Kimagure Orange Road
"A Chance in a Premonition Dream!"
Volume 9, Story 7
WB Volume 5, Story 14
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi

Translation by : Daisuke Suzuki (under contract to Vancouver Animation)
Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
                                 Craig Nishida
                                 Jun Watatani
                                 Jerry Lee
                                 Ka-Ping Yee
                                 Thomas Wyatt

Last revision : 08-15-95

Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:
     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu

NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
      extras to those of you not having them.
      Example: The subtitles on page 281 (133) are only in the WBs!
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p 281 (133)--TITLE PAGE

[Madoka drops her schoolbag and stands barefoot on the grass.  Wearing her
 school uniform with kerchief untied, she hikes up her skirts, showing lots
 of thigh and a bit of her panties.]

MAIN TITLE (at top)                                     ______
  A Chance in a Premonition       YOCHI-MU de           chansu!
  Dream!                          in-premonition-dream  chance

SUB-TITLE (at bottom)             ________
  Peeking Up a Sailor Uniform     se--ra-- FUKU o   NOZOku no wa
  Is Against the Rules!           sailor-suit  (O)  peeking   (T)
                                  ______
                                  ru--ru IHAN        yo
                                  violation-of-rules

  You Can See Me Sigh in          setsunai  tameIKI       mieru     kedo
  Heartache...                    painful/  (heavy)-sigh  be-seen/  but
                                  heartache               able-to-be-seen

  But If You Have a Crush         KANji -sugitara      o-KI no DOKU!
  on Me for That, Then I'm        when-moved-too-much  (I-am)-very-sorry/
  Sorry!                                               (that's)-too-bad

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p 282 (134)

[This entire page is black-bordered, denoting a dream sequence.]

1
[Hikaru portrait--angrily, she lifts an index finger and shouts at us.]
Hikaru:
  Listen!                         i-- desu ka!

  'Cause Sempai's my special      sempai wa   atashi no  TAISETSU na HITO
  guy, okay!!                            (T)  my         special-person

                                  na  n desu    kara        ne!!
                                  is  (explan)  that's-why  (rhet)

2
[Madoka portrait--a look of sullen silence.]

3
[Kyousuke looks from one side to the other, in obvious panic.]
Kyousuke FX:                      ______
                     orooro

4
[Exterior night shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]
FX: [off]                         ______
                           bashi_

voice:
  Kyaaaa!                         kya----_

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p 283 (135)

1
[With sunlight streaming in, Kyousuke sits up with a start.]

2
[View pans back.  He's in bed.]
narration:
  I-it's a premonition dream!     yo...YOCHI-MU da...!

birds FX: [off]                   ___ ___ ___
                         chi chi chi

3
[Still in shock, he turns to see his sisters, dressed for school, watching
 him and whispering to one another.]
narration:
  But...                          shikashi...

  What a horrible premonition     nan to yu--  osoroshii  YOCHI-MU......
  dream...!                       (just)-what  horrible   premonition-dream

4
[He gets out of bed.]
narration:
  I don't really know why...      nan-da-ka        shiranai  kedo...
                                  for-some-reason  not-know  but
                                  ___
  But Ayukawa and Hikaru-chan     ore no koto o megutte   AYUKAWA to
  had a big fight over me...      about-me/concerning-me          and
                                                     _____
                                  hikaru-chan ga   OUgenka      o...
                                              (S)  big-quarrel (O)

Kyousuke:
 (N-no way...)                    (ma masaka...)

5
[Kyousuke hits the floor.  The twins turn in surprise.]
Kyousuke FX:                      ____
                            dote

6
Kyousuke: [sitting in a daze]
  Wh-what...?                     na nan da...

  M-my body won't do what I       ka KARADA ga   yu--   koto  kikanai    ya
  say.                               body   (S)  to-say (nom) not-listen

Kurumi: [merrily]
  Oh, that's a good one!          a sore        umai!
                                    that-(one)  good

  After all, school *does*        nantatte                  KYOU kara
  begin today, right?             when-you-come-down-to-it  starting-today

                                  GAKKOU  da  mon     ne--
                                  school  is  reason  (rhet)

7
[Kurumi collapses beside him and curls up in anguish.  Manami stands over the
 two, hands on hips and looking vexed.]
Kurumi:
  Mine won't do what I say        atashi mo   yu--   koto   ki--kanai   tto!
  either!                         I      too  to-say (nom)  not-listen

Kurumi FX:                        _____
                         goro_

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p 284 (136)

1
Manami: [exploding]
  Look you two!  If you don't     hora hora  futari   tomo
  knock off this "Won't-Go-to-    look look  2-people both
  School" sickness stuff,
  you'll be late for school!!     TOUKOU        -KYOHI   -SHOU    wa
                                  attend-school  refusal  illness (T)

                                  sono gurai ni   shinai to  CHIKOKU da  yo!!
                                  to-that-extent  if-not-do  be-late

[The two pop up and hit the ground running.]

Kurumi:
  Farewell, O Bygone Summer!      sugisarishi NATSU  yo  sayo--nara----_!
                                  passed-by   summer     farewell

2
[Looking pale, Kyousuke puts on his tie.]
Kyousuke:
  I really don't feel too         HONTOU ni  CHOUSHI WARUi      n desu
  well, but...                    really     in-poor-condition  (explan)

                                  kedo......
                                  but

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                         fura_

3
[Exterior shot of a school building.  Students are seen walking onto school
 grounds--some exchange greetings.]
narration:
  The new school term begins      KYOU kara       SHINGAKKI        desu!
  today!                          starting-today  new-school-term  is

4
[A view of 4 students--2 males, 1 female and 1 kappa.]
sensei:
  Matsui!  Nishida!               MATSUI!  NISHIDA!  YOSHIKAWA!
  Yoshikawa!

students:
  Here!                           hai!

  He-e-ere.                       ha~~i

sensei:
  Kasuga!                         KASUGA!

5
sensei:
  Kasuga!                         KASUGA!

  Isn't Kasuga here?              KASUGA wa   inai        no ka
                                         (T)  isn't-here     (?)

book:
  1-F Roll Book                   #1-F# SHUSSEKI-BO

6
Kyousuke: [off]
  Here...                         hai...

[The entire class pivots in their seats, looking towards the back of the room.]

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p 285 (137)

1
[The door opens, but no one is there.]
door FX:                          _____
                         gara_

2
[View pans down to show Kyousuke on his belly on the hallway floor, looking
 weak and exhausted.]
Hatta: [off]
  Kasuga!!                        KASUGA!!

3
[Horrified, Hatta and most of the class rush over to tend to the fallen
 Kyousuke.  Kyousuke lies back in Hatta's arms.]
Hatta:
  What's wrong, Kasuga?!          do-- shita KASUGA

  Pull yourself together!         shikkari shiro!

class FX:                         ____ ____
                       doyo doyo

4
[With his last ounce of strength, Kyousuke lifts up a composition book.
 Hatta eyes it.]
Kyousuke:
  Th-this...                      ko...kore o

  This is...                      kore dake wa......

5
[Shot centers on the book.  In addition to the title there is a picture of a
 flower beneath a shining sun.  The class is astonished.]
book:
  Summer Vacation Homework        NATSUYASUmi   no SHUKUDAI
                                  summer-recess 's homework

class:
  OHHHHH.                         o~~~~~~

6
[Kyousuke passes out, collapsed against the kneeling Hatta.  Hatta raises
 the homework in his hand.]
Hatta: [vehemently]
  I understand!                   wakatta!

  I will take charge of your      tashika ni    NATSUYASUmi   no SHUKUDAI
  summer vacation homework        without-fail  summer-recess 's homework
  without fail!!
                                  azukatta        zo!!
                                  take-charge-of  !!

class FX:
                       zawazawa

student:
  Such a model student!!          SEITO   no kagami             da!!
                                  student 's model/an-exemplar  is

7
[Madoka portrait--still seated, she looks on, astounded.]

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p 286 (138)

1
[Kyousuke lies on the floor, out cold.  The teacher stands near, looking down
 with disdain.]
sensei:
  With vacation ending, I see     YASUmi akette      o--i      n da    yo ne
  a lot of this...                recess being-over  a-lot-of  (explan)

  This sort of fellow...          ko-- yu--     yatsu  ga...
                                  this-kind-of  fellow (S)

2
[Looking back at the roll book, the teacher turns his back on Kyousuke and
 walks back to the front of the class.]
sensei:                                                     _________
  As though they exhausted        mattaku  YASUmiCHUU ni    enerugi-- o
  all their energy during         really   during-holidays  energy   (O)
  the holidays, or...
                                  TSUKAi-kitta       to yu--   ka......
                                  used-up/exhausted  say-that  or

door FX:                          _____
                         gara_

[A hand appears on the floor at the partially opened classroom door.]

3
[It's Komatsu.  He also lies passed out in the hallway.]
Komatsu FX:                       ___ ___ ________
               haa haa ze--ze--

girl: [concerned]
  Sensei!  This time it's         SENSEI!  KONDO         wa  KOMATSU-kun ga...
  Komatsu-kun...                           now/this-time (T)             (S)

4
sensei: [darkly]
  Bury him...!  Dig a hole        umetoke...!    ANA  demo          hotte
  or something.                   (umete-oke)    hole or-something  digging
                                   bury-(for-future-sake)

girl:
  Huh?                            ha?

5
[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]

6
[Kyousuke returns home from school.]
Kyousuke:
  D-damn...                       i...ikan...

door FX:                          ______
                          gacha_

7
narration:
  Looks like I'm starting to      nanka    NETSU  DEte-kita        mitai
  get a fever.                    somewhat fever  began-to-emerge  seems

  Anyway, at a time like this,    ko-- yu-- TOKI    wa   tonikaku
  it's best to eat well and       this-kind-of-time (T)  anyway
  get lots of rest!
                                  EIYOU        o  totte            yukkuri
                                  nourishment (O) taking-in-(and)  at-ease

                                  YASUmu no ga   ICHIBAN!
                                  resting   (S)  best

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                         fura_

Kyousuke:
  Hey-y-y, Manami, Kuru...        o--i manami kuru...

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p 287 (139)

1
[He spots a note left on the table.]

2
note:
  To oniichan:                    oniichan e:

  We're going to Dad's studio.    otousan no SHIGOTO-BA ni  Itte-masu
                                  to-father's-workplace     are-going

  We'll be late.                  osoku narimasu
                                  be-late

  Manami  Kurumi                  manami kurumi

Kyousuke:
  Murderers!                      HITOgoroshi~~~!

3
[He picks up the phone and looks at a phone list.]
Kyousuke:
 (O-oh yeah.                      (so so-- da

  I'll call Akane over and        akane demo  YObiDAshite
  have her take care of me.)            even  calling

                                  KANBYOU shite-moraou)
                                  shall-have-nurse/tend-(me)

Kyousuke FX:                      ____
                      bo~~

4
[Tight shot of the phone list.  His finger runs past the listing for "Akane"
 and comes to rest upon "Abakabu".]
phone listings:
  Akane                           akane  abakabu
  Abakabu

5
[Exterior late afternoon shot of ABCB.]
phone FX:
                        #RRR#

6
Madoka:
  Yes?                            hai

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p 288 (140)

1
[Madoka listens wide-eyed to...]
phone:                                        ___
  Hello.  It's me, Kyousuke!      moshimoshi  ore  KYOUSUKE!
                                  hello       me

2
phone:
  I'm sick...                     TAICHOU             kowashichatte...
                                  physical-condition  demolish-(finality)

  And on top of that, nobody's    omake ni     IMA  IE ni   wa
  home right now.                 in-addition  now  at-home (contrast)

                                  DARE-mo inai    n da
                                  nobody-is-here  (explan)

  H-help...                       ta TASUkete...

Madoka:
  Huh?!                           e?!

3
[Tight shot of the Kasuga telephone receiver.  It hangs from the cord.]
phone:
  Kasuga-kun?!  Ka...             KASUGA-kun?!  KA...

4
[View pans back.  Kyousuke is unconscious, sitting against the wall next to
 the phone.]

5
[Madoka stares at the receiver in her hand.]

6
[Hanging up, she turns to Master, who smiles back merrily.]
Madoka:                           ________
  Master.                         masuta--

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p 289 (141)

1
[Exterior night shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]

2
[He opens his eyes...]
Kyousuke:
  Hm?                             n?

3
[...and sits up in his bed.]

4
[Madoka enters, closing the door behind her.  She carries a tray of soup,
 bread, a drink and a fruit.]
door FX:                          _____
                            batan

Madoka:
  You're awake?                   KI ga tsuita?

5
narration:
  Why is Ayukawa...?!             do--shite AYUKAWA ga...?!

Madoka:
  You're such a troublemaker,     mattaku  HITOsawagase    ne
  aren't you.                     really   false-alarmist  (rhet)

Kyousuke:
  Sorry.                          suimasen

6
narration:
  Oh, I see!                      a so-- ka!
                                               ___
  She saw how I was in school     GAKKOU de no ore no YOUSU MIte
  and was concerned about         at-school 's taking-in-my-situation-(and)
  me...
                                  KI ni shite-kite-kureta      n da...
                                  came-and-worried-(about-me)  (explan)

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p 290 (142)

1
[His face becomes flushed, his eyes tear up, and he touches a finger to his
 nose.]
Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                          gusu_

Kyousuke:
 (Ayukawa's so kind...)           (AYUKAWA tte  yasashi-- naa)
                                           (T)  kind      (rhet)

2
[She feeds him soup.]
narration:
  She even cooked this for        konna TERYOURI             made
  me...                           this-kind-of-home-cooking  even

                                  tsukutte-kureru  nante......
                                  make-(for-me)    the-likes-of

Madoka:
  Say "ahh..."                    a----n

Kyousuke:
  Ahh...                          a--n

3
doorbell FX:                      ___ _____
                       pin po--n

4
[He leaps to his feet.]
Kyousuke:
  O-oh no, it's Akane!!           i ikenai  akane da!!

Kyousuke stand-up FX:             _____
                        gaba_

Madoka:
 (Wh-what's this...?              (na nan da...

  He's pretty lively.)            kekko-- GENKI   ja nai  no)
                                  quite   lively  is-not

5
[As in his dream sequence, he looks from side to side, highly agitated.]
Kyousuke FX:                      ______
                     orooro

narration:
  I-if Akane sees us here like    ko konna TOKORO        o   akane ni
  this--that's the worst!!           this-kind-of-place (O)  by-Akane

                                  MIraretara  SAIAKU!!
                                  if-be-seen  worst

6
[He looks at his wardrobe closet.]

7
[He opens it, and looks back at Madoka.  The closet consists of 5 drawers
 at the bottom, with space above for hanging coats and shirts.]
Kyousuke:
  S-sorry, but could you get      chi chotto  WARUi kedo  kono NAKA e...
  in here...                          a-bit   sorry but   to-this-inside

Madoka:
  What?!                          e?!

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p 291 (143)

1
[Looking at the door, he urges her in.]
Madoka:
  W-wait!  Why?                   ma matte yo!  do--shite

Kyousuke:
  Just hurry!!                    i-- kara  HAYAku!!

2
[In his haste, he unthinkingly gives her a boost up by laying both hands on
 her shapely rear.]
Kyousuke:
  H-hurry!!                       ha HAYAku!!

Madoka:
  Ohh               an 

3
Madoka: [blushing, angry]
  Wh-where the heck are you       do doko   sawatte-ru    no yo!
  touching me?!                      where  are-touching

Kyousuke:
  S-sorry!!                       go gomen!!

4
[Into the room bursts...]
Hikaru: [irritated look]
  SEMPAI!!                        sempai!!

door FX:                          _____
                           gacha

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p 292 (144)

1
[Pov shifts to show Kyousuke with back against the closed closet.]
door FX:                          _____
                           patan

2
Kyousuke: [wide-eyed]
  H-Hikaru-chan...                hi hikaru-chan...

3
[Inside the closet, Madoka sits stunned.]

4
[Hikaru throws herself against him.]
Hikaru:
  Please don't die, Sempai!       SHInanai de SEMPAI!

Kyousuke:
  Eh?!                            e?!

5
[She hugs him, teary-eyed and stricken.]
Hikaru:
  Hatta-san and the others        GAKKOU de  HATTA-san-tachi      ga
  told me at school that          at-school           (and-assoc) (S)
  you were gasping for air...
                                  SEMPAI no koto  moo
                                  about-Sempai    now

                                  MUSHI no IKI             da   tte...
                                  breathe-faintly/gasping  are  (quote)
                                  



Kyousuke:
  Those guys...  Trying to        aitsura...    HITO no koto
  kill people off for their       those-guys    about-a-person
  own reasons.
                                  KATTE ni             KOROso-- to shi-yagatte
                                  without-permission/  trying-to-kill-
                                  on-their-own         (contempt)

Kyousuke:                         ____           ___
  Am I a cicada or something?     semi   ka      ore wa...
                                  cicada (muse)  I   (T)



6
[Madoka sits in the dark, wide-eyed and worried.]

7
Kyousuke:
  I mean...  Anyway, it was       iya...  tonikaku  tada no
  only a case of summer heat      no      anyway    merely/free
  exhaustion.                                       ____
                                  NATSU bate                  na  n da
                                  breakdown-from-summer-heat  is  (explan)

Hikaru:
  Ohhhh!                          na naa~~n da!

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p 293 (145)

1
[With a smile she slaps him on the back, sending him reeling.]
Hikaru:
  Now that I'm here,              atashi ga   kita  kara ni wa
  everything will be all          I      (S)  came  now-that...
  right!
                                  moo  DAIJOUBU!
                                  now  all-right

  I'll care for you all           TETSUYA de  KANBYOU shimasu!!
  night!!                         overnight   nurse/tend

Hikaru backslap FX:               ___
                           don

2
[Kneeling, she produces several items from a sack.  Kyousuke watches with a
 nervous smile.  The "potty" is one of those ducks that you sit on, with
 handles on its neck.]
Hikaru:
  Anyway, I brought lots of       tonikaku iroiro   motte-kita  n desu  yo
  stuff.                          anyway   various  brought    (explan)

  Medicines from Toyama,          TOYAMA  no KUSURI    -  oshime  -
  diapers, a potty, crutches,      's medicine     diaper
  and my stuffed bear,
  Kumagorou-kun.                  omaru      -  MATSUBAZUE  -  sore ni
                                  chamber-pot   crutches       moreover
                                                  __________
                                  nuigurumi    no kumagoro--kun
                                  stuffed-doll 's 





3
[Kyousuke visualizes the portraits of an angry Hikaru and a sullen Madoka from
 his dream.]
narration:
  That means this morning's       to yu-- koto wa  kesa   no  YOCHI-MU!
  premonition dream...!           that-means       this-  's  premonition-
                                                   morning    dream

4
Kyousuke: [a decisive look]
 (No matter what...               (nani ga   nan demo...
                                   what (S)  whatever-(it-takes)

  I can't very well let           AYUKAWA to hikaru-chan o   Awaseru
  Ayukawa and Hikaru-chan                 and           (O)  let-meet/see
  see each other!!)
                                  wake ni wa ikanai!!)
                                  can't-very-well

5
Hikaru:                                ________
  Oh my.  The sheets are...       maa  shi--tsu ga...

Hikaru:                           ______                   __
  You spilled soup, didn't        su--pu ga   koboreta  no ne
  you.                            soup   (S)  spilled      (rhet)

6
[She starts pulling off the bedsheets.]
Hikaru:                                   ________
  Sempai, where are the spare     SEMPAI  shi--tsu no kae  wa...
  sheets?                                 change-of-sheets (T)

Kyousuke:
  I think they're in the          TASHIka      oshiire ni...
  closet...                       as-I-recall  in-closet

7
[Too late, he claps a hand over his mouth.]
Kyousuke:                         ___
  AH!                             ha_

8
[Inside the closet, Madoka also gasps "Ah!"]

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p 294 (146)

1
[Hikaru runs over to the closet.]
Hikaru:
  I'll change them for you!       torikaetagemasu!
                                  (torikaete-agemasu) = replace-(for-you)

Kyousuke:
  Oh god...!                      hie~~~_

2
[Madoka is in an uncertain frenzy.]
Madoka FX:                        ________
                          dotabata

3
[Hikaru reaches a hand out to the handles of the closet door.]

4
[Madoka's pov as Hikaru opens the closet.]
door FX:                          _____
                           gacha

5
[Madoka covers her face with both hands.]

6
[She peeks between her fingers.]

7
[View pans back to show that Kyousuke has come up very close behind Hikaru,
 causing Hikaru to turn back to look at him over her shoulder.  Madoka watches
 this with eyes grown wide.]
Kyousuke:                         ___
  I'm fine...                     ore nara      DAIJOUBU  da  kara...
                                  me  if-it-is  all-right is  that's-why

  It's already getting late,      moo          osoi  shi
  so you should stop worrying     now/already  late  consider
  and go home.
                                  SHIMPAI shinai de  IE ni    o-kaeri
                                  not-worry          to-home  return

Hikaru:
  Really?                         so-- desu kaa

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p 295 (147)

1
[With a smile, Hikaru turns around to face him.  Kyousuke lifts up his hands
 and stares nervously past Hikaru at Madoka.]
Kyousuke FX:
                          gyo_

2
[His pov of Madoka--as in the dream, she looks unhappy.]

3
[With Hikaru hugging him, he uses both hands to reach past her and close the
 closet doors.  We catch one last glimpse of a smoldering Madoka.]
Kyousuke:                         __      ___ _________
  Ha...  A ha!  A ha ha ha ha!    ha......aha ahahahaha

closet door FX:                   __ __ __
            gi gi gi

4
closet door FX:                   _____
                           patan

narration:
  That look...                    ano KAO...

  If it had gone on any           korya  yappari      kono mama       ikeba
  further, then the two of        this   sure-enough  this-situation  if-go
  us...  That was close!                          ____
                                  futari   wa...  yabakatta!
                                  2-people (T)    was-done-for

5
[On her way out, two large bags at her side, Hikaru pauses.]
Hikaru:
  Then, please take care!         ja o-daiji ni

narration:
  It looks like I've somehow      SAIAKU no JITAI     dake wa   nantoka
  managed to avoid the worst      worst  's situation only (T)  somehow
  situation...
                                  KAIHI dekita       you da...
                                  was-able-to-avoid  looks-like

6
[As in the dream, Hikaru angrily points a finger at him and shouts...]
Hikaru:
  Oh yeah.  That's right.         o so-- so--

  Please eat properly and         chanto    EIYOU       totte
  get lots of rest.               properly  nourishment taking-in-(and)

                                  yukkuri  yasunde-kudasai  yo
                                  at-ease  resting-(please)
                                                         ____
  And no bath for today!          KYOU  wa   o-FURO mo   dame!
                                  today (T)  bath   too  no-good

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p 296 (148)

1
Hikaru:
  Listen!                         i-- desu ka!

  'Cause you're my special        sempai wa   atashi no  TAISETSU na HITO
  guy, okay!!                            (T)  my         special-person

                                  na   n desu    kara        ne!!
                                  are  (explan)  that's-why  (rhet)

2
Kyousuke: [face flushed]
  S-sure.                         ha hai

3
Kyousuke: [realization]
  Huh?                            are?

4
[Outside, Hikaru struggles to carry her two bags down the night street.]
Hikaru FX:                        __________
                         zururururu

5
[Kyousuke visualizes the black-bordered page which began this chapter.]
narration:
  That means...                   to yu-- koto wa...

  That premonition dream          ano YOCHI-MU wa...
  was...

6
narration:
  O-ohhh...  Then...              na nan da...  ja...

7
[He collapses in a series of fractured panels.]
Kyousuke:
  Th-thank god...!                yo yokatta......!

Kyousuke FX:                      ___
                          do_

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p 297 (149)

1
[Isolated shot of a corner of his room.]
narration:
  And when I woke up again...     futatabi  KI ga tsuku to...
                                  again     when-recover-consciousness

Madoka: [off]
  Say "ahh..."                    a~~~~n

2
[Kyousuke lies back on the floor, his head cradled in her lap.  She feeds him
 a bit of the bread.]
Kyousuke:
  Ahh...                          a~~n

narration:
  For some reason, Ayukawa        naze-ka  AYUKAWA wa   yasashikatta
  was kind to me.                 somehow          (T)  was-kind

3
Kyousuke:
  Delicious.                      oishi--

4
[His pov of her.  She smiles down at him.]
Madoka:
  It seems like...                do--yara...

  You're getting better.          GENKI ni natte-kita         mitai  ne
                                  started-to-become-spirited  seems

5
[A hazy view of the two.  Madoka speaks in a white-text-on-black speech
 bubble.]
Madoka:
  But I was so surprised...       bikkuri shita wa yo...

  I mean, you phoned me up        anna DENWA               TOTSUZEN
  out of the blue like that.      that-kind-of-phone-call  all-of-a-sudden

                                  kakete-kuru   n da      mono
                                  come-to-call  (explan)  reason

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p 298 (150)

1
Madoka: [closing her eyes]
  Don't make me worry so          anmari      SHIMPAI  sasenai de...
  much...                         -much  worry    not-make-do

2
[Kyousuke portrait--I think he finds that this pov has its merits.]

3
Madoka:
  But the fact that you           demo  massaki ni    DENWA shite-kureta
  phoned me first...  I...        but   at-the-first  phoned-(me)

                                  koto  atashi......
                                  case  I

4
[She gazes to one side, in thought.]

5
narration:
  Oh, I see.                      a so-- ka
                                  ___
  Back then I phoned Ayukawa's    ore  ano TOKI   machigatte
  place by accident!              I    that-time  by-mistake

                                  AYUKAWA no TOKORO ni  kakechatta  n da!
                                  to-Ayukawa's-place    phoned-(finality)
                                                                    (explan)

  Or...                           soretomo...

  Perhaps I subconsciously        MUISHIKI no              uchi ni
  wanted to be cared for by       unconscious/involuntary  by-me
  Ayukawa, so my finger
  dialed her number on its        AYUKAWA ni  KANBYOU shite hoshikutte
  own.                            by-Ayukawa  want-to-be-nursed-(and)
                                                         _______
                                  YUBI   ga   KATTE ni   daiyaru shichatta
                                  finger (S)  by-itself  dialed-(finality)

                                  no    ka
                                  (nom) (?)

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p 299 (151)

1
[He turns over on his side, rubbing his cheek against her thigh.]
Kyousuke:
  Feels good!                     i-- KANSHOKU!

Kyousuke FX:                      ____ ____
                         suri suri

2
[Madoka portrait--deep blush.]

3
Kyousuke:
  Come to think of it, the        so-- iya     sakki              no
  feel of your rear end back        a-little-while-ago 's
  then was also quite...           come-to-think-of-it

                                  oshiri   no  KANSHOKU mo   nakanaka...
                                  rear-end 's  feeling  too  quite

[Madoka's expression is one of wide-eyed shock.]

Madoka:
  !                               !

4
[Suddenly realizing what he's saying, he lifts his head to look at her.  She
 looks at him quietly, still blushing...]
Kyousuke get-up FX:               _____
                        gaba_

Kyousuke:
  Ah!                             ha_

5
[...and exactly as in the premonition dream...]
FX: [off]                         ______
                           bashi_

Kyousuke: [off]
  Kyaaaa!                         kya----_

haiku:                                  ____
  On a lap pillow,                NATSU bate                 mo
  A summer heat exhaustion        breakdown-from-summer-heat even
  Vanishes in one night.
               --Kyousuke         hito YO de    KIeru
                                  on-one-night  disappear

                                  hizamakura
                                  lap-pillow

                                  KYOUSUKE



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