Kimagure Orange Road
"The Parallel Trip!"
Volume 8, Story 3
WB Volume 5, Story 1
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Spencer Hastings
Thomas Wyatt
Michael Chin
Jerry Lee
Last revision : 07-17-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 7 (53) are only in the WBs!
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p 7 (53)--TITLE PAGE
[Hikaru, in shirt and shorts, jumps in the air, kicks up both heels, and
throws out her arms in a cheer.]
MAIN TITLE (at top) ________ _______
The Parallel Trip! parareru - torippu!
SUB-TITLE (at bottom) _______
Bursting with Cuteness, the kyu--to ni hajikete
Eternal Summer Girl! cute (IO) bursting-open/popping/
springing-off
TOKONATSU MUSUME!
eternal-summer girl
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p 8 (54)
1
[Exterior shot of a school building.]
school bell FX: ___ ___ ___ _____
kin kon kan ko--n
Hikaru: [off]
Sempa-a-ai! sempa--i!
2
[Kyousuke's pov--with a brilliant smile, Hikaru presents a 3-level stack of
boxed lunches.]
Hikaru:
It's lunchtime... o-hiru desu yo
lunchtime is
dramatic FX:
do~~~~n
3
[Kyousuke recoils in shock, and his classmates look on in nervousness (guys)
or merriment (a girl).]
class: ______
o~~~~_
4
[Komatsu and Hatta peer in for a look.]
Komatsu: _______
Whoahh. Today's menu is o~~~~tto HONJITSU no menyu-- wa
calf pie on Black Sea today 's menu (T)
caviar, and foie gras...! ______ ___
KOKKAI no kyabia ni KO-USHI no pai
Black-Sea 's caviar (IO) calf 's pie
_______
soshite foagura daa~~_
and/then foie-gras is
narration:
Even though I've moved to hikaru-chan to no NAKA wa
the high school section, my with-Hikaru 's relationship (T)
relationship with Hikaru-chan
has become anything but KOUTOU-BU ni kite-mo
more distant... to-higher-section even-tho-coming
TOUzakaru dokoro-ka
become-more-distant anything-but/far-from
5
[Running, she drags Kyousuke off. A female classmate smiles and waves
a hankie in farewell.]
Hikaru:
Well, the weather's nice saa KYOU wa o-TENKI mo
today, so let's go out to today (T) weather as-well
the playground!
i-- koto da shi
nice thing is and-besides
KOUTEI ni demo DEmasho_!
to-playground or-something shall-go-out
narration: ___________
Things just keep on esukare--to suru IPPOU desu
escalating. escalate simply/only is
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p 9 (55)
1
[Madoka leans back against a tree, reading a book.]
2
Hikaru: [off]
Madoka-sa-a-an!! madoka-sa----n!!
[She looks up.]
book:
City of Vanity KYOEI no SHI
--Kobayashi vanity/vainglory 's city/town
KOBAYASHI <2-kanji>
(a-name)
3
[Hikaru and Kyousuke approach her, on the run.]
Hikaru:
Why don't you eat this box ISSHO ni o-bento--_ TAbemasen ka--_!!
lunch with us?!! together box-lunch! not-eat (?)
I made an extremely delicious KYOU wa tobikkiri oishi-- no
one today. today (T) super-fine delicious (nom)
tsukutta n desu
made (explan)
4
[Madoka portrait--eyes grow large.]
5
[Kyousuke and Hikaru portraits--Kyousuke sweats and blushes as Hikaru smiles
sweetly over his shoulder.]
6
[With all three seated on the grass, Hikaru throws up her arms and smiles.
Madoka watches her, still wide-eyed.]
Hikaru:
Go on, eat! saa meshiagare_
narration:
The three of us together... 3-NIN sorotte nante......
3-people meeting/gathering the-likes-of
Somehow, it was strange. nanka HEN na no
somehow strange is
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p 10 (56)
1
[Kyousuke watches Madoka as the two girls merrily smile.]
narration:
But just once, I'd also demo ICHIDO de i-- kara
like to try eating a box but on-once okay that's-why
lunch made for me by
Ayukawa. AYUKAWA no tsukutte-kureta o-bento-- tte
's made-for-me box-lunch (T)
no mo TAbete-mitai
(nom.) also want-to-try-and-eat
2
dream Madoka:
I made an extremely delicious KYOU wa tobikkiri oishi-- no
one today. today (T) super-fine delicious (nom)
tsukutta no
made
Just for you, Kasuga-kun...! KASUGA-kun no tame ni...!
for-the-sake-of
3
dream Madoka: [smiling and feeding him]
Say, "ahh". a--n
dream Kyousuke:
Ahh. a--n
narration:
Having this sort of thing tama ni wa ko-- yu-- koto mo
happen once in a while occasionally (T) this-kind-of-thing too
would be okay, wouldn't
it? atte i-- no de wa nai daro-- ka
having okay (nom) is-not poss-be (?)
4
Hikaru: [wide-eyed smile]
Oh yeah. Just once, I'd so-- da atashi ICHIDO de i-- kara
like to try eating a box I at-the-same-time that's-why
lunch made by Madoka-san. okay
madoka-san no tsukutta o-bento--
's made box-lunch
TAbete-mitai na
want-to-try-and-eat
Madoka:
What? e
[Kyousuke clutches his chest.]
Kyousuke: ___
Ah! ha_
5
Hikaru: [turning to him]
I'm sure it would taste kitto oishi-- darou naa
good. surely tasty poss-be
Right, Sempai?! ne-- SEMPAI!
Kyousuke: [nervously]
W-well... so so da ne
6
Hikaru: [hands clasped together]
Please, Madoka-san!! onegai shimasu madoka-san!!
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p 11 (57)
1
Madoka: [nervously]
S-sure. Okay... u un ii kedo...
2
[A view of the sky and a nearby school building.]
Hikaru: [off]
Then, it's a promise! ja atashi YAKUSOKU desu yo!
then me promise it-is
3
[Kyousuke portrait--he smiles.]
narration:
This is wonderful! kore wa TANOshimi!
this-(one) (T) a-pleasure/delight
4
[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]
Kurumi: [off]
Hooray-y-y!! Thanks, Dad! yatta--_!! oto--san arigatou
father thanks
5
[Isolated shot of a cake in an opened box. A hefty slice has been cut out
of it.]
Kurumi: [off] ______ ______
A cake! It's a cake! ke--ki da! ke--ki da!
Kyousuke: [off]
If you eat that much you sonna ni TAberu to YUU gohan
won't have room for dinner! that-much if-eat evening-meal
hairanaku naru zo
not-be-containing !!
6
Kurumi: [winking, with a fork in her mouth]
That's okay. i-- no
Then I won't need dinner. ja atashi YUU gohan iranai mon
then I evening-meal not-need reason
Kurumi FX: ____ ____ ____
paku paku paku
7
Kurumi: [smiling] ______
Unless it's my favorite tadashi DAIKOUBUTSU no kare--
curry rice. Then it's a but-for one's-favorite-dish 's curry
whole different story!
dattara HANASHI wa BETSU da
if-is story (T) a-difference is
__
kedo ne!
but
Manami: [off]
I'm home... tadaima----
8
[Manami prances in, beaming a smile.]
Manami: ______
Ta-dah! Kurumi, tonight ja--n kurumi KON'YA wa kare-- da yo
it's curry! tonight (T) curry it's
[Kyousuke breaks out in laughter as Kurumi pauses in eating and starts
sweating.]
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p 12 (58)
1
[The four sit at the table, eating dinner.]
Manami:
What's the matter, Kurumi? do-- shita no kurumi
Aren't you going to eat? TAbenai no
______
You like curry, don't you? kare-- SUki na n desho
curry liking (poss-explan)
Kurumi:
I'm full. o-naka ippai
insides full
2
Kyousuke: [stifling a chuckle] ______
If *I'd* eaten four slices ke--ki 4 -KO mo kutterya
of cake... cake 4-pieces too if-eat
Kurumi: [indignant]
It was THREE slices! 3 -KO da mon!
3-pieces is reason
3
Takashi: [smiling]
Well, it seems to be the maa amida kuji mitai na
luck of the draw. working-out/ lottery seems
thinking-out/devising
mono da na
reason is
Manami:
Luck of the draw? amida kuji?
4
[Takashi portrait.]
narration: ______
If she hadn't eaten cake, ke--ki o TAbenakattara
she would have eaten the if-did-not-eat-cake
curry, but... ______
kare-- o TAbereta hazu da ga
should-have-ate-curry but
Telling Kurumi not to eat kurumi ni ME no MAE ni aru
cake set before her eyes to-Kurumi in-front-of-eyes exists
is a more difficult thing ______
to do than having an ke--ki o TAberu na to yuu-- no wa
out-of-shape manga artist don't-eat-cake! telling-that (T)
pin down Andre the Giant. _____
UNDOUBUSOKU no manga-KA ni
lack-of-exercise 's by-manga-artist
______ __ _______ ___ ______
andore - za - jaianto o pin fo--ru shiro
Andre-the-Giant (O) pin fall poss-do
to yu-- IJOU ni KONNAN na koto
say-that more-than difficult thing
da kara na
is that's-why
But the problem is this. shikashi MONDAI wa koko ni
If Manami had arrived home but problem (T) at-this-place
just a step sooner and
Kurumi had known that we aru moshi manami ga mou HITOASHI
were having curry for dinner have if (S) more a-step
before eating the cake...
HAYAku KAEtte
soon/early returning-home
______
ke--ki o TAberu MAE ni KON'YA wa
before-eat-cake tonight (T)
______
kare-- da to wakatte-ireba...
curry it-is (quote) if-is-knowing
5
[A diagram shows the 2 forks diverging from the decision point.]
diagram: [left fork] ______ ______
Eat cake ===> Can't eat curry ke--ki TAberu ===> kare-- TAberenai
===> This ended up a big eat-cake can't-eat-curry
mistake
===> kore wa shimatta DAI-SHIPPAI
this-(one) (T) ended-up great-blunder
diagram: [right fork] ______ ______
Don't eat cake ===> Able to ke--ki TAbenai ===> kare-- TAbereru
eat curry ===> Joy, joy not-eat-cake able-to-eat-curry
===> medetashi medetashi
happy joyous
6
Manami:
I see. naruhodo
Sorry, Kurumi. gomen ne-- kurumi
7
Manami:
If I'd only known the first SEN no koto ga
part! former/previous/first thing (S)
wakaru to i-- no ni na
if-understand okay even-though
Takashi:
But you didn't know, and demo wakaranai kara
while returning home, you but not-understanding that's-why
came across something nice
by accident. kaette omoi ga kezu
returning-home unforeseen/unexpected
i-- koto ni DEau koto ga aru
good-thing (IO) come-across thing-exists
n da yo
(explan)
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p 13 (59)
1
Takashi:
When you stop and think KANGAete-miru to
about it, it's a strange when-try-and-think-about-it
thing.
FUSHIGI na mon ja nai ka
marvelous/ thing
mysterious/strange
If Kurumi's Power hadn't moshi MAE no MACHI de
been discovered in the if at-previous-town
last town, we might not _chikara_
have moved into *this* kurumi no NOURYOKU ga barete-inakattara
town... 's Power (S) if-wasn't-discovered
washira IKKA datte
we family/home even/also
kono MACHI ni wa
to-this-town (contrast)
HIkKOshite-nakattaro-- shi...
poss-were-not-moving and-besides
2
[Kyousuke stops and stares at his glass.]
narration:
Then it follows that I to--zen AYUKAWA ya hikaru-chan tomo
wouldn't have met either naturally/ both-Ayukawa-and-Hikaru
Ayukawa or Hikaru-chan. as-a-matter-of-course
Atte-nakatta koto ni naru
have-not-met matter become
Kyousuke:
(That means, for me, moving (ore ni totte wa HIkKOshite yokatta
was good...) for-me (T) moving was-good
to yu-- koto ka)
in-that-case (musing)
3
Manami:
If we hadn't moved then... ano TOKI HIkKOshite-nakattara...
that-time if-were-not-moving
I wonder how we would have atashi-tachi do-- natte-ta
turned out. we how were-turning-out
no ka naa
I-wonder
4
Takashi:
Well, the only way to know saate sore o SHIru ni wa
that would be to go to "the that-(one) (O) to-know (contrast)
universe in which we didn't
move." "ano TOKI HIkKOshite-nai SEKAI"
that-time not-moving universe/world
ni demo iku shika nai na
(IO) or-something to-go only-have
Manami: ________ ________
Oh, isn't that called a a so-- yu-- no parareru wa--rudo
parallel world? that-kind-of (nom) parallel-world
tte yu-- n desho
called/say-that (poss-explan)
5
Kyousuke: [smiling]
I think I'd like to go once ICHIDO itte nozoite-mitai
to take a peek. once going want-to-try-and-peep-in
KI mo suru ne
think/mind/care/worry
Takashi:
Saying that's fine, but itta wa i-- kedo NIDO to
you won't ever be able to said (T) okay but with-2-times/again
come back again!!
modotte-korenaku naru zo----_
not-being-able-to-return become !! !
6
[Exterior night shot of the Kasuga apartment building. A tiny portrait of
a whining Kurumi appears on her speech bubble. Kyousuke yells back on his
speech bubble.]
Kurumi: ______
I wanna go to the world atashi wa kare-- ga TAberareru
where I can eat curry! I (T) curry (S) be-eating
SEKAI ni ikitai yo--_
to-world want-to-go !
everyone else: __________
wahahahaha
Kyousuke:
Don't be silly. ama--i
unrealistic/silly/simple/
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p 14 (60)
1
[Smiling, Kyousuke walks to school alone.]
narration:
The next day... YOKUJITSU----
Kyousuke:
(Today, Ayukawa is going to (KYOU wa AYUKAWA ga obento-- o
bring a box lunch.) today (T) (S) box-lunch (O)
tsukutte-kite-kureru)
coming-to-make-for-me
signs:
Safety First ANZEN JUU? DAI-ICHI
safety (ten) first
store sign:
Vegetable Store YAOYA*
<*the 3rd kanji is normally a different YA
--don't know what to make of this>
2
[He looks up to visualize dream Madoka feeding him.]
narration:
Hikaru-chan makes 3 people hikaru-chan to 3-NIN de
--and that's not bad either, with-Hikaru 3-people being
but if at all...
to yu-- no mo WARUkunai kedo
saying-that too not-bad but
do--se nara...
if-at-all
dream Madoka:
Say, "ahh". a--n
dream Kyousuke:
Ahh. a--n
3
narration:
Just for today, maybe KYOU dake wa hikaru-chan
Hikaru-chan will catch just-today (T)
a cold and be absent. ____
kaze demo hi--te
catching-a-cold-or-something-(and)
YASUnde-kurenai ka naa
not-be-absent-(favor-to-me) I-wonder
4
[Too wrapped up in his dreams, he does the "Godai" and walks face-first into
a utility pole.]
Kyousuke face FX: ______
gochin
post sign:
room YOU/KATACHI SHITSU
form/looks/shape room
5
[Rubbing his forehead, he looks off-panel.]
Kyousuke:
Huh?! tetete... n?!
6
[Pov shifts to show him staring at a strange misty vortex which blocks the
street before him.]
sign on utility pole:
Air-conditioning REIBOU
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p 15 (61)
1
[He walks towards the fog...]
Kyousuke:
What's this? nan da kore?
2
[...sticking his head in it...]
Kyousuke:
Huh?! Huh?! n_? n_?
3
[...and coming out the other side.]
Kyousuke FX: __________ ___
kyorokyoro su_
4
Kyousuke: [running]
Oh no, I'm late. ikene CHIKOKU da
school bell FX: ___ ___ ___ ___
kin kon kan kon
5
[His pov as he comes upon a strolling Madoka in the hallway.]
6
Kyousuke: [smiling]
Good morning!! ohayo----_!!
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p 16 (62)
1
[Madoka gives him a stern glare...]
2
[...and turns abruptly away.]
Madoka FX: ____
pui_
3
Kyousuke:
? ?
4
[Exterior shot of a school building.]
5
Kyousuke: [looking at his watch]
(Soon now, as always, (mo-- sorosoro itsu-mo no you ni
Hikaru-chan should be already soon like-always
coming...
hikaru-chan ga yatte-kuru hazu
(S) should-turn-up
3... 2... 1...) 3 - 2 - 1)
6
[He looks up towards the door, but...]
FX:
shi~~n
Kyousuke:
? ?
7
[Standing at the window, he looks across towards Hikaru's classroom. He
doesn't see her.]
Kyousuke:
She isn't coming...? konai na......?
8
Komatsu:
Hey, Kasuga. What are you oi KASUGA nani boketto shite-ru n da yo
looking so spaced-out at? what becoming-senile (explan)
Hatta: ___
C'mon, they'll be sold out oraora pan UriKIrechimau zo
of bread! bread be-sold-out-(finality/regret)
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p 17 (63)
1
[Kyousuke laughs in embarrassment.]
Kyousuke: ___
But, Hikaru-chan's coming demo ore hikaru-chan ga kuru kara...
for me... but me (S) come that's-why
Komatsu: [wide-eyed]
What? Who's "Hikaru-chan?" nan da yo sono hikaru-chan tte?
what's-that that (quote)
2
[Komatsu drags Kyousuke away by the scruff of his neck.]
Kyousuke:
So there's the box lunch... da kara o-bento-- o...
that's-why box-lunch (O)
Komatsu FX:
gui
Komatsu:
What are you babbling about nani neboketa koto itte n da!
in your sleep?! what was-half-asleep thing saying (explan)
We're going!! iku zo--_!!
3
[A view of the school grounds.]
Hatta and Komatsu FX: __ __ __ __ __ __
wa ha ha ha ha ha
4
[Hatta breaks out in laughter. Komatsu eats his sandwich and studies
Kyousuke. The three stand outside.]
Komatsu:
Then, you're saying that sore de itsu-mo
this so-called Hikaru girl and-so/then always
always brought you box
lunches? sono hikaru tte KO ga omae ni
that (quote) girl (S) for-you
o-bento-- mottekite-kureta tte yu-- no ka?
box-lunch brought-for-you saying-that (?)
Komatsu FX: ________
mogumogu
5
[Kyousuke does a top-notch dewy-eyed Hikaru impression. Kawaii!]
Kyousuke: ________
She has short, silky hair, da kara sarasara no
and huge eyes, like this. that's-why FX-for-feel-of-silky-hair 's
_______ _____
sho--to katto de ME ga konna ni
short-cut-(hair) eyes (S) like-this
okkikute
= huge
Kyousuke as Hikaru:
Sempai! sempai!
Komatsu:
Have you got a fever or omae NETSU demo aru n ja nai no
something? you fever or-something have (explan/neg)
6
Hatta: [pointing a finger at Kyousuke's nose]
Besides, there's no reason daitai omae ga
you'd be popular with a on-the-whole you (S)
cute girl like that.
sonna kawaii KO ni moteru
with-that-kind-of-cute-girl be-popular
wake ne-- daro
reason = not poss-be
Komatsu: [gaze downcast]
How sad. 'Cause he's so kawaiso-- ni anmari motenai n de
unpopular with girls, he's pitiful so-unpopular ('cause)
gone crazy.
KASUGA no yatsu okashiku
that-Kasuga laughable/comical/strange
natta n ja nai no ka
became (explan/neg) (?)
7
narration:
Have these guys completely koitsura hikaru-chan o KANZEN ni
forgotten about these-guys (O) thoroughly
Hikaru-chan...?!
WASUrete-ru...?!
be-forgetting
___
I wonder if I'm dreaming ore YUME demo mite n no ka na
or something. I dream or-something seeing I-wonder
Kyousuke: [smiling, pointing at his face]
Hey, pinch me. chotto tsunette-kureru
8
[A hand extends from off-panel to do just that.]
Kyousuke:
Ow-ow-ow-ouch! itetetete
cheek FX:
gyu_
narration:
I-it's not a dream!! yu YUME ja nai_!!
dream is-not
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p 18 (64)
1
[Turning, Kyousuke spies Madoka walking.]
narration:
That's it, the box lunch!! so-- da o-bento--!!
2
Kyousuke: [running]
Ayukawa! AYUKAWA!
[Horror fills the faces of Komatsu and Hatta.]
Komatsu: ____
Idiot! Get back here! baka yose! dare ni KOE kakete
Who do you think you're bring-nearer to-who calling-out
yelling at?!
n da yo
(explan)
3
Komatsu:
Have you forgotten who she omae aitsu ga dare-ka WASUreta
is? you that-person (S) somebody forgotten
wake ja nai daro-- na
is-possibly-the-case
Kyousuke: [smiling]
That's Ayukawa. AYUKAWA daro
Uhh, what's the matter? sore ga do-- shita no?
4
[Komatsu and Hatta nervously watch what goes on off-panel.]
Kyousuke: [off]
Hey-y-y, Ayukawa. o--i AYUKAWA
Komatsu:
There's something wrong with KASUGA no yatsu yappari KYOU wa
Kasuga today after all! that-Kasuga after-all today (T)
do--ka shite-ru ze
is-something-wrong !
Hatta:
What amazing courage... sugoi DOKYOU da na--
amazing courage/guts is
5
[He runs up to her, and she looks back. This is definitely a more
Madoka...]
Kyousuke:
Say! Did you make a box nee! o-bento-- tsukutte-kite-kureta?
lunch for me? box-lunch come-and-made-for-me
6
Madoka:
Box lunch? o-bento--?
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p 19 (65)
1
Madoka:
Why must I make something nande atashi ga anta ni sonna mono
like that for you? why I (S) for-you thing-like-that
tsukuranakya ikenai no yo
must-make
2
Kyousuke: [taken aback]
Eh? e
3
narration:
Did I do something that nani-ka OKOraseru yo-- na
might have made her mad? something make-angry it-looks-like
koto demo shita kke
thing or-something done (?)
Kyousuke: [embarrassed]
Oh, that's right. Have you a so-- da hikaru-chan SHIranai?
heard from Hikaru-chan? not-find-out
She's nowhere to be found. doko ni mo inai n da
at-nowhere -there (explan)
Madoka:
Hikaru? hikaru?
4
Madoka: [sternly]
Who the hell is that? ittai DARE no koto? hikaru tte
"Hikaru." in-the-world about-who (quote)
5
Kyousuke:
Ah?! ha?!
narration:
Even Ayukawa... AYUKAWA made...
What on earth is wrong with minna ittai do-- shita n darou
everyone? everyone in-the-world what's-the-matter
6
[Madoka steps closer to stare him in the eye.]
Madoka:
What the heck are you trying daitai anta ittai
to pull? on-the-whole you in-the-world
do-- yu-- tsumori
what-kind-of-intention
All this time, calling out sakki kara narenareshiku
to me with undue familiarity, for-some-time with-familiarity
and complaining about some
box lunch! KOE o kakete-kite o-bento-- ga
coming-to-call-out-(and) box-lunch (S)
do--noko--no tte!
complaining-about
Madoka approach FX: ___
zui
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p 20 (66)
1
[She steps back, and pulls out something from her skirt pocket.]
Madoka:
What does it matter... do-- demo i-- kedo...
not-matter-either-way but
2
[She puts a cigarette in her mouth and lights up.]
cigarette FX: ______
shubo_
3
[Kyousuke portrait--she exhales on him. He winces.]
Madoka exhale FX: [off] ___
fu_
4
Madoka:
I don't know you well at atashi anta no koto yoku SHIranai shi
all, nor have I ever met I about-you not-know-well and
this "Hikaru" girl.
sono hikaru tte KO datte
that (quote) girl also
Atta koto mo nai
I-have-not-met
5
Madoka:
I don't have any friends in kono GAKKOU ni wa... TOMODACHI nante
this school. in-this-school (T) friends or-such
inai yo
not-have
6
[He does a slow burn.]
7
Madoka: [walking away]
Sorry. I thought I knew WARUi ne HITOchigai da yo
you. bad thought-I-knew-you
Kyousuke: ____
Y-you idiot!! so sonna baka na_!!
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p 21 (67)
1
[He grabs her shoulder from behind and spins her about.]
narration:
What in the world is the AYUKAWA ittai do-- shita n da
matter with Ayukawa? in-the-world what's-the-matter
Kyousuke:
W-wait!! ma mate yo!!
2
[With his free hand he takes and flings aside her cigarette. Oh, I think
we know where this is leading to... ^_^]
3
Kyousuke:
I'm sure I'm having a bad kitto
dream. surely
WARUi YUME demo mite-ru n da
bad-dream or-something be-seeing (explan)
4
Madoka: [glaring at his hand on her shoulder]
Well, then let me wake you so-- ne ja atashi ga
up! then I (S)
samasasete-ageru yo
make-you-awake
5
[She connects to his cheek.]
Madoka:
Don't touch me so freely! kiyasuku sawaranai de!
be-easily-of-access not-touch being
Madoka hand FX: ___
pan
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p 22 (68)
1
[She walks away. Kyousuke holds his injured cheek.]
Madoka: ____
If you don't wanna get kega shitakunakattara ne...
hurt... if-not-wanted-to-get-hurt
2
narration:
AYUKAWA!! AYUKAWA!!
3
narration:
I feel as though I've itsu-ka doko-ka de
met an Ayukawa like this sometime at-somewhere
sometime, somewhere...
ko-- yu-- AYUKAWA ni Atta
this-kind-of-Ayukawa (IO) met/seen
yo-- na KI ga suru...
looks-like think/feel
Oh yeah! so-- da!
When I first met her at HAJImete GAKKOU de Atta TOKI...
school... first at-school met time
4
[Komatsu and Hatta approach him.]
narration:
But there's only one thing demo ano TOKI to hitotsu dake
that's different... but from-that-time only-one
chigau tokoro wa
different/wrong feature (T)
Hikaru-chan isn't here...! hikaru-chan ga inai koto da...!
(S) isn't-here thing is
Komatsu:
Hey, I told you. hora na-- da kara itta ro
hey that's-why poss-said
Hatta:
I'm glad you got off so kore gurai de sunde yokatta na--
lightly... with-this-much being-over was-good
5
[Shot of a building in town.]
narration:
But... shikashi...
That means that this is-- kore wa ZANNEN na koto ni
regrettably--not a dream... this-(one) (T) regrettable-thing (IO)
YUME ja nai to yu-- koto wa...
dream is-not that-means
6
Manami: [flashback] ________ ________
Oh, isn't that called a a so-- yu-- no parareru wa--rudo
parallel world? that-kind-of (nom) parallel-world
tte yu-- n desho
called/say-that (poss-explan)
narration: ________ ________
Does this happen to be a hyottoshite parareru wa--rudo
parallel world in which happen-to parallel-world
Hikaru-chan doesn't exist?!
hikaru-chan no inai SEKAI?!
(S) isn't-here world/universe
7
[Walking home with Komatsu and Hatta, he suddenly stops and searches about.]
Kyousuke: [flash}
(Come to think of it, I (so-- ieba kesa
passed through a strange come-to-think-of-it this-morning
fog this morning, and
things ended up this way.) hen na moya no NAKA o
strange haze/mist/fog 's within (O)
to--rinukete kara
passing-through that's-why
ko-- yu-- koto ni natchatta n da)
became-this-kind-of-thing- (explan)
(finality/regret)
Kyousuke FX: __________
kyorokyoro
Kyousuke:
(If that's the case, then (da to sureba ano moya o...)
that fog...) if-that's-the-case that-fog (O)
Komatsu:
What's he doing? nani yatte n da
what doing (explan)
Hatta:
He's certainly acting aitsu yappa okashi-- zo
strangely! that-guy sure-enough strange !!
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p 23 (69)
1
[Pov from further down the street. The three guys walk towards us. In
the foreground is an open manhole cover and a caution sign.]
narration:
But... shikashi...
That fog was nowhere... ano moya wa mou doko ni mo
that-fog (T) now at-nowhere
hazard sign:
Under Construction KOUJICHUU
2
[Kyousuke walks with eyes downcast.]
narration:
...to be found. mitsukeru koto wa dekinakatta
come-across/ thing (T) was-not-able-to
find/catch-sight-of
Takashi: [flashback]
Saying that's fine, but itta wa i-- kedo NIDO to
you won't ever be able to said (T) okay but with-2-times/again
come back again!!
modotte-korenaku naru zo----_
not-being-able-to-return become !! !
3
[He looks up at the sky.]
narration:
But... shikashi...
It's only Hikaru-chan who's hikaru-chan ga inai dake de
gone, yet things are so (S) isn't-here only/alone being
much different...
konna ni KAwatte-shimau nante...
like-this be-different- the-likes-of
(finality/regret)
Kyousuke:
(Now... There's no other (mou... kono SEKAI de Ikite-yuku
choice but to live in this in-this-world living/existing
world.)
shika nai no ka)
only-have (?)
4
[Greatly discouraged, he again turns his gaze down to the ground.]
narration:
I'm ashamed of myself for honno ISSHUN demo hikaru-chan ga
having thought--even for even-for-an-instant (S)
an instant--that it would
be nice if Hikaru-chan inakereba i-- nante
wasn't around... if-isn't-here okay the-likes-of
omotta JIBUN ga hazukashii...
thought self (S) ashamed/embarrass
Kyousuke:
I'm sorry, Hikaru-chan. gomen ne hikaru-chan
Komatsu:
Still saying that. mada itte-ra
still be-saying
5
[With a wide grin, Komatsu slaps Kyousuke on the back, sending him flying
forward.]
Komatsu:
Enough. Cheer up!! i--kagen GENKI DAse yo!!
moderate cheer-up
Komatsu back slap FX: ___
don
6
Kyousuke: [staggering towards the open manhole]
Whoops! ottotto_
Kyousuke hopping FX: ___ ___
ton ton
7
[Falling towards the hole, the fog makes a sudden reappearance.]
Kyousuke:
WAH! wa
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p 24 (70)
1
[Kyousuke crashes through a tree to the ground. Madoka, standing nearby,
spins around at the sound. They are on school grounds.]
Kyousuke FX: ____
dosa
leaves FX: __ __ __
za za za
2
Kyousuke: [clutching his head]
Ow, that hurts! tetetete_
Madoka: [horrified]
Kasuga-kun!! KASUGA-kun_!!
3
[She leans over the stunned Kyousuke.]
Madoka:
Just when I thought you mattaku mo-- inai
weren't around at all... at-all no-longer -be-here
inai to omottara
not-be-here when-thought-that
What were you doing here? nani yatte-ta no yo
what were-doing
konna tokoro de
at-this-kind-of-place
Kyousuke: [dazed]
Nnnn. u~~n
4
[He comes to. His eyes bug out and he flinches away from her.]
Kyousuke:
biku_
5
[He watches as she sticks her hand in her skirt pocket.]
Kyousuke FX:
bikun
reaction FX: ___ ___
gon gon
6
[His face is pure horror.]
narration: __ ______
Not again... C-cigarettes?! mata... ta tabako?!
7
[She gently wipes his face with her handkerchief. He stares up at her,
wide-eyed.]
Madoka:
Here... Show me your face. hora... KAODA shite
look visiting/putting-in-an-appearance
handkerchief FX:
fuki fuki
narration:
Eh? Th-then!! e? ji jaa!!
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p 25 (71)
1
[His pov of a smiling, happy-to-see-her-Darling, Hikaru. She waves.]
Hikaru:
Sempa-a-ai! sempa--i
2
narration:
I-it's Hikaru-chan! hi hikaru-chan da!
3
Hikaru: [running up]
Where were you...?! doko ni ita n desu ka----_?!
at-where were (explan) (?)
narration:
Great!! yokatta!!
I've come back to the MOTO no SEKAI ni modoreta n da
original universe. to-original-universe returned (explan)
4
[The three sit on the grass. Madoka begins to unwrap her box lunch.]
Hikaru: [smiling]
C'mon, Madoka-san! Hurry, sa--_ madoka-san HAYAku HAYAku!!
hurry!!
narration:
Now, I can say with ima dattara hakkiri to ieru
certainty--THIS PLACE is now when-is can-certainly-say
the best!
*koko* ga ICHIBAN!
"this-place" (S) best
4(inset)
[Both girls stare at Kyousuke. Hikaru points to her own cheek. Kyousuke
trembles with nervousness.]
Hikaru:
Oh, there's a handprint on are hoppe no TEGATA
your cheek. cheek 's promissory-note/bill/draft
What happened? do-- shita n desu ka
Madoka:
(It wasn't me today.) (KYOU wa atashi ja nai yo ne)
today (T) I am-not
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