Kimagure Orange Road
"Slapstick Mushroom Hunt!"
Volume 10, Story 9
WB Volume 6, Story 9
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Thomas Wyatt
Jerry Lee
Last revision : 08-18-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 167 (167) are only in the WBs!
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p 167 (167)--TITLE PAGE
[We sneak a look at Madoka, dressed only in shorts with a towel draped around
her neck. She brushes her teeth, a cup in her other hand, and looks at us a
little nervously.]
MAIN TITLE (at top) ______________
Slapstick Mushroom Hunt! surappusutikku kinoko -GAri!
slapstick mushroom gathering
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
It's Supposed to Be "Keep TAchi-Iri KINSHI no hazu na
Out!", But I Feel Your Eyes Keep-Out (nom) likelihood
on Me.
no ni
even-though
anata no SHISEN o KANjite-ru
your-eye/look/glance (O) am-feeling
My Secret Bare Skin Blushes HIMITSU no SUHADA mo honnori to
Slightly on a Virgin secret bare-skin too faintly/slightly
Morning... _________
HAjirau OTOME no mo--ningu...
blush maiden/virgin 's morning
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p 168 (168)
1
[View of mountain peaks overlooking a forest.]
narration:
Autumn... AKI...
2
[A view of some trees.]
narration:
Autumn, the season for an SHOKUYOKU no AKI...
appetite... an-appetite (nom) autumn
_______
For the first time in a abakabu wa hisabisa no
while, ABCB is closed for ABCB (T) after-a-long-time 's
a holiday.
KYUUJITSU HEITEN
holiday closing-shop
3
[A view of a trail that curves past a cabin and a parked car. Arrowed
signs point in two directions.]
narration: ________
Master brought us to a masuta-- ga atashi-tachi o
really nice place. (S) us (O)
tottemo i-- tokoro ni
to-immensely-nice-place
tsurete-kite-kuremashita
brought-us-along
sign 1: [pointing right]
Garbage Dump gomisuteBA
sign 2: [pointing left]
Administrative Office KANRI JIMUSHO
managing/administration office
4
[Hikaru holds up a mushroom and smiles brightly.]
narration:
Sempai and me, Madoka-san SEMPAI to atashi madoka-san to
and Akane-san, and also and I and
Master, are all gathering ________
mushrooms!! akane-san soshite masuta-- de
and/then by-Master
kinoko -GAri desu!!
mushroom gathering are
Hikaru: [brightly]
Found one!! atta--_!!
5
Hikaru: ________
Say, Master. Can you eat nee masuta-- kore wa TAberareru?
this? this-(one) (T) can-eat
[Master looks up from a large basket full of a variety of mushrooms.]
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p 169 (169)
1
[He studies it.]
Master: _________
Oho, it's a matsutake. hoo matsutake ja nai ka
oh
Akane:
That's amazing, Hikaru-chan. sugoi ja nai hikaru-chan
amazing is-not
2
Akane: [looking at it closely]
Where was it? kore doko ni atta no
this-(one) at-where was (?)
3
Hikaru: [pointing]
They were selling them at muko-- no o-MISE de utte-mashita--_
the stand over there! over-there at-store was-selling !
sign:
Matsutake matsutake
SANCHI SOU/OKU(RU)!!
producing-area send
[Akane and Kyousuke do pratfalls.]
4
Master: [nervous smile] ______
Hey... We made a special ano ne... sekkaku kinoko GAri ni
effort to come out here especially to-gather-mushrooms
just to gather mushrooms!
kite n no ni
coming even-though
What are you doing KAtte do-- sun no......?!
buying them...?! buying what doing
5
Kyousuke: [worried look]
But, if we aren't careful demo heta ni shiro-- to ga
enough, and come down with but if-not-careful-enough and
food poisoning from bad ______
mushrooms... wake no wakaranai kinoko totte
with-unreasonable-mushrooms
SHOKUCHUUDOKU ni demo kakattara...
by-food- or- if-come-down-with
poisoning something
6
[With a merry smile, Akane whacks Kyousuke on the back. Kyousuke goes flying.]
Akane:
It's fine!! daijo--bu_!!
Though I might not look atashi ko-- miete-mo
the type, I'm actually very I tho-I-don't-look-it
picky about mushrooms!! ______
kinoko ni wa chotto
by-mushrooms (contrast) a-bit
urusai n da kara!!
fastidious (explan) that's-why
Akane backslap FX: ___
don
Hikaru:
All right! yatta--
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p 170 (170)
1
[Akane holds up a mushroom...]
Akane:
See! mite-nasai!
________
This one's a shiitake! kore wa shiitake!
this-(one) (T)
The kind everyone's always itsu-mo minna ga TAbete-ru yatsu yo!!
eating!! always everyone (S) be-eating thing
2
[...and tosses it into her mouth.]
Akane FX: _____
paku_
3
Akane: [smiling]
See? It's fine! ne daijo--bu desho_!
Akane FX: ________
mogumogu
Hikaru:
I see... naruhodo...
4
Akane:
Ah ha... a ha...
5
Akane:
Ah! ha! ha! ha! ha! ha! ha! a_ ha_ ha_ ha_ ha_ ha_ ha_ ha_ ha_ ha_
ha! ha! ha! ha! ha! ha! ha!
ha! ha! ha! ha! ha! ha! ha_ ha_ ha_ ha_ ha_ ha_ ha_ ha_ ha_ ha
6
[With nervous concern, Master studies a similar-looking mushroom.]
Master: _________
This is a waraitake... kore wa waraitake da...
are
mushroom> = laughing
7
[View of a far-off mountain.]
narration:
I wonder if she's really HONTOU ni daijoubu na no ka na...
all right... really all-right is (nom) I-wonder
Akane: [off] __ ___ __
Ah! ha! ha! Hee! ha! ha! a_ ha_ ha hi--_ ha_ ha_
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p 171 (171)
1
[Kyousuke kneels and picks mushrooms.]
2
[Something catches his eye off-panel.]
bush FX: _____
gasa_
3
[He flinches away from a hissing snake.]
snake FX: _____
gaza_
Kyousuke:
Oo-wah! u uwa_
4
[He breathes a sigh of relief as the snake slithers off.]
narration:
Despite being close to MACHI kara CHIKAi to ittatte
town, still, we're in the from-town close-by even-tho-say-that
woods.
yappari MORI no NAKA
still woods 's inside
You never know what will nani ga DEru ka wakannai na--
emerge. what (S) emerge (?) not-know (rhet)
It isn't safe. bussou da na
unsafe/dangerous is
snake FX: ______
zazaza...
5
[Two paws reach around and cover his eyes.]
bear paws FX: ___
nu_
voice: [off]
Gue-e-ess who? daa~~~re da?
= who is
6
[He recoils in horror.]
Kyousuke:
Wh-whuzzat! de detaa----_
emerged/came-out
Kyousuke FX: ___
ba_
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p 172 (172)
1
[Hikaru smiles merrily and holds up two fake bear paws on sticks.]
Hikaru:
It's me, Sempai. atashi desu sempai
I am
2
narration:
O-ohh... It's Hikaru-chan, na nan da... hikaru-chan kaa
huh.
Kyousuke:
(What has she got there? (nani o motte-ru
What?!!) what (O) is-possessing/holding
n da nani o_!!)
(explan)
3
[She takes him by the arm.]
Hikaru: ______
Let's pick mushrooms ISSHO ni kinoko torimasho_!!
together!! together mushrooms shall-get/pick
4
[Isolated shot of two baskets on a table, both full of various types of
mushrooms.]
5
[Madoka stands before the baskets, holding a mushroom in each hand. Akane
approaches in the background.]
Madoka:
I wonder... ittai...
in-the-world
Which of these are dore ga TAberareru no yara...
edible...? which-(one) (S) can-eat (nom) I-wonder
6
[With a wide smile, Akane ushers Madoka off.]
Akane:
Leave the choosing to erabu no wa atashi ni maakasenasai_
me-e-e! choosing (T) to-me leave-it-(to-me)
Go call Kyousuke and the madoka-chan wa KYOUSUKE-tachi o
others, Madoka-chan! (T) (and-assoc) (O)
yonde-kite!
go-call/summon
Madoka:
S-sure... ha haa...
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p 173 (173)
1
[Akane crosses her arms and studies the two baskets.]
Akane:
Hmm... u~~mu
2
[Isolated shot of the two baskets.]
Akane: [off] ______
Usually, they say that it's futsuu UTSUKUshii kinoko ni wa
the pretty mushrooms that usually by-beautiful-mushrooms (contrast)
are the harmful ones...
DOKU ga aru tte yu-- kara......
are-harmful say-that that's-why
______
So these are all harmful kore wa minna DOKU kinoko ne
mushrooms. this-(one) (T) all harmful-mushrooms
3
[She pours one of the baskets into a boiling pot.]
Akane:
It looks like we can eat kotchi wa TAberare -sou
these. this-way (T) can-eat looks-as-if
mushrooms FX: __
za!
4
[Hikaru is startled to see a large spider drop down on a silk strand.
Kyousuke's open collar lies just below it.]
spider FX: ______
su----
5
Hikaru: ____
Kya!! Sempai, a sp-spider!! kya_!! sempai ku kumo ga!!
! spider (S)
Kyousuke:
Eh?! e?!
6
Kyousuke:
D-down my back?!! se...senaka ni!!
[In a frenzy, he starts peeling off his sweater...]
7
[...and starts hopping out of his pants. Wide-eyed and blushing, Hikaru
looks on.]
Hikaru:
W-wait a minute! chi chottoo_!
Kyousuke pants FX: _____
zuru_
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p 174 (174)
1
[Hikaru's pov of the snake as it raises its head at her.]
snake FX: ______
zazaza
2
[Both Hikaru and Kyousuke are startled.]
3
Madoka: [searching]
Hikaru. Hika... hikaru hika...
4
[Madoka facial portrait--she sees something off-panel that makes her blush.]
5
[It's Kyousuke, pants partway down, sprawled over Hikaru, who lies on her
back.]
6
[While rising to his hands and knees he spies Madoka.]
Kyousuke:
AH! a
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p 175 (175)
1
[She crosses her arms and glares off to one side.]
Madoka:
It's just about lunchtime... sorosoro o-HIRU yo
soon lunchtime
2
Kyousuke: [nervously pointing] ____
Uh-uhhh... There was a a ano IMA soko ni hebi ga...
snake over there just now... now at-that-place snake (S)
3
[Madoka lifts up a belt--his--and eyes it skeptically.]
Madoka: ____
You mean, this "snake"? hebi tte kore no koto?
snake (quote) about-this-(one)
4
[Kyousuke facial portrait--goggle-eyed and speechless.]
5
[View of the mushroom feast laid out on the picnic table.]
bottles:
Bitter Orange Juice ponzu
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p 176 (176)
1
Akane:
Oka-a-ay, please dig in! saate o-TAbe kudasai!
eat please
2
Akane: [smiling]
These are mushrooms I atashi ga JISHIN o motte
selected with confidence, I (S) have-self-confidence-(and)
so it's all right! ______
eranda kinoko da kara daijoubu yo!
chose mushrooms and-so all-right
[Kyousuke forces a nervous smile.]
narration:
And that's why... da kara...
I'm worried. SHIMPAI na n da yo
worry am (explan)
3
[Tight shot of some mushrooms on her plate.]
Akane: [off] ______
See, I carefully separated hora chanto DOKU kinoko wa
out the harmful mushrooms... look! precisely harmful-mushrooms (T)
yoriwaketa n da kara
sorted-out/separated (explan) that's-why
Look! The colors of these mite kotchi wa ikani mo
are truly flashy! look! these (T) truly/indeed
____
IRO ga hade ja nai!
color (S) gaudy/flashy (is-not)
4
Akane:
On the other hand, these are sore ni hikikae kotchi
only the rather plain ones, on-the-contrary these
so I'm sure they're good!!
no HOU wa kekkou JIMI na mono
comparative rather-subdued things
bakari de kitto oishi-- yo_!!
only being surely tasty
Hikaru:
Oh! They really are ara HONTOU oishi--
delicious.
5
[Madoka notices that Kyousuke is watching her with apprehension.]
Madoka FX:
jiro_
6
[She pointedly turns away.]
Madoka FX:
tsu~~n
7
[He forces another nervous smile.]
narration:
Ahhh... a--n...
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p 177 (177)
1
Hikaru:
What's the matter? do-- shita n desu kaa
Aren't you eating? TAbenai n desu ka?
not-eat (explan) (?)
It tastes so delicious! konna ni oishi-- no ni...
this-(much) tasty even-though
Kyousuke:
I-I don't have much of an chi chotto SHOKUYOKU nai n da...
appetite... a-bit appetite not-have (explan)
2
narration:
I have to somehow cure nantoka AYUKAWA no go-KIGEN o
Ayukawa's mood. somehow 's (hon)-mood (O)
naosaneba...
if-can-fix/cure/mend/restore
fork FX: _____
kacha
3
[Akane smiles over at Hikaru and continues to eat.]
Akane:
Yup! Not bad, not bad. un! ikeru ikeru
nice/good/not-bad
4
[Madoka starts to eat.]
Madoka FX: _____
paku_
5
narration:
And then, in the soshite GOGO...
afternoon... and/then afternoon
______
Everyone went off by minna sorezore kinoko tori ni
themselves to gather everyone respectively to-pick-mushrooms
mushrooms...
CHItte-itta...
went-and-scattered/dispersed
[Kyousuke spies a strolling Madoka.]
Kyousuke:
! !
6
[Her attention is caught by a noise off-panel.]
FX: [off] _____
gasa_
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p 178 (178)
1
[Kyousuke in shock.]
2
[He zips behind a tree to avoid being seen by her. But her attention is
caught by something on the ground near her.]
narration:
Ayukawa...! AYUKAWA...!
Kyousuke FX: _____
sasa_
Madoka:
AH! a
3
narration:
Somehow, I feel awkward... nanka KI mazui yo~~~~
somehow awkward/embarrassed
After all, she's still yappari mada okotte-ru yo naa......
mad... after-all still is-mad (rhet)
4
Madoka:
KYA!! kya_!!
5
[She lies on the ground holding her calf, and watches the snake slither away.]
Madoka:
Ouch... itata...
snake FX: ______
zazasa
6
[He rushes out.]
narration: __ ____
I-it's a snake! he hebi da!
Ayukawa was bitten by a AYUKAWA ga hebi ni kamareta!!
snake!! (S) by-snake was-bitten
Kyousuke:
AYUKAWA!! AYUKAWA!!
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p 179 (179)
1
narration:
This is no time to be mo-- kakurete-ru BA-AI
hiding!! now be-hiding occasion/circumstance
ja nai zo!!
is-not !!
2
[He reaches her side.]
Kyousuke:
Lemme see the bite!! KIZUGUCHI misete!!
a-wound show/display
narration: ____
It would be serious if DOKU hebi dattara TAIHEN da
that was a poisonous snake. poisonous-snake if-was serious is
If we don't hurry... HAYAku shinai to...
soon if-not-do
3
Kyousuke:
C'mon, we have to suck out saa DOKU o SUidasanakya!!
the poison!! poison (O) must-suck/draw-out
4
[Madoka smiles a tenderly amused smile...]
5
[...and wraps her arms around his neck. Kyousuke is stunned.]
Madoka arms FX: ___
su_
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p 180 (180)
1
[Isolated shot of some trees.]
Madoka: [off]
Thank you... arigatou...
I'm all right now. mou DAIJOUBU
____
That wasn't a poisonous are wa DOKU hebi ja nai yo
snake. that-(one) (T) poisonous-snake is-not
2
[His pov of her.]
Madoka:
Say... Instead of the nee... sore yori KIZUGUCHI
snakebite... say than-that-(one) a-wound
ja nakute......
being-not
You could suck at another hoka no toko SUtte-mo
spot. another-place even-tho-suck/draw-out
ii no yo
okay
3
[His face flushes.]
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
dokin
4
[Another view of trees.]
narration:
What does she mean by that?! do-- yu-- tsumori na n da
what-kind-of-intention is (explan)
I thought she was mad until sakki made okotte-ta
just a little while ago. until-a-little-while-ago was-being-angry
to OMOttara...
when-think-that
B-but this is a one in a de demo kore wa metta ni nai
million chance!! but this-(one) (T) rarely
______
chansu da!!
chance is
5
[View pans way back to show them in a meadow--Madoka still on her back with
Kyousuke perched over her.]
Madoka:
Hey... nee...
narration:
Okay!! I'm a man!! yoshi!! ore mo OTOKO da!!
all-right I too man am
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p 181 (181)
1
[Hikaru and Akane come upon the two.]
2
Hikaru: [surprised, blushing]
S-Sempai!! se sempai!!
Akane:
Ky-Kyousuke... ki KYOUSUKE...
3
Kyousuke:
Hikaru-chan!! hikaru-chan!!
4
[Hikaru portrait--shell-shocked realization...]
5
[Tears begin to pool in her eyes.]
6
[She runs off. Kyousuke can only watch helplessly, since he's got a smiling
Madoka locked around his neck.]
Kyousuke:
H-Hikaru-chan!! hi hikaru-chan!!
Hikaru FX: ___
da_
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p 182 (182)
1
[He reaches out a hand in the direction of Hikaru. Electricity crackles
around him.]
Kyousuke:
(N-now I'm ruined!!) (mo moo HAMETSU daa--_!!)
now ruin/destruction am
2
Akane: [angrily]
KYOUSUKE!! SOMEONE LIKE YOU KYOUSUKE!! anta tte yu-- HITO wa...
IS... you (called) person (T)
3
[She tries to stifle a giggle.]
Akane: ___
pu_
4
Akane:
Ah... Ah ha ha ha ha ha ha a... a ha ha ha ha ha ha ha...
ha...
Ah ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! a ha ha ha ha ha ha ha
[Kyousuke can only watch wide-eyed.]
5
[Akane blushes and turns a cute face towards him.]
Akane:
What a funny face you're nante omoshiroi KAO
making! what! amusing/funny-expression
shite-ru no yo
are-making
Ah ha ha ha ha ha ha! a ha ha ha ha ha ha
__ __
ha ha
6
[Isolated view of a van parked next to a cabin.]
Akane: [off]
Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha
ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha
ha!
Ahh, my stomach hurts. a-- o-naka itai
stomach sore
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p 183 (183)
1
Akane FX:
a_ ha_ ha ha_ ha_ hi--_ ha_ ha_
Master:
Kasuga-kun... KASUGA-kun...
2
[Kyousuke turns to look.]
3
Master: [holding up a book]
Kasuga-kun... Those KASUGA-kun... sakki no
mushrooms back then... a-little-while-ago's
______
kinoko...
mushrooms
They're described in this kono HON ni kaite-atta n da kedo...
book... in-this-book was-written (explan) but
book:
Mushrooms kinoko
Now you too can be a kore de anata mo kinoko
Mushroom Ph.D.!! with-this/now you too mushrooms
HAKASE!!
Ph.D.
4
[Master faces us, opens the book and points out an item . His expression is
dark...]
Master:
What we threw away and what suteta yatsu mo TAbeta yatsu mo
we ate--it seems they were thrown-away thing and ate thing and
all harmful mushrooms...
minna DOKU kinoko datta mitai da...
all harmful-mushrooms were seems
5
[Kyousuke facial portrait.]
6
[Pov shifts to show that Master is actually showing the open book to a nearby
tree. Kyousuke points to himself.]
Kyousuke:
U-uhh... I'm over here... a ano... boku wa kotchi desu kedo...
I (T) this-way am but
Master: [to tree]
Take a look. These are the mita mae kore ga
harmful mushrooms... saw before this-(one) (S)
______
sono DOKU kinoko......
those-harmful-mushrooms
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p 184 (184)
1
narration:
So... When Hikaru-chan ja... sakki hikaru-chan ga
cried back then... so a-little-while-ago (S)
naita no wa...
cried (nom) (T)
2
Hikaru: [embarrassed look]
Oh, Sempai. I'm sorry a SEMPAI sakki wa
about just now. a-little-while-ago (T)
suimasen deshita
was-sorry
Even though I always become SEMPAI no KAO mitara itsu-mo wa
happy when I see your face, your-face when-saw always (T)
suddenly, for some reason...
TANOshiku naru no ni
become-joyful/happy even-though
naze-ka TOTSUZEN...
without-knowing-why/somehow suddenly
3
Hikaru:
I cried. nakechatta n desu
was-able-to-cry (explan)
narration: ______
It was because of the yappari DOKU kinoko no sei?!
harmful mushrooms, after after-all harmful-mushrooms 's fault
all?!
Kyousuke pratfall FX: ___
zu_
4
[Kyousuke comes up smiling.]
narration:
I-I'm glad...!! yo yokatta...!!
Th-then she didn't see!! ji ja mirarete-nakatta n da!!
then hadn't-seen (explan)
5
[Still smiling, Akane addresses Kyousuke.]
Akane:
Ah ha ha! Ah ha... a ha ha a ha...
Huh? Why am I laughing? are? atashi nande WARAtte n no?
I why laughing
___
ha_
narration: ______
A harmful mushroom caused kore mo DOKU kinoko ga......
this, too... this-(one) too harmful-mushroom (S)
6
[Wide-eyed, he visualizes Madoka wrapping her arms around his neck.]
narration:
That means... to yu-- koto wa......
Even Ayukawa's suggestive ano AYUKAWA no CHOUHATSU-TEKI na
behavior... that 's suggestive/provocative
KOUDOU mo......
behavior too
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p 185 (185)
1
[View looking up at the treetops and sky.]
narration: ______
Everything, EVERYTHING was minna minna kinoko no se--
due to the mushrooms!! all mushroom's-fault
datta n da!!
was (explan)
Madoka: [off]
Huhhh? What was I doing are~~ atashi IMA made
till now? I till-now
nani shite-ta n darou?
what was-doing (poss-explan)
Akane: [off]
Huh? Me too! are atashi mo!
2
narration:
But... shikashi...
If I think it over very yoku yoku KANGAete-mireba...
hard... thoroughly if-try-to-think-over
Kyousuke:
Akane! akane_
3
Kyousuke:
You were a pretty impressive nakanaka taishita
mushroom expert, weren't quite grand/considerable
you!! ______
kinoko HAKASE datta ne_!!
mushroom Ph.D. were (rhet)
We owe this all to you... kochitora okage de...
thanks-to/due-to
this-way
4
[He smiles a nervous smile at Madoka, who looks back blankly. Master, Hikaru,
and Akane study a posted sign.]
Kyousuke:
(On second thought... (KANGAete-mireba
Well... It's okay since I maa...... choppiri toku shichatta
benefited a bit from it.) a-bit benefited/gained
kara i-- kaa)
since okay (talk-to-self)
Madoka:
? ?
Master:
But this mountain... What shikashi nan chu--
is this place called? but what (to iu) = called
YAMA da... koko wa?
mountain is this-place (T)
narration:
You could say I narrowly ayauku HAMETSU
escaped ruin, but it was very-nearly/barely/narrowly ruin
all resolved thanks to the
glorious harmful effects to yu-- koto datta kedo
of bad mushrooms! it-was-said-that but
____ ______
kega no KOUMYOU DOKU kinoko
injury 's glorious-deed harmful-mushroom's
no okage de nakanaori!
due-to/thanks-to a-reconciliation
sign:
CAUTION CHUUI
______
Only harmful mushrooms kono YAMA wa DOKU kinoko
grow on this mountain. this-mountain (T) harmful-mushrooms
shika haemasen.
only-grow
Do not eat under any ZETTAI taberu na!
circumstances! absoluteness don't-eat
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