Kimagure Orange Road
"The Witness Akane!"
Volume 8, Story 6
WB Volume 5, Story 4
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi

Translation by : Hitoshi Doi (18 Feb 1992)
Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
                                 Craig Nishida
                                 Spencer Hastings
                                 Thomas Wyatt
                                 Jerry Lee

Last revision : 07-17-95

Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:
     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu

NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
      extras to those of you not having them.
      Example: The subtitles on page 71 (117) are only in the WBs!
NOTE: (CN)  This is a revision of the existing script by Hitoshi Doi.  The
      existing script by Patrick Yip is evidently done from an unauthorized
      Chinese translation.  It contains many major and minor deviations from
      the Japanese and so was not used in preparation of this script.
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p 71 (117)--TITLE PAGE

[Four half-portraits of Akane, shoulders bare, with a hibiscus flower in her
 hair.  The first three portraits are identical--her eyes are closed.  In the
 fourth, she opens her left eye.]

MAIN TITLE (at top)
  The Witness Akane!              MOKUGEKISHA      -      akane!
                                  a-witness/an-eyewitness

SUB-TITLE (at bottom)                                                _____
  Faintly Stirring Awake--        honoka ni  mezamete     watashi no haato!
  My Heart!                       dimly/     waking-up/   my-heart
                                  faintly    being-awakened

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p 72 (118)

1
[View across a white sandy beach.]
narration:
  A deserted beach.               dare-mo  inai           UMI
                                  nobody   is--here  sea/ocean

2
[Akane portrait.]
Akane:
  Madoka-chan.                    madoka-chan

waves FX: [off]                   __ __ __
                  za za za...

3
[Akane's pov as Madoka turns to look.  Her hair flows in the breeze.]
narration:
  I wanted to confirm our         futari   no AI    o   TASHIkametaku tte
  love...                         2-people 's love (O)  wanted-to-make-sure-of

4
[Pov shifts to show the two standing side-by-side on the beach, both in
 bikinis.]
Akane:
  You're...  The one I...         atashi...  anata no koto
                                  I          about-you

narration:
  In the eyes of the sea and      SORA mo  UMI mo   mitsumeru  NAKA de
  the sky...                      sky  and sea and  gaze-at    within

waves FX: [off]                   __ __ __
                  za za za...

5
[Akane moves to embrace her.  Madoka blushes.]
Akane:
  Madoka-chan!                    madoka-chan

narration:
  Because I love you.             SUki na  n da      mono
                                  like     (explan)  reason

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p 73 (119)

1
[Back to reality...  Kyousuke wakes up and blushes to find Akane embracing
 him.  Akane's eyes open and they stare at each other.]
Akane and Kyousuke:
  ..........                      ..........

2
Kyousuke: [blushing and sweating]           ___
  A-Akane!  We're cousins!        a akane_  ore-tachi wa   itoko DOUSHI
                                         !  we        (T)  fellow-cousins

                                  da   zo
                                  are  !!

Kyousuke FX:
                      suza_

Akane: [eyes half-open]
  Oh...  It's Kyousuke...         nan da...  KYOUSUKE ka

3
[Akane collapses back on her bed, sound asleep.]
Akane:                                           __________
  Madoka-cha-a-an.  

Akane FX:                         _____
                   goron

4
Kyousuke:
 (Ahh, what a shock.  That        (a--  bikkuri shita  ttaku   akane no yatsu
  Akane...                              was-surprised  really  that-akane

  Coming at me half-asleep,       AYUKAWA to    machigatte  nebokete
  thinking I was Ayukawa...)      with-Ayukawa  by-mistake  being-half-asleep

                                  sematte-kuru        nante...)
                                  come-and-draw-near  the-likes-of

5
[He looks out the window at the sunny day.]
Kyousuke:
  Thanks to her, now I'm wide     okage de  ME ga samechatta
  awake.                          due-to    became-awake-(finality/regret)

6
[Walking outside, he smiles and stretches.]
Kyousuke:
  Mmm, what a refreshing          u--mu  sugasugashii      ASA!
  morning!                               refreshing/fresh  morning

birds FX:                         ___ ___ ___
                         chi chi chi...

narration:
  The Okinawa that I happened     hyonna koto de kuru  wa   me ni natta
  to come to unexpectedly...      come-by-unexpectedly (T)  became-pov?

                                  OKINAWA mo
                                          too

  Today is the last day!          KYOU  wa   SAIGO no HI!
                                  today (T)  last-day

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p 74 (120)

1
[Kyousuke's pov of Madoka, in light dress and flat sandals, turning with a
 smile.]
Madoka:
  Oh, you're up early!            ara  HAYAi no ne!

2
[He idly flips a fruit in one hand.]
Kyousuke:
  G-good morning...               o ohayo...

  Akane...  Woke me up.           akane ni...   okosarechatte
                                  by-Akane      being-awakened-(finality)

3
[A view out across the beach to the ocean and horizon.]

4
[Overhead pov of the two, standing and talking.  In the foreground, hanging
 from a branch, is a paper wasp nest.]
Madoka:                           ___
  Tee!  Akane-san did that?!      pu_  akane-san ga?!

Kyousuke: [embarrassed]
  It's no laughing matter.        waraigoto ja nai yo

  It seems she's taken a          aitsu      HONKI de   AYUKAWA no koto
  serious liking to you.          that-girl  seriously  about-you

                                  KI ni itte-ru             mitai na  n da
                                  be-liking/taking-fancy-to seems     (explan)

5
Kyousuke: [munching on the fruit]
  But you're an early-riser,      demo  AYUKAWA  koso    HAYAoki       da  ne
  aren't you.                     but            indeed  early-rising  are

writing at bottom of page:
  Japan Music Copyright           NIHON  ONGAKU  CHOSAKUKEN  KYOUKAI
  Association (issued from)       Japan  music   copyright   association
  Permit Number 9152112-101
                                  (DE)     KYODAKU  BANGOU  DAI-9152112-101
                                   origin  permit   number  

                                  -GOU
                                   

--eight pages further down, in
 panel 128-7.  Not much of a song...>

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p 75 (121)

1
Madoka:
  The sound of the waves woke     NAMI no OTO    de
  me up...                        wave 's sound  on-account-of

                                  ME ga samechatta......
                                  became-awake-(finality/regret)

2
[With a concerned look, she touches his cheek.]
Madoka:                           ___
  Ah!                             ha_

3
Madoka:
  You're hurt?  From that         kega?   kono aida no......
  time...                         wound   recent

Kyousuke: [pointing]
  Oh, this?                       a kore?

4
Kyousuke:                               ___________
  Yeah.  I scratched it when      un    pu--rusaido kara  okkochita TOKI ni
  I fell from the side of               from-poolside     when-fell
  the pool.
                                  surimuichatte
                                  grazing/abrading-(finality/regret)

inset Kyousuke FX:                ____
                         byu_

5
[His pov of her.  She looks at him...]

6
[...then turns around to gaze out across the sea, hands clasped behind her
 back.]
Madoka:
  You're a man after all,         KASUGA-kun tte yappari    OTOKO no KO  ne!
  hmm, Kasuga-kun!                           (T) after-all  man

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p 76 (122)

1
[She tosses her hair back.]

2
Madoka:
  Back then...                    ano  TOKI......
                                  that time

3
[Blushing and smiling softly, she turns to look at him.]
Madoka:
  You made me very happy.         tottemo    ureshikatta
                                  immensely  was-happy

waves FX: [off]                   __ __ __
                  za za za...

4
[Akane looks up from bed to see that Kyousuke isn't around.]
Akane:
  Huh?  Kyousuke.                 are KYOUSUKE

5
[She opens the door to go outside...]
door FX:                          _____
                           gacha

6
[...but stops, blushing, as she sees something off-panel.]
Akane:
  !                               !

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p 77 (123)

1
[She's stunned to see Madoka being held in Kyousuke's arms.]

2
[Back inside the room, she shuts the door.]
Akane:
  H-hey, what was that?!          chi chotto nani yo  IMA no!
                                             what     now

Akane heartbeat FX:               ____ ____ ____
               doki doki doki

door FX:                          _____
                            batan

3
[The doorknob rattles behind her...]
Akane:                            ___
  Ah!                             ha_

door FX:                          _____ _____
                     kacha kacha

4
[...and Kyousuke enters.  Akane is lying on a bed, feigning sleep.]
door FX:                          _____
                            batan

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p 78 (124)

1
Akane: [rubbing her eyes]
  Oh...  Good morning,            ara...  ohayou KYOUSUKE
  Kyousuke.

Kyousuke:                                      ___    _____
  Why are you sleeping on my      omae  nande  ore no beddo de  nete-ru
  bed?                            you   why    on-my-bed        are-sleeping

                                  n da?
                                  (explan)

2
Kyousuke:                         __________
  You toss around so much in      muchakucha
  your sleep.                     pell-mell/in-disorder

                                  nezo-- no WARUi yatsu     da  naa
                                  fellow-who-tosses-about-  are
                                  in-(her)-sleep

Akane: [embarrassed]
  Oh, no.                         ikene

3
Akane:
 (But...                          (demo...

  What were Madoka-chan and       madoka-chan to  KYOUSUKE ga   nante...
  Kyousuke...?                                and          (S)  the-likes-of

  I-it can't be.)                 ma masaka ne)

Akane contemplation FX:
                          ji~~_

4
Kyousuke:
  What?!                          nan da yo!

[Akane finds the sky an interesting place to stare at.]

Akane:
  Wowww!  The weather's great!    wa----_  i--   o-TENKI!
                                        !  nice  weather

5
[Kyousuke's pov of the fabulous babes on the beach in Okinawa.]
narration:
  So summer enters the stage      to yu-- wake de  OKINAWA wa   hitoASHI
  a bit sooner in Okinawa!!       for-that-reason          (T)  a-step

                                  HAYAi  NATSU   HOMBAN!!
                                  soon   summer  acting-before-the-audience

narration:
  It's the season when the        ONNA no KO-tachi ga   mabushiku
  girls look dazzling!            girls            (S)  dazzling/blinding
                                                    ________
                                  mieru             shi--zun  desu!
                                  look/seem/appear  season    it-is

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p 79 (125)

1
[Hikaru and Madoka stand in thigh-deep water and don snorkles, goggles and
 scuba tanks.]
narration:
  Ayukawa and Hikaru-chan are     AYUKAWA to  hikaru-chan wa
  going scuba-diving!                     and             (T)
                                  _________   ________
                                  sukyu--ba - daibingu!
                                  scuba-diving

2
[Akane zooms about on her board.]
narration:                                 _____   _______
  Akane went windsurfing!         akane wa uindo - sa--fin ni!

3
[A view of the blazing sun overhead.]

4
[Kyousuke flounders in a weak imitation of a swimmer.  His splashes annoy
 two cute girls standing nearby in about 2-foot-deep water.]
narration:
  As for me, I...                 ore wa   to ieba......
                                  I   (T)  speaking-of

Kyousuke FX:                      _____ _____
                   basha basha

Kyousuke:
  Can't swim after all...         yappari    oyogenai yo~~~~~~
                                  after-all  not-able-to-swim

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p 80 (126)

1
[Kyousuke, with only his head visible above the water, turns at the sound
 of...]
girl: [off]
  Hey, outta the way!  Get        chotto doite doite!
  outta the way!

2
[He looks up in horror to see a windsurfer bearing down on him.]
wind-surfing board FX:            __ __ __
            za za za

Kyousuke:
  OOO-WAHHH!                      uwa~~~~_

3
collision FX:                     ___ _____
                    do_ pa~~n

4
[Kyousuke ends up on his back in about 1-foot-deep water.  The girl lands
 on top of him.  He finds a shapely rear end, in a polka-dot bikini bottom,
 hovering right in front of his nose.]
Kyousuke:
  Ouch.                           atetetetete

5
[He opens his eyes for a sudden surprise.]
Kyousuke:                         _____
  "DOKIN" 

6
girl:
  I-I'm sorry-y-y.                go gomennasa~~i

narration:
  I've hit a jackpot!             kore       wa   atari -DOKU!
                                  this-(one) (T)  hit    profit/benefit

Kyousuke: [wide smile]
  N-no.  Not at all...            i ie  do-- itashimashite...

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p 81 (127)

1
Kyousuke:
  A-Akane!!                       a akane!!

Akane:
  Kyousuke!!                      KYOUSUKE!!

2
[They scream in each other's faces.]
Kyousuke:
  You suck!!                      hetakuso!!

Akane:
  It's because you're goofing     oyoge mo shinai  no ni
  off around here, even though    not-swim         even-though
  you can't swim!!                                      ________
                                  konna tokoro de       urochoro shite-ru
                                  at-a-place-like-this  are-loitering

                                  kara        yo!!
                                  that's-why

3
[Akane gets a close look at Kyousuke's neck--looks like a hickey.]
Akane:                            ___
  AH!                             ha_

4
[Full portraits--Madoka blushes to find herself being trailed by a smiling
 Akane.  This is not really a panel--just extra art thrown in.]

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p 82 (128)

1
[Akane stares in surprise.]
narration:                        __ ____ ______
  H-hickey?!                      ki kisu ma--ku?!
                                     kiss mark

2
[Back on shore, Akane stands and watches Kyousuke.]
Akane:
  I'm sure that was...            TASHIka ni  are...
                                  certainly   that-(one)

3
Akane heartbeat FX:               ____ ____
                     doki doki

Akane:                             ____ ______
 (A hickey!!)                     (kisu ma--ku yo ne!!)

4
[With a wide grin, she slaps him on the back, sending him staggering.]
Akane:
  So that's it.                   so-- ka  so-- ka

  Good for you, Kyousuke!!        dekashita zo KYOUSUKE!!

Akane backslap FX:                _______
                         bita--n

Kyousuke:
  OUCH!                           ite~~!

5
Kyousuke:
  Wh-what?!!                      na nan da yo~~!!

Akane:                                                               ______
  Don't play innocent, you        shirabakkurechatte            kono sukebe!!
  lech!!                          feigning-ignorance-(finality) this lech

6
Akane: [smiling]
  But...                          demo...

  That means it was worth         kore de    atashi ga   KUROU shite
  taking the trouble to bring     with-this  I      (S)  working-hard/worrying-
  you to Okinawa.                                        about/taking-pains/
                                                         suffering-troubles

                                  anta o   OKINAWA ni  tsurete-kita
                                  you (O)  to-Okinawa  brought-(you-with-me)

                                  kai ga atta             to yu-- mono  ne
                                  was-worthwhile-(doing)  means-that

7
[She turns and walks away.]
Akane: [singing]
  Yeah, yeah.                     un un 

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p 83 (129)

1
[Akane takes a shower.]
shower FX:                        _______
                       za----_

2
Akane: [toweling her hair]
 (But...                          (shikashi...

  For someone who's always so     KYOUSUKE no yatsu  fudan          wa
  spaced-out, he's surprisingly   that-Kyousuke      always/usually (T)
  quick at those things.)         _________
                                  poke--tto shite-ru          kuse ni
                                                    although
                                  look-blank/be-absentminded

                                  a-- yu-- koto ni naru to
                                  when-become-that-kind-of-thing

                                  IGAI NA ni             TE ga HAYAi  n da na)
                                  unexpected/surprising  quick-hand   (explan)

Akane FX:
                       fuki fuki

3
[Outside, Akane runs into Madoka and Hikaru.]
Hikaru:
  Oh, it's Akane-san.             ara akane-san

Akane:
  Oh!                             a!

4
Hikaru: [beaming]                 ________
  Diving is a lot of fun,         daibingu tte  kekko-- omoshiroi
  isn't it.                       diving   (T)  quite   delightful/amusing

                                  na  n desu    ne
                                  is  (explan)  (rhet)

  But now that I've been in       demo  ASA kara      zutto
  the water all day since this    but   from-morning  all-the-time
  morning, I've gotten all
  wrinkly.                        MIZU no NAKA ni hairippa na shi de
                                  gone-into-the-water             being

                                  mo--  fuyakechai so--
                                  now   swell-up

5
[Akane portrait--surprise.]
narration:
  All morning?!                   ASA kara zutto?!

6
Hikaru: [smiling]
  Akane-san, were you and         akane-san  SEMPAI  GENKI ni shite-mashita?
  Sempai having fun?                                 in-spirits/pep
                                                              were-doing

narration:
  Come to think of it...          so-- ieba...

  Hikaru-chan and Madoka-chan     hikaru-chan-tachi        KYOU   ICHINICHI
  weren't with Kyousuke today!                (and-assoc)  today  one-day

                                  KYOUSUKE to ISSHO   ja nakatta  n da  wa!
                                  together-with-Kyou  were-not   (explan)

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p 84 (130)

1
[She thinks, furiously.]
Akane:                                                     ____ ______
 (That means that hickey...!!)    (to yu-- koto wa   ano   kisu ma--ku!!)
                                   that-means        that  kiss-mark

2
[With a glare, she looks around at the multitude of young girls present.]
narration:
  Who on earth did Kyousuke       KYOUSUKE no yatsu  ittai         DARE to...?!
  do it with...?!                 that-Kyousuke      in-the-world  with-who

Akane:                                 ______
 (That lech may be a fast         (ano sukebe OTOKO  TE ga HAYAi ni mo
  operator, but he's gone          that-lech  guy    by-quick-hands too
  too far!!)
                                  hodo ga aru!!)
                                  too-far

3
Akane:                                                      _____
 (No matter what anyone says,     (do...  ittatte       ano okute OTOKO ni
  that late-blooming guy would            even-tho-say  by-that-late-crop-guy
  never be able to pick up any                          
  girls!)                         _____
                                  nampa          nante         dekiru
                                  skirt-chasing  the-likes-of  able-to-do

                                  KAISHOU mo nai  yo ne!)
                                  also-incapable

4
[Akane turns to look at Madoka...]
Akane:
  That means...                   to yu-- koto wa...

Akane contemplation FX:
                           ji----

5
[...and, blushing, recalls what she saw that morning.]
narration:
  S-so, it was that time          ji ja    yappari    ano TOKI   no?!
  after all?!                              after-all  that-time

6
[Akane's pov of the beautiful and tanned Madoka.]

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p 85 (131)

1
[Distraught, Akane looks down at her palms.]
Akane:
  I-it's a lie!!                  u uso!!

  I don't want to believe it...   SHINjitakunai...

Madoka: [turning to look]
  Huh?                            e?

2
[Surprising the heck out of Madoka, Hikaru and two passing guys, Akane leaps
 forward to clasp the hands of Madoka.]
Akane: [shaking her head]
  N-no!  No, no!!                 da dame yo  dame dame!!

  You're all mine, Madoka-chan!   madoka-chan wa   atashi dake  no    mono yo!
                                              (T)  only-me      (nom) person

Akane FX:
                           shikka

[Pairs of the symbol for "female" do naughty things to each other above their
 heads.]

3
[Akane races down the path between the bungalows.]
narration:
  What the heck is that           KYOUSUKE no yatsu  ittai nani         o
  Kyousuke thinking about?!!      that-Kyousuke      what-in-the-world (O)

                                  KANGAete-iru       n da!!
                                  be-thinking-about  (explan)

4
[Akane's pov as she runs.]
narration:
  But...                          demo...

  It's not like I have any        SHOUKO ga  aru   wake ja nai
  proof, so it'd look odd to      proof  (S) have  it's-not-the-case
  ask him point-blank...
                                  kara          CHOKUSETSU  TOi
                                  that's-why    direct      a-question

                                  tadasu no mo   okashii         shi...
                                  inquiring too  odd/suspicious  and-besides

5
Akane: [flash thought]
 (If there's a chance, I hope     (dekiru koto nara  chigatte-te hoshii
  I'm wrong.                       if-possible       want-to-be-wrong

  I hope it's some mistake!!)     nani-ka no machigai  de atte hoshii!!)
                                  some    's mistake   want-to-be

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p 86 (132)

1
Akane: [running]
 (But if it's true...)            (demo  moshi  HONTOU  dattara...)
                                   but   if     true    if-it-is

Akane:
 (For Hikaru-chan's sake as       (hikaru-chan no tame ni mo   atashi
  well, I won't let him get        for-Hikaru's-sake      too  I
  away with it!!)
                                  yurusanai!!)
                                  not-allow/forgive

2
[A girl calls out to Kyousuke, and he turns.  We know it's Akane taking the
 disguise of Madoka because Akane hasn't taken the trouble to change the look
 of her shirt or pants.]
@Madoka:
  Kasuga-kun.                     KASUGA-kun

3
Kyousuke:
  H-hi.                           ya yaa

4
@Madoka:
  Say...  About this morning...   nee...  KESA no koto        da     kedo...
                                  say     about-this-morning  it-is  but

5
[Kyousuke is taken aback and he blushes deeply.]

6
Kyousuke:
  Eh?!                            e_?

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p 87 (133)

1
@Madoka:
  !                               !

2
[She turns away.]
@Madoka:
  Are you going to make a girl    ONNA no KUCHI kara  iwaseru   KI?
  say it out loud?                from-girl's-mouth   make-say  intention

3
[Kyousuke watches her, still blushing.]

4
[She leans in close.]
@Madoka:
  Hey...  Let's pick up where     nee...  ASA     no tsuzuki      yarimasho
  we left off this morning.       say     morning 's continuation shall-do

5
Kyousuke:
 "P-pick up where we..."          tsu...tsuzuki tte......

Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            ____
                           doki

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p 88 (134)

1
[Looking down, Kyousuke gets a good look at her bustline.]
@Madoka:
  Come on.                        nee

2
Kyousuke: [blushing]
 (Th-these breasts are...         (ko...kono MUNE wa

  It's not Ayukawa!               AYUKAWA ja nai zo

  *She's much bigger!*            motto      OUkii      mon   na--!
                                  much-more  big/large  thing
                                  _______
  Aha, so this is Akane.          haha--n  sate    wa   akane no yatsu  da  na
                                           so/well (T)  that-Akane      it-is

  What the heck is she trying     ittai         do-- yu-- tsumori
  to pull?)                       in-the-world  what-kind-of-intention

                                  na  n da)
                                  is  (explan)

3
[He claps a hand to the hickey on his neck.]
Kyousuke:
  !                               !

4
[Blushing, his eyes goggle.  @Madoka looks back quietly.]
Kyousuke:
 (Maybe I'm the one that          (hyotto shite  akane no yatsu
  Akane...)                        maybe         that-Akane
                                  ___
                                  ore no koto...)
                                  about-me

5
[Decisively, he clasps her by a hand.  @Madoka blushes.]
Kyousuke:
  Okay!                           ii yo

  Let's pick up where we left     tsuzuki       o   yarimashou
  off.                            continuation (O)  shall-do

Kyousuke:
 (Fine!  If that's what she       (yoshi_  sore        nara
  wants, I'm game!!)                       that-(one)  if-it-is

                                  AITE       o   shite-yarou!!)
                                  companion (O)  shall-do-(for-her)

6
@Madoka:
  !!                              !!

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p 89 (135)

1
[His pov of Akane as she returns to her natural form.  She points an accusing
 finger at him.]
Akane:
  Kyousuke!  So that's            KYOUSUKE!  yappari    KESA          no   wa
  what you were doing this                   after-all  this-morning (nom) (T)
  morning!!
                                  so-- yu-- koto      na no ne!!
                                  that-kind-of-thing

Akane transformation FX:          ___
                          fu_

2
[Kyousuke portrait--wide-eyed surprise.]

3
[She grabs him by the shirt and shouts in his face.]
Akane:
  What the heck are you           ittai         do-- yu-- tsumori       na no?
  trying to pull?                 in-the-world  what-kind-of-intention

  When you have someone like      hikaru-chan  to yu--  mono   ga
  Hikaru-chan!                                 that     person (S)

                                  ari   nagara
                                  have  though

Kyousuke: [wincing, shouting]
  That was...!!                   are        wa   ne~~~~~~_!!
                                  that-(one) (T)

4
[Quietly, he takes Akane by the shoulders...]
Kyousuke:
  Stand here.                     koko ni        TAtte
                                  at-this-place  standing-up

Akane:
 (Oh, this is where Kyousuke      (a  koko  TASHIka  ASA
  and Madoka-chan were this           here  certain  morning
  morning.)
                                  KYOUSUKE-tachi       ga   ita
                                           (and-assoc) (S)  were-here

                                  TOKORO  da  wa)
                                  place   is

5
[He bends down to pick up a rock.]
Kyousuke:                         _______
  I threw away the skin of        papaiya no TAbekasu o   NAgesuteta
  a papaya...                     papaya  's rind    (O)  threw-away

                                  n da      kedo
                                  (explan)  but

6
[Looking at Akane, he tosses the rock over his shoulder.]
Kyousuke:
  But I had no idea there         konna mono        ga   atta     nante
  was something like this         a-thing-like-this (S)  existed  the-likes-of
  there.
                                  KI ga tsukanakutte
                                  not-becoming-aware-of

Kyousuke FX:                      ___
                            poi

7
[Angry wasps buzz down and Akane leaps into Kyousuke's arms.  Kyousuke bears
 it all patiently.]
wasps FX:                         ______
                            bua~~n

Akane:
  KYAA!                           kyaa

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p 90 (136)

1
[Akane realizes the position she's in...]
Akane:
  OH.                             a

2
[...and looks up nervously at him...]
Kyousuke:
  Do you understand?              wakatta?

  It was like this.               ko-- yu-- koto na no

Akane:
  Ohhh.                           naan da

3
[...until she sees the hickey on his neck again.]
Akane:                            ___
  Ah!                             ha_

4
[She yells in his face.  Each points to the other.]
Akane:                                         ____ ______
  B-but what about this hickey?   de demo sono kisu ma--ku wa  nan  na no yo?!
                                     but  that-kiss-mark   (T) what is

Kyousuke:
  It was you!  You!!              omae da yo  omae!!

5
[He points at her.]
Akane:
  What?                           e?

6
Kyousuke: [glaring]
  Who was the one that was        nebokete        AYUKAWA to machigatte
  half-asleep and hugged me       being-half-     mistaking-for-Ayukawa-(and)
  thinking I was Ayukawa?         asleep-(and)

                                  DAkitsuite-kita       no    wa
                                  came-and-embraced-   (nom) (contrast)
                                  affectionately

                                  donata  deshita kke?
                                  who     was     (?)

Akane: [horrified]
  AH!!                            a!!

7
[He claps a hand to his forehead.]
Kyousuke:                                     ______
 (It was a pretty nice mood,      (kekkou  ii mu--do  datta  no ni
  but those wasps ruined           quite   nice-mood  was    even-though
  it...                               _____
                                  ano hachi   no sei   de
                                  those-wasps 's fault on-account-of

                                  buchikowashi ni natchatte           sa--
                                  becoming-spoiled/ruined-(finality/regret)

  It (i.e., the mood) was         fundari        kettari        da yo
  stepped on and kicked.          step-on-(and)  kick-at-(and)  is

  Jeez...)                        mattaku...)

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p 91 (137)

1
[Madoka and a cheerful Hikaru come upon Kyousuke from behind.  Kyousuke turns
 at the sound of...]
Hikaru:
  SEMPA-A-AI!                     sempa--i!

2
[He turns back to Akane.]
Kyousuke:
  Akane-kun, don't carry          akane-kun  osekkai  mo
  your meddling too far!                     meddling too

                                  hodohodo ni         ne_!
                                  
                                   know-how-far-to-go
                                                ____ ______
  Otherwise, I'll tell            ja nakya      kisu ma--ku no koto
  Hikaru-chan about the           cause-if-not  about-kiss-mark
  hickey.                                         ____
                                  hikaru-chan ni  barashichau            yo
                                  to-Hikaru       spill-secret-(finality)

Akane: [wide-eyed, blushing]
  I-I understand!                 wa wakatta wa yo--_!

3
[Night view of a passenger jet taking off.]
narration:
  With that, this affair was      to yu-- wake de  IKKEN         RAKUCHAKU!
  settled!                        for-that-reason  affair/matter settled

  And, so long, Okinawa!!         soshite   saraba    OKINAWA!!
                                  and/then  

4
[Inside, the four sit in the middle seats of the jumbo jet.  Akane on the
 left, then Kyousuke, Hikaru and Madoka.  Akane and Kyousuke chat, while
 Hikaru puts on her headphones and says something to Madoka, who holds a
 magazine.]
narration:                              ____ ______
  But if the hickey had           demo  kisu ma--ku ga   HONTOU ni
  really been from Ayukawa,       but   kiss-mark   (S)  really
  how ...*
                                  AYUKAWA no     dattara  donna ni...
                                          (nom)  if-was   how-much

 Right, everyone?                 ne-- mina-san?

<*Translation note (CN):  He leaves most of the line unsaid.  Namely, "...how
 good/nice would it have felt?">

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