Kimagure Orange Road
"Don't Cheat!"
Volume 9, Story 6
WB Volume 5, Story 13
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi

Translation by : Daisuke Suzuki (under contract to Vancouver Animation)
Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
                                 Craig Nishida
                                 Jun Watatani
                                 Jerry Lee
                                 Thomas Wyatt

Last revision : 08-14-95

Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:
     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu

NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
      extras to those of you not having them.
      Example: The subtitles on page 262 (114) are only in the WBs!
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p 262 (114)--TITLE PAGE

[Red with rage, Kyousuke chases off Kazuya, who's just finished a large
 piece of graffiti on the side of a building.  It's the standard "love
 umbrella," under which are the faces of Madoka, Kyousuke and Hikaru.]

MAIN TITLE (at top)               ________
  Don't Cheat!                    kanningu wa dame  yo!
                                  cheat    mustn't

graffiti caption:
  Kyousuke                        kyo--suke

SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
  Dangerous Graffiti Is           KIKEN na   RAKUGAki
  Absolutely Forbidden!!          dangerous  scribbling-(in-public-places)

                                  ZETTAI        KINSHI!!
                                  absoluteness  prohibition/ban

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p 263 (115)

1
[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]
narration:
  This is rather out of the       TOTSUZEN         desu  ga
  blue, but--it's Ants and        all-of-a-sudden  is    but
  Grasshoppers!                   ___     __________
                                  ari to  kirigirisu!
                                  ant and grasshopper



2
[At the start of summer break, Manami does her homework while Kurumi prances
 off in her swimsuit.]
narration:
  It's a commonly-said            MUKASHI kara   yoku   iwareru  tatoe
  old saying, but still...        from-long-ago  often  be-said  even-tho

                                  da  ga...
                                  is  but

  Those who plan ahead,           SAKI no koto  o   KANGAeru  KEIKAKU-TEKI na
  and...                          former-thing (O)  consider  deliberate/
                                                              on-purpose
                                  _taipu_
                                  HITO  to...
                                  type  and

caption:
  July 20th                       7-GATSU 20-KA

Kurumi:                           ______    ______
  The pool, the pool!             pu--ru da pu--ru da!

3
[A week before the end of summer break and it's Kurumi who's madly doing her
 homework, while Manami happily comes by with a drink on a tray.]
narration:
  Those who can only              SAKI no koto  o   KANGAenai
  consider what's in              former-thing (O)  not-consider
  front of their nose.
                                  MOKUZEN       no koto  shika ATAMA ni nai
                                  close-at-hand 's thing only-have-in-head
                                  _taipu_
                                  HITO
                                  type

caption:
  August 25th                     8-GATSU 25-NICHI

Kurumi:                           ____
  Eee!                            hii_

4
[Kyousuke frantically talks on the telephone.]
narration:
  And, sure enough, he's          soshite   KARE  mo    yappari...
  also...                         and/then  he    also  sure-enough

caption:
  August 31st                     8-GATSU 31-NICHI



Kyousuke:                                          ______
  Komatsu, let me see your        KOMATSU omae no  no--to    MIsete
  notes.                                  your     notebook  let-see

  What?!  You haven't done        e_  yatte-nai      IMA kara?!
  it?  You're starting now?!       !  not-have-done  starting-from-now

5
[Kyousuke, wearing a white headband, tackles his books in a frenzy.  His
 smiling sisters stand nearby and comment.]
Kyousuke:                         _______
  Eeeee!!                         hii~~~~!!

Kurumi:
  Well oniichan, now you're       sa--  ato      wa   SHUKUDAI
  the only one who hasn't         well  the-rest (T)  homework
  done his homework.
                                  yatte-nai no     oni--chan  dake  yo
                                  not-having-done             only

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p 264 (116)

1
Kyousuke: [wincing]
  Ahh...  If I'd known it         a--  konna koto          nara
  would be like this, I                this-kind-of-thing  if-it-is
  would've started sooner.
                                  motto  HAYAku  kara
                                  more   early   from

                                  yattoku-beki           datta
                                         was
                                   should-do-(for-future-sake)

[The twins turn to each other and smile.]

Kurumi:                                                    ______
  There it is--a famous event     DEmashita  TOKUI no  MEI-serifu
  on the last day of the          came-out   favorite  celebrated-words
  summer break!!
                                  31-NICHI   MEIBUTSU!!
                                  31 (date)  specialty

Manami:
  Sure enough, he said it.        yappari      itta  ne
                                  sure-enough  said

2
[Kyousuke stops to reflect, visualizing Madoka and himself studying together
 at ABCB.]
narration:
  If things were normal, I'd      HONTOU          dattara   AYUKAWA to...
  be with Ayukawa...              regular/proper  if-it-is  with-Ayukawa

3
[Panels 3-4 are double-bordered, denoting the flashback.  Here he's
 confronted by towel-clad Madoka and Hikaru in the ladies' locker room from
 the previous chapter.]
narration:
  But...                          shikashi...
                                      ______
  Ever since that affair at       ano pu--ru de no IKKEN             IRAI...
  the pool...                     at-that-pool  's an-affair/matter  since

Madoka: [flashback]
  Stop right there!               machinasai yo

  Hey!  What do you think         kora_  do-- yu--     tsumori?
  you're doing?                   hey !  what-kind-of  intention

  Coming in here!                 konna TOKORO ni        haitte-kite!
                                  in-this-kind-of-place  go-and-enter

Hikaru: [flashback]
  You're such a pervert,          SEMPAI no #H#~~~~_
  Sempai!

4
[Outside ABCB, Kyousuke walks by, looking wistfully at the coffee shop.]
narration:                                                    _______
  Just as usual, now I'm even     REI ni yotte REI no gotoku  abakabu no
  afraid of opening ABCB's        just-as-usual               ABCB    's
  door.                           ___
                                  doa  sura  osoroshiku tte  akerarenai
                                  door even  awfully         can't-be-opening

                                  SHIMATSU
                                  the-result/the-outcome

Kyousuke:
 (I bet she's in a bad mood       (kitto   mata   go-kigen naname ni
  again.)                          surely  again  in-ill-humor/bad-temper

                                  kimatte-ru)
                                  is-sure-to-be

5
[Back to realtime.  He resumes studying.]
narration:
  But bad luck never comes        shikashi  WARUi koto wa kasanaru mon da
  in ones.                        but       misfortune-never-comes-single

  Even the problems that I can    itsu-mo nara      tokeru     MONDAI   mo
  usually solve I don't           usual   if-it-is  be-solved  problems even
  understand at all, because
  I'm concerned about Ayukawa.    AYUKAWA no koto ga   KI ni kakatte-ru
                                  about-Ayukawa   (S)  is-weighing-on-
                                                       one's-mind

                                  se--  ka      zenzen        wakaranai
                                  fault (muse)  -at-all  not-understand

Kyousuke:                                          _________
  Somehow, I can't get into       do--mo           kondishon ga   ima hitotsu
  the right frame-of-mind for     somehow/however  condition (S)  one-more
  studying.
                                  BENKYOU ni  KARADA    ga   hairan
                                  study       body/mind (S)  not-come-in

6
Kazuya: [off]
  Ohh?  Have you ever been        he--  KARADA ga  haitta   TOKI  tte
  in the right frame-of-mind,           mind   (S) entered  time  (quote)
  oniichan?
                                  atta  kke?    oni--chan
                                  had   (?)

Kyousuke:
  None of your business!!         yoke-- na o-sewa                 da!!
                                  meddle-with-a-person's-business  is

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p 265 (117)

1
[Pov shifts to show Kazuya leaning against the front door.  He waves a
 greeting.]
Kazuya:                           ___
  Hey!                            hei!

2
Kazuya:                           ____
  Shall I help you somehow?       boku ga   nantoka          shite-ageyo-- ka
                                  I    (S)  somehow-or-other shall-do-for-you

3
[Kyousuke picks up his books and heads out the door.]
Kyousuke:
  Well, I'll go do the rest       sa--te to  nokori   wa   TOSHOKAN ni
  at the library...                          the-rest (T)  at-library

                                  demo          itte...
                                  or-something  going

Kyousuke FX:                      ________
                   sutasuta

Kazuya:
  Don't run away!                 nigeru na yo--

4
[The two walk outside, down the street.]
Kyousuke:
  How can a kindergartner         nantoka          tte...
  possibly understand high        somehow-or-other (quote)
  school problems?
                                  YOUCHIEN-JI ni    KOUKOU      no
                                  by-kindergartner  high-school 's

                                  MONDAI  ga   wakaru      wake nai   darou
                                  problem (S)  understand  no-reason  poss-be

  Go home!  Shoo!  Shoo!          kaere  shi_ shi_

5
Kazuya:
  Those are problems that         KOUKOUSEI no          oni--chan ga
  you--a high school student--    high-school-student's           (S)
  don't understand either.
                                  wakaranai       tte no mo   MONDAI  da  ne
                                  not-understand         too  problem is

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                           zuki_

6
Kyousuke: [forced smile]
  But how nice for you...         omae wa   i--  yo naa
                                  you  (T)  nice    (rhet)

  You probably don't have         SHUKUDAI nante         nai darou
  any homework to do.             homework the-likes-of  not-poss-have

                                  shi
                                  consider

Kazuya: [incensed]
  That's not true!                tondemonai!

7
Kyousuke:
  Eh?!                            e?!

Kazuya: [nervous smile]
  Ah, I mean...                   a iya...

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p 266 (118)

1
[Both turn to find Hikaru walking towards them, some books in one hand.]
Hikaru: [waving]
  Ah, Sempai!                     a sempai!

2
[Exterior shot of the library.]
Kyousuke: [off]
  Then this becomes this,         de   koko       ga   ko--       natte
  and...                          then this-place (S)  like-this  becoming

sign:
  Main Library                    DAI-   TOSHOKAN
                                  great  (public)-library

3
Hikaru: [ecstatic]
  Wowww.  You really saved        uwa--  TASUkarimashita  sasuga  SEMPAI!!
  me, Sempai!!                           saved/rescued    really

4
[View pulls back to show the three seated side-by-side inside the library.]
Hikaru:
  Now my homework's all done.     kore de        SHUKUDAI mo   subete
  Thank you so much.              with-this/now  homework too  wholly/all

                                  KANRYOU       arigato-- gozaimasu
                                  completion    thank-you

Kyousuke:                                          _ __ __
  I see.  That's good.  Ah ha     so-- yokatta ne  a ha ha...
  ha...

5
Kazuya:
  Hmmph.  You're pretty           fu--n  ATAMA  ii    jan
  smart.  Solving that so         hmm    brain  good  is-not
  easily...                       ________
                                  surasura toite...
                                  solve-easily/smoothly

  Why don't you do junior         mo--     ippen  CHUUGAKUSEI      yattara?
  high over again?                another  once   jr-high-student  if-do

Kyousuke:
  Quit making fun of me!          baka ni sun na!
                                  don't-ridicule/make-fun-of/make-a-fool-of

6
[Kyousuke turns to look at Hikaru, worry on his face.]
narration:
  But...                          shikashi...

  I wonder if she thinks          sore       wa   so--     to  hikaru-chan
  about that pool incident        that-(one) (T)  like-that
  at all?
                                  ano pu--ru no IKKEN      ni KANshite wa
                                  the-affair-of-that-pool  concerning  (T)

                                  nanto mo OMOtte-nai no          ka na
                                  isn't-thinking-(caring)-at-all  I-wonder

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p 267 (119)

1
Kazuya:
  Don't worry about               SHIMPAI nai yo    hikaru-one--chan nara
  Hikaru-oneechan.                not-worry                          if-it-is

Kyousuke:
  Eh?!                            e?!

2
Kazuya:
  Hey, oneechan.  Oniichan's      ne-- one--chan  oni--chan ga
  worrying about the pool.                                  (S)
                                  ______
                                  pu--ru no koto  KI ni shite-ru  yo
                                  about-pool      is-thinking/worrying

Kyousuke:
  Wah!  H-hey!                    wa ko kore!

Hikaru: [smiling]
  Oh my!                          maa!

3
Hikaru: [looking thoughtful]
  But if it's about that--        demo  sono koto   nara      atashi
  on the contrary, I was          but   that-thing  if-it-is  I
  happy.
                                  kaette           ureshikatta  n desu
                                  on-the-contrary  was-happy    (explan)

4
[He does a double-take.]
Kyousuke:
  Ah?!                            ha?!

5
Hikaru: [smiling]
 (I mean, I was a bit             (datte    SEMPAI ga   ano TOKI
  surprised when Sempai came       because         (S)  that-time
  into the locker room, but...
                                  KOUISHITSU ni   haitte-kita     no ni  wa
                                  in-locker-room  began-entering  even-tho

                                  chotto  bikkuri shita  kedo
                                  a-bit   surprised      but

  That he wanted to see me        so--       made       shite
  that much...                    like-that  as-far-as  doing

                                  atashi ni Aitakatta  nante...
                                  wanted-to-see-me     the-likes-of

  I'm deeply touched!!)           KANGEKI!!)
                                  deeply-touched/moved

6
Kyousuke: [whispering to Kazuya]
  Wh-what does she mean by        u ureshi-- tte......?
  "happy"?                          happy    (quote)

7
Kazuya FX:                        ______
                            niyari

8
Kazuya: [whispering back]                            ______
  She says she's happy 'cause     KYOU-ni--chan ga   sukebe    da  kara
  you're a lech, Kyou-niichan.                  (S)  lecherous are that's-why

                                  ureshi--  tte itte     n da     yo
                                  happy     saying-that  (explan)

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p 268 (120)

1
Kyousuke: [angrily]                                 ______
  Is this true?  You...           HONTOU ka    kono yaro--
                                  is-it-true?  this fellow

  No way she's that bold...       sonna         DAITAN na
                                  that-kind-of  bold/daring

Kazuya:
  Don't forget about my           wasurete-moratcha komaru  yo
  Power!                          must-not-forget
                                  ____    _chikara_
                                  boku no  NOURYOKU  o
                                  my       Power    (O)

2
Kazuya: [thumbs-up]
  I can read people's minds!      HITO   no KOKORO     ga   yomeru
                                  person 's mind/heart (S)  can-read
                                                 ____
                                  n da     ze    boku wa!
                                  (explan) !     I    (T)

3
[Kyousuke facial portrait--surprise.]
narration:
  Oh yeah!                        a so-- ka!

4
[Isolated shot looking up at the sky.  Trees and a traffic signal are in view.]

5
[View looking down the street.]
Kazuya: [off]
  Now do you understand?          doo  kore de  o-wakari?
                                  how  now      understand
                                  ____
  *I* could somehow do your       boku dattara  nantoka             dekiru  yo
  homework, oniichan.             I    if-am    somehow-(or-other)  can-do

                                  oni--chan no SHUKUDAI  datte  ne
                                            's homework  even

Kyousuke: [off]
  But how?                        shikashi  do--  yatte
                                  but       how   doing

6
Kazuya:
  Show it to Madoka-oneechan!     madoka-one--chan ni  mite-morainasai
                                  to-Madoka            show-(command)

Kyousuke:
  If I could do that, I           sore       ga   dekirya
  wouldn't be this worried!       that-(one) (S)  if-can-do

                                  KUROU wa shinai  yo
                                  not-go-thru-hardships/not-be-anxious/
                                  not-worry/not-take-pains

narration:
  No way that Ayukawa would       IMA no AYUKAWA ga   KOTAE   nante
  tell me the answers right       now 's         (S)  answer  the-likes-of
  now!
                                  oshiete-kureru  hazu nai!
                                  tell-me         ought-not

sign:                                ____
  ...Model                        ...hi--  MOKEI
                                           model/pattern

7
Kazuya:
  All you have to do is           madoka-one--chan ni  MONDAI    o
  show the problems to            to-Madoka            problems (O)
  Madoka-oneechan.
                                  MIseru  dake  de           ii    n da  yo
                                  show    just  being-(and)  good  (explan)
                                                ____
  After that, I'll take a         ato      wa   boku ga   one--chan no
  little peek into her mind...    the-rest (T)  I    (S)            's

                                  KOKORO o   choito nozokeba......
                                  mind  (O)  a-bit  if-peek

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p 269 (121)

1
Kyousuke:
  That would sorta make me        do--mo   so-- yu--    no    wa
  feel self-conscious.            somehow  that-kind-of (nom) (T)
  Wouldn't you be cheating...
                                  KI ga hikeru         sore ja       omae
                                  feel-self-conscious  then/in-that  you
                                  ________
                                  kanningu  ja
                                  cheat      = is-(not)

Kazuya:
  Then shall I cheat and read     oni--chan no KOKORO no NAKA   mo
  your mind too?                            's mind   's inside too
                                  ________
                                  kanningu shite-ageyo--           ka?
                                  shall-cheat-(favor-for-someone)  (?)

2
[Kyousuke gives him a sharp stare.]

3
Kazuya: [glaring back]            ___
 "I'm...                          ore...

  Disliked, aren't I...?"         KIRAwareta   n ja nai     daro--  ka tte...
                                  am-disliked  (explan/neg) poss-be (?/quote)

  See?                            doo?

  That bothers you more than      sotchi    no ho-- ga  SHUKUDAI yori
  the homework, doesn't it.       that-way  rather      than-homework

                                  KI ni naru         n desho
                                  weigh-on-the-mind  (poss-explan)

Kyousuke: [nervously]                        ________
  Hey, hey.  Don't cheat!         kora kora  kanningu suru na
                                  hey  hey   don't-cheat-(command)

4
Kyousuke:
  But...                          demo...

5
Kyousuke:
  Well, once in a while, you      maa  tama ni      wa          omae mo
  do come in handy, don't you.         occasionally (contrast)  you  too

                                  YAKU ni TAtsu      mon     da  na--
                                  be-useful/helpful  person  are (rhet)

Kazuya:
  Oh, leave everything to me!     maa  makase toki natte!
                                       entrust-to

6
[Exterior evening shot of ABCB.]

7
[Madoka opens the door to put up the "closed" sign.]
sign: [bilingual]
  Closed                          JUMBI       -CHUU             #CLOSED#
                                  preparation  throughout/during

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p 270 (122)

1
[She pauses to stare off into the distance.]

2
[She turns at the sound of...]
Master: [merrily]
  In the end, Kasuga-kun          KASUGA-kun  to--to--    KYOU   mo
  didn't come today either,                   in-the-end  today  too
  huh...
                                  konakatta    ne
                                  didn't-come  (rhet)

  I wonder if he's doing all      SHUKUDAI  DAIJOUBU na  no ka na--
  right with his homework...      homework  all-right       I-wonder

3
Master:
  That's what your face looks     to yu--   yo-- na        KAO o shite-ru
  like it's saying...             say-that  it-looks-like  are-making-face

                                  kedo
                                  but

[She turns away in a huff.]

Madoka:
  Who cares?!                     shirimasen!
                                  not-aware-of/not-know

4
[Apron removed, she closes the accordion door to the changing room behind her.]
door FX:                          _____
                            pisha

crates:                             ___
                           ..abi  HONJITSU  SHIN
                                         today     new

5
[She gives a gentle smile.]
Madoka:                                                   ______
 (It looks like he's still        (do--yara        mada   pu--ru no koto
  worried about that pool          it-looks-as-if  still  about-the-pool
  thing.)
                                  KI ni shite-ru  mitai  ne)
                                  is-worried      seems

6
[Kyousuke enters ABCB, being urged forward by Kazuya.]
Kazuya:
  Hurry up and get in there!      HAYAku  hairi  na yo
                                  soon    enter

Kyousuke:
  J-just a sec!                   chi chotto mate yo!

7
Master:
  Oh!  Speak of the devil!        oya  uwasa o sureba!
                                  oh   speak-of...

Kyousuke: [embarrassed]
  H-hello.  It's been a while.    do do--mo  gobusata shite-masu
                                             am-neglecting-to-call

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p 271 (123)

1
Kazuya:
  Where's oneechan?               one--chan wa?

Master: [heading out the door]
  She's in the back room!         OKU ni        iru  yo!
                                  in-back-room  is-there

2
[Kazuya shoves Kyousuke toward the closed door to the changing room.]
Kazuya:
  See!  Go for it!                hora   chanto     yaru  n da     yo
                                  look!  perfectly  do    (explan)

Kazuya FX:                        ___
                            don

Kyousuke:
  Wahhh!!                         waa_!!

3
[He comes crashing through the crack in the (accordion-style) door.  Madoka,
 back to the door, is down to her panties.]

4
[She turns in shock, blushing.]

5
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]
Madoka: [off]
  PERVERT!!                       #H#!!

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p 272 (124)

1
[Door once more closed behind him, he blushes fiercely.]
Kyousuke:
  S-sorry!!                       go gomen!!

door FX:                          _____
                            pisha

2
[Madoka stares off-panel, eyes grown huge.]
Madoka heartbeat FX:              ____ ____ ____ ____
         doki doki doki doki

3
[Kyousuke does likewise.]
narration:
  Why does it always turn out     nande  itsu-mo  ko--       natchau  n darou
  like this?                      why    always   like-this  become  (poss-ex)

4
[She emerges from the room, wearing a blouse and skirt.]
Madoka:
  What's so important?            go-YOUKEN           wa?
                                  an-important-matter (T)

5
Kazuya: [smiling]
  Oniichan said he wants to       oni--chan ga   ISSHO ni  BENKYOU shitai
  study with you!                           (S)  together  want-to-study

                                  n da     tte      sa!
                                  (explan) (quote)

6
[His pov of Madoka, who looks back without expression.]

7
Madoka:
  Sure!                           i-- wa yo!

Madoka FX:                        _____
                          niko_

[Kyousuke is speechless.]

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p 273 (125)

1
Madoka: [tossing back her hair]
  However...                      tadashi...

2
[View pans back to show Kyousuke sitting at a table, his books set before him.
 Kazuya stands nearby.  Madoka stands on the other side of the table and points
 to his books.]
Madoka:
  I won't just tell you the       itsu-mo  no yo-- ni  KOTAE  made      wa
  answers like I usually do!      usual    like        answer as-far-as (T)

                                  oshienai        kara       ne!
                                  not-teach/tell  that's-why

  Think for yourself!!            chanto  JIBUN de    KANGAeru  koto!!
                                  neatly  by-oneself  think     case

3
[Kyousuke looks at Kazuya, who smiles back.]
Kazuya: [telepathic message]
 (See?!                           (hora ne!
                                               ___
  Sure enough, I was correct      yappari      ore ga   tsuite-kite
  in coming along with you!)      sure-enough  I   (S)  coming-along

                                  SEIKAI          datta  desho!)
                                  correct-answer  was    poss-be

4
[Kyousuke's pov of Madoka, who rests her cheek in a hand and pointedly
 ignores him.]

5
Kazuya: [whispering]
  The answer is...  'C'.          KOTAE wa...  #C# da yo

Kyousuke:
  I-I see.                        so so-- ka

6
narration:
  But...                          shikashi...

  Should I be doing such a        yappari    nasakenai  konna koto
  miserable thing like this       after-all  miserable  this-kind-of-thing
  after all?
                                  shite-te  i--   no daro--     ka
                                  be-doing  okay  (poss-explan) (?)

Kyousuke: [to Kazuya]
  Is she still mad?               yappari  OKOtte-ru  no ka na?
                                  still    is-angry      I-wonder

7
[Another pov of Madoka and Kyousuke--still, she ignores him.]

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p 274 (126)

1
Madoka:
 (Jeez...                         (mattaku...
                                                  ________
  Whether it's bad timing or      KASUGA-kun tte  taimingu WARUi  tte no ka
  just blundering...                         (T)  bad-timing             or
                                  ____
                                  doji           tte no ka...
                                  bungle/blunder        or

  In the end, Kasuga-kun          KEKKA-TEKI ni  miru to   suggoku #H#
  comes off looking awfully       the-result     when-see  awfully-H
  perverted, doesn't he.)
                                  na no    yo ne--)
                                  is (nom)    (rhet)

2
[Kazuya facial portrait--he studies her.]

3
Madoka:
 (Oh well...                      (maa...

  He doesn't seem to be doing     WARUGI wa nai    mitai da  kara
  it on purpose, so I can         without-malice/  seems     that's-why
  forgive him...)                 without-evil-intent

                                  yuruseru     n da      kedo...)
                                  can-forgive  (explan)  but

4
Kazuya FX:                        ______
                            niyari

5
Kazuya: [solemnly]                ___
  I wouldn't want to hurt         ore  dekiru koto nara
  you, oniichan, if I could       I    if-possible
  possibly help it...                           ____
                                  oni--chan o   kizutsuketakunai  kara...
                                           (O)  not-want-to-hurt  that's-why

  So I shouldn't say this,        i--taku wa nai  n da      kedo...
  but...                          shouldn't-say   (explan)  but

Kyousuke:
  Eh?!                            e?!

6
Kazuya: [whispering in his ear]
  Oneechan says she hates         one--chan ga  ne        #H# na OTOKO   wa
  perverts, and wants to                    (S) (filler)  perverted-guys (T)
  break up with you!                 _____
                                  DAIkirai  ZEKKOU shitai      tte      sa!
                                  hates     wants-to-break-up  (quote))

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                         ga--n

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p 275 (127)

1
[Tight shot of his notebook--seems to be a treatise on the Spitfire jet
 fighter.]
pencil FX:                        ____
                            poto

2
[Kyousuke rises to his feet as Madoka looks up in surprise.]
Kyousuke stand-up FX:             _____
                            gatan

3
Kyousuke: [nervous smile]
  C-can't be...                   so sonna...

  Break up...?                    ZEKKOU    da  nante...
                                  break-up  is  the-likes-of

4
Madoka:
  Huh?!                           e?!

5
[He turns and runs out the door.]
Kyousuke FX:                      ___
                            da_

narration:
  It's all over...!!              o-shimai da----_!!

6
[Kazuya and Madoka watch him leave.]

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p 276 (128)

1
[Akane walks down the street, looking off to one side.]

2
Akane:
  That guy...  If he isn't        aitsu...  KYOUSUKE no IE ni   mo
  at Kyousuke's place, then...              at-Kyousuke's-place too

                                  inai         to suru to...
                                  isn't-there  if then

  Where the heck is he?           ittai         doko ni?
                                  in-the-world  at-where

3
[Kyousuke, running full-tilt, barrels past her.]
Akane:
  Ah!                             a

Kyousuke FX:                      ___
                           don

4
Akane:
  Kyousuke!!                      KYOUSUKE!!

[He looks back over his shoulder.]

5
Kazuya:                           _ __ __ __ __ __
  Ah ha ha ha ha ha!              a ha ha ha ha ha

6
[View pans back to show Kazuya beside himself with joy.  Madoka looks on with
 very little expression.]
Kazuya:
  That Kyou-niichan.              KYOU-ni--chan -me
                                                (derogatory-suffix)

  That felt good.                 i--   KIMI     da
                                  good  feeling  is

  Now I feel refreshed!           kore de  se--se-- shita          yo!
                                  now      felt-refreshed/revived
                                  ____
  What an idiot...                baka da na--
                                                        ________
  He believed all that            KYOU-ni--chan  ore no detarame o
  nonsense I fed him...                          my-nonsense    (O)

                                  ma ni ukete...
                                  believing/taking-seriously

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p 277 (129)

1
Kyousuke: [off]
  So is that what it was?         so-- yu-- koto      datta  no ka?
                                  that-kind-of-thing  was       (?)

Kazuya: [eyes wide]               ___
  Ah!                             ha_

2
[Kazuya turns to see Akane and Kyousuke standing just inside the entrance.
 Kyousuke has his arms folded and casts an angry gaze downward.  Akane looks
 irritated.]

3
Akane:
  Finally found you, Kazuya!      KAZUYA  tsui ni  mitsuketa  wa yo--!
                                          finally  found

4
Kazuya: [horrified]
  N-neechan!!                     ne ne--chan!!
                                  ___
                            ge_

5
Madoka: [surprised]
  What?!  O-oneechan?!            e_?  o one--chan?!
  

6
[Akane confronts her little brother, who falls back into a chair.]
Akane:
  So you were hiding out          SHUKUDAI hoppori-dashite konna TOKORO ni
  here, tossing aside all         homework throwing-out    at-place-like-this
  your homework!
                                  nigekonde-ita          no ne----_
                                  were-taking-refuge-in

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p 278 (130)

1
[Kyousuke prepares for physical mayhem, rubbing his fist in the palm of his
 other hand.]
Kyousuke:
  Taking advantage of             HITO no YOWAMI     ni tsukekomi-yagatte
  someone's weakness.             person's-weakness  take-advantage-of-
                                                     (contempt)

  You...                          koitsu...
                                  this-guy

  Today is the day...             KYOU to yu-- KYOU     wa
                                  today-will-be-the-day (T)

  I won't forgive you...          yurusan      kara        na--
                                  not-forgive  that's-why

Kyousuke knuckles FX:             ____ ____
                       boki baki

[Akane angrily holds out a stack of books.]

Akane:
  C'mon, kindergarten starts      sa--  asatte              kara
  the day after tomorrow!!              day-after-tomorrow  (beginning)-from

                                  YOUCHIEN     yo!!
                                  kindergarten

  What are you gonna do           kono SHUKUDAI  do--  suru  KI?!
  about this homework?!           this-homework  what  do    intention

2
Kazuya:
  No-o-o!                         ya da yo----_

Kazuya FX:                        ___
                           da_

3
[Akane chases him out the door.]
Akane:
  Hey-y-y, stop!!                 kora-- machinasai!!

Akane hand-on-glass-door FX:      ___
                         gi_

4
[Kyousuke and Madoka just stand and watch.]

5
Madoka:
  Those two are sister and        ano futari tte  kyo--dai  datta  no...?!
  brother?!                       those-two  (T)  siblings  were   (?)

Kyousuke: [wincing]
  Jeez...                         mattaku...

  They're such troublemakers.     HITOsawagase na  kyo--dai  da  yo
                                  scaremonger      siblings  are

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p 279 (131)

1
Kyousuke:
  Asking Akane for help with      akane ni  SHUKUDAI  tanonde
  his homework, and then          to-Akane  homework  asking-(and)
  running away...
                                  nigeDAsu       nante
                                  flee/run-away  the-likes-of
                                  ____
  What an idiot...  That guy.     baka da na--  aitsu

  He should at least do his       JIBUN no  SHUKUDAI  gurai
  own homework on his own!        oneself's homework  extent

                                  JIRYOKU de        yarya i--  no ni!
                                  in-self-reliance  should-do  even-tho

2
[Madoka turns her back to Kyousuke, facing the counter.]
Madoka:
  So true!!                       so-- yo ne!!

  Like how a certain someone      DARE-ka-san wa   chanto  JIBUN de
  else does it all by             Mr-Someone  (T)  neatly  by-oneself
  himself, hmm?
                                  yaru  mon     ne
                                  do    person  (rhet)

3
[She turns, smiling and stifling a laugh.  Reflecting, Kyousuke looks
 surprised.]
Madoka:                           ___
                            pu_

4
Madoka: [gaze downcast]
  You sure are cousins.           yappari      itoko  ne
                                  sure-enough  cousins

  Not only do your faces          KAO  mo   nite-ru         kedo
  look alike, but you're the      face too  are-resembling  but
  same on the inside as
  well!                           NAKAMI                     mo
                                  interior/filling/substance too

                                  sokkuri!
                                  just-like-(another)

5
[She looks off to the side.]
Madoka:
  But...                          demo...

  An undependable boy...          tayori nai    OTOKO no KO  tte...
                                  undependable  boy          (quote)

  For some reason, is so cute     nan-da-ka        kawaikute
  that I want to care for him!    for-some-reason  being-cute

                                  kamatte-agetaku    natchau!
                                  want-to-care-for/  become-(finality/regret)
                                  look-after

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p 280 (132)

1
Kyousuke: [tentative smile]
  EH?!                            e?!

  Y-you mean...  Kazuya, or...    so sore...  KAZUYA no koto  soretomo...
                                     that     about-Kazuya    or

2
[His pov of her.  She looks back wide-eyed and without expression.]

3
[She smiles and tosses back her hair...]
Madoka:
  As to that...                   sore wa

4
[...then walks away, looking unconcerned.  Kyousuke gives a nervous smile.]
Madoka:
  Work it out yourself!           JIBUN de    tokinasai
                                  by-oneself  solve-(command)

Kyousuke:
  Okay.                           hai

narration:                                           __________
  A hand of love to an            tottemo  nasakenai kirigirisu-san  ni
  awfully miserable               awfully  miserable Mr-grasshopper (IO)
  Mr. Grasshopper!
              --Kyousuke          AI no  TE    o!          KYOUSUKE
                                  love's hand (O)

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