Kimagure Orange Road
"A Chase at the Pool!"
Volume 9, Story 5
WB Volume 5, Story 12
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi

Translation by : Daisuke Suzuki (under contract to Vancouver Animation)
Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
                                 Craig Nishida
                                 Thomas Wyatt
                                 Jerry Lee
                                 Jun Watatani

Last revision : 08-14-95

Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:
     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu

NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
      extras to those of you not having them.
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p 241 (93)--TITLE PAGE

[A super-deformed Kurumi stands in graduation gown and cap, holding a book
 under her arm, and directs her pointer at a picture of Kyousuke.  In it,
 he grimaces and blushes, holding up both arms as if to either hide his face
 or fend off blows.]

MAIN TITLE (at top)               ______     ______
  A Chase at the Pool!            pu--ru de  cheisu!
                                  at-pool    chase

Professor Kurumi's caption:
  Now, here's the question!       sate  koko de  MONDAI    desu!
                                  well  at-here  question  is

  What on earth does              oni--chan no kono HYOUJOU
  oniichan's facial                         's this-facial-expression
  expression signify?
                                  ITTAI         NANI  o   IMI shite-iru
                                  in-the-world  what (O)  be-signifying/
                                                          be-meaning

                                  no deshou?
                                  (poss-explan)

 (1) He's being scolded for       (1) JOSHI  KOUI SHITSU    o   nozoite
     peeping into the ladies          woman  dressing-room (O)  peeping
     dressing room.
                                  OKOrarete-iru.
                                  is-scolded

 (2) He's suffering from a        (2) ZUTSUU de      KURUshinde-iru.
     headache.                        from-headache  is-suffering

 (3) He's crying from looking     (3) TAIYOU  ga   mabushikute  NAite-iru.
     into the blinding sun.           the-sun (S)  blinding     is-crying

  Well, which is it?!             saa  dore da?!

 (The answer is...                (KOTAe wa...

  Read on and you'll find         YOmeba   wakarimasu)
  out.)                           if-read  understand

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p 242 (94)

1
[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.  It is a clear and sunny
 day.]
cicada FX:                        ______  ________
                  ji--wa  jiwawawa

2
[Kurumi sits, resting her cheeks in her hands.  Kyousuke sits nearby, hands
 clasped behind his head and staring at the ceiling.]
Kurumi:
  This is kinda sudden, but       TOTSUZEN da kedo  KANGAete-mitara
  now that I think about it,      suddenly is but   when-try-to-consider
  we haven't gone on a
  family vacation in several      koko SUUNEN         KASUGA-KE
  years...                        last-several-years  Kasuga-family
                                                           _______
                                  ZEN'IN de           no   bakansu   tte...
                                  by-all-the-members (nom) vacation* (T)

                                  <*from the French, "vacances">

  Not even once, have we.         ICHIDO mo    nai       no ne
                                  once   even  not-exist    (rhet)

Kyousuke:
  Come to think of it, you're     so-- ieba            so-- da na
  right...                        come-to-think-of-it

3
[View pulls back slightly to show the two seated at the dining room table.
 Kurumi throws up her arms in exasperation.]
Kurumi:
  ALL of my friends are           tomodachi nanka    mii--nna
  heading off on trips            friends   or-such   = all
  somewhere, and I...
                                  doko-ka    RYOKOU ni  DEkakete-ru
                                  somewhere  on-a-trip  are-setting-out

                                  tte       no ni
                                  (I-hear)  even-though

  Ahhh, how boring...             a~~~a  tsumannai  na~~~~

4
[Angrily, she confronts Kyousuke.  He points a finger back at her.  View
 shifts slighty to show that Manami is seated there as well.]
Kurumi:
  But you're having quite a       demo  oni--chan wa   OKINAWA ittari
  bit of fun, going to Okinawa    but             (T)          go-(and)
  and ojiichan's place.
                                  oji--chan CHI ni     ittari    de
                                  to-ojiichan's-place  go-(and)  being

                                  kekko--  TANOshinde-ru  ja nai
                                  quite    be-enjoying    are-not



Kyousuke:
  And you guys just left me       omae-tachi      koso    chakkari
  behind and went to Hawaii       you-(and-assoc) indeed  clever/shrewd
  on New Year's.                                    ___
                                  o-SHOUGATSU ni    ore o   oite
                                  on-the-New-Years  me (O)  leaving-behind
                                  _____
                                  hawai nan zo e  itte-ru   ja nai ka
                                  to-Hawaii       be-going



5
[All three Kasuga sibs turn and stare back at us.  Yes, this is evidently
 Takashi's pov.]
Kurumi:
  But...                          shikashi...

  The source of the problem       moto o tadaseba......
  is...                           if-determine-the-source

Kyousuke and Manami:
  ..........                      ..........

6
[Takashi forces a nervous smile while trying to read the newspaper.  Kurumi
 and Kyousuke glare at him.]
Takashi:
  Well, our family has been       maa   KASUGA-KE     wa   yoku   HIkKOshite
  moving so often, haven't we.    well  Kasuga-family (T)  often  moving

                                  masu      kara        ne--
                                  increase  that's-why (rhet)

  And with all those times        sono tsudo  ZENKOKU TSUTSU URAURA ni
  we've come to live all over     each-time/  all-over-the-country
  the country...                  on-all-such-occasions

                                  SUnde-kite-ru       shi
                                  are-coming-to-live  consider

  So you could say the moves      sore JITAI ga   CHOUKI   -GATA       no
  in themselves are long-term     in-itself  (S)  long-term style/type 's
  vacations.                      _______
                                  bakansu   tomo ienaku    wa   nai
                                  vacation  can't-say-that (T)  not-there

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p 243 (95)

1
Kurumi: [studying him carefully]
  Dad, are you working today?     oto--san  KYOU   SHIGOTO wa
                                            today  work    (T)

Takashi:
  ......  No.                     ......nai

2
Kurumi:
  Hmm...                          fu--n......

Kyousuke, Manami and Kurumi FX:
                       jito~~_

3
Takashi:
  All right, I get it.            wakarimashita  wakarimashita yo

  Let's go somewhere.             doko-ka    ikimasho
                                  somewhere  shall-go

Manami and Kurumi:
  Hooray!!                        yatta!!

4
[A view of the crowded beach.]
narration:
  And yet, everywhere's           to itte-mo        doko-mo    kashiko    mo
  packed with people!             even-tho-say-that everywhere over-there too

                                  HITO de ippai!
                                  full-of-people

5
[So crowded in fact, that even here, on a rocky outcropping that juts out
 into the sea, lie wall-to-wall bodies...]
crowd FX:                         ________
                       zawazawa
                                  ______
                          waiwai

person in crowd:                       ___
  Hara-kun is...                  HARA-kun ga sa--

narration:
  Heading off now to a holiday    kore kara    KOURAKUCHI ni
  resort would be the height      from-now-on  to-holiday-resort
  of folly!
                                  DEkakeru no    wa   GU no KOTCHOU!
                                  be-setting-off (T)  the-height-of-folly

6
[Exterior shot of a modern, high-rise hotel.]
narration:
  Then...                         soko de......

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p 244 (96)

1
[A view looking down at the hotel's pool.]

2
[At a table on a large deck above the pool sit the Kasuga family plus one.
 They sit with their drinks.]
Kyousuke:
  I see.                          naruhodo
                                  _______ ______     _______
  A vacation at a city hotel,     shiti-- hoteru de  bakansu   kaa
  hmm...                          at-city-hotel      vacation  (muse-to-self)

3
Takashi:                          _____
  It's great to read at           eakon            no ki--ta         NAKA de
  one's leisure in an             air-conditioning 's had-effect-on  at-inside
  air-conditioned room,
  or have a beer and nap.         yukkuri    YOMIKAKI             to iu
                                  leisurely  reading-and-writing  say-that

                                  no     mo   i--   shi
                                  (nom)  too  nice  and-besides
                                  ______
                                  bi--ru  demo          yari-nagara
                                  beer    or-something  while-doing

                                  HIRUNE tte no    mo   SAIKOU
                                  nap    (T) (nom) too  the-highest
                                  ___ ___ ___
                    wa_ ha_ ha_

4
Manami: [smiling]
  And that was your aim all       sore ga  o-MEate datta  n desho oto--san wa
  along, wasn't it, Dad?          that (S) an-aim  was   (explan) father   (T)

Takashi:                          ___ ___ ___
                    wa_ ha_ ha_

5
Akane:
  Thank you very much for         do--mo arigato-- gozaimasu
  inviting me, too.
                                  atashi made  YOnde-itadaite
                                  even-me      inviting-me

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p 245 (97)

1
Kyousuke: [looking bored]
 (Hmm.  If Ayukawa and            (u--mu  kore de        AYUKAWA ya
  Hikaru-chan were here now...            now/with-this          and

                                  hikaru-chan ga   itara......
                                              (S)  if-are-here

  It would be awesome...)         SAIKOU   na  n da      kedo...)
                                  awesome  is  (explan)  but

2
[A view of two of the cute girls enjoying themselves near the pool.]
Hikaru: [off]
  They came here, thinking        kitto   suite-ru        to OMOtte-kita
  that it wouldn't be crowded     surely  be-not-crowded  came-thinking-that
  for sure.
                                  no ni...
                                  even-though

3
[Madoka and Hikaru stand together looking over things at pool level.]
Hikaru:
  This place's pretty crowded,    koko mo   kekko--  konde-masu  ne--
  too, isn't it?                  here too  quite    is-crowded  (rhet)

4
[Looking up at the higher deck, Hikaru sees...]
Hikaru:
  Huh?                            are?

5
Hikaru:                               ______
  The guy on that terrace--       ano terasu   no HITO    SEMPAI  ja nai
  isn't that Sempai?              that-terrace 's person          is-not

                                  desu kaa?
                                  is   (?)

[Madoka, looking elsewhere, gives a start.]

6
Madoka:
  Can't be...                     masaka...

Hikaru:
  That's true.                    so-- desu ne

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p 246 (98)

1
The Kasugas plus Akane:                    ______
  Anyway, kampai!!        tonikaku kampai!!

toasting glasses FX:              ______
                           chi~~n

2
[Akane tosses back a drink in a martini glass.]
Akane FX:
                          gubi~~

3
Akane: [letting out a puff of air]
  Delicious!!                     oishi~~!!

                            fuu

4
Akane:
  So this had alcohol in it       demo  kore        yappari    o-SAKE
  after all, eh...                but   this-(one)  after-all  liquor

                                  datta  no ne
                                  was       (rhet)
                                  _______
  I thought it was juice          menyu-- o MIte-mo     SHITA   o
  because I saw the menu and      even-tho-seeing-menu  tongue (O)
  it was just tongue-twisting                        ________
  katakana!                       kamiso-- na        katakana bakkari de
                                  look-as-if-biting  because-just-katakana
                                  ______
                                  ju--su da  to OMOtta     no ni!
                                  juice  is  thought-that  even-though

 are the set of characters that are
 largely reserved for use on foreign words.  Akane means that she read a
 strange item in katakana, and assumed it was some exotic fruit juice.>

5
[Akane sits surrounded by her 7 empty glasses, emphatically addressing the
 sky.]
Akane:
  But this isn't good!            yappari  yoku nai wa!

  Minors shouldn't drink          MISEINEN-SHA          ga  o-SAKE nante!!
  alcohol!!                       minor/underage-person (S) liquor or-such

Kyousuke: [wincing]
  That's a fine way to talk       yoku yu-- yo   kore dake  nondoite
  after drinking so many of       say-well       so-much    
  them.                                                      drinking-(for-
                                                             future-sake)

6
Kurumi: [pointing]                         ______
  Say, isn't that Hikaru-chan     nee  ano pu--ru ni  iru      no
  by the pool?                    say  by-that-pool   is-there (nom)

                                  hikaru-chan  ja nai?
                                               is-not

7
Kyousuke:
  Ehh?!                           e~~_

Manami:
  Hey, it's true!                 ara HONTOU!

Akane:
  Oh!                             otto!

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p 247 (99)

1
[With a wide smile, Akane whacks Kyousuke on the back, sending him flying.]
Akane:
  You stud, you!                  koitsu--  nakanaka yaru
                                  this-guy  doing-(a-thing)-very-well

               for a swim!                             are-not

Akane pat-on-back FX:             ___
                             don

Kyousuke:
  I didn't know.                  SHIranai yo

2
Akane:
  You invited her in secret       kossori              sasotchatte
  in a scheme to show off to      secretly/in-private  inviting-(finality)
  us, right?!
                                  atashi-tachi ni  ate tsukeyo--     tte
                                  to-us            sly-hint/innuendo (quote)

                                  kontan             ne!
                                  secret-scheme/plot

3
Akane:
  Well, for Kyousuke...           maa   KYOUSUKE ni shite-mirya
                                  well  if-try-and-consider-it's-Kyousuke

  That's an evolution!            SHINKA     da  ne!
                                  evolution  is



 = "evolve" but  = "advance"
 or "make progress".>

Kyousuke:                         ____        ___
  Am I a monkey...?               saru   ka   ore wa...
                                  monkey (?)  I   (T)

[Manami smiles in merriment.]

4
[Her pov of Madoka, standing near the pool.]

5
Manami: [happily]
  Oh, oniichan, look!             a  oni--chan  horaa

  Madoka-sempai is here, too!     madoka-SEMPAI mo   iru      ja nai!
                                                too  is-here

  Aren't you happy?               yokatta  wa ne--

[Kyousuke blushes deeply.]

6
Akane:
  .....  Happy?                   ..........yokatta?

7
Manami:
  Ah!                             a_!

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p 248 (100)

1
[Akane studies him from the corner of her eye.]
Akane:
  Happy...  That Madoka-chan      madoka-chan ga  ite...      yokatta ne?
  is here?                                    (S) being-here

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                           giku_

2
Kurumi: [in innocent surprise]
  Oniichan, you love              oni--chan  madoka-san no koto mo
  Madoka-san, too?                           about-Madoka       too

                                  SUki na  no?
                                  liking   (?)

[Kyousuke--in the middle of drinking--spews it.]

3
Akane: [slow-burn]
  KYOUSUKE!!                      KYOUSUKE_!!

Akane FX:                         ______
                 jirori

Kyousuke FX:
                           giku_

4
[Akane grabs him by the shirt and shouts in his face.  Her face is very
 flushed.]
Akane:                                                  ______
  How dare you, when you          hikaru-chan  to yu--  kawaii KANOJO   ga
  have a cute girlfriend                       called   cute-girlfriend (S)
  like Hikaru-chan!!
                                  ari-nagara   nante koto o!!
                                  though-have  how-dare-you!

Kyousuke:
  W-wait!!                        ma mate yo_!!

5
Akane:                                                       _hito_
  I won't permit you to cheat     daitai        atashi no i-- ONNA   o
  me out of my girl!!             on-the-whole  my-nice-person/girl (O)

                                  taburakasu            nante
                                  deceive/cheat/betray  the-likes-of

                                  yurusenai                   wa!!
                                  can't-allow/permit/forgive

Kyousuke:                                                 ______
  Is that any way for a girl      sore       ga   ONNA no serifu       ka?!
  to talk?!                       that-(one) (S)  girl 's speech/words (?)

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p 249 (101)

1
Akane:
  I won't allow it on any         atashi  DANjite YURUsanai        kara     ne
  account.                        I       not-allow-on-any-account that's-why

  All right.  I'll just go to     yoshi      hitotsu  atashi ga
  them and settle it for you.     all-right  once     I      (S)

                                  ano futari ni
                                  to-those-2-people

                                  HANASHI o tsukete-kite-ageru
                                  go-and-settle-it-(for-you)

Akane stand-up FX:                _____
                            gatan

2
Kyousuke:
  Eh?!                            e?!

3
Akane:
  I'll just go and tell           madoka-chan ni wa          chanto
  Madoka-chan to split up         to-madoka      (contrast)  neatly/fully/
  with you!                                                  precisely

                                  anta to   WAKAreru  yo-- ni
                                  with-you  separate  so-that

                                  itte   kikasemasu!
                                  going  tell/inform

4
Akane:
  And beg Hikaru-chan to          hikaru-chan ni wa          KYOUSUKE mo
  forgive you since you           to-Hikaru      (contrast)           too
  regret your actions!
                                  HANSEI shite-ru                    kara
                                  is-reflecting-(upon-his-conduct)/  since
                                  is-reconsidering/is-having-2nd-thoughts

                                  YURUshite-yatte-kure tte
                                  forgive-him-for-me   (quote)

                                  o-NEGAi suru  wa
                                  beg

  Bye!                            ja ne!

Akane FX:                         _____
                         fura_

5
Akane FX:                         ___
                            da_

Kyousuke:
  W-wait up!                      chi chotto mate yo!

6
[She bumps into a waiter, sending him and his tray to the ground.]
Akane:
   Oh, sorry!                     a gomen ne--

Akane collision FX:               ___
                            don

waiter FX:                        ______
                           gachan

7
[Kyousuke pauses to help the waiter.  Akane runs on.]
Kyousuke:
  I'm so sorry.                   do--mo suimasen

  Hey, wait!                      kora mate!

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p 250 (102)

1
Kyousuke:
 (Damn...!                        (shimatta...!

  Th-this has gotten serious!!)   ko korya  TAIHEN na  koto ni natta!!)
                                     this   serious    turned-out-to-be

2
Kyousuke:
 (Anyway, she's drunk and         (tonikaku  aitsu      yopparatte
  can't think straight...          anyway    that-girl  being-drunk-(and)

                                  misakai ga tsukanaku
                                  can't-discriminate-between-(A-and-B)

                                  natte-ru     kara...
                                  is-becoming  that's-why

  I've gotta stop her somehow     AYUKAWA-tachi ni        awaseru   MAE ni
  before she meets Ayukawa and    to-Ayukawa-(and-assoc)  let-meet  before
  Hikaru-chan!
                                  nantoka           TOmeneba...
                                  somehow-or-other  if-stop

  Right now she's...)             IMA no aitsu     wa...)
                                  now 's that-girl (T)

3
Kyousuke:                         ________                _________
  A dump truck without a          bure--ki no kowareta    dampuka--  da!!
  brake!!                         brake    's was-broken  dump-car   is

4
[He runs after Akane down a flight of stairs.]
narration:
  A-anyway, if I don't catch      to tomokaku  tsukamaenai to...
  her...                             anyway    if-not-catch

5 & 6
[A pair of panels shows clouds in the sky.]
narration:
  I'll be in big trouble!         erai koto ni  natte-shimau!
                                  awful-matter  turn-into-(finality/regret)

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p 251 (103)

1
[Now in her one-piece swimsuit, Madoka relaxes and floats on her back in the
 pool.]
Madoka FX:                        ____
                          jabu

2
Akane:
   There she is!!                 ita_!!

3
[She dives into the pool.  Somehow, Akane is now in her swimsuit.]
Akane FX:                         ___
                            tan

4
Kyousuke:
  A-Akane!!                       a akane!!

5
[Underwater shot showing Akane swimming below the floating Madoka.]

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p 252 (104)

1
Madoka FX:                        ______
                          chapun

2
[Akane stops just under Madoka...]

3
[...and transforms into Kyousuke.]
Akane transformation FX:          ___
                          fu_

4
[@Kyousuke emerges from the water behind Madoka, who's now standing.
 @Kyousuke extends both hands towards her.]
@Kyousuke FX:                     _____
                         zaba_

5
Kyousuke:
  STOP IT-T-T!                    yamero----_

6
Kyousuke FX:                      ___
                           da_

[Akane abruptly sheds the illusion and turns aside...]

Akane:
  Oh yeah, I forgot.              a so-- da       ikenai
                                    that's-right  no-good/bad/naughty

Akane transformation FX:          ___
                          fu_

Akane FX:                         ____
                        hyoi

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p 253 (105)

1
[Kyousuke comes sailing in and ends up clamping his arms around the front
 of a surprised Madoka.]
Kyousuke FX:
                      shikka

2
[Madoka blushes.]

3
[Kyousuke freezes and blushes.]
narration:
  Ah...                           a......

4
[Madoka elbows him in the face, sending him flying.]
Madoka:
  What are you doing?!!           nani sun no yo!!

Madoka elbow FX:                  ____
                           baki

5
[He's propelled underwater by the blow.]
Kyousuke FX:                      _______
                          gobo--n

6
[Clutching both hands to her chest, Madoka looks around in puzzlement.  No
 one's around.]
Madoka:
  Uhh...  What?                   to......are?

Madoka FX:                        _____ _____
                       kyoro kyoro

Kyousuke FX: [off]                ____
                         gobo...

Kyousuke: [off]
  ..........                      ..........

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p 254 (106)

1
Madoka:
  Just now...  Who was that?      IMA no...  DARE?

2
[In a shallow part of the pool, Akane stands and does her stretching
 exercises.]
Akane:
  Have to do my warm-ups          chanto            JUMBI UNDOU
  first.                          perfectly/neatly  limber-up

                                  shitokanakucha
                                  (shite-okanakute wa )
                                   mustn't-not-do-(for-future-sake)

  One, two...                     ichi ni--

  Three, four...                  san shi--

3
Akane:
  !                               !

4
[Akane's pov of bikini-clad Hikaru, lying on her front on a towel.]

5
Akane FX:                         ______
                            niya--..

6
[With a shimmer, she transforms into Kyousuke.]
Akane transformation FX:          ___
                          fu_

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p 255 (107)

1
[From the other side of the pool, Kyousuke sees Akane emerge from the pool
 near the sunbathing Hikaru.]
Akane:
   Hika-a-aru-chan!               hika--ru-chan!

Kyousuke:                         _____
                           giku_

2
Hikaru: [eyes closed]
  That voice...                   sono KOE wa...

  It's you Sempai, isn't it!      SEMPAI desu ne!

  I thought you were around.      yappari      kite-ta     no ne
                                  as-expected  was-coming

Akane:                                    _____
  Exactly!                   atari!  hikku

3
[Looking off-panel, Kyousuke is appalled.]
Hikaru: [off]
  Oh, I'm so glad.                a cho--do yokatta
                                            ____
  Won't you rub some oil on       SENAKA    oiru  nutte-kudasaranai?
  my back?                        the-back  oil   not-smear-(please)

Akane: [off]
  Sure thing!                     o-yasui  GOYOU!
                                    cheap  order/business

Kyousuke:
  Wha...!                         na...!

4
[Isolated shot of another part of the pool.  Kei and Yuri frolic--nah, just
 joking...]
pool noise FX: [off]              _____ _____
                   pasha pasha
                                  ____
  Kyaa!                           kyaa
                                  _____
  Ah ha ha!                       ahaha

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p 256 (108)

1
[Several people stop and stare.]
Hikaru: [off]
  Ahh, much lower...              a~~~~  motto      SHIMO no HOU mo~~
                                         much-more  lower 's way too

Akane: [off]
  Okay, okay.                     hai hai

girl 1:                                 ___________
  Wahhh, how abnormal.            wa--  abuno--maru

girl 2:
  Those girls are so close...     ONNA do--shi                de...
                                  girl comrades/confederates  being

2
[Hikaru opens her eyes.]
@Kyousuke: [off]                            ___
  Actually, I came here           jitsu wa  ore  hikaru-chan ni
  because there's something       actually  I    to-you
  I wanted to tell you,
  Hikaru-chan.                    i--tai       koto ga atte
                                  want-to-say  having-something

                                  kita  n da
                                  came  (explan)

3
[Looking over her shoulder, @Kyousuke spies the real Kyousuke charging
 through the pool.]
Kyousuke:
  Wait!  Hold it, hold it.        mate!  mate mate

4
[As Kyousuke emerges from the pool, Akane sidesteps and Hikaru simultaneously
 gets up to hug the real Kyousuke.]
Hikaru:
  Actually, I...                  jitsu wa  atashi mo...
                                  actually  I      too

Hikaru FX:
                        deta_

Akane FX:                         _____
                            sasa_

6
[Kyousuke teleports right out from within Hikaru's arms.  Hikaru opens her
 eyes wide.]
Kyousuke teleport FX:             ____
                          shu_

7
Hikaru:
  Huh?  Sempai?                   are  SEMPAI?

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p 257 (109)

1
[Kyousuke rematerializes near some bushes with Akane in his grasp.]
Akane:
  Ouch...!  Hey-y-y!  You're      itatata  ya da----_  chotto RAMBOU  ne--
  so rough...                                       !         violent/rough

Kyousuke and Akane teleport FX:   ____
                          shu_

Kyousuke:
  Ha, finally gotcha...           fuu koitsu-me                  yatto
                                            (derogatory-suffix)  at-last

                                  tsukamaeta...
                                  caught

2
[Akane transforms...]
@Madoka:
  Pervert!  Let go of me!         #H#!  hanashite yo

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                           giku_

3
[Recoiling, Kyousuke slams himself back against a wall.]
Kyousuke FX:                      ___
                           ba_

Kyousuke:
  OO-WAH!  I'M SORRY!!            uwa_  gomennasai!!

4
[Akane sticks out her tongue, smiles, and races into the building.]
Akane:                            ______
  Sucker-r-r.                     ba--ka  damasarete-yan      no
                                  idiot   are-deceived-by-me

Kyousuke:
  Wha...                          na......

sign:                             ______     ______
  Locker Room                     ro--ka...  ru--mu

Akane FX:                         ___
                            da_

5
Kyousuke: [wincing]
  That jerk...  Taking            HITO no YOWAMI ni tsukekomu
  advantage of my weakness...!    take-advantage-of-someone's-weakness

                                  YATSU...!
                                  jerk

6
[He chases her down a hall.]
Kyousuke:
  W-wait!                         ma mate----_

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p 258 (110)

1
[She runs into a room.]
Akane FX:                         ___
                            da_

2
[Kyousuke follows her in.]
Kyousuke:
  Hold it!                        mate_

3
sign:                             _____________            ______
  Ladies' Locker Room.            rokka--ru--mu  #LADIES#  redisu

4
[Inside, he grabs Akane by her wrist.]
Kyousuke:
  Now I caught ya!                ita ita      saa  tsukamaeta!
                                  there-you-are     caught

Akane:
  Ohh.                            an

5
[Kyousuke stops and turns toward a pair of silhouettes behind a shower
 curtain.]
Hikaru: [off]                                ________
  Madoka-san, do you have         madoka-san shampu-- arimasuu?
  some shampoo?                              shampoo  have

Madoka:                                          _____
  Hm?  In my bag.                 n?  atashi mo  kaban no NAKA
                                      my         bag   's inside

shower FX:                        _______  ________
            za----_  sha----_

6
narration:
  Thi...!  This is...?!           ko_...  koko wa...?!

Kyousuke:                         ___
  ARG!                            ge_

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p 259 (111)

1
Kyousuke:
 (Ah!  Better get out of          (ha_ ikenai   koko wa......
  here...                            ! no-good  here (T)

  Have to hurry and take Akane    HAYAku      akane o   tsuredasaneba...)
  out of...)                      early/soon       (O)  if-take-(her)-out

2
[In shock, he looks up to see...]
Kyousuke:
  Uhh!                            to_

3
[...Madoka and Hikaru wrapped in towels.]
Madoka: [blushing]
  Kasuga-kun!                     KASUGA-kun!

Hikaru: [pleasantly surprised]
  Sempai!                         SEMPAI!

4
[Forcing a smile, he points at Akane.]
Kyousuke:
  Th-this is...  I mean...        ko kore wa  iya...  sono
  Umm...

  She's...                        koitsu ga...

5
[But he grows wide-eyed when he sees the expression on Akane's face.]
Kyousuke:
 (Oh sh-shoot!!)                  (a_ shi shimatta!!)

Akane FX:                         ______
                           niyari

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p 260 (112)

1
Akane:
  Actually, I...                  atashi  jitsu wa...
                                  I       actually

2
[Kyousuke starts to exit.  Akane turns to watch him.]
narration:
  N-no good being here...         ko korya     akan...  nigeyou
  Better split.                      this-place         shall-run

Kyousuke FX:
                          so~~_

3
[She grabs him by the hair.]
Akane:
  Hey, Kyousuke!  Hold it!        kora KYOUSUKE!  machinasai

Akane FX:
                           gui_

4
Kyousuke:
 (I-it's all over now!!)          (mo moo  dame     da!!)
                                      now  no-good  is

5
[A grey panel.]
Akane: [off]
  Oh...  Huh?                     a...  are?

6
[Wide-eyed she points to herself and asks Kyousuke...]
Akane:
  What in the world was I         atashi  ITTAI         nani
  going to say?                   I       in-the-world  what

                                  io-- to shite-ta   n da      kke?
                                  was-about-to-say   (explan)  (?)

Kyousuke:
  EH?!                            e?!

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p 261 (113)

1
narration:
  It seems...                     do--yara...

  Like Akane has completely       akane wa   yotte-ta   TOKI no koto
  forgotten about what                  (T)  was-drunk  about-when
  happened when she was
  drunk...                        sukkari     WASUrete-iru   rashii...
                                  completely  is-forgetting  like

  This...  Troublemaker.          kono...HITO    sawagase na
                                  this   person  trouble/disturb

Kyousuke:
  Wha...                          na...

2
[Kyousuke bursts out laughing.  Madoka is having none of that.]
Kyousuke:
  It was nothing...!!             nan demo nai no...!
                                          ___
  Well-ll.  I guess I'll go       sa--te  ore mo   oyogo--     ka naa
  for a swim!                     well    I   too  shall-swim  I-wonder

3
[Pov from behind a large crowd of girls clustered just outside the locker
 room door.  They watch what happens inside, through the open door.]
Madoka: [off]
  Stop right there!               machinasai yo

  Hey!  What do you think         kora_  do-- yu--     tsumori?
  you're doing?                   hey !  what-kind-of  intention

  Coming in here!                 konna TOKORO ni        haitte-kite!
                                  in-this-kind-of-place  go-and-enter

Hikaru: [off]
  Wah!  Oh no-o-o.  You're        wa--   ya daa  sempai no #H#~~~~_
  such a pervert, Sempai!                oh-noo         's  = pervert

narration:
  It goes without saying that     sonoGO      watakushi  KASUGA KYOUSUKE ga
  later on, I--Kasuga Kyousuke    afterwards  I                          (S)
  --was soundly thrashed...!
                                  FUKUROdataki ni atta
                                  had-a-drubbing/sound-thrashing/was-beaten-up

                                  koto  wa   yu-- made mo arimasen...!
                                  (nom) (T)  it-goes-without-saying

girl 3:
  A woman's enemy, isn't he!      ONNA  no TEKI      ne!
                                  women 's enemy/foe

girl 4:
  Wahhh, pervert!                 wa-- HENTAI

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