Kimagure Orange Road
"Love Focus!"
Volume 11, Story 9
WB Volume 7, Story 2
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Thomas Wyatt
Ramon Galindo
Last revision : 08-19-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 27 (169) are only in the WBs!
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p 27 (169)--TITLE PAGE
[Sayuri stands in a waitress uniform--black dress and nylons, white apron and
a cute covering for her head as well. With one hand, she holds a tray up
high; the other hand on her hip. On the tray is a small version of Kyousuke,
looking bewildered. Sayuri licks her lips.]
MAIN TITLE (at top) ____ ________
Love Focus! rabu - fo--kasu!
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
I Like You So Much, I Want TAbechaitai hodo
to Eat You Up... want-to-eat-(finality) extent/degree
SUki da kara...
liking that's-why
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p 28 (170)
1
[Exterior shot of a building.]
blonde: [off]
So like, that guy's so-o-o de saa mo-- i--kagen soitsu
persistent... and-so grr quite that-person
shitsukkoi kara--
persistent/tenacious that's-why
______
So I dated him 'cause I had shikata naku de--to shite-yatta wake
no choice. forced/obliged-to-date-(him) reason
sign:
Bikkuri Burger bikkuri baagaa
Parking Lot--Turn Right USETSU SURU CHUUSHAJOU
turn-to-the-right parking-area
2
[Interior shot of a fast-food restaurant.]
brunette 1: [off]
So then... soshitara sa--
and-so/then
He's a total brat, soitsu tee--nde
isn't he!! that-person = utterly
____
gaki na no yo nee--_!!
kid/brat is (rhet)
brunette 2: [off]
But, hey. Isn't that the demo sa-- sono KO MAE wa
guy who was really crazy but that-boy before (T)
about Sayuri-sempai before?
sayuri-SEMPAI ni MUCHUU datta
by-Sayuri was-in-a-trance/dream
KO desho--
boy poss-be
3
brunette 2 [off]
I bet he switched over to kitto AITE ni sarenakatta kara
you because she ignored him. surely was-ignored that's-why
anta ni kuragae shita no yo
to-you changed-to/
transferred-(oneself)-to
[The blonde girl makes a face and sticks out her tongue.]
blonde:
Hmmph, so what! fun do--se!
4
[Two brunette girls sit side-by-side. #2 drinks from her straw. #1 looks off
to the side.]
brunette 1:
I hear that Sayuri-sempai, sayuri-SEMPAI ttara aikawarazu
as usual, is hunting (I-tell-you) as-usual
handsome guys. _hansamu_ _______
BIDANSHI hanta-- yatte-ru tte yu--
handsome-guy-hunter is-doing say-that
ja nai
is-not
brunette 2:
Yeah, that's right. sou sou
She should settle down and hitori ni shibotte ochitsukya i--
focus on one person... to-1-person narrow-down should-settle-down
no ni nee
even-though (rhet)
5
[The blonde looks up at the ceiling, resting one hand behind her head. The
other two girls break out in laughter.]
blonde:
Despite her age, she i-- TOSHI koite
sure does carry on, in-spite-of-one's-age say-(and)/shoot-off-
doesn't she. one's-mouth-(and)
yoku yaru yo ne--
do-well (rhet)
brunette 1 FX: ________
kusukusu
brunette 2:
She must really be a kitto NEkkara
wanton woman to the core, surely at-all/at-heart/to-the-core
right?
OTOKOZUki na no ne~~~~
an-amorous/wanton-woman is (nom) (rhet)
6
[The torso of a high school girl appears next to the blonde girl. From the
different uniforms, the three seated girls are identified as junior high
students. The junior high girls pause in shock.]
Sayuri:
Who are you calling a wanton DARE ga OTOKOZUki da tte?!
woman?! who (S) wanton-woman is (quote)
girls heartbeat FX: _____
dokin
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p 29 (171)
1
[The blonde looks up at Sayuri with a nervous and overly-happy smile. Sayuri
looks down without expression.]
blonde:
Ohhh? Sempai, long time no araa SEMPAI o-hisashiburi de--su
see.
2
[Seated now, Sayuri has her cigarette lit by brunette 2.]
Sayuri smoking FX: _____
shubo
3
[Sayuri closes her eyes and blows out smoke.]
Sayuri:
The reason I've had all of minna ni atsumatte-moratta no wa
you gather here today is to-everyone gathered (nom) (T)
none other than because...
hoka demo nai JITSU wa...
nothing-other-than in-fact/really
4
blonde: [smiling]
It's about a guy. OTOKO no koto desho
about-guy poss-be
Sayuri:
How did you know? nande wakaru no
why know (?)
5
blonde: [off]
Huhhh? Whenever araa sayuri-one--sama ga atashi-tachi ni
Sayuri-oneesama has a job (S) with-us
for us, has there been any
other reason? Ever...? YOU ga aru TOKI tte
have-something-to-do time (quote)
sore IGAI ni nani-ka
that-(one) except something
arimashita kke ima made...
happened/had/was (?) hitherto
[Sayuri glares.]
Sayuri FX: _____
muka_
brunette 2: [off]
Hey, don't say that. ara dame yo--
Midori, you say that sort midori sonna koto itcha
of thing, it isn't a joke! that-kind-of-thing saying-(T)
jo--dan ni natte-nai desho!
in-jest/fun not-poss-become
6
[Sayuri rises and slams a palm down on the table. The other three girls
cringe back.]
Sayuri:
SHUT UP!! urusai_!!
_________ _________
Chitter, chatter! pi--chiku pa--chiku to
Sayuri hand-on-table FX: ___
ban
7
brunette 2:
But, Sayuri-oneesama. Was demo sayuri-oneesama ga
there a guy at our school but (S)
who's so tough to take down
that you actually have to atashi-tachi no TE o karinakya
ask us for help?! if-not-ask-us-for-helping-hand
otosenai hodo
can't-take/capture extent
TEgowai OTOKO tte
tough/unyielding guy (T)
uchi no GAKKOU ni imashita kke?!
at-our-school there-was (?)
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p 30 (172)
1
Midori (blonde):
So who is it this time, de KONKAI sayuri-one--sama no
to fall victim to... so this-time (nom)
DOKUGA ni kakaru...
fall-victim-to
I mean, the lucky guy ie o-MEgane ni kanau
to find favor with no win-a-person's-heart/find-favor-with
Sayuri-oneesama...
KOUFUKU na OTOKO tte yu-- no wa...
lucky/fortunate guy called (nom) (T)
Sayuri FX: ___
mu_
2
[A portrait of Kyousuke.]
narration:
Kasuga Kyousuke of high KOUTOU-BU 1-NEN #F#-GUMI
school class 1-F!! high-school-section 1st-year-F-group
KASUGA KYOUSUKE!!
3
[Sayuri theatrically raises both fists and glares off towards an imaginary
horizon. Behind her, the three girls at the table whisper among themselves.]
Sayuri:
The man who made me taste atashi ni HAJImete KUTSUJOKU o
humiliation for the first to-me for-first-time humiliation (O)
time!
AJIwawasete-kureta OTOKO!
made-(me)-to-taste man
brunette 2:
She doesn't have to say it; iwanakutatte itsu-mo yaru koto
it's something she always even-tho-not-say always do thing
does.
Playing dirty, right? kitanai ja nai nee~~~~
nasty/mean/unfair is-not (rhet)
girls FX: ________
hisohiso
4
[Exterior shot of a school building.]
boy 1: [off] ___
Would you go out with me? ore to tsukiatte-kurenai ka
with-me go-out-with-me (?)
5
[Sayuri's at it again. A suave-looking boy leans back against a tree, hands
in his pockets. Sayuri stands before him, casting her gaze down to the
ground on her right.]
boy 1:
I don't want to brag about konna koto JIMAN shitaku wa nai ga
it, but I'm student-body this-kind-of-thing not-want-to-boast but
president, and my grades are ___
always tops for the school ore tte SEITO KAICHOU da shi
year... I (T) student president am and-besides
SEISEKI wa itsu-mo GAKUNEN de
marks (T) always in-school-year
ICHIBAN da shi...
best are and-besides
Sayuri: ______
Oh my. How wonderful. maa suteki
But... NO! demo... iya!
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p 31 (173)
1
[As she walks away, she licks the tip of her pencil and opens up her little
black book. Behind her, the guy stares in shock at the palms of his hands.]
Sayuri:
Hmm... fumu...
This makes 10 guys... kore de 10-NIN...ka
with-this 10-people
______
I'd say that's about my KYOU no noruma wa kono kurai ni
quota for today... today 's a-norm* (T) to-about-this-many
shitoite... to
doing-(for-future-sake) (quote)
*
boy 1:
R-rejected... fu furareta...
___
Me! kono ore ga...
this I (S)
2
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]
Sayuri: [off]
Hello. konnichi wa
3
[Kyousuke and Madoka look up from the counter. Madoka pauses while wiping a
dish.]
Kyousuke: ____
Huh... You're... are... kimi wa
4
Sayuri FX: _____
niko_
Sayuri:
I thought you might be tabun koko daro-- to omotte...
here... maybe this-place poss-be thinking-that
5
Sayuri: [looking about]
Are you always here in itsu-mo kono MISE kite-ru
this shop? always/usually this-shop are-coming
n desu ka?
(explan) (?)
Kyousuke:
Sorta. maa ne
6
Sayuri:
Hmm... fu--n......
So you're on very friendly yappari NAKA i-- n desu ne
terms, aren't you. as-expected friendly-terms (explan) (rhet)
Sayuri FX: ________
jirojiro
[Kyousuke blushes from his seat at the counter. Madoka pretends to find
interest in wiping dishes.]
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p 32 (174)
1
Sayuri: [sultry, knowing look]
Just like... marude...
A couple of sweethearts. KOIBITO do--shi mitai
a-couple-of-lovers seem
2
[Madoka portrait.]
3
Kyousuke: [blushing]
Ehhh?! N-no way... e~~~~~~_ so sonnaa......
4
[Madoka looks off to one side, to find Master watching wide-eyed.]
Madoka FX: ______
chira_
5
Madoka:
This person seems to be kono HITO nani-ka
under some misunderstanding! this-person something
kanchigai shite-ru mitai ne!
is-misunderstanding seems (rhet)
Kasuga-kun and I "look like atashi to KASUGA-kun ga
a couple of sweethearts?!" I and (S)
KOIBITO do--shi ni mieru tte?!
couple-of-lovers (IO) appear (quote)
Kyousuke:
Eh?! e_
6
[Profile of Kyousuke--forced, sweaty smile.]
Sayuri: [off]
Huh? Am I mistaken? ara chigau no?
Madoka: [off]
Of course. mochiron
We have nothing to do with nan no KANKEI mo nai wa yo!!
each other!! what-kind-of have-nothing-to-do-with
Right, Kasuga-kun? nee KASUGA-kun
narration:
"Of course," she says... mochiron...... to kite wa...
of-course (quote) coming (T)
It's not that I was BETSU ni nani-ka o
expecting something particularly something (O)
really, but...
KITAI shite-ta wake ja nai ga...
was-in-expectation-of reason is-not but
_______
Somehow, I was naze-ka gakkari shite-shimau
disappointed... somehow am-disappointed-(finality)
boku de atta...
I was
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p 33 (175)
1
[Sayuri drops her gaze and smiles.]
Sayuri:
Really... I see! sou... wakarimashita!
2
[She leans in at Madoka. The two lock eyes.]
Sayuri:
Then, I'll be free to do ja atashi ga kono HITO no koto
whatever I like with him. then I (S) about-this-person
do-- shiyou to atashi no KATTE tte
what if-shall-do my-convenience (T)
koto yo ne
(nom)
Since you have nothing anata nan ni mo KANKEI nai
going on with him. you to-anything have-nothing-to-do-with
n da kara
(explan) that's-why
3
[She smiles, waves and exits.]
Sayuri:
Then, excuse me-e-e. sore ja SHITSUREI shima--su
door FX: _____
karan
4
[Kyousuke's pov of Madoka, who looks at him out of the corner of her eye.]
5
Kyousuke:
Wh-what the heck...? na nan na n da...
6
[Exterior shot of ABCB. Overlaid on this is a half-portrait of Sayuri, as she
walks away.]
narration:
If I go after him directly kono MAE mitai ni
like the last time, he the-last-time seems
probably won't fall easily...
matomo ni sematte-mo
in-one's-face even-tho-draw-near/
even-tho-force/urge
YOUI ni aitsu wa
easily/with-ease that-person (T)
ochinai darou...
poss-not-fall
If that's the case, then naraba kotchi datte KANGAe ga aru
I have a plan for that as if-it-is this-way even have-an-idea
well!!
tte mono yo_!!
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p 34 (176)
1
[Midori waits in the hallway.]
narration:
After school the next day... YOKUJITSU no HOUKAGO...
the-next-day 's after-school
Midori:
Are you Kasuga-san? KASUGA-san tte anata desu ka?
(T) you are (?)
2
Kyousuke:
Yes? hai?
3
Midori: [smiling]
Umm, Sayuri-sempai said ano-- sayuri-SEMPAI ga anata ni
she'd like to have a word uhh (S) by-you
with you.
YOUJI ga aru tte
business (S) have (quote)
Would you come over to HOKEN SHITSU made kite-itadakemasu ka
the Health Room? to-health-room could-come-(request) (?)
Kyousuke:
Eh? Sayuri...? e sayuri...?
4
[He ponders.]
Kyousuke:
Ahh, is it her...? aa ano KO ka...
a "V">
What could it be...? nan daro......?
5
[Elsewhere, the two brunettes chatter on school grounds. Behind them, Madoka
walks by.]
brunette 1:
What sort of guy *is* KASUGA KYOUSUKE tte ittai
Kasuga Kyousuke? (T) in-the-world
_yatsu_
donna OTOKO na no?
what-kind-of-guy is (?)
brunette 2:
Well, he's an ordinary and maa HEIBON na goku FUTSUU no
extremely average guy. common/ordinary extremely average 's
OTOKO no KO tte toko ne
boy (T) case
I wonder why Sayuri-sempai do--shite anna no ga
wants a guy like that... why that-kind-of (nom) (S)
i-- no ka na-- sayuri-SEMPAI...
okay I-wonder
6
[Madoka portrait--she stops to listen.]
7
brunette 2:
I don't think he's enough nani-mo konna kitanai SHUDAN
of a guy to justify taking anything this-kind-of dirty/nasty means
such dirty steps just to
capture him. TSUKAtte made otosu hodo
using as-far-as take/capture extent
no OTOKO ja nai to omou kedo na--
's guy is-not think-that but (rhet)
Anyway, we have to hurry tonikaku hayaku HOKEN SHITSU ni
and go to the health room, anyway quickly to-health-room
or she'll yell at us again.
ikanakutcha mata donararechau wa yo--
must-go again be-yelling
Let's go! ikimasho!
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p 35 (177)
1
[Madoka reflects.]
2
[Tight shot of a sign in a hallway.]
sign:
Health Room HOKEN SHITSU
3
[Inside, the two brunettes stand, one holding an instant camera. Sayuri sits
on one of the beds and begins to take off her school uniform.]
brunette 2: ______
The camera's ready. kamera no YOUI #OK# desu
camera s preparation is
poster:
Cavity Prevention Week BOU MUSHIBA SHUUKAN
prevent decayed-tooth week
A cavity is right there MUSHIBA wa anata no ushiro ni
behind you!! decayed-tooth (T) at-your-back
iru!!
is-there
4
[Brunette 2 starts snapping photos of Sayuri as she pulls down her skirt.]
brunette 2: _________
Oh! Sexy! o_ sekushi--!
camera FX: ______
pasha_
Sayuri skirt FX: _____
suru_
5
[Exterior view of a school building.]
camera FX: _____ _____
pasha pasha
brunette 2: [off]
Take off more!! motto nuide!!
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p 36 (178)
1
[The two girls gush as Sayuri--in bra and panties--strikes a standard
cheesecake pose.]
brunette 2: _______
You have a terrific figure, sempai sutairu SAIKOU!
Sempai! figure awesome
Take off more!! motto nuide_!!
Sayuri:
Really? soo?
camera FX: _____ _____
pasha pasha
2
[Sayuri pauses...]
camera FX: _____
pasha
Sayuri:
Hm?! n?!
3
[...and cuffs brunette 2 on the top of her head.]
Sayuri:
Hey, don't urge me on!! chotto nosenai de yo~~~~~~_!!
Sayuri FX: _____
boka_
4
[Sayuri crawls under the sheets of the bed, still glaring.]
Sayuri:
(Everything's set!) (JUMBI #OK#!)
5
[Kyousuke enters.]
door FX: _____
gara_
6
[He looks off-panel.]
Sayuri: [off]
I was waiting... matte-ta wa......
Kyousuke:
Huh? ha?
7
[Pov shifts. He stares in surprise. Sayuri sits up in bed. Mmm. Life is
good.]
Sayuri:
Come... Over here. kotchi ni...... kite
to-this-way coming
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p 37 (179)
1
[He cringes in surprise.]
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
dokin
2
Sayuri:
Hurry-y-y.... HAYAkuu~~~~~~
Kyousuke FX: _____
fura_
3
[Brunette 1 shoves Kyousuke in the back, sending him forward into Sayuri's
embrace. His head ends up on her chest.]
Sayuri:
Now! Take it!! IMA da!! tori na_
now is take-(a-photo)
brunette 1 FX: ___
don
4
[Kyousuke looks to the side to see brunette 2 snapping a flash photo.]
camera FX: _____
pasha
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p 38 (180)
1
[View pans up and away. Sayuri lies back and gleefully pulls him close. He's
perched in, uh, missionary position...]
Kyousuke: [to brunette girls]
Wh-what are you doing?!! na nani suru n da_!!
Sayuri:
Hurry-y-y! Take more! HAYAkuu motto totte!
soon more taking
camera FX: _____ ____ _____ ____
pasha ji-- pasha ji--
2
[Madoka appears at the door. Kyousuke turns to look back.]
door FX: _____
gara_
3
[His face is a mask of horror.]
narration:
A-Ayukawa! a...AYUKAWA!
4
[Madoka looks on, grimly.]
5
[She approaches, purposefully.]
narration:
I-is she going to hit me?! bu bunnagurareru_?!
Madoka FX:
tsukatsuka
6
[Ignoring Kyousuke, she leans in at Sayuri, looking concerned. Sayuri looks
up blankly.]
Kyousuke:
Eh!?! e_?!
Madoka:
Feeling sick? Are you all KARADA WARUi no? DAIJOUBU?!
right?! health bad all-right
Sayuri:
Huh? e
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p 39 (181)
1
[She touches Sayuri on her forehead.]
Madoka:
You don't seem to have a NETSU wa nai mitai da kedo
fever, but to be in such fever (T) not-have seems but
pain that you can't wear
clothes... KURUshikute FUKU
painful clothes
kite-rarenai to wa...
can't-be-worn however
This might be a horribly sugoi JUUBYOU ka mo shirenai wa ne
serious illness. horrible serious-illness
it-may-be
This is terrible! korya TAIHEN!
Sayuri:
Ah? a?
2
Madoka: [soft smile]
Well, anyway, I went and ma-- tomokaku HOKEN SHITSU no SENSEI
called for the health room well anyway health-room 's teacher
nurse, so it'll be all
right now! yonde-kite-ageta kara
went-and-called-(for-you) that's-why
mo-- DAIJOUBU yo!
now all-right
[Madoka waves a palm in the direction of the door. The nurse enters.]
3
[The three girls cringe in surprise, vexation or horror.]
Sayuri/brunette girls FX:
gu_
4
[Madoka watches with a smile.]
5
[Kyousuke and Madoka walk away from the health room. Madoka tosses her hair
back and looks unperturbed. Kyousuke looks back over his shoulder at the
health room doors, which have bounced violently out of their tracks.]
nurse: [off]
Well now! Let me have your sa------_ UDE o o-DAshi
arm so I can give you your well ! arm (O) lay-bare
shot!
chu--sha shimasu!
give-a-shot
Sayuri: [off]
Kyaaaaaa!! kya~~~~_!!
door FX: _____
batan
struggle FX: _____
dosun
sign:
Health Room HOKEN SHITSU
6
[A dark yet beautiful portrait of a defiant Sayuri, who holds a Polaroid pic
between two fingers.]
narration:
I-I'm not going to lose!! ma...MAkeru mon ka!!
get-the-worst-of-it/be-defeated
(rhetorical-question)
After all, I have this nantatte atashi ni wa
picture... after-all by-me (contrast)
kono SHASHIN ga aru n da kara...
this-picture (S) have (explan) that's-why
Just watch, tomorrow!! mite-nasai ASHITA o_!!
watch! tomorrow (O)
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p 40 (182)
1
[Madoka and Kyousuke walk home.]
Kyousuke: ___
Ahh, that surprised me. a-- bikkuri shita ore tekkiri...
I thought for sure... was-surprised I -sure
2
[He stops and turns to look at Madoka. She looks back with a soft smile.]
Madoka:
What? nani?
narration:
...that Ayukawa would just AYUKAWA ni hippatakareru
slap me... by-Ayukawa be-slapped
to bakari omotta kara...
just-thought-that that's-why
3
[Kyousuke portrait--face flushed.]
narration:
Why didn't she get mad? nande OKOnnakatta n darou?
why didn't-get-angry (poss-explan)
4
[His pov of Madoka. A profile as Madoka looks straight ahead.]
5
Madoka: [looking up at the sky]
You know... Yesterday... ano sa...... kinou
Kyousuke:
Eh?! e?!
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p 41 (183)
1
Madoka:
When I said we didn't have nan no KANKEI mo nai
anything to do with each what-kind-of have-nothing-to-do-with
other...
tte itta desho
poss-said-that
2
[Another profile view of Madoka.]
3
[His pov as she turns to look at him with a gentle smile.]
Madoka: _____
If you're worried about KI ni shite-tara gomen!
it, I'm sorry! if-be-worried-about sorry
4
Madoka: [turning away]
We were in front of others ano toki wa HITOMAE datta shi...
at the time... that-time (T) in-public were and-besides
narration:
Eh!?! Th-then... e_?! ji jaa...
5
[Beaming a smile, she turns and gives him a shove on the shoulder.]
Madoka: _kurasume--to_
Well, for a classmate, I maa KYUUYUU to shite wa
was acting like a stranger, for-a-classmate (T)
wasn't I?!
mizukusakatta yo ne!
was-reserved/distant
_____ _____
Sorry. I'm sorry. gomen gomen
Madoka FX: ___
don
narration: __ _kurasume--to_
A... A classmate, huh... ku... KYUUYUU ka...
6
[He loses his balance and totters on the edge of the pond.]
Kyousuke:
ottotto
7
[Smiling merrily, Madoka leans forward and gently gives him a tap...]
Madoka FX: ____
chon
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p 42 (184)
1
[...which sends him into the pond. She smiles over her shoulder as she walks
off.]
Madoka:
Oh. Sorry! a--ra SHITSUREI!
narration:
She wouldn't be forgiving yappari tada de yurushite-kureru
me for nothing, after all. after-all for-nothing forgiving-(me)
hazu nai yo na
ought-not
2
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]
narration: _______
The next day... At ABCB. YOKUJITSU... abakabu
3
[Seated at the counter, Kyousuke looks over the stash of Polaroids laid out
before him. Madoka casts a glance his way while passing by with a tray.]
Kyousuke:
(It's a good thing I (kinou no SHASHIN dosakusa ni magirete
collected the pictures yesterday 's photos in-confusion-of-the-
during all that confusion moment
yesterday...)
KAISHUU shita kara
collected that's-why
yokatta yo-- na mono no...)
was-good looks-like thing
4
[Tight shot of a photo of Sayuri alone in a cheesecake pose.]
narration:
But... shikashi...
That girl is not too shabby, ano KO mo yoku yaru yo na--
either... that-girl too well do
5
[He lifts up the photos and scans through them.]
narration:
Huh?! I-it isn't here!! are_ na nai!!
6
narration:
The photo where we were ano KO to dakiatte-ru
locked in each other's with-that-girl be-embracing
arms isn't here!!
SHASHIN ga nai_!!
photo (S) isn't-here
Ayukawa knows, so that's AYUKAWA wa SHItte-ru kara i-- kedo
okay, but if it attracts (T) is-knowing since okay but
the attention of others...
hoka no HITO no ME ni furetara...
other-people 's if-attract-notice
Then it becomes serious!! erai koto ni naru_!!
into-serious-thing turn-into
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p 43 (185)
1
[Sayuri, in school uniform, bursts in through the door.]
door FX: _____
karan
2
Sayuri:
.......... ..........
Hello. konnichi wa
Sayuri FX: _____
niko_
3
[From the counter, Madoka, Hikaru and Kyousuke look up.]
4
Sayuri: [holding up a photo]
Everyone! mina-san!
Do you know what this photo kono SHASHIN nan da ka wakarimasu?!
means?! this-photo somehow-(or-other) understand
5
[Kyousuke looks on in fear and surprise.]
Kyousuke:
(Damn!! (shimatta!!
Maybe that's...) hyottoshitara are wa...)
maybe that-(one) (T)
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p 44 (186)
1
[Hikaru portrait--surprise. In the background, Master looks on as well.]
2
[Madoka portrait--wide-eyed and a bit nervous.]
3
[Kyousuke portrait--mouth open and nervous.]
4
[He visualizes the photo in question, and blushes.]
narration:
That picture where we're in ano dakiatte-ru SHASHIN da!!
each other's arms!! that be-embracing photo is
5
[He stares down at the pictures in his hands, then over at Sayuri.]
Kyousuke:
(Th-that's it. (so so-- da
Anyway, no matter what, I tonikaku nan demo i-- kara
have to pull a switch with anyway everything okay
the Power!!) _chikara_
NOURYOKU de irekaechae!!)
by-Power exchange
6
[The photo he holds in one hand dematerializes.]
photo teleport FX: ____
shu_
7
[The photo in Sayuri's hand dematerializes and another one immediately takes
its place.]
Sayuri: ___ ___ ___
Heh! heh! heh! fu_ fu_ fu_
I won't say a thing. nani-mo iwanai wa
nothing -say
Gaze upon this in silence. damatte kore o
without-a-word this-(one) (O)
mite cho--dai
seeing be-presented-with
photo teleport FX: ____
shu_
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p 45 (187)
1
[Dramatically, she shoves the picture forward, towards Hikaru and Master.
Hikaru is surprised, but Master is astounded.]
Sayuri:
Now... Think it over!! saa tokkurito~~~~~~!!
attentively/ponder
2
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]
Master/Hikaru: [off]
OHHHH!! o~~~~_!!
Stunning!! kyo~~~~~~retsu_!!
intense/strong
3
[Sayuri glances at the photo in her hand. The cheesecake pose.]
Sayuri:
Eh? e?
4
[She cuffs brunette 2 on the top of her head again.]
Sayuri:
That's not it! chigau ja nai!
C'mon... Hurry, hurry. sa~~~~~~ HAYAku HAYAku o-DAshi!
Out with it!
What?! You don't have it?! nani_ nai?!
_____
You lamebrain!! kono boke_!!
Sayuri FX: _____
poko_
brunette 2:
?! ?!
[Hikaru and Madoka watch the scene with eyes grown large. Kyousuke wipes his
face with a hankie and stares down at the incriminating photo in his hands.]
narration:
In the nick of time... KAN'IPPATSU...
This photo... I'd better kono SHASHIN... SOKU
dig a hole and bury it this-photo on-the-spot
right now...
ANA hotte umenakya...
hole dig-(and) must-bury
Right? ne
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