Kimagure Orange Road
"Let It Be a Hurricane!"
Volume 7, Story 6
WB Volume 4, Story 10
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi

Translation by : Hitoshi Doi (27 Jun 1992)
Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
                                 Craig Nishida
                                 Spencer Hastings
                                 Thomas Wyatt
                                 Matthew Klippenstein
                                 Jordan Lampe

Last revision : 07-03-95

Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:
     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu

NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
      extras to those of you not having them.
      Example: The subtitles on page 201 (115) are only in the WBs!
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p 201 (115)--TITLE PAGE

[Madoka in half-portrait, wearing her school uniform.]

MAIN TITLE (at top)                                   _________
  Let It Be a Hurricane!          o-makase            harike--n!
                                    let-(it)-do-as-   hurricane
                                    (it)-pleases

SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
  Without Asking the Looking      KAGAMI         ni   kiite-minakute mo
  Glass, If You Look into the     looking-glass (IO)  even-tho-not-trying-
  Eye of a Rainbow, You Should                        to-ask
  Be Able to See My Future...
                                  NIJI      no HITOMI          o  nozoitara
                                  a-rainbow 's pupil-(of-eye) (O) if-look-in/
                                                                  if-peep-in

                                  watashi no MIRAI ga   mieru hazu...
                                  my-future        (S)  should-see

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p 202 (116)



1
[Shot of a train.]

2
[Tight shot of a guy wearing dark glasses and with Walkman headphones on.]
loud music FX:                    ___ _____ ___ _____
             zun chaka zun chaka

3
[View pans back to show him sprawled on a seat, tapping his foot on the floor.
 Seated next to him is a cute girl of 15-16 years with shoulder-length hair.
 This is Akane.  I guess she's supposed to have red or brown hair.]
punk foot FX:                     ___ ___
                   tan tan

overwhelming presence FX:
                         doka~~

4
[Akane and other passengers look on with dismay.]
loud music FX: [off]              ___ _____ ___ _____
             zun chaka zun chaka

5
Akane:
  Hey, you.                       chotto anata

  Think of the nuisance you're    mawari       no MEIWAKU  mo  KANGAete yo
  causing others.                 surroundings 's nuisance too thinking

6
[He looks at her menacingly, over the top of his dark glasses.]
punk:
  What's that...?!                nan da too~~~~_?!

  Nee-chan, you're pretty         kawaii KAO shite  GENKI ii
  spirited for a cute girl.       cute-face  doing  lively/high-spirits

                                  jan     ne--chan
                                  is-not  sister

punk FX:                          _____
                          giro_

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p 203 (117)

1
[She flinches.]
Akane heartbeat FX:               _____
                           dokin

2
punk: [dragging her down the aisle by the wrist]
  Then why don't we get off       jaa   orite              yukkuri     o
  and I'll listen to your         then  getting-off-train  leisurely/ (O)
  lecture at our leisure?                                  at-ease

                                  SEKKYOU demo          kikimasho--  kaa
                                  lecture or-something  shall-listen (?)

Akane:
  L-let me go!  No-o-o!           ha hanashite yo    ya da--_

public address:
  Nakagawa Station...             NAKAGAWA EKI~~  NAKAGAWA EKI~~
  Nakagawa Station...

3
[The arm of a schoolgirl reaches out to the volume-control of the punk's
 Walkman, which sits in his coat pocket.]
arm FX:                           ___
                          su_

4
[It's Hikaru.  She cranks it up to full power.]
walkman FX:
                          kui_

punk:
  GYAAAAA!                        gya----_

5
[Akane, back to the now-open doors, looks on wide-eyed.  Hikaru patiently
 watches the punk stumbling about.]
punk:
  Wh-who did tha-a-at?!           da dare daa~~_

6
Hikaru: [looking at her watch]
  3 - 2 - 1                       3 - 2 - 1

punk FX:                          __________
                       kyorokyoro

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p 204 (118)

1
[She punts him off the train.]
Hikaru:
  ME!                             atashi yo--_

Hikaru shove FX:                  ____
                           doka

punk:
  OH-WAH!                         owa_

2
[Perfect timing--the train doors close.]
punk:                                            _______
  You pipsqueak!                  kuono          chibi--_
                                   = this  midget/kid/tiny-tot

train door FX:                    _______
                         pushu--

3
[Through the door, Hikaru pulls down an eyelid and sticks out her tongue.]
Hikaru:
  Bleah.                          be--

train FX:                         _____
                         go--_

punk:
  W-wait!                         ma mate--_

4
[Hikaru turns, blushing at all the attention...]
Akane:
  Th-thanks.                      a arigatou

crowd FX:                         __________  ____
              pachipachi  ku--

Hikaru:
  Ah!                             ha_

5
[She hides her face and runs off down the aisle.]
Hikaru:
  Kyaaa!  I'm so embarrassed.     kya--_  hazukashi

Hikaru FX:                        _______
                           pyu----

6
[Akane watches with a gentle smile.]

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p 205 (119)

1
[Madoka and Kyousuke walk down the sidewalk in school uniforms.]
Madoka:
  Thanks for going shopping       KAIMONO   tsukiatte-kurete
  with me.                        shopping  going-about-with-me
                                  ________
                                  sankyu--

  You were very helpful!          tasukatta wa!

3
Kyousuke:
  My pleasure!                    o-yasui GOYOU sa!
                                  no-trouble-at-all/with-pleasure
                                               ____
  Besides, I had nothing else     do--se       hima       na n da     shi
  to do.                          in-any-case  free-time  is (explan) consider

4
[He waves good-bye as they go their separate ways.]
Kyousuke:
  See ya.                         ja ne

sign:
  "Water Demon War," by Wada.     SUI   MA     SENKI
  On sale March 1st.              water demon  record-of-war
                                  ____
                                  wada  3-GATSU  1-KA  HATSUBAI
                                        March    1st   on-sale

large sign:
  Books                           HON

5
[He stops to watch her as she heads to ABCB, one building away.]
narration:                                                           ______
  It turned out we're in the      KOUTOU-BU        demo  ISSHO    no kurasu
  same class in high school,      sr-high-section        together 's class
  and Ayukawa's in a good mood
  lately!                         ni nareta           shi
                                  was-able-to-become  and-besides
                                                                    ______
                                  SAIKIN              AYUKAWA to ii mu--do!
                                  latest/most-recent  w/Ayukawa  good mood

6
[He materializes outside his apartment building.]
Kyousuke teleport FX:             ____
                          shu_

narration:
  I took a shortcut without       OMOwazu
  thinking...                     in-spite-of-oneself/involuntarily

                                  CHIKAMICHI shichattari shite
                                  took-shortcut-(finality/regret)-(and)

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p 206 (120)

1
[He materializes inside the front door to his home.]
Kyousuke teleport FX:             ____
                          shu_

2
Kyousuke:
  I'm home!                       tadaima--_

3
[Kyousuke drinks juice at the open refrigerator, but nearly chokes when he
 hears...]
Takashi: [off]
  HEY-Y-Y!  KYOUSUKE!!            kora--_  KYOUSUKE!!

carton:                           ______
  Orange.  100!                   orenji  100!

4
Takashi: [sternly]                           __________
  You teleported home just now,   omae  IMA  terepo--to de   KAEtte-konakatta
  didn't you?                     you   now  by-teleporting  not-came-home

                                  ka?
                                  (?)

Kyousuke: [wincing]
  No one noticed me, so I         DARE ni mo  KIzukarenakatta  shi
  just...                         by-anybody  wasn't-noticed   consider

                                  tsui......
                                  in-the-end

5
Takashi:
  Do you want to move again?!     mata   HIkKOshi shitai  no ka?!
                                  again  want-to-move        (?)

Kyousuke:
  I-I'm sorry.                    go gomen

6
[Kyousuke is then surprised to see...]
Takashi:                          ____ ____ ____
                          kusu kusu kusu

Kyousuke:
  ?                               ?

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p 207 (121)



1
[Akane, still laughing, sheds her disguise.  Kyousuke staggers back.]
Akane:                            _____
  Ah ha ha!  It's me, Kyousuke!   ahaha  atashi da yo!  KYOUSUKE
                                         me     is

Akane transformation FX:          ___
                          pu_

2
[Full-portrait of Akane, dressed as before in sweatshirt and long pants.]

3
Akane:                                        ____
  You're still doing stupid       aikawarazu  doji            bakkari  ne
  things.                         as-usual    bungle/blunder  only

Kyousuke: [goggle-eyed]
  Ahhh!!                          a~~~~_!!

4
Kyousuke: [smiling]
  Akane!!                         akane!!

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p 208 (122)

1
[Akane facial portrait.]
narration:
  Akane is a cousin who's the     akane wa   ONAjiDOSHI no itoko   desu
  same age as me.                       (T)  same-age   's cousin  is
                                                  _chikara_
  She has the Power of            HENSHIN suru     NOURYOKU o   motte-masu!
  Transformation!                 change-into-a-   Power   (O)  is-having
                                  different-person

  But...                          to itte mo...
                                  even-tho-saying-that

2
narration:
  It's really only the Power      AITE ni   TAIshite  ANJI        o  kakete
  of suggestion over others       opponent  against   suggestion (O) starting
  to make them see illusions...                            _chikara_
                                  GENKAKU        o  miseru  NOURYOKU
                                  hallucination (O) show    Power

                                  na  n desu    kedo
                                  is  (explan)  but

Akane:
  Are Kurumi-chan and             kurumi-chan ya manami-chan wa   GENKI?
  Manami-chan okay?                           and            (T)  lively

Kyousuke:
  Uh-hmm.                         un

3
[She sticks her head back into the living room, waving a T-shirt.]
Akane:                                            ______
  Oh, Kyousuke.  Lend me a        a KYOUSUKE  #T# shatsu  kashite-kurenai?
  T-shirt?                                     T-shirt    not-lend-me

4
[Through a partly-open door we see her remove her sweatshirt.]
Akane:
  Gee, it's so hot outside.       mo--  SOTO    wa   atsui  no ne
                                        outside (T)  hot

  I got all sweaty.               ASE kaichatta
                                  sweated-(finality/regret)

5
[View from behind her bare legs as she reenters the living room.  Kyousuke
 is reading that major daily newspaper, "Daily Orange Road".]
Kyousuke:
  But, how unusual...             demo  mezurashi--  naa
                                  but   unusual      (rhet)

  What brings you here?           do-- shita no

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p 209 (123)

1
[His pov of his pretty cousin, standing in an oversized T-shirt.  She's taken
 off her pants as well.]
Akane:
  Ahhh!  You don't look so        a~~~~_   anmari     ureshi so-- ja nai ka~~_
  happy...!                               -very  not-look-happy

2
[He blushes.]
Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            _____
                          doki_

3
Akane:
  I'm now enrolled at Hoshi       atashi  KONDO       HOSHI
  Girls High School, so I         I       now/lately  
  came by to say hi.
                                  JOSHIKOU           ni   haitta   kara
                                  girls-high-school (IO)  entered  that's-why

                                  go-aisatsu      ni
                                  (hon)-greeting (IO)

4
Kyousuke:
  You mean the Hoshi Girls        HOSHI JOSHIKOU          tte      tonari
  High School in the next               girls-high-school (quote)  next
  town?
                                  MACHI      no?
                                  town/city

Akane:
  Yeah.  It's close to here.      so--       koko kara  CHIKAi    desho
                                  like-that  from-here  close-by  poss-be

5
Akane: [winking]
  We're linked by a grim          kusareEN   ne
  fate.                           fatal-bonds/unhappy-&-inseparable-relation

narration:
  She's become so cute that       koitsu       michigaeru hodo
  I can scarcely recognize        this-person  almost-out-of-recognition
  her.                            _______
                                  kawaiku natchatta       na
                                  became-cute-(finality)

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p 210 (124)

1
Kyousuke: [blushing deeply]
  Well, whatever...  But don't    do-- demo i--          kedo
  you care how you look?          not-matter-either-way  but

                                  omae  sono kakko--
                                  you   that-appearance

2
[With a playful grin she pokes him in his forehead...]
Akane:
  You.                            koitsu

3
[...and elbows him in the shoulder.]
Akane:
  You were never embarrassed      itcho  mae ni          hazukashi-gatchatte
  before...                       ?????  before/earlier  came-to-show-signs-
                                                         of-embarrassment-
                                                         (finality)

  Even though we often used to    MAE    wa   yoku   ISSHO ni
  take baths together.            before (T)  often  together
                                  ______
                                  o-furo haitte-ta   kuse ni
                                  were-taking-baths  though

4
Akane:
  So you've reached the point     so-- yu-- no        KI ni suru
  where you're concerned about    that-kind-of-thing  worry/think
  stuff like that?
                                  yo-- ni natta            ka
                                  reached-the-point-where  (?)

5
doorbell FX:                      ___ _____
                       pin po--n

Akane: [heading for the door]
  Oh, it must be your sisters.    a kurumi-tachi        ka na
                                           (and-assoc)  I-wonder

6
Akane: [pleasantly surprised]
  Oh?!                            ara?!

door FX:                          ______
                          gacha_

7
[Akane's pov of Hikaru, who stands slightly surprised.]

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p 211 (125)

1
Akane: [happily]
  Hey!  You're the one from the   ara!  anata wa   DENSHA  no
  train!                                you   (T)  train

Kyousuke: [blushing, a bit horrified]
  H-Hikaru-chan.                  hi hikaru-chan

[Hikaru takes a good look at Akane's outfit...]

2
[...and blushes.]

3
[He winces and rotates his head between Hikaru and the smiling, oblivious,
 and provocatively dressed Akane.]
narration:
  Th-this is bad!                 ma mazui!

Kyousuke:
  Oh.  Sh-she's...  Uh...         a  ko koitsu      wa   sono...
                                        this-person (T)  that

4
[Angrily, Hikaru hefts a cake up to shoulder-level...]
Hikaru:                           _______            _______
  I didn't think you were such    da--rin ga   konna fuketsu na HITO
  a dirty guy, Darling!                   (S)  this-kind-of-dirty-person

                                  da  to wa     OMOwanakatta  wa!
                                  is  (define)  not-thought

Hikaru cake FX:                   ___
                          su_

5
[...launching it squarely in the face of Kyousuke...]
Kyousuke cake FX:
                            be_

6
[...before running off.]
Hikaru FX:                        ___
                            da_

7
[The cake adheres quite nicely to his face.  Akane looks on with concern.]
Kyousuke:
  ..........                      ..........

Akane:                            _______
  Darling?                        da--rin?

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p 212 (126)

1
[He removes the cake and wipes at his brow.]
Akane: [big smile]
  Th-then, that girl is           ji ja    IMA no KO    KYOUSUKE no?!
  your...?!                          then  now 's girl           's

2
Akane: [elbowing him]
  This guy...  When did you       koitsu    itsu  no AIDA ni
  get a cute girlfriend like      this-guy  when  amidst/between
  that?                                ______ _____________
                                  anna kawaii ga--rufurendo     o
                                  that-kind-of-cute-girlfriend (O)

3
Kyousuke: [wincing]
  You...  That's why looking      omae ne--    da kara
  like that...                    you          that's-why
                                        ______
                                  sonna kakkou de         wa...
                                  w/appearance-like-that

Akane: [abashed]
  Oh no.                          a ikene

4
Akane:
  I'm sorry, I'm sorry.           wari-- wari--
                                   = be-to-blame

Kyousuke: [heading out the door]
  Anyway, I have to clear up      tonikaku  GOKAI             o   tokanakya
  this misunderstanding.          anyway    misunderstanding (O)  must-remove

5
Akane:
  Ah, wait!                       a MAtte!

6
[She winks and gives him a thumbs-up.]
Akane:
  Leave it to me!!                atashi ni  makasenasai!!
                                  to-me      leave-(to)-(command)

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p 213 (127)

1
[Shot of the exterior walkway and front door to the Kasuga apartment.]
Kyousuke: [off]
  B-but...                        de demo...

Akane: [off]
  It's okay, it's okay.           i-- kara  i-- kara

  Go wash your face!              KAO   arainasai      yo!
                                  face  wash-(command)

2
[Dressed once more in her sweatshirt and pants, Akane races down the hall.]
door FX:                          _____
                            batan

3
Kyousuke FX:                      ______
                      kyoton

4
[Shot of a street and pedestrian overpass.]

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p 214 (128)

1
[Akane runs down the sidewalk.]
sidewalk sign:
  Stop                            tomare

2
[Isolated shot of a traffic signal.]
narration:
  I did a terrible thing...       WARUi koto  shichatta             na--
                                  bad-thing   did-(finality/regret)

  And yet, that girl is so        shikamo  KYOUSUKE ni  wa
  good that she's probably        and-yet  for-Kyousuke (contrast)
  more than Kyousuke deserves.
                                  mottainai                     hodo    no
                                  be-too-good-for/unworthy-of/  extent  (nom)
                                  be-more-than-one-deserves

                                  i--   KO    da mon          ne
                                  good  girl  (is-the-reason)

sign:
  Akauzu           AKAUZU   2-CHOUME
  City Block 2                        

3
[Tight shot of Akane's shoe as she runs.]
narration:
  If he loses this chance,        are         o   nogashitara
  he won't have any luck with     that-(one) (O)  if-let-(an-opportunity)-
  girls for the rest of his                       slip/if-fail-to-catch
  life...
                                  aitsu     ISSHOU            ONNA no KO ni
                                  that-guy  one's-whole-life  with-girls

                                  EN ga nai                    mama  de------
                                  have-no-connection/relation  just-as-is

4
Akane:
 (Just this once, I have to       (koko       wa   hitotsu  kono  akane-san ga
  do something for him here!)      this-place (T)  one      this            (S)

                                  nantoka           shite-yaranakya)
                                  somehow-or-other  must-do-for-him

5
[Kyousuke visualizes his cousin giving him the thumbs-up.]
Akane: [flashback]
  Leave it to me.                 atashi ni  makasenasai
                                  to-me      leave-(to)-(command)

6
[Kyousuke steps out of the apartment.]
narration:
  She said that, but since        aitsu      anna koto           itte-ta
  she jumps to hasty              that-girl  that-kind-of-thing  was-saying
  conclusions, I wonder
  what she'll do?                 kedo    HAYAtochiri         da kara
                                  but     a-hasty-conclusion  that's-why

                                  nani  shidekasu  ka
                                  what  do         (?)

door FX:                          _____
                            batan

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p 215 (129)

1
[Hikaru stands forlorn.]
Akane:
  There she is...                 ita ita

2
[Panels 2-4 show Akane undergoing her illusionary transformation.  Here,
 Akane sparkles...]
narration:
  Okay.  Here I turn into         yoshi      koko wa   KYOUSUKE ni
  Kyousuke.                       all-right  here (T)          (IO)

                                  narisumashite
                                  impersonating

3
[...and morphs into...]

4
[...Kyousuke!]

5
@Kyousuke:
  Wait!                           MAtte!

6
[Hikaru portrait--she stares back.]

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p 216 (130)

1
Hikaru: [wide-eyed]
  Your cousin?!                   itoko?!

2
Hikaru:
  Ohhhhhh.                        naa--n da

sign:
  Entry by Vehicles Prohibited    SHARYOU   SHINNYUU (SURU)  KINSHI
                                  vehicles  enter            prohibition

nameplate:
   Park                DAI/OU  GIN?  KOKU?  KOUEN
                                  great                park

3
narration:
  The least I can do to make      semete    mono   TSUMIhoroboshi ni
  up for my mistake is to         at-least  thing  in-atonement-for-one's-sins
  make them closer.
                                  kono KO to     no NAKA       o
                                  with-this-girl 's relations (O)

                                  SHINMITSU ni shitoite-ageyou
                                               
                                  shall-make-on-intimate-terms-for-him-
                                  (for-future-sake)

Hikaru: [meekly]                  ______
  I'm sorry for clobbering        ke--ki  butsukete         gomennasai
  you with that cake.             cake    hitting/flinging  sorry!

4
narration:
  Kyousuke will be pleased!       yorokobu zo--  KYOUSUKE

@Kyousuke:
 (Under these circumstances,      (KATTE         shittaru
  a young girl's heart is          condition/    (shite-aru?)
  something like...)               circumstance   be-done

                                  OTOME         no KOKORO  to yu--
                                  maiden/virgin 's heart   that

                                  yatsu  de...)
                                  thing  being

5
@Kyousuke:
  Say...  Do you like me?         nee...  boku no koto  SUki?
                                          about-me      liking

6
Hikaru: [beaming a smile]
  OF COURSE!                      mochiron!

[Unaware of the magnitude of the response she's triggered in Hikaru, Akane
 continues on, gaze downcast.]

@Kyousuke:                                  ____
  Me, too.  You're the            boku mo   kimi ga
  one...                          I    too  you  (S)

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p 217 (131)

1
[That is, until Hikaru rockets across and collars @Kyousuke by the neck.]
Hikaru FX:                        ____
                           daa_

Hikaru:
  I LO-O-OVE YOU!!                daa--i  SUki!!

2
[@Kyousuke looks across at a couple who's stopped to watch with eyes grown
 wide.]
narration:
  Wha?!                           na_?!

lady 1:                           _____
  Ohhhh.                          o~~~~

3
[More people stop and stare.  They're REALLY shocked.]
lady 2:                                    _______
  This is the first time I've     a-- yu-- kappuru     hajimete      mita!
  seen a couple like that!        that-kind-of-couple  for-1st-time  saw

guy:
  Hey, look at that!              oi  miro yo--_

lady 3:                                   ___________
  Oh wow!  That's abnormal!       uwa--_  abuno--maru~~~~_!

4
@Kyousuke: [wincing, sweating and wearing Hikaru around the neck]
 (O-oh no!  H-hey, this girl      (ya ya da--_    chi chotto  kono KO
  is rather unreserved.)                                      this-girl

                                  kekko-- SEKKYOKU-TEKI na   no ne--)
                                  quite   positive/go-ahead     (rhet)

5
Hikaru:                                _______
  Say, Darling.                   nee  da--rin
                                                         ______
  What can two people do          futari de      dekiru  ke--ki yori
  together that's sweeter         with-2-people  can-do  than-cake
  than cake?
                                  AMAi mono      naa--n da?
                                  sweet-thing    what-is

Hikaru heartbeat FX:              _____
                          doki_

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p 218 (132)

1
[Elsewhere, the real Kyousuke stops when he hears...]
Hikaru: [off]                          _______
  Say, Darling.                   nee  da--rin
                                                         ______
  What can two people do          futari de      dekiru  ke--ki yori
  together that's sweeter         with-2-people  can-do  than-cake
  than cake?
                                  AMAi mono      naa--n da?
                                  sweet-thing    what-is

2
Kyousuke:
 (That's Hikaru-chan's voice?!)   (IMA no KOE    hikaru-chan?!)
                                   now 's voice

3
[He searches about.]
narration:
  Maybe she turned into me and    aitsu     moshiya        ore ni
  chased after Hikaru-chan...     that-gal  by-any-chance  into-me

                                  BAkete        hikaru-chan ni...
                                  transforming  to-Hikaru

4
[He looks over some bushes...]

5
[...and staggers to see Hikaru embracing Akane.]
Kyousuke pratfall FX:             ____
                            zuru

Akane:
  Ah, uhh...                      a ano.....

Hikaru:                           _____
  Eh-heh heh...                   ufufu...

Hikaru FX:                        ____ ____
                icha icha

6
[His pov of the two.  Akane spots him and smiles.]
Akane:
  Ah!                             ha_

7
narration:
  Wh-what the heck are they       na nani  yatte  n da      ittai?!
  doing?!                            what  doing  (explan)  in-the-world

Kyousuke: [amused]                ___
                            pu_

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p 219 (133)

1
narration:
  Oh yeah!  Her Power of          so-- ka!    aitsu no
  Suggestion only works                       that-person's
  on one person!
                                  ANJI NOURYOKU      wa   hitori ni
                                  suggestive-ability (T)  on-1-person

                                  shika kikanai  n da!
                                  only-works     (explan)

Kyousuke:
                        kusu_

2
[View over Kyousuke's shoulder.  Kyousuke's too busy smiling to notice,
 but Hikaru has stepped back and closed her eyes, patiently awaiting the
 "something sweeter than cake."  Akane smiles and looks over at Kyousuke.]
narration:
  To Hikaru-chan she looks        hikaru-chan ni wa          ore ni
  like me, but to everyone        to-Hikaru      (contrast)  me (IO)
  else she appears as herself.
                                  mieru    kedo    DAI-SANSHA ni  wa
                                  appears  but     to-a-3rd-party (contrast)

                                  akane  no manma ni        shika mienai
                                         right-in-front-of  only-appear

                                  n da
                                  (explan)

Akane:
  !                               !

Hikaru:
  Mmmmm...                        n~~

3
[Akane strolls over to Kyousuke...]
Akane FX:                         _____ _____
                   tsuka tsuka

4
[...and in passing, exchanges fives.  Kyousuke looks at her uncomprehendingly.]
Akane:
  Good luck!                      gambatte ne!

Akane/Kyousuke high-five FX:      ______
                           tatchi

5
[He watches Akane smile, wave and walk away.]
Kyousuke:
  Huh?                            n?

6
[Hikaru opens her eyes...]

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1
[...and angrily approaches the puzzled Kyousuke.]
Kyousuke:
  Hmm?                            n?

Hikaru FX:                        ___ ____
                     tsu tsu_

Hikaru:
 (Grr.  How vexing.)              (n mo--    jirettai  naa)

2
[Already confused, Kyousuke's attention is diverted off-panel.  Hikaru
 leans in to kiss him on the cheek.]
Kyousuke:
  Huh?                            n?

Hikaru FX:
  

3
[His pov of Madoka, returning from grocery shopping.  She hasn't seen him
 yet...]

4
[...but now she has, and she stares wide-eyed.]

5
Hikaru kiss FX:                   ____
                          chu_

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1
[His pov of Madoka, still staring.]

2
[Kyousuke, now realizing what Hikaru is doing, starts looking very ill
 indeed.  Hikaru's lips are still attached to his cheek.]
narration:
  Oh.  This is...  Maybe...       ara    kore wa...    moshi-ka-shite...

  What's it called?  Uh...        nan   chu--    ka    sono...
                                  what    (?)
                                        called

3
Akane: [stretching]
                          u~~~~n

  Ahh, days when you've done      a--  i-- koto    shita  HI    wa
  a good deed sure feel nice.          good-thing  done   today (T)

                                  KIMOchi ga   i--   naa
                                  feel    (S)  good  (rhet)

4
[Madoka turns away in a huff as Kyousuke winces.  Hikaru clings close.]
narration:
  Akane's meddling...!            akane no osekkai~~~~~~!

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