Kimagure Orange Road
"The Shutter Chance!"
Volume 8, Story 2
WB Volume 4, Story 15
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi

Translation by : Hitoshi Doi (16 Feb 1992)
Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
                                 Craig Nishida
                                 Spencer Hastings
                                 Jerry Lee
                                 Thomas Wyatt
                                 Ka-Ping Yee

Last revision : 07-17-95

Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:
     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu

NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
      extras to those of you not having them.
      Example: The subtitles on page 305 (29) are only in the WBs!
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p 305 (29)--TITLE PAGE

[Facial portrait of a tanned Madoka.  She tilts down her sunglasses with
 a fingertip, while looking back at us.  Her hair is up with a scarf tied
 around her head.]

MAIN TITLE (at top)               ________   ______
  The Shutter Chance!             shatta-- - chansu!

SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
  A Mischievous Witchy Girl.      MAJOkKO    - itazura -
                                  witch-girl   mischief/practical-joke
                                              _____
  Doing the Samba in Style!       KOIKI ni    samba!
                                  chic/style  do-samba

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p 306 (30)

1
[A shot of a poster.]
poster:                                  ______
  Kojima Camera Stores            KOJIMA kamera  TENSHU      SAI
                                   camera  shopkeeper  gathering/meeting
                                            _______  ____   _________
  FRESH COUPLE PHOTO CONTEST      sawayaka  kappuru  foto - kontesuto
                                  delightful/refreshing     contest
                                            couple   photo

  GRAND INVITATION                DAI-BOSHUU

  First Prize                     ICHI-I
                                                                     ____
  The photographer will           SATSUEI-SHA ni  wa          ICHIGANrefu
  receive a top-of-the-line,      to-photographer (contrast)  single-lens-
  single-lens reflex camera;                                  reflex-camera
  the model couple will be                    ______      ______
  awarded 30,000 yen.             KOUKYUU     kamera  o,  moderu ni
                                  high-grade  camera (O)  to-models
                                                               _______
                                  natte-kureta,                kappuru ni wa,
                                  turned-into-(favor-to-self)  to-couple  (T)

                                  SHOUKIN  3 MAN EN    o   sashiagemasu.
                                  prize    30,000-yen (O)  give-(to-someone)

  In addition, the first-place    nao,     ICHI-I no SHASHIN wa
  photo will be displayed in      further  first-place-photo (T)
  public here in town as an                                ________
  advertisement poster for        TOUTEN    SENDEN         posuta--  to shite
  our store!!                     our-shop  advertisement  poster    as

                                  CHOUNAI ni   KOUKAI shimasu!!
                                  in-the-town  present-to-the-public

  Entry Details Listed on         kuwashiku  wa,  OUBO         YOUKOU o!!
  Application!!                   in-details (T)  application  essential-points

2
[View pans back to show Komatsu standing on the sidewalk outside a camera
 store, reading the poster.  Kyousuke and Hatta mill about.]
Komatsu:
  Hey hey.                        nani nani

  The winning picture will        ICHI-I      wa   CHOUNAI -CHUU ni
  be displayed around town as     first-place (T)  within-town
  a poster...                     ________
                                  posuta-- to shite......
                                  as-a-poster

sign:                             ______
  ...Camera                       kamera

3
[Tight shot of a camera in the window display.]
Komatsu: [off]
  Kyousuke, why don't you have    KYOUSUKE  omae  hikaru-chan to
  your father take a picture                you   with-Hikaru
  of you and Hikaru-chan?                     _____
                                  no SHASHIN  oyaji-san ni  totte-moraeba?
                                  's photo    by-father     if-take-picture-
                                                            (for-you)

Hatta: [off]                               ____
  After all, he's a pro...        nan se   puro  da mon      na--
                                  because  pro   is (reason)

  So he'll win first prize for    zettai        ICHI-I       da  ze
  sure!                           absoluteness  first-place  is  !

4
Kyousuke:
  No thank you!!                  kekkou desu_!!

narration:                                          ________
  A poster all over the city...   MACHIJUU ni       posuta-- to shite
                                  thruout-the-city  as-a-poster

                                  nante...
                                  the-likes-of

  It's like a criminal's          sarashimon                       ja nai ka
  public display.                 be-pilloried/exposed-to-ridicule

5
[The three continue on their way home from school.]
Komatsu:                          ______
  The camera stores are using     kamera -YA     me
  this cheap trick to try to      camera  store (derogatory-suffix)
  sell more film!                 _____
                                  sekoi  TE     o   TSUKAi- yagaru
                                  stingy trick (O)  use-(contempt)
                                  ______
                                  firumu o   SUKOshi   demo
                                  film  (O)  a-little  or-something

                                  takusan    Uro-- to shite-ru   n da     ze
                                  plenty-of  are-trying-to-sell  (explan) !

6
[The three part ways.]
Hatta:
  See you.                        ja na

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p 307 (31)

1
[Hatta quickly hides around a corner...]
sign:                                     ________
  Cafe Marvel                     #Cafe#  mareviru

Hatta FX:                         ___
                            za_

2
[...and peers back to watch Kyousuke walk away.]
Hatta FX:                         _______
                            chirari

3
[With the coast clear, he runs back the way they came.]
Hatta:                                  ______
 (I can't let this chance slip    (kono chansu  nogasu   TE   wa   nai!)
  by!)                             this-chance  let-slip hand (T)  not-have

4
Hatta:
 (I'll ask Kurumi-chan or         (kurumi-chan ka manami-chan o   sasotte
  Manami-chan, and take a                      or            (O)  asking
  picture of the two of us!
                                  futari   no SHASHIN o  toru!
                                  2-people 's photo  (O) take-picture
                                                        _____
  I can also use that as          mata  sore        o   dashi ni
  an excuse to get close          also  that-(one) (O)  under-pretext
  to them...)
                                  arekore        SEMAreru
                                  this-and-that  able-to-approach

                                  wake    da  shi...)
                                  reason  is  and-besides
                                  __ __
                       pu pu!

5
Hatta:
 (If I win, we'll be a            (ICHI-I ni       nareba     MACHIJUU ni
  well-known and officially-       in-first-place  if-become  thruout-the-city
  recognized couple throughout
  the city!!)                     SHIrewataru          KOUNIN               no
                                  become-widely-known  official-recognition 's
                                  _______
                                  kappuru  daa----_!!)
                                  couple   be

Hatta FX:                         _______
                         pyu----

6
[Hatta does a pratfall inside the store when he sees Komatsu talking to the
 salesclerk.]
Komatsu:                          ______
  Give me all the film you        firumu aru   dake     ZEMBU  kudasai!
  have!                           film   have  as-much  all    (please)

  Oh, and also an entry form      a  sore to    omote ni     DEte-ta
  for the contest posted             with-that  at-outside/  was-appearing
  outside, and...                               at-the-front
                                  _________
                                  kontesuto no OUBO YOUSHI        to......
                                  contest   's blank-application  and

Hatta pratfall FX:
                           daa----_

7
Komatsu: [wide-eyed innocence]
  Oh, is that you, Hatta-kun?     are  HATTA-kun ja nai ka?

Hatta:
  Hey, you!!                      ano ne~~~~_!!

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p 308 (32)

1
salesclerk:
  I'm sorry.                      suimase--n
                                                ______
  Because of the contest,         okagesama de  firumu wa   ZEMBU
  we're completely sold out       due-to        film   (T)  all
  of film...
                                  Uri-KIremashite...
                                  being-sold-out

Komatsu and Hatta pratfall FX:
                            zuruu

2
Komatsu:
  Shit...                         chikusho--

  Who the hell...!                ittai         doko no  doitsu       daa--_
                                  in-the-world  where's  what-person  is   !

Komatsu FX:                       ________
                     purupuru

Hatta: [amused]                                           _____
  Probably someone like you.      kitto   omae  mitai na  yatsu   da  yo
                                  surely  you   it-seems  fellow  is

3
[Full-length portrait of Akane, as she walks in her school uniform.  This is
 splashed over panels 4 and 6.]

4
[View pans back to show her walking along the sidewalk, outside the camera
 store.]
signs:                               ______
  ...Camera                       ...kamera
                                  ______  _____
  Color Prints                    kara--  purin...

5
Akane:                                     _______   ____   _________
  Hmm, a photo contest for        fu--n    kappuru - foto - kontesuto  kaa
  couples...                               couple    photo  contest    (muse)

  What's this?                    nani nani
                                                 _______
  The first-place couple will     ICHI-I      no kappuru wa   MACHIJUU ni
  have their photo displayed      first-place 's couple  (T)  thruout-the-city
  on a poster throughout the      ________
  city...                         posuta-- to shite...
                                  as-a-poster

6
Akane:
  That's it!                      kore da!

Akane fist-on-palm FX:            ___
                           pon

7
Akane:
 (I'll take a picture of          (atashi ga   KYOUSUKE to  hikaru-chan o
  Kyousuke and Hikaru-chan.        I      (S)           and            (O)

                                  totte-ageru            n da
                                  take-picture-for-them  (explan)

  Then everyone will know         so-- sureba      KYOUSUKE-tachi no NAKA wa
  about their relationship.)      if-do-like-that  their-relationship     (T)

                                  minna ni     SHIrewataru)
                                  by-everyone  become-widely-known

8
Akane: [smiling]
 (He'll be so happy he'll cry!)   (aitsu me...    NAite   yorokobu     zo!)
                                   that-guy       crying  be-delighted !!
                                  __ __ __ __ __
             fu fu fu fu fu

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p 309 (33)

1
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]

2
[A couple clasp hands.]
Umao:
  Ready, Ushiko-san.              sa_  USHIKO-san

Ushiko:
  Yes, Umao-san.                  hai  UMAO-san

3
[View pans back to show the two turning to beam smiles at a camera set up
 on a tripod.]
Umao/Ushiko radiant smile FX:     ______
                          basha_

4
[From the counter, Madoka, Kyousuke and Hikaru turn to watch.]

5
Hikaru:
  What are those people doing?    nani  yatte  n desu   ka     ano HITO-tachi
                                  what  doing  (explan) (?)    those-people
                                                       _______
  I've seen couples taking        SAIKIN yatara    to  kappuru de
  pictures lately...              lately at-random     by-couples

                                  SHASHIN totte-ru    no  mikakeru  kedo...
                                  are-taking-pictures     see/find  but

6
Madoka:
  Oh, that's because a            aa  are        wa   nan demo  KINJO no
  local camera store...               that-(one) (T)  probably  neighborhood's
                                  ______
                                  kamera -YA -san ga......
                                  camera-store    (S)

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                           giku_

7
Kyousuke:
  AHH!  AYUKAWA!                  a--ttoo    AYUKAWA!

Madoka:
  Huh?                            e

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p 310 (34)

1
Kyousuke: [pointing at the door]
  There's a customer.             o-KYAKU-san  da  yo
                                  customer     is

[Both Madoka and Hikaru look at him wide-eyed.]

Madoka:
  Yes, yes.                       hai hai

door FX:                          _____
                          karan

2
[Hikaru goes back to sipping her drink through a straw.]
narration:
  What a relief...                yokatta...
                                               _________
  Hikaru-chan doesn't know        hikaru-chan  kontesuto no koto
  about the contest.                           about-the-contest

                                  SHIranai  n da
                                  not-know  (explan)

3
narration:
  If Hikaru-chan found out...     moshi  hikaru-chan ga   SHIttara
                                  if                 (S)  if-know

[Hikaru pops up with a camera in hand.]

Hikaru FX:
                         piya_

Hikaru:                           _____
  Ta-dah!                         ja~~n

4
[In front of the camera set on a tripod, Hikaru happily hugs Kyousuke
 about his neck.]
narration:
  It'll turn out like this.       ko--       natte
                                  like-this  becoming

camera FX:                        _____
                          kasha

5
[Large posters of the winning Kyousuke-Hikaru photo are plastered on the
 walls surrounding a wide-eyed Madoka.]
narration:
  And if it won by any            soshite   MAN ga ICHI       ICHI-I ni
  chance...                       and/then  if-by-any-chance  in-first-place

                                  demo          nattari shitara
                                  or-something  if-become-(and)

6
[Kyousuke winces as he visualizes an indignant Madoka.]
Madoka primness FX:               ________
                           tsu----n

narration:
  It'll be like this for sure!    ko--       naru    ni   KImatte-ru!
                                  like-this  become (IO)  be-sure-to

Kyousuke FX:
                     zo zo~~_

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p 311 (35)

1
[Kyousuke looks calculatingly at an unsuspecting Hikaru.]
narration:
  I have to do all I can          dekiru      dake  hikaru-chan ni  wa
  to keep Hikaru-chan from        be-able-to  just  by-Hikaru      (contrast)
  finding out about the           _________
  contest...!                     kontesuto no koto  KIzukarenai
                                  about-contest      not-be-found-out

                                  yo-- ni  shinakereba...!
                                  so-that  must-do

2
Akane: [entering]
  Oh, there you are.              a ita ita

3
narration:
  A-Akane!                        a... akane!

Akane:
  I was looking for you.          sagashita yo--

4
Akane: [spotting Madoka, smiling]
  Ohh?!                           are~~~_?!

5
Madoka: [nervous smile]
  Welcome.                        irasshai

Akane: [winking and elbowing Kyousuke in the neck]
  Oh, Ayukawa-san was working     nan da--    AYUKAWA-san tte  koko de
  here.                                                   (T)  at-this-place
                                  _____
                                  baito shite-ta  no
                                  was-working

6
[A crying child spills a glass at one of the tables.  Madoka rushes over with
 a towel.]
mother:
  I'm sorry...                    suimase~~~~n

kid crying FX:
                          bie---

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p 312 (36)

1
[Akane stands behind Kyousuke and Hikaru, who sit at the counter.  Both
 look back at her in puzzlement.]
Akane:
  Hmm.                            fumu

2
[Smiling, Akane pushes the two together.  Kyousuke's and Hikaru's eyes
 grow large.]
Akane:
  Oh, sit closer together.        a  motto  yorisotte
                                     more   drawing-closer/sitting-closer

Akane FX:
                        pitan

3
[Akane adds another straw to Hikaru's drink.]
Akane:
  This is fine.                   kore de        yoshi
                                  with-this/now  all-right

straw FX:                         _____
                          chapu

4
[Akane shouts like a drill sergeant.  Her charges leap to comply.]
Akane:
  Okay.  Smile and drink the      hai   nikkori WARAtte
  juice!                          okay  smiling-(a-beautiful-smile)-(and)
                                  ______
                                  ju--su nonde
                                  drinking-juice

Kyousuke and Hikaru reflex FX:
                           da_

5
[Akane takes a picture of the sweethearts sharing the same drink.]
camera FX:                        _____
                           pasha

6
Hikaru: [looking up]
  ?                               ?

Kyousuke FX:
                          gyo_

7
Kyousuke:
  Wh-what are you doing all of    na nani sun    da------_  ikinari!!
  a sudden?!!                        what doing  are     !  all-of-a-sudden/
                                                            without-warning

Kyousuke stand-up FX:
                            gatan

8
[His anger disappears as he realizes...]
narration:
  This is awful.  Where's         mazui     AYUKAWA  IMA  no...?!
  Ayukawa now...?!                unsavory           now

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p 313 (37)

1
[He wipes his brow when he sees that Madoka is busy talking to the mother
 of the crying child.]
Kyousuke:                         ___
                           ho_

narration:
  Oh good!                        yokatta!

  She wasn't looking.             mite-nai

2
Akane: [winking and exiting]
  Leave the rest to me!           ato       wa   makasenasai!
                                  remainder (T)  leave-to-me-(command)

  It'll win first prize for       ZETTAI        ICHI-I       da  kara   ne!!
  sure!!                          absoluteness  first-place  be  that's-why

Kyousuke:
  W-wait a minute!                chi chotto mate yo_

3
[Akane smiles and gives Madoka a thumbs-up.]
Akane:
  Good-bye, Madoka-chan!          ja mata ne-- madoka-chan!

  Next time, let's take a         KONDO          wa   atashi-tachi no SHASHIN
  picture together, okay?         next-time/soon (T)  picture-of-us

                                  torimasho--         ne
                                  shall-take- = not-be

8
[Kurumi, holding the phone, turns to Kyousuke.]
Kurumi:
  Oniichan, Father's got a        oni--chan  oto--san ga   YOUJI
  job for you!                    father   (S)  errand/business

                                  tanomarete         tte!
                                  is-asking/relying  (quote)

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p 314 (38)

1
[Kyousuke sits at the bench at a bus stop.]

2
Kyousuke:                                  _____
  That Dad--abusing his son       mattaku  oyaji no yatsu  MUSUKO o
  again.                          really   that-dad        son   (O)

                                  kokiTSUKAi          -yagatte
                                  drive/work-one-hard (contempt
                                        ____
  It's such a hassle to take      mo--  basu no ru no mendo--  da  shi
  the bus.                              bus  's       trouble  is  and-besides
                                  __________
  Maybe I should just teleport.   terepo--to shichao--       ka na
                                  shall-teleport-(finality)  I-wonder

sign:                             ____
  Bus                             basu

3
Madoka: [off]
  Kasuga-kun!                     KASUGA-kun!

Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            _____
                           dokin

4
[Kyousuke turns to see Madoka standing near.]

5
Kyousuke:
  Ayukawa!                        AYUKAWA!

Madoka:
  Where are you going at          doko   iku no  JIKAN ni
  this hour...?                   where  going   at-time/hour

6
Kyousuke:                         _____    _______
  I have to bring something       oyaji no sutajio ni  todoke
  to my father's studio.          to-father's-studio   report/notice

                                  mono  sa
                                  thing

  Where are you going?            AYUKAWA wa   doko ni?
                                          (T)  to-where

Madoka:                           _______
  I'm on my way home from ABCB.   abakabu owatte         KAEru
                                  ABCB    closing-(and)  return-home

                                  tokoro   yo
                                  occasion
                                               ____
  Then we're on the same bus!     ja    onaji  basu  ne!
                                  then  same   bus

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p 315 (39)

1
Madoka: [leaning to read the posted bus schedule]
  Just as I thought--it seems     yappari    mo--     itchatta  mitai  ne
  it's already left.              after-all  already  went-(finality/regret)
                                                                seems

2
Kyousuke: [looking at his watch]
  Oh?  But it should be           are  datte  11-JI 10-FUN  desho
  here at 11:10.                       but    11:10         poss-be

  It's now exactly 10 after.      IMA  cho--do    10-FUN      da    yo
                                  now  precisely  10-minutes  it-is

3
[Isolated shot of the posted bus schedule.]
Madoka: [off]                                   ____
  This bus always leaves 2 or     koko       no basu  no kuse de
  3 minutes early at the end      this-place 's bus   in-habit-of
  of the day.                         ____
                                  SHUUbasu      CHIKAku        naru to
                                  the-last-bus  approximately  when-become

                                  2~~3 -FUN      wa   HAYAku  itchau  no yo
                                  2-to-3-minutes (T)  early   go-(finality/
                                                              regret)

Kyousuke: [off]                         ____
  What a lousy bus!               hidoi basu!

4
narration:
  But...                          demo...

  Thanks to that I can be         okage de   konna JIKAN ni     AYUKAWA to
  with Ayukawa now...             thanks-to  at-time-like-this  with-Ayukawa

                                  ISSHO ni  natchattari shite......
                                  together  become-(finality)-(and)

Kyousuke: [smiling]
 (What a deal!)                   (korya  mo--ke mono!)
                                          good-bargain/a-godsend

5
[Madoka makes a selection at a nearby vending machine...]
vending machine FX:               _______  _____
                  ji~~~~_  gacha

6
[...and she comes back with two cans.]
Madoka:                                   ____
  And, it's no fun just           tada    basu o   matte-ru    no    mo
  waiting for the bus...          merely  bus (O)  be-waiting  (nom) as-well

                                  tsumaranai  kara...
                                  dull        that's-why

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p 316 (40)

1
Madoka:                           ___
  Here.                           hoi

Kyousuke catch FX:                ___
                            pon

2
Kyousuke:                         ________
  Thank you.                      sankyu--

3
[Kyousuke stares at the label of the can as Madoka pulls the tab off hers.]
Kyousuke:                                      ______
  Hey-y-y!  This is beer?!        are--_  kore bi--ru?!

Madoka beer FX:                   ______
                        pushu_



4
[Tight shot of their cans as they toast their drinks.]
Madoka:                           ______
  Kampai .                kampai

narration:
  In the middle of the night,     YOfuke ni      konna TOKORO de
  at a place like this, a high    late-at-night  at-this-kind-of-place
  school boy and girl are
  going "Kampai"...               KOUKOUSEI           no DANJO       ga
                                  high-school-student 's man-&-woman (S)
                                  ______
                                  kampai   nante...
                                  cheers!  the-likes-of

5
[View pans back to show the two seated at the bench, drinking their beer.]
narration:
  What'll we do if a policeman    omawari-san    ni  demo        mitsukattara
  catches us?                     officer-(cop) (IO) or-someone  if-discovered

                                  do-- shiyou?
                                  what-will-do

6
[Kyousuke glances at Madoka as he sips at his can.  Madoka looks over at the
 case by his side.]

7
Madoka: [off]                                             ______
  Is that your father's           sore        oto--san no kamera?
  camera?                         that-(one)  father's-camera

Kyousuke: [off]
  Yeah.                           un

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p 317 (41)

1
Madoka:
  Do you know how to take         KASUGA-kun wa   toreru                no?
  pictures?                                  (T)  able-to-take-(pictures)

Kyousuke:
  What?                           e

2
Kyousuke: [opening the case]
  A little.                       chotto wa ne
                                                            _____
  I've been watching my father    chiisai KORO kara         oyaji no SHIGOTO
  work since I was small...       from-when-was-small/tiny  father's-work

                                  yoku       mite-ta       kara...
                                  carefully  was-watching  that's-why

3
[He visualizes himself at age 5.  He aims a camera at his father.  Various
 screw, bolts and springs pop out of the camera.]
narration:                                       _____    ______
  I've been scolded many times    yoku           oyaji no kamera
  for playing with his camera     usually/often  father's-camera
  without permission...
                                  KATTE ni        ijitte                wa
                                  w/o-permission  touching/playing-with (T)

                                  shikarareta  kke
                                  was-scolded  (musing)

notation below panel:
  Once was not enough.            ICHI  BI/MI/IYA                  ja nai yo
                                  one   all-the-more/increasingly  is-not

4
[Madoka portrait--she gently smiles.]

5
Kyousuke:                         _____
  My father specializes in        oyaji  wa   FUUKEI  SENMON     da  kedo
  scenery, but I would...         father (T)  scenery specialty  is  but
                                  ___
                                  ore  dattara...
                                  me   if-it-was

6
[Holding camera in hand, he suddenly turns to look at the world's most
 perfect, photogenic model...]

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p 318 (42)

1
Kyousuke: [looking thru the camera at her]
  ...like to take pictures of     NINGEN  o   toritai                 yo
  people.                         humans (O)  want-to-take-(pictures)

2
Madoka:                           _________
  Kasuga Kyousuke, the            kameraman KASUGA KYOUSUKE ne
  photographer.

3
narration:
  I know.  While we have the      so-- da  kono SAI      da  kara
  chance, why don't I take a               this occasion is  that's-why
  picture of us?
                                  ore to  AYUKAWA no SHASHIN  totchao--
                                  I   and         's picture  shall-take-
                                                              (finality)

                                  ka na
                                  I-wonder

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                             hikku

Kyousuke: [face flushed]                                 _________
 (But I can't enter it in the     (to itte-mo            kontesuto ni
  contest anyways...)              even-tho-saying-that  in-contest

                                  DAseru          wake    nai       kedo...)
                                  able-to-submit  reason  not-have  but

4
[He sets up the camera on a tripod.]
narration:
  I don't have many pictures      AYUKAWA to ISSHO      no SHASHIN  tte
  of me with Ayukawa.             together-with-Ayukawa 's pictures (T)

                                  anmari      nakatta  mon    na
                                  -many  not-had  reason

Kyousuke:
  Set it up like this.            kore       o   ko-- yatte
                                  this(one) (O)  doing-like-this

5
Madoka:
  What are you doing?             nani  shite-ru no?
                                  what  are-doing

Kyousuke:                         __ __ __
  Heh, heh, heh...                he he he

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p 319 (43)

1
[The flash goes off in his face.]
camera FX:                        _____
                           basha

2
Kyousuke: [working on the camera]
 (I can't get this right          (yopparatte-te  umaku         ikanai  ya...)
  because I'm drunk...)            being-drunk    successfully  not-go

Madoka: [irritated]               _______
  Aha...  So you're...            haha--n  sate   wa......
                                  indeed   now/so (T)

3
[She springs to her feet.  Kyousuke rushes back to her, trying to calm her
 down.]
Madoka:                                               _________
  Hold it.  I don't want to       chotto  atashi wa   kontesuto no SHASHIN
  take any pictures for the       a-bit   I      (T)  contest   's picture
  contest...
                                  nante...
                                  or-such

Kyousuke:
  Sure.  Just sit there!          hai  sono mama!
                                       just-like-that

Kyousuke FX:                      ___ ___ ___ ___
         ta_ ta_ ta_ ta_

camera timer FX:                  _____
                           ji~~~

4
[Tight shot of Kyousuke's foot as it hits his beer can...]
Kyousuke FX:
                           tsuru_

5
[...and he trips right towards Madoka.]
Kyousuke:
  Oh-oh-oh.                       to to to

6
[The camera catches him just as he plasters himself all over her.]
camera FX:                        _____
                           basha

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p 320 (44)

1
[Tight shot of parts of their bodies pressed together.]
camera FX:                        _____
                           basha

Madoka:
  AH!                             a_

2
[Holding palm out at the camera.]
Madoka:
  No, wait!                       iya matte!

camera FX:                        _____
                           pasha

3
[Their pov of the camera.]
Madoka: [off]                     ______
  Stop the camera!!               kamera  TOmete   yo!!
                                  camera  stopping

camera FX:                        _____ _____
                    basha basha

Kyousuke: [off]
  Oh, s-sorry...                  a  go gome...

4
[Light falls upon the startled forms of Kyousuke and Madoka.  Kyousuke is
 still perched over Madoka.]

5
policeman: [with flashlight]
  Hey-y-y!  What are you doing    kora----_  soko de        nani  o
  there?!!                                !  at-that-place  what (O)

                                  shite-ru_!!
                                  are-doing

Kyousuke and Madoka:
  AH!                             a_

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p 321 (45)

1
[Kyousuke looks down at the empty beer cans...]
narration:
  Th-this is...                   ko_ kore wa......

2
[...then leaps up and drags Madoka after him.]
narration:
  There's nothing to do but       NIgeru_  kya nai!!
  run!!

Kyousuke:
  Follow me!                      kotchi   e!
                                  this-way to

Kyousuke and Madoka FX:           ___
                            da_

3
camera FX:                        ______ ______
                   basha_ basha_

4
[Kyousuke looks back...]
Kyousuke:                                 ______
  Oh no, the camera!!             ikenai  kamera!!

5
[...and flashes with the Power.]

6
[The camera levitates about 20 meters into the air, startling the police
 officer.]
camera FX:                        _______
                       gyuuuun

7
policeman:
  I-it flew...                    to tonda...
                                  ______
  The camera flew...              kamera ga tonda...

policeman FX:                     _____
                       heta_

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p 322 (46)

1
[From below, Kyousuke gestures up a concrete embankment at Madoka, who kneels
 at the top.]
Kyousuke:
  Hurry!!                         HAYAku!!

2
Madoka: [standing]
  I-I can't!!                     so sonna koto          ittatte!!
                                     that-kind-of-thing  even-tho-say

Kyousuke:
  Just jump!!                     i-- kara  tonde!!
                                  come-on   jumping

3
Madoka FX:                        ___
                           da_

4
[The levitating camera continues to take pictures...]
camera FX:                        ______
                          kasha_

5
[...as Kyousuke catches Madoka neatly.]
catch FX:                         __
                           do

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p 323 (47)

1
[They freeze in position, both with eyes wide.]

2
narration:
  I-I held her!!                  da daichatta!!

3
[Both blush.]
Madoka:
  Thank you...                    ......arigato

Kyousuke:                         ___
    S-sure...                ha_  i ie...

4
[He sets her feet gently on the ground.]
Madoka:
  That picture you just took...   sakki               totta SHASHIN...
                                  a-little-while-ago  taken picture

Madoka FX:                        ___
                             ton

5
Madoka:
  Don't ever show it to anyone.   ZETTAI        HITO ni    misenai   de   ne
                                  absoluteness  to-person  not-show  being

Kyousuke:
  O-okay.                         u un

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p 324 (48)

1
Madoka: [angrily]                                        _________
  Promise me that you won't       machigatte-mo          kontesuto nanka ni
  enter it in the contest,        even-tho-make-mistake  in-contest-(somehow)
  even by mistake!
                                  DAsanai    tte  YAKUSOKU shite!
                                  not-submit (T)  promising

Kyousuke:
  I won't!  I promise.            shinai!   YAKUSOKU suru yo
                                  not-do    promise

2
Madoka: [smile]
  Good!                           yoshi!

3
Kyousuke:                             ____
  Ah!  The bus...!                a_  basu ga...!

bus FX:                           ____
                          buon

4
[The sun shines on the exterior of the Kasuga apartment building.]
Takashi: [off]
  You were always one to break    mattaku  omae  MUKASHI kara   yoku
  cameras...!                     really   you   from-long-ago  always/often
                                  ______
                                  kamera  o   kowasu  yatsu   da  na~~~~!
                                  camera (O)  break   fellow  are

Kyousuke: [off]
  I-I'm really sorry.             do do--mo suimasen

5
Takashi: [reading the paper]
  Oh, that reminds me.            a  sou sou
                                                             ______
  The film that was inside...     NAKA ni    haitte-ta       firumu...
                                  in-inside  was-containing  film

Kurumi FX:                        ________
                     mogumogu

Kyousuke: [blushing]              ___
  AH!                             ha_

narration:
  Oh shoot.  I left the film      a shimatta  are        Ireta
  inside!!                                    that-(one) placed-in

                                  manma        da!!
                                  ?????        is
                                  right-before?

[Manami flips the eggs.]

frying FX:                        ______
                          ju~~~~

6
Takashi:                          _________
  I entered it in the contest     kontesuto ni  DAshitoite-yatta         zo
  for you!                        in-contest    submitted-for-you-(for-  !!
                                                future-sake)

  That's what you wanted,         omae  sono tsumori    datta  n daro?
  right?                          you   that intention  was    (poss-explan)
                                                        _________
  Actually, I'm one of the        jitsu wa  washi  sono kontesuto no
  judges of that contest.         actually  I      that-contest   's

                                  SHINSA-IN  na  n da    yo
                                  judge      am  (explan)

newspaper banner:                          ______ ______
  Kimagure Orange Road Times      kimagure orenji ro--do SHIMBUN

Kyousuke pratfall FX:
                          do_

[Both twins look on in amazement.]

7
narration:
  Wh-what the hell did he         na nante  koto   o
  do that for...?!                   what!  thing (O)

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p 325 (49)

1
Kyousuke: [walking to school]
 (What should I do about          (do-- shiyou    ano SHASHIN...
  those pictures...?               what-shall-do  those-pictures

  But since those were strange    demo   HEN na toko bakkari   torete-ru
  pictures, they won't be         but    only-strange-moments  be-taking
  picked...)
                                  kara
                                  that's-why

                                  NYUUSEN wa shinai   yo na...)
                                  not-be-selected

2
[Kyousuke walks past a crowd that's gathered about the camera store.  Komatsu
 and Hatta stand in his path.]
Hatta:
  Hey, Kasuga.                    yo-- KASUGA

3
Komatsu: [angrily]
  When did you take a picture     omae  itsu no mani  anna SHASHIN
  like that...?!                  you   unawares      that-kind-of-pic

                                  totta  n da      yo----_
                                  took   (explan)

Kyousuke: [horror-struck]
                          gyo_

4
narration:
  C-can't be...                   so sonna...

  That means?!                    to yu-- koto wa?!

5
[Horrified, he pushes his way into the crowd.]
Kyousuke:
 (H-how awful!!                   (ta TAIHEN daa----_!!

  The pictures with Ayukawa,      AYUKAWA to   no SHASHIN ga   shikamo...
  and on top of that...           with-Ayukawa 's picture (S)  moreover
                                                      ______
  With such poses...)             anna          mazui po--zu  bakkari...)
                                  that-kind-of  unwise-poses  only

Kyousuke FX:                      ___
                            don

Hatta: [to Komatsu]
  But, with Kasuga's picture      shikashi na--
  winning first prize, I
  wonder if he had his father     KASUGA no SHASHIN ga   ICHI-I  to wa na--_
  take the picture after all?            's picture (S)  first-place
                                                                 even-tho/but
                                             _____
                                  yappari    oyaji-san ni  totte-moratta
                                  after-all  by-father     took-(for-Kyou)

                                  no kaa?
                                     (?)

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p 326 (50)

1
[The winning picture.  The one Akane took.  Hikaru winks and Kyousuke smiles
 back at us as both sip from straws set in the same cocktail glass.]
sign:
  First Place:                    ICHI-I

  Kasuga Kyou...  Hiyama Hi...    KASUGA KYOU...  HIYAMA hi...

2
[Kyousuke portrait--surprise.]

3
[He looks around and spots Madoka nearby.]

4
[Madoka portrait--she smiles gently, letting out a small sigh of relief.]

5
Hikaru: [flying tackle]
  I'M SO HAPPY, SEMPA-A-AI!       ureshii_  sempa--i!

6
Hikaru:
  So this was what that           ano SHASHIN   ko-- yu-- koto      datta
  picture was for!!               that-picture  this-kind-of-thing  was

                                  n desu    ne----_!!
                                  (explan)

Akane: [smiling]
  Look, look, Kyousuke.           mite mite KYOUSUKE
                                                 ______
  I got the first prize           ICHI-I      no kamera  moratchatta
  camera.                         first-place 's camera  received-(finality)

Komatsu and Hatta:                 ___
 (We ended up going all over      (ore-tachi  KEKKYOKU    MACHIJUU
  town but still couldn't          we         in-the-end  thruout-the-city
  buy any film...)                                              ______
                                  mawatta          no ni        firumu
                                  made-the-rounds  even-though  film

                                  KAenakattari shite...)
                                  was-not-able-to-buy-(and)

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p 327 (51)

1
[Inside the store, Takashi sits while the salesclerk stands behind the
 sales counter and looks at pictures.]
salesclerk:
  He is indeed your son,          sasuga wa  KASUGA-SENSEI no MUSUKO-san
  Kasuga-sensei.                  indeed                   's son

                                  desu ne
                                  is

  He took a really nice           jitsu ni  ii SHASHIN    datta  n desu  kedo
  picture, but...                 truly     nice-picture  was   (explan) but

Takashi:
  Ohh.  How embarrassing.         iya  o-hazukashii

2
salesclerk: [smiling at a photo in hand]
  Too bad there was only          ZANNEN na koto     ni   tatta hitotsu dake
  one thing that didn't           regrettable-thing (IO)  only-one
  follow the contest rules.       _________
                                  kontesuto no OUBO         KITEI      kara
                                  contest   's application  regulation that's-
                                                                       why

                                  hazureta     tokoro ga   arimashite
                                  was-against  case   (S)  existing

3
[The photo in question.  Kyousuke, winking, catches a beaming Madoka in his
 arms.]
salesclerk: [off]
  The rules said "in the          KITEI de      wa   "TAIYOU no moto de"
  sunlight," so...                in-regulation (T)   in-sunlight

                                  to       natte-ta      mono    desu
                                  (quote)  was-becoming  reason  is

                                  kara...
                                  that's-why

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  Kimagure Orange Road 4 (End)    kimagure orenji  -  ro--do  4 (KAN)

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