Kimagure Orange Road
"Heart Jack War!"
Volume 11, Story 2
WB Volume 6, Story 11
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Thomas Wyatt
Jerry Lee
Last revision : 08-19-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 207 (27) are only in the WBs!
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p 207 (27)--TITLE PAGE
[Madoka stands, feet planted apart, in nearly full-portrait wearing a swimsuit
with T-shirt on top. She also wears a headband, and gazes off to her right.]
MAIN TITLE (at top) _ha--to_ _____ _uo--_
Heart Jack War! KOKORO jakku #WAR#!
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
Charm or Uneasiness--A MIWAKU soretomo
Sexy Pose, Just for You... charm/fascinate/captivate/enchant or
MUNAsawagi
uneasiness/a-presentiment
_________ ______
sekushi-- - po--zu wa anata dake...
sexy-pose (T) you only/just
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p 208 (28)
1
[A book is open to an entry. A photo of a surprised Kyousuke, a katsu-sand
stuffed in his face, is visible.]
Sayuri's Little Black Book:
Kasuga Kyousuke KASUGA KYOUSUKE
Kouryou High School, KOURYOU GAKUEN KOUTOU-BU 1-NEN
First Year school sr-high-section first-year
_______
Degree of Handsomeness: hansamu -DO NAMI
Average handsome degree average
______
Degree of Intelligence: interi -DO NAMI
Average intelligence degree average
Athletic Ability: Average UNDOUSHINKEI NAMI
Special Abilities: None TOKUGI nashi
special-ability/skill/specialty without
2
[Sayuri stares down at her open book.]
Sayuri: _hansamu_ ______
(A boy of this caliber isn't (kono TEIDO no KO BIDANSHI risuto ni
good enough to be placed on this-degree 's boy on-handsome-man-list
the handsome guy list...
noseru hodo demo nai n da kedo...
record not-so-much-as (explan) but
But...) shikashi...)
3
[Sayuri facial portrait.]
narration:
Ayukawa Madoka...!! AYUKAWA madoka...!!
_______
The evil one who trampled watashi no puraido o fuminijitta
on my pride. my-pride (O) trampled-underfoot
nikkuki yatsu
= detestable person
I'll snatch this guy away kono OTOKO o UBAtte
from her and knock her nose this-guy (O) snatch-away-(and)
out of joint. ____
hana o akashite-yaru
foiling/putting-someone's-nose-out-of-joint
And then... soshite......
narration: ______
That should prove that I'm atashi no HOU ga DANZEN kawaii
the cutest by far!! my direction (S) by-far-the-cutest
to yu-- koto o SHOUMEI shite-yaru!!
that-(in-gist) prove/verify-(to-them)
4
[View pans back. Sayuri sits at her desk.]
sensei: [off]
HIROSE!! HIROSE_!!
Sayuri:
Y-yes! ha hai!
[She slams down her textbook--inside which she had hidden her little black
book--and looks up nervously. Next to her, a guy is busy reading a book
hidden within his own textbook.]
book FX: ___
ba_
5
sensei: [pointing to the chalkboard]
So, this problem... de kono MONDAI da ka...
so this-problem is (?)
Let's see you solve it. toite-miro
shall-try-to-solve
Sayuri: [standing, grimacing at her text]
U-uhh... ha haa...
(O-oh no! What is it...?) (i ikene! nan da kke...)
textbook pages FX: ________
perapera
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p 209 (29)
1
[She turns to the side and drops her gaze. Tears pool in her eyes. She puts
a hand to her mouth and shuts her eyes.]
Sayuri:
kusun
I wasn't listening to what o-HANASHI ki--te-masen deshita...
you were saying... what-(one)-says not-listening was
[Blushing, the sensei gets up and starts writing on the chalkboard...]
sensei:
Oh! That's okay! a_ i-- n da yo
__ __ __
That's okay, sit down. i-- n da suwarinasai ha ha ha
It's such a boring lesson, tsumaran JUGYOU da mon na--
isn't it. boring lesson is reason (rhet)
All right. Sensei will yo--shi SENSEI kawari ni toichau
solve it for you. all-right in-place-of solve-
(finality)
chalk FX: ___ ___
ka_ ka_
2
[A tilted view of Madoka against the partly-cloudy skies. She wears a coat
over her school uniform.]
Madoka: ______
Ah-choo! kushon
3
[View pans back. Kyousuke walks beside her.]
Kyousuke: ____
A cold? kaze?
Madoka:
It's nothing major. taishita koto nai yo
4
[He places his hand on the goddess' forehead. She blushes and looks
surprised.]
Kyousuke:
It's hot. atsui yo
You're getting feverish. NETSU ga DEte-ru ja nai ka
are-becoming-feverish
5
[View looking up at a school building.]
Kyousuke: [off] _______
Aren't you going to ABCB kore kara abakabu desho
now? from-now-on ABCB poss-be
You should take today off, KYOU wa YASUnde
and go home and sleep. today (T) rest/take-a-break-(and)
KAEtte neta ho-- ga ii yo
return-home-(and) slept better
Madoka: [off]
I'm fine. It's nothing. HEIKI yo kono kurai
this-extent
________
And besides, Master won't be sore ni KYOU wa masuta-- ga
there today, so it's only besides today (T) Master (S)
me.
inakute atashi hitori da shi
not-be- I 1-person is consider
there-(and)
6
Kyousuke: [merrily] ___
Then... I'll help! ja... ore tetsudaa-- ka!
then I assist
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p 210 (30)
1
Kyousuke: [smiling] ___
Because I can't be datte ore BYOUNIN wa
neglecting a patient. because I patient (T)
hottokenai tachi na n da
not-able-to-leave-alone type is (explan)
2
Kyousuke: [waving]
So I'll come to the ja ato de o-MISE ni iku yo_
store later on! so later-on to-store go !
[Madoka smiles.]
3
[Hiding around the corner of the school's front gate, Sayuri writes in her
book. Madoka approaches the gate, alone.]
Sayuri:
Hmm... Can't be neglecting fumu... BYOUNIN wa hottokenai tachi...to
a patient...hmm? hmm patient (T)
4
Madoka: ______
Ah-choo! kushon
5
[Sayuri leans casually back against one pillar of the school gate. Madoka,
walking toward the gate, doesn't notice her...]
6
[...and in fact, walks right past Sayuri. Sayuri's gaze is downcast, arms
crossed.]
7
Sayuri: [small smile]
You two are... Friendly, NAKA... ii no ne
aren't you. relationship good (rhet)
[Madoka stops in her tracks...]
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p 211 (31)
1
[...and looks back.]
2
[Sayuri meets her gaze.]
Sayuri: ____
Was that your boyfriend? kare anata no nan na no?
he/boyfriend you (nom) what is (?)
3
[Sayuri's pov of Madoka. Expressionless.]
4
Madoka:
What are you talking about? nani tte?
what (quote)
5
[Madoka's pov of Sayuri. Small knowing smile.]
6
[Sayuri turns away, closing her eyes and still smiling.]
Sayuri:
Oh well, that's okay... maa ii ka...
7
Sayuri: [walking back towards school]
It isn't good to ignore... kojiraseru to yoku nai wa yo
if-neglect/aggravate not-good
____
That cold... kaze wa...
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p 212 (32)
1
[Madoka watches the back of Sayuri as she walks toward the school.]
Sayuri: ____
Besides, your boyfriend sore ni kare KON'YA wa moo
won't be coming over to besides boyfriend tonight (T) any-more
see you tonight any more...
anata no tokoro ni wa
to-your-place (contrast)
konai hazu da kara...
not-come ought is that's-why
2
[Madoka portrait.]
3
[Reaching the building, Sayuri quickly hides herself around a corner.]
Sayuri FX:
sasa
4
Sayuri: [wiping her brow]
Whew. Ahh, that was scary! fu-- a-- kowakatta!
I was prepared to be 2 ~ 3 PATSU hippatakareru
slapped 2 or 3 times... 2-or-3-rounds/shots be-slapping/beating/
striking/knocking
KAKUGO shite-ta kedo
was-resigning-to/was-ready-for but
5
Sayuri:
All right. Now the yoshi kore de
declaration of war is all-right with-this/now
done!
SENSENFUKOKU wa KANRYOU!
declaration-of-war (T) complete
Now... Where's that guy, saate ano OTOKO wa...to
hmm...
6
[A few meters away, Hikaru lands in an ecstatic flying tackle around the neck
of Kyousuke.]
Hikaru: _______
Darling! da--rin!
Sayuri pratfall FX: _____
zuri_
7
[Sayuri stares wide-eyed as Hikaru clings to the arm of an overwhelmed
Kyousuke.]
narration:
Wh-what's this?! na nan daa~~_?!
Th-that guy is all over a ano OTOKO hoka no ONNA tomo
another girl... that-guy another-girl including
________
anna ni betabeta shite...
that-much falling-all-over-each-other
What the hell is this?! kore wa ittai
this-(one) (T) in-the-world
do-- yu-- koto?!
what-kind-of-thing
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p 213 (33)
1
[Hiromi smiles and playfully elbows Kyousuke in the arm.]
narration:
That guy... ano OTOKO...
2
[Manami and Kurumi chat with Kyousuke on the street.]
3
[He shares a laugh with Akane.]
narration:
Maybe... moshi-ka-shite...
4
[Sayuri portrait--wide-eyed.]
Sayuri: __________
(He's an outrageous (tonde-mo-nai pureibo--i na no de wa...?!)
playboy...?!) outrageous playboy is
5
[She stares up at the sky, pondering.]
narration:
So... That Ayukawa ja... ano AYUKAWA tte KO dake ga
girl wasn't his only so that-girl-called-Ayukawa only (S)
girlfriend...
KANOJO ja nakatta n da...
girlfriend was-not (explan)
Sayuri:
(I see. (so-- ka
So maybe that's why I wasn't sore de sakki wa
slapped back then...) and-so/then a-little-while-ago (T)
hippatakarenakatta no ka mo...)
wasn't-slapped (nom) it-may-be
6
[Sayuri looks back at us with a happy look.]
narration:
In that case, it's not to yu-- koto wa watashi ga
because I had less charm in-that-case I (S)
than that girl...
ano KO yori MIRYOKU ga nakatta
that-girl than charm (S) not-had
wake de wa naku...
reason is-not-without
It's just that that guy ano OTOKO no HOU ga ICHIMAI UWATE no
was a more adept playboy. that-guy smarter/a-cut-above
__________
pureibo--i datta dake
playboy was just
Sayuri hand FX: ___
pan
7
[Sayuri profile--she casts a determined look into the distance. Bolts of
light crackle in the blackness of the background.]
Sayuri:
(All right!! (yoshi!!
In that case, more than ever so-- nara so-- de
I'm filled with a fighting if-that's-so looking-as-if
spirit. _____
yokei faito ga wakutte-mo no yo
too-much fight (S) even-tho-seething
_hansamu_ _______
On my honor as a hunter BIDANSHI hanta-- no MEIYO ni kakete...
of handsome guys... handsome-guy hunter 's make-it-a-point-
of-honor
I will definitely catch ano OTOKO kanarazu atashi no TE de
that guy by my very own that-guy not-fail-to by-my-hand
hands!!)
otoshite miseru!!)
take/capture-(and) show/exhibit
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p 214 (34)
1
[Standing on the sidewalk in town, she glares back over her shoulder, straight
at us.]
Sayuri:
(But... (shikashi...
A true playboy like that ano OTOKO mitai na SUJIGANEIrino
guy won't fall to a simple that-guy seems staunch/to-the-core
trick... __________
pureibo--i namaji no koto ja
playboy by-halves/half-heartedly
ochinai wa...
not-fall/fail
In this case... kore wa...
I may have to be prepared atashi mo KARADA o haru
to give up my body, too... I too body (O) stretch/throw-out
Right?!)
KAKUGO ga HITSUYOU ka mo... ne!)
resignation (S) necessary it-may-be (rhet)
2
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]
3
[Madoka brings a cup of coffee to a guy sitting at a table.]
Madoka: ______
Ah-choo! kushon
4
[Looking down at the cup she just sneezed into.]
Madoka:
Oh, I'm sorry. a suimasen
guy 1: [smiling]
Oh, that's fine, that's a i-- no i-- no
fine. ____ ____
If it's a cold from a beauty kimi mitai na BIJIN no kaze nara
like you, I'd be delighted you seem a-beauty's cold if-it-is
to catch it. ___
ore yorokonde utsutchau kara
I be-delighted-to-be-infected-(finality)
that's-why
5
[Looking indignant, Madoka walks back, taking the coffee with her. The guy
smiles at her back with a goofy look.]
Madoka:
I'll take it back! torikaemasu_!
guy 1:
But it's okay, really! HONTOU ni i-- no ni...
really okay even-tho
6
[Tight shot of the faucet. Water fills the sink of dirty dishes.]
water FX: _____
ja--_
7
[Madoka, visibly ill, pauses to wipe her brow.]
Madoka:
haa haa
8
[She opens her eyes. There is a look of worry on her face.]
narration: [flashback] ____
Your boyfriend won't be kare KON'YA wa moo
coming over to see you boyfriend tonight (T) any-more
tonight any more...
anata no tokoro ni wa
to-your-place (contrast)
konai hazu da kara...
not-come ought is that's-why
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p 215 (35)
1
Sayuri: [off]
Excuse me... ano...
[Kyousuke turns to look...]
2
[Full-portrait of Sayuri, who leans back against the security gate of a
closed shop. She's dressed very nicely, and feigns illness.]
Sayuri:
Is there a hospital or kono atari ni BYOUIN ka
pharmacy somewhere around somewhere-about-here hospital or
here?
YAKKYOKU arimasen ka?
pharmacy isn't-there (?)
Sayuri/metal grating door FX: ______
gasha_
3
[She collapses against his chest.]
Sayuri:
Help... Me... TASUke...te...
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
doki_
Sayuri/Kyousuke FX: ___
do_
narration:
This girl... kono KO...
It's the girl who repaired kono MAE sode o tsukurotte-kureta
my sleeve the last time. before-this sleeve (O) repaired-(for-me)
KO da
girl is
4
[Ayukawa turns at the sound of...]
phone FX:
#RRR#
5
[Her eyes pop wide.]
phone:
Hello. I... moshimoshi ore...
Sorry. gomen
A little emergency came chotto KYUUYOU ga
up... a-little urgent-business (S)
dekichatte...
coming-into-being-(finality/regret)
I can't be there right away. sugu ni wa ikenai n da
soon (contrast) can't-go (explan)
Madoka:
Kasuga-kun. KASUGA-kun
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p 216 (36)
1
[Sayuri clings to his arm, looking ill.]
Sayuri:
OHH, HURRY-Y-Y. nee HAYAkuu
SAYURI IS FEELING AWFUL. sayuri moo damee
already no-good
= "I". Of course, it also serves the purpose of having
Madoka hear her name.>
[Kyousuke, still holding the phone, looks at Sayuri goggle-eyed.]
Sayuri FX:
beta_
Kyousuke FX:
gyo_
2
[Madoka holds the phone. Worry and sadness cross her face.]
3
[He pulls away from Sayuri, and eyes her nervously.]
Kyousuke:
Well, so that's the way it a ja so-- yu-- koto de
is. so for-that-kind-of-matter
But I'll certainly be demo kitto iku kara_!!
there!! but surely go that's-why
4
[He hangs up and stares up at the sky.]
narration:
Ahh, Ayukawa was surprised. a-- bikkuri shita AYUKAWA
I hope there wasn't a myo-- na kanchigai shinakatta ro-- naa
strange misunderstanding... strange/odd poss-wasn't-misunderstanding
Sayuri: [clinging to his arm]
Please take me to a doctor HAYAku o-ISHA ni tsurete ttee
quickly. quickly to-doctor
go-and-take-(please)
5
Madoka: [visualizing Sayuri]
(That girl's voice?! (ano KO no KOE?!
She's with Kasuga-kun?!) KASUGA-kun to ISSHO na no?!)
with-Kasuga together is
6
Kyousuke: ____
Let's see. For a cold... e--to kaze wa...
let's-see cold (T)
That's internal medicine, NAIKA da yo ne
right? internal-medicine is
Sayuri: [collapsing to the ground]
Sayuri can't walk any sayuri mo-- arukenaai
mo-o-ore. no-more = can't-walk
7
[Kyousuke carries her on his back and looks back at her with wide-eyed
nervousness. Sayuri smiles.]
narration:
Well. It can't be helped, maa shikata nai yo na
can it.
____
It's a cold. kaze da mon...
Besides, I owe this girl... sore ni kono KO ni wa
besides to-this-girl (contrast)
KAri ga aru shi...
owe and-besides
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p 217 (37)
1
[She closes her eyes...]
Sayuri:
haa_ haa_
narration:
Still... sore ni shite mo......
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ ____
doki doki
2
[Kyousuke feels pressure on his back.]
Sayuri breasts FX:
gu'nyo
crows-in-background FX:
kaa
3
[He drops down in a squat to rest for a bit.]
Sayuri:
Oh... Maybe I'm too heavy. ara... atashi tte OMOi kashira
I (T) heavy I-wonder
Kyousuke:
H-hold on for a minute, shi shibaraku o-machi kudasai......
please...
Kyousuke FX: ________
mojimoji
4
[They come to a doctor's office.]
narration:
But...! tokoro ga... de aru!
sign:
Internal Medicine FU RAKU/GAKU
sign/mark/amulet comfort/pleasure
TAI/TA/FUTO NAIKA
get-fat/gain/big internal-medicine
<4-kanji>
Sayuri: ____ ___
No! This doctor's a quack! kono o-ISHA yabu da kara iya!
this doctor a-quack is that's-why no
[Kyousuke looks back over his shoulder in exhaustion and exasperation.]
5
[They come to a pharmacy.]
sign: [top]
Pharmacy <2-kanji> YAKKYOKU
pharmacy
sign: [bottom] ________
Toiletries... Big toiretto... DAI/OO TOKU...
Special... toiletries great special
banner: ______
Horror Toiletries... hora-- KESHOUHIN...
horror toilet-articles
Horror Facial Sal... #HORROR FACIAL SAL...#
Sayuri:
It looks like the medicine koko no o-KUSURI mazu sou!
here's no good! here 's medicine unadvisable looks-like
[He looks back over his shoulder as before.]
6
[View looking up at the partly cloudy sky from a downtown street.]
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p 218 (38)
1
[He continues to carry her on his back, down the street.]
narration:
She's a rather spoiled girl, kekko-- wagamama na KO da naa
isn't she. quite selfish/spoiled girl is (rhet)
This makes the 6th hospital kore de BYOUIN - YAKKYOKU
or pharmacy we've passed with-this/now hospital pharmacy
without a rest... ____
pasu shi tsuzukete 6-KEN me da yo...
pass continuously 6th-door is
Sayuri:
Ohhhh, hurry-y-y. u~~~~n HAYAkuu
2
[She points up at a building. Looks like a cafe.]
Sayuri:
Oh, wait! Over there's a matte asoko ga ii waa!!
fine!! wait that-place (S) good
Kyousuke: [off]
Eh?! e?!
3
[She tilts back her glass.]
Sayuri FX:
gubi~~_
4
[View pans back. They sit at a table.]
Sayuri:
Whew. fuu
Kyousuke: ____ ____
Uhhhh, you're coming down ano~~ kimi kaze hi--te-ru n ja...
with a cold, aren't you... you are-catching-a-cold explan/neg
5
[She pours him a glass.]
Sayuri: ____
Huhhh? But liquor is good araa kaze ni wa o-SAKE tte
medicine for a cold. to-cold (contrast) liquor (T)
_
i-- KUSURI na no yoo
good medicine is
Your body gets warmed up, KARADA mo attamaru shi...
too, and... body too and-besides
get-warm
pouring FX: ____ ____
toku toku
Kyousuke:
Y-yes... ha haa...
6
[Tight shot of their glasses raised in a toast.]
Sayuri/Kyousuke: ________
KAMPA-A-AI.
narration:
O-oh well, it's okay... ma maa ii ka...
glasses FX: ______
chi--n
7
[Split panel. Kyousuke on top and Sayuri on bottom. They smile or laugh.]
8
[Exterior night shot of buildings in town.]
Sayuri: [off]
Sayuri can't drink any sayuri moo nomenaai
mo-o-ore. no-more can't-drink
FX: ___ ___ ___ ___
wa_ ha_ ha_ ha_
Kyousuke: [off] ___ ___ ___
Wah! ha! ha! wa_ ha_ ha_
Oh come on. Sure you can. matamataa ikeru kuse ni
can-drink though/although
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p 219 (39)
1
[They sit on a park bench.]
Kyousuke:
Phew. fuu
2
Sayuri: ______
The night is so wonderful... KON'YA wa suteki...
tonight (T) wonderful
3
[She turns to lock eyes with him, giving him a meaningful look.]
Sayuri:
I'd like to become... anata to wa...
with-you (contrast)
Much, much better friends motto motto nakayoku
with you. much-much-more on-good-terms
naritai waa
want-to-become
4
[Master passes nearby, and casts a casual glance their way.]
Master FX: ___ ___
ko_ ko_
5
[A dish hits the floor and shatters.]
dish FX: ________
gacha--n
6
[View pans back. Madoka sits on the floor, hand to her brow. The dish lies
in pieces before her.]
Madoka:
haa haa
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p 220 (40)
1
[Master walks in as she starts to get up.]
Master:
Ayukawa-kun... AYUKAWA-kun...
door FX: _____
karan
2
Master:
What's the matter? do-- shita n da
You look pale. KAOIRO WARUi yo
complexion bad
Madoka: ________
Master. masuta--
3
Master:
My wife seemed to be fine uchi no yatsu IGAI NA to HAYAku
and was getting over the my-fellow unexpectedly early
cold unexpectedly early. ____
kaze yoku natte HEIKI so-- datta
cold well becoming looked-as-if-fine
kara
that's-why
____ ____
You caught a cold, too? kimi mo kaze kai
you too cold (?)
You'd better go home and KAEtte yasunda HOU ga ii yo
rest. go-home-(and) rested better
Madoka:
No, I'm fine. ie HEIKI desu
It's only this. kore gurai
4
[Madoka stops to visualize a smiling Kyousuke.]
narration:
Besides... sore ni......
Kyousuke: [flashback]
But I'll certainly be demo kitto iku kara...
there... but surely go that's-why
5
Master: [merrily]
But... shikashi...
There are healthy people GENKI na yatsura mo iru mon da na
around, too. lively-fellows too exist person is
Even in this chill, there's kono SAMUi NAKA soko no
a love scene going on in this-cold/chill within that-place 's
the park over there, hmm. __________
KOUEN de rabushi--n da mon naa
in-the-park love-scene is reason (rhet)
A girl who wears her hair ONNA no KO nante RYOU osage de
in two pigtails would still girl the-likes-of by-2-pigtails
be around high school age...
mada KOUKOUSEI kurai
still high-school-student extent
da yo na
is
I mean, really! arya
I-never!
6
[Madoka's eyes grow large.]
Master: [off]
I couldn't see the guy too OTOKO no HOU wa yoku mienakatta
clearly, but... guy's-direction (T) wasn't-able-to-see-well
kedo...
but
He sorta looked like nanka KASUGA-kun ni NIte-ta naa
Kasuga-kun... somewhat was-resembling-Kasuga (rhet)
7
Master: [merrily]
Well... Kasuga-kun wouldn't maa... KASUGA-kun ga anna koto
be doing such a thing. Wah well (S) that-kind-of-thing
ha ha! ______
yatte-ru wake nai ka wahaha
be-doing no-reason (talk-to-self)
___ ___ ___
wa_ ha_ ha_
8
[He suddenly scans the room.]
Master:
Hm?! Ayukawa-kun... n_? AYUKAWA-kun...
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p 221 (41)
1
[A view from behind the park bench as Sayuri moves in on Kyousuke.]
Sayuri:
Say... It's chilly... nee... SAMUi wa...
2
Sayuri: ____
But... Thanks to you, it demo... anata no okage de kaze mo
looks like I'm cured of my but thanks-to-you cold too
cold...
naotchatta mitai...
cured-(finality) seems
3
[Sayuri closes her eyes, inviting a kiss.]
4
[Kyousuke stares hard.]
5
[View from behind Madoka.]
Madoka footsteps FX: ___ ___
ko_ ko_
6
[Madoka looks over some bushes to see Sayuri offering her lips to Kyousuke.]
Madoka FX: _____
gasa_
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p 222 (42)
1
[He stands and smiles.]
Kyousuke: ___
Then, you'll be fine ja ore ga tsuite-nakute-mo
without me, right?! then I (S) even-tho-not-being-with-(you)
HEIKI da ne!
unconcern is (rhet)
You're in such high spirits. konna ni GENKI i--
this-(much) lively/good-spirits
n da mon
(is-the-reason)
Now you're all right! moo DAIJOUBU da!
2
Sayuri: [incredulous]
Huh?! he_?
3
Kyousuke: [happily] ___
I'm keeping someone waiting, ore HITO o matasete-ru kara
so now, if you'll excuse I am-keeping-a-person-waiting that's-why
me...
kore de SHITSUREI suru yo
now/with-this excuse-me/pardon-me
4
Kyousuke: [waving]
Bye. Take care, 'kay? ja KI o tsukete ne
careful (rhet)
Sayuri:
Ah...! a_...
5
[Madoka watches all this.]
6
[Smiling softly, she sinks back on her heels, leaning against a telephone
booth and closing her eyes.]
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p 223 (43)
1
Sayuri:
(Wh-what's with that (na nani yoo aitsuu
guy-y-y?
Just a bit longer!!) mo-- chotto datta no ni----_!!)
a-bit-more was even-though
2
Sayuri:
ha... ha...
(I-I wonder if I don't have (a atashi tte yappari MIRYOKU
any charm, after all...) I (T) after-all charm
nai no ka na...)
not-have I-wonder
3
[View of some trees and the night sky.]
Sayuri: [off]
AH-CHOO! kushon
4
[Kyousuke comes upon a girl collapsed on the ground next to a phone booth.]
Kyousuke:
! !
5
[He holds her gently.]
Kyousuke:
Why are you here?! do--shite konna TOKORO ni?!
why at-this-kind-of-place
Ayukawa! AYUKAWA!
6
[He looks very worried.]
Kyousuke:
Ayukawa... Ayukawa!! AYUKAWA... AYUKAWA!!
Madoka:
...Kasuga-kun... ...KASUGA-kun...
7
[To check her fever he rests his forehead against hers. Her eyes pop open.]
Kyousuke:
A-AN AWFUL FEVER!! su sugoi NETSU!!
foreheads FX: _____
pito_
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p 224 (44)
1
[He carries Madoka on his back through the park.]
2
Kyousuke: [a bit angrily]
That's no good! dame da yo
Traipsing around outside konna KARADA de HOKA
when you're feeling like in-this-kind-of-health outside
this...
DEaruicha...
go-out/gad-about-(finality/regret)
I said that I'd definitely kitto iku tte itte-oita hazu da yo!
come! surely go said-that- likelihood
(for-future-sake)
3
[Madoka portrait--she smiles...]
4
[...and drops her gaze.]
Madoka:
You're right... so-- ne..........
I'm sorry. gomennasai
5
Madoka:
.......... I couldn't .......... machi -kirenakatta no
wait. wait wasn't-able-to-(do)
[Kyousuke's eyes grow large.]
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p 225 (45)
1
[Kyousuke portrait.]
2
Kyousuke: [smiling]
You have such a fever. konna ni NETSU aru n ja
this-(much) fever have
Tonight, I'll take you KON'YA wa kono mama
nonstop over to your place, tonight (T) this-situation
just like this.
o-uchi ni CHOKKOU da ne
to-place go-non-stop is (rhet)
3
[Pov from behind them as he carries her away.]
Madoka:
That's a long way. tooi wa yo
To carry someone on your obutte-ku no wa...
back... go-and-piggyback (nom) (T)
Kyousuke:
It's okay! i-- yo!
4
[Same pov, they're farther away.]
Madoka: ____
My cold... kaze...
You'll catch it. utsuru wa yo
Kyousuke:
It's okay!! i-- yo!!
narration: ____
If it's Ayukawa's cold... AYUKAWA no kaze nara... ne!
Right?! 's cold if-it-is right?!
4 (inset)
Sayuri: [huddling from the cold]
How vexing! kuyashi~~~~
____
I really have caught a cold. HONTOU ni kaze hi--chatta
really cold caught-(finality/regret)
kushon
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