Kimagure Orange Road
"The Dangerous Twosome"
Volume 12, Story 6
WB Volume 7, Story 8
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation by : Hitoshi Doi (12 Jan 1992)
Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Ramon Galindo
Last revision : 08-26-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 147 (107) are only in the WBs!
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p 147 (107)--TITLE PAGE
[Madoka stands and leans back against the wall on the sidewalk outside
"Bobby's Bar," dressed in coat and matching short skirt, black blouse, black
shoes and black leggings. She looks up the street.]
MAIN TITLE (at top)
The Dangerous Twosome KIKEN na futari
dangerous 2-people
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
On a Street Corner, MACHIKADO - JOUNETSU - tameIKI hitotsu
Passionately, a Single Sigh. on-a-street- passion/ a-sigh one
corner ardor
I Believe Him, and He aitsu o SHINjite machibouke
Stood Me Up. that- (O) believe-(and) stand-someone-up
person
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p 148 (108)
1
[Near full-length portrait of Madoka standing in a towel, arms crossed over
her chest.]
Madoka:
Don't leave... DEcha dame yo...
2
[Kyousuke looks on in shock.]
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ ____
doki doki
narration:
Wh-what do you mean, "don't de DEcha dame tte...
leave"...?
A-Ayukawa! a AYUKAWA!
3
[His pov of her face.]
Madoka:
Now that we can finally sekkaku futari kkiri ni nareta
be alone. especial just-2-people was-able-to-be
n da mon
is-the-reason
4
[She takes a seat, pulling him by the hand. He uses his other hand to hold
his towel against his privates.]
Madoka:
Come over here... kotchi ni kite...
this-way coming
Kyousuke: __ ___
O-okay. ha...hai
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p 149 (109)
1
[He sits beside her, and drapes the towel on his lap. Madoka pulls her knees
up under her and eyes him out of the corner of her eyes in a sultry manner.]
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
dokin
Madoka FX: _____
pita_
Madoka:
Like this, see... ko-- sureba hora...
if-do-like-this look
It looks like it'll be TANOshii ASE kaichai -sou!
fun sweating! fun sweat-(finality) looks-as-if
2
[Back to reality. As Kyousuke stands and reels with an imaginary partner,
Madoka stares at him blankly.]
Kyousuke:
N-no... N-not that... i ikenai so sonna
____
Ah, not there... a soko wa dame...
_____
Ayukawa, you pervert! AYUKAWA no etchi!
crows-in-background FX:
kaa_
Madoka FX:
ji--_
3
[She yells, snapping him out of it.]
Madoka:
What are you agonizing over, nani o hitori de modaete n no!
all by yourself?! what (O) by-oneself being-in-agony
Don't shout so loud. dekkai KOE DAsanai de yo
huge-shout not-cry-out
Kyousuke: ___
AH! ha_
4
[She looks out the window that's set in the door.]
Madoka:
Hey! Someone outside is hora DARE-ka ga SOTO no o-FURO ni
about to come into the bath. look! somebody (S) at-outside-of-bath
haitte-koyo-- to shite-ru n da kara
is-about-to-come-in (explan) that's-why
Kyousuke:
EH?! e?!
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p 150 (110)
1
[Akane and Hikaru enter the outer room to the sauna.]
Hikaru:
My muscles ache all over, mou KARADAJUU ga
so I can't sleep! now throughout-the-body (S)
KINNIKUTSUU de
because-of-muscular-ache
itakute itakute nete-rarenai yo~~~~~~_
hurting hurting can't-be-sleeping !
Akane:
At a time like this, a konna TOKI wa o-FURO ga ICHIBAN!!
nice hot bath is best!! this-kind-of-time (T) bath (S) best
2
[Kyousuke stares out the window as well.]
Kyousuke:
A-Akane! a akane_
A-and Hikaru-chan as well... so sore ni hikaru-chan made...
moreover even
3
Kyousuke: [wincing]
Wh-what'll we do? do do-- shiyou
Madoka: [sternly]
I don't know! SHIrimasen!
4
[She takes a seat. Kyousuke continues to hover near the window at the door.]
Madoka: [angrily]
You reek of alcohol... o-SAKE kusai naa~~~~_
liquor stink (rhet)
So you got drunk again, do--se mata YOpparatte
mixed up the men's and anyhow again get-drunk-(and)
women's entrances, and
came in here, didn't you! DANJO no IRIGUCHI machigaete
men's-and-women's- make-mistake-
entrances (and)
HAItte-kita n desho_!
came-and-entered (poss-explan)
Kyousuke:
I-isn't that obvious!! so sono to--ri_!!
Wh-who would come in on da DARE ga wazato HAIrimasu ka!
purpose?! who (S) on-purpose come-in (?)
5
[Miffed, she stands and glares at him over her shoulder.]
Madoka: ___________
Don't be so arrogant, you ibaru na otchokochoi!!
lamebrain!! don't-be-arrogant/ scatterbrain/dingbat/
don't-brag/swagger klutz/lamebrain
Madoka FX:
shan
Kyousuke:
S-sorry... su...suimasen...
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p 151 (111)
1
[Akane and Hikaru look in wonder at the door to the sauna room.]
Akane: _____
Hey! Is this a sauna?! a~~_ koko moshikashite sauna?!
! this-place it-is-possible sauna
2
[Kyousuke and Madoka turn and stare.]
3
Akane: _____
A sauna is awfully good for sauna wa BIYOU ni tottemo
beautiful skin. sauna (T) for-beauty-treatment awfully
i-- no yo
good
And for losing weight... sore ni yaseru shi...
moreover lose-weight and-besides
Hikaru:
Then let's see! dore_!
[Hikaru begins to turn the knob.]
4
[Tight shot of Hikaru's hand on the doorknob.]
door FX: _____
gacha
5
[Inside, Kyousuke and Madoka stare helplessly at the knob.]
Kyousuke FX: _____
giku_
door FX: _____ _____
gacha gacha
6
[Kyousuke facial portrait--wide-eyed horror.]
7
[Madoka portrait--considering.]
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p 152 (112)
1
[Akane and Hikaru leap back as Madoka emerges from the sauna and shuts the
door behind her.]
door FX: _____
batan
2
Hikaru:
Huh! Madoka-san. are_! madoka-san
Madoka: [nervously]
O-oh... a...ara
3
Madoka: [nervous smile]
Oh yeah, that's right. a so-- so--
The lady in charge came by sakki KAKARI no
a little while ago, and I a-little-while-ago person-in-charge 's
was told to hurry and leave
since they're closing this obasan ga kite koko mo--sugu
place soon. lady (S) come-(and) here soon
SHImechau kara
shut/close-(finality) that's-why
HAYAku DEte-kure tte iwareta n da
soon go-out was-telling-that (explan)
4
Hikaru:
Then let's go bathe in the ja o-FURO wa ASA ni
morning. then bath (T) in-the-morning
shiyo-- ka
shall-do (?)
Akane:
Can't be helped. shikata nai wa ne
5
[Madoka watches the two exit.]
Akane: [off]
Let's go back to our rooms HEYA ni kaette nemasho_
and sleep! to-room go-back-(and) shall-sleep
door FX: _____
batan
6
[Kyousuke opens the door and peeks out. He sees Madoka breathing a sigh of
relief.]
Kyousuke:
.......... Are they gone? ..........itta?
Madoka:
.......... Yeah. ..........nantoka
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p 153 (113)
1
[Her towel comes undone.]
Madoka towel FX: ______
harari
2
[It falls to the floor, allowing Kyousuke (and us) a wide-eyed view of her bare
backside. She looks over her shoulder in shock. Kyousuke's eyes bulge.]
Madoka:
Ah! a_
Madoka towel FX: ______
harari
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: ______
dokkin
3
[Kyousuke facial portrait--face flushed, a thin trickle of blood emerges from
a nostril.]
nosebleed FX: _______
tsu~~~~
4
[She sinks to the floor, clasps her arms across her chest, and aims a glare at
him.]
Madoka:
Y-you saw!?! mi MIta_?!
[He shuts his eyes and shakes his head violently, sending spumes of blood
jetting from his nose.]
Kyousuke:
I-I didn't, I didn't. mi MIte-nai MIte-nai
Madoka FX: _____
petan
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p 154 (114)
1
[She pulls the towel up over her front. With the other hand she rockets his
clothes at his face, sending him staggering back.]
Madoka:
Don't look this way! Get kotchi o MInai de FUKU kinasai_!!
your clothes on!! this-way (O) don't-look put-on-clothes
2
[Split panel. On the right, Madoka blushes. On the left, Kyousuke stares
skyward from under his pile of clothes.]
Madoka/Kyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ ____ ____ ____ ____ ____ ____
3
[Overhead view looking down through the glass-exterior of the building onto
the hallway. Hikaru enters room 212; Akane pauses outside room 211.]
Hikaru:
Good night. o-yasumi
door FX: _____
gacha
4
[Akane looks over at the door to room 210.]
Akane:
(It's Madoka-chan's (madoka-chan no HEYA da...)
room...) 's room is
5
Akane:
(Well, I was just jumping to (maa KYOUSUKE to madoka-chan no
conclusions over Kyousuke and 's
and Madoka-chan...
KANKEI wa atashi no HAYAtochiri
relation (T) my hasty-conclusion
datta wake da shi
was reason is and-besides
What a relief.) hitoANSHIN)
feel-relieved
6
[Smiling mischievously, Akane opens the door to room 210.]
Akane: __ __ __
(Tee hee hee. (fu fu fu
Tonight, I'll just go ahead KOYOI wa hitotsu atashi ga
and... tonight (T) one I (S)
madoka-chan ni...
at-Madoka
Chase after Madoka-chan!) sematchao----_ to!)
shall-press-(finality)
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p 155 (115)
1
[Kyousuke walks down the hall to his room. Following some 4 paces behind is
Madoka, who looks aside.]
Madoka/Kyousuke footsteps FX: _____ _____
kotsu kotsu
2
[Kyousuke opens the door to room 210, glancing over at Madoka, who's outside
the door to 209.]
Kyousuke:
Then, good night... ja o-yasumi...
3
[He goes in.]
door FX: ______
gacha_
Kyousuke FX: ____
bo~~
4
[Split panel. On top, Kyousuke looks abashed and nervous. Below, Madoka
blushes quietly.]
doors FX: _____
batan
5
[Madoka portrait--she looks a bit sad and worn.]
6
[She falls back on the bed in exhaustion.]
Madoka FX: _____
dosa_
Madoka:
fuu_
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p 156 (116)
1
[Kyousuke walks towards the bed (which isn't even in the same corner of the
room as his REAL bed in room 209). Looks like someone is under the covers.]
2
[He visualizes the bare backside of Madoka.]
Kyousuke FX: _______
bo~~~~_
3
[He falls face-first into bed.]
Kyousuke FX: _____
dosa_
4
Akane:
(She's here!!) (kita!!)
5
[Akane and Kyousuke lie back to back in bed. Kyousuke's eyes are closed.
Akane's are open.]
Akane:
(How can Madoka-chan possibly (masaka atashi ga
not notice that I snuck into impossible I (S)
her bed.) _____
madoka-chan no beddo ni
in-Madoka's-bed
shinobikonde-iyo-- to wa KIzukumai)
shall-be-slipping-into not-notice
6
[Akane visualizes the two sitting up in bed. Akane takes a surprised Madoka
by the hand. Pairs of the universal symbol for "female" dance about in the
background.]
Akane:
Madoka-chan, I was waiting madoka-chan matte-ita no yo!
for you!
7
[A tight shot of two pairs of legs, with the girls apparently in an embrace.]
Akane:
I'm not letting you go KON'YA wa KAEsanai karaa----_
tonight! tonight (T) not-send-back that's-why
Akane FX: ___
do_
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p 157 (117)
1
[His face in a goofy daze, Kyousuke rises up on one elbow and looks up at the
ceiling above Akane. He still hasn't seen her. Akane lies on her back, but
looks dreamily off to the other side.]
Kyousuke lift-head FX: _____
muku_
Kyousuke:
(Ahh... It looked so soft. (aa... ano yawaraka -so-- na AYUKAWA no...)
Ayukawa's...) that-soft looks-as-if
2
[Still dreaming, his other hand falls upon Akane's breast. Akane blushes, and
her eyes grow huge.]
Kyousuke hand FX: ________
petapeta
Kyousuke:
(Yeah, just like this...) (so-- cho--do konna...)
like-that just-like this-kind-of
Akane:
(Wow! Madoka-chan's so (maa_ madoka-chan ttara DAITAN_!!)
bold!!) ! I-tell-you boldness
3
[Akane smiles in pleasure. Kyousuke pauses and looks up at the ceiling.]
Kyousuke:
HUH?! What's this...?! n?! nani kore...?!
Akane:
Ohh! an_
4
[With a wide smile, Akane sits up. Kyousuke flies back off the bed.]
Akane:
Ma-a-adoka-chan! ma--doka-chan!
5
[His pov of Akane's face. She blushes slightly.]
Akane:
I was waiting for you in atashi madoka-chan no HEYA de
your room all this time! I in-your-room
zutto matte-ta no yo!
all-the-time was-waiting
Did I surprise you-u-u? bikkuri shitaa?
6
[Kyousuke portrait--no, but you sure surprised him!]
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p 158 (118)
1
[Akane and Kyousuke stare at each other blankly.]
2
[Akane portrait--wide-eyed, open-mouthed.]
3
[Kyousuke portrait--wide-eyed, blushing and sweating.]
narration:
Ah! Akane?! a_ akane?!
4
[Out in the hall, he closes the door behind him and leans back against it.]
narration:
I-I mixed up the rooms ma mata HEYA machigaechatta
again. again room made-mistake-(finality)
door: _____
batan
5
[He stares at the room number.]
Kyousuke:
(Huh? But it says room (are? demo 210 GOU-SHITSU tte...
210... huh but room-210 (quote)
This is Ayukawa's room.) koko AYUKAWA no HEYA ja nai ka)
this-place 's room
6
[He walks down the hall to his own room.]
narration:
Ohh, so that Akane snuck nan da ja akane no yatsu ga
into Ayukawa's room? so that-Akane (S)
AYUKAWA no HEYA ni shinobikonde-ta no ka
in-Ayukawa's-room was-slipping-into (?)
She has a lot of nerve. aitsu yoku yaru yo mattaku...
Jeez... that-person well do
Kyousuke footsteps FX: _____ _____
kotsu kotsu
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p 159 (119)
1
[He stops in sudden realization.]
Kyousuke:
(O-oh no!!) (shi shimatta!!)
2
narration: ___
Akane clearly... akane ni ore no KAO...
by-Akane my-face
Saw my face. shikkari to MIrarechatta
positively was-seen
3
narration:
What'll I do?!! do-- shiyou!!
What the hell did Akane konna YACHUU ni AYUKAWA no HEYA ni
think about me coming into during-the-night- in-Ayukawa's-room
Ayukawa's room at this hour like-this
of the night?! ___
HAIrikonda ore no koto akane wa
came-in about-me (T)
ittai do-- OMOtta darou?!
in-the-world what poss-thought
4
narration:
At any rate, this... tomokaku koitsu wa...
at-any-rate this-person
IS AWFUL!! SAIAKU da!!
5
[Akane sits on the bed in the dark.]
Akane:
(..........) (..........)
6
[Kyousuke stares at the door to room 209.]
narration:
Oh, that's right... ha so-- da...
Then Ayukawa's in my room... ja AYUKAWA wa ore no HEYA ni...
then (T) in-my-room
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p 160 (120)
1
[Madoka lies on her side in bed, asleep.]
2
[Opening her eyes, she spies something off-panel.]
Madoka:
! !
3
[She props herself up on one elbow.]
narration: _____
Kasuga-kun's bag... KASUGA-kun no kaban...
Then this room is... kono HEYA hyottoshite......
this-room possibly
4
[She sees the door opening, and Kyousuke entering.]
door FX: _____
gacha
5
[Her pov of him at the door.]
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p 161 (121)
1
[He enters and closes the door behind him.]
door FX: ______
kachan
2
[Kyousuke facial portrait--face flushed, he stares off-panel.]
3
[Madoka feigns sleep.]
4
Kyousuke footsteps FX: [off] ___ ___ ___
ko_ ko_ ko_
5
[He kneels beside the bed and studies her.]
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p 162 (122)
1
[He reaches out a hand towards her face.]
2
[He lets her hair run through that hand.]
narration:
I was seen by Akane... akane ni MIrarete-shimatta n da mon...
by-Akane was-seen-(finality) is-the-reason
Maybe I should just... isso kono mama...
rather/preferably this just-as
Kyousuke/Madoka heartbeat FX: ____ ____
doki doki
Madoka hair FX: _____
sara_
3
[Split panel. Madoka's eyes open (top half) as Kyousuke closes the drapes
(bottom half).]
4
[Exterior view of the room from the courtyard as the curtains close
completely.]
curtains FX: ____
sha_
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p 163 (123)
1
[Exterior daylight shot of the athletic club.]
2
[Madoka opens one eye...]
3
[...and sits up in bed. She is alone.]
Madoka:
.......... ..........
4
[She sticks her head out the door.]
door FX: _____
gacha
Madoka FX: __________
kyorokyoro
5
[Seeing Hikaru, she quickly exits, slams the door behind her and leans back
against it.]
Hikaru: [smiling]
Oh, good morning, ara madoka-san ohayo-- gozaimasu
Madoka-san.
I went to take a bath. o-FURO HAItchatta
door FX: _____
batan
Madoka:
G-good morning! o ohayou!
6
[The two girls stare wide-eyed at something off-panel.]
Hikaru:
Huh? are?
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p 164 (124)
1
[It's Kyousuke, asleep in the hall, a blanket draped over him. Hikaru raises
both fists to her cheek, appalled.]
Hikaru:
Sempai must move around an SEMPAI ttara sugoi
awful lot when he sleeps. I-tell-you amazing/awful
nezo-- no WARUsa
toss-about-in-one's-sleep
He's sleeping in this konna TOKORO de nete-ru!
sorta place! in-this-kind-of-place is-sleeping
2
[Madoka portrait--extremely wide-eyed.]
3
[Her pov of his sleeping face.]
4
[Madoka gently smiles, and lets out a sigh.]
5
[Scene shift. Standing outside, Kyousuke slaps his hands over his face and
tenses up when he hears...]
Akane: [off]
Good morning!! o_hayo--!!
narration:
Th-that's Akane's voice!! a are wa akane no KOE!!
that-(one) (T) 's voice
6
[He shuts his eyes tight and doesn't dare to look. Behind him, Akane has
clapped a hand on Madoka's shoulder.]
Akane:
KYOUSUKE!! KYOUSUKE!!
Akane hand-on-shoulder FX: ___
pon
narration:
I-it's all over now... ko kore de subete ga owatta......
now/with-this wholly (S) was-over
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p 165 (125)
1
Akane: [smiling at Madoka]
I bet you were able to sleep yuube wa yoku NEMUreta desho_!
well last night! an-evening (T) poss-was-able-to-sleep-well
You exercised so much, anna ni UNDOU shita n da mon
didn't you!! that-much exercised is-the-reason
ne~~_!!
(rhet)
[Kyousuke dares to look. He is most puzzled.]
2
Akane: [smiling at Kyousuke]
Madoka-chan! madoka-chan!
[Kyousuke points a puzzled finger at his own face.]
3
[Akane sadly whispers into Kyousuke's ear.]
Akane:
It was awful of you to run yuube wa nigechau nante
away last night! an-evening (T) run-away the-likes-of
hidoi ja nai!
awful/terrible
It was getting to the good i-- toko datta no ni~~
part! good place was even-though
4
Hikaru:
Akane-san, Madoka-san is akane-san madoka-san wa kotchi desu yo
over here. (T) this-way is
_________
So, you haven't put your sate wa mada kontakuto Irete-nai
contacts on yet, have you! so (T) yet contacts not-putting-in
n desho!
poss-not
5
[He points a finger of surprise at a blank-looking Akane.]
Kyousuke: _________
What!?! Contacts? e_?! kontakuto tte
! contacts (quote)
Then maybe last night, ja omae yuube wa moshi ka shite...
you... then you an-evening (T) it-may-be
narration: ______
And so that's how I cut to yu-- wake de DAI- pinchi wa
my way out of that tight and-so great pinch (T)
spot...
KIrinuketa kedo...
cut/found-(my)-way-out-of but
6
[Exterior view of the athletic club. Akane's portrait appears on her speech
bubble.]
Akane:
Of course I took them out. mochiron hazushite-ru ni
of-course am-taking-off
KImatte-ru ja nai
am-bound-to
narration: _nu--do_
When I close my eyes, ME o TOjiru to AYUKAWA no SUGATA ga
Ayukawa's nude figure comes when-shut-eyes 's nude-figure (S)
to mind...
Ukande-kite...
coming-into-(my)-mind
I don't think I'll be able KON'YA mo NEMUre -so-- ni arimasen...
to sleep tonight, either... tonight too can-sleep doesn't-look-as-if
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