-(one) (T)

6
[Looking across court, he again spies Madoka glaring at him.]
Madoka FX:
                          ji~~~~_

Kyousuke:                         _____
                            gohon

7
[Hikaru takes an overhand swipe at the ball.]
Hikaru FX:                        _______
                         supa--n

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p 305 (85)

1
[Shading her eyes, she searches about for the ball.]
Hikaru:                                   ______
  Hey, the ball's gone!!          arya    bo--ru ga   nai!!
                                  yikes!  ball   (S)  isn't-here

2
[While Akane and Madoka look about, Kyousuke notices that Hikaru has THREE
 bumps on her chest...]
Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            _____
                           dokin

narration:
  I-in such a place...            ko_ konna tokoro ni...

3
[He pulls out the watch.]
watch FX:                         ______
                          kachi_

narration:
  I don't want to lose the        koko de        TEN   wa   Otoshitakunai!
  point here!                     in-this-place  point (T)  not-want-to-
                                                            lose/drop

4
[With Hikaru frozen and staring off to the side, he sticks his right hand down
 the front of her dress.]
Kyousuke:
  Sorry.  Pardon me for a         suimasen chotto SHITSUREI shimashite...
  bit...

Kyousuke FX:                      ________
                   gosogoso

5
[He buries his right arm to the elbow and rummages around in there...]
Kyousuke:
  Huh?!  Where is it...?!         are_!  doko ni...?!

  Ah!  This!  Damn it!            ha_  kono_  nani kuso_!

Kyousuke FX:                      ________
                   gosogoso



6
[Tight shot of the watch.  The hand has reached "XII".]
watch FX:                         ___
                           pi_

7
[Wide-eyed, Akane, Madoka and Hikaru stare at Kyousuke, who has about 2/3rds
 of his arm down the front of Hikaru's dress.  He stares back in horror at
 Madoka.  Hikaru blushes.]
Akane/Madoka FX:
                          ji~~~~_

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p 306 (86)

1
[View looking up at the sky and an adjoining building.]
Akane: [off]
  Kyousuke!  That's going just    KYOUSUKE_  chotto yari-sugi na n ja nai  no_!
  a bit too far!                          !  a-bit  over-do   is (neg/explan)

Hikaru: [off]
  You're so bold, Sempai...       SEMPAI ttara       DAITAN   na  n da
                                         I-tell-you  boldness are (explan)

                                  karaa...
                                  that's-why

Kyousuke: [off]
  Th-that's not it!!              chi chigau n da~~~~_!!

2
[Madoka uncorks an overhand smash...]
Madoka FX:                        _____
                           supan

3
[...which lands smack between his eyes.]
ball FX:                          _____
                          pakon

Kyousuke:
  Yelp!                           kyan!

4
[Madoka turns away in a huff as Kyousuke rubs his injured face.]
Madoka:
  Ohhhh, I'm sorry!               a~~~~ra  gomennasai!

Madoka FX:                        ____
                           pui_

narration:
  ..........                      ..........
                                             ___________
  Impressive control...           subarashii kontoro--ru de...

5
Akane:
  I'm thirsty.                    nodo    kawaichatta
                                  throat  was-dry

  Let's have lunch!               o-HIRU ni  shiyo--  ka!
                                  lunchtime  shall-do (?)

Hikaru:                                   __________
  I made sandwiches, so I         atashi  sandoitchi  tsukutte-kita
  brought some.                   I       sandwich    went-and-made

                                  kara        motte-kimasu
                                  that's-why  bring

[The two head off.]

6
[Madoka enters the building next to the courts.  Kyousuke stares at her.]
Madoka:                                               _______
  Well...  Maybe I'll take a      sate to...  chotto  shawa-- demo
  shower.                         well        a-bit   shower  or-something

                                  abiyo--            ka na
                                  shall-take-a-bath  I-wonder

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p 307 (87)

1
[He approaches her as she pulls out her coffee from a vending machine.]
Madoka: [glaring]
  What do you want?               nanno YOU            yo
                                  what-kind-of-business

  Pervert!                        #H#!

  Don't follow me!                tsuite-konai de

Kyousuke: [wincing]
  Hold on.                        matte yo

2
[Tight shot of a sign in a hall.]
Madoka: [off]
  How far do you intend to        doko made  haitte-kuru  KI_?!
  follow me?!                     how-far    come-in      intention

sign:
  dies' Dressing Room         SHI KOUISHITSU

Kyousuke: [off]
  Please, listen a bit to         tanomu kara        chotto HANASHI o
  what I have to say...           beg    that's-why  a-bit  talk   (O)

                                  kiite...
                                  listening

3
[He grabs the wrist of the hand which holds the coffee.]
Madoka FX:                        ___
                          ki_

4
Madoka:
  Let go of me!!                  hanashite yo_!!

Madoka FX:
                           gui_

5
[The hot coffee lands in his crotch.]
coffee FX:                        _____
                          basha

6
[He prances about like a bug on a frying pan.]
Madoka:
  I-I'm sorry!  Are you all       go gomen  DAIJOUBU_?!
  right?!

Kyousuke:
  Hot hot hot hot!                achichichichi

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p 308 (88)

1
Madoka:                           _____
  Take off your pants!            zubon nuide!

Kyousuke:
  Ah-ow-ow-ow-ouch.               achichichichi

[He pulls down his shorts, revealing his briefs.]

2
[His pov of Madoka's concerned face.]
Madoka:
  Was it hot?                     atsukatta?

  I'm sorry...                    gomen ne..........

3
[He stares back at her, face flushed.]

4
[Akane and Hikaru enter the locker room.  Kyousuke, with his shorts in hand,
 stares back at them in horror.]
door FX:                          ______
                          kacha_

Kyousuke:
  AH!                             a_

5
narration:
  O-oh no!!                       ya yabai_!!

6
[He pulls out the watch.]
narration:
  Th-that's right.                so so-- da

  The watch...!!                  TOKEI......!!

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p 309 (89)

1
watch FX:                         ______
                          kacha_

2
Hikaru:
  S-Sempai!!                      se sempai_!!

Akane:
  Kyousuke!!                      KYOUSUKE_!!

3
[He gapes at the watch.]
narration:
  I-it's not stopping!!           to TOmaranai!!

Kyousuke FX:
                            gikkun

4
[Hikaru and Akane's pov of the two.  Kyousuke stands in his shirt and briefs,
 looking back with a sick look.  Madoka is wide-eyed and sweating, and finds
 herself holding Kyousuke's shorts.]
Kyousuke:
  U-uh...  Umm...                 a ano... sono...

watch FX:                         ______ ______
                   kacha_ kacha_

narration:
  Is Kasuga Kyousuke done         KASUGA KYOUSUKE  mohaya
  for now?!                                        (no)-longer/already

                                  kore made  ka?!
                                  up-to-now  (?)

4 (inset)
[Grandpa crosses his arms, solemnly.]
Grandpa:                                                ____
  If that watch isn't wound       ano TOKEI   sorosoro  neji   o
  up soon, it'll stop running.    that-watch  soon      screw (O)

                                  makanai to      UGOkanaku natchau
                                  if-not-wind-up  not-run   become-(finality)

                                  n ja    yo
                                  (explan)

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