Kimagure Orange Road
"The Autumn Feeling of Love"
Volume 10, Story 4
WB Volume 6, Story 4
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Thomas Wyatt
Jerry Lee
Last revision : 08-17-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 67 (67) are only in the WBs!
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p 67 (67)--TITLE PAGE
[An elegantly dressed Hikaru sits and leans slightly back, in a black,
strapless gown.]
MAIN TITLE (at top)
The Autumn Feeling of Love KOI no SHI SHUUKI
love 's think/believe/ autumn
feel-like/desire/yearn-after
SUB-TITLE (at bottom) ________ ______
Silk Gloves, a Party Dress, KINU no TEBUKURO pa--ti-- - doresu
a Mysterious Hikaru... silk 's gloves party-dress
AYAshiku hikaru
mysterious/suspicious
Where Is the Knight to KIFUJIN o KAREI ni sarau
Carry off This Lady in a-lady/ (O) splendid/ (IO) snatch-away/
Magnificence? noblewoman magnificent carry-off
_naito_
KISHI wa izuko?
knight (T) where
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p 68 (68)
1
[View of some school buildings and a walkway.]
narration:
Lately, even high school ima ya KOUTOU-BU demo
has what's become an of-late/now sr-high-section even
indispensable and
distinctive event-- nakute wa naranai
is-indispensable
MEIBUTSU to nari-tsutsu aru...
with-specialty/ although-become be/have
noted-product
2
[Hikaru happily feeds Kyousuke from her box lunch. They sit in his classroom.
Kyousuke sweats and forces a smile.]
Hikaru:
Say "ahh" . a--n
narration:
--this familiar scene... itsu-mo no kono FUUKEI...
usual/habitual this-scenery/view
3
[She stops to rummage in her bag. Komatsu and Hatta stand by and watch,
smiling.]
Hikaru:
Oh yeah, that's right. a sou sou
Hikaru FX: ________
gosogoso
4
[Beaming a gigawatt smile, she presents an exchange diary to him. Komatsu
and Hatta recoil in horror. Kyousuke looks ill.]
Hikaru:
Here! Today it's your turn, hai KYOU wa SEMPAI no BAN desu yo!
Sempai! today (T) 's turn is
Komatsu and Hatta:
OHHH! o~~~~_
Komatsu and Hatta FX:
doyo doyo
book: _____ _____
Jump-kun and Ribbon-chan's jampu-kun to ribon-chan no
Jump-kun and Ribbon-chan 's
EXCHANGE DIARY KOUKAN NIKKI
exchange diary
5
Komatsu: [fist clenched]
This is indeed a true kore koso AI no akashi
demonstration of love. this-(one) indeed love 's demonstration/
proof
Ahh, I bet you two--as aa masa ni kimi-tachi
a married couple--are about surely you-(and-assoc)
to enter the mature stage! _______
FUUFU wa kappuru to shite
married-couple (T) in-capacity-of-couple
ENJUKU-KI ni hairo-- to shite-iru!
in-mature-stage is-about-to-enter
Kyousuke: [wincing, clutching book]
(How embarrassing.) (hazukashi-- naa)
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p 69 (69)
1
[Exterior night shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]
2
[Kyousuke sits and nervously reads Hikaru's entries in the exchange diary.]
Kyousuke:
But... shikashi...
3
diary entry:
October 16. 10-GATSU 16-NICHI
_____
Today, I'm writing this KYOU wa beddo no NAKA de
in bed. today (T) in-bed
kono NIKKI o KAite-imasu
this-diary-(entry) (O) am-writing
Right now I'm thinking IMA sempai ni motte-Iku ashita no
about the menu for now to-Sempai take tomorrow's
tomorrow's box lunch that _______
I'm going to take for o-bento-- no menyu-- o KANGAete-imasu
Sempai. box-lunch 's menu (O) am-thinking-about
I wonder what sort of box donna o-bento-- ni
lunch I should make...? what-kind-of box-lunch (IO)
shiyou ka na...?
shall-make I-wonder
_________ ___ _____
Hamburgers, fried shrimp, hamba--gu ebi furai soretomo
or fried fish... hamburger fried-shrimp or
_____
o-SAKANA no furai...
fish 's fry
I've gotten sleepy while KANGAete-iru uchi ni
thinking about all this, am-thinking-about within
so I'll stop here for
tonight. nemuku natta no de
became-sleepy since
KON'YA wa kore de yamemasu
tonight (T) here stop
4
diary entry: [continued, partial view]
October 17. 10-GATSU 17-NICHI
__________
...I took a bath with ...wa kumagoro--chan to
Kumagorou-chan. (T) with-Kumagorou-chan
o-FURO ni HAIrimashita
took-a-bath
__________
...my stuffed bear ...nuigurumi no kumagoro--chan
Kumagorou-chan doesn't mind stuffed-animal 's
getting wet!
...MIZU ni nurete-mo he--ki
in-water even-tho-get-wet unconcerned
na n desu yo!
is (explan)
...looks like you, Sempai, ...mpai ni nite tottemo kawaii no
and is awfully cute . __________
...but Kumagorou-chan can't ...mo kumagoro--chan wa
eat. = but (T)
...gohan ga taberenai no
meal (S) can't-eat
It's so sad... kawaisou...
[A crying Kumagorou-chan is drawn at the bottom of the page.]
5
[Kyousuke blushes to find his sisters leaning over his shoulder and reading
with relish.]
Manami:
Wah! It's an exchange wa-- KOUKAN NIKKI da!!
diary!! exchange diary is
Kyousuke:
WAH!! wa_!!
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p 70 (70)
1
[View pans back to show the three at the kitchen table. Kurumi stands; the
other two are seated.]
Manami:
Hikaru-san's handwriting is hikaru-san no JI tte
so cute, isn't it. 's handwriting (T)
kawai-- no ne--
cute (rhet)
2
Kyousuke: [merrily]
In some way, this is like nan-to-naku SHOUGAKUSEI
a grade school picture in-some-way elementary-school-student
diary, or...
no E NIKKI FUU tte yu-- ka...
's picture diary style called or
Something like hikaru-chan rashii na
Hikaru-chan...
Kinda child-like... KODOMO ppoku tte...
child-like
3
[Kurumi stares at him in thought.]
Kurumi:
Hmm... fu--n...
4
Kurumi:
An exchange diary is KOUKAN NIKKI tte KODOMO ppoi no?
childish? exchange-diary (T) child-like (?)
Kyousuke: [wincing]
Ehh...? No. I didn't say e... iya ja naku tte
that. no is-not (quote)
It's the *contents* of the NIKKI no NAIYOU ga
diary... diary 's contents (S)
5
[Kurumi puts her hands on her hips and announces with glee...]
Kurumi: _____
e_hen
So, since I'm not doing ja atashi KOUKAN NIKKI yatte-nai
an exchange diary, I'm an so I exchange-diary not-doing
adult!
kara OTONA da ne!
that's-why adult be
6
Kyousuke and Manami:
.......... ..........
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p 71 (71)
1
[Exterior shot of a school building.]
narration:
The next day... YOKUJITSU
2
[Kurumi's pov. Hikaru turns.]
Hikaru:
Eh?! I'm childish?! e_ atashi ga KODOMO ppoi?!
! I (S) child-like
3
Kurumi: [matter-of-factly]
Yup. Oniichan said an un oni--chan ga KOUKAN NIKKI nante
exchange diary is something (S) exchange-diary or-such
a child does.
KODOMO no yaru koto da tte
child (S) does thing is (quote)
4
[Hikaru's eyes go glassy in shock.]
5
Hikaru:
I see... .....soo
6
Kurumi: [hands on hips, smiling]
I'm not doing an exchange atashi KOUKAN NIKKI shite-nai
diary, so I'm an adult! I exchange-diary not-doing
da kara OTONA!
and-so adult
_____
e_hen
7
[Exterior shot of school grounds. Students leave for home.]
school bell FX: ___ ___ ___ ___
kin kon kan kon
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p 72 (72)
1
[Hikaru full-length portrait--depressed, she walks home alone.]
2
[She exits the front gate.]
Hikaru:
(In the end, I just couldn't (to--to-- KYOU wa o-bento--
deliver the box lunch in-the-end today (T) box-lunch
today...)
watasenakatta naa.....)
could-not-deliver/give
3
[Against the backdrop of the sky, she visualizes Kurumi.]
narration: [flashback]
Oniichan said an exchange oni--chan ga KOUKAN NIKKI nante
diary is something a child (S) exchange-diary or-such
does.
KODOMO no yaru koto da tte
child (S) does thing is (quote)
4
[She looks off to the side, unhappily.]
narration:
I... atashi tte......
I wonder if the things I atashi no yaru koto tte
do are so childish? I (S) do things (T)
sonna ni KODOMO ppoi no ka na--
so-much child-like I-wonder
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p 73 (73)
1
[Elsewhere, Komatsu and Kyousuke walk home.]
Komatsu: ______
Oh, that zit! a sono nikibi!
2
[Kyousuke is preoccupied with his thoughts.]
Kyousuke:
(What could be the matter? (do-- shita n daro
In the end, Hikaru-chan hikaru-chan KYOU wa to--to--
didn't come by today... today (T) finally/in-the-end
konakatta na--
didn't-come (rhet)
Because when Hikaru-chan nanse hikaru-chan ga konai
doesn't come, something's because (S) not-come
happened...)
TOKI tte nani-ka aru n da yo ne--)
time (T) something happen (explan) (rhet)
3
[Komatsu points to his left cheek. Kyousuke touches his own.]
Komatsu: ______
Hey, isn't that an "I was omae sore furare nikibi jan
rejected" zit? you that-(one) be-rejected pimple is-not
Kyousuke:
Eh?! e?!
4
Kyousuke:
What do you mean by that? nan da yo sore
what is that-(one)
Komatsu:
You don't know? Everyone SHIrane-- no ka yoku yu-- jan
says it. not-know (?) commonly say is-not
5
[A diagram of Kyousuke's face. Four pimples dot his skin. Lines and
descriptions radiate from each pimple.]
diagram:
[forehead] Desire. OMOi
[right cheek] Reject. furi
[chin] Be desired. OMOware
[left cheek] Be rejected. furare
6
Komatsu:
To put it simply, a pimple yo--suru ni HIDARI no hoo ni
on the left cheek is called in-short on-left-cheek
an "I was rejected" pimple. ______
dekiru to furare nikibi
if-come-into-existence be-jilted-pimple
tte koto da
it's-called
7
[View of the sky over a playground.]
Komatsu: [off]
Be careful about this, kore wa abunai zo! KASUGA...
Kasuga! this-(one) (T) dangerous !!
Kyousuke: [off]
Ca... so...
8
Kyousuke: ____
Can't be. sonna baka na
narration: ______
It's only a pimple... takaga nikibi...
merely pimple
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p 74 (74)
1
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]
Kyousuke: [off] ______
(But, an "I was rejected" (demo furare nikibi tte koto wa...)
pimple means...) but was-jilted-pimple that-means
2
[He sits at the counter, fingering his zit.]
Kyousuke:
(As for who does the (furu -KATA wa MIGI no hoppe ni
rejecting, they say the jilt direction (T) on-right-cheek
"reject" pimple appears on ______
the right cheek...) furi nikibi ga dekiru
jilt-pimple (S) come-into-existence
tte koto da yo na...)
it's-said
3
Kyousuke FX: ______
chira_
4
[His view of the backside of Madoka, who's busy with the shelves behind the
counter.]
5
[She turns, flawless face smiling.]
Madoka:
Hmm? Did you say e nani-ka itta?!
something?! something said
6
Kyousuke: [smiling]
Ah! a_
7
Kyousuke: ___
ho_
Madoka:
? ?
narration:
Nothing there... nai...
I'm glad! yokatta!
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p 75 (75)
1
[Exterior shot of the Hiyama residence.]
sign:
Hiyama HIYAMA
2
[A split panel shows the stuffed animals and toys in her room. Note the
alternate-reality ^_^ US map on her wall, as well as Kumagorou-kun and yet
another kappa.]
3
[Sitting on the floor, she clenches her eyes shut and presses her hands to
her temples.]
Hikaru: [flash thoughts]
(Childish.) (Childish.) (KODOMO ppoi) (KODOMO ppoi) (KODOMO ppoi)
(Childish.) (Childish.)
(Childish.) (KODOMO ppoi) (KODOMO ppoi)
4
[She opens her eyes and looks off-panel.]
5
[She dials a number.]
touchtone phone FX: ___ ___
pi_ pa_
6
Hikaru:
Hello... Ah, Yuusaku? moshimoshi... a YUUSAKU?
7
Hikaru:
I need... ..........anta ni
...to see you. YOU ga aru no
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p 76 (76)
1
[Kyousuke walks down the street.]
2
[He looks off to the side, surprised at what he sees.]
3
[He hides around the corner of a building...]
Kyousuke FX: ___
sa_
4
[...and sneaks a peek. It is Hikaru and Yuusaku, talking at the corner.
Hikaru smiles.]
Kyousuke:
(H-Hikaru-chan. (hi...hikaru-chan
She's with Yuusaku. YUUSAKU to issho da
with-Yuusaku together is
What's she doing...?) nani shite n daro...)
5
narration:
And she didn't come at o-HIRU ni konakatta koto to ii
lunchtime either. at-lunchtime did-not-come matter either
Just as I thought, yappari KYOU no hikaru-chan wa
Hikaru-chan is acting kinda just-as-I-thought today's (T)
strange today!
nanka HEN da zo!
somewhat strange !!
6
[Hikaru closeup--she has what appears to be a small pimple on her right
cheek.]
7
narration: ______
Th-the "reject" pimple? fu furi nikibi?
8
[Yuusaku has one on his chin.]
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p 77 (77)
1
[Kyousuke is incredulous.]
narration: ______
The "I am desired" pimple?! OMOware nikibi?!
2
[Cupping a hand to one ear, he flashes with the Power.]
narration:
What the heck are they ittai nani HANAshite n da?!
talking about?! in-the-world what talking (explan)
Kyousuke:
(It's a little sneaky, (chotto zurui kedo...)
but...) a-bit sly/unfair but
3
Yuusaku:
Eh? You're saying e WAKAreru tte?!
farewell?! part-company/bid-farewell (quote)
Hikaru:
Yeah. I've decided! un atashi KImeta n da!
I decided (explan)
4
Kyousuke: [grimacing]
(Man, she's saying this is (moo kore kkiri ni suru tte...)
it...) once-and-for-all/ do (quote)
this-is-all
5
[View of a pedestrian overpass.]
Hikaru: [off]
And so, if you want... da kara anata yokattara...
and-so/and-then you if-okay
Come with me. tsuite-kite
coming-along-with-(me)
6
[Kyousuke looks blank.]
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p 78 (78)
1
[In a daze, he continues on his way.]
Kyousuke: _ ___
(A-am I having a bad dream (o...ore AKUMU demo
or something?) I bad-dream or-something
mite-ru n daro-- ka)
be-seeing-(having) (poss-explan) (?)
Kyousuke FX: ______
furari
2
narration:
S-somehow, I've gotten na nan-da-ka
confused. somehow-(or-other)
ATAMA no NAKA ga kongarakatte
am-confused
Kyousuke FX: _____
fura_
3
[A view of a river, as it passes under a bridge.]
Hikaru: [off]
Sayo-o-nara. sayo--nara
4
[Tearfully, Hikaru kneels and says her goodbyes. Here, she holds her faithful
teddy bear.]
Hikaru: __________
Farewell, Kumagorou-chan. sayonara kumagoro--chan
Farewell, everyone. sayonara minna
5
[View pans back. She rises. In front of her is a sack filled with toys and
stuffed animals. Yuusaku stands nearby with another sack slung over his
shoulder.]
Hikaru:
Saying goodbye makes me WAKAreru no wa sabishi-- kedo...
feel sad... bidding-farewell (T) lonely/sad but
But as of today, I'm going KYOU KAGIri de atashi KODOMO pposa kara
to bid farewell to my up-till-today I to-childishness
childishness.
sayonara shitai no
want-to-bid-farewell
6
[Tight shot of the sack on the ground.]
Hikaru: [off] ________
Thank you, Yuusaku. sankyu-- YUUSAKU
I wasn't able to carry it hitori ja mochikirenakatta
by myself! by-myself-(T) couldn't-carry-it-solely
toko datta no!
occasion was
7
[Frowning, she points to his chin.]
Hikaru:
Oh! You've got a grain of ara anta konna tokoro ni
rice stuck here--how sloppy! you to-this-kind-of-place
_____
gohantsubu tsukete
grain-of-boiled-rice sticking-to
darashinai!
untidy
Yuusaku: [nervously]
H-Hikaru-chan, so do you! hi hikaru-chan koso!
8
[She blushes and glares, pointing at her pimple.]
Hikaru:
How rude!! SHITSUREI ne!!
______
This is a pimple!! kore wa nikibi yo!!
this-(one) (T) pimple
I ate a few too many sweets kino-- chotto o-KASHI o
yesterday!! yesterday a-bit sweets (O)
TAbesugichatta no!!
overate
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p 79 (79)
1
[Kyousuke sits at the counter, cheek in hand, looking blank and morose.]
Kyousuke FX: ________
boke~~~_
2
[Madoka leans in from the other side of the counter and studies him closely.
He doesn't notice.]
3
[He talks to himself. Madoka listens silently.]
Kyousuke:
Why... Yuusaku of all nande... yori ni yotte
people... why of-all-(people)
YUUSAKU nanka to......
the-likes-of (quote)
4
Kyousuke stand-up FX: _____
gatan
5
[And he exits without a word. Madoka, coffee cup in hand, watches him leave
in surprise.]
door FX: _____
karan
Madoka: ______
..... Kasuga-kun. Your ..........KASUGA-kun ko--hi...
coffee...
6
[View of a store-lined alleyway.]
7
Kyousuke/Hikaru/Yuusaku FX: _______
battari
Hikaru:
Ah! a
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p 80 (80)
1
[Hikaru executes a gleeful Flying Neck Tackle (tm).]
Hikaru:
SEMPA-A-AI!! sempa--i!!
2
[She steps back and gazes down fiercely at the pavement. She clears her
throat.]
Hikaru:
(Mustn't be like that. (to natcha ikenai
This is where I act mature!) koko wa OTONA ppoku!)
this-place (T) adult-like
Hikaru FX: _____
gohon
3
[Beaming a smile, she bends slightly at the waist in greeting.]
Hikaru:
Hello, Kasuga-san! konnichi wa KASUGA-san!
(Now Sempai will no longer (kore de SEMPAI mo--
call me childish...) with-this/now no-more
atashi no koto KODOMO da nante
about-me childish the-likes-of
iwanai hazu...)
ought-not-say
4
[Kyousuke looks at her wide-eyed and sweating.]
Kyousuke FX: ______
chira_
5
[Pov shifts--Kyousuke sees a smiling Hikaru standing next to Yuusaku.]
narration:
Maybe Hikaru-chan prefers yappari hikaru-chan
Yuusaku, after all... after-all
YUUSAKU no ho-- ga i-- no ka...
better
6
[Without a word, Kyousuke angrily turns away and races off.]
narration: ___
She hates me already! ore wa mo-- KIRAwareta n da!
I (T) already was-disliked (explan)
Kyousuke FX: ___
da_
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p 81 (81)
1
[She extends a hand out, and looks bewildered.]
Hikaru:
Oh... Sempai! a...SEMPAI!
2
Hikaru:
Sempai... Why? SEMPAI... do--shite
(Even though I especially (sekkaku mo-- KODOMO ppoku
decided not to do childish taking-the-trouble any-more child-like
things any more.)
shinai tte KImeta no ni)
not-do (T) decided even-tho
3
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]
4
[Madoka turns to watch Hikaru enter.]
Madoka:
Welco... irassha...
door FX: _____
karan
5
[Hikaru sits at the counter, gaze downcast and sad.]
Madoka:
What's the matter? do-- shita no
You look dejected... shombori shichatte...
6
Hikaru:
.......... ..........
Even though I took the sekkaku OTONA ppoku
trouble to try to act like taking-the-trouble adult-like
an adult...
naro-- to shita no ni...
tried-to-become even-tho
7
Madoka: [wide-eyed]
You bid farewell to your KODOMO pposa kara sayonara suru tte?!
childhood?! childhood from bid-farewell (quote)
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p 82 (82)
1
[Hikaru rests her chin on the edge of the counter and stares wide-eyed at her
hands before her.]
Hikaru:
And even though Yuusaku de YUUSAKU ni TEtsudatte-moratte
helped me go and bid farewell and-so by-Yuusaku helping-me
to Kumagorou-chan and the __________
others, Sempai... kumagoro--chan-tachi to
with-Kumagorou-chan-and-associates
sayonara shite-kita n desu na no ni
went-to-bid-farewell (explan) even-tho
SEMPAI ttara...
(I-tell-you)
2
[Madoka reflects...]
3
[...then looks up at the ceiling, face expressionless.]
4
Madoka: [serving a drink]
Kasuga-kun really said that? HONTOU ni KASUGA-kun ga itta no?
really (S) said (?)
That you're childish? KODOMO ppoi tte
childish (quote)
glass-on-counter FX: ___
kon
5
[Hikaru has sunk even lower in her seat. Now, only her head is visible, chin
resting on the counter. She closes her eyes in misery.]
Hikaru:
No... Kurumi-chan said ie... kurumi-chan ga SEMPAI ga
that Sempai said that... no (S) (S)
so-- itte-ta tte
was-saying-that (quote)
6
Madoka:
I wonder if Kasuga-kun is KASUGA-kun tte HONKI de sonna koto
the kind of person that (T) seriously that-kind-of-thing
would seriously say such
a thing? yu-- HITO ka naa
say person I-wonder
7
[Sitting up, Hikaru suddenly visualizes Kurumi.]
Hikaru:
Ah! Come to think of it!! ha_ so-- ieba!!
Kurumi: [flashback]
I'm not doing an exchange atashi KOUKAN NIKKI shite-nai
diary, so I'm an adult! I exchange-diary not-doing
da kara OTONA!
and-so adult
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p 83 (83)
1
Hikaru: [looking down]
But I'm doing box lunches demo atashi tte o-bento-- ya
and exchange diaries, which but I (T) box-lunch and
is so much like playing
house... KOUKAN NIKKI da nante
exchange-diary is the-likes-of
o-mamagoto mitai na koto yattari shite...
like-play-house thing do-(and)
Madoka: [merrily] __________
Shouldn't a girl of the sutore--to de KOUDOU HA no
School of Direct Action (in)-straight action -school/sect 's
be showing more spirit?! ______
ONNA no KO tte ikiiki shite-te
girl (T) being-lively
i-- ja nai?!
good is-not
2
Hikaru:
I'm so simpleminded that I TANJUN da kara
believe anything a person simple-minded that's-why
says.
HITO no yu-- koto nan demo
person (nom) say (nom) anything
ma ni ukechau shi
believe consider
Madoka: [smiling, arms crossed]
You're an innocent and MUJAKI de SUNAO na ONNA no KO tte
sweet girl who brings being-innocent gentle girl (T)
cheer to this place!
kotchi made AKAruku sasete-kureru
to-this-way making-cheerful/bright
wa yo!
3
[Madoka facial portrait--gentle smile.]
Madoka:
That's the sort of Hikaru atashi wa sonna hikaru ga
I love! I (T) that-kind-of (S)
DAISUki yo!
is-greatly-liked
4
Hikaru: [perking up]
R-really? so so-- desu kaa
5
[Blushing, Hikaru reflects.]
narration:
It's true. so-- yo ne
Moping around and pouting kuyokuyo uji uji
isn't like me. mope/brood sulk/pout-(FX-word)
NAYAnde-ru nante
being-afflicted-with the-likes-of
atashi ja nai wa
I is-not
6
[The two converse cheerfully.]
narration:
Thank you, Madoka-san! arigatou madoka-san!
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p 84 (84)
1
[Exterior shot of the entrance to a school building.]
narration:
The next day... YOKUJITSU...
2
[Kyousuke nervously approaches Hikaru, who stands with back towards him.]
narration: ___
She said she wants to talk ore ni HANASHI tte...
to me... by-me talk (quote)
H-Hikaru-chan is finally... hi hikaru-chan tsui ni...
3
[She turns towards him with a glare. Kyousuke cringes.]
Hikaru:
Sempai! SEMPAI!
Let's stop doing the moo KOUKAN NIKKI wa yamemashou!
exchange diary already! already exchange-diary (T) shall-stop
4
Kyousuke:
J-just as I thought. ya... yappari YUUSAKU ga...
Yuusaku is...
Hikaru:
Huh?! What's this about e?! nani YUUSAKU tte?!
"Yuusaku?!" what (quote)
5
[He looks up with a slightly hopeful smile.]
Kyousuke:
Eh?! e?!
6
[Beaming, she holds out a pair of necklaces--one is a heart pierced by an
arrow, the other is Cupid with an arrow cocked.]
Hikaru:
Say, Sempai. ne-- SEMPAI
Don't you think this is KOUKAN NIKKI yori kotchi no HOU ga ii
better than the exchange than-exchange-diary this-way better
diary?
to OMOimasen?
not-think-that
Kyousuke:
Huh?! ha?!
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p 85 (85)
1
[She takes him by an arm and gives him a wink. Kyousuke now holds the Cupid
necklace.]
Hikaru: _______
This is much more adult! kotchi no ho-- ga gutto adaruto!
this-way much-more adult
Now we have a mature kore de atashi-tachi
relationship! with-this/now we
OTONA no o-tsukiai ne!
adult 's association
2
[He blushes and stares at the pendant that he holds up to his eye.]
Kyousuke:
(How on earth did it come to (ittai do-- natte n no?!)
this?!) in-the-world how becoming
3
[View shifts. Madoka watches the two. Hikaru happily hangs on to Kyousuke's
arm.]
4
[With a toss of her hair, Madoka walks away.]
narration:
That girl is... ONNA no KO tte...
Whimsical after all! yappari kimagure na n desu ne!
after-all whimsical is (explan)
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