Kimagure Orange Road
"Parallel Hero!"
Volume 10, Story 3
WB Volume 6, Story 3
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Thomas Wyatt
Ka-Ping Yee
Jerry Lee
Last revision : 08-17-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 47 (47) are only in the WBs!
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p 47 (47)--TITLE PAGE
[Parallel-Madoka lies on her back on the bed, arms tied behind her, knees up
and arching her back in a vain attempt to escape the clutches of musclehead
1.]
MAIN TITLE (at top) ________ ________
Parallel Hero! parareru - hi--ro--!
Madoka:
NO-O-O!! iya--_!!
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
Oh No! TAIHEN da!
Madoka-san Is in Really Big madoka-san ga HONTOU ni yabai!!
Trouble!! (S) really in-for-it
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p 48 (48)
1
[Kyousuke lets out another desperate roar.]
Kyousuke:
AYUKAWA!! AYUKAWA_!!
2
[View pans back to show him riding double behind Hikaru, on a motor scooter.]
scooter FX: ______
biiiin
3
[Hikaru's pov as they race down the street.]
narration:
I-I heard it again-- ma mata kikoeta AYUKAWA no sakebi KOE da!!
Ayukawa's scream!! again heard 's screaming is
voice
Kyousuke: [off]
I see it! The school!! mietaa GAKKOU da!!
saw school is
4
[Hikaru spins the scooter sideways to brake. Kyousuke pitches off his seat.]
braking FX: _____
kiki_
Kyousuke:
Wahhh! waa_
5
Kyousuke: [clutching his head]
Ow-ow-ouch. You're so atete RAMBOU da naa
rough... reckless/violence is (rhet)
motorcycles FX: [off] ___ ___ ___
do_ do_ do_
Hikaru:
Look... .........miro yo
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p 49 (49)
1
[Their view of the motorcycle punks encamped around the school.]
2
[The twins join them. All three Kasugas look on in trepidation.]
Hikaru:
Jeez... korya...
It's not going to be easy chotto ya sotto ja
getting in there! a-bit and quietly/secretly in
mogurikome so-- mo nee ze
slip/creep/get-into it-looks too not-have
3
[The twins laugh nervously.]
Kurumi:
I-I've gotten sorta a atashi nan da ka nemuku natchatta ka
sleepy... I somewhat became-sleepy
Maybe I'll go home. KAEro-- ka naa
shall-go-home I-wonder
Manami:
Oh, that's right. I still a so-- da atashi mo mada
haven't done my homework. that's-right I too still
SHUKUDAI yatte-nai n da
homework not-done (explan)
4
Komatsu: [approaching on his bicycle]
WAIT! mate--_
Hikaru: [looking back angrily]
You can't keep on saying to ittatte TOmatte-ru
that even when we've even-tho-say-that be-stopping
stopped.
wake ni mo ikanai
can't-very-well-also
5
Hikaru:
ANYWAY, CHA-A-ARGE! tonikaku tsukkome------_
anyway charge
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p 50 (50)
1
[Hikaru turns to find a hefty punk resting his meaty paw on her head. Her
face loses its expression of defiance.]
punk 1:
Charge what? nani o tsukkomu tte?
what (O) charge (quote)
2
[View pans way back to show the four surrounded. Hikaru is on her scooter.
The twins on theirs. Kyousuke stands nearby.]
punk 1: _____
Cute babes out for a walk kawaiKO-chan-tachi
this late at night? cute-little-girl-(and-assoc)
konna YORU fuke ni o-sampo kai
this-late-at-night a-walk (?)
___ ___ ___
he_ he_ he_
punk 2: __ __ __ __
What did you come here to nani shi ni kita no ke ke ke ke
do? what to-do came (?)
3
punk 1: _________
Maybe you came here to yarashi-- koto shitaku tte
fool around. want-to-do-indecent-things
ASObi ni kita no ka na
came-to-play I-wonder
punk 2: ___ __ __ __
If we'll do, then... ore-tachi de yokattara ke ke ke
by-us if-okay
4
[Hands reach out towards the terrified Manami and Kurumi.]
punk 2:
...we'll be your partners! AITE ni naru zee
Manami and Kurumi:
Kyaaa! kya--_
5
[All three girls cling tight to, and cower against, Kyousuke. They bury their
faces in his chest and back.]
Kurumi:
This is frightening, yappari kowai yo----_!!
after all!! sure-enough frightful
Hikaru/Kurumi/Manami FX: ________
pyu~~~~_
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p 51 (51)
1
[Flashing with the Power, he holds Hikaru and glares off-panel.]
Kyousuke: ___
Hang on tight to me, minna shikkari ore ni tsukamatte!!
everyone!! everyone tightly to-me grasping
2
punk 1:
Trash the guy, grab the OTOKO wa buttobase
girls!! men (T) pound-someone-senseless
ONNA wa hippegase!!
women (T) grab
3
[The punks rush the four, only to find nothing there.]
punks:
WAHHH! wa----_
4
punk 3: __________
Dumbshit! Whaddaya think bakayaro-- doko tsukande n da yo!
you're grabbing?! where holding (explan)
punk 4:
Hey, dey's gone!! oi ine-- zo
hey = aren't-here !!
5
punk 5:
Disappeared... KIeta...
punk 6:
They dug a hole or ANA demo hotta n ja nai no kaa
something? hole or-something dug (explan) (?)
punk 7: ______
Idiot. ba--ka
6
[The four reappear inside the school amidst a crackling of sparks. The three
girls still hide their faces against Kyousuke's body as he takes a heroic
stance.]
rematerialization FX: ____
shu_
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p 52 (52)
1
Kyousuke: [wiping his brow]
Phew... That was close! fuu... KAN'IPPATSU!
by-a-hair/narrowly
Hikaru:
H-huh? Where are we? a are koko wa?
2
Hikaru: [wide-eyed]
Why... How did we get here? nande... do--shite koko ni?
why why to-here
Kyousuke:
Like I said. da kara itta desho
as/because-of said poss-be
3
Kyousuke: [thumbs up] ___
I have ESPer powers. ore CHOU-NOURYOKU ga TSUKAeru tte
I super-ability (S) can-use (quote)
4
[Kurumi, Manami and Hikaru look back in wide-eyed disbelief.]
5
[Tight shot of a fire alarm.]
Hikaru/Manami/Kurumi: [off]
Y-you're kidding!! u uso--_!!
6
[Shot of a sign outside a room.]
sign:
Health Room HOKEN SHITSU
overlaid on sign: ______
Hotel hoteru
7
[Musclehead 2 rests a paw on the shoulder of musclehead 1. Madoka appears to
have fainted.]
musclehead 2:
Hold it! chotto mate yo!
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p 53 (53)
1
musclehead 2:
How come you're first? nande omae ga SAKI na n da yo
why you (S) first are (explan)
musclehead 1: ___
Shut up! Anyway, I'm urusai tonikaku ore ga SAKI da!!
first!! anyway I (S) first is
2
musclehead 2:
You jerk! What a ripoff!! kono yaro-- kitane-- zo
this-jerk stingy/unfair !!
shove FX: ___
don
3
musclehead 1: [fist cocked]
Why ya... anda yo--
____
Whatcha doin', ya idiot!! yaru kaa kono tako!!
do (?) this-octopus-
4
Hikaru:
But where the heck in this demo ittai madoka-san
school is Madoka-san? but in-the-world
kono GAKKOU no doko ni iru n da yo
in-what-part-of-this-school exist (explan)
Kurumi:
That's right. so-- yo ne
Sure it's the school, but GAKKOU te ttatte HIROi
it's still a pretty big school even-tho-say-that extensive
place...
n da shi
(explan) and-besides
______
And how do we rescue her TEKI ga ujauja iru NAKA
from here, when it's enemy (S) swarm inside
swarming with enemies?
do-- yatte tasukedasu no yo
how doing rescue-(one)-from-(place)
5
[Kyousuke is busy concentrating, eyes closed.]
Kyousuke:
(Ayukawa! Ayukawa!! (AYUKAWA! AYUKAWA!!
Where the heck are you?!) ittai doko ni iru n da?!)
in-the-world in-what-place are (explan)
narration:
I could hear Ayukawa's AYUKAWA no KOE ga kikoeta
voice, so maybe that 's voice (S) heard
means...
tte koto wa...
that-means
In this world, I can use... kono SEKAI dattara TSUKAeru
this-world if-it-is can-use
ka mo shirenai...
it-is-possible
6
[Thoughts intrude upon the unconscious Madoka...]
Kyousuke: [off]
(...kawa. Ayukawa.) (...KAWA AYUKAWA)
7
[...and she opens her eyes.]
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p 54 (54)
1
Madoka:
(That voice--from back (sono KOE wa sakki no...
then... that-voice (T) a-little-while-ago 's
But how can I hear your demo do--shite atashi ni anta no KOE ga
voice?!) but why to-me your-voice (S)
kikoeru no?!)
hearing
2
Kyousuke: [still concentrating, eyes closed]
(That explanation can wait!! (sono SETSUMEI wa ato da_!!
that-explanation (T) afterward is
Where are you right now?!) IMA doko ni iru?!)
now at-what-place are
3
[Hikaru stares at the back of Kyousuke.]
Hikaru:
What's the matter? do-- shita?
Kyousuke:
All right. I gotcha! yoshi wakatta!
4
Hikaru:
Huh?! e?!
[Kyousuke turns to address the others.]
Kyousuke:
I've discovered her AYUKAWA no IBASHO ga wakatta n da
whereabouts. 's whereabouts (S) known (explan)
5
[He turns and stalks down the hall. This is Kyousuke like you've never seen
before!]
Kyousuke:
Let's go. It's the Health ikou HOKEN-SHITSU da!
Room! shall-go health-room is
6
[Exterior shot of a school building. Faces are drawn in the appropriate
speech bubbles.]
Kurumi:
B-but, there's a Health de demo HOKEN-SHITSU tte doko ni
Room where? but health-room (T) at-what-place
aru n desu kaa
exist (explan) (?)
Hikaru:
How would I--a junior high nna mon
student--know something = that-sort-of thing
like that?!! ___
CHUUTOU-BU no ore ni ki--tatte
jr-high-section (nom) by-me even-tho-hear
wakaru ka_!!
know (?)
Kyousuke:
It's this way! kotchi da!!
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p 55 (55)
1
Manami: [racing after Kyousuke]
How do you know? do--shite SHItte n no
how-come knowing (?)
You aren't even a student anta kono GAKKOU no SEITO demo
here! you this-school's-student even
nai no ni
not-be even-though
Is that also a part of your sore mo CHOU-NOURYOKU tte yu--
ESPer powers? that-(one) too super-ability called
yatsu?
thing
2
Hikaru:
Hmm... fu--n......
3
Hikaru: [winking]
You're pretty reliable. omae kekko-- tayori ni naru jan
you quite reliable-(person) are-not
Hikaru backslap FX: ___
don
[Kyousuke is sent flying.]
4
[One punk rockets through the window and into the hallway.]
musclehead 1 FX: ______
gachan
5
musclehead 2:
haa_ haa_
Serves you right... zamaa miro...
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p 56 (56)
1
[He turns to look at Madoka, who lies on her back on the bed, wrists tied
behind her.]
musclehead 2: ___
I'm first!! ore ga SAKI da_!!
I (S) first-priority is
2
[He grasps her by the blouse...]
Madoka school uniform FX: __ ___
bi bi_
3
[...and tears it open. Madoka is out cold again.]
4
[Profile facial portrait of the musclehead.]
musclehead 2: ___ ___ ___ ___
he_ he_ he_ he_
5
[Tight shot of his eye as he stops short in mid-laugh.]
musclehead 2: ___
he_
6
[View pans back to show that he's levitating. He sweats, goggle-eyed.]
musclehead 2:
Huh?! he?!
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p 57 (57)
1
[He floats out the open window...]
musclehead 2:
Oo! u_
2
[...and plummets...]
musclehead 2:
Wahhh!! wa------_!!
3
[...into a swimming pool.]
musclehead 2 FX: _______
dobu--n
4
[Kyousuke stands at the doorway, ready for war.]
5
[He lifts Madoka up by her shoulders. She's still out cold.]
Kyousuke:
Are you all right, BUJI ka AYUKAWA_!!
Ayukawa?!! safe (?)
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p 58 (58)
1
Madoka: [opening her eyes]
Ah... a...
2
[He wraps his jacket around her. She pulls it tight.]
Kyousuke jacket FX: _____
pasa_
Kyousuke:
I came for you. mukae ni kita yo
3
[She looks back with kind eyes...]
4
[...and hugs him.]
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p 59 (59)
1
[He looks off-panel.]
Kyousuke:
Huh? are
2
[His view of the open door to the hallway.]
gang leader: [off]
So late, Hikaru-chan... osoi na hikaru-chan-tachi
late (and-assoc)
3
Hikaru: [off]
HELP-P-P!! tasukete--_!!
4
[Madoka and Kyousuke go into the hallway, to find the gang leader holding a
knife to Hikaru. The twins have their hands tied behind them.]
gang leader:
You're causing me a lot of sanzan TEkozurasete-kureru ja nai
trouble. terribly give-me-much-trouble is-not
Madoka:
HIKARU! hikaru!
5
gang leader:
But, unfortunately, no one daga ainiku atashi kara
has ever escaped from me. and-yet unfortunately from-me
nogarerareta yatsu wa inai
was-escaping fellow (T) not-be-there
n de ne
('cause)
And that includes you, too, anta mo so-- da yo
Ayukawa Madoka. you too looks-as-if
AYUKAWA madoka
6
[The gang leader raises her goggles and points her knife. Yup, she's Akane.]
Akane (gang leader):
I won't let my followers BUKA ni wa
interfere! by-subordinate (contrast)
TE o DAsasenai!
not-let-meddle-with
______
I was careless; this is taiman de SHOUBU da!!
my battle!! for-neglect/ victory-or-defeat is
carelessness
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p 60 (60)
1
[Akane raises her knife high, poised in a downward swing.]
2
Kyousuke: [wide-eyed]
(Akane?!) (akane?!)
3
[With a forced smile Kyousuke walks up to Akane and fingers the studs on her
leather wristband. He seems unconcerned about the knife.]
Kyousuke:
What are you doing? nani shite n da
what doing (explan)
Even you... omae made...
Waving around a dangerous sonna abunai mon furikazashite
thing like that. that-kind-of-dangerous-thing flourishing-
(a-sword)
Kyousuke FX:
tsukatsuka
narration:
What's Akane doing in a nande konna TOKORO ni akane ga iru
place like this? why in-this-place (S) exists
n da?
(explan)
4
Akane: [lunging at him with the knife]
What's that? You jerk!! nan da kisama wa_!!
what are you-(abusive)
Kyousuke: [dodging]
W-wait! ma mate yo!
___
It's me! ore da yo
5
[Crackling with the Power he telekinetically removes the knife from Akane's
hand.]
6
[Akane finds her wrists being raised together above her head. The knife
is embedded through her leather wristbands and into the wall. Without
piercing her wrists, yet...]
blade FX: ___
ka_
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p 61 (61)
1
Hikaru/Kurumi/Manami/Madoka:
AH! a
2
[Kyousuke lectures a wide-eyed Akane.]
Kyousuke:
We have to run away before kowai BANCHOU ga kuru MAE ni
the fearsome gang leader frightening gang-leader (S) come before
comes!
nigenakya ikenai no ni
must-run-away even-though
____
I don't have time to play omae to asonde-ru hima wa nai
with you, Akane-e-e! with-you be-playing not-have-free-time
n da ze akane~~~~!
(explan) !
Hikaru: [nervously]
..... She *is* the gang ......soitsu ga BANCHOU da yo
leader. that-person (S) gang-leader is
3
Kyousuke: [wide-eyed, nervous]
Eh? e
4
Akane: [sweating, wide-eyed]
S-such power! tsu...TSUYOi!
5
[Outside now, Akane addresses Kyousuke.]
Akane:
You win... MAketa yo anta ni wa...
lose to-you (contrast)
But I've never met a guy shikashi anta mitai na
as powerful as you before... but like-you
TSUYOi OTOKO wa HAJImete da...
powerful-man (T) for-the-1st-time be
6
Akane: __
Hey, everyone! oi minna!
From now on, this guy is KYOU kara kono HITO ga BANCHOU da!!
gang leader!! from-today this-guy (S) gang-leader is
gang:
OHHH! o----_
7
Kyousuke: [winking]
Hmm... It doesn't sound too fumu... WARUku wa nai ga
bad, but I'll defer! hmm bad (T) not-be but
ENRYO shitoku yo!
hesitate-(for-future-sake)
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p 62 (62)
1
[As he begins to walk away, he aims a wink at Akane...]
Kyousuke: ______
A girl is best, when she's ONNA no KO wa kawaii no ga
cute! girl (T) cute-one (S)
ICHIBAN da ze!
the-best is !
2
[...and strides out the school gates. He raises a thumbs-up and looks back
over his shoulder. Akane and Hikaru can only watch speechlessly.]
Kyousuke:
See ya! ja na!
Be nice to each other from kore kara wa nakayoku
now on!! from-now-on (T) good-relations
yan na yo!!
do
3
[Behind him, the newly-formed Kyousuke Fan Club gushes...]
Hikaru and Kurumi: _____ __
Kyaa! So cool! kya-- kakko ii!
Manami:
How wonderful. sutteki ne--
motorcycle FX: [off] ___ ___ ___
do_ do_ do_
4
[On the street outside the school gate waits Madoka, on a huge motorcycle.
She's changed into tight pants, shirt, jacket and boots.]
motorcycle FX: [off] ___ ___ ___
do_ do_ do_
5
Madoka: [soft smile]
Hop on... nori na yo...
You had somewhere to go, doko-ka iku tokoro ga atta n daro
didn't you? somewhere go place (S) had (poss-expl)
I'll take you there. okutte-iku yo
go-escorting
6
Kyousuke:
.......... Thank you. ..........arigato
narration:
But... I no longer have demo... mou doko ni mo iku
anyplace to go... but -more to-anywhere to-go
toko nai n da kedo...
place not-have (explan) but
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p 63 (63)
1
[He doubles up behind her as they zoom off.]
motorcycle FX: ________
dorururu
2
Kyousuke:
Huh?! Did you say e?! nani-ka itta?
something? something said
narration:
Well... This world isn't so maa... kono SEKAI mo waruku wa nai sa!
bad either! this-world too not-be-bad
3
Madoka:
I'm glad... I got to meet anata ni Aete...... yokatta
you. able-to-meet-you was-good
4
[Kyousuke portrait--wide-eyed.]
5
Madoka:
Maybe I should start being kore kara atashi kawaiku narou
cuter... from-now-on I shall-become-cute/
attractive/sweet
ka na......
I-wonder
6
Madoka:
For the sake of a certain DARE-ka-san no tame ni...
someone... Mr.-Somebody for-the-sake-of
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: ____
doki
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p 64 (64)
1
[He loses his grip and falls backward off the bike.]
Kyousuke FX: ____
zuru
Kyousuke:
AH! a
2
[Still falling backward, he watches as Madoka zooms away.]
3
[Fractured panel. His terrified face is replaced by the crackling of the
Power.]
Kyousuke:
I-I'M GONNA DI-I-IE! shi SHInu~~~~_
4
[He hugs Hikaru tightly. This Hikaru is wearing the sweater and skirt of
the Hikaru which opened chapter 10.1. She blushes in surprise.]
Kyousuke:
I-I'm gonna di-i-ie! shi...SHInu~~_
5
[He pulls back to stare goggle-eyed at the beaming Hikaru.]
Kyousuke:
Di... shi...
narration:
Huh... C-could this be... are... ko koko wa hyottoshite
huh this-place (T) maybe
Hikaru: [happily]
Oh no! Really, Sempai! ya da--_ SEMPAI ttara!
6
[Wide view of several of the rides at the park. This is a clean, bright and
cheerier park. And yup, there's the 7-foot-tall kappa mascot!]
narration:
I've returned to my world!! MOTO no SEKAI ni modoreta n da!!
to-original-universe was-able- (explan)
to-return
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p 65 (65)
1
[Kyousuke enters ABCB, followed closely by Hikaru. They appear to have come
directly from the amusement park.]
door FX: _____
karan
2
[Madoka works behind the counter, at which is seated Hatta, Komatsu, Kurumi,
Manami and Akane. This is his pov as all turn to look at him.]
narration:
And thus, my one night kou shite
trip is over... doing-like-this
___ ___ _____ _______
ore no wan naito - torippu wa Owatta...
my-one-night-trip (T) ended
Madoka: [smiling]
Welcome. irasshai
3
Madoka:
What's your order? go-CHUUMON wa?
order (T)
4
[He grins down at the counter. Displaying an unusual level of decisiveness
he says...]
Kyousuke: ________ _______
Coffee, black!! ko--hi-- o burakku de!!
coffee (O) black being
5
[Akane and Komatsu stifle laughter. Madoka and Kyousuke's sisters stare back
in wide-eyed shock.]
Komatsu: ___
pu_
6
[Exterior night shot of ABCB.]
Akane: [off] _____
What are you showing off naani kakko tsukete n no yo!
for?! what able-to-look-better
Komatsu: [off] ome-- ga yatte-mo KImannai
You can try, but it doesn't you (S) even-tho-doing not-be-decided/
work! not-be-natural
tte...no!
[A tiny, embarrassed Kyousuke adorns this narration panel.]
narration:
Somehow, it looks like nan da ka SUKOshi oshi-- koto
I've done something a bit somehow a-little regrettable-thing
regrettable...
shita yo-- na...
done it-looks-like
________
Still, the feeling of being imada hi--ro-- KIBUN
a hero hasn't faded away. still/yet hero feeling/atmosphere
___
sameyaranu ore desu
not-cool-down/not-fade-away I am
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