Kimagure Orange Road
"Don't Hypnotize Me!"
Volume 11, Story 4
WB Volume 6, Story 13
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Thomas Wyatt
Dan Root
Scott Henry
Last revision : 08-19-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 247 (67) are only in the WBs!
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p 247 (67)--TITLE PAGE
[Half-portrait of Madoka. She faces us, lying on her side in bed, dressed in
a slip with one strap down off her shoulder.]
MAIN TITLE (at top)
Don't Hypnotize Me! SAIMINJUTSU o kakenai de!
don't-hypnotize
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
The Mysterious Fountain of setsunaku hisoka ni
Your Breast, That I, with painfully/heart-rendingly secretly
Heart-Rending Pain, Secretly
Want to Gaze at... mitsumete-itai
want-to-be-gazing-(at)
anata no MUNE no SHIMPI no IZUMI...
your breast/ 's mysterious fountain/
heart spring
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p 248 (68)
1
[Overhead view looking down on the Kasuga household. Kurumi happily skips
over to Manami, who's dutifully washing dishes. Takashi is on the phone.]
narration:
New Year's Eve, 1985... 1985 NEN OUmisoka----
year New-Year's-Eve
Kurumi:
Hey, hey, Manami-chan. ne-- ne-- manami-chan
Do you have a minute? chotto de i-- kara
Manami:
Grrrr! I'm busy now. moo--_ IMA isogashi-- kara
! now busy that's-why
Later, later. ato de ato de
2
Kurumi:
Then, otousan. ja oto--san
Takashi:
Later, later. ato de ato de
3
[Kurumi looks over at her brother, who looks up from a book he's reading.]
Kurumi:
Then... All that's left ja... nokoru wa...
is...
4
[She smiles and raises a hand.]
Kurumi: ____
Yo! Idle person. iyo_! himaJIN
Kyousuke: [walking away]
Well, well... Ahh, sate to a-- isogashi isogashi
busy, busy.
5
Kurumi:
I'm, like, really interested atashi ne--_ IMA SAIMINJUTSU ni
in hypnotism now. I (rhet) now in-hypnotism
kotte n da--
being-engrossed-in (explan)
Oniichan, you look like oni--chan tte kekko--
you're rather easy to put (T) quite
under, huh?!
kakari -yasu -so-- ne--_
look-as-if-easy-to-fall-into (rhet)
Kyousuke: [wincing]
No way your hypnotism omae no SAIMINJUTSU nanka
stuff would work... your hypnotism the-likes-of
kiku hazu ga na...
work cannot/ought-not
6
[With a smile, Kurumi taps her left forefinger against the center of
Kyousuke's forehead. He freezes, eyes gone wide.]
forehead FX: ____
chon
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p 249 (69)
1
[Kurumi's expression grows dark. With forefinger raised, she crackles with
the Power.]
Kurumi:
I touched the secret spot DAI -MIN to yu-- SAIMINJUTSU ni
called "Daimin" that
causes one to easily be kakari-yasui HIKOU o
hypnotized... easy-to-fall-into secret-spot (O)
tsuita...
touched
Now, you're a dog!! omae wa sude ni INU ni natte-iru!!
you (T) already dog are-becoming
2
[Kyousuke facial portrait--wide-eyed blank look.]
3
[He drops to the ground and gazes up at Kurumi.]
Kyousuke: _____ ____
Woo... Woof! u~~~~ wan_!
Kurumi:
Hooray-y-y!! yatta----_!!
[Surprised, Manami turns to look.]
4
Kurumi:
Next, Matsumoto Noriko!! tsugi wa MATSUMOTO NORIKO!!
next (T)
[Under falling streamers and confetti, Kyousuke sings into his fist.]
Kyousuke: [singing]
Frie-e-ends... toomodachi no~~
5
Kurumi: ____
An idiot! aho_!
[He does a striking imitation of a congenital idiot.]
Kyousuke:
.......... ..........
6
Kurumi:
All right, that's it. yoshi koko made
all-right up-to-here/thus-far
Kurumi handclap FX: ___
pan
Kyousuke: ___
Ah?! ha_?!
7
Kurumi:
Pretty much like this! zatto konna mon yo!
roughly this-kind-of-thing
Kyousuke: [staring at his hands]
C-can't be...?! ma masaka...?!
8
[Kurumi stares in worry into the face of a wincing Kyousuke.]
Kurumi:
Huh? Oh, no! ara ikenai!
___
The idiot part wasn't aho ga tokete-nai
erased. idiot (S) not-be-dispelling/clearing
Kyousuke:
Oh shuddup!! jaka--shi--!!
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p 250 (70)
1
Kyousuke:
Hmm... So I really was u~~mu HONTOU ni kakerareru nante...
hypnotized... am-hypnotized the-likes-of
And on top of that, by the shikamo konna yatsu ni
likes of her. moreover by-this-kind-of-fellow
Kurumi: _____
e_hen!
Manami: _chikara_
We have the Power, so maybe atashi-tachi tte NOURYOKU ga aru kara
that's why it's so easy to we (T) have-the-Power that's-why
hypnotize someone.
SAIMINJUTSU tte kake-yasui no ka mo ne
easy-to-hypnotize maybe (rhet)
2
Kyousuke: ___
I'll try it, too. ore mo yatte-miyo--
I too shall-try-to-do
____
Turn into a cat!! neko ni nare!!
[Kyousuke touches Kurumi on her forehead.]
forehead FX: ____
chon
3
Kurumi: [staring at the ceiling]
.......... ..........
Manami:
Looks like it didn't work. ki--te-nai mitai ne
not-effective seems
Kyousuke:
Huh? are?
4
[He pokes her in the forehead again and again. Kurumi shows amusement.]
Kyousuke: _____
Turn into a koala! koara ni nare_!
Into Kouchi Rie! KOUCHI rie ni_!
fingertip FX:
tsun tsun
Kurumi FX: ____ ____
kara kara
Kurumi:
No way. No way. nan no nan no
5
Kurumi: [smiling]
Well, maybe this sort of maa oni--chan ni wa
highbrow trick is a little by-oniichan (contrast)
too much for oniichan, _________
hmm? ko-- yu-- haiburo-- na WAZA wa
this-kind-of highbrow trick/ (T)
performance
____
chotto muri ka mo ne
a-bit impossible it-may-be (rhet)
Manami:
Oniichan, phone call from oni--chan hikaru-san kara DENWA yo
Hikaru-san. from-Hikaru phone-call
6
[While Kyousuke talks on the phone, the other three Kasugas talk in the
background. Manami and Kurumi prance with joy.]
Kyousuke: [brightly]
Eh?! To Hatsumoude*?! e_ HATSUmoude ni?!
Yeah, I see. un wakatta
I'll go!! iku yo!!
___
Coming to meet me here? ore no tokoro ni mukae ni?
at-my-place to-meet
Sure. Then, I'll be un ja matte-ru yo
waiting. then be-waiting
<*Commentary: is the first visit to a shrine in the New Year.>
Takashi:
Oh yeah. That's right. a sou sou
I got a phone call from sakki oji--chan kara
ojiichan a little while a-little-while-ago from-ojiichan
ago.
DENWA ga atte na
having-phone-call
How's this sound? do-- da
Shall we go there now? IMA kara itte-miyo-- ka
after-this shall-go-and-see (?)
Manami and Kurumi:
HOORAY-Y-Y!! yatta~~!!
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p 251 (71)
1
Kyousuke: _chi_
Eh? To ojiichan's place?! e oji--chan IE ni?!
Kurumi:
Yippee! A trip, a trip! wa--i o-dekake o-dekake
2
[Kyousuke turns to look at the telephone.]
narration:
I can't very well turn sekkaku no hikaru-chan no sasoi o
down Hikaru's special especially 's invitation (O)
invitation...
kotowaru wake ni wa ikanai shi...
turn-down can't-very-well consider
___
But, if I don't, then demo so-- suru to ore mata
I'll be alone again on but if-do-like-that I again
New Year's Day...*
SHOUGATSU hitoribotchi kaa...*
the-New-Year-('s-day) solitary
3
[He crosses his arms, closes his eyes and drops his head. His sisters stop
to watch him. Kurumi rolls her eyes.]
Kyousuke:
Hmm... u~~~mu...
Which should I choose...? ittai dotchi o toreba...
in-the-world which-way (O) if-choose
Kyousuke FX: _____ _____
butsu butsu
Manami and Kurumi FX:
jito~~~~
4
[Kurumi leans over and touches his "Daimin" spot again.]
Kurumi:
Now you're asleep. omae wa sude ni nemutte-iru
you (T) already are-sleeping
fingertip FX: ____
tsun
5
[Kyousuke lies on his back on the living room floor, sound asleep. From
behind a closed door, we hear voices.]
Kyousuke: _____
gua~~
Takashi: [off]
Let's go. ikimasho
If we wait for him to aitsu ga KImen no
decide, the New Year will that-guy (S) deciding
arrive.
matte-tara TOSHI ga akechau yo
when-are-waiting the-year-begins-(finality)
Manami: [off]
That's true. sore mo so-- ne
door FX: _____
batan
6
[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment complex.]
7
[Kyousuke sits up in the darkened living room.]
doorbell FX: _____ ___ _____
<...dong> ...po--n pin po--n
Kyousuke: ___
Oh! ha_
note at bottom of page: _______
*You need to read "A Swinging *DAI-3 -KAN "yurete rarabai" o
Lullaby" in Volume 3! the-3rd volume Swinging-Lullaby (O)
YOnde hoshi--!
reading need/desire
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p 252 (72)
1
note:
When you've decided, come. KESSHIN tsuitara oide
when-decided come
We're going on ahead. SAKI ni Itte-ru
beforehand are-going
2
[He pads over to the front door.]
Kyousuke:
(Left me behind, huh... (oite kibori ni shi-yagatta na
left-a-person-behind-(contempt)
Those cold-hearted hakujo-- na RENCHUU -me...)
buggers...) cruel/coldhearted set/troupe (derogatory)
doorbell FX: ___ _____
pin po--n
3
[A beautiful girl in miniskirt, sweater and open jacket stands at the door.]
Madoka:
Good evening. komban wa
4
narration:
AYUKAWA! AYUKAWA!
5
[Kyousuke's face takes on a slightly silly grin.]
6
[He takes her hand and drags her in, startling her.]
Kyousuke: [smiling]
Well, come in, come in! ma-- do--zo do--zo haitte yo
Wasn't it cold!! SAMUkatta desho_!!
was-cold poss-be
narration:
I'm glad I didn't go along yappari tsuite-kanakute yokatta!!
with them, after all!! after-all not-going-along-with was-good
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p 253 (73)
1
[Madoka tries to stifle a giggle with her hand.]
Madoka: ___
TEE! pu_
2
Madoka:
Oh, I'm sorry. a gomen
It's no laughing matter! WARAi goto ja nai ka!
3
Madoka:
You were left behind again, mata oitekebori kutchatta no ne
hmm... again were-left-behind-(finality/regret)
[He forces a smile.]
narration:
But, that's okay. demo i-- n da
but fine (explan)
Tomorrow I'll be doing ashita wa hikaru-chan to
Hatsumoude with Hikaru-chan tomorrow (T) with-Hikaru
and...
HATSUmoude da shi...
first-temple-visit is and-besides
Ayukawa's come over and... ko-- yatte AYUKAWA wa
doing-like-this (T)
kite-kureru shi...
come-(to-me) and-besides
4
[View pans back to show the two seated at the kotatsu, and watching TV. An
idol singer does her thing. Must be the annual "Red and White Songfest."]
narration:
Still, why did Ayukawa sore ni shite mo AYUKAWA
come by? but/still
nani shi ni kita n darou
what came-to-do (poss-explan)
Maybe... hyottoshite...
5
narration:
Well, whatever it is... maa nan ni se yo
well no-matter-what
It's just the two of us on OOmisoka ni futari kkiri...
New Year's Eve... on-New-Year's-Eve just-2-people
6
[His pov of Madoka, her beautiful face lit warmly by the glow from the TV.]
narration:
Unlike always, I somehow itsu-mo to chigatte
feel tense... from-usually/always unlike
nanka ko-- kincho-- shichau na...
somewhat like-this am-tense-(finality)
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p 254 (74)
1
[It's later, and they're still watching TV.]
TV: _______
This year's 10 Biggest KOTOSHI no 10 DAI- nyu--su...
News... this-year 's great news
2
narration:
Isn't there anything to nani-ka WADAI wa nai mono ka
talk about? something topic-of-conversation thing (?)
(T) not-have
I shouldn't keep silent... damatte-ru nante
remaining-silent the-likes-of
yoku nai yo na...
not-good
3
Kyousuke: [face flushed, wide-eyed]
S-say! ne nee_!
Do you believe in hypnosis? SAIMINJUTSU tte SHINjiru?
hypnotism (T) believe-in
4
Madoka:
What? Hypnosis? e? SAIMINJUTSU
Kyousuke:
Right... sou...
When you're hypnotized, kakattara nan demo yu-- koto
anything that's said is when-hypnotized anything/whatever-say
obeyed.
kiku yo-- ni naru n da yo ne
obey reach-the-point-where (explan)
5
Madoka:
For example... tatoeba......
In what way? donna fuu ni?
6
Kyousuke:
Let's see, let's see. etto etto
7
[His eye comes to rest on the TV screen...]
TV screen: ______
Serial Drama: LOVE SLAVE RENZOKU dorama AI no DOREI
serial drama love 's slave
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p 255 (75)
1
[He touches her forehead. Sparks seem to fly in the background.]
Kyousuke:
You're now my slave. omae wa sude ni
you (T) already
ore no dorei ni natte-iru
into-my-slave are-turning-into
2
[Madoka's eyes grow large and a bit glassy.]
3
[He falls back in embarrassment and mirth.]
Kyousuke: ________
I wish-h-h! Ha ha ha ha! nua--nchatte hahahaha
narration: ______
I-I wonder if that was going chi chotto kageki datta ka na?!
a bit too far?! a-bit excessive was I-wonder
4
narration:
But... demo...
___
Maybe it worked...?! uketa ka na...?!
received I-wonder
Kyousuke:
You can't be hypnotized konna no kakaru hazu nai
like this, can you. this-kind-of (nom) hypnotize not-likely
Ha ha ha! __ __ __
yo ne-- ha ha ha
[Madoka remains seated on the floor, merely watching him.]
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p 256 (76)
1
[She kneels, her heels under her, and bows to him.]
Madoka:
Yes... hai...
Anything you command... nan narito MEIREI o...
anything command (O)
Master. go-SHUJIN-sama
(hon)-master-(high-hon)
[Kyousuke's eyes bug out...]
2
[...and he stares at his forefinger.]
Kyousuke:
Eh? Eh? e? e?
3
Kyousuke: [embarrassed]
Ohh, you surprised me again. a-- bikkuri shita mataa
surprised again
Will you quit joking around, jo--dan wa yameyo-- yo AYUKAWA!
Ayukawa! joking (T) shall-quit
4
[Madoka facial portrait--a smoldering gaze.]
Madoka:
Please call me, "Madoka"... ...madoka to o-yobi kudasai
(quote) call please
5
[Kyousuke portrait--he throws up his hands and flinches back.]
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p 257 (77)
1
[Madoka portrait.]
narration:
It... It really worked?! ho... HONTOU ni kakatchatta no?!
really hypnotized
2
[She stands demurely and bows her head. He ponders the ceiling and then
turns to stare at her.]
Kyousuke: ___
B-but I've... de demo ore...
Never kept a slave like sonna dorei nanka
that... slave-like-that somewhat
TSUKAtta koto nai shi
employed/kept occasion not-have and-besides
What'll I do? do-- shiyo
I'd better bring her back. moto ni modosanakya
to-origin if-not-return
Madoka:
If there is no use for go-YOU ga nai
me... (hon)-business/service (S) not-have
no nara...
if-it-is
3
Madoka:
I'm leaving. KAErimasu
[She turns to leave and he chases after her.]
Kyousuke:
Oh, wait! a matte
You came all the way over sekkaku kita n da shi...
here... especially came (explan) and-besides
And it's so cold outside! HOKA wa SAMUi yo_
outside (T) cold
Madoka brisk walk FX: ____ ____
suta suta
4
Kyousuke:
Oh, that's right. a so-- da
So, Ayukawa--I mean, ja AYUKAWA ja nakatta madoka!
Madoka! so was-not
[She turns and smiles.]
Madoka:
Yes? hai
5
Kyousuke: _____
Make me dinner. meshi demo tsukutte
meal or-something making
Oh yeah, and also heat up so-- da tsuide ni
the bath for me!! by-the-way/in-this-connection
____
furo o wakashite-kure_!!
bath (O) heat-(for-me)-(command)
I mean, "please"... Sorry. iya kudasai... sumimasen
narration:
If this isn't real, HONTOU ja nakattara ato ga kowai...
things'll get scary later... true if-is-not later (S) frightful
6
Madoka: [brightly]
YES! hai!
7
[He sits at the kotatsu and eats noodles from a bowl. Madoka arrives with a
tray of tea.]
Kyousuke FX: ____ ____
zuru zuru
narration:
Gee... This is heaven. iya-- gokuraku gokuraku
Heaven! _chikara_
My Power isn't something ore no NOURYOKU mo suteta
to be cast aside... my-Power too cast-away/gave-up
mon ja nai na...
thing is-not
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p 258 (78)
1
[He stares at her as she pours.]
narration:
She's hypnotized. SAIMINJUTSU ni kakatte-ru
is-being-hypnotized
That means... tte yu-- koto wa...
in-that-case/that-means
tea kettle FX: ____ ____
toku toku
2
[Tight shot of his hand as he reaches out to her.]
narration:
For example... tatoeba...
3
[He pulls the startled Madoka down into his lap.]
Kyousuke FX:
gui_
Madoka:
Ah! a_
4
[He leans against her back and embraces a shoulder.]
narration:
Even if I do something like konna koto o shite-mo...
this... this-kind-of-thing (O) even-tho-do
Kyousuke/Madoka heartbeat FX: ____ ____ ____
doki doki doki
5
[His hand starts to drift down from her shoulder to her...]
narration:
When I... konna...
Kyousuke hand FX: ___ ___
tsu tsu...
6
narration:
...do something like this, ...koto shitara hippatakare sou...
I'll get slapped... thing when-do be-slapped look-as-if
[Back to reality! He tosses his cup of tea in the air.]
Kyousuke:
Yee-ow-ow-ow... achachachacha~~~~
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p 259 (79)
1
[She leans in close. He freezes and stares into her eyes.]
Madoka: ______
Hop into... The bath. o-furo... waite-masu
bath are-springing-forth
Kyousuke:
Ye... Yes... ha... hai...
2
[Tight shot of his shirt as it lands on a clothes tray.]
clothes FX: _____
pasa_
3
[Kyousuke looks up as he begins to remove his pants. Madoka has entered
the bathroom and begins to remove her sweater.]
Kyousuke: ___
Ah! ha_
4
[Half-portrait of Madoka as she lifts up her sweater, baring her midriff.]
5
[Kyousuke's face flushes and he stares wide-eyed.]
Kyousuke FX: _____
gokun
6
[With an embarrassed smile he hustles a reluctant Madoka down the hall, away
from the bathroom.]
Madoka:
I thought I'd wash your atashi o-SENAKA nagaso-- to...
back... I shall-wash-(hon)-back
thought-that
Kyousuke: __ __ __
I... I can do that myself. ji...JIBUN de yaru yo ha ha ha
Ha ha ha! by-oneself do
____
Oh, if you like, you can a yokattara kimi mo ato de
bathe afterwards! if-good you too afterwards
haitte i-- yo!
coming-in okay
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p 260 (80)
1
[He sits in the tub.]
narration:
Ohhhh... She surprised me. a~~~~ bikkuri shita
But... I also feel like demo... ISSHO ni haitte-mitai
bathing with her... but together want-to-try-to-come-in
KI mo suru kedo...
think/feel-(too) but
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ ____
doki doki
Kyousuke FX: ______
chapun
2
[He soaks up to his neck, staring up at the ceiling in thought.]
narration:
If it's hypnotism of this konna SAIMINJUTSU dattara
sort, it'd be great even this-kind-of-hypnotism if-it-is
if it wasn't undone for a
while. zutto tokenai
all-the-time not-be-cleared/dispelled
mama demo i-- naa
even-if-like-this good (rhet)
If only this could last semete o-SHOUGATSU ippai......
through New Year's... if...only the-New-Year all-of
Kyousuke: ____
(Maybe it won't, after (yappa dame ka na...)
all...) after-all no-good I-wonder
3
Kyousuke: ________
fua~~~~_
Maybe I'll go to bed now. sorosoro neyo-- ka naa
soon/now shall-sleep I-wonder
narration:
When I took a bath, I got o-FURO ni haittara nemuku natchatta...
sleepy... when-take-a-bath sleepy became-(finality)
4
[He stands in his darkened bedroom, wrapped only in a towel. Madoka,
wearing just a towel herself, comes up close behind him.]
Madoka:
Yes. hai
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
dokin
5
[His pov of her. That towel doesn't appear to be on too tight.]
Madoka:
With me... atashi de......
If you'd like, Master... yokattara go-SHUJIN-sama...
if-okay (hon)-master-(high-hon)
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p 261 (81)
1
[His face flushes and goes into overload.]
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
dokin
2
[Tight shot of his hand on his door. He opens it...]
door FX: ______
gachan
3
[...exits, and shuts it behind him. He leans back against the door, clutching
a shirt to his bare chest.]
TV: [off]
The old year's making way yuku TOSHI kuru TOSHI mamonaku
for the new and it'll soon old-year-out new-year-in soon
be 1986.
1986-NEN desu
-year is
narration:
I-is she talking about ne neru tte AYUKAWA...?!
going to bed...?! sleep (quote)
door FX: _____
batan
4
[Inside, Madoka tosses her hair back.]
Madoka hair FX: ___
ba_
5
[He remains leaning back against the closed door.]
narration: ___
I'm... ore tte...
Always indecisive and itsu-mo YUUJUUFUDAN de
just hesitating, but... always indecisiveness am-(and)
mayotte bakari da kedo...
hesitating only am but
TV countdown FX: [off] _____
pippo
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ ____
doki doki
6
[Blushing and staring up at the ceiling, he tosses the shirt to the floor.]
narration:
On second thought, under KANGAete-mirya kono JOUKYOU
these circumstances just if-try-to-think-about-it this-circumstance
now, I don't really need
to... KONDO bakari wa BETSU ni
only-this-time (contrast) particularly
mayou koto...
hesitate = there's-no-need
shirt FX: ____
poi_
TV countdown FX: [off] _____
pippo
7
[He reaches for the doorknob to his bedroom door.]
narration:
Hesitate!! nai ka!!
TV countdown FX: [off] _____
pi--n
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p 262 (82)
1
TV: [off]
Happy New Year, 1986... omedeto-- gozaimasu 1986-NEN...
doorbell FX: [off] ___ _____
pin po--n
[Kyousuke pauses and turns to look off-panel.]
2
[A voice calls out from behind the closed front door.]
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
dokin
Hikaru: [off]
Sempa-a-ai! sempa--i!
3
[Kyousuke's face becomes a mask of pure horror.]
narration:
H-Hikaru-chan?! hi hikaru-chan?!
4
[He hops about trying to get his pants on.]
narration:
Wh-why right now...?! do do--shite imagoro...?!
why now
I thought she'd be coming TASHIka kuru no wa akete
on New Year's morn. as-I-recall coming (T) opening
ASA no hazu ja
morning (nom) ought
Hikaru: [off]
Can I come in? haitte i-- desu ka
Kyousuke:
Huh? Ahh... W-well... e a... so so-- ne...
Kyousuke FX:
atafuta
5
Kyousuke:
(O-oh no!! (ma mazui!!
Ayukawa's in my room...) HEYA ni wa AYUKAWA ga...)
in-room (contrast) (S)
6
[Shot of a lovely pair of bare legs. A towel has come to rest on the floor
at her feet.]
Madoka towel FX: _____
pasa_
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1
[Hikaru bursts through the front door, smiling.]
Hikaru:
Happy New Year!! akemashite omedeto-- gozaimasu!!
opening congratulations
door FX: ______
gacha_
2
[He flinches back, terrified.]
Kyousuke:
Ai-i-ee-ee-ee!! wahi~~~~~~!!
narration:
Jeez... This is terrible!! korya... mo-- akan!!
3
[He pauses, wide-eyed, as a hand taps him on the shoulder.]
Madoka:
Well, shall we go? sa ikimasho-- ka
Madoka hand-on-shoulder FX: ___
pon
4
[He turns to find Madoka standing fully dressed behind him. She smiles.]
5
[View pans back.]
Madoka:
To Hatsumoude! HATSUmoude ni!
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1
Madoka: [smiling]
Happy New Year, Hikaru. omedeto-- hikaru
Hikaru: [gaily]
Happy New Year, Madoka-san. omedeto-- gozaimasu madoka-san
2
[Kyousuke--a portrait in confusion.]
3
Madoka: _____
Kasuga-kun, aren't your KASUGA-kun zubon ga GYAKU ja nai?
pants on backwards? pants (S) the-opposite are-not
[Kyousuke twists around to look at his rear. Yup, there's the zipper.]
Kyousuke:
Ah! Oh no! a_ ikene
4
[Isolated night shot of the gate to a temple.]
Hikaru: [off]
What kinda strange face are nani o FUSHIGI so-- na KAO shite-ru
you making? what (O) strange-seeming-face are-making
n desu ka?
(explan) (?)
Kyousuke: [off]
N-nothing. i iya
Can't be... masaka...
Hatsumoude at night... HATSUmoude ga YACHUU to wa...
first-temple-visit (S) at-night (define)
5
[Madoka walks on a bit ahead, her back to the other two.]
Hikaru: [merrily]
Oh, come on... Really, matamata~~~~ SEMPAI ttara
Sempai! (I-tell-you)
You heard it from madoka-san ni ki--te-ru kuse ni
Madoka-san! are-hearing-from-Madoka although
I forgot to tell you it atashi ga KOMBAN tte TSUTAewasureta
was tonight, so I had I (S) night (quote) forgot-to-tell
Madoka-san go over to
your place. n de madoka-san ni SEMPAI no IE ni
since by-Madoka to-Sempai's-place
itte-moratta n ja nai desu ka~~
had-(her)-go (explan/neg)
Kyousuke: [stunned]
EH!?! e_?!
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[Madoka turns to look back at him.]
narration:
Although knowing that hikaru-chan ga kuru to yu-- no mo
Hikaru-chan would be (S) come say-that (nom) too
coming...
SHOUCHI no ue de...
being-aware-of
Then that means, that to yu-- koto wa
hypnosis a little while that-means
ago was...
sakki no SAIMINJUTSU wa......
a-little-while-ago 's hypnosis (T)
Kyousuke: [sweaty, nervous]
Eh?! S-so... e_ ji ja...
2
narration:
That was all... ZEMBU......
the-whole-time
[His pov of Madoka. Smiling, she pulls down an eyelid and sticks out her
tongue.]
narration:
An act... ENGI datta n da...
acting was (explan)
3
[Madoka breaks out in a merry smile. Overlaid on this is Kyousuke's speech
bubble, with his anguished face adorning it.]
Kyousuke:
H-hey-y-y!! a ano ne~~_!!
narration:
Sure enough, she's an yappari ICHI-MAI UWATE...na
extraordinary... sure-enough a-cut-above
_enjeru_
Angel! TENSHI!
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