Kimagure Orange Road
"Robot Kyou-chan!"
Volume 12, Story 2
WB Volume 7, Story 4
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Leo Hourvitz
Thomas Wyatt
Last revision : 08-20-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 67 (27) are only in the WBs!
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p 67 (27)--TITLE PAGE
[Beautiful, super-deformed title-page art. Kyousuke, in coat and bowtie,
bunny ears sticking out of the top of his head, takes the part of the rabbit
who's perpetually late. In his thought bubble, he envisions a smiling Queen
(of Spades) Hikaru. Madoka (as Alice) hides behind a tree and watches him
race past.]
MAIN TITLE (at top) _______
Robot Kyou-chan! robotto KYOU-chan!
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
Hurry, Hurry, Kyousuke isoge ya isoge
Rabbit! hurry-up!/make-haste!/be-quick! and
KYOUSUKE usagi
rabbit
Her Highness Is Waiting! JOOU-sama ga matte-ru yo!
queen-(high-hon) (S) is-waiting
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p 68 (28)
1
[Exterior shot looking up the face of the Kasuga apartment building.]
narration:
The always hectic mornings itsu-mo awatadashii KASUGA-KE
at the Kasuga household... always hurried/flurried family
no ASA...
's morning
2
[Manami rushes about in the kitchen as Kurumi sits drinking from her mug.]
Manami:
Ahh, busy busy. a-- isogashi isogashi
Manami FX: ________
dotabata
Kurumi: ________
Manami-chan, do you know manami-chan atashi no mafura-- SHIranai?
where my muffler is? my muffler not-know
3
[Kyousuke walks into the kitchen, yawning and stretching.]
Manami: [off]
I think it's at the front TASHIka GENKAN ni
door... if-remember-correctly at-front-door
atta kedo
was-there but
Kurumi:
Get it for me, oniichan! oni--chan totte-kite!
4
Kyousuke:
Get it yourself! JIBUN de torina_!
by-self get-(command)
Kurumi:
My, my. Aren't we charming! ma-- kawaikunai no_!
not-charming/attractive/pretty
5
[His pov of Kurumi as she angrily points a finger at him.]
Kurumi:
You're always like that, oni--chan wa itsu-mo so--
oniichan!! (T) always like-that
na n da kara!!
is (explan) that's-why
You have no sense of otagai tasukeaou to yu--
cooperation! shall-help-one-another called
KIMOchi ga nai no yo!
feelings (S) not-have
6
[Seeking to educate him, she whips out a brush and sheet of paper, and draws
a kanji character.]
Kurumi:
Understand?! SHItte-ru?!
The character called "HITO" HITO tte yu-- JI wa
means man called character (T)
support your fellow man...
NINGEN DOUSHI ga sasae
fellow-man (S) support
atte-ru kara koso......
is-having that's-why indeed
Kyousuke: [irked]
Hey you. That's the omae sore wa IRU to yu--
character called "IRU" you that-(one) (T) enter called
.
JI ja nai ka
character
____
DUMMY! aho_!!
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p 69 (29)
1
[Kurumi goes ballistic.]
Kurumi:
You lazy slug! onore kono BUSHOU-MONO!
you this lazy-fellow
Listen a little to what a chotto wa HITO no yu-- koto
person has to say! a-bit (T) person (S) say (nom)
kikinasai!
listen-(command)
dramatic FX:
kaa_
Kyousuke:
You're the one who's lazy! BUSHOU wa omae no ho-- daro_
lazy (T) your-direction poss-be
2
Kurumi:
All right. I'll hypnotize yo--shi mata
you again!! all-right again
SAIMINJUTSU ni kakete-yaru kara!!
put-(you)-under-hypnosis that's-why
You'll obey whatever anyone HITO no MEIREI wa nan demo
commands, unconditionally! person 's command (T) whatever/all
ZETTAI kikinasai_
unconditional listen/obey
[She touches his forehead with her fingertip. The air crackles with the
Power.]
Kurumi fingertip FX: __
pi
Kyousuke:
Who's being hypno... DARE ga kakaru...
who (S)
hypnotize
3
[She smiles and points up at a kitchen shelf.]
Kurumi:
Now, go fetch me that box. sate ano HAKO o totte-kinasai
that-box (O) go-and-fetch-(command)
box:
Specialty of Osaka OUSAKA MEIBUTSU
Osaka specialty/noted-product
_____ _________
Modern Toasted Caramel modan YAKI kyarameru
modern bake/toast/roast caramel
narration: _____
That this fight between kono kyo--dai genka ga...
siblings... this quarrel-between-siblings (S)
Should turn into something anna osoroshi-- koto ni
that horrible... into-that-kind-of-terrible-thing
naro-- to wa...
shall-become (define)
4
[Kyousuke meekly obeys...]
Kyousuke:
Here. hai
5
Kurumi:
Put it back. modoshinasai
[He does.]
6
Kurumi:
Get it. motte-kinasai
[He does.]
7
[Kurumi leaps in the air. Manami studies the robot-like Kyousuke in wonder.]
Kurumi:
Hooray-y-y!! yattaa!!
He's hypnotized!! kakattaa--_ SAIMINJUTSU!!
Manami:
Wowww! Just like the toy he----_ MACHI de utte-ru
robots sold in town, huh. ! in-town are-selling
_______
omocha robotto mitai ne--
toy-robot seem (rhet)
Manami:
This is handy! kore wa BENRI!
this-(one) (T) handy/convenient
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p 70 (30)
1
Manami: [running off]
Ah! Oh no! School, school! a ikenai_ GAKKOU GAKKOU!
[Kurumi puts on her coat and addresses Kyousuke.]
Kurumi: _____
All right, then. Carry our yoshi ja atashi-tachi no kaban
bags! then our bags
mochinasai!
carry-(command)
2
Kyousuke:
Yes... ......hai
3
[The twins walk on ahead. Kyousuke follows with his bag and two others under
his left arm. Now--speaking as an older brother--*there's* something you
don't see older brothers do every day!]
Manami:
How convenient! BENRI ne_!
Kyousuke:
.......... ..........
4
[At the school gate, two girls pass by.]
girl 1:
Kurumi-i-i. Aren't you on kurumi-- anata KYOU TOUBAN ja nai?
duty today? you today on-duty are-not
Kurumi:
Ahhh! Oh no! a~~~~_ ikenai_
5
Kurumi:
Gotta run! o-saki ni----_
beforehand
Manami:
Wait! What'll we do about chotto! oni--chan do-- sun no yo
oniichan? what do
6
[Manami portrait--she looks nervous.]
Manami:
Ahhh... She's gone... a~~a itchatta......
7
[She studies oniichan, who stares off into the distance.]
Manami:
Only Kurumi can snap him kurumi ja nai to tokenai
out of it... if-are-not can't-dispel
mon naa...
person (rhet)
8
[Kyousuke portrait--he looks a bit glassy-eyed.]
Kyousuke:
.......... ..........
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p 71 (31)
1
[Exterior shot of a school building.]
narration:
And then, at lunch break... soshite HIRUYASUmi
2
[While eating a sandwich, Komatsu scrutinizes a men's magazine held open in
his other hand.]
Komatsu: _____
Hmm... The color of these u~~~mu kono panti no IRO nakanaka...
panties is quite... this-panty 's color quite
magazine:
Nude hadaka
Hatta: [yelling] _____
Don't look at stuff like omae meshi kui-nagara sonna mono
that while we're eating you a-meal while-eating that-kind-of-thing
lunch!
no MIru na yo
(nom) not-see-(neg-imperative)
3
[Kyousuke's pov. Hatta and Komatsu turn to look at him over their shoulders.]
Hatta: [grinning]
Well... Why not have ja... ONNA no KO ni moteru KASUGA-kun ni
Kasuga-kun, who's popular popular-with-girls by-Kasuga
with girls, go fetch us
the real thing. HONMONO demo
the-real-thing or-something
totte-kite-moraeba
if-have-go-and-fetch
4
[Hatta whispers into Kyousuke's ear.]
Hatta: _____
Komatsu wants some girls' KOMATSU ga ONNA no KO no panti
panties... (S) girl 's panty
hoshi-gatte-ru n da kedo
is-(3rd-person)-wanting (explan) but
Go fetch some for us! omae totte-kite-kure yo!
you go-and-fetch-(for-us)
5
Kyousuke:
Yes... ......hai
Kyousuke FX: ____
boso
6
[Kyousuke glances off to his right. He spies three female classmates chatting
at the open window.]
7
[Kyousuke holds his hand up and three panties rematerialize in his grasp.]
panties teleport FX: ____
shu_
8
[A view looking in through the window. On the right and in back of the girls,
Kyousuke tosses the three panties into the lap of the startled Hatta and
Komatsu. On the left of the panel, the three girls pause and look nervous.]
Kyousuke:
Here you are. do--zo
girl 2:
Huh?! are?!
girl 3:
? ?
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p 72 (32)
1
girl 2: [to girl 3] ________
S-say! Doesn't it feel... ne nee_ chotto... su--su-- shinai?
A bit drafty? a-bit a-draft not-do
[Girl 3 looks nervously about.]
girl 3:
Well, now that you mention so-- ieba so-- nee
it... come-to-think-of-it well...
2
[Komatsu holds up a panty between his two hands.]
Komatsu:
H-hey! This is still warm!! o oi mada attakai zo kore...
still warm !! this-(one)
Hatta: [smiling at Kyousuke]
Don't yell out loud. deke-- KOE DAsu na tte
loud not-cry-out (quote)
Still, why are you carrying sore ni shite mo omae nande
around something like this? but/still you why
konna no motte n da yo~~
like-this (nom) having (explan)
3
[The faces of the two turn diabolical.]
Komatsu and Hatta:
But... shikashi...
This is interesting! kore wa omoshiroi!
this-(one) (T) fun/interesting
4
Komatsu:
H-hey, Kasuga. Come over chi chotto KASUGA kotchi koi yo!
here! this-way come!
Kyousuke:
Yes... ......hai
5
[Komatsu cups his hand and whispers into Kyousuke's ear.]
Komatsu FX: ________
hisohiso
poster 1:
Health Department HOKEN -BU
health/sanitation section/department
poster 2:
Today's Slogan: KYOU no HYOU...
today 's = slogan/motto
Conserve Electricity; SETSUDEN SETSU YU/ABURA
Conserve Oil; Conserve conserve-electricity conserve-oil
Water.
SESSUI
conserve-water
6
Kyousuke:
Yes. hai
7
[A view down a long hallway.]
sign:
Girls' Locker Room JOSHI KOUI-SHITSU
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p 73 (33)
1
[Kyousuke furtively lifts a pair of panties from a girl's locker.]
Kyousuke FX: __________
kyorokyoro
2
[His arms laden with girls' underwear, Kyousuke teleports out--just as the
girls enter.]
girls: ____ ____
kya_ kya_
door FX: _____
kara_
Kyousuke teleport FX: ____
shu_
3
girl 4:
Huhhh?! are~~~~
____
Anyone know where my bra atashi no bura SHIranai?
is? my bra not-know
girl 5: ____
My bra's gone, too! atashi no bura mo nai wa!
my-bra too isn't-here
4
[Kyousuke runs down the hall, still carrying the underwear. Manami spots him.]
Kyousuke FX: ___ ___ ___
ta_ ta_ ta_
Manami:
Oh, oniichan. a oni--chan
5
[Kurumi also sees him.]
Kyousuke FX: ___ ___ ___
ta_ ta_ ta_
Manami:
Hm? n?
I wonder what he's doing...? nani yatte n no kashira...
what doing I-wonder
6
[The girls remain in their sweatshirts and shorts, and mill about out on the
school grounds. They look a bit uncomfortable.]
narration:
So that day... soshite... sono HI
and/then that-day
A rumor raced among the KOURYOU GAKUEN KOUTOU-BU de wa
female students that a at-Kouryou-high-school-(section) (contrast)
mysterious underwear thief
was haunting Kouryou High nazo no SHITAGI dorobo-- ga
School! riddle/puzzle 's underwear thief (S)
SHUTSUBOTSU shita to no
infested/frequented (quote) (nom)
uwasa ga tachimachi
rumor (S) immediately/in-no-time-at-all
JOSHI SEITO no AIDA ni hirogatta!
girl-students among expanded/spread
girl 6:
Oh no-o-o. ya da--
girl 7:
How indecent... ya~~rashi~~
girl 8:
Come to think of it, there so-- ieba sakki
was weird laughter coming come-to-think-of-it a-little-while-ago
from the bicycle shed a
little while ago! JITENSHA OKIBA no HOU de HEN na
in-direction-of-bicycle-shed strange/weird
WARAi KOE ga shite-ta wa yo!
laughing voice (S) was-making
7
[Exterior view of the bicycle shed.]
Komatsu and Hatta: [off] __ __ __ __ __ __ __
Wah ha ha ha ha ha ha! wa ha ha ha ha ha ha
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p 74 (34)
1
[Seated on a folded wrestling mat, Komatsu tosses underwear in the air with
wild abandon. He also wears a panty on his head. Hatta is busy sniffing
another pair.]
Komatsu:
This is terrific!! korya suge-- ya!!
this amazing
Hatta:
I wonder if it's okay to i-- no ka naa konna koto shite
be doing something like okay I-wonder this-kind-of-thing doing
this.
2
Hatta:
But... shikashi...
That Kasuga. How is he KASUGA no yatsu do-- yatte totte-kita
doing it? that-Kasuga how doing went-and-got
n darou
(poss-explan)
And all without being yoku maa MItsukarazu...
caught... well not-be-discovered/caught
Komatsu: [solemnly, but with a panty on his head]
Hmm... u~~~~mu
Maybe THIS was his hidden kore zo yatsu no kakusareta SAINOU
talent! this-(one) !! fellow's was-hiding talent
na no ka mo shiren
is it-may-be
Only a single such person 10-NEN ni hitori DEru ka
comes along, perhaps once in-10-years one-person come-out or
in a decade...
DEnai ka to yu--...
not-come-out called
3
Komatsu:
But the thing called human shikashi NINGEN no YOKUBOU to yu--
greed escalates step by but human-greed called
step without end!
mono wa kagirinaku
(nom) (T) without-limit/for-ever
___________
TSUGItsugi esukare--to shite-yuku no da!
one-after- go-and-escalate (explan)
another/in-succession
While we're at it, why not motto omoshiroi koto ne-- ka na
do some other fun stuff as more fun-things (rhet) I-wonder
well.
kono sai da kara
under-these-circumstances is that's-why
Komatsu fist FX:
gu gu_
4
[Kyousuke enters the shed.]
door FX: _____
gara_
Komatsu
Yo! Hard day, huh? yoo_! o-tsukare-san
5
[View pans back. Kyousuke stands and looks a bit nervous at the view before
him. Komatsu has taken off the panty from his head, but has wrapped a pair
around each of his lower legs, and sniffs a third. Hatta puts a panty on his
head and a bra on his chest.]
Kyousuke:
Umm... ano~~~
Maybe we should stop about mo-- kono kurai ni
now. now to-about-this-much
shitoita ho-- ga
did-(for-future-sake) way
Komatsu:
Yaaahh... so-- da na
I wouldn't want to be caught MItsukatte SHIMBUN nanka ni
and have this come out in be-discovered/caught-(and) in-some-newspaper
the papers.
DEru no ya da mon ne
coming-out unpleasant thing (rhet)
Hatta:
All right! This next one yoshi! TSUGI de SAIGO ni
will be the last! all-right at-next to-the-end/ultimate
shitokou!
shall-do-(for-future-sake)
6
[Komatsu pulls a panty over his head, covering his eyes.]
Komatsu: ______
If this last trophy is going ONAji rasuto o kazaru no nara
to be the same, then let's same the-last (O) exhibit (nom) if-it-is
do it big!
dekkaku iko-- ja nai ka!
great-big shall-go
I just thought of something i-- koto OMOitsuita!!
good!! good-thing happened-to-think-of
Komatsu panty-on-head FX:
gui_!
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p 75 (35)
1
[He stares in the face of a startled Kyousuke.]
Komatsu: ______
Go fetch a nude photo of AYUKAWA no nu--do o SHASHIN ni totte-koi!!
Ayukawa!! 's nude (O) in-photo go-fetch!
2
Komatsu:
She's nasty, but what a aitsu ikesukane-- kedo
great figure... that-person nasty/disgusting but
_______
sutairu wa i-- mon naa
figure (T) good thing (rhet)
Hatta:
I'd like to see it once, ore mo ICHIDO wa MIte-mitai kedo...
too... I too once (T) want-to-try-see but
But if we're caught, we'll MItsukaru to tada de wa
be very sorry for nothing. if-be-caught for-nothing (T)
sumanai kara na
very-sorry that's-why
Kyousuke: [miffed]
Even if I got it, who'd torete-mo DARE ga
show it?!! even-tho-be-got who (S)
MIseru ka_!!
show/display (?)
3
[Komatsu glares in his face.]
Komatsu:
What? nani?
Kyousuke:
I mean... To anyone. iya... nani-mo
4
[Komatsu puts a conspiratorial arm around Kyousuke's shoulder.]
Komatsu:
Got it? ii kai?!
____
Now that you've come this koko made kita IJOU kimi mo
far, you're an accomplice as-far-as-here came now-that you too
as well!
KYOUHAN-SHA!
accomplice
Understand!! wakaru na!!
Hatta: ____
Anyway, you went collecting tomokaku kimi ga JIBUN no ISHI de
stuff of your own free will. anyway you (S) by-self's-will
tori ni iku n da kara ne
go-and-collect (explan) that's-why (rhet)
5
[As Kyousuke walks away from the shed, Komatsu waves a panty overhead in fond
farewell.]
Komatsu:
See you later! itte-rassha~~i!
6
Komatsu:
But... demo...
____
No matter what, this is ikura nan demo muri daro-- na
impossible, isn't it. no-matter-what impossible poss-be
Hatta:
For some reason, he's acting aitsu nan da ka okashi-- kara
odd, so if he runs into that-guy somehow strange/funny that's-why
trouble, it would be just
the right thing to wake itai ME mirya ME mo samete
him up. sore-eyes/ if-see becoming-awake-too
get-into-trouble
cho--do ii yo
just-right/precisely-good
.
= "if get into trouble" (lit., "if watch with sore eyes"), then = "also become awake" (lit., "eyes also wake up").>
7
Komatsu and Hatta: ___ ___ ___ ___ ___ ___
ku_ ha_ ha_ ha_ ha_ ha_
8
[A hand pats Komatsu's shoulder from behind.]
hand-on-shoulder FX:
ton ton
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p 76 (36)
1
[Their arms full of underwear, the two turn to find a mob of angry girls
behind them.]
Komatsu: ___
AH! ha_
2
Komatsu:
Th-this was a present from ko kore wa TOMODACHI no
our friend, Kasuga-kun... this-(one) (T) friend 's
_________
KASUGA-kun no purezento de......
's present being
Hatta:
Yes, that's right. so-- so--
3
[Exterior shot of a school building.]
girl 9: [off]
We're not letting you off sonna i-- wake TSUUYOU suru
with an excuse like that! that-kind-of excuse pass-(for)
wake nai desho!
reason poss-not-have
girls FX: [off] ____ ____
boka boka
Komatsu and Hatta: [off]
Gyaaaa! gya~~~~~~
girls: [off] ________ ______
You weirdos! Perverts!! kono chika--n! hentai!!
this molester/masher pervert
4
[Madoka, walking home, turns to see Kyousuke chasing after her.]
Madoka:
Oh... Kasuga-kun. ara... KASUGA-kun
5
[He grabs her by the arm and keeps on running.]
Kyousuke:
Come for a bit! chotto kite!
Madoka:
Wh-what? na nani yo~~?
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p 77 (37)
1
[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]
2
[Madoka is in the living room when Kyousuke reenters holding a camera.]
door FX: _____
batan
Kyousuke: ______
I'm taking a nude picture! nu--do o torimasu!
nude (O) take-(a-photo)
3
[Madoka portrait--wide-eyed.]
4
Madoka:
...... Of who? ......DARE no?
[Kyousuke silently points to her face.]
5
[Kneeling, he takes aim with the camera.]
Kyousuke:
Okay. Then, please take hai sore de wa nuide-kudasai
off your clothes. then remove-clothes-(please)
6
[Madoka portrait--she studies him.]
narration:
What? nani yo
I wonder what the heck TOTSUZEN ittai do-- yu--
he's trying to pull all suddenly in-the-world what-kind-of
of a sudden?!
tsumori na no kashira?!
intention is I-wonder
7
[Madoka portrait--she smiles.]
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p 78 (38)
1
Madoka: [brightly]
Okay! i-- yo!
Then I'll take off my ja nugu kara
clothes, so you be sure then take-off-clothes that's-why
and take a picture!
shikkari totte ne!
resolutely taking-(a-photo) (rhet)
2
[He smiles, kind of dopily.]
Kyousuke:
Yes... ...hai
3
[She unties her kerchief.]
Madoka:
(I'll play a little joke on (chotto karakatte-yare
him. a-little tease-(him)/play-a-joke-(on-him)
Anyhow, Kasuga-kun isn't do--se KASUGA-kun ni sonna
someone who'd have the anyhow by-Kasuga that-kind-of
nerve to do something like
that...) DOKYOU aru wake nai mono...)
courage have reason not-have person
4
[Smiling, she pulls down her skirt, showing her slip.]
camera FX: _____
pasha
5
[She steps out of the skirt and Kyousuke snaps another one.]
camera FX: _____
pasha
6
[She takes off her blouse and is surprised to see him take another photo.]
camera FX: _____
pasha
narration:
H-huh? H-he's... a are ko koitsu...
_maji_
SERIOUS?! HONKI?!
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p 79 (39)
1
[Dressed only in slip and socks, she clutches her blouse to her chest and
looks at him in worry.]
narration:
I thought there was something chotto itsu-mo to chigau to wa
a bit different about him... a-bit from-usual different
OMOtte-ita kedo......
was-thinking but
Madoka:
U-umm... a ano...
2
Kyousuke:
C'mon! Let's get 'em saa_ janjan nuide-miyo--_!!
off!! rapidly shall-try-to-remove-clothes
Madoka: [nervously]
S-sure!! ha hai_!!
3
Madoka:
(This isn't his usual self, (kore wa futsu-- ja nai wa ne...)
is it...) this-(one) (T) usually is-not (rhet)
4
[She edges back.]
Madoka FX:
suza_
5
[He edges forward.]
Kyousuke:
zui
6
Madoka:
Th-that's it for today!! ki KYOU wa kore made_!!
today (T) so-far
7
[She turns angrily away and storms off.]
Madoka:
C'mon, that's enough joking saa jo--dan wa kono kurai ni shite
now. joking (T) to-about-this-far doing
_______
I have to go to ABCB! atashi abakabu ni ikanakutcha!
I to-ABCB must-go
Kyousuke:
NO!! dame_!!
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p 80 (40)
1
Madoka: [surprised]
..........?! ..........?!
2
[She starts to put on her blouse.]
Madoka:
If you don't cut it out, i--kagen ni shinai to OKOru wa yo_!!
I'll get angry!! if-not-be-moderate get-angry
3
[He yanks her blouse from out of her hands.]
Kyousuke:
NO!! dame_!!
Kyousuke FX: ___
ba_
4
Madoka:
Grr! That's enough... moo_ i--kagen ni......
[She pulls on his arm, hauling him off to the bathroom.]
Madoka FX:
gui_
5
[She dunks his head in a full sink.]
Madoka:
This'll wake you up!! ME o samashitara_!!
when-wake-up
Kyousuke head FX: ______
bashan
6
Kyousuke:
pua_
Madoka: [soft smile]
See?! dou?!
A little of this now... sukoshi wa kore de...
a-little (T) now/with-this
7
[He picks up the camera and resumes his stalking. Madoka flinches in
surprise.]
Kyousuke:
.......... Take off your ..........nuide
clothes.
Madoka heartbeat FX: _____
dokin
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p 81 (41)
1
[Split panel. She slaps his right cheek, and in a smooth return motion, slaps
his left cheek.]
Madoka FX: ___ ______
pan panpan
2
[Cheeks bruised, he nonetheless raises his camera with a cheery smile.]
Kyousuke FX: _____
niko_
Kyousuke cheeks FX: ____ ____
piri piri
3
Madoka: ___
da_
4
Kyousuke:
Wait!! mate_!!
[He grabs the edge of her slip.]
Madoka slip FX: _____
biri_
5
[She runs into his room and slams the door, leaning back against it.]
Madoka FX: ___
dan
Madoka: ____ ____
haa_ haa_
6
[He bursts through, camera aimed and ready.]
door FX: _____
baka_
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p 82 (42)
1
[She runs in fright.]
2
[He grabs her by an arm.]
Kyousuke FX:
gui_
Madoka:
St...! ya_...
3
[Isolated shot of his desk.]
Madoka: [off]
Stop it-t-t!! yamete--_!!
4
[He stares up at the ceiling.]
Kyousuke:
.......... ..........
5
Kyousuke: ___
H-huh? What in the world a are ore ittai nani o
am I doing? I in-the-world what (O)
yatte-iru no daro-- ka?
am-doing (poss-explan)
___
ha_
Madoka:
Huh?! e?!
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p 83 (43)
1
[He looks about in puzzlement. Somehow, the fact that Madoka is standing
before him in just her slip doesn't strike him as the most puzzling...]
Madoka:
Wh-what did you say...? na nani tte...
what (quote)
Kyousuke: ___
Huh?! This is my home?! are_ koko ore no IE?! do--shite...
Why...? ! this-place my-place why
2
Kyousuke:
As I recall... Just as I TASHIka... kurumi ni HITO no MEIREI
was going to school, Kurumi as-I-recall by-Kurumi person 's command
hypnotized me into obeying
whatever anyone commands... nan demo kike tte
whatever obey/listen (quote)
SAIMINJUTSU kakerareta mama
was-hypnotized (just)-as
GAKKOU ni itte...
going-to-school
3
Madoka:
.......... ..........
4
Madoka:
Whaaat?! Then, you're e~~~~~~_ ja DARE-ka ni
saying someone commanded ! then by-someone
you to take nude pictures ______
of me?! atashi no nu--do tore tte
my-nude-(pic) take (quote)
MEIREI sarete-ta tte koto?!
were-commanded (quote) (nom)
5
[Madoka facial portrait--she looks back in nervous relief.]
Madoka:
.......... ..........
Well, I can't imagine you maa KASUGA-kun tte sonna koto
would be a person to do (T) that-kind-of-thing
such a thing, Kasuga-kun...
suru HITO da to wa OMOenai
do person is (define) can't-think
kedo...
but
6
[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]
Kyousuke: [off]
That's right! so-- da yo!
___ ______
Me take a nude picture of ore ga AYUKAWA no nu--do toru
you... Ha ha ha! I (S) 's nude take-a-pic
__ __ __
nante ha ha ha
the-likes-of
____
No way. sonna baka na koto
I wouldn't have the nerve to JIBUN no ISHI de suru hazu nai yo~~
do that. by-self-will do not-likely
Madoka: [off]
All right... Then today yoshi... jaa KYOU no tokoro wa
I'll forgive you. all-right then today's-time (T)
yurushite-ageru
forgive-you
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p 84 (44)
1
[Dressed once more, she heads for the door.]
Madoka:
Then, I'll be... ja kore de...
then with-this
2
[Just then, Kurumi and Manami enter.]
Kurumi:
We're home. tadaima--
3
Manami:
Well, aren't we the carefree oya i-- KI na mon ne
one. easygoing-person (rhet)
The school's in a terrible IMA GAKKOU wa sugoi SAWAgi yo
uproar now. now school (T) amazing uproar
4
Kurumi: [cheerily]
But at lunch recess, we demo HIRUYASUmi ni oni--chan ga
were so surprised to see but at-lunch-break (S)
you running by carrying
underwear, oniichan. SHITAGI MOtte HASHItte-ta
underwear carry-(and) were-running
no MIte bikkuri shita n da yo~~
(nom) seeing was-surprised (explan)
5
Kurumi: [off]
And so then, I snapped you sore de sono TOKI SAIMINJUTSU
out of it. and-so that-time hypnosis
toitoite
= dispelling-(for-future-sake)
I was really glad. HONTOU ni yokatta
really was-good
[View of Madoka and Kyousuke, both staring off-panel. Kyousuke winces.
Madoka's eyes grow large.]
Kyousuke FX: _____
giku_
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p 85 (45)
1
[The twins exchange smiles.]
Kurumi:
If we'd let things go just ano mama hottoku to IMAgoro
like that, he might be that (just)-as if-leave-alone by-now
going after Ayukawa-san's
underwear by now. AYUKAWA-san no SHITAGI made
to-Ayukawa-s-underwear
neratte-ta kamo yo
was-going-after it-may-be
Because it's oniichan we're oni--chan no koto da kara--
talking about. about-oniichan is that's-why
Manami:
Really. It was serious mattaku TAIHEN datta n da kara--
trouble. really was-serious (explan) that's-why
Returning everyone's minna no SHITAGI KAEshite-kuru no--
underwear... everyone 's underwear go-and-return
2
[Madoka portrait--she digests all this...]
3
Kyousuke FX:
koso~~~_
4
[Before he can quite make it, she spins about and grabs him by the shoulder.
He grimaces.]
Madoka:
Hold it... machinasai...
Madoka hand FX: ___
pon
Kyousuke FX: _____
bikun
5
[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building. Kyousuke screams like a
girl...]
Kyousuke: [off]
Kyaaaa! kya------
6
[The teacher's pov of the class--three girls in particular. Madoka rubs her
fist in her other hand and looks off to one side, royally peeved. Girls 2
and 3 likewise look irritated.]
sensei: [off]
Huhhh? Komatsu and Hatta. are~~~~ KOMATSU ni HATTA
And even Kasuga... sore ni KASUGA made...
moreover even
For some reason, there KYOU wa nan da ka KESSEKI ga
are a lot of absences today (T) somehow absence (S)
today, huh.
o--i naa
a-lot-of (rhet)
narration:
Today... I'll share this HONJITSU wa... wakeatte
with you. today (T) share-(things-with-a-
person)-(and)
I can't go to school... GAKKOU ni wa DEremasen...
--Kyousuke to-school (contrast) can't-go-out/attend
KYOUSUKE
Madoka knuckles FX: ____ ____
boki baki
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