Kimagure Orange Road
"The Kiss in the First Dream of the New Year!"
Volume 11, Story 5
WB Volume 6, Story 14
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Dan Root
Thomas Wyatt
Last revision : 08-19-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 267 (87) are only in the WBs!
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p 267 (87)--TITLE PAGE
[Hikaru smiles gently at us from her perch atop a railing.]
MAIN TITLE (at top)
The Kiss in the First Dream HATSUYUME #KISS#!
of the New Year! first-dream-of-the-New-Year
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
Longing for a Dream-Tinged YUME IRO MIRAI ni akogarete...
Future... in-dream-colored-future longing-for
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p 268 (88)
1
[Kyousuke lies asleep underwater. Bubbles rise to the surface.]
narration:
As I was slowly rising from KOKOCHI yoi madoromi no NAKA kara
the depths of a pleasant pleasant from-within-nap/doze
nap...
yukkuri to FUJOU shite-kuru to...
slowly/leisurely when-start-to-rise-to-
the-surface
2
Kyousuke stomach FX: [off] ____
guu_
3
[He sits up in bed, groggy. He's dressed in pajamas.]
narration:
I was awakened by the sound o-naka no OTO de ME ga sameta...
of my stomach... by-sound-of-stomach was-awakened
1986--the New Year... 1986-NEN SHOUGATSU------
4
[Tight shot of his feet as he walks down the hallway.]
narration:
I didn't have my first HATSUYUME ga minakatta
dream of the New Year... first-dream-of-New-Year (S) not-dreamed/saw
Kyousuke:
It's once a year... ICHINEN ni ICHIDO da mon naa
in-one-year once is reason (rhet)
I kinda feel cheated. nanka SON shita KIBUN
somewhat lost/suffered-a-loss feeling
5
[He pushes open the door to the kitchen and sticks his sleepy face in. He
smells something nice.]
narration: _____ _chi_
Dad and the others have gone oyaji-tachi wa oji--chan IE e
to ojiichan's place... dad (and-assoc) (T) to-ojiichan's-place
itte-ru shi...
are-going and-besides
So once again I'm all alone matamata SHOUGATSU hitoribotchi
on New Year's. again New-Year solitary
Kyousuke:
Hm? n?
FX: _____
pu~~n
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p 269 (89)
1
[Full-portrait of Madoka, decked out in Playboy bunny outfit--shoulderless
and backless outfit, white cuffs at her wrists, white collar and black
bowtie around her neck, dark nylons, bunny ears and cottontail. She holds
a saucepan in one hand, stirring the contents with a spoon in the other. She
smiles at us over her shoulder.]
2
Madoka: _______
Happy New Year, Darling! akemashite omedetou da--rin!
opening congratulations
[Kyousuke staggers back against the wall, stunned.]
Kyousuke FX: ___
don
3
[His pov. Smiling, she bows slightly, presenting a tray to us. On the tray
is a bowl and pair of chopsticks, a bottle of sake and a cup. But your
attention is probably riveted to her impressive cleavage.]
Madoka:
Will it be o-zouni or o-zouni tabemasu soretomo o-toso?
o-toso?* eat or-else
is rice cakes in a
vegetable soup; is spiced sake.>
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p 270 (90)
1
[View shifts. From behind her we see that Kyousuke has collapsed to the floor,
back against the wall. He stares up at her with jaw dropped.]
narration:
Wh-what kind of get-up is na nan no mane da AYUKAWA?!
this, Ayukawa?! what-kind-of pretend is
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ ____ ____ ____ ____
2
narration: _______
Oh. Aha! I see! a haha--n so-- ka_!!
___
I bet I'm still... kitto ore mada...
surely I still
Asleep!! nete-ru n da_!!
am-sleeping (explan)
3
[Seated at the kotatsu, he holds out his cup. Madoka kneels at his side and
pours sake.]
Madoka:
Here you go, kind Sir. do--zo o-hitotsu
if-you-please (hon)-one
Kyousuke:
Oh! Oh! ottottotto_
narration:
Then... This is my first jaa kore wa HATSUYUME da!!
dream of the New Year!! then this-(one) (T) 1st-dream is
4
[With a somewhat goofy smile, he eats his o-zouni. Madoka kneels at his
side, looking a bit sadly at him.]
Kyousuke:
Wowww... Although it's iya~~~~_ YUME to wa ie
a dream, this is good no ! dream nevertheless
fortune at the start of
the New Year. SHINNEN so-- so--
at-the-beginning-of-the-New-Year
korya ENGI ga ii
this luck/omen (S) good
Kyousuke FX:
hagu hagu
Madoka:
Huh? This isn't a dream. ara YUME ja nai wa yo
dream is-not
5
[Her pov as he turns and eyes her skeptically.]
Kyousuke:
Oh, come on...! mata mataa!!_
___
You're saying that just to so-- yatte ore o odokaso-- to shitee
try and scare me. doing-like-that me (O) trying-to-scare
Ayukawa wouldn't be doing AYUKAWA ga konna koto
something like this for me. (S) this-kind-of-thing
shite-kureru hazu nai ja nai
do-(for-me) not-likely is-not
6
Kyousuke:
Don't be silly! amai ne!
___
You won't fool me with this konna koto de ore wa
sorta thing! by-this-kind-of-thing I (T)
damasarenai zee
not-be-deceived !
See-ee? This doesn't hurt. ho~~ra itakunai
[With a wide grin he brings the sake bottle down on his head. Madoka watches
with surprise.]
sake bottle on head FX: ____
gon_
7
[Tight shot of Kyousuke as he staggers under the blow.]
8
[He hits the floor and stares up goofily at the ceiling. Madoka kneels over
him with surprise and concern.]
narration:
I-it hurts...!! i itai...!!
Kyousuke FX: ___
do_
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p 271 (91)
1
[@Madoka transforms herself back into Akane, who remains in a bunny outfit.
She looks down at the unconscious Kyousuke with a look of chagrin.]
Akane transformation FX: ___
fu_
Akane:
Carefree fellow... omedetai yatsu......
2
[He awakes and lifts his head up sleepily.]
Kyousuke:
(Is it so sweet?) (sonna ni amai?)
3
[This and the next 5 panels are black-bordered, denoting a dream. Here, we
have Kyousuke's pov of a receptive Madoka.]
4
[Kyousuke leans over and prepares to kiss his lady love. Both have their eyes
closed.]
5
[A white panel.]
kiss FX: ____
chu_
6
[Smiling, Hikaru sticks her head in through the door. Kyousuke looks up in
surprise from his position above Madoka who's lying on the floor under him.]
Hikaru:
Sempai! sempai
Kyousuke FX: ____
gyo_
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p 272 (92)
1
Kyousuke: [horrified]
H-Hikaru-chan!! hi hikaru-chan_!!
2
[Enraged, Hikaru belts him one on the cheek.]
Hikaru:
What are you doing?!! nani sun no yo!!
Hikaru FX: ______
patsu_
3
[End of dream. Kyousuke, lying on the floor, groggily comes to. @Hikaru in
a bunny outfit is gently shaking him awake.]
@Hikaru:
Pull yourself--pull yourself shikkari shikkari shite sempai!!
together, Sempai!!
Kyousuke: ___
Ah! ha_
4
[He slams himself back away from her and against a wall. @Hikaru smiles in
merriment.]
Kyousuke:
H-Hikaru-chan!! hi hikaru-chan!!
Kyousuke FX: _____
suza_
5
[Akane transforms back to herself, dressed in blouse, jacket, skirt and socks.
She stands and smiles down at him.]
Akane:
See?! It isn't a dream! ne_ YUME ja nai desho_!
! dream is-not poss-be
Akane transformation FX: ___
fu_
6
[Kyousuke looks up befuddled and wide-eyed.]
7
[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]
Kyousuke: [off]
AKANE-E-E!! akane~~_!!
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p 273 (93)
1
[He gets to his feet, fists clenched and angry.]
Kyousuke:
What the heck are you ittai do-- yu-- tsumori
trying to pull?! in-the-world what-kind-of-intention
na n da!
are (explan)
Akane:
I'd heard you were alone, hitori da tte ki--te-ta kara
so I came by. 1-person are was-hearing-that that's-why
kite-ageta no yo
came-(for-you)
Anyhow, I figured you do--se roku na mon
wouldn't have eaten anything anyhow nothing-decent
decent, right?
tabete-nai daro-- to OMOtte ne
poss--have-eaten thinking-that (rhet)
2
[Smiling, she raises an index finger.]
Akane:
Well? It was a pretty doo? sabishii anta ni wa
considerate production for how lonely/sad to-you (contrast)
a lonely person like you,
wasn't it? nakanaka KI no ki--ta ENSHUTSU
quite considerate production
datta desho
poss-was
Kyousuke: [calmly] ___
Aren't you just making fun ore o ochokutte-ru dake
of me? me (O) are-making-fun-of only
na n ja nai no~~
are (explan/neg) (?)
3
[Akane gazes down, looking a bit miffed. Kyousuke looks over at her with a
soft smile.]
narration:
Well... With Akane here, maa... TASHIka ni akane ga
I've certainly avoided to-be-sure (S)
being alone on the New
Year... kite-kurete hitori kkiri no
coming-(for-me) 1-person just 's
SHOUGATSU dake wa manugareta...
the-New-Year only (T) avoided
4
[He stops and reflects, touching two fingers to his lips.]
Kyousuke:
But... shikashi......
_____
That felt real... ano riaru na KANSHOKU...
that-realistic feeling
What I saw when I fainted IMA KIZETSU shita toki ni mita no wa
just now was no doubt a now fainted at-time saw (nom) (T)
premonition dream!!
magiremonaku YOCHIMU da!!
evidently/no-doubt premonition-dream is
5
Kyousuke:
(And on top of that, *in* (shikamo NAIYOU ga......
that dream... moreover contents (S)
____
I *KISSED* Ayukawa!!) AYUKAWA to no kisu!!)
with-Ayukawa (nom) kiss
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ ____ ____ ____ ____
Kyousuke FX: _____
gokun
6
[Looking back over her shoulder, Akane heads out the door.]
Akane:
Then, now I'll... ja atashi wa kore de...
then I (T) now/with-this
Kyousuke:
Ehh?! You're going already? e~~~~_ mo-- itchau no
! already go-(finality)
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p 274 (94)
1
[Smiling, she takes him by the arm.]
Akane:
That was a joke. to yu-- no wa jo--dan yo
say-that (nom) (T) joking
C'mon, let's go! saa ikimasho_!
Kyousuke:
Huh?! Where to? he_ doko e?
2
Akane: _chi_
A New Year's party at hikaru-chan IE de SHINNENKAI!!
Hikaru-chan's place!! at-Hikaru's-place New-Year's-party
I heard Madoka-chan will madoka-chan mo kite n da tte_!
also be there! too coming (explan) (quote)
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
dokin
3
[Exterior view of some houses, including the Hiyama residence.]
4
[His pov. Hikaru kneels in the foreground; Madoka kneels in the background
near the kotatsu. Both turn to smile at him.]
Hikaru:
Sempai, welcome!! sempai yo--koso_!!
5
[He stops and stares at the vision before him. Akane smiles and chats with
Hikaru and Madoka.]
narration:
Oh my God... korya odoroita...
It seems that--only here-- koko dake mo-- HARU ni natta
spring has already arrived... only-here already became-spring
mitai da na...
seems
Akane:
Happy New Year, madoka-cha~~n omedeto_
Madoka-cha-a-an!
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p 275 (95)
1
[Kyousuke continues to stand and watch in silence. Akane playfully takes
Madoka's hand. Madoka smiles nervously.]
Kyousuke FX:
ji--_
2
[His pov. Madoka notices he's staring at her.]
3
Akane:
Hey-y-y! Sit down, hora-- KYOUSUKE suwannasai yo
Kyousuke!
Kyousuke: _____
gohon
4
[Seated now, he has his cup filled by Hikaru.]
Hikaru: [slurring]
Here y'go, kind Sir. doozon o-hitotsu
Kyousuke:
Ah, thank you. a korya do--mo
narration:
Hikaru-chan's drunk... hikaru-chan yotte-ru...
5
[Hikaru suddenly turns to Madoka, who looks up with surprise.]
Hikaru:
By the way, Madoka-san!! tokoro de madoka-san_!!
Madoka:
Yes? hai
6
[Madoka's pov. Hikaru gives her a knowing smile.]
Hikaru:
Madoka-san, what do you madoka-san SEMPAI no koto
think of Sempa-a-ai? about-Sempai
do-- OMOimasuu?
what think
7
[Split panel. On top, Kyousuke snorts out the sake he's drinking. Below
is Hikaru's pov of Madoka, who looks back without expression, but with a
slight blush.]
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p 276 (96)
1
[With a smile, Hikaru clings to Kyousuke's arm. Kyousuke flinches slightly
away.]
Hikaru: ______
Isn't Sempai wonderful! SEMPAI tte suteki desho~~~~_!
(T) wonderful poss-be
Akane:
Hikaru-chan's pretty drunk, hikaru-chan zuibun yotte-ru
isn't she. quite is-getting-drunk
no ne~~
(rhet)
2
[With face flushed and beaming, she lifts up an index finger.]
Hikaru:
All right. Today is New yoshi KYOU wa o-SHOUGATSU da shi
Year's, so I'll loan all-right today (T) New-Year's is and
Sempai especially to you,
Madoka-san! TOKUBETSU ni madoka-san ni SEMPAI o
especially to-Madoka (O)
kashite-agemasu!
loaning/renting-(to-her)
3
[Madoka facial portrait--a gentle smile.]
4
[Kyousuke facial portrait--wide-eyed surprise.]
5
Madoka: [getting up, eyes closed]
Thank you, Hikaru. arigatou hikaru
Madoka stand up FX: ___
su_
[Kyousuke staggers back, face in shock.]
Kyousuke FX: _____
giku_
6
[Pausing at the door, Madoka looks back at him over her shoulder. Kyousuke
pivots his head from one girl to the other. Hikaru beams encouragement.]
Madoka:
C'mon. Let's go, saa ikimashou KASUGA-kun
Kasuga-kun. well shall-go
Hikaru:
So long. Do your best, itte-rassha~~i gambatte ne!
'kay!
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p 277 (97)
1
[He visualizes his dream--his lips scant millimeters away from Madoka's.]
narration:
S-so it's this a-after ya...yappari ko kore wa...
all... after-all this-(one) (T)
2
[Smiling merrily, Madoka hands him a mixing bowl.]
Madoka:
Here. Hold this. hai kore motte
this-(one) holding/taking
Kyousuke:
Eh? e
3
[Holding vegetables against her chest, she talks to herself. Kyousuke
watches her.]
Madoka: ______ ________
A carrot, onion... ninjin hitotsu tamanegi ga......
carrot one onion (S)
Kyousuke:
O-ohh... na nan da...
It's this sorta thing, hm... ko-- yu-- koto ka...
4
[Wearing an unintentionally sultry look, she leans her face towards his. He
flinches, eyes wide.]
Madoka:
Huh? What do you mean, e? nani ko-- yu-- koto tte
"this sorta thing?" what this-kind-of-thing (quote)
narration:
Even Ayukawa's... AYUKAWA mo...
Drunk! yotte-ru!
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
dokin
5
Kyousuke FX: _____
gokun
Kyousuke:
(Sheesh... Maybe, just (korya... moshika shite moshika suru to
maybe... Like this...) it's-possible maybe
kono mama......)
this-unchanged-state
6
[Madoka brings a tiny bowl to her lips and licks the rim.]
Madoka FX: _____
pero_
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p 278 (98)
1
[View pulls back. She stands at the kitchen counter, tasting something in a
pot. He stands about 2 meters away and watches her.]
Madoka:
Maybe... A bit sweet. chotto... amai ka na
a-bit sweet I wonder
2
[Closeup of Madoka, her eyes closed, tiny bowl raised near her lips.]
3
[Kyousuke blushes and involuntarily extends out his tongue.]
Kyousuke FX: _____
gokun
Kyousuke:
Looks sweet... amasou...
4
[She looks at him with a soft smile.]
Madoka:
Would you like a taste? AJIMI shite-miru?
sampling try-to-do
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
dokin
Kyousuke: [embarrassed] __ __ __
Eh? N-no. Don't be absurd! e i iya messo-- mo nai ha ha ha
Ha ha ha.
5
[Isolated shot of dishes stacked on a high shelf behind sliding glass panels.]
Madoka: [off]
Oh yeah, that's right. a so-- so--
Could you get the plates TANA no UE no o-SARA totte-kureru?
from the shelf up there? shelf 's above plates get-(for-me)
Kyousuke: [off]
S-sure. h hai
6
[He extends his arms up. Madoka is busy chopping vegetables.]
Kyousuke:
Urg... yotto to...
Can't reach... todokanai...
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p 279 (99)
1
[He crackles with the Power.]
Kyousuke:
(All right... Now's the (yoshi konna toki koso
time to use the Power...) all-right this-kind-of-time indeed
_chikara_
NOURYOKU o TSUKAeba...)
if-use-the-Power
2
[Madoka's skirt blows up high, revealing her panties.]
Madoka:
KYAA! kyaa_
Madoka skirt FX: ___
ba_
3
[Kyousuke looks back over his shoulder at her, face flushed and nervous.]
narration:
H-huh!?! e ee_?!
Kyousuke FX:
ji~~~~_
4
[Unlike the premonition dream, it is an angry Madoka who belts him on the
cheek.]
Madoka:
What are you doing?!! nani sun no yo!!
Madoka FX: ______
patsu_
narration:
N-no. I didn't mean to do chi chigau sonna tsumori ja......
that... mistaken in-that-kind-of-intention
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p 280 (100)
1
[Hand to injured cheek, he stares up at the shelf of plates.]
narration: _chikara_
Th-the Power... chi NOURYOKU ga...
Kyousuke FX: ________
tsu----n
2
[Once again, he crackles with the Power.]
Kyousuke: ___________
(Strange. Isn't my control (okashii kontoro--ru ga kikanai no ka?!)
working?!) strange control (S) isn't-effective
3
[The plates start shaking against the closed glass panel.]
plates FX: ____ ____ ____
gata gata gata
4
[The glass panel shatters and plates come flying out at them.]
flying plates FX: ____ ___ ____
shu_ shu shu_
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p 281 (101)
1
[He tackles Madoka to the floor. The plates sail over their heads and shatter
against the wall.]
shattered plates FX:
gachan parin parin gacha_
Kyousuke:
LOOK OUT!! abunai!!
Kyousuke/Madoka FX: ___
do_
2
[Madoka ends up on her back. His chin comes to rest on her right breast.]
Kyousuke: [eyes wide] ___
Ah! ha_
3
[He looks up at the devastation.]
Madoka:
Wh-what's... This? na nani... IMA no?
what now 's
narration:
Ahh, I was surprised. a-- bikkuri shita
_chikara_
It looks like I can't NOURYOKU ga ZENZEN
control my Power at all... Power (S) -at-all
___________
kontoro--ru dekinai mitai...
can't-control seems
Madoka:
W-was it an earthquake or ji...JISHIN demo atta
something? earthquake or-something there-was
n ja nai no~~~~
(explan) (?)
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p 282 (102)
1
[Pov looking up at him. His face flushes and he stares down at her.]
2
[She looks up at him with eyes grown wide.]
3
[Her face grows a soft and a little inviting.]
4
Kyousuke:
Is it so... Sweet? sonna ni... amai?
so-much sweet
5
[Lying on top of her, he gazes into her eyes.]
Madoka:
Huh?! e_
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p 283 (103)
1
[Overhead view looking down on the two. Madoka lies on her back, surrounded
by shattered dishes. Kyousuke is perched over her.]
narration:
J-just as in that a...ano YOCHI-MU no toori...
premonition dream... that premonition-dream just-as
2
[They stare into each other's eyes. His lips get closer to their
long-cherished goal.]
narration:
Finally, with Ayukawa... tsui ni AYUKAWA to......
finally with-Ayukawa
3
[They close their eyes just before their lips are about to meet.]
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p 284 (104)
1
[With a smile, Hikaru sticks her head in the kitchen. Kyousuke does a rapid
roll to the side as Madoka sits up abruptly, her back to Hikaru. Both blush
deeply.]
Hikaru:
SEMPAI!! sempai!!
Madoka FX:
pyon
Kyousuke FX: ________
gorogoro
2
[Hikaru enters the kitchen, smiling at Madoka. Madoka nervously smiles back.
Kyousuke remains lying on his back on the floor. I think his heart stopped.]
Hikaru:
Madoka-saaan... Finished madoka-saan o-RYOURI dekimashitaa~~_?!
cooking?!
Kyousuke: ____ __ ____
ha-- ha zeii
3
[Hikaru slips on a broken plate...]
Hikaru:
Ah! a
Hikaru FX: ______
tsuru_
4
[...and pitches forward. Kyousuke is on his side, on the spot where she's
about to hit.]
Hikaru: ___ ___
to_ to_
5
[He turns to look back at Hikaru, just as she's about to land on him.]
6
[Her forehead comes to rest against his lips. Both pairs of eyes go wide with
surprise.]
Kyousuke/Hikaru FX: ____
chu_
narration:
Th-this is... That ko...kore wa ano YOCHI-MU...
premonition dream... this-(one) (T) that-premonition-dream
It seems that Ayukawa and AYUKAWA to hikaru-chan GYAKU
Hikaru-chan were reversed! and opposite
datta mitai!
were seems
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p 285 (105)
1
[Hikaru sits up and stares in wonder up at the ceiling. She touches a hand
to her forehead.]
Hikaru:
Oh my! maa_
2
[Akane, face flushed, walks into the kitchen. Hikaru turns and smiles at her
in embarrassment. Kyousuke's busy contemplating events.]
Akane:
Ohh... otto~~~~
You show-offs! misetsukete-kureru ja nai!
showing-off-(to-me) is-not
Akane FX: _____
fura_
narration: _chikara_
Come to think of it, there so-- ieba NOURYOKU no CHOUSHI
was something strange about come-to-think-of-it Power 's condition
the Power...
okashikatta mon na...
was-strange thing
Hikaru: __ __ __
Oh no... Ha ha ha. iya~~ ha ha ha
Kyousuke:
(..........) (..........)
3
[Exterior shot of the Hiyama residence. A pair of kites fly overhead.]
Hikaru: [off]
Kyaaaa! kya~~~~_
____
Sempai made the first kiss SEMPAI ni SHINSHUN HATSU kisu
of the New Year!! by-Sempai the-New-Year first-kiss
sarechatta~~~~~~_!!
was-done/made-(finality)
____ ____
kya_ kya_
narration:
1986... 1986 NEN----
At the beginning of the SHINSHUN so--so-- nogashita
New Year, I let an enormous start-of-the-New-Year failed-to-catch/
fish get away. allowed-to-escape
--Kyousuke
SAKANA wa OOkii desu KYOUSUKE
fish (T) huge is
3 (inset 1)
[In the kitchen with Madoka again, Kyousuke steals and samples some food off
a plate. Blushing, he eyes her backside. Madoka is busy at the counter,
chopping food.]
Kyousuke:
D-delicious! o...oishii_!
Sure enough, Ayukawa, your yappari AYUKAWA no RYOURI wa
cooking is awesome... sure-enough 's cooking (T)
SAIKOU da ne~~~~
awesome is (rhet)
Kyousuke FX: _____
hyoi paku_
Madoka:
.......... ..........
Madoka FX: ___ ___
ton ton
3 (inset 2)
[Turning, kitchen knife raised high, Madoka addresses him as though he was a
child. He flinches away.]
Madoka: _________
We... bokuu~~~~
Madoka:
...don't sneak bites when no tsumamigui shinai desho_
one's looking now, do we! poss-not-eat-when-no-one's-about
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