Kimagure Orange Road
"The Panic Kid, Again!"
Volume 7, Story 2
WB Volume 4, Story 6
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Spencer Hastings
Matthew Klippenstein
Thomas Wyatt
Scott Henry
Last revision : 06-29-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 115 (29) are only in the WBs!
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p 115 (29)--TITLE PAGE
[Madoka stands in profile, facing Kyousuke, who stands with back towards us.
She rests her hands on his shoulder and back, and turns to look directly at
us. Both are wearing sweatshirts emblazoned with "Orange Road--Since
1984".]
MAIN TITLE (at top) _____ _____
The Panic Kid, Again! panikku kiddo - agein!
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
I Seized a Private Moment... HIMITSU no SHUNKAN tsukamaete...
secret/private a-moment seize/catch
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p 116 (30)
1
[Exterior day shot looking up at the Kasuga apartment building.]
narration:
Having entered spring break, HARU YASUmi ni hairi
every day is peaceful, spring recess/vacation (IO) enter
for the Kasuga household
as well. waga KASUGA -KE mo
our Kasuga-family too
HEION na MAINICHI desu
peaceful/quiet every day is
2
[Isolated shot of the Kasuga's nameplate.]
narration:
But...?! ga......?!
Kazuya: [off]
Hello-o-o. chiwa~~~
nameplate: [partial]
Kasuga Takashi KASUGA TAKASHI
Kyousuke KYOUSUKE
Manami manami
3
[Pov from behind Kazuya's leg as he stands before Kyousuke. Kyousuke
lounges back on the floor, but looks up in surprise.]
narration:
Today, it looks as though KYOU wa sono HEION sa o
a guy who'll shatter that today (T) that-peace (O)
peace...
buchiKOWAshi -so-- na
smash/spoil/mar it-looks-as-if
_____
yatsu ga
fellow (S)
4
Kazuya: [glaring]
Shatter what? nani o buchiKOWAsu tte
what (O) smash/spoil (quote)
Kyousuke: [nervously]
No, I only meant... ie kotchi no HANASHI de...
this-way 's talk because
narration:
...has arrived. kichattari shite...
(kite-shimattari shite)
come-(finality/regret)-(and)
5
Kazuya:
Are you two-timing those two aikawarazu
oneechans, as usual? as-usual/as-ever/as-before
ano futari no one--chan-tachi no koto
about-those-2-oneechans
futamata kakete-ru no?
be-sitting-on-the-fence/play-doubles/
have-2-strings-to-one's-bow
Kyousuke: [angry]
Who's two-timing? Who?! DARE ga futamata da DARE ga!
who (S) split/forked is who (S)
6
Kyousuke:
How scandalous! HITOgiki no WARUi!
disgraceful/scandalous/disreputable
Kazuya:
But it only seems that way datte boku ni wa so-- to
to me... but to-me (contrast) like-that
shika mienai kedo naa
only-see/appear but
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p 117 (31)
1
Kyousuke: ____
I hate impudent brats like omae mitai na mase
you. you appear precocious/forward
____
gaki wa KIRAi da
brat (T) dislike is
____ ____
Go away! Shoo! Shoo! atchi ike shi_ shi_
that-way go-(command) shoo! shoo!
2
Kazuya: [cheerfully]
If you can't decide by JIBUN de KIme kanete-ru nara
yourself, shall I settle oneself an-arrangement/decision
it for you? be-unable-to-do if-it-is
boku ga dotchi-ka
I (S) either-one
KETCHAKU o tsukete-ageyo-- ka
shall-settle-(a-matter)-(favor-to-you) (?)
[Kyousuke does a slow boil.]
3
Kazuya:
See, I'll swap places with hora mata boku ga KYOU-ni--chan to
you again, Kyou-niichan. look again I (S) with-Kyousuke
irekawatte
changing-places-with
Kyousuke: [yelling]
Nobody asked for your help! yoke-- na o-sewa da yo
needless/uncalled-for help/aid is
4
[Kyousuke visualizes the last time they exchanged bodies--and Kazuya
attempted to kiss Madoka. See chapter 6.1, "Let's Change!"]
narration:
You gotta be kidding. jo--dan ja nai
joke is-not
The last time, he took kono MAE datte sore o
advantage of the situation this-before even that-(one) (O)
and tried to kiss Ayukawa.
i-- koto ni
good-occasion (IO)
____
AYUKAWA ni kisu shiyou to shi-yagatte
trying-to-kiss-Ayukawa-(contempt)
5
[Closeup as Kazuya gives a scheming look.]
6
Kazuya: [rushing forward] ______
(Here's my chance!) (chansu!)
Kazuya FX: ___
ta_
Manami: [off]
Oniichan. Hikaru-chan's on oni--chan hikaru-chan kara o-DENWA yo
the phone. from-Hikaru telephone
[Kyousuke turns at the sound of her voice...]
7
[...and rises. He is surprised to see Kazuya whiz by behind him. Kazuya
slams his head into a post.]
Kazuya impact FX: ____
go_n
Kyousuke:
? ?
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p 118 (32)
1
Kyousuke: [glaring in Kazuya's face]
What were you trying to nani o shiyo-- to shite-ta nani o!
do? What?! what (O) were-trying-to-doing what (O)
2
Kyousuke: [enraged, pointing a finger]
You meddler! kono osekkai!
this busybody/meddler
___
I won't let you swap places ore to irekawaru nante
with me or anything like with-me change-places-with the-likes-of
that!
sonna koto sasenai kara na!
that-kind-of-thing not-let-do that's-why
3
[Kyousuke chats amiably on the phone as Kazuya stands nearby and listens.]
Kyousuke:
Eh? Today? e KYOU?
Yeah, okay. un ii yo
3 o'clock at the usual place. 3 -JI ni itsu-mo no TOKORO de
at-3:00 at-usual-place
4
[Outside, Kyousuke walks alone down the sidewalk.]
Kyousuke:
(That guy really wears me (aitsu to iru to HONTOU
out...!) with-that-guy when-is-here real/true
tsukareru na----_)
get-tired !
5
Kazuya: [popping up] ______
Your date's Hikaru-oneechan, de--to no AITE hikaru-oneechan deshou
isn't it? date's companion poss-be
Kyousuke jump-back FX: __ ___
pa pa_
[Kyousuke lurches back against a utility pole.]
6
Kyousuke:
Don't follow me! tsuite-kuru na
Kazuya: [pointing off to the side]
Ah! It's Madoka-oneechan! a madoka-one--chan da!
sign:
Takasaki TAKASAKI
7
Kyousuke:
You think I'm falling for sono TE ni noru ka...
that...? in-that-way be-taken-in (?)
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p 119 (33)
1
Madoka: [standing behind him]
Falling for what? nan ni noranai tte?
in-what not-be-taken (quote)
sign: [large print]
...yama Doctor's Office ...YAMA I-IN
doctor's-office
sign: [smaller print]
Surgeries. Extract GEKA NU(KU)
surgery extract
2
[Kyousuke, surprised, turns to look.]
narration:
Huh...? It's true. are... HONTOU da
billboard:
Tachikawa Bookstore TACHIKAWA SHOTEN
bookstore
3
[Kazuya takes advantage of the opening by crashing head-on against the
back of Kyousuke's head.]
Kazuya:
IT'S MINE!! itadaki--_!!
Kazuya/Kyousuke impact FX: ______
gochin
4
Kyousuke:
(H-he got me!!) (ya...yarareta!!)
was-outwitted/was-defeated
5
[Stunned, the two lie on their backs on the ground. Madoka takes in the
scene.]
Kazuya/Kyousuke FX: _____
batan
6
Madoka:
? ?
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p 120 (34)
1
@Kyousuke: [popping to his feet]
Heyyy! What are you doing kora----_ ikinari nani suru n da
all of a sudden? suddenly what do (explan)
@Kazuya: [pointing angrily]
You're the one who slammed oMAE ga butsuketa n daro KAZUYA!
into me, Kazuya! you (S) fling-(something)-at/
hit-against (poss-explan)
2
[@Kazuya looks at his hand in horror.]
narration:
Ah! I've swapped places!! ha_ irekawatte-ru!!
3
[@Kyousuke leans and whispers into @Kazuya's ear.]
@Kyousuke:
Now I'll date the two of boku ga kore kara futari to
them and choose the better I (S) from-now-on with-2-people
one for you. ______
de--to shite yokatta HOU o
dating was-good way/direction (O)
erande-ageru
choose-(favor-to-you)
[@Kazuya's eyes grow wide.]
4
[@Kyousuke leaves with Madoka, waving back at @Kazuya.]
@Kyousuke:
Bye. That's the way it goes. ja so-- yu-- koto de
bye that-kind-of-matter being
narration: ____ ____
Y-you impudent brat!! ko kono mase gaki~~~~!!
this precocious/forward brat
sign:
Hazama Engineering HAZAMA KOUMUTEN
engineering-firm
5
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]
@Kazuya: [off]
W-wait!! ma mate yo!!
6
@Kazuya: [clinging to the leg of @Kyousuke]
St-stop meddling. o osekkai wa yamete
busybody/meddler (T) stop
Go back right now to the way sugu moto ni modo...
we... immediately
return-to-origin
[Both Madoka and @Kyousuke look back at him.]
7
@Kyousuke: [lifting him by the scruff of the neck]
Such a spirited child. KODOMO wa GENKI ni
child (T) spirit/energy/pep (IO)
@Kyousuke FX: ____
hyoi
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p 121 (35)
1
[@Kyousuke deposits him outside the door.]
@Kyousuke FX: ___
poi
@Kyousuke:
Let's play outside, shall SOTO de ASObo-- ne
we? at-outside shall-play
2
@Kyousuke: [flashing ominously with the Power]
(This time, oniichan, even (oni--chan KONDO bakari wa
if you try to teleport in, just-this-time (T)
I won't let you. __________
terepo--to de haitte-koyo--
by-teleporting shall-come-and-enter
ttatte
even-if-saying/no-matter-what-you-say
so-- wa sasenai yo
like-that (T) not-let-do
Just shut up and watch from damatte SOTO de
outside!) becoming-silent at-outside
mite-nasai!)
be-seeing-(command)
3
[From a window, @Kazuya glares into ABCB and pounds on the glass. Madoka
turns to look.]
@Kazuya FX: ___ ___
don don
4
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]
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p 122 (36)
1
Madoka: [looking off at the window]
You're dealing with a child. AITE wa KODOMO yo
opponent (T) child
Poor thing. kawaiso-- ja nai
pitiable (is-not)
[@Kyousuke sits resolutely at the counter, chin resting on his hand.]
@Kyousuke:
It's okay, it's okay-- i-- no i-- no
to leave a mischievous brat
like that alone! hottokeba anna itazura KOZOU!
(hotte-okeba) that-kind-of-
if-leave-alone mischievous-brat
2
Madoka:
He's no such thing. sonna koto nai yo
that-kind-of-thing not-have/not-there
He's an awfully nice kid. tottemo ii KO yo
awfully/quite good/nice-child
3
@Kyousuke: [startled]
(Nice kid...?!) (.......... ii KO?!)
4
@Kyousuke: [smiling]
Hmm. You're sweet. fuun yasashi-- n da ne
gentle/kind/sweet (explan)
5
Madoka:
What's with you lately? nani yo aratamatte
what anew/newly//being-formal
You're acting strangely. HEN na no
6
[Kyousuke rises and leans toward her. She stands holding a plate.]
@Kyousuke:
But, if you can be that demo sono yasashisa wa dekireba...
sweet... but that-sweetness (T) if-able-to-do
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p 123 (37)
1
[He leans in VERY close.]
@Kyousuke:
That... Just for me... sono... boku dake ni.....
that only-me (IO)
2
[At the window @Kazuya watches in horror.]
3
[@Kyousuke makes his move, Madoka's eyes grow large.]
4
[But she leaps away at the sound of...]
man: ____ ___
Another cafe-au-lait, kafe ore okawari kudasa--i
please. cafe-au-lait seconds please
Madoka:
Yes! hai!
Madoka FX: _____
sasa_
5
@Kyousuke: [biting his thumb] ____
(Damn! An unexpected (chi_ tonda jama ga
pest is around!) unexpected interference/ (S)
hindrance
haitchatta!)
(haitte-shimatta)
entered/contained-(finality/regret)
6
@Kyousuke: [looking at the clock]
Oh no! a ikene!
= bad
It's already time now. mo-- sorosoro JIKAN da na
already soon/now time is
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p 124 (38)
1
@Kyousuke: [smiling and waving as he exits]
Thanks for the company! gochiso--san!
2
[Madoka stands in surprise.]
3
[Outside, @Kyousuke rushes off, only to be chased by @Kazuya. @Kyousuke
looks back in irritation.]
@Kazuya:
Wait! Wait, wait. mate_ mate mate
Now you're planning to go to KONDO wa hikaru-chan no tokoro ni
Hikaru-chan's place. this-time (T) to-Hikaru's-place
iku tsumori da na
go intention is
traffic sign:
Uejima 7-km UEJIMA #7Km#
4
@Kyousuke: [flashing darkly with the Power]
That's it! sono toori!
that way/manner/a-kind
@Kyousuke FX: _____
kuwa_
= a-plan/a-scheme/a-plot
5
[@Kazuya is lifted off his feet and slammed back against a utility pole.]
@Kazuya FX: ___
dan
6
[@Kyousuke levitates a coil of rope...]
rope FX: ________
shururu_
7
[...and ties @Kazuya to the pole, high up so his feet can't touch the ground.]
@Kazuya:
J-jerk...! ki kisama--_
Y-you think it's okay to ko konna koto shite
do this sort of thing? this-kind-of-thing doing
i-- to OMOtte n no ka
okay thinking-that (?)
@Kyousuke:
In any case, next I'm tomokaku TSUGI wa
going to check out Hikaru- anyway/in-any-case next (T)
oneechan's reaction.
hikaru-one--chan no HANNOU o
's response/effect (O)
mi ni itte-kuru yo
start-going-to-see
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p 125 (39)
1
@Kyousuke: [with a sinister look]
After that, I'll decide sono ato de boku ga futari no
between the two for you! at-that-later-on I (S) 2-people's
dotchi-ka ni KImete-ageru yo!
either-one (IO) decide-(favor-for-you)
2
[As the words sink in, @Kazuya's eyes grow large.]
@Kyousuke: [off]
And then I'll announce that soshite sore o
decision in front of the and/then/now that-(one) (O)
two of them!
futari no ME no MAE de
in-front-of-the-eyes-of-the-two
SENGEN suru n da!
declare/announce (explan)
3
@Kyousuke:
In the meantime, I'll have oni--chan ni wa sore made soko de
you wait here. (IO/con) till-then in-that-place
yukkuri matte-te-moraou
at-ease/ shall-be-waiting-(get-favor)
leisurely
@Kyousuke:
Have fun. o-TANOshimi ni
pleasure/in-expectation
@Kazuya:
Give it back! Put me back! kaese-- modose--
4
[@Kyousuke walks away.]
@Kazuya:
Fiend! Devil! oni--_! akuma--_!
5
@Kazuya: [struggling]
That meddler! I'm not just ano osekkai-me
gonna let him do whatever that-busybody-
he wants!!
sonna KATTE na koto
that-kind-of selfish thing
sasete tamaru ka!!
let-do collect/be-overdue (talk-to-self)
u~~
6
narration:
Oh, yeah. a so-- ka
_chikara_
If I use the Power, then NOURYOKU o TSUKAeba konna mono...!
this sort of thing... if-use-Power this-kind-of-thing
rope FX: _____
shuru
7
voice: [off] ______
KAA-ZU-KUN! ka--zu-kun!
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p 126 (40)
1
[@Kazuya's pov of a very cute 5-year-old brunette girl who stands somewhat
shyly. She bears a remarkable resemblance to a 5-year-old Madoka.]
chibi Madoka-clone:
What are you doing? nani shite-ru no
what are-doing (?)
A new game? ATARAshii ASObi?
new game/play
2
[Her pov of him. He looks back in surprise.]
narration:
Wh-what? This girl... na nan da kono KO----
what is this-girl
3
[His pov of her as she works at the knot.]
chibi Madoka-clone:
Wait a sec and I'll untie chotto matte-te hodoitageru
you. a-bit be-waiting (hodoite-ageru)
untie-(favor-to-you)
4
[View pans back.]
@Kazuya:
Th-thank you. a arigato
narration:
Cute girl... kawaii KO...
_____________
Kazuya's girlfriend, perhaps? KAZUYA no ga--rufurendo ka na
's girlfriend I-wonder
5
narration:
Wh-what's this? I guess na nan da aitsu mo
I can't just write him off. what is that-guy too
sumi ni okenai na
be-witty-&-knowing
@Kazuya: ___
(When you come right down to (nantatte ore to ONAji KAO da kara)
it, he does have the same after-all/ with-me same-face is that's-
face as me.) when-you-come-down-to-it why
6
chibi Madoka-clone: [shyly]
Say, why don't you come nee kore kara atashi n CHI ni konai?
over to my house now? say from-now to-my-place not-come
@Kazuya: [rubbing his wrists]
Huh? ha?
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p 127 (41)
1
[Overhead view looking down on the two. They stand at a street corner near
a crosswalk.]
chibi Madoka-clone: [smiling]
I promised I'd show you a ATARAshii EHON katte-morattara
new picture book when I new-picture-book when-buying-(favor-for-me)
got one.
misete-ageru tte YAKUSOKU shite-ta
show-(favor-to-you) (T) was-promising
ja nai
(is-not)
narration:
Hey, right now is out of the chotto IMA sore dokoro ja nai
question! now that's-out-of-the-question
n da tteba!
(explan) (I-tell-you)
@Kazuya: [embarrassed]
Oh, is that so? a so-- da kke
like-that is (?)
bicycle traffic sign:
Stop tomare
2
[From down the sidewalk a very cute 5-year-old blonde girl, who bears a
remarkable resemblance to Hikaru at that age, smiles and races towards
@Kazuya. The other two turn when they hear her.]
chibi Hikaru-clone: ____
Kazu-chan! Fou-u-nd you! kazu-chan mi--tsuketa!
chibi Hikaru-clone footstep FX: ___ ___ ___
ta_ ta_ ta_
3
[The two girls point fingers at each other and lock eyes.]
chibi girl-clones:
AH! a_
4
[Then they simultaneously turn their backs on one another.]
chibi girl-clones: ___
Hmmph! fun
chibi girl-clones FX: ____
pui_
5
[Clasping her hands in front of her, the little blonde girl turns to @Kazuya
with joyous abandon. @Kazuya blushes and flinches back under the onslaught.]
chibi Hikaru-clone:
Say, what are you doing? nee nani shite n no fu--n
Hmm? say what doing
And then... Ohhh?! soide hee--_ naa--n daa
What's thaaat? what is-that
chibi Hikaru-clone FX: __________ __________
pechapecha kuchakucha
= chatter/gabble/prattle
narration:
What in the world's going ittai do-- natte n no
on? what-in-the-world becoming
6
[The blonde tot smiles and grabs @Kazuya by the wrist, dragging him off.
The brunette tot stands in stern irritation.]
chibi Hikaru-clone:
Then, let's go! ja ikimasho!
chibi Madoka-clone:
Hold it right there! MAchinasai yo!
sign:
High Prices for Your KOUKA KAI-IRERU FURUBON
Used Books high-price purchase secondhand-book
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p 128 (42)
1
[Having stopped, the blonde tot gets serious.]
chibi Hikaru-clone: ____
Kazu-chan! Today you kazu-chan! KYOU atashi n CHI ni
promised to come play at today to-my-house
my house.
ASObi ni kuru tte YAKUSOKU shita
come-to-play (T) promised
n da yo ne
(explan)
@Kazuya:
Eh?! e?!
2
chibi Hikaru-clone: ______
I got an awfully cute doll!! atashi tottemo kawaii o-NINGYOU
I awfully-cute doll
KAtte-moratta n da--_!!
bought-(favor-for-me) (explan)
chibi Madoka-clone: ____
Kazu-kun is playing with kazu-kun wa KYOU atashi to ASObu no yo--!
me today! (T) today with-me playing
3
[The girls each grab an arm and pull.]
chibi Hikaru-clone:
That's okay! He's playing i-- no! atashi to ASObu no!
with me! okay with-me playing
chibi Madoka-clone:
Ah, no fairrr, Kyouko. a zuru--i KYOUKO
unfair
4
[They angrily get in each other's faces.]
chibi Hikaru-clone: ____
What?! You dog! nani yo busu!
what ugly/dog/pig
chibi Madoka-clone: ____
Selfish pig! gari!
greedy/grasping-person
5
[They glare fixedly at each other.]
chibi girl-clones FX: ____ ____ ____
muka muka muka
@Kazuya:
H-hold on, both of you... chi chotto futari tomo..........
2-people both
6
[His pov as they both sternly turn on him.]
both chibi girl-clones:
Which one of us are you ittai dotchi o ERAbu no
choosing, Kazu-chan? in-the-world which-(of-us) (O) choosing
____
kazu-chan
chibi girl-clones FX: ____
zui_
7
[@Kazuya flinches back, nervously.]
narration:
Really now! He's in no moo----_ aitsu HITO no koto
position to say anything that-guy about-people
about other people!
ieru BUNZAI
able-to-say one's-social-standing
ja nai n jan!
is-not (explan/neg)
@Kazuya: ___
But I'm not Kazuya... ore KAZUYA ja nai no ni~~
I am-not even-though
8
@Kazuya: [flashing with insight] ___
(Ah! Wait.) (ha_ mate yo)
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p 129 (43)
1
[Meanwhile @Kyousuke and Hikaru walk down the sidewalk in a quaint shopping
district. Hikaru contentedly holds onto @Kyousuke's arm.]
shop sign: ___________ ______
ma--karaito fa--pu
??????????? ??????
2
@Kyousuke:
(The last time I dated this (kono KO to wa kono MAE
girl I was bored stiff, this-girl (define) this-before
so this time I'll ask her ______
point-blank...) de--to shite taikutsu datta kara
dating was-boring that's-why
koko wa TANTOU CHOKUNYUU ni...)
here (T) at-point-blank/directly
shop sign: ________
Natural nata--ru
?natural? ?natal?
wall sign: _____
<3-tiny-kanji> manda
?????
3
[He turns to her resolutely. She looks up at him wide-eyed.]
@Kyousuke:
Hikaru-chan. hikaru-chan
4
[He solemnly faces her and rests his hands on her shoulders. He drops his
gaze.]
@Kyousuke:
What do you think of me? boku no koto do-- OMOtte-ru?
about-me what be-thinking
5
[The expected response--a flying Hikaru tackle.]
Hikaru:
I LOVE YOU!! DAISUki!!
Hikaru FX: ________
dogyu--n
6
[Smiling, she wraps her arms around his neck.]
narration: _______
H-huh...? How disappointing a are... konna ni sunnari iku to
when it goes so easily... like-this easily when-go
hyo--shi nuke suru na--
lose-interest-(in)/
be-disappointed-(at)-(command)
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p 130 (44)
1
@Kyousuke: [into her ear] ____
Same here. You're the one soo boku mo kimi ga...
I... like-that I too you (S)
[Hikaru's eyes grow large...]
2
[...and her features melt with emotion.]
Hikaru:
Ah... a...
3
Hikaru: [screaming at something off-panel]
AHHHHHH!! a~~~~~~_!!
[@Kyousuke claps his hands over his ears.]
4
Hikaru: [rushing into an ice cream store]
Kyaaaa! kya----_
Wait, wait, Sempai. chotto chotto SEMPAI
____________
This place has a new ice koko no aisukuri--mu
cream flavor out! this-place 's ice-cream
ATARAshii no ga DEta no ne!
new-one (S) came-out
@Kyousuke: [checking his ear]
.......... ..........
5
[She hands him a double-scoop ice cream cone, with a smile. Ice cream--is
this girl sweet or what?]
Hikaru:
Here you go. hai do--zo
@Kyousuke: [surprised]
Thank you... ..........arigato
6
[He licks his ice cream and watches her as she merrily licks at her cone.]
@Kyousuke and Hikaru FX: ________
peropero
7
[Continuing to lick, he looks upward, and visualizes a diagram. On the
right are portraits of Madoka and Hikaru. Arrows from each girl point
toward dialog on the left.]
diagram: [Madoka] ____________
Didn't give me ice cream. aisukuri--mu kurenai
ice-cream not-give-me
diagram: [Hikaru] ____________
Did give me ice cream. aisukuri--mu kureta
ice-cream gave-me
@Kyousuke:
(Hmm...) (fumu...)
8
@Kyousuke:
(All right. I've decided!!) (yoshi KImeta!!}
@Kyousuke FX: _____
pero_
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p 131 (45)
1
[@Kyousuke and Hikaru return to where he left @Kazuya.]
@Kyousuke:
Sorry to have kept you o-matase
waiting.
2
[@Kyousuke's pov of @Kazuya, who leans back against the pole with arms
crossed.]
3
@Kyousuke:
Now, I'll make an important IMA kara JUUDAI
announcement, so why not after-this/from-now-on serious/important
come with me to ABCB for a
bit. HATSUGEN o suru kara
speech (O) make/do that's-why
_______
chotto abakabu made kite-kurenai
a-bit to-ABCB not-come-(favor-to-me)
@Kazuya: [smiling down at the ground]
Oho. hohoo
4
@Kazuya: [looking up, appearing unworried]
Please, feel free. do--zo go-JIYUU ni
by-all-means (hon)-freely/as-one-pleases
5
[@Kyousuke is taken slightly aback.]
6
@Kyousuke:
(What's this?! "Feel free?!" (nan da yo--_ sono JIYUU wa!
what is ! that as-one-pleases
I'll say it right now--I'm ittoku kedo boku wa ZETTAI ni
certainly not gonna give (itte-oku) but I (T) absolutely
him a chance to swap say-(for-future-sake)
bodies!!)
irekawarareru yo-- na
am-changing-places-with it-looks-like
____
suki nanka misenai
opening/ or-such not-show/not-let-see
opportunity/chance
kara ne!!)
that's-why
7
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]
Madoka and Hikaru: [off]
Ehhhh?! Important e----_ JUUDAI HATSUGEN
announcement? ! important speech
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p 132 (46)
1
[@Kyousuke's pov as the two girls look back.]
Madoka:
About what? nan no koto?
Hikaru:
What's that? "Important nan desu ka JUUDAI HATSUGEN tte
announcement"? what is-that (?) important speech (quote)
2
@Kyousuke FX: ______
niyari
3
[@Kazuya stands firm with gaze down.]
4
[@Kyousuke begins as the other three look on. @Kazuya's face takes on an
angry expression.]
@Kyousuke: ___
I was sorta unsure, but ore iroiro MAYOtta kedo
now I've finally decided. I various was-puzzled/wavered- but
in-judgement
tsui ni KImeta n da
at-last/finally decided (explan)
shelf item: _____
1/1 HASHI(RU) manda!!
run/flee
5
@Kazuya:
HOLD IT-T-T! mattaa!
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p 133 (47)
1
[He turns to look at the front door, on which appear the silhouettes of the
cute girl tots.]
@Kazuya:
You can come in. haitte ii yo
enter okay
2
[The 2 little girls enter.]
chibi Madoka-clone: [apprehensive]
Hello. konnichiwa
Kyouko*: [smiling]
Hey, what's this. ne-- nani nani
<*Formerly, "chibi Hikaru-clone".>
3
@Kyousuke: [aghast]
AH! a
4
[Angrily, @Kazuya gestures towards the 2 girls while addressing @Kyousuke.]
@Kazuya:
While you're at it, why tsuide ni koko de omae mo
don't you decide now, too? by-the-way now/with-this you too
KImetara do-- nan da
if-decide what what is
5
@Kazuya:
Consider yourself before HITO no koto o toyakaku
you meddle in other people's about-people (O) meddle-(in-other's-affairs)
affairs... be-critical-(about)
yu-- MAE ni JIBUN no koto o...
say before about-self (O)
@Kyousuke FX: ______
da da_
@Kyousuke: [running away]
O-oh no! ya yabai!
6
[@Kazuya takes the opportunity to butt heads.]
@Kazuya:
CHARGE!! hakkiri shiro!!
clear/definite make/do
@Kazuya/@Kyousuke collision FX: ______
gochin
6a [inset]
@Kazuya:
(How's this, Kazuya?!) (do-- da KAZUYA!)
how is
6b [inset]
@Kyousuke:
(N-no fair, oniichan!) (zu zurui! oni--chan)
unfair/sly
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p 134 (48)
1
Hikaru:
Hey, Sempai. What was it nee SEMPAI nani o KImeta n desu ka
you decided on? say what (O) decided (explan) (?)
Kyousuke: [rubbing the back of his head]
EH?! e?!
2
[Madoka portrait--blushing, with apprehension.]
3
[Embarrassed, he looks quickly from Hikaru to a menu.]
Kyousuke:
Ah, aaah...! a aa...!
4
Kyousuke: [pointing inside the menu]
I was sorta unsure, but iroiro MAYOtta kedo
I'll have a cafe-au-lait! various was-puzzled-(what-to-do) but
____ ___
kafe ore!
cafe-au-lait
This is what I've decided!! kore ni KImari!!
this-(one) (IO) decide
5
Madoka:
What are you saying?!! akireta--!
was-amazed/dumbfounded
Hikaru:
Whaaat? Really now! naan da maa--_
what is well/indeed!
Kyousuke: [nervously] ______
Nahhh. Ha ha ha. iya-- hahaha
6
[Kyousuke portrait--he looks at something off-panel.]
7
[The 2 cute girl tots have a Kazuya arm apiece and are pulling hard.]
narration:
Even Kazuya, that meddler-- ano osekkai no KAZUYA mo
just this once he seems to that busybody (nom.) as-well
have learned a bitter
lesson... KONDO bakari wa korita
just-this-time (T) learned-a-bitter-lesson/
had-a-bitter-experience
mitai da kedo
seems but
Kyouko:
My house. atashi no uchi yo ne
my house
chibi Madoka-clone:
No, my house! i--e atashi no o-uchi yo!
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p 135 (49)
1
Hikaru: [watching the struggle]
Ohh, that boy was two-timing. maa ano KO futamata kakete-ta no ne
that-boy was-playing-double
If it was me... atashi dattara..........
I if-is
2
Hikaru: [suddenly glaring and clenching her fist]
I ABSOLUTELY COULD NOT zettai yurusenai tokoro yo
FORGIVE THAT. absolutely not-able-to-forgive be-about-to
Kyousuke FX: [wincing in fright] _____
zukin
3
[He turns to peek at Madoka, who looks back without joy.]
Kyousuke FX: ______
chira_
4
[A closer view of Madoka, cheek in hand.]
5
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]
Kazuya: [off]
Oniichan, you'll pay for oni--chan oboete-ro!
this!
you-shall-pay-for-this
narration: ____
Perhaps indecisiveness runs YUUJUUFUDAN wa uchi no KAKEI
in my family! indecisiveness (T) home 's family-line
na no kamo-shiremasen!
it-is-possible
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