Kimagure Orange Road
"The Secret Snapshot"
Volume 10, Story 7
WB Volume 6, Story 7
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation by : Hitoshi Doi (29 January 1992)
Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Thomas Wyatt
Jerry Lee
Last revision : 08-18-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 127 (127) are only in the WBs!
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p 127 (127)--TITLE PAGE
[Matsumoto Izumi's pov as he sketches Madoka singing onstage.]
MAIN TITLE (at top) _______
The Secret Snapshot HIMITSU no sunappu
secret snapshot
SUB-TITLE (at bottom) ________ ___ _madoka_
The Making of Pretty Girl meikingu - obu - BISHOUJO!
Madoka! making of pretty-girl
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p 128 (128)
1
[Kurumi gapes at a picture in the photo album. Manami sits nearby.]
Kurumi:
Manami-chan! Your face is manami-chan ttara HEN na KAO--_!!
so strange!! (I-tell-you) strange-face!
Manami:
Isn't that you! kore wa anta desho!
this-(one) (T) you poss-be
2
[Kyousuke moves in between them and stares at the pictures.]
Kyousuke: _______
Oh, an old album, hmm... he-- MUKASHI no arubamu kaa
old-album (musing)
_______
Who wet the bed? dare daa kono o-nesho
who is this bedwetter
3
Takashi: [reading a newspaper]
That's you, Kyousuke. omae da yo KYOUSUKE
you are
[Kyousuke blushes.]
crows-in-background FX:
kaa_
4
Kurumi:
Wowww! doe----_
= astounding
Oniichan was a bedwetter! oni--chan no oshikko -tare--_
's pee/piddle (derogatory)
narration:
Old pictures are so MUKASHI no SHASHIN tte hazukashii
embarrassing... old-photos (T) embarrassing
naa......
(rhet)
5
Kyousuke:
But... demo...
___
It looks like there are ore no SHASHIN tte hotondo nai
hardly any pictures of my-photos (T) hardly there-aren't
me...
yo-- na KI ga suru ga...
it-looks-like think/feel and
6
[Exterior view of the balcony of the Kasuga residence.]
Manami: [off]
Well, after all, we're sorya nantatte atashi-tachi
cuter. Right, otousan? that after-all we
no HOU ga kawaii mon ne-- oto--san
cuter people (rhet) father
Kurumi:
Oniichan was a snotty-nosed oni--chan hanattarashite
brat. So uncute!! being-snotty-nosed-kid
kawaikunai--_!!
not-cute
Kyousuke: [off] ___
Yah, so what?! Hmmph. do--se! fun
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p 129 (129)
1
[Exterior shot of the school. Students arrive.]
2
[Kyousuke walks into class to find a crowd around Hiromi's desk. She sits
there holding an open book.]
Kyousuke:
What are you looking at? nani mite-ru no?
what are-looking-at (?)
class FX:
zawazawa
Hiromi:
Ah, Kasuga-kun! a KASUGA-kun!
3
Hiromi: [smiling]
Look! This is a picture of mite! kono SHASHIN MAE no GAKKOU ni
you when you were at our old look this-photo at-previous-school
school!
ita TOKI no KASUGA-kun da yo!
was-there time (nom) is
4
Kyousuke: [blushing, horrified]
EHHHH!?! ee_?!
Komatsu: [grinning]
Now. At last.. tsui ni IMA...
at-last now
Your past is revealed!! tokiakasareru KASUGA no KAKO!!
is-explained/made-clear 's past
5
[She holds up 2 photos. Both are of a short-haired, Yuusaku-like kid. In
one, Kyousuke stands outside in the hall, holding 2 buckets labeled "1-D".
In the other, he picks his nose.]
Hiromi:
HERE!! hora_!
6
[Kyousuke blushes fiercely.]
class:
OHHHHHH! o~~~~_
He's amazing! koitsu wa sugee ya
this-guy (T) extremely
____________
wahahahahaha
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p 130 (130)
1
[Kyousuke grabs Hiromi by the wrist.]
narration:
Wh-what is she doing, ko koitsu nante mono
bringing something like this-girl what! thing
this in?!
mottekuru n da_
bring (explan)
Kyousuke:
St-stop!! yo yose_!!
Hiromi:
It's okay. i-- ja nai
Nothing's being lost by misete heru mon demo na shi
showing it.* showing diminish nothing consider
<*Translation note (CN): This is a cliche. It is also a popular line used
by guys to get girls to show more of their bodies... "It won't go away
if you show it." That a girl (Hiromi) is saying it, makes it amusing.>
2
Kyousuke: ___
You want to humiliate me?!! omae ore ni HAJI o kakaseru
you by-me shame-(a-person)
tsumori ka_!!
intention (?)
Hiromi:
Oh, doesn't everyone know? ara mina-san shiranai no?
everyone not-know (?)
narration: _______ ____
My image will come crashing ime--ji daun mo hanahadashii!!
down!! image down too excessive/extreme
3
Kyousuke:
You can't be showing stuff konna mon miserareru ka_!!
like this!! these-kinds-of-things be-showing (?)
4
[Madoka enters the classroom.]
narration:
Especially to Ayukawa... TOKU ni AYUKAWA ni wa...
especially to-Ayukawa (contrast)
5
[He releases Hiromi's wrist and the pictures go flying.]
Kyousuke:
AH! a_!
Hiromi hand FX: ___
ba_
6
[One lands on Madoka's desk.]
photo FX: ____ _____
hira hira_
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p 131 (131)
1
Kyousuke: [aghast]
AAH! aa_
2
[It lands face up. It is the photo of 7th-grade Kyousuke, picking his nose.]
3
[Madoka looks down at the picture before her. Kyousuke comes racing over.]
Kyousuke:
Th-that's!! so sore wa_!!
4
[Madoka portrait--surprise.]
5
[Madoka portrait--laughter.]
Madoka: ___
pu_
6
Madoka FX: ________
kusukusu
narration:
Ahhhh... a--a...
7
[He retrieves the photo, still blushing fiercely, and looks at Hiromi.
Meanwhile, Madoka has turned away to hide her laughter. Komatsu and Hatta
watch her in disbelief.]
narration:
This jerk...! koitsu...!
Bringing in something yoke-- na mono motte-kite
totally uncalled-for, and uncalled-for-thing bring-(and)
making a complete fool
out of me...! tonda HAJI o kakasarechatta...!
outrageous made-shamed
Madoka FX: ________
kusukusu
Komatsu:
Hey, Ayukawa's laughing! oi AYUKAWA ga WARAtte-ru ze
(S) is-laughing !
Come to think of it, she so-- iya aitsu
hardly ever laughs at come-to-think-of-it that-person
anything.
metta ni WARAtta koto nai no ni na
seldom laughed thing not-have even-tho
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p 132 (132)
1
[Exterior night shot of the Ayukawa residence.]
2
[Isolated shot of a lamp on a dresser, and a stereo system.]
3
[Madoka sits on her bed, looking at a photo album. Also on her bed are two
records.]
LP 1: _______
Overture vanshia JOKYOKU
??????? prelude/overture
__________ _________
Brahms Overture bura--musu devanshia JOKYOKU
Brahms ????????? prelude/overture
LP 2: [partial view] ________ __________
...& Capricci ...#&# kapurisu ...rodakushon
...Production capricci (p)roduction
4
[Two photos of a young Madoka. In one, she sits and plays in an inner tube.
In the other she stands in formal kimono.]
5
page FX: _____
pera_
6
[Madoka portrait.]
doorbell FX: [off] ___ _____
pin po--n
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p 133 (133)
1
[Kyousuke appears at the door with two books tucked under his arm.]
Kyousuke:
Good evening...! ..........komban wa!
2
Madoka:
Kasuga-kun... KASUGA-kun...
3
Kyousuke: ___
Uhh... It's my turn to do ano... ore SUUGAKU ashita
the math tomorrow, so... uhh I mathematics tomorrow
atatte-ru n de...
being-hit ('cause)
______
Would you show me your no--to torasete-kurenai?
notes? notes not-let-(me)-take
4
Madoka:
Ohh. Sure! nan da do--zo!
Madoka FX: _____
niko_
5
Madoka: [with a smile]
It's like I'm your private marude atashi KASUGA-kun no
tutor, hmm? as-if I 's
KATEI KYOUSHI mitai ne
private-tutor seems (rhet)
Kyousuke: [smiling]
Thank you for everything. osewa ni narimasu
narration:
This was just an excuse... to yu-- no wa KOUJITSU de...
this-case (T) excuse
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p 134 (134)
1
[Madoka sits on the edge of her bed. Kyousuke sits on the floor and watches
her.]
narration:
I was really concerned KYOU ano SHASHIN mirarechatta
over her having seen those today those-photos had-seen-(finality)
pictures today...
koto ga KI ni natte KI ni natte...
(nom) (S) weighing-on-the-mind
Madoka:
Huh?! The picture? e_ SHASHIN?
2
Madoka: [beaming]
Ohh... That? aa... are?
_______
You were pretty handsome. nakanaka hansamu datta ja nai
quite handsome were
3
Kyousuke:
R-really...?! so soo...?!
narration: _______ ____
Great. It looks like I yokatta do--yara ime--ji daun wa
avoided any harm to my was-good it-looks-as-if image down (T)
image!
sakerareta!
avoided/dodged
4
[Looking off to the side, Kyousuke spies the open photo album.]
5
Kyousuke:
Oh. Is this you, Ayukawa? are kore AYUKAWA?
Madoka:
Please don't look too anmari minai de yo
closely. too-(much) don't-look-(please)
It's embarrassing. hazukashii kara
embarrassing that's-why
6
[He smiles at 3 pictures of a 5-year-old Madoka.]
narration: ______
Wowww! Ayukawa's so cute!! hee----_ AYUKAWA kawaii!!
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p 135 (135)
1
[A photo of a 15- or 16-year-old Madoka.]
Kyousuke:
This one's pretty recent. kore wa SAIKIN da na
this-(one) (T) newest is
2
Kyousuke:
This is... kore wa...
[She grabs the album from out of his hands.]
Madoka FX: ___
pa_
Madoka: ______
Oh, not this page!! a kono pe--ji wa dame_!!
this-page (T) no-good
3
[She snatches up a picture and puts it behind her back.]
Kyousuke:
Eh? e?
Madoka FX: ___
sa_
4
Madoka:
This is... kore wa...
A little... chotto...
Kyousuke:
How come? do--shite?
5
Madoka: [nervous smile] ________
Shall I get you coffee or ko--hi-- demo ireyo-- ka?
anything? coffee or-something shall-pour (?)
Aren't you hungry? onaka suite-nai?
6
[Kyousuke portrait.]
7
[Isolated shot of an open textbook, a cup of coffee and a slice of cake.]
Madoka: [off]
So... This is... de... koko ga...
______
In a graph of a quadratic NIJI KANSUU gurafu ni...
equation... secondary function graph in
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p 136 (136)
1
[While she explains, Kyousuke studies her.]
narration:
I wonder if Ayukawa also AYUKAWA ni mo HITO ni mirarecha
has embarrassing photos to-Ayukawa too by-people mustn't-be-seen
that she doesn't want
others to see? hazukashii SHASHIN ga aru no ka naa?
embarrassing-photos (S) have I-wonder
2
narration:
Come to think of it... so-- ieba...
_______
The album only has her arubamu ni wa KODOMO no koro
childhood and present... in-album (contrast) childhood
to GENZAI no dake...
and at-present (nom) only
In other words, there's a tsumari nukete-ru
section of her life that's in-other-words is-missing
missing. _toki_
JIDAI ga aru wake da
a-period/age (S) there-is reason is
3
diagram:
Childhood / X / the Present KODOMO #X# GENZAI
pre- high- SHOUGAKUSEI IZEN
school school elementary-school-pupil before
KOUKOUSEI
high-school-student
narration:
So... What in the world is to kurya... #X# wa ittai?
"X"?
4
Kyousuke: [off]
(There weren't any photos of (CHUUGAKUSEI no TOKI no SHASHIN tte
her junior high days!!) jr-high-student 's time 's photo (T)
yatsu ga nai!!)
fellow (S) there-isn't
narration:
Perhaps that means... to yu-- koto wa moshiya...
that-means possibly
___
Ayukawa's hidden photos kakushita no wa ore ga
were taken just before I hidden (nom) (T) I (S)
transferred in... In other
words... TENKOU shite-kuru chotto MAE no
come-to-transfer a-bit before
AYUKAWA no SHASHIN... tsumari
's photo in-other-words
5
narration:
To me... ore ni totte...
_toki_
That's the only period for sono JIDAI dake ga KUUHAKU no
which I have a blank image only-that-period (S) void/blank-space 's
of Ayukawa...?!
AYUKAWA ZOU...?!
image/picture
6
Madoka: [looking up] _______
So... This answer is X de... kono KOTAE wa #X# iko--ru...
equals... so this-answer (T) equals
Kyousuke:
That picture... ano SHASHIN...
narration:
If I'm told not to look, miru na to iwarerya naosara
then I'll want to see it not-look if-be-telling-that all-the-more
all the more.
SHIritaku naru
want-to-know become
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p 137 (137)
1
[Madoka stops short.]
2
[He laughs in embarrassment...]
Kyousuke:
Maybe it's a picture of you OTOKO to ISSHO no SHASHIN
with a guy... with-man together 's photo
dattari shite...
are-(or)
Kyousuke:
What am I saying! naanchatte!
3
[She closes her eyes and smiles.]
Madoka:
Well, yes...! maa ne..!
Kyousuke FX: __________ _____
a_ha_ha_ha ha_ha
Kyousuke:
Oh, I thought so. a yappari
4
[He does a horrified double-take.]
Kyousuke: ___
AH! ha_
5
[She gazes dreamily off to the side.]
narration:
*A* *GUY*?! o - to - ko?!
Madoka:
Yeah. so-- yo
I'm meeting him tomorrow. ashita Au no
tomorrow meeting
I was just thinking that sorosoro Aitai na-- tte OMOtte-ta
I'd like to see him! soon want-to-meet was-thinking-that
tokoro na n da!
occasion is (explan)
6
Kyousuke:
Tomorrow...?! ashita......?!
narration:
Th-then, sure enough... ji jaa yappari...
It's one of her delinquent CHUUGAKU JIDAI no
pals from her junior high jr-high-school period 's
days or something...
FURYOU NAKAMA ka nani-ka
delinquent associates or something
tte tokoro ka
(quote) case (talk-to-self)
7
[A fractured panel of a profile of Kyousuke.]
narration:
What the hell sorta guy is ittai donna yatsu?!
he?! in-the-world what-kind-of fellow
What... ittai...
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p 138 (138)
1
narration:
What the hell... Sorta ttai... donna yatsu?
guy is he?!
Kyousuke FX: _______ _______
kokkuri kokkuri
2
[Full-length portrait of Madoka in the shower.]
shower FX: _____
za--_
3
Kyousuke: [opening his eyes]
Hm? n?
4
[He looks around.]
Kyousuke:
Ayukawa... AYUKAWA...
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p 139 (139)
1
[She towels herself dry.]
2
[Walking past the washroom, Kyousuke hears the shower running.]
narration:
Oh, bathing, huh? nan da o-FURO ka?
shower FX: _____
za--_
3
[He spies something off-panel.]
Kyousuke:
! !
4
[It's the photo, lying face-down on a dresser..]
5
[He stands in front of it.]
Kyousuke FX: _____
goku_
narration:
What the hell sorta guy is ittai donna yatsu ga...
he...? in-the-world what-kind-of fellow (S)
6
[Tight shot of his hand reaching out to touch the photo.]
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p 140 (140)
1
[Madoka exits the washroom, wrapped in a towel. She's just in time to see him
reaching for the photo.]
door FX: _____
kacha
2
[She blushes.]
3
[He blushes.]
4
Kyousuke:
Oh... No... Uhh... a... iya... ano...... sono...
Umm...
crows-in-background FX:
kaa_
5
[Wide-eyed and blushing, he raises a hand in greeting.]
Kyousuke:
How was the bath? yukagen do-- desu ka?
narration:
What am I saying? nani itte n da
what say (explan)
6
Madoka: [seductively]
It was just fine... cho--do i-- wa yo..
just fine
Did you want to take one ISSHO ni hairu?
with me? together enter
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p 141 (141)
1
[Hiding the photo behind him, he backs away from her.]
Kyousuke:
W-well... so soo ne...
___
B-but I took one at home, de demo ore IE de haitte-kichatta
so... but I at-home went-and-entered
kara...
that's-why
2
[He backpedals quickly, all the while smiling. Madoka glances off-panel.]
Kyousuke:
Well, we have to study. saate BENKYOU BENKYOU
well/now study
Kyousuke move-away FX:
tsu tsu tsu
3
Madoka: [blushing, wide-eyed]
Oh! The picture... an! SHASHIN ga
4
[Kyousuke goes into Madoka's bedroom and shuts the door behind him.]
door FX: _____
batan
Kyousuke:
fuu
5
[He's just about to look at it when...]
Kyousuke:
What the heck is this ittai kono SHASHIN wa...
picture...? in-the-world this-photo (T)
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ ____ ____ ____
doki doki doki doki
6
[...Madoka bursts into the room.]
Madoka:
Don't look!! micha dame--_!!
door FX: _____
gacha
7
[The photo flies out the window.]
Madoka:
Ah! a_
picture FX: ____
hyu_
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p 142 (142)
1
[She lunges for it and nearly pitches out the window.]
Madoka:
Kya!! kya_!!
Kyousuke:
Watch out!! abunai!!
2
[Kyousuke must grab her around the waist to save her.]
3
Kyousuke FX:
gui_
4
[She's pulled back in, ending up on the floor against a wall.]
Madoka: ___
don
5
[But throwing her in has sent Kyousuke himself flying out the window. The
photo floats in the air above him.]
Kyousuke:
Wah!! wa_!!
6
[He stares at the photo above him...]
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p 143 (143)
1
[...and snares it in his left hand.]
Kyousuke FX: ___
ba_
2
[He stares at it wide-eyed...]
Kyousuke:
TH-THIS IS...!! ko kore wa!!
3
[...all the way...]
narration:
No doubt about it... TASHIka ni...
She's with a man. OTOKO to ISSHO da
And... shikamo...
Ayukawa is... AYUKAWA wa
4
[...down...]
Kyousuke: _____ ______
(Stark naked! Completely (ISSHI matowanu o--ru nu--do!)
nude!) stark-naked all nude
5
[...to the...]
Kyousuke:
(But...) (demo...)
6
[...ground!]
bush FX: _____
basa_
Kyousuke FX: ______
doshin
narration:
It's... It's great!! yo... yokatta!!
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p 144 (144)
1
[He lies back on her bed, grasping his back in pain. She sits on the edge of
the bed.]
Kyousuke:
Ow-ow-ouch... atetete...
Madoka:
Are you all right? daijo--bu?
2
Madoka: [looking at him unhappily]
Really now! It serves you moo JIGOUJITOKU yo!!
right!!
3
[She's startled to see a smile on his face.]
Kyousuke: ________
nikoniko
4
[He sits up, photo in hand, and gives her a wink.]
Madoka:
What are you laughing for? nani o WARAtte-ru no?
what (O) are-laughing (?)
Maybe you got hit in the uchi dokoro demo warukatta
wrong spot... hit-in-a-vital-spot-or-something
no kashira...
I-wonder
Kyousuke:
This... kore...
5
Madoka: [blushing and anguished]
Ah!! a_!!
Kyousuke:
How great. yokatta ne
He's coming back tomorrow. ashita... KAEtte-kuru n da ne
tomorrow come-home (explan)
6
Madoka: [small smile]
Yeah, it's been a while! soo hisashiburi ni ne!
narration:
Ayukawa's secret... AYUKAWA no HIMITSU...
I feel like I've learned a mata choppiri SHIru koto ga dekita
little bit more about her... again a-bit know was-able-to-(do)
yo-- na KI ga shite...
it-looks-like thinking/feeling
___
For some reason, I'm happy! naze-ka ureshii ore!
somehow happy I
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p 145 (145)
1
Madoka:
But still... sore ni shite mo
2
Madoka:
PERVERT!! Give it back! #H#_!! kaeshite!
narration:
But... She's so shikashi... konna ni
embarrassed... but so-much
hazukashi-garu nante...
come-to-appear-embarrassed the-likes-of
Ayukawa's so cute. AYUKAWA kawaii toko aru n da na
cute occasion exist (explan)
3
[Closeup of the picture. A 3-year-old Madoka plays in a bubble bath with
her father.]
narration:
To be sure... TASHIka ni...
_____ ______
Ayukawa's completely nude, o--ru nu--do no AYUKAWA da kedo
but, if it's with her all-nude (nom) is but
father... _____
oyaji-san to nara...
with-father if-it-is
I'll forgive her!! yurushichau yo ne!!
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