Kimagure Orange Road
"All Is Ruined!"
Volume 9, Story 9
WB Volume 5, Story 16
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi

Translation by : Daisuke Suzuki (under contract to Vancouver Animation)
Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
                                 Jun Watatani
                                 Craig Nishida
                                 Thomas Wyatt
                                 Jerry Lee

Last revision : 08-16-95

Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:
     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu

NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
      extras to those of you not having them.
      Example: The subtitles on page 321 (173) are only in the WBs!
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p 321 (173)--TITLE PAGE

[Hikaru half-portrait--in "Benchwarmers" sweatshirt and "Person's Team" cap.
 A shoulder-strap bag hangs from her right armpit and is elevated above her
 head (blown by the wind?).  She smiles and winks at us, and holds down her
 cap to keep it from flying off.]

MAIN TITLE (at top)
  All Is Ruined!                  HAMETSU          ga  ippai!
                                  destruction/ruin (S) full/whole/all

SUB-TITLE (at bottom)                        ________
  I Want to Shine with            itsu demo  kirakira     KAGAYAkitai no
  Brilliance Forever--            always     brilliantly  wanting-to-shine

  Like a Small Bird Soaring       KOTORI     ga   AOZORA
  Through the Blue Sky,           small-bird (S)  blue-sky
                                  _to_
                                  KA(KERU) bu                      you ni
                                   =  = to-soar/fly  so-that/as

  Like a Cool Breeze Breathing    NOYAMA ni            SUZUKAZE
  in the Hills and Fields...      in-hills-and-fields  cool/refreshing-breeze

                                  FUku        you ni...
                                  to-breathe  so-that

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p 322 (174)

1
[Exterior shot of the Hiyama residence.]
sign:
  Hiyama                          HIYAMA

2
[Smiling, Hikaru presents a cake.]
Hikaru:
  My folks aren't around          KYOU  wa   uchi no HITO
  today.                          today (T)  household's-people

                                  dare-mo inai    n desu
                                  nobody-is-here  (explan)

3
[Madoka and Kyousuke sit on the floor, both in school uniforms.]
Kyousuke: [nervous smile]
  I-I hope it's okay.             o o-jama shimasu

4
[View pans back to show them seated at a low table, Kyousuke facing Madoka,
 with Hikaru sitting at the end.  They are in Hikaru's bedroom.  Kumagorou-
 kun sits and looks at us sleepily from his spot on the floor.]
narration:
  Today, Hikaru-chan exercised    KYOU  wa   hikaru-chan ga
  her well-known skill and        today (T)              (S)
  baked a cake, so...
                                  JIMAN no UDE      o 
                                  well-known-skill (O)
                                                           ______
                                  furutte                  ke--ki o tsukutta
                                  brandish/exercise-(and)  baked-a-cake

                                  to yu-- no   de
                                  saying-that  so

Hikaru: [to Kyousuke]             ______
  Madoka-san is way better        ke--ki  ZUKUri  madoka-san  no ho-- ga
  at making cakes...              cake    making              more

                                  zutto   umai      n da      kedo
                                  by-far  skillful  (explan)  but

5
narration:
  For some reason...              naze-ka...

  Ayukawa and I are both          AYUKAWA to    futari
  here at Hikaru-chan's place.    with-Ayukawa  2-people

                                  hikaru-chan no IE ni  kite-imasu
                                  to-Hikaru's-place     are-coming

[With a smile, Hikaru presents the first piece to Madoka.]

Hikaru:
  But you hardly ever bake        metta ni  tsukutte-kurenai  n desu  yo ne~~
  for me, do you.                 rarely    not-make-(for-me) (explan)  (rhet)

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p 323 (175)

1
[Hikaru looks dreamily up at the ceiling.]
Hikaru:                                                ______
 "I'll only bake homemade         TEzukuri          no ke--ki wa  MIRAI  no
  cakes for my future             handmade/homemade 's cake   (T) future 's
  husband..."
                                  danna-SAMA ni  shika tsukuranai tte...
                                  to-husband     only-make        (quote)

  ...is what I suppose            jitsu wa   madoka-san  KOKORO ni
  Madoka-san has truly            actually               in-heart
  decided in her heart...
                                  KImete-tari shite
                                  is-deciding-(or)

2
Hikaru: [merrily]
  What on earth will your         MIRAI  no danna-SAMA tte  ITTAI
  future husband be like,         future 's husband    (T)  in-the-world
  hm?
                                  donna HITO           desho--  ne?
                                  what-kind-of-person  poss-be  (rhet)

[Madoka starts to blush.]

3
Hikaru:
  Oops.  Oh no.                   ara  ya da
                                                                 ________
  Would you like tea or           o-CHA ni shimasu ka  soretomo  ko--hi--?
  coffee?                         tea      do      (?) or        coffee
                                  ______
  Oolong tea?                     u--ron CHA?

Madoka:                           ________
  Coffee.                         ko--hi--

[Kyousuke blushes even more deeply.]

Kyousuke:                         ______
  Oolong tea.                     u--ron CHA

4
Kyousuke:
  Let's see.  Where's the         etto       o-sato-- wa... to
  sugar?                          let's-see  sugar    (T)

5
[He spots the sugar bowl in front of Madoka.]

6
[They nervously and politely address one another.  Hikaru watches them
 without expression.]
Madoka:
  .....  Here you go.             ..........  do--zo

Kyousuke:
  Ah...  Thanks!                  a...  do--mo!



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p 324 (176)

1
[Kyousuke and Madoka take sips--both pointedly ignoring the other.  Hikaru
 continues to quietly watch them both.]
Hikaru contemplation FX:
                           ji----

Kyousuke:                         _____
                            gohon

2
doorbell FX:                      ___ _____
                       pin po--n

Hikaru:
  Yes?                            hai?

3
Hikaru: [getting up in irritation]
  I'm sure it's a newspaper       kitto   SHIMBUN   no KAN'YUUIN  ne
  solicitor.                      surely  newspaper 's canvasser

  Grr!                            moo_!

4
[The two watch her leave, off-panel.]
door FX: [off]                    _____
                            batan

5
[Madoka looks at the sugar bowl as Kyousuke drinks.]
Kyousuke FX:                      __
                        zu...

6
Madoka: [merrily]                 ____
  How silly.                      baka nee

Kyousuke: [perplexed]
  Eh?                             e?

7
Madoka:                                    ______
  You don't usually put sugar     futsuu   u--ron CHA ni wa
  in Oolong tea.                  usually  in-Oolong-tea (contrast)

                                  o-sato--  nante         Irenai     no yo
                                  sugar     the-likes-of  not-put-in

Kyousuke: [surprised]
  Eh?  Is that true?!             e  sore        HONTOU?!
                                     that-(one)  true

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p 325 (177)

1
Kyousuke:                        _uchi_
  Kurumi is always putting        IE ja        kurumi ga   itsu-mo
  in a lot at home...             at-home-(T)         (S)  always

                                  tappuri          Irete-ru       kedo...
                                  amply/copiously  is-putting-in  but

Madoka:                           ___
                            pu_

2
Madoka: [cheerily]
  Just like her, hmm...           ano KO     rashi--  ne
                                  that-girl  like     (rhet)

3
[The two share a laugh.]

4
[He knocks the cake off his plate and onto his tie.]
Kyousuke:
  Oh!                             a_!

cake FX:                          _____
                           poro_

5
Madoka:                           ____
  You klutz!                      doji!
                                  bungle/blunder

6
Madoka: [rising]
  Hey.  Come over here!           hora   kotchi ni    kinasai  yo
                                  look!  to-this-way  come!

  I'll wipe it off for you.       fuite-ageru       kara
                                  wiping-(for-you)  that's-why

Kyousuke: [rising]
  Th-thanks.                      do do--mo

7
[He pitches forward, high through the air, over the table, and right at Madoka.
 She can only stare helplessly upward.]
Kyousuke:
  M-my legs are numb...!          a ashi ga   shibire...!
                                    legs (S)  numbness

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p 326 (178)

1
[He lands on top of her; she falls on her back.]
Kyousuke and Madoka FX:           ___
                          do_

Kyousuke:
  AH!                             a

2
[Trying to push him off her by shoving at his chin.]
Madoka: [angrily]                 __ ____
  I-idiot!  Hey!                  ba baka chotto!

Kyousuke:
  S-sorr...                       go gome

3
[Tight shot of the doorknob as it jiggles.]
door FX:                          _____
                           gacha

4
[Kyousuke and Madoka look up wide-eyed from the floor.  He's still perched
 over her.]

5
[Hikaru enters, smiling, her arms laden with several boxes of detergent.]
Hikaru:
  I subscribed to another         matamata  SHIMBUN    totchatta
  newspaper.                      again     newspaper  subscribed-(finality)

  Look how much soap I got!       MIte-kudasai   ko--nna ni  sekken
                                  look-(please)  so-much     soap

                                  moratchatta
                                  received-(finality)

detergent box 1:                  ______      ________
  dirt--FALL                      yogore      ochi--ru
                                  dirt/filth  fall

detergent box 2:
  Mighty !             KYOURYOKU    <2-kanji>!
                                  power/might

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p 327 (179)

1
[Kyousuke propels himself backwards, up off of Madoka, who sits up, turns
 aside, and crosses her arms over her chest.]
Kyousuke FX:                      _______
                          suza---

2
[View pans back.  Hikaru stands at the door in puzzlement.  Kyousuke is on
 the far side of the room, reading a paper on the edge of a bed.  Madoka sips
 from a cup at the table.  Hmm...  He couldn't have *teleported* any faster
 than this!]
Hikaru:
  Hm?!                            n?!

3
[Madoka sips from a cup.  If you're really sharp, you *might* notice it's
 not the same cup she was drinking from 2 pages before.]
Madoka FX:                        __
                        zu...

4
[Kyousuke, sweating nervously, reads out some apparent gibberish from the
 paper.  He's holding it upside-down, so it comes out backwards.]
Kyousuke:                            _______    __________    _____
  ydorB no dednal kcen eht        ni iderobu ga rigiizun'e no kinoi kito noso
  ot kcik s'ikonI tnemom
  taht...                         
                                            _____
                                  sono toki inoki no
                                  that-time 's
                                  _________                       ______
                                  enzuigiri                  ga   burodi ni
                                   = kick-to-neck (S)  on-Brody

advertisement: [upside-down, on right]
  Look, look!  Become             miru miru  takumashiku    naru!
  manly!                          look look  robust/sturdy  become

   3 times a day!      1-NICHI  3-KAI    <2-kanji> o
                                  1-day    3-times           (O)

                                  KIN     o-dake!
                                  respect   only

  Immediate testing to become     sugu    o-TAMEshi       KASHI  ri_!!
  an officer!!                    at-once   a-trial/test  noncommissioned-
                                                          officer

  Three !              3-KA    !
                                  3-days

classified header:
  Your Advertisements             anata no  KOUKOKU
                                  your      advertisements

personals 1:
  Sale                            Uritashi
                                   = want-to-sell
                                  _____________
  Garage Kits.  Every             gare--jikitto  MAI-
  .                    garage-kit     every/each/apiece

                                  YOU     ze ne
                                  sheep
                                  ____
  Pro, many parts.                puro  BUN-       TASUU
                                  pro   detached/  large-number/multitude
                                        branched

personals 2:
  Mitsuru.  Not angry any         MITSURU  mou   okotte-nai
  more.  Come home at once.          more  am-not-angry
  Father.                         ____      _____
                                  sugu      kaere   CHICHI
                                  immediate return  father

personals 3:                      ________             ______
  Masahiro.            masahiro  <2-kanji>  herase
  Economize.  Father & Mother.                   economize

                                  CHICHIHAHA

personals 4:                                ____
  Osamu.  Found a bride.  Come    OSAMU     yome   o   mitsuketa
  home immediately.  Mom.             bride (O)  found
                                  ____      _____
                                  sugu      kaere   HAHA
                                  immediate return  mother

5
[Isolated shot of the coffee pot, Madoka's coffee cup and the cake with a
 slice cut out of it.]

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p 328 (180)

1
[Hikaru portrait--silent and expressionless.]

2
[From her position, Hikaru tries to get a look at Kyousuke, who has his back
 to everyone.  Sipping from his cup--notice that it's not his teacup--he tries
 to sneak a glance over his shoulder.  Madoka drinks from a cup.]
narration:                            _____ _____
  Oh no, oh no.                   o-- yabai yabai

3
Hikaru:                                        ________
  Sempai, that's Madoka-san's     SEMPAI  sono ko--hi-- madoka-san no desu yo
  coffee.                                 that-coffee

Kyousuke FX:                      __  ___
                    bu  fu_

[At the same time, Madoka notices she's been drinking from Kyousuke's highly
 saccharine teacup.  Her eyes grow wide.]

4
[He staggers back in horror, spilling the coffee on his shirt.  The
 background turns pitch-dark.]
Kyousuke:
 (C-could it be...)               (mo moshikashite...)

Kyousuke:
  Ow-ow-ow!!                      achachacha!!

5
narration:
  She saw us just now?            IMA no MIrareta no    de wa
                                  now 's was-seen (nom)

  No, no.  But, maybe...          iya iya    demo  masaka...

  But, those eyes...              shikashi ano ME...

Hikaru: [smiling]
  Ohh, I'll wipe the spill        mo--  koboshichatte   fuite-agemasu
  off.                                  spilling-       wipe-(for-you)
                                        (finality)-(and)

6
[Taking his tie, she wipes it with a hankie.]
narration:
  For some reason, Hikaru-chan    nan-da-ka  SAIKIN   hikaru-chan
  is getting mighty suspicious    somehow    of-late
  these days...
                                  utaguri    -BUKAku  natte-kita       naa
                                  suspicious  deeply  started-becoming

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p 329 (181)

1
[A view of the rooftop of a school building.]
narration:
  And the next day, as            soshite   YOKUJITSU  yappari
  expected, my hunch came...      and/then  next-day   just-as-I-thought
  True?!
                                  YOKAN        wa   TEKICHUU...shita?!
                                  a-foreboding (T)  came-true

2
Kyousuke: [smiling, walking up the stairs]
 (What in the world could         (ittai         nan   daro?
  this be about?                   in-the-world  what  poss-be

  Hikaru-chan formally            hikaru-chan ga   aratamatte
  requesting a talk.)                         (S)  formally

                                  HANASHI  tte)
                                  talk     (quote)

Kyousuke FX:                      ___ ___
                     ko_ ko_

Kyousuke:                                                             __
  Maybe we'll be eating a box     o-bento--  OKUJOU de  taberu no  ka na
  lunch on the roof.              box-lunch  on-roof    eating     I-wonder

3
[He spots her over by the railing, facing away.]
Kyousuke:
  Hi.  Sorry to keep...           yaa  o-mata...

4
[View over his shoulder at the silent, unmoving Hikaru.]

5
Kyousuke: [smiling]
  You asked to talk...  What      HANASHI tte...    nani?
  is it?                          talk    (quote)   what

6
[His pov--still, she remains motionless.]

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p 330 (182)

1
[Without turning around, she says...]
Hikaru:
  It's about Madoka-san.          madoka-san no koto  desu
                                  about-Madoka        is

[He recoils in horror.]

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                           gikuu

2
[Finally turning around, Hikaru looks at him, face in anguish.]
Hikaru:
  I think that's too much!!       atashi  anmari    da  to OMOimasu!!
                                  I       too-much  is  think-that

3
Hikaru:                                            _uchi_
  Even yesterday, when you        kinou      datte  IE ni kita
  came to my place!               yesterday  even   came-to-my-place

                                  TOKI  SEMPAI ttara
                                  time         (I-tell-you)

4
narration:
  J-just as I thought...          ya yappari...

Kyousuke:
  Ahh...  Ah wah wah.             a...... a wa wa

Kyousuke FX:
                        fura_

5
Hikaru: [running down the stairs]
  I won't speak to you,           SEMPAI ga   KANGAe        naosu
  Sempai, until you mend                 (S)  opinion/view  change/correct
  your ways!
                                  made   atashi  SEMPAI to   wa
                                  until  I       with-Sempai (T)

                                  KUCHI kikimasen
                                  not-speak-to

Kyousuke:
  Ah!  W-wait!!                   a ma_ matte!!

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p 331 (183)

1
Kyousuke: [stunned]
  H-Hika...                       hi hika...

2
[Tilted view of Kyousuke, as his world starts turning upside-down.]
Kyousuke:
  Hikaru-chan...                  hikaru-chan...

3
[His pov of a store-lined alleyway.]
narration:
  I-in the end, the time that     tsu tsui ni     kuru-beki  TOKI ga
  had to come, came...                in-the-end  must-come  time (S)

                                  kite-shimatta...
                                  came-(finality/regret)

sign 1: [partial]
  ...Shop                         ...YA

sign 2:
  Haruki Store                    HARUKI -YA

4
Kyousuke: [unhappily]
 (N-now, Hikaru-chan and...)      (mo moo  hikaru-chan to wa...)

5
[He stops and looks at a store.]
sign:
  Cakes/Confections               YOUGASHI

6
[He looks at the cakes in the window display.]

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p 332 (184)

1
[Flashback panel--Hikaru looks up at the ceiling.]
narration:                                             ______
 "I'll only bake homemade         TEzukuri          no ke--ki wa  MIRAI  no
  cakes for my future             handmade/homemade 's cake   (T) future 's
  husband..."
                                  danna-SAMA ni  shika tsukuranai tte...
                                  to-husband     only-make        (quote)

  ...is what I suppose            jitsu wa   madoka-san  KOKORO ni
  Madoka-san has truly            actually               in-heart
  decided in her heart...
                                  KImete-tari shite
                                  is-deciding-(or)

2
[Kyousuke reflects.]

3
Kyousuke:
  Ayukawa...                      AYUKAWA...

4
[His face brightens.]
narration:                        ___
  I still have Ayukawa!!          ore ni wa          AYUKAWA ga  iru!!
                                  by-me  (contrast)          (S) is-there

5
[Tight shot of his lower leg.]
narration:
  If this is how it's gonna       ko--       nattara
  be, I'm going to Ayukawa's      like-this  if-become
  place...
                                  AYUKAWA no TOKORO ni  itte...
                                  to-Ayukawa's-place    going

6
[Racing off, he brushes against a stocky guy.]
Kyousuke:
 (If it doesn't work out with     (AYUKAWA mo   dame     nara
  Ayukawa as well, then I'll               too  no-good  if-it-is
  have nothing left!!)            ___
                                  ore ni wa          mou       nani-mo nai!!)
                                  by-me  (contrast)  any-more  nothing-is-there

Kyousuke FX:                      ____
                           don_

Kyousuke:
  Ah, sorry!                      a suimasen!

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p 333 (185)

1
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]

2
[Madoka turns at the sound of...]
door FX:                          _____
                          karan

3
[Her pov of Kyousuke at the door.]

4
[A closer view.  This is a decisive Kyousuke.]

5
[Overhead view of Madoka wiping dishes behind the counter, and Kyousuke, who
 approaches the counter.]
Madoka:
  Welco...                        irassha...

Kyousuke:                         ______
  Cake...                         ke--ki o

6
Madoka:
  Huh?                            e

Kyousuke:                         ______
  I want you to bake a cake.      ke--ki o  tsukutte hoshii
                                  cake  (O) making   (desire/want)

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p 334 (186)

1
[Her pov of him.  He has a no-argument, slightly-crazed look.]
Kyousuke:                                             ______
  I want to eat a cake that       AYUKAWA no tsukutta ke--ki ga
  you've made!!                           's made     cake   (S)

                                  TAbetai      n da!!
                                  want-to-eat  (explan)

2
[Master and Madoka look back in surprise.]

3
Madoka:
  I...                            so...

4
Madoka: [nervously]
  I can't do something like       sonna
  that out of the blue...         that-kind-of

                                  KYUU ni                  iwarete-mo...
                                  suddenly/without-notice  even-tho-are-saying

5
Master: [merrily]
  Ayukawa-kun, why don't you?     AYUKAWA-kun  tsukutte-agetara?
                                               if-make-(for-him)

6
Master:                                   ______          ______
  A cake in need is a cake        takaga  ke--ki  saredo  ke--ki
  indeed...*                      only    cake    nevertheless

  To him, it might be his         KARE ni  shite-mirya   ISSEI-ICHIDAI
  greatest, once-in-a-lifetime    to-him   if-try-to-do  once-in-a-lifetime
  problem.
                                  no DAI-MONDAI     na  no     ka mo shiren
                                  's great-problem  is  (nom)  it-may-be



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p 335 (187)

1
[Madoka stares at Master...]

2
[...then turns to look back at Kyousuke.]
Madoka:
  Well, okay...                   i-- kedo...

3
Madoka:
  Then, wait just a sec!          ja    chotto matte-te!
                                  then  a-bit  be-waiting

4
[Isolated shot of the ingredients and mixing bowl.]
narration:
  Ayukawa's cake, that she        metta ni  tsukutte-kurenai
  hardly ever bakes...            rarely    not-make-(for-me)
                                             ______
                                  AYUKAWA no ke--ki...
                                          's cake
                                        ___
  But, she's...                   demo  ore ni wa...
                                  but   by-me  (contrast)

5
[Kyousuke sits, wide-eyed and blushing, cheek in hand, at the counter.]
narration:
  ...making one for me...!        tsukutte-kureru  n da...!
                                  is-making        (explan)

Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            ____ ____ ____ ____
         doki doki doki doki

6
[Outside, a view from behind as Hikaru approaches ABCB, both hands clenched
 into fists.]

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p 336 (188)

1
[Tight shot of the cake, a cup of coffee, forks, napkin and plate.]
Madoka: [off]
  Here you go!                    doozo!

2
[She lifts up a piece on a fork.]
narration:                                   ______
  Ayukawa's cake...               AYUKAWA no ke--ki...

  Eating this means...            kore        o   TAberu  to yu-- koto wa...
                                  this-(one) (O)  eat     that-means

Madoka:                           ____
  Say, "ahh."                     a--n

3
Kyousuke:                         ____
  Ahh.                            a--n

4
[Hikaru enters and takes in the scene with surprise.  Madoka is hand-feeding
 Kyousuke, and has the fork held to his mouth.  She has her back to the door,
 and is blocking Kyousuke's view of Hikaru.]
door FX:                          _____
                          karan

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p 337 (189)

1
[Kyousuke chews.]

2
Kyousuke: [happily]
  Delicious!                      oishii!

Madoka:
  Really?                         soo?

3
[Hikaru facial portrait--surprise.]

4
[Kyousuke lowers his gaze.]
Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                           gokun

5
[Hikaru's expression darkens.]
Hikaru FX:                        ___
                           da_

6
Hikaru:
  SEMPAI!!                        sempai!!

[Madoka and Kyousuke turn to look in surprise.]

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p 338 (190)

1
Hikaru: [wide grin]
  That's good!                    sore        i--   n desu
                                  that-(one)  okay  (explan)

  You finally understood my       atashi no KIMOchi  yatto    wakatte-kureta
  feelings, didn't you!!          my-feelings        at-last  understood

                                  n desu   ne!!
                                  (explan) (rhet)

[She takes him by the wrists.  He has a contorted look on his face.]

Hikaru FX:
                           shikka

2
Kyousuke:
  EH?                             e

3
Hikaru:
  I was convinced that you        atashi  tekkiri  SEMPAI ga
  didn't like Madoka-san.         I       <*>             (S)

                                  madoka-san no koto o   kiratte-ru no
                                  about-Madoka      (O)  disliking

                                  ka to OMOikonjatte
                                  (ka to OMOikonde-shimatte)
                                   being-under-the-impression-that/
                                   being-convinced-that-(finality/regret)

                                  <*tekkiri...to OMOu> = feel-quite-certain>

4
Hikaru: [happily]
  Madoka-san means more to        atashi ni totte  madoka-san wa
  me than a big sister!!          to-me                       (T)

                                  one--san    IJOU no HITO!!
                                  big-sister  person-more-than

  And so I wanted you to get      da kara  ko-- yu-- FUU ni
  along well with her like        and-so   in-this-way
  this!!
                                  madoka-san to  SEMPAI ni  mo
                                  with-Madoka    by-Sempai  too

                                  nakayoku shite-moraitakatta       n desu!!
                                  wanted-to-have-good-relationship  (explan)

5
[Kyousuke portrait--wide-eyed nervousness.]
narration:
  Which means...                  ......to yu-- koto wa

6
[He looks over at Madoka, who looks back in puzzlement.]
Madoka:
  ?!                              ?!

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[He looks down at a slice of cake which he holds.]

2
Kyousuke:
  O-ohh!!                         na naan daa!!

narration:
  It wasn't that she saw us       ano TOKI   MIrareta  wake    ja nakatta
  then!!                          that-time  was-seen  reason  was-not

                                  n da!!
                                  (explan)

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Madoka FX:                        ______
                      kyoton

4
narration:
  That Hikaru-chan is getting     hikaru-chan no koto  SAIKIN
  mighty suspicious these         about-Hikaru         of-late
  days...
                                  utaguri    -BUKAku  tte
                                  suspicious  deeply  (quote)

  How terrible to think           ya da         naa     to OMOttari shite...
  that...                         is-unpleasant (rhet)  thinking-that-(or)

                                  _____ __
  I'm sorry, Hikaru-chan!         gomen ne hikaru-chan!

5
[The three sit at the counter, Kyousuke in the middle.  He and Madoka watch
 Hikaru eating a cake in ecstasy.]
Hikaru:                                                  ______
  Sure enough, Madoka-san's       yappari  madoka-san no ke--ki  oishi--!
  cake is delicious!              sure-enough         's cake    tasty

narration:
  The one who's the pits...       SAITEI na no    wa..........
                                  lowest is (nom) (T)
                                       ___
  Is me!                          kono ore desu!
                                  this me  am

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At bottom: [wideban only]                  ______     ______
  Kimagure Orange Road 5 (End)    kimagure orenji  -  ro--do  5 (KAN)

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