Kimagure Orange Road
"Parallel Boogie!"
Volume 10, Story 1
WB Volume 6, Story 1
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Jun Watatani
Craig Nishida
Thomas Wyatt
Jerry Lee
Last revision : 08-16-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 7 (7) are only in the WBs!
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p 7 (7)--TITLE PAGE
[Parallel-Madoka sits on the interior sill of a window in a ravaged classroom.
She wears her school uniform, skirt hiked to show lots of leg.]
MAIN TITLE (at top) ________ ____
Parallel Boogie! parareru - bugi!
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
A Young Lady Who Learns KOI SHIru SHOUJO wa
of Love Cannot Remain love to-know/learn young-lady (T)
Innocent Forever...
itsu-made-mo MUJAKI na
forever innocent/naive
mama ja irarenai...
in-unchanged-state can't-be-staying
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p 8 (8)
1
[View of a merry-go-round.]
Hikaru: [off]
Sempaaaaai! Hurry, hurry! sempa~~~~i! HAYAku HAYAku
narration:
Hello, everyone. Kyousuke mina-san konnichi wa KYOUSUKE desu
here. everyone hello is
I was dragged to the hikaru-chan ni hippararete
amusement park by by-Hikaru being-dragged-(and)
Hikaru-chan.
YUUENCHI ni kite-ru n desu
to-amusement-park are-coming (explan)
2
[Shot of this amusement park's mascot--a 7-foot-tall kappa.]
narration:
Hikaru-chan, who naturally motomoto YUUENCHI DAISUki no
loves amusement parks, seems naturally amusement-park loves (nom)
to have a particular goal
in mind today. hikaru-chan KYOU wa TOKU ni
today (T) special/particular
o-meate ga aru mitai desu
an-aim (S) have seems
Yes, that is... sou sore wa...
like-that that-(one) (T)
3
[View of a roller coaster coming out of a corkscrew, and, in the distance,
the swinging pirate ship ride.]
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p 9 (9)
1
[Kyousuke and Hikaru sit in a car of a rocketing roller coaster. Hikaru
raises both arms in glee. Kyousuke's face is a mask of pure terror.]
roller coaster FX: ________
go------
narration:
Hikaru-chan's goal is... hikaru-chan no o-meate wa kore!!
This!! 's aim (T) this-(one)
The amusement park's newly- YUUENCHI ni ATARAshiku dekita
opened, indoor roller at-amusement-park newly-opened
coaster ride! _____ __________
OKUNAI jetto ko--suta-- desu!
indoor jet-coaster is
2
[View shifts to show the roller coaster moving along unseen tracks in the
dark interior of the building. Ahead of them, a bright light shines.]
narration:
It feels just like we're marude HOSHI no NAKA o kakenukeru
riding on a starship that's just-like within-stars (O) run-through
traveling past the stars! _suta--shippu_
UCHUUSEN ni notte-ru KIBUN!
on-starship are-riding feeling
3
[Tight shot of Kyousuke--eyes and teeth clenched shut, a grimace on his face.]
narration: ___
Still, by nature, I can't sore ni shite mo ore motomoto
handle roller coasters... but/still I naturally
_____ __________
jetto ko--suta-- tte NIGATE na n da
jet-coaster (T) weak-pt is (explan)
kedo...
but
4
[Another shot of the roller coaster ride.]
narration:
This is the SCARIEST one kore ima made notta NAKA de
I've ever ridden!! this-(one) till-now rode in-inside
ichiban kowai!!
most frightful
is in larger type-face>
roller coaster FX:
go----
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p 10 (10)
1
[Kyousuke's pov from the front seat of the roller coaster. They head towards
the bright light of a "star".]
narration:
I-I can't... I can't take da dame da mo-- dame da
this any more! no-good is no-more no-good is
2
[Hikaru raises both arms and smiles. Kyousuke shuts his eyes again.]
narration:
H-help...! ta tasukete.........!
3
Kyousuke: [flash thought]
(I want offa here!! (dokka e nigetai!!)
Anywhere!!) = to-where(ever) want-to-escape
4
[He throws up his hands in fear as the light of the "star" grows very bright.]
Kyousuke:
Oo-wahhh! uwa--_!!
5
[He teleports out, leaving behind a Hikaru with eyes clenched shut (but
still smiling). Note that Hikaru wears a skirt, blouse and sweater.]
Kyousuke dematerialization FX: ______
bashu_
6
[Kyousuke flies through a dark void. Glowing bolts crackle around him.]
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p 11 (11)
1
[He rematerializes back in his seat, surprise on his face. Oddly, Hikaru is
now wearing a white jumpsuit. Her eyes are clenched shut.]
Kyousuke rematerialization FX: ____
shu_
2
[Tight shot of the wheels on the roller coaster.]
braking roller coaster FX: _____ ________ _____
gatan pushu--_ ki--_
3
[He embraces Hikaru, who looks quite surprised.]
Kyousuke: ___ ___
haa haa
I-is it over? o... Owatta ka
4
[Kyousuke springs away in embarrassment.]
Kyousuke FX:
sasa_
Kyousuke:
Ah! S-sorry. a go gomen
5
[Hikaru portrait--Angel-of-Death look.]
6
[She straight-arms him with a solid right to the cheek. For those of you
scoring at home, this is Kyousuke's Parallel Slap/Punch #1. His face goes
loopy.]
Hikaru:
YOU ASSHOLE!! buaka yarou_!!
WHATCHA THINK YA DOIN', nani sun da temee!!
YA PIG!! what doing is you-(vulgar)
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p 12 (12)
1
[Hand to injured cheek, eyes wide in shock and hurt, Kyousuke stares back.
This is Hikaru's pov.]
Kyousuke:
H-Hika... hi hika...
2
[A crowd gathers around the two, who stand next to the roller coaster.
Hikaru plants her feet wide and confronts him.]
Hikaru:
WHO THE HELL ARE YA?!! ittai DARE da omee wa!!
in-the-world who is = you (T)
Kyousuke:
Eh?! e?!
3
Hikaru:
Getting fresh with me! narenareshi-- yatsu!
(too)-familiar fellow
How long were you sitting itsu kara tonari ni suwatte n da?
next to me? since-when next-to sitting (explan)
___
I should have been riding ore hitori de notta hazu na no ni...
alone! I by-myself rode should even-tho
4
crowd FX: ________ ________
jirojiro hisohiso
5
Hikaru: [glaring]
Anyway... tonikaku...
6
Hikaru:
STEP OUTSIDE!! omote e DEro----_!!
to-the-outside go-out-(imperative)
Kyousuke:
F-FORGIVE ME-E-E!! su suimase--n!!
[He hightails it out of there.]
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p 13 (13)
1
[He pauses near a bench to catch his breath.]
Kyousuke: ___ ___
haa haa
trashcan sign:
Trash Container kuzu Ire
trash contain/hold
2
Kyousuke: [hand on injured cheek]
Ahh, I was so surprised. a-- bikkuri shita
What the hell's the matter ittai do-- shita
with Hikaru-chan...? in-the-world what's-the-matter
n darou hikaru-chan...
(poss-explan)
3
Kyousuke:
Huh? n?
___
Why did I have to run away? do--shite ore nigeDAsanakya ikenai no
why I must-run-away-(from) (?)
4
[Panels 4 and 5 show his pov of a few of the rides nearby.]
narration:
But... shikashi...
Ever since then... hikaru-chan to wa sore kkiri
with-Hikaru (contrast) since-then
sign:
Entrance IRIGUCHI
5
narration:
...I haven't been able to--to-- mitsukeDAsu
to find her. at-last began-to-discover
koto wa dekinakatta
thing (T) was-able-to
sign:
Mystery of the SEKAI no KE/KAI
Universe world/universe 's mystery
6
[A view of the entrance to the amusement park. It is a dingier place than
when we were last here.]
Big sign:
Toshima En TOSHIMA EN
mature-woman/ garden/yard/farm
middle-aged-woman
message sign at right:
Entrance includes an NYUUEN to subete no NORIMONO ga
unlimited pass to all entrance and all 's ride (S)
rides in the park.
NANKAI demo o-NOri ni naremasu
no-matter-how-many (hon)-can-ride
large sign at right: [partial] ______
FREE... furi--
Adult: 3000... OTONA 3000
narration: ___
I wonder if she disliked me ore ga anmari okubyo-- ppoi
because I was acting too I (S) (too)-much cowardly-like
much like a wimp?
koto shita kara
thing did that's-why
kirawarechatta no ka naa?
was-disliked-(finality) I-wonder
7
[Shot of a posted sign.]
notice:
Effective today, Toshima En HONJITSU o mochimashite
is closed. today/this-day (O)
applying/adopting
kono TOSHIMA-EN wa HEISA itashimasu
this (T) closure do/bring-about
Thank you very much for nagaraku no go- RAI- EN
your patronage over the for-many-years 's (hon)- coming/next park
years.
arigatou gozaimashita
thank-you-very-much
And because the entire park nao asu kara
will be demolished starting further beginning-tomorrow
tomorrow, entry is hereby
prohibited. KAKU- SHISETSU no torikowashi ga
every/each facility/ 's demolish/pull-down
establishment (S)
HAJImarimasu no de TAchi-Iri KINSHI
because-starting entrance prohibition
to narimasu
8
[He looks back at the sign in puzzlement.]
Kyousuke:
.......... ..........
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p 14 (14)
1
[A dark and ominous exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]
Kyousuke: [off]
I'm home...! tadaima----_!
2
[Manami, sitting in the tub, looks back over her shoulder in surprise.]
Manami FX: ______
chapun
3
[Kyousuke stands at the front door and addresses her. Manami has come out
wearing a towel.]
Kyousuke: _____
Ahh, I'm so hungry. Is a-- hara hetta meshi dekite-ru?
dinner ready? got-hungry meal is-ready
4
[She uncorks a wicked, open-palm, full-extension slap to Kyousuke's left
cheek (the same one). Yup, it's Parallel Slap #2! He's sent spinning.]
Manami: ________
You perve-r-rt!! kono chika--n!!
Manami slap FX: _______
pa----n
5
[Shot of the closed front door.]
Kyousuke: [off]
Wh-what are you doing?! na nani sun da yo!
what do is
Manami: [off]
Kurumi-i-i!! kurumi--_!!
There's a weird guy in here! HEN na OTOKO ga hairikonde-ru yo--_
weird guy (S) is-coming-in
Kyousuke: [off] _____
Is that any way to treat aniki ni mukatte
your older brother? to-older-brother facing
sorya nai daro--?
that not-have/happen poss-be
6
[She punts him 3 meters out the door and into the hallway.]
Manami: _____
There's no "older brother" uchi ni wa aniki
here! in-household (contrast) older-brother
nante inai yo
the-likes-of not-exist
Kyousuke: ____
Can't be!! sonna baka na_!!
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p 15 (15)
1
[Kyousuke, on hands and knees in the hallway.]
door FX: [off] _____
batan
2
[He visualizes his last two "Parallel Slap" encounters.]
Manami: [flashback] _____
There's no "older brother" uchi ni wa aniki
here! in-household (contrast) older-brother
nante inai yo
the-likes-of not-exist
Hikaru: [flashback]
Who the hell are ya?!! ittai DARE da omee wa!!
in-the-world who is = you (T)
3
Kyousuke: [flash thought]
(Nobody... (minna...
___
Knows anything about me. ore no koto SHIranai nante
about-me not-know the-likes-of
Maybe...!!) moshiya..........!!)
by-any-chance/if/lest
4
[He rises to his feet, hand clenched, eyes staring up.]
narration: __ ________ ________
Th-this is a parallel pa parareru - wa--rudo da!!
world!! parallel world is
Kyousuke:
And this time... shikamo KONDO wa...
moreover this-time (T)
5
[He runs.]
narration: ___
I've come to a world in ore no SONZAI shinai SEKAI ni
which I don't exist!! I not-exist to-world
kichatta n da------_!!
came-(finality/regret) (explan)
6
[Aghast, he recalls the strange teleportation through the black void during
his roller coaster ride.]
narration:
Ah! I see. ha_ sou ka
_____ __________ ______
Then this is all a result ja ano jetto ko--suta-- no shokku ga
of the shock of that roller then that-jet-coaster 's shock (S)
coaster ride!!
GEN'IN datta n da na!!
the-cause-(of) was (explan)
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p 16 (16)
1
[View looking out from the walkway of the Kasuga apartment building. This
is truly a dark and grimy world--reminds me of "Bladerunner".]
narration:
But... shikashi...
I've been to a parallel MAE ni mo ICHIDO
world once before, so I previously another-one-time
know how to return (*). ________ ________
parareru - wa--rudo ni kita
to-parallel-world came
koto ga aru kara
(I-have-experienced-it) that's-why
KAEru HOUHOU wa wakatte-iru (*)
to-return a-means (T) am-knowing
2
[He smiles in relief.]
narration: __________ ______
If I got here because of ano ko--suta-- no shokku de
the shock of riding that that-coaster 's shock because-of
roller coaster...
kichatta no nara...
came-(finality) (nom) if
__________
Then all I have to do is mata ano ko--suta-- ni noreba i--
ride that roller coaster again on-that-coaster if-ride okay
again!!
n da!!
(explan)
Kyousuke:
Sure. un
3
Kyousuke:
Oh! Wait!! ha mate yo_!!
4
[He recalls the posted sign.]
Kyousuke:
AHH! a~~_
notice: [flashback]
Effective today, Toshima En HONJITSU o mochimashite
is closed. today/this-day (O)
applying/adopting
kono TOSHIMA-EN wa HEISA itashimasu
this (T) closure do/bring-about
Thank you very much for nagaraku no go- RAI- EN
your patronage over the for-many-years 's (hon)- coming/next park
years.
arigatou gozaimashita
thank-you-very-much
And because the entire park nao asu kara
will be demolished starting further beginning-tomorrow
tomorrow, entry is hereby
prohibited. KAKU- SHISETSU no torikowashi ga
every/each facility/ 's demolish/pull-down
establishment (S)
HAJImarimasu no de TAchi-Iri KINSHI
because-starting entrance prohibition
to narimasu
5
Kyousuke:
If I don't ride it today, KYOU NAKA ni noranai to
then I can never return today during if-not-ride
to my universe?!
moto no SEKAI e modorenaku natchau
to-original-universe can't-return-
(finality/regret)
ja nai ka?!
Th-this is no joke. jo jo--dan ja nai
I don't want to live the konna FUYUKAI na SEKAI ni
rest of my life in such an in-this-kind-of-unpleasant-world
unpleasant world!!
kore kara ISSHOU
from-now-on (one's)-whole-life
itaku wa nai!!
not-want-to-be/stay
6
[He looks up in fear at the darkening skies.]
Kyousuke:
D-d-damn! ta ta TAIHEN!
It's already getting dark. mo-- HI ga kurete-ru
already is-growing-dark
I gotta get to the HAYAku YUUENCHI ni ikanakya!!
amusement park quick!! soon to-amusement-park must-go
7
Kyousuke:
HURRY!! isoge_!!
footnote at bottom: ________ _______
*Refer to Volume 5, "Parallel *DAI-5 KAN "parareru - torippu!"
Trip!" the-5th volume "Parallel Trip!"
SANSHOU.
reference
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p 17 (17)
1
[Tight shot of a sign over the entrance to a police station/kiosk.]
police officer 1: [off]
Ahh, somehow... a-- nanka yo--
2
[Back towards us, one officer kicks back in his chair, feet up on his desk.
He blocks nearly all of our view of another officer, wearing glasses, who
sits on the other side of the desk.]
police officer 1:
I wonder if some amusing omoshire-- JIKEN demo
crime couldn't happen... interesting case/incident or-something
okonne-- ka na--
= not-happen I-wonder
I'm bored out of my mind. TAIKUTSU de sho-- ga ne--
boredom can't-be-helped
3
[Kyousuke teleports in, crashing down on the two police officers.]
Kyousuke rematerialization FX: ______
bashu_
police officer 1:
Oh wah! owa_
4
Kyousuke:
O-oh, shit!! a are shimatta!!
police officer 2:
Wha... na
5
Hatta (officer 2):
Wh-who are you, you jerk! na nan da kisama wa!
what is you-(abusive) (T)
Komatsu (officer 1): [holding up handcuffs]
Very amusing! omoshiroi!
Kyousuke: [wincing]
Arg! Komatsu! Hatta!! ge_ KOMATSU! HATTA!!
6
[Kyousuke hightails it down the street, pursued by the two officers and a
horde of law-abiding citizens.]
Komatsu:
W-wait!! ma mate----_!!
That's very amusing!! omoshiroi koto shi-yagatte!!
funny/interesting thing do-(contempt)
_____ _____
An arrest. You're under taiho da taiho suru!!
arrest!! arrest is make-an-arrest
stampede FX: ________
dodododo
Kyousuke:
Th-this is terrible!! ma mazui!!
_chikara_ ____
My Power--they saw it all! NOURYOKU o moro ni mirarechatta!
Power (O) wholly was-seen-(finality)
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p 18 (18)
1
[Shot of a window from inside a room in a derelict building.]
2
[The twins, in school uniforms, turn to address a girl in helmet and white
jumpsuit.]
Kurumi:
Hikaru-san! hikaru-san!
3
Manami:
How was the amusement park? do-- deshita YUUENCHI no HOU wa?
how was amusement-park 's way (T)
4
Hikaru:
Ahh... No problem. aa... nantoka ne
5
Manami and Kurumi:
Hooray-y-y!! yatta--!!
So now we can pay them ja kore de aitsura ni
back!! so with-this/now to-those-guys
o-KAEshi ga dekiru
a-return/reward (O) able-to
tte wake da!!
(quote) reason is
6
[Manami reflects, visualizing Madoka.]
narration:
Gee... Ever since she's mattaku... aitsu ga GAKUEN ni
started going to school, really that-person (S) to-school
our group has felt such
humiliation... kite kara to yu-- mono
coming since that-means
________
atashira no guru--pu wa donna ni
our-group (T) how-much
KATAMI no semai OMOi o shita koto ka...
small/humiliated/ felt case (?)
cheap/embarrassed
7
Kurumi: [incensed]
Let's get them tonight! KON'YA koso ikki ni
tonight indeed in-a-stroke
totchimete-yarimashou!
shall-take-(them)
Hikaru:
But... da kedo...
8
Hikaru:
Be careful! KI o tsuke na!
They are many, while we muko-- wa TASUU
are few. other-party (T) large-number/majority
kotchi wa SHOUSUU
this-way (T) few/minority
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p 19 (19)
1
Hikaru:
And while we might be a ikura kotchi ga SHOUSUU SEIEI
select few, still... no-matter this-way (S) selected-few/
chosen-few
to ittatte
even-tho-say-that
[Hikaru turns to watch Kurumi, who plays with a boot attached to the end of a
2-handled extension device.]
spring-loaded boot FX: ______
byo~~n
2
[Hikaru grimaces and flinches back as the boot is extended at her face.]
Hikaru:
Wh-what the heck is that!?! na nan da sore wa_?!
what is that (T)
Kurumi: [off]
With this, I'll put an end kore de aitsura ni
to those guys. with-this to-those-guys
____
keri Ireru n desu
an-end put (explan)
boot tag:
Size 16. 16-MON
3
[View pans back to show that Hikaru has a sack slung over her back. In it is
her stuffed bear.]
Hikaru: [angrily]
I-idiot! ba bakayaro--_
Kurumi: [angrily] __________
But you're carrying hikaru-san datte kumagoro--chan
Kumagorou-chan on your but
back!
shotte!
carrying-on-the-back
4
[She hugs Kumagorou-chan, turning to protect him from Kurumi. Kurumi looks
on with wide-eyed surprise. Manami looks like she has a headache...]
Hikaru:
But I'm no good without atashi kore ga nai to
him!! I this-(one) (S) if-not-have
dame na no----_!!
no-good am
5
[Shot of the overhead fan.]
Hikaru: [off]
Anyway, we've issued the tonikaku KETTOUJOU wa
challenge. anyway a-(written)-challenge (T)
DAshichimatta n da
presented-(finality) (explan)
Let's settle this tonight, KON'YA koso IKKI ni
once and for all!! tonight indeed at-a-stroke
KETCHAKU o tsukeyo-- ze!!
shall-settle !
Manami and/or Kurumi: ______
Ohh! o----_
6
[Hikaru walks off, helmet in hand.]
narration:
But... da kedo...
I feel helpless after all. yappari KOKORObosoi na
Ahh... If only she were aa... konna TOKI ano HITO
here now. this-kind-of-time that-person
sae ite-kuretara
if-only (if)-is-here
7
[She stares off into the distance.]
narration:
If only she... ano HITO sae
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p 20 (20)
1
[Outside, night has fallen. Kyousuke finds shelter around the corner of a
building.]
crowd:
He went that way!! sotchi e itta zo--
to-that-way went !!
Don't let him get away! nigasu na--
Kyousuke: ___ ___
haa haa
2
[Turning, he sees a sign hanging from a door.]
sign:
Closed for Business HEITEN
3
[View pans back. It is ABCB. A graffiti-covered ABCB.]
door FX: _____
karan
4
[He enters...]
Kyousuke: ___ ___ ___
haa haa haa
5
[...and looks around. Something catches his eye off-panel.]
Kyousuke: ___
haa
6
[View shifts. It is Madoka, who sits in the dark at the counter, wearing her
school uniform with a coat draped over her shoulders. She plays solitaire.
The interior of ABCB is sparsely furnished, with grime and peeling paint
everywhere.]
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p 21 (21)
1
[Full-length portrait of Madoka as she turns in her seat.]
2
narration:
Ayukawa!! AYUKAWA!!
Madoka:
Can't you read the sign on omote no HAriGAMI YOmenai
the front door? front-door 's sticker/tag can't-read
no kai
(?)
We're already closed for KYOU wa moo HEITEN da yo
today. today (T) already closed-for-business
3
narration: ___
Since this is a world in ore no inai SEKAI da kara
which I don't exist, I (S) not-exist world is that's-why
naturally, Ayukawa doesn't ___
know me either. TOUZEN AYUKAWA mo ore no koto
naturally too about-me
SHIranai n da
not-know (explan)
Kyousuke:
S-sorry. go gomen
4
Madoka: [glaring]
If you understand, then go wakattara DEte-iki na yo
away. if-understand go-leave
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p 22 (22)
1
[A shadowy figure slowly pushes the front door open.]
door FX: _____
karan
2
Kyousuke:
They're here! kita_
3
Komatsu:
Sorry to bother you. Did a chotto gomen yo IMA koko ni
kid about high-school age a-bit sorry now in-here
come in here just now? ____
KOUKOUSEI gurai no gaki ga
high-school-student extent 's brat (S)
haitte-konakatta ka
was-not-coming-in (?)
4
Madoka: [flashing the Ace of Spades]
He was here! kita yo!
5
[Overhead view shows Madoka wearing her coat and standing behind the counter.
Komatsu shines his flashlight about the room.]
Madoka:
But he split. demo DEte-tta yo
but went-and-left
I think he turned left... TASHIka HIDARI no HOU e...
as-I-recall left 's direction to
Komatsu:
It won't go well for you if kakusu to tame ni nannai ze
you're hiding him! if-hide not-do-(you)-any-good !
6
[Before exiting, Komatsu pauses at the door.]
Komatsu:
Aren't you... omae ka
Ayukawa Madoka...? AYUKAWA madoka...
7
Komatsu: ___
With you around, our omae ga iru to ore-tachi
police work will never you (S) if-are-here we
end!
KEISATSU no SHIGOTO ga tsukinai ze!
policemen's job (S) neverending !
_____
Behave yourself, pretty otonashiku shite-ro yo kawaiKO-chan
baby. be-behaving-oneself little-lovely-
child
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p 23 (23)
1
Madoka: [starting to open her coat]
He's gone. itta yo
door FX: _____
batan
[His reply emanates from within her coat.]
Kyousuke: [off] ________
Thank you. sankyu--
2
[She opens her coat wide. Kyousuke was under it, head pressed against her
chest.]
Kyousuke: ___
fuu
3
[Smiling in bliss, he utters...]
Kyousuke:
Really! Such incredible mo-- SAIKOU ni shiawase...
good luck... in-the-highest good-luck/fortune
4
Madoka:
Lech! You touched me, sukebe_! sawatta ro!!
didn't you?!! lech ! touched (poss)
[She uncorks Parallel Slap #3--open-handed, full-extension, same cheek, same
result.]
5
[He winces, sweats and puts hand to thrice-injured cheek.]
Kyousuke:
I-I wasn't touching you so sonna sawatte-nai yo--
like that. that-kind-of not-be-touching
Wh-where? do doko o
what-part (O)
Madoka: [blushing]
B-because that... My da da kara sono... MUNE...
breast... and-so that breast
6
[A panel of tiny spaceships... It's Parallel Slap #4...]
Madoka: [off]
What are you making me say?! nani iwasen no yo!
what make-say
slap FX: [off] __ _____
su pa--n
7
Kyousuke: [hand to cheek]
Ow-ow-ouch... atete...
But... demo...
Why did you help me? do--shite tasukete-kureta no?
why helped-(me) (?)
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p 24-25 (24-25)
[The art in the final panel is splashed across both pages. The first 5 panels
run across the top of the two pages...]
1
[Madoka portrait--tiny smile.]
2
Madoka: [smile] ______
I hate leches like you... anta mitai na sukebe kirai da kedo...
you seem lech dislike is but
_____
But I hate those cops aitsura mappo wa motto
even more... those-guys ????? (T) much-(more)
kirai da kara ne...
dislike are that's-why
3
[Tight shot of the partly-open front door.]
gang lieutenant (a girl): [off]
Hey!! chotto!!
4
[Shot of a black boot as it steps over the threshold.]
gang lieutenant:
Is there someone called AYUKAWA tte yu-- no wa iru kai!
Ayukawa here?! the-one-called (T) is-here (?)
5
[The gang lieutenant's view as Madoka glares back. Kyousuke watches wide-
eyed from behind her.]
6
[All are outside now. Madoka and Kyousuke face not only the gang lieutenant,
but a couple dozen guys on motorcycles as well.]
gang lieutenant:
We have some business anta ni YOU ga aru!
with you! by-you business (S) there-is
motorcycles FX: ___ ___ ___ ___ ___
do_ do_ do_ do_ do_
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