Kimagure Orange Road
"But It's a Paradise!"
Volume 8, Story 4
WB Volume 5, Story 2
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Spencer Hastings
Thomas Wyatt
Jerry Lee
Scott Henry
Ka-Ping Yee
George Robbert
Last revision : 07-17-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 27 (73) are only in the WBs!
NOTE: The existent script by Patrick Yip is evidently done from an
unauthorized Chinese translation. It contains many major and minor
deviations from the Japanese and so was not used in preparation of
this script.
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p 27 (73)--TITLE PAGE
[Madoka slumbers in a hammock chair, dressed in shorts and sleeveless shirt.]
MAIN TITLE (at top) _________
But It's a Paradise! datte paradaisu!
but paradise
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
Even Her Secret Sleeping HIMITSU no NEGAO mo SUZUshige na
Face Is Refreshing. secret/private/ one's-sleeping-face
confidential too cool/refreshing
__________
If You Could Awaken This FUSHIGI NATSU IRO shinderera
Mysterious Summer-Tinged mystery summer-colored Cinderella
Cinderella with a Dream- _____
Colored Kiss... YUME IRO kissu de Okosetara...
by-dream-colored-kiss if-able-to-wake-up
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p 28 (74)
1
[A rainy day outside school as classes let out...]
book: _________
Margaret maguritto GA/E/KAKU
margaret picture/drawing/sketch
2
[Outside, a smiling Madoka catches up to a despondent Hikaru. BTW, Madoka
looks especially great in this panel. Nice action pose.]
Madoka:
Hikaru! hikaru!
3
Hikaru:
Madoka-san... madoka-san...
4
Madoka:
You're depressed. GENKI nai no ne
low-spirited/depressed
______
You haven't shown your face SAIKIN uchi no kurasu ni
around my class lately... lately in-my-class
What's the matter?
KAO misenai kedo do-- shita no?
not-shown-face but what's-the-matter
Hikaru: [looking at the ground]
I've lost confidence in atashi JISHIN nakushichatta n desu
myself. I self-confidence (explan)
lost-(finality/regret)
5
Hikaru:
I wonder if Sempai really SEMPAI HONTOU ni atashi no koto
likes me... really about-me
SUki na no kashira...
liking I-wonder
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p 29 (75)
1
[Panels 1-4, and 6 are double-bordered, denoting the flashback sequence.
Here, Kyousuke answers the door to find a beaming Hikaru waiting there.]
narration:
You see, I went over to jitsu wa kono aida SEMPAI no IE ni
play at Sempai's place the actually the-other-day at-Sempai's-house
other day.
ASObi ni itta n desu
went-to-play (explan)
2
[They sit on the couch and chat. Kyousuke holds the "A Hard Day's Night" LP.
Yes, vinyl!!]
narration:
There just happened to be cho--do DARE-mo inaku tte
no one around, and it was just-like nobody -being-there
just us two.
futari kkiri
2-people only
______
The mood was fantastic. tottemo ii mu--do datta n desu
immensely nice mood was (explan)
3
[Hikaru gazes into his eyes, and edges closer.]
narration:
When suddenly, our futo futari no KAIWA ga
conversation stopped. suddenly 2-people's conversation (S)
togireta TOKI
was-interrupted/broke time
Hikaru:
Sempai... What are you SEMPAI... IMA nani o KANGAete-imasu?
thinking about right now? now what (O) be-thinking
Hikaru edge-closer FX: ___ ___ ___
tsu tsu tsu
4
narration:
And then, he looked me soshitara SEMPAI jitto
straight in the eye... then intently/fixedly
atashi no koto mite
at-me looking
Kyousuke:
Same as you... hikaru-chan to onaji koto sa
with-Hikaru same-thing
5
[Back in real time, Madoka looks back at Hikaru sharply.]
6
[Back to the story. Kyousuke smiles and offers up a cup of noodles. Hikaru's
stare grows dark.]
Kyousuke:
You're hungry, aren't you. onaka hetta n desho
insides decreased (poss-explan)
_____ _______
I got some great Cup Ramen KONDO oishii kappu ra--men
this time. now/this-time tasty cup-ramen
mitsuketa n da
found-out/discovered/noticed (explan)
Want some? TAberu?
eat
cup: ________
noodles <2-kanji> IRI nu--doru
roast noodles
7
[In the background, we see Hikaru race out the door, Kyousuke vainly in
pursuit. In the foreground, the unhappy Hikaru continues to talk with
Madoka.]
narration:
And so... sore de...
I lost it... atashi ATAMA ni kichatte...
I getting-on-one's-nerves-
(finality/regret)
Hikaru: ______
Sempai, you idiot... sempai no baka--
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p 30 (76)
1
Hikaru:
But when I calmed down and da kedo REISEI ni natte
thought about it, I realized but becoming-calm/cool/composed
I'd been a little quick-
tempered... KANGAeru to atashi chotto
when-think-about I a-bit
sekkachi datta...
was-hasty/impetuous/quick-tempered
So I thought I'd try to de NAKAnaori shiyo--
patch things up, but I'm so shall-reconcile/patch-up
much too ashamed to face
him... to omotte-ta n desu kedo
was-thinking-that (explan) but
SEMPAI ni awasu KAO ga naku tte..
(IO) too-much-ashamed-to-see
2
Hikaru:
And it seems Sempai is SEMPAI mo nan-da-ka atashi no koto
avoiding me for some too for-some-reason about-me
reason...
sakete-ru mitai de...
is-avoiding seeming
Now I've lost all atashi mou sukkari JISHIN
confidence in myself... I now all/entirely self-confidence
nakushichatta...
lost-(finality/regret)
3
[Madoka portrait--she looks thoughtful.]
4
Madoka: [off]
Hikaru! hikaru!
[Surprised, Hikaru looks up.]
5
Madoka: [smiling] _______
I'm going to Okinawa atashi ashita kara okinawa ni iku n da
tomorrow. I from-tomorrow go-to-Okinawa
Hikaru: [wide-eyed] _______
Okinawa? okinawa?
6
Madoka:
It's a 4-day exam break... SHIKEN YASUmi de 4 RENKYUU
in-exam-break 4-consecutive-holidays
da shi ne
are and-besides
_________ ________
I think I'll take the kono KIKAI ni sukyu--ba - daibingu no
opportunity to get a in-this-chance scuba-diving 's
scuba-diving license. ________
raisensu toro-- to omotte
license shall-get thinking-that
7
Madoka:
How'd you like to come too? doo anata mo ikanai?
how you too not-go
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p 31 (77)
1
[Hikaru thinks about it.]
2
Hikaru: [brightly]
Okay! hai!
3
[Exterior shot of a travel agency office. It continues to rain.]
sign: [horizontal, large] ___________
New Japan Tourist SHIN NIHON tsu--risuto
new Japan tourist
sign: [vertical, top] ____
..ist ...suto
sign: [vertical, middle]
New Japan Travel SHIN NIHON KOUTSUU
new Japan transportation/travel
sign: [vertical, bottom] ___
L eru <3-tiny-kanji>
___ ______
L Card eru ka--do
4
[Madoka and Hikaru walk in. Did I mention that Madoka has these cute little
rainboots on? Err... Anyway, a familiar schoolgirl is already being helped
at the counter.]
lady travel agent: __________
This is that pamphlet. kore ga sono panfuretto
this-(one) (S) that-pamphlet
de gozaimasu
exists/is-there
5
[Akane heads toward the door, reading the pamphlet.]
Akane: [talking to herself]
Now, the question is, how ato wa do-- yatte OYA o
do I persuade my parents...? the-rest (T) how doing parents (O)
SETTOKU suru ka da kedo...
persuade (muse) is but
They'd certainly object to ONNA no KO no hitori TABI nante
a girl traveling alone... girl alone travel or-such
ZETTAI HANTAI suru daro-- naa
absoluteness poss-oppose/object-to
Akane FX: __________
butsubutsu
poster: [left] ______
Canada kanada
poster: [right, partially blocked]________
Transy... toranshi...
signs ____ ____
Asia ...rica ajia ...rika
[Incidentally, the Transylvania poster depicts a man in a cape. A bat flies
above his shoulder.]
6
Akane: [looking up]
Oh! ara!
Madoka and Hikaru:
Ah! a
poster: ________ ________
Transy... Rumani... toranshi... ru--mani...
[Same poster, but now the bat's gone...]
signs:
CHUU SHIN? TOU
____
Asia ajia
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p 32 (78)
1
[Exterior shot of an upper level of the Kasuga apartment building.]
doorbell FX: ___ _____
pin po--n
2
[Pov from behind the shoulder of a schoolgirl as he answers the door.
Kyousuke's in the middle of drinking from a carton of juice.]
Kyousuke:
Yes, who is it? hai donata?
door FX: _____
kacha
carton: __________ ______
Persimmon Juice pa--shimon ju--su
100% Persimmons KAKI 100%
3
[His pov of Hikaru, bursting with a smile.]
Hikaru:
Sempai! sempai!
4
[Kyousuke is stunned.]
carton FX: _____
poro_
5
[Of course, it's Akane. She enters, grabbing her drenched skirt and
screaming in his face.]
Akane:
Kyaaaa! So cold! kya------_ tsumetai!
It's me. Me! atashi yo atashi!
6
Kyousuke: [wincing]
A-Akane! a akane! ho_
Akane:
Grr. moo
narration:
Wh-what? Akane? That's a na nan da akane ka... yokatta!
relief!
7
Akane:
What on earth is the matter? ittai do-- shita no
in-the-world what's-the-matter
Somehow, for a moment, it nanka ko--
seemed as though I caught something/somehow like-this
a look of despair.
ISSHUN ZETSUBOU tomo
for-an-instant including-despair
toreru yo-- na KAO shichatte
be-caught looks-like looking-(finality)
[Blushing fiercely, Kyousuke looks up at the ceiling.]
narration:
I had a fight with hikaru-chan to kenka shichatte
Hikaru-chan, and somehow, with-Hikaru having-fight-
I'm too embarrassed to (finality/regret)
face her.
KAO awasu no ga nanka
being-ashamed-to-face-her somehow
KI mazui n da yo na
awkward/embarrassing (explan)
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p 33 (79)
1
[Akane's pov of him as he looks back in surprise.]
Kyousuke:
Wha-a-at?! Hikaru-chan e----_?! hikaru-chan-tachi ga
and Ayukawa are going to (and-assoc) (S)
Okinawa?!
OKINAWA ni?!
to-Okinawa
2
[View pans back to show them both seated at the kitchen table.]
Kyousuke:
Hmm... fu--n......
Akane:
Huh? You didn't know? are SHIranakatta no?
3
Kyousuke:
N-no... i iya...
Akane FX:
jiro_
Akane:
This is strange...! kore wa okashii...!
this-(one) (T) strange
4
[Akane glares and yells in his face again.]
Akane:
So you had a falling-out sate wa hikaru-chan to
with Hikaru-chan, eh?! with-Hikaru
kenka o shita na--_
fell-out
Akane FX: ____
zui_
narration:
S-so sharp! su surudoi!
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
doki_
5
[Filler art. Hikaru walks home in the rain--same as page 28, panel 2.]
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p 34 (80)
1
[Akane pulls back and watches as Kyousuke winces and sweats.]
narration:
H-how could she have known? na nande wakatta n daro
why understood (poss-explan)
___________
She shouldn't possess any akane wa terepashi-- motte-nai hazu na
telepathy... (T) telepathy shouldn't-be-having
no ni...
even-though
Kyousuke:
Wh-why... do do--shite......
2
Akane: [crossing her arms]
Generally speaking, if it's FUTSUU ko-- yu-- koto
anything to do with you generally this-kind-of-thing
two lovers, I'll naturally
know sooner than anyone else. KOIBITO do--shi nara dare yori mo
a-couple-of-lovers if-it-is anyone-else
HAYAku SHItte-te TOUZEN desho
soon/early am-knowing naturally poss-be
Kyousuke: [wide-eyed]
Eh?! e_?!
3
[She shouts in his face, and he sways back once more.]
Akane: ____
C'mon, barf it up! sa-- gero shinasai!
puke/vomit/retch-(command)
Akane FX: _____
zuii_
narration:
I'm no match for Akane. akane ni wa kanawanai ya
Akane (IO) (contrast) not-be-a-match-for
4
[A small, grey panel.]
Kyousuke: [off]
Actually... jitsu wa......
5
[He looks up at the ceiling, finger to his lips.]
Kyousuke:
And I don't really de yoku wakannai kedo
understand it--but when I fully not-understand but
asked her if she would like _____ _______
some Cup Ramen she suddenly kappu ra--men TAberu tte kiitara
started to get angry. cup-ramen eat (quote) when-ask
KYUU ni okori-dashichatte
suddenly beginning-to-get-angry-
(finality/regret)
Akane: [slapping her forehead]
(You dolt...!) (DONKAN na yatsu...!)
insensible/dull/thick-skinned fellow
6
Akane:
It seems that you don't maru kkiri ONNAGOKORO to yu-- mono ga
understand anything about entirely woman's-heart that person (S)
a woman's heart.
wakatchainai mitai ne
(wakatte-shimainai) it-seems
not-understand-(finality/regret)
7
[She shouts in his face once more, the text of her speech growing larger
with each line.]
Akane:
But... demo...
Then "going to Okinawa" sore de OKINAWA itchau tte koto wa
means SHE'S GIVEN UP ON then go-to-Okinawa- (quote) thing (T)
YOU!! (finality/regret)
AISO o tsukasareta n da wa!!
was-given-up-(by) (explan)
Akane FX: _______
zuiiii_
Kyousuke:
EH?! e_?!
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p 35 (81)
1
[A bikini-clad, SD-style Hikaru prances happily in the shallow surf under
a blazing sun.]
narration:
A girl suddenly goes out KOIBITO ni nan no kotowari mo naku
on a trip without telling to-sweetheart without-notice-at-all
her sweetheart a thing...
ONNA no KO ga KYUU ni TABI ni DEru
girl (S) suddenly go-out-to-travel
nante...
the-likes-of
narration: ________
And on top of that, when shikamo TAIYOU giragira YUUWAKU ippai
it reaches the point where moreover blazing-sunshine temptation-full
she goes to the sun-dazzling,
temptation-filled southern no MINAMI no SHIMA to kicha
islands, then the inevitable 's south 's island coming-to
occurs. _______
korya mo-- okimari no pata--n yo
this now customary-pattern
2
[A pack of furry animals--mostly wolves, but note the kappa in sunglasses--
smirk back at us.]
narration:
Over there... soko de...
____
Are those who lie in wait KAIHOU KAN to nakaba yake ni natta
for girls who've become with-open-feeling/emotion became
half-desperate, their half desperate
feelings laid bare...
ONNA no KO o machiukete-ru mono wa...
girl (O) be-waiting-for person (T)
wolf in aloha shirt:
hi_ hi_ hi_
3
[Kyousuke visualizes the wolf in aloha shirt hitting on the frightened,
bikini-clad Hikaru.]
wolf:
Where are you from? kimi doko kara kita no~~?
you from-where came
Hikaru:
KYAAAA! kya----_
Kyousuke FX: _____
goku_
4
Kyousuke:
N-no way-y-y! ma masakaa--_
Ayukawa's with her, too... AYUKAWA datte issho na n da shi...
also together is (explan) consider
5
[Kyousuke visualizes the wolves hitting on BOTH frightened, bikini-clad girls.]
narration:
Ah! What's this...? ha nan da...
Then it'd be even more ja yoke-- abunai ja nai ka...
dangerous... then extra dangerous
wolf:
Where are you two from? kimi-tachi doko kara kita no~~?
you-(plural) where from came
marching wolves FX:
zorozoro
6
[He stares in horror at his hands.]
Kyousuke:
Wh-what should I do...? do doo shiyou......
Akane: [brightly]
Well...! desho--_
7
[She puts a reassuring hand on his shoulder.]
Akane:
Then it's settled! ja KImatta ne!
Akane hand FX: ___
pon
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p 36 (82)
1
[As Kyousuke watches wide-eyed, Akane winks at him and lifts up his "kappa"
piggy bank. Hey, I want one of those!]
Akane: [winking]
So then... soko de... to
What might this be? kore wa na n deshou?
this-(one) (T) is (poss-explan)
Kyousuke: ___
My piggy bank. ore no CHOKINBAKO
my savings-box
2
[She holds up a wooden mallet in her other hand...]
Akane: _______
Kyousuke, weren't you KYOUSUKE anata sutereo KAitai
saying you wanted to buy you stereo want-to-buy
a stereo?!
tte itte-ta yo ne!
were-saying-that (rhet)
Kyousuke FX: _____
giku_
3
[...and brings it down upon the hapless kappa bank.]
Kyousuke: [off]
Ah! What are you doing?! a nani o suru!
what (O) do
demolition FX: ______
gachan
4
[She holds up the money in her hands.]
Akane: [winking]
I think you're a bit short, SUKOshi TArinai yo-- na
but I'll lend you the rest. a-little insufficient it-looks-like
KI mo suru ga NOKOri wa kono
feel/think but the-rest (T) this
atashi ga KAshite-ageyou
I (S) shall-lend-you
Oh, don't worry. I won't a RISHI wa toranai kara
charge interest. interest (T) not-charge that's-why
SHIMPAI shinai de
not-worry being
5
Kyousuke:
B-but... de demo...
Going all the way to ikura nan demo OKINAWA nante...
Okinawa... as-far-as-that the-likes-of
[She yells in his face and he bends back, wincing.]
Akane: _______
Which one's more important?! hikaru-chan to sutereo dotchi ga
Hikaru-chan or a stereo?! and stereo which (S)
TAISETSU na no?!
important
6
[Exterior night shot looking straight up the face of the Kasuga apartment
building. It is STILL raining.]
7
[Two open envelopes lie on a table.]
Akane: [off]
These are the hotel room kore ga KOUKUU KEN to
and airline tickets! these (S) air tickets and
______
hoteru no SHUKUHAKU KEN!
hotel 's lodging tickets
envelopes: ___________
New Japan Tourist SHIN NIHON tsu--risuto
new Japan tourist
Airline tickets KOUKUU KEN
Hotel lodging tickets SHUKUHAKU KEN
8
Kyousuke: [holding up two tickets]
Why are there two of nande 2-MAI -zutsu aru n da...?!
each...?! why (counter) apiece exist (explan)
Akane: [blushing]
Oh, th-that's, uhh... a so sore wa ne~~~~~~
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p 37 (83)
1
[She forces a smile and places a hand on the back of her head.]
Akane:
Actually... jitsu wa...
_____ _______
I just happened to be going atashi mo cho--do uindo - sa--fin shi ni
to Okinawa, too, to do some I too exactly to-do-windsurfing
windsurfing...
OKINAWA ni iku koto ni natte-te...
go-to-Okinawa happening-to-be
But going by myself... demo hitori ja sono...
but by-myself that
Mom and Dad wouldn't let OYA ga YURUshite-kurenakutte
me. parents (S) not-allowing-me
2
[She blushes, but gets serious and grabs him by the shoulders.]
Akane: ____________
So you just have to come as anata atashi no bodi--ga--do to shite
my bodyguard! you as-my-bodyguard
kureba i-- no yo!
have-to-come
Kyousuke:
(Th-this girl... (ko koitsu...
In short, she wanted to go yo--suru ni JIBUN ga
to Okinawa herself, but to after-all/in-short oneself (S)
do so, she needed to use
me as an excuse...) OKINAWA ikitai ga tame ni
want-to-go-to-Okinawa but for-the-sake-of
___ _____
ore o dashi ni shitatte wake ka...)
me reason (muse)
even-tho-be-under-the-pretext-of
Akane FX:
shikka
3
[Aerial view of a Nippon Air Lines Boeing 747 flying over the clouds.]
narration:
So the day arrives. n de motte TOUJITSU
the-appointed-day
Akane: [off]
But even though it's shikashi OKINAWA to ittatte
Okinawa, it's still so but even-tho-saying-that
big...
HIROi n da shi...
wide/broad/spacious (explan) consider
4
[Inside the plane, Akane stares raptly out the window. Kyousuke sits
vexed beside her.]
narration:
When we leave behind the don'yori to OMOi HAI-IRO no
dull, heavy and grey, dull/leaden heavy grey/ashen 's
rainy-season skies...
tsuyu SORA o nukeru to----
rainy-season sky (O) when-leave
Kyousuke:
How are we going to find do-- yatte hikaru-chan-tachi o
Hikaru-chan and Ayukawa? how doing (and-assoc) (O)
SAGAsette n da yo
looking-for (explan)
Akane:
Just leave that to soko wa sore kono
Akane-san! that-place (T) that-(one) this
akane-san ni nukari wa nai!
to-Akane-san without-fail
Wow, so pretty! wa-- kirei!
5
[Her pov out the window of the island of Okinawa. The skies are clear.]
Akane: [off]
True, we couldn't catch the sasuga ni HIKOUKI made wa ISSHO no
same flight together, but truly/indeed to-airplane (T) together
we used the same travel
agency... torenakatta kedo
could-not-catch but
ONAji RYOKOU DAIRITEN da shi
same travel agency is and-besides
The rest is a breeze! ato wa o-TANOshimi!
rest (T) pleasure
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p 38 (84)
1
[Spread across the tops of pages 38-39 (84-85) is this 2-page panel.
Kyousuke and Akane look out across a sunny, sandy beach at a hotel complex.]
narration:
...we find the midsummer MANATSU no TAIYOU ga atta!!
sun!! midsummer/ 's sun (S) existed/had
height-of-summer
2
[Shot of the road entry sign to the "Coral Resort Hotel."]
Akane: [off]
Make misfortune turn into wazawai TENjite FUKU to nasu
good fortune. misfortune changing (good)-fortune make
tte yu-- desho
say-that poss-be
I've made sure we're in the chanto ISSHO no
same hotel. duly/in-good-order together
______
hoteru totte-aru kara
hotel are-occupied-in that's-why
3
Akane: [shoving him in the back]
Make up with her decisively, shikkari NAKAnaori shite ikki ni
and, in a single stroke, firmly/ making-up-with at-a-stroke
seize hold of your decidedly
girlfriend's heart! ______
KANOJO no ha--to o tsukaminasai!
girlfriend's heart (O) seize/take-hold
Akane hand FX: ___
don
4
Akane:
And I, by the way, will atashi mo tsuide ni madoka-chan no
seize hold of Madoka-chan's I too by-the-way 's
heart... ______
ha--to tsukanjattari shite......
heart (tsukande-shimattari shite)
seizing-(finality)-(and)
Kyousuke:
(Y-you...) (ko koitsu...)
5
[He shades his eyes and smiles off into the distance.]
narration:
Ohh, but it's not bad to be maa demo MINAMI no SHIMA de
in the southern islands but in-southern-islands
with the likes of Ayukawa
and Hikaru-chan. AYUKAWA ya hikaru-chan-tachi to
and (and-assoc) with
ISSHO nante WARUku wa nai
together the-likes-of is-not-bad
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p 39 (85)
1
[This is the left half to panel 1 of the previous page.]
2
[The girls' pov of two smiling guys.]
Sukeda: ______________
I'm Sukeda, an instructor. boku insutorakuta-- no SUKEDA desu
I instructor am
Komayama: [flashing a "peace" sign]
I'm Komayama. Pleased to KOMAYAMA desu yoroshiku!
meet you!
3
[Madoka and Hikaru are taken aback.]
Madoka:
N-nice to meet you... yo yoroshiku...
4
[View pans up-and-away to show Kyousuke and Akane following the porter who
carries their duffel bags. They approach Madoka and company...]
Sukeda:
Well, this might be sudden, sassoku desu ga KOUSHUU wa
but we'll be holding intense at-once/ is but short-training-course (T)
meetings in our short immediately
training course at...
asu kara SHUUCHUU -TEKI ni
from-tomorrow concentrated
okonaimasu BASHO wa...
practice/perform/ place (T)
hold-meeting
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1
Akane: [smiling, waving]
There they are. Hello-o-o. itaita konnichi wa--
2
Madoka:
Kasuga-kun! KASUGA-kun!
Hikaru:
Sempai! SEMPAI!
3
[Sukeda takes Madoka's hand in both of his.]
Sukeda:
Then... I'll be seeing you! de wa... yoroshiku ne!
Sukeda FX:
shikka
4
[Kyousuke glares at the two as they wave goodbye to Madoka and walk away.]
Kyousuke:
! !
5
Sukeda:
How's that? Those girls do-- da ano KO-tachi
are perfect babes! how is-that those-girls
tobikkiri no JOUDAMA da ze!
extra-fine/ 's fine-jewel/pretty-woman
best-of-its-kind are
Komayama: ___
Then it's settled--they're ore-tachi no TSUGI no EMONO ni
our next catch. our next 's catch (IO)
KImari da na
settlement is
6
Kyousuke: [glaring at the guys]
Who're they? DARE?
Madoka: ________ ______________
Oh, some diving instructors. aa daibingu no insutorakuta-- yo
_____
They're college students but DAIGAKUSEI da kedo baito de
I suppose they come here to college-student are but at-work-part
work part-time. time
kite-ru n da tte
are-coming (explan) (hearsay)
7
[Kyousuke continues to stare off-panel at the backs of the retreating guys.
Behind him, Akane chats with Madoka, and Hikaru quietly watches Kyousuke.]
narration:
We were right in coming yappari kite SEIKAI datta!
here after all! after-all coming was-correct
Akane:
Oh, and our rooms are next a HEYA mo tonari do--shi na no ne
to each other. room too vicinity comrades
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1
[Evening falls and the four sit poolside at a table, sipping drinks.]
Hikaru:
Wow, Akane-san. he-- akane-san
_____ _______
You came to windsurf? uindo - sa--fin shi ni kita no
to-windsurf came
2
Hikaru: [wide-eyed]
I'm surprised! odoroita!
Akane: ____________
And so I had Kyousuke de bodi--ga--do de KYOUSUKE ni
come along with me as my as-bodyguard with-Kyousuke
bodyguard!
tsuite-kite-moratta wake!
came-along-with-(favor-for-me) reason
3
Akane: [to Madoka] ______
And while we're at it, do--se nara ISSHO no hoteru no
doesn't it seem nicer to if-at-all together hotel
just be in the same hotel?
ho-- ga i-- ja nai?
better is-not
[Madoka forces a smile and nods nervously Akane.]
4
Kyousuke: [sucking his drink dry]
Not that it matters, but do-- demo i-- kedo
isn't this alcoholic? not-matter-either-way but
kore o-SAKE ja nai?
this-(one) liquor is-not
Kyousuke FX: ________
zurururu
Akane: [pointing and grinning]
What...?! nani o...!
You've nearly finished it hotondo nomihoshitoite
off. almost (nomihoshite-oite)
tossing-it-off-(for-future-sake)
5
[Kyousuke smiles up at the starry sky.]
narration:
But... demo...
I'm sure glad I came...! yappari kite yokatta...!
sure-enough coming was-glad
6
narration:
Under the stars of the NANGOKU no HOSHI no SHITA
southern lands. southern-countries 's stars 's under
The stars... HOSHI no......
stars 's
Kyousuke FX: _____
fura_
[His face becomes flushed...]
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1
[...and he topples over in his chair like a clubbed dodo.]
Kyousuke FX: ___
do_
Hikaru:
Sempai! sempai!
2
[Akane pushes Hikaru towards the fallen Kyousuke.]
Akane:
Okay, I leave the rest to hai ato wa o-makase hikaru-chan!
you, Hikaru-chan! rest (T) leave-in-(your)-hands
3
Akane: [taking a surprised Madoka by the arm]
Say, Madoka-chan. Let's nee madoka-chan atashi-tachi wa
go swimming!! say we (T)
hito oyogishimasho_!!
person shall-swim
Madoka:
Huh?! e_?!
4
[Akane smiles, and pulls on the wrist of the reluctant Madoka. Madoka's
attention is on Kyousuke and Hikaru.]
Madoka:
B-but... de demo...
Akane:
C'mon, let's go. saa ikimasho
Ohh, what a magnificent aa nante subarashii YORU!
night! what! wonderful/magnificent night
5
[With his arm over her shoulders, Hikaru helps Kyousuke back to his room.]
Hikaru:
Are you all right, Sempai? DAIJOUBU desu ka SEMPAI
6
Kyousuke:
I'm sorry... Hikaru-chan. gomen ne... hikaru-chan
7
[She blushes and turns to look at him.]
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1
[Full-length portraits of a bikini-clad Akane, and Madoka in a one-piece
swimsuit and T-shirt. They walk near the swimming pool.]
2
Madoka: [face flushed, hand to her forehead]
Phew. Maybe I'm a bit fuu SUKOshi yotchatta
drunk, too... a-little was-drunk-(finality/regret)
ka na......
I-wonder
Madoka FX: _____
fura_
Akane: [smiling]
By now, those two are imagoro futari de nakayoku
probably getting along by-now 2-people on-good-terms
well together.
yatte-ru desho-- ne
be-doing poss-be
3
[Madoka portrait--her eyes open at that remark.]
4
Akane: [staring]
Wow-w-w! uwa----_
________
Madoka-chan, you're well- madoka-chan tte gurama-- ne
built. (T) "glamour-girl"-
(i.e.,-curvaceous)
5
[The two guys look at something off-panel.]
Komayama:
Hm? Those girls are... n? ano KO-tachi wa...
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1
[Hikaru helps Kyousuke in through the door of his (and Akane's) room.]
door FX: _____
gacha
Kyousuke:
Sorry. gomen ne
2
[Kyousuke portrait--face flushed, gaze downcast.]
Kyousuke:
That's what I wanted to tell sore ga i--taku tte kichatta n da
you, so I came here. that (S) wanting-to-say came-(finality)
3
Hikaru:
Sempai... SEMPAI...
4
[Isolated view of one of the beds, and the TV in the corner.]
Hikaru: [off]
It doesn't matter. I... i-- n desu atashi koso......
okay (explan) I indeed
5
Hikaru:
...was thinking that I SEMPAI ni ayamaro--
should apologize to you, to-Sempai shall-apologize
too.
to omotte-ta n desu
was-thinking-that (explan)
(Sempai finally understood (SEMPAI atashi no KIMOchi yo--yaku
my feelings.) my-feelings finally
wakatte-kureta no ne)
understood-(favor-to-me)
6
[In trying to set him down on the bed, Hikaru finds herself dragged down
next to him.]
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1
Kyousuke and Hikaru FX: _____
dosa_
2
[Tight shot of Hikaru's bare legs. One of her shoes has come off.]
3
[Split panel view of Kyousuke's wide-eyed face and Hikaru's glassy-eyed one.]
Kyousuke and Hikaru heartbeat FX: ____ ____ ____ ____
doki doki doki doki
4
[Lying on her side next to him, she smiles and closes her eyes. Kyousuke
stares up at the ceiling.]
Hikaru:
Sempai. Right now... SEMPAI atashi IMA...
Do you know what I'm nani KANGAete-ru ka wakarimasu?
thinking? what be-thinking (?) know
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[Wide shot of the four at poolside.]
Komayama:
Good evening! komban wa--_
2
Madoka:
Oh?! ara?!
_____
hikku
3
[The two guys exchange looks.]
Sukeda and Komayama FX: ______
niyari
4
Sukeda:
Th-they're drunk! yo yotte-ru ze
And in their swimsuits. shikamo MIZUGI de
moreover in-swimsuits
Komayama: ___
Now we can add to our kore de ore-tachi no MIZUGI no
swimsuit collection again! with-this/now our swimsuit 's
__________
korekushon ga mata fueru ze!
collection (S) again increase-in-number
5
Komayama: [looking at the girls]
And not before we've done shikamo TANOshi-- koto shita
some fun things...! besides fun-things done
ato ni ne...!
later-on/after
6
[Sukeda takes Madoka by her arm.]
Sukeda: [smiling]
C'mon! Come over here. sasa_ kotchi ni oide
Akane:
Hey, what are you doing?! chotto nani sun no yo!
what doing
7
Sukeda:
Starting now, we're going IMA kara KIMI-tachi ni
to give special coaching starting-now for-you-(plural)
lessons, just for you... _______
TOKUBETSU no ko--chi o shite-ageru yo...
special coach (O) do-(for-you)
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Sukeda:
I'll guide you, by your TEtoriASHItori ne......
hands and feet...
[Madoka looks up wide-eyed and nervous, her face flushed.]
2
[The two guys again exchange looks.]
Sukeda:
(Heh heh heh... (fu fu fu...
Looks like this'll be an SAIKOU no YORU ni nariso-- da ze...
awesome night...!) "highest" 's night (IO) looks-as-if-become
Sukeda and Komayama: ___ ___ ___ ___
he_ he_ he_ he_
3
[Tight shot of the faces of Hikaru and Kyousuke. She closes her eyes, and
he looks at her.]
Hikaru:
Sempai. sempai
4
[Exterior night shot of the 2-room "cabin" at the hotel.]
Hikaru: [off]
Can I stay here tonight? KON'YA wa atashi koko ni
tonight (T) I in-this-place
tomatte ii?
staying-over okay
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