Kimagure Orange Road
"The Fugitive of Love"
Volume 8, Story 8
WB Volume 5, Story 6
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi

Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
                                 Craig Nishida
                                 Spencer Hastings
                                 Thomas Wyatt
                                 Jerry Lee
                                 Ka-Ping Yee

Last revision : 07-17-95

Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:
     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu

NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
      extras to those of you not having them.
      Example: The subtitles on page 113 (159) are only in the WBs!
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p 113 (159)--TITLE PAGE

[Madoka stands in headband, shorts and Boston Red Sox jersey, and looks off
 to her left.]

MAIN TITLE (at top)
  The Fugitive of Love            KOI  no TOUBOUSHA
                                  love 's fugitive/runaway/deserter

SUB-TITLE (at bottom)                                     _______
  The Pretty and Desired Girl     moeru SHISEN        no  shawa-- o Abite
  Becomes Transparent Under a     burning-look/glance 's  under-a-shower
  Shower of Burning Looks!
                                  akogare          BISHOUJO
                                  long-for/admire  pretty-girl

                                  SUkitoore!
                                  is-transparent/is-seen-through

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p 114 (160)

1
[Exterior shot of ABCB.  Overlaid partially on this is a portrait of Madoka.]

2
[Kyousuke sits with cheek in hand, and stares off, deep in thought.]
narration:
  This is what happened today     KYOU no o-HIRU no koto   desu
  at lunchtime.                   about-today's-lunchtime  it-is

3
[This and the next 5 panels are double-bordered, denoting the flashback
 sequence.  Here, Hikaru beams and presents him with a whopping box lunch.]
narration:
  As usual, the familiar          MAIDO                   o-najimi no
  Hikaru-chan Box-Lunch           each-time/always/often  familiar
  Offensive...
                                  hikaru-chan no o-bento--  KOUSEI...
                                              's box-lunch  offensive

Hikaru:
  Here you are!!                  doozo_!!

dramatic FX:
                           do~~~~n

Kyousuke:
  Wahhh!!                         waa_!!

4
[She cheerfully feeds him.]
Hikaru:
  Here.  Say, "ahhhh."            hai a~~~~n

Kyousuke:
 (How embarrassing...)            (hazukashii naa...)

                           a~~n

5
[Looking about, Kyousuke sees his male classmates watching intently.]
Kyousuke FX:                      ______
                           chira_

6
Kyousuke:
  Umm...  Of course I'm           ano ne...  o-bento-- wa   TASHIka ni
  delighted over the box-lunch,              box-lunch (T)  certainly
  but, after all, this kind of
  thing is a little...            ureshi--   kedo...
                                  delighted  but

                                  yappari    ko-- yu-- no  wa   chotto...
                                  after-all  one-like-this (T)  a-bit

Hikaru: [horrified, teary-eyed]
  It's not delicious?             oishikunai  n desu    kaa
                                  not-tasty   (explan)  (?)

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p 115 (161)

1
Kyousuke: [placatingly]
  No...  It's nothing like        iya...  so--       ja naku tte  sono...
  that...                         no      like-that  is-not       that

Hikaru: [mad, teary-eyed]
  Just tell it to me straight     chanto     itte-kudasai  oishikunai  tte
  --it doesn't taste good!        precisely  say-(please)  not-tasty  (quote)

2
[She runs out of the classroom.]
Hikaru:
  I hate it when you're           hakkiri shinai      SEMPAI tte  DAIKIRAi_!!
  unclear!!                       indefinite/unclear         (T)  hate

Kyousuke:
  Ah, Hikaru-chan.                a hikaru-chan

Hikaru FX:                        ___
                            da_

narration:
  Somehow, it seems I've          nanka    WARUi koto  shichatta
  done something awful...         somehow  bad-thing   done-(finality/regret)

                                  mitai de...
                                  seem

guy:
  Hey, you made her cry!          ya--i  nakashita!
                                  hey    made-cry

3
[Back to the present.  Madoka smiles and looks at us.]
Madoka:                                     _____
  What's got you looking          nani  o   bo--tto shite-ru no?
  so spaced-out?                  what (O)  be-looking-vacant

  No matter how close it          ikura     mo-- sugu  NATSUYASUmi
  might be to summer              how-much  soon       summer-vacation
  vacation...
                                  da kara        tte......
                                  is that's-why  (am-given-to-understand)

4
[View shifts to show that he's still deep in his thoughts and doesn't
 realize she's talking.]
Madoka:
  Say, if it's okay, would        nee  moshi  yokattara  atashi to...
  you...                          say  if     if-good    with-me

narration:
  But this is Hikaru-chan         demo  hikaru-chan no koto  da  kara
  we're talking about, so         but   about-Hikaru         is  that's-why
  I think she'll be perfectly
  fine by tomorrow and            YOKUJITSU ni    wa   chanto
  bringing me a box-lunch,        by-the-next-day (T)  perfectly
  but...
                                  TAchiNAOtte           o-bento--  mottekuru
                                  recovering-(oneself)  box-lunch  bring

                                  to omou     kedo...
                                  think-that  but

5
Kyousuke:
  Eh?!  Did you say something?    e_?!  nani-ka

Madoka FX:                        _____
                     muka_

6
[She slams down a glass of water on the counter.]
Madoka:
  What are you doing?  Have       nan ni   suru  ka    KImatta?!
  you decided?!                   in-what  do    (?)   decided

Madoka glass FX:                  ___
                           don

Kyousuke:                                 ____ ________
  Y-yes.  Ice coffee.             ha hai  aisu ko--hi--

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p 116 (162)

1
[He walks home alone.]
Kyousuke:
  Ahhhhh.                         a--a

2
Kyousuke:
 (I even made Ayukawa angry.)     (AYUKAWA made  okorasechatta)
                                           even  made-angry-(finality/regret)

Kyousuke FX:                      ________
                   tobotobo

3
[Elsewhere, a familiar scene.  Kazuya and his chibi Madoka and Hikaru-clones
 encounter each other in the park.]
Kyouko:                           ____
  Kazu-chan's playing with me!!   kazu-chan wa   atashi to  ASObu no  yo!!
                                            (T)  with-me    playing

chibi Madoka-clone:
  Ahh, yesterday you promised     a--  kino--     atashi to  ASObu  tte
  to play with me.                     yesterday  with-me    play   (quote)

                                  YAKUSOKU shita  ja nai
                                  promised        is-not

4
[Kazuya's pov of the two girls.]
Kyouko:
  Me, right?!                     atashi yo ne!

chibi Madoka-clone:
  It's me, isn't it?!!            atashi desho!!

5
[Wincing, Kazuya pokes his fingers in his ears.]
Kazuya:
  What a pain...                  u_rusai na--
                                              ____
  This is why I don't like        da kara     gaki no ONNA  tte  kirai
  little girls.                   that's-why  kid  's girls (T)  disliking

                                  na  n da     yo na
                                  am  (explan)

girls FX: [off]                   _________ _________
                pi--chiku pa--chiku to!

6
Kazuya: [running off]
  I'm not playing with either     dotchi to mo  ASObanai  yo~~~~_!!
  of you!!                        with-either   not-play

Kyouko: [glaring]
  Ahh!  He's running away!!       a--_  nigeta!!

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p 117 (163)

1
[An overhead view shows Kazuya running down the sidewalk.  Approaching from
 the opposite direction is Kyousuke.]
Kazuya footsteps FX:              __ __ __ __
                 ta ta ta ta

2
Kyousuke:
  Kazuya!                         KAZUYA!

Kazuya and Kyousuke FX:           _______
               battari

Kazuya:
  Oniichan!                       oni--chan!

3
[Kazuya pauses to catch his breath.]
Kazuya:
                            fuu

4
Kyousuke:
  What's the matter?              do-- shita n da

  You look depressed.             GENKI nai              jan
                                  low-spirits/depressed  are-not

5
Kazuya:
  You, too...                     oni--chan koso...

6
Kazuya:
  Ahh, you have it so good,       a--a    oni--chan wa   i--   yo naa
  oniichan.                                         (T)  good     (rhet)

  You always get to be with       anna IROppoi one--chan-tachi to  itsu-mo
  those sexy oneechans.           with-sexy-oneechans-like-those   always

                                  issho ni  irete
                                  together  able-to-be

7
Kyousuke:
  What are you saying?            nani itte n da

  Kindergarten kids have the      YOUCHIEN JI  wa  KIRAKU        darou    ga
  easy life...                    kindergarten (T) ease/comfort  poss-be  and
                                           child
                                               ___
  I'm jealous--I'd like to        urayamashii  ore mo   KODOMO ni naritai  yo
  be a kid, too.                  enviable     me  too  want-to-become-child

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p 118 (164)

1
Kyousuke and Kazuya:
  !                               !

2
[Both smile and point to their own faces.]
Kyousuke and Kazuya:
  Why don't we trade places       mo-- ichido  Irekawaranai?
  again?                          once-more    not-change-places-with

3
[Both do double-takes.]

4
[They seal the agreement with a handclasp.]
Kazuya:
  It's the first time we've       hajimete  IKEN          ga   atta  ne!
  had the same idea!              first     views/opinion (S)  had

handclasp FX:
                          gu

Kyousuke:
  That's unusual.                 mezurashii

5
Kyousuke and Kazuya:
  Ready, set...                   se---- no...

6
collision FX:                     ______
                           gochin

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p 119 (165)



1
@Kyousuke and @Kazuya:
  So, in that case...             ja    so-- yu-- koto de
                                        in-a-case-like-that

2
@Kyousuke:                         _____
 (How stupid, oniichan.           (bakka  da  naa  oni--chan

  I bet you'll be tossed          kitto   ano futari ni
  about by those two!)            surely  by-those-2-people

                                  furimawasareru              zo!)
                                  be-swung-around/brandished  !!

3
@Kazuya:                          __ ___
                        pu pu_

 (He has no idea about the        (aitsu     KOUKOUSEI           no
  harsh life of a high             that-guy  high-school-student 's
  school student...
                                  kibishisa            mo   SHIranai  de...
                                  severity/seriousness too  not-know  being

  He'll soon regret doing         IMA ni  KOUKAI suru      zo!)
  this!)                          soon    regret/be-sorry  !!

4
[Exterior dusk shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]

5
[He eats like a demon.]
@Kyousuke FX:                     __________
                   gatsugatsu

6
[The rest of the family watches him wide-eyed.]
@Kyousuke:
  Seconds, please!!               okawari!!

7
[He lies on the floor and watches a video girl in her panties blow him a
 kiss.]
@Kyousuke:
 (Just as I thought.  It's        (yappari       i-- naa  KOUKOUSEI wa!
  so nice to be a high school      as-I-thought           high-school-student
  student!
  No one gets angry even if       YOfukashi shite-te mo
  I stay up till late...)         even-tho-am-sitting-up-late-at-night

                                  OKOrarenai            nante)
                                  not-be-getting-angry  the-likes-of
                                  _ __ __
                      e he he

book:
   Japan               <2-kanji> e  NIHON
                                               Japan

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p 120 (166)

1
[Exterior night shot of Kazuya's home.]

2
@Kazuya: [tucked in bed]
 (It's so nice to be a kid...     (KODOMO wa   i--   naa
                                   child  (T)  nice  (rhet)

  You aren't told to study,       BENKYOU shiro  tomo     iwarenai
  and life is easy.)              study          even-if  not-be-telling

                                  shi...
                                  and-besides

                                  raku        -chin       raku-chin)
                                  easy/comfort 

@Kazuya FX:                       ________
                suyasuya

book 1:
  Visiting the West--an           SAIYUU             KI
  Account                         visiting-the-West  account/narrative/annals

book 2:
  Momotarou--the Peach Boy*       MOMOTAROU

<*Commentary:  A Japanese folk tale--An old, childless couple find a large
 peach drifting down a stream one day.  They cut it open and find a boy,
 Momotaro, who they raise as their own.  He grows up to be a renowned
 Oni (devil) fighter.  Aided by his animal companions, he hunts down the
 oni (who had stolen all the wealth of the people years before).  He returns
 the treasures to their rightful owners, and sees that his adoptive parents
 live comfortably thereafter.  What does this have to do with KOR?
 Absolutely nothing...  ^_^>

3
[Exterior shot of a school building.]
narration:
  And the next day...             soshite YOKUJITSU----

4
@Kyousuke: [wide-eyed]
  Delicious!                      oishii!

5
Hikaru:
  Really?!                        honto-- desu ka?!

@Kyousuke:
  Delicious, delicious!           oishii oishii

6
[@Kyousuke turns to look at 4 guys eating ramen or sandwiches.]
guys FX:
                       jito~~~~_

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p 121 (167)

1
@Kyousuke: [wide grin]
  Yahhh, you guys are jealous,    ya--i  omaera        urayamashi--  darou!
  aren't you!                            you-(plural)  enviable      poss-be

2
@Kyousuke:
  Having made such a delicious    konna oishi-- o-bento--
  box lunch for me...             tasty-box-lunch-like-this

                                  tsukutte-moratchatte
                                  making-for-me
                                  ___
  I'm so lucky!                   ore tte  shiawase!
                                  I   (T)  good-fortune/luck

  How I look forward to it        ashita   mo       TANOshimi    da  na--
  tomorrow as well.               tomorrow as-well  expectation  is  (rhet)

Hikaru:
  Hooray!                         yattaa!

3
Hikaru: [blushing]
 (I'm so happy...                 (ureshi-- naa

  What's up with Sempai today?    KYOU no SEMPAI  do-- shita        n darou
                                  today's-Sempai  what's-the-matter (poss-
                                                                     explan)

  He's so pleased with me...)     konna ni  YOROKOnde-kureru    nante...)
                                  so-much   is-pleased-with-me  or-such

4
[A shot looking up the face of a school building.]

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p 122 (168)

1
[Full-length full-portrait of Madoka in school uniform.  She looks to the
 left in search of someone.]

2
[She visualizes her behavior at ABCB the previous day.]
narration:
  I wonder if I was a little      kinou     wa   chotto  kitsu sugita
  too harsh yesterday...          yesterday (T)  a-bit   was-overly-severe

                                  ka na...
                                  I-wonder

3
Madoka:
  Oh!                             a

@Kyousuke:
 (Oh, it's oneechan.)             (a one--chan da)

4
Madoka FX:                        __________
                       kyorokyoro

5
Madoka: [taking him by the wrist]
  Come here a sec.                chotto

6
[His pov of an apologetic-looking Madoka.]
Madoka:
  I was nasty yesterday.          kinou     wa   WARUkatta wa
                                  yesterday (T)  was-bad/nasty

  I'm sorry.                      gomen

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p 123 (169)

1
@Kyousuke:
  ?                               ?

2
Madoka: [gaze downcast]                          _______
  So...  I want you to come to    de... KON'YA   abakabu  owaru koro
  ABCB tonight at closing time.   so    tonight  ABCB     closing-time

                                  kite    hoshii  no
                                  coming  want

@Kyousuke:
  Eh?                             e

3
[She looks up with a smile.]
Madoka FX:                        _____
                          niko_

4
Madoka:
  Anyway, be there for sure,      tomokaku  nani ga   atte-mo
  no matter what happens.         anyway    what (S)  no-matter-happens

                                  ZETTAI        yo
                                  absoluteness

  I'll be waiting for you         zutto         matte-ru    kara
  the whole time, so I...         all-the-time  be-waiting  that's-why

                                  atashi......
                                  I

[She notices some guy watching them with curiousity.]

Madoka:                           ___
  Ah!                             ha_

5
Madoka:
  See ya!                         ja ne!

6
@Kyousuke:
 (Somehow, this looks like        (korya  nan-da-ka  TANOshi-- koto  ni
  it'll be fun!)                   this   somehow    fun-thing      (IO)

                                  nariso--!)
                                  looks-as-if-become

 (I'm glad I traded places        (yappari    Irekawatte
  after all!)                      after-all  changing-places-with

                                  yokatta  na!)
                                  was-good

@Kyousuke FX:
                         wakuwaku

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p 124 (170)

1
[Walking down the sidewalk, @Kazuya turns to see the blonde tot come racing
 out of a building.]
Kyouko:                           ______
  Kaaazu-chan, let's play!        ka--zu-chan ASObo_

sign: [partial view]
  garten                  CHIEN

2
[The brunette tot appears and pushes the blonde tot aside.]
chibi Madoka-clone:
  Trying to steal a jump on       mata--  nukegake shite!
  me again!                       again   stealing-(a-step-on-a-person)

chibi Madoka-clone FX:            ___
                           don

3
@Kazuya:
  Now, now...                     maa maa

4
[With a big smile, he hugs the two of them.  Both are surprised out of their
 anger.]
@Kazuya:
  I know!                         so-- da!

  Then let's all three of us      ja    3 -NIN    issho de  i-- toko
  go somewhere nice.              then  3-people  together  nice-place

                                  ikou
                                  shall-go

5
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]

6
[The two girls smile and laugh in conversation.]
girls:                            ____ ____
                      kya_ kya_

7
Madoka:
  Is it really okay,              HONTOU ni  i--  no    KAZUYA-kun?
  Kazuya-kun?                     really     okay (nom)
                                                _____
  To put it on Kasuga-kun's       KASUGA-kun no tsuke de...
  tab...                                     's on-tab

@Kazuya: [wincing]
  Sure it's okay.                 i-- no i-- no
                                               ___
  It's my money, after all.       do--se       ore no o-KANE  da  kara
                                  in-any-case  my-money       is  that's-why

8
Madoka:
  Huh?!                           e_?

narration:
  Oh no!  I'm Kazuya now!         ikene  ore  IMA  KAZUYA  datta!
                                         I    now          was

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p 125 (171)

1
Madoka: [merrily]
  All right.  Then today,         yoshi      ja    KYOU  wa
  it's my treat!                  all-right  then  today (T)

                                  one--chan no ogori  da!
                                            's treat  is

@Kazuya:
  Saved...!                       tasukatta......!

2
narration:
  But...                          shikashi...

  What's up with Ayukawa?         do-- shita  n darou  AYUKAWA

  A complete change from          kinou to     wa          uttekawatte
  yesterday--she's in a           by-yesterday (contrast)  changing-completely
  great mood.
                                  erai KIGEN ga   i--  naa
                                  great-mood (S)  okay (rhet)

3
[@Kyousuke and Hikaru enter.]
@Kyousuke:
  Hello...                        konnichi...

door FX:                          _____
                          karan

4
[Their pov of Madoka, @Kazuya and Kyouko.]

5
[@Kyousuke catches sight of his two tot girlfriends and flinches.  The two
 look up from drinking, puzzled.]
@Kyousuke:
  Wah!                            wa!

@Kyousuke FX:                     _____
                           giku_

6
[View of the 3 children as they smile and chat and eat.]
@Kazuya and girls FX:
                         wakiaiai

narration:                        ___
  It seems that I'm getting       ore tte  KODOMO   to wa     AISHOU ga ii
  along just fine with these      I   (T)  children (define)  congenial
  kids.
                                  mitai
                                  seems

7
@Kyousuke:
 (What's this...?                 (nan da...

  Oniichan's doing just           umaku  yatte-ru  ja nai ka  oni--chan...)
  fine...)                        well   is-doing

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p 126 (172)

1
Madoka:
  Okay, while I'm at it!          yoshi      tsuide       da!
                                  all-right  an-occasion  it-is

  May as well treat the           minna      matomete   ogorimashou
  entire lot of you.              everybody  in-a-lump  shall-treat

@Kyousuke:
  All right!                      yatta ne!

2
[@Kazuya pulls at his drink through a straw.]
@Kazuya:
 (What's this...?                 (nan da...

  He's doing just fine.)          aitsu     umaku  yatte-ru  ja nai ka)
                                  that-guy  well   is-doing

@Kazuya FX:                       __ ___
                    zu zu_

3
@Kazuya and @Kyousuke FX:         ______
                  bachi_

4
[While Hikaru walks away, @Kyousuke leans over past Kyouko--bumping the child
 --to whisper at Madoka.]
@Kyousuke:
  Then, I'll come here again      ja    o-MISE  owaru koro ni
  at closing time.                then  store   at-closing-time

                                  mo-- ichido  kuru  yo
                                  once-more    come

  How I'm looking forward to      TANOshimi             da  naa
  it.                             expectation/pleasure  is  (rhet)

5
[@Kyousuke and Hikaru leave.]
@Kyousuke:
  See ya.                         ja ne

6
@Kyousuke: [flashing a "V"]
  Bye, Kazuya-kun!                ja ne KAZUYA-kun!

@Kyousuke FX:                     ______
                            niyari

7
@Kazuya FX:                       _____
                         piku_

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p 127 (173)

1
[Exterior night shot of Kazuya's house.]

2
[@Kazuya lies in bed, wide awake.]
narration:
  What in the world was he        ittai nani         o   YAKUSOKU shite-ta
  promising her?                  what-in-the-world (O)  was-promising

                                  n darou
                                  (poss-explan)

3
[He visualizes @Kyousuke and Madoka together at ABCB.]

4
narration:
  Shit!  You're going             kuso--  yari -sugi  da  zo  KAZUYA!
  overboard, Kazuya!!                     overdo      is  !!

@Kazuya sit-up FX:                _____
                        gaba_

5
[He imagines @Kyousuke leaning in to kiss Madoka.]
narration:
  If this keeps up, it'll         kono mama da to
  turn outrageous!!               if-it's-a-situation-like-this

                                  tondemonai koto ni     naru!!
                                  into-outrageous-thing  turn-into

6
[@Kazuya tries to sneak out of his room, but is nabbed.]
Kazuya's mom:
  Hey!!                           kora_!!

  Where are you going at this     doko  iku no  konna JIKAN ni!
  hour of the night?!             where going   at-time-like-this

@Kazuya heartbeat FX:             _____
                          doki_



7
[She takes him by the scruff of the neck and drags him back down the hall.]
Kazuya's mom:
  Get to bed this instant!!       sassato  NEnasai!!
                                  at-once  go-to-sleep/go-to-bed

  This is no time for a           KODOMO no  okite-ru  JIKAN
  kid to be up, is it.            child  (S) be-up     time/hour

                                  ja nai desho
                                  poss-is-not

@Kazuya:
 (Damn...!!)                      (chikusho----_!!)

@Kazuya heels FX:                 ____ ____
                       zuru zuru

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p 128 (174)

1
narration:
  O-one way or another, I have    na nantoka           nukeDAsanakute wa...
  to slip out of here...             somehow-or-other  must-slip-out

door FX:                          _____
                            batan

2
@Kazuya:
 (Ah!  That's it!                 (a_  so-- da!

  Despite the fact I'm in         KAZUYA no KARADA ni   natte-mo
  Kazuya's body, my Power                's body  (IO)  even-tho-turning-into
  remains the same!)              _chikara_
                                  NOURYOKU wa   moto no   mama!)
                                  Power    (T)  origin's  unchanged-state



3
[Exterior night shot of ABCB.]
door FX:                          _____
                          karan

4
[Madoka looks up from her cleaning as @Kyousuke enters.]
door FX:                          _____
                            batan

5
@Kyousuke: [with a dark look]                                   ____
  I wonder what the heck you      konna JIKAN ni  ittai         boku ni
  have planned for me at this     at-this-hour    in-the-world  for-me
  late hour...
                                  nan no YOU             ka na...
                                  what-kind-of-business  I-wonder

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p 129 (175)

1
[Madoka portrait--a mysterious look.]

2
[She playfully touches a finger to the tip of his nose.]
Madoka:
  As if you don't know...         wakatte-ru  kuse ni...
                                  be-knowing  

3
Madoka:
  Finally, we can be alone.       yo--yaku  futari kkiri ni  nareta  wa ne
                                  finally   just-2-people    were-able-to-
                                                             become

4
@Kyousuke FX:                     _____
                           goku_

5
[Surprising him, she sets him down on a stool at the counter.]
Madoka:
  I'm not letting you go          KON'YA  wa   KAEsanai    wa yo...
  home tonight...                 tonight (T)  not-let-return

@Kyousuke FX:                     ___
                            don

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1
[Outside ABCB, @Kazuya rematerializes.]
@Kazuya FX:                       ____
                          shu_

2
[He cups a hand to his ear.]
@Kazuya:
  ?                               ?

3
@Kazuya:
  I hear something...             nani-ka    kikoeru...
                                  something  hear

4
@Kyousuke: [off]
  Ehhh?!  Do some more?!          e~~~~_   mada  yaru no~~?!
                                       !   more  doing

Madoka: [off]
  I said I'm not letting you      KON'YA  wa   KAEsanai       tte      itta
  go home tonight...              tonight (T)  not-let-return (quote)  said

                                  hazu        yo......
                                  likelihood

[He jets out about a pint of blood.]

@Kazuya nosebleed FX:             ___
                          bu_

5
@Kazuya: [aghast]
 (C-can't be...!)                 (so sonna...!)

6
[He visualizes @Kyousuke and Madoka in an ardent embrace.]
narration:
  A-am I too late...?!            o osokatta ka~~~~~~_?!

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p 131 (177)

1
@Kazuya: [bursting in]
  Hey-y-y!  Stop it!!             koora!  yamero--_!!

door FX:                          _____
                            batan

2
[@Kyousuke and Madoka look up from a textbook.]
book: [partial view]
  Life Science                    IKIMONO
                                  life/living-creature

  Senior High School...           KOUTOU GAKKOU...
                                  senior-high-school

book: [back]
   Publication             <3-kanji> SHUPPAN
                                            publication

3
Madoka: [smiling]
  Oh, Kazuya-kun.                 ara KAZUYA-kun

@Kyousuke:
  Oniicha--I mean--Kazuya!!       oni--chi...  iya...  KAZUYA!!

4
@Kazuya:
  Eh?!                            e?!

5
@Kyousuke: [approaching]
  Yeah, I'm saved.                iya--  TASUkatta  yo

6
[The guys exchange fives.]
@Kyousuke:                                         ___
  A kindergarten kid like me      YOUCHIEN JI   no ore ga   KOUKOU      no
  doesn't know how to study       kindergartner 's me  (S)  high-school 's
  for a high school test!         ______
                                  tesuto  BENKYOU  nante
                                  test    lessons  the-likes-of

                                  wakaru hazu nai        yo!
                                  not-likely-understand

@Kazuya:                          __ ______
  St-study for a test?!           te tesuto BENKYOU?!

@Kyousuke and @Kazuya hands FX:   _______
                          tatchi_

7
@Kazuya: [relieved]
 (O-ohhhh!)                       (na naan da!)
                                  ___
                           ho_

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p 132 (178)

1
@Kazuya: [wincing]
 (Th-that's right!!  Final        (so so-- ka!!  ashita kara
  exams begin tomorrow!)                         beginning-from-tomorrow
                                               ______
                                  KIMATSU      tesuto  datta  n da!)
                                  end-of-term  tests   were   (explan)

  This is no time to be           waratte-ru   BA-AI     ja nai_!
  laughing!                       be-laughing  occasion  is-not

@Kazuya FX:
                         zo_

2
[Smiling, @Kazuya turns and begins to walk back out.]
@Kazuya:
  W-wait!!                        ma mate!!
                                             ___
  I think I'd prefer to remain    yappari    ore  to--bun
  a kindergarten kid for a        after-all  I    for-the-time-being
  while longer, after all.
                                  YOUCHIEN JI       no HOU ga i--  ya
                                  kindergarten-kid  better

narration:                                             ______
  Because there are no tests      YOUCHIEN ni     wa   tesuto nanka
  in kindergarten.                in-kindergarten (T)  tests  or-such

                                  nai        mon    ne
                                  not-there  reason

@Kyousuke:
  No fair-r-r, oniichan.          zuru--i oni--chan

3
@Kyousuke:
  But...                          demo...
                                  ____      ______
  Would it be okay to take        boku ga   tesuto  KATTE ni     ukechatte
  your exams any way I please?    I    (S)  tests   as-I-please  taking

                                  i--  no?
                                  okay

  Sure I don't understand,        do--se       wakaranai       kara
  so maybe I'll just write        in-any-case  not-understand  that's-why
  gibberish.                      __________
                                  mechakucha  KAichau           kamo   yo
                                  nonsense    write-(finality)  perhaps

4
@Kyousuke: [off]
  Then you'll have tests with     soshitara  SEISEKI        WARUku
  failing marks!                  and/then   marks/results  badly

                                  nattenaku    no    wa
                                  be-a-failure (nom) (contrast)

                                  oni--chan no ho--  da  ze
                                            's way   is  !

@Kazuya: [off]
  I-I understand!                 wa wakatta yo!

5
collision FX:                     ______
                           gochin

6
narration:
  And so, we quickly returned     to yu-- wake de  o-tagai no KARADA ni
  to our own bodies, but...       for-that-reason  to-one-another's-body

                                  modotte-kita       SHIDAI      desu ga...
                                  came-and-returned  as-soon-as  are  but

Kazuya: [exiting, waving]
  Then, do your best,             ja  gambare na yo  oni--chan
  oniichan.

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1
Madoka: [pointing in the book]
  So, which one's the answer?     saate        KOTA   wa   dotchi  deshou
                                  now/well/so  answer (T)  which   poss-be

narration:
  Now that I finally had a        sekkaku     AYUKAWA to
  night alone with Ayukawa...     especially  with-Ayukawa

                                  futari kkiri  no YORU   na no ni...
                                  just-2-people 's night     even-though

Kyousuke: [hand on chin]
  Hmmm.  This one, I guess.       u--n  kore        ka na
                                        this-(one)  I-wonder

  No, wait.  Maybe this one...    iya  mate yo    kotchi    ka mo...
                                       wait       this-way  perhaps

2
Kyousuke: [pointing]
  I see.  It's this one!!         wakatta     kotchi    da!!
                                  understood  this-way  it-is

Madoka: [smiling]
  Bingo!!                         Atari!!

narration:
  How pitiful it is to be         majime ni           BENKYOU shite-ru
  studying so hard!               earnestly/steadily  be-studying

                                  nante nasakenai!
                                  how!  miserable/pitiful/wretched

3
Madoka:
  That's basically it.            sono YOURYOU yo            nanigoto mo  ne
                                  that gist/outline/summary  everything

Kyousuke: [smiling]
  Eh?                             e?

4
Madoka:                           ______
  The exam questions weren't      tesuto no MONDAI     bakari  ja nakute...
  the only...                     test   's questions  only    not-being

5
[Kyousuke leans toward her expectantly, and she looks down at the book.]
Madoka:
  Here.  The next problem is?     hai    TSUGI no  MONDAI    wa?
                                         next      questions (T)

Kyousuke:
  Eh?                             e?

narration:
  But...                          da kedo...

  On the day when I can           itsu no HI ni       ka   sono NANMON ni
  answer that difficult           on-what-time's-day  (?)  to-that-difficult-
  problem, then Ayukawa...                                 problem

                                  KOTA    ga   DAsetara
                                  answers (S)  when-able-to-put-out

                                  sono TOKI  AYUKAWA wa......
                                  that-time          (T)

5 (inset)
[As Kazuya slips into his house he hears...]
Kazuya's mom: [off]
  I wonder where that kid's       ano KO      doko ni   tta  no  kashira...
  gone to...?                     that-child  to-where  went     I-wonder

Kazuya:
  Oh no!                          ikene!

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