Kimagure Orange Road
"The Girls' Day Temptation"
Volume 6, Story 7
WB Volume 4, Story 2
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Spencer Hastings
Jordan Lampe
Thomas Wyatt
Last revision : 04-11-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 29 (139) are only in the WB's!
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p 29 (139)--TITLE PAGE
[Madoka and Hikaru make a pair of very lovely Girls' Day dolls as they sit
in formal wear. In front of them, Kyousuke, in a kimono, topples over,
apparently drunk. Madoka looks on in surprise. Hikaru beams.]
MAIN TITLE (at top)
The Girls' Day Temptation YUUWAKU hinamatsuri
temptation/ Girls'-(Dolls')-Festival
seduction
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
The Dairi-sama* of YUUJUUFUDAN no DAIRI-sama
Indecisiveness. indecisiveness 's festival-doll-
representing-emperor
Beware of Getting Drunk AMAZAKE YOi ni
on the Sweet Sake! sweet-sake intoxication (IO)
GO-YOUJIN!
(hon)-care/carefulness/caution/precaution/
vigilance/prudence/thoughtfulness
<*Translation note: The is the festival doll representing the
emperor.>
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p 30 (140)
1
[A view of a wrestling ring--it's ladies pro wrestling. One girl arches
her back to hurl her opponent up-and-over to the mat behind her.]
2
[Kyousuke and Kurumi cheer the action. Kyousuke is jubilant while Kurumi is
steamed.]
Kyousuke:
There! soko da--_
________ _______
Atomic Gals, go-o-o!! atomikku gyaruzu ike--_!!
Atomic Gals go!
Kurumi:
Arrrrgggggghhhh... u nu nu nu...
3
TV: ________ _______
Ohh! It's the Flash oottoo furasshu gyaruzu no HANGEKI daa
Gals' Counterattack... Flash Gals 's counterattack
________ ______________
The Hijacking Piledriver!! haijakku - pairudoraiba--!!
Hijacking Piledriver
Kurumi:
Yaaayyy! yattaa
Kyousuke: [wincing]
Ahh-hh-hh... a~~~~
TV: ________ _______
Well, in one fell swoop, the saa furasshu gyaruzu ikki ni
Flash Gals have dropped them well Flash-Gals at-a-stroke
into a fall! ______
fo--ru no TAISEI da!
a-fall 's a-posture is
Ohh! All of a sudden, oottoo koko de TOTSUZEN
the Evil Alliance has at-this-place all-of-a-sudden
staged a raid here!!
SHOUWARU DOUMEI no
wicked/malicious alliance/union 's
RANNYUU!!
intrusion/raid
4
[Exterior night shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]
TV: [off] ___ _____ ______
One. Two. Three! wan tsu-- suri--!
5
TV: ________ _______
The Flash Gals, while being furasshu gyaruzu SHOUWARU DOUMEI ni
distracted by the Evil Flash-Gals Evil-Alliance (IO)
Alliance, were caught in
the Atomic Gals' Roaring- KI o torarete-iru AIDA ni
Clutch Hold!! be-distracted between/amidst
________ _______ _________ ________
atomikku gyaruzu no ro--ringu - kuratchi
Atomic-Gals 's roaring clutch
____________
ho--rudo----_!!
hold !!!
Kyousuke: [pumping a fist]
Victoryyy! KAttaa!
Kurumi: [up in arms]
No faiirrr! zuru--i!
Kurumi FX: ______
punpun
6
Kurumi: ________
This referee's part of a kono referi-- guru ja na--i kuyashi--
plot. I'm pissed... this-referee conspire is-not vexing
[Kurumi shoves her brother aside. Kyousuke goes flying off-panel.]
Kurumi shove FX: ___
don
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p 31 (141)
1
Kyousuke: [angered] ______
It was a clean 3-count. MONKU na shi no 3 kaunto daro
satisfactory/perfectly 3-count poss-be
[And he slings Kurumi across the room.]
Kyousuke toss-sister FX: ___
don
2
Kurumi: [on bullhorn, raising a fist in challenge]
Th-that does it!! ya yatta wa ne--!!
[Kyousuke uses both hands to invite Kurumi on.]
Kyousuke:
Come on! kinasa--i!
3
[Manami pauses in her cleaning...]
fight FX: [off] ________ ____
dotabata dota
4
Manami: [to Kyousuke, who turns]
Quiet! yakamashii!
5
Kurumi flying-kick FX: ______
bishi_
Kurumi:
An opening! suki ari!
opening exists
[And she connects to the back of Kyousuke's neck. He goes down like a side
of beef.]
6
[Kurumi leaps on Kyousuke's chest, pinning him to the floor. He's in no
condition to resist. Manami goes to her knees to count him out.]
Manami pounding-floor FX: ___ ___
pan pan
Manami: ___ _____ _______
One. Two. Three! wan tsu-- suri--_!
7
[Manami raises the jubilant Kurumi's arm in victory.]
Kurumi: _______
That's it! da----_
Kyousuke: [grabbing the back of his neck]
Ow-ow-ow-ouch... ata ta ta ta ta ta ta ta ta ta ta
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p 32 (142)
1
[Exterior shot of the Hiyama residence.]
narration:
Today dawns, the 3rd of akete HONJITSU wa 3-GATSU 3-KA
March... opening/dawning today (T) March-3rd
sign:
Hiyama HIYAMA
2
[Isolated shot of a Girls' Day doll.]
3
[View pans back to show many such dolls on a multi-level display stand.]
narration:
It's Girls' Day! hinamatsuri na n desu!
Girls'-Day is (explan)
4
Hikaru: [offering sweet sake]
For you, kind Sir. do--zo o-hitotsu
if-you-please (hon)-one
5
Kyousuke: [rubbing the back of his neck]
Th-thanks. do do--mo
Ow-ouch... itete...
6
Hikaru:
Is your neck troubling you? KUBI do--ka nasatta n desu ka?
neck is-there-anything-wrong-with-(you)-(?)
Kyousuke:
Yeah... A little... haa... chotto...
, and --were spoken with a high
degree of politeness, which isn't always apparent in the English
translation.>
7
[Kyousuke aims a dark look at Kurumi.]
Kyousuke: ____
Seems like a bone or muscle HONE ka suji ga
is out of whack... bone or muscle (S)
____
zurechatta mitai de...
(= zurete-shimatta) seeming
slip-out-of-place/disconnected
Kurumi stick-out-tongue FX: _____
be--_
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p 33 (143)
1
[The 3 Kasuga sibs sit in a row in front of the display of dolls as Hikaru
serves them sweet sake. The girls smile cheerfully.]
narration:
I was invited by Hikaru-chan, hikaru-chan ni SHOUTAI sarete
and brought along my sisters by-hikaru are-invited-(and)
over to her place for a
Girls' Day celebration! IMOUTO-tachi o tsurete
taking-younger-sisters-with-(me)
hikaru-chan CHI de hinamatsuri!
at-Hikaru's-place Girls'-Day
2
Kyousuke: [looking at the dolls]
(How nice... Girls' Day, (i-- naa hinamatsuri tte
with girl-like grace...) Girls'-Day (T)
ONNA no KO rashikute
being-just-like-a-girl
o-shitoyaka de......)
graceful/polite/gentle with
3
Kyousuke: [looking at his sisters]
(Because we've done nothing (KYONEN made wa HIkKOshi bakari de
but move up until last year, up-until-last-year (T) because-only-moving
my sisters haven't been able
to celebrate this day.) IMOUTO-tachi IWAtte-yarenakatta
younger-sisters wasn't-able-to-celebrate-
(favor-to-them)
mon na--)
reason
4
Kyousuke FX: __
zu...
Kyousuke: [smiling]
(Surrounded by girls, and (ONNA no KO ni kakomarete
I can drink sweet sake, by-girls be-surrounded
too...
AMAZAKE mo nomeru shi
sweet-sake-too able-to-drink consider
This is Heaven! Heaven!) GOKURAKU GOKURAKU)
paradise/bliss
5
Komatsu: [popping up]
HI! yo_!
6
Kyousuke:
(No matter where you are, this (doko demo dete-kuru
guy comes crawling out like a in-any-place/wherever start-emerging
cockroach.) _____
________ _yatsu_
gokiburi no yo-- na OTOKO da na)
like-a-cockroach guy is
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p 34 (144)
1
[He sips from his cup, watching the three girls talk.]
narration:
Now if Ayukawa was here, it kore de AYUKAWA ga ireba
would be perfect... with-this/now (S) if-be-here
_kimari_
SAIKOU na n da kedo------
ultimate- be (explan) but
(arrangement)
2
narration: _______
But she's got ABCB! abakabu ga aru mon na--_
ABCB (S) exists reason
I wonder if she's not yappari konai no ka na?
coming after all? after-all not-coming I-wonder
3
Manami:
Oniichan, if you drink too oni--chan NOmi sugiru to
much, you'll get drunk! if-drink-too-much
yotchau yo
(= yotte-shimau)
get-drunk-(finality/regret)
[He slugs down another cup.]
Kyousuke FX:
gubi~~
4
Kyousuke FX: _____
hikku
Kyousuke: [face flushed]
Well, I'll have another. dore mo-- ippai
well-then/now another one-cup
5
[He tries to reach for the pot of sweet sake next to Hikaru...]
Kyousuke:
Oops, can't... Reach. otto to dokanai
(todokanai = not-reach)
narration: _chikara_
All right. With the Power... yoshi NOURYOKU de...
with-Power
Come! koi
Come here, sweet sake! kotchi koi AMAZAKE!
6
[Looking up, Kyousuke realizes he can see through Hikaru's clothes... His
eyes goggle.]
Kyousuke hearbeat FX: _____
doki_
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p 35 (145)
1
Kyousuke: [babbling in shock]
B-bare bare. ha hada hada
[The girls all turn to stare at him.]
Hikaru:
? ?
2
narration:
Str-strange... o okashi-- naa
How is it I could see through nande TOUSHI nanka shichatta
her clothes? why (= shite-shimatta)
somehow-saw-through-(finality)
n daro?
(poss-explan)
Kurumi:
He's gotten fairly drunk. so--to-- yotte-ru na
decently/moderately has-become-drunk
Sheesh. korya
3
[Later, they play "Old Maid".]
4
[Kyousuke draws a card from Hikaru's hand.]
5
narration:
Because today is Girls' KYOU wa ONNA no KO no HI na
Day, this time I'll let today (T) girl 's day is
Hikaru-chan win.
n da mon koko wa hitotsu
is-the-reason this-place (T) one
hikaru-chan ni HANA o motasechae
Hikaru (IO) (= motasete-shimae)
let-(one)-have-the-credit-
for/save-a-person's-face
6
narration: ___ _______
All I have to do is see ore ga torampu o TOUSHI shite
through her cards and draw I (S) trump/card (O) seeing-through-(and)
the Old Maid. ____
baba o hi--chaeba
old-woman (O) (= hiite-shimaeba)
if-draw-(finality)
ii n da
okay (explan)
7
[With Hikaru looking off to the side, Kyousuke abruptly disappears.]
Kyousuke teleport FX: ____
shu_
Manami: ___
Ah! ha_
8
Hikaru: [looking about]
Huh? Sempai... are? SEMPAI wa...
Manami: [wiping her brow]
(That drunk...) (ano yopparai......)
[Kurumi is wide-eyed. Komatsu's complete attention is on the twins.]
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p 36 (146)
1
[View of a hallway.]
2
Kyousuke teleport FX: ____
shu_
3
[He finds himself in a bedroom.]
Kyousuke:
? ?
4
Kyousuke: __________
Huh? I teleported! are? terepo--to shichatta!
(= shite-shimatta)
teleported-(finality/regret)
5
[View of a stereo deck.]
Kyousuke: [off]
Hmmm. This room...? hate kono HEYA wa......?
well/let's-see this-room (T)
6
[Hikaru walks down the hallway...]
Hikaru:
(Strange... Sempai. Where (okashi-- naa SEMPAI doko itta n daro)
did he go?) strange where-went (poss-expl)
7
[...and opens the door.]
door FX: _____
gacha
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p 37 (147)
1
Hikaru: [brightly]
Sempai! sempai!
2
Kyousuke: [embarrassed smile]
Ah! Excuse me! a o-jama shite-masu!
This is... Your room? koko... hikaru-chan no HEYA?
this-place 's room
3
Hikaru FX: ______
chira_
4
[With a knowing look, she shuts the door behind her.]
door FX: _____ _____
batan kacha
5
Hikaru:
Ohhh. So this is what it naan da ko-- yu-- koto datta
was. what is-this this-kind-of-thing was
n desu ne
(explan)
6
Hikaru: [putting her hands around his neck]
You secretly slipped away, kossori nukedashite atashi ga
and waited for me to come... secretly slipping-away I (S)
Great!
kuru no o matte-te-kureta
to-come (O) was-waiting-(favor-to-me)
______
nante... suteki!
the-likes-of great/wonderful
Kyousuke:
HUH?! ha_?
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p 38 (148)
1
Kyousuke:
Ow-ow-ow-ouch... My neck... itetetetetete KUBI ga a~~~~
Ahhh. neck (S)
Hikaru: [letting go]
Oh, sorry. a suimasen
2
[She nestles contentedly against his shoulder.]
Hikaru FX: ___
su_
3
[She closes her eyes, inviting a kiss.]
narration:
Perhaps it's because I'm yopparatte-ru sei ka
drunk, but Hikaru-chan looks be-getting-drunk fault (musing)
a lot cuter!
hikaru-chan ga ichidan to kawaiku miechau!
(S) looks-cuter-(finality)
4
narration:
The two of us, alone in hikaru-chan no HEYA de futari kkiri
her room. in-Hikaru's-room just-2-people
5
[She tilts her chin up as Kyousuke stares hard at her...]
Kyousuke FX: _____
goku_
narration:
Th... This is... ko... kore wa......
6
Madoka: [off]
Excuse me. o-jama shimasu
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p 39 (149)
1
[Full-length portrait of Madoka in sweatshirt and long skirt.]
Manami: [off]
Ayukawa-sempai. AYUKAWA-SEMPAI
2
Madoka:
Huh? Where's Hikaru? are? hikaru wa
Manami:
Uhh... sore ga.......
3
Madoka:
Kasuga-kun vanished? KASUGA-kun ga KIeta?
(S) vanished/disappeared
4
[Hikaru turns, smiling, at the sound of...]
door FX: ___ ___
ton ton
Hikaru:
Ye-e-es. ha--i
5
door opening FX: _____
batan
[Madoka and Manami enter, eyes grown large at what they see.]
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p 40 (150)
1
[Hikaru is still clinging close to Kyousuke.]
Komatsu: [sticking his head in]
Whooaaa. So brazen! o~~~~~~tto kore wa DAITAN na!
this-(one) (T) boldly
2
[They return to the living room. Hikaru sits at Kyousuke's side as they
all eat and chat.]
Kurumi: [to Komatsu]
Huh? Really-y-y? e-- honto~~~?
Hikaru: [to Kyousuke]
And then, it was... soide motte ne
3
Komatsu: [grinning]
Hot as usual. You lucky aikawarazu o-ATSUi koto de
guy! as-usual hot thing being
kono SHIAWAse MONO_!
this fortunate person
Hikaru: [pouring him more sake]
Go on, gulp it down. sa sa gutto
4
[Kyousuke portrait--he is sloshed.]
Kyousuke FX: ______
chira_
5
[His pov of Madoka, who pointedly ignores him.]
Madoka primness FX: ______
tsu--n
6
narration:
She certainly didn't need nani-mo anna toko ni
to enter that room... anything that-kind-of-place (IO)
haitte-konakute-mo------
even-tho-not-come-and-enter
Kyousuke FX: __
zu...
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p 41 (151)
1
[Komatsu and Hikaru are quite impressed as Kyousuke tosses another one back.]
Kyousuke FX:
gubi--
2
Komatsu: [pouring him another]
What fine drinking ii NOmippuri da nee
. fine drinking-technique is (rhet)
Here, have another. mama hitotsu
as-one-likes/pleases one
pouring FX:
toku toku toku toku
3
narration:
Ahh... It doesn't matter mo-- do-- ni demo nare!
now! in-any-way become
Kyousuke drinking FX:
ikki ikki
gubi--_
4
[Kyousuke falls on his back, stone drunk.]
Hikaru:
Sempaaai! sempa--i!
Kyousuke FX: ___
do_
5
[Isolated shot of the display of dolls.]
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p 42 (152)
1
[Exterior night shot of the Hiyama residence.]
2
[Kyousuke lies asleep, tucked into Hikaru's bed.]
3
Kyousuke:
Hmm? n
4
Kyousuke:
Huh... Is this Hikaru-chan's are... koko hikaru-chan no HEYA?
room? this-place 's room
5
[Downstairs, Manami chats with Madoka as Hikaru, Kurumi and Komatsu play
cards.]
6
Kurumi:
I'm thirsty. nodo kawaichatta
7
Madoka: [getting up] ________
Shall I make some coffee? ko--hi-- demo ireyo-- ka
coffee or-something shall-pour (?)
Hikaru: [smiling, with cards in her hand]
Sorry. suimasen
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p 43 (153)
1
[Madoka walks down the hall.]
2
[Passing a door, she looks at the knob.]
3
[Inside, Kyousuke reaches for the door.]
Kyousuke: ________
(Ahh. My head is still (a-- mada ATAMA ga furafura suru)
spinning.) still head (S) swims
4
[Tight shot of Madoka's hand grasping the door knob.]
5
[Kyousuke yanks the door open, sending Madoka flying into the room. Both
are surprised.]
door FX: _____
kacha
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p 44 (154)
1
[Kyousuke moves to catch her, and ends up grabbing a breast.]
Madoka:
Kya!! kya_!!
2
Kyousuke hand FX:
munzu
3
[Horrified, he leaps back, yanking the offending hand back with his other
hand. Madoka blushes and crosses her arms over her chest.]
Kyousuke leap-away FX: ___
ba_
4
[As Madoka stands there silently, Kyousuke searches about. He sees the open
door.]
narration: __ __________
B-better run! I'll ni nigeyou te terepo--to da!
t-teleport! shall-run teleport be
5
[Instead, the door slams shut.]
door FX: _____
batan
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p 45 (155)
1
narration:
H-huh? I'm sure I tried to a are? TASHIka ni
teleport... surely
__________
terepo--to shiyou to shita
tried-to-teleport
hazu na no ni------
likelihood even-though
2
[Madoka's eyes grow wide with nervousness.]
3
Kyousuke: _ ___
I-I... Didn't mean this. o ore... konna tsumori ja
I this-kind-of-intention
narration: _chikara_
The Power is acting in a NOURYOKU ga HEN na FUU ni
strange way! Power (S) strange tendency/manner
hataraichau!
(= hataraite-shimau)
work/act-(finality/regret)
4
[She backs away from this madman...]
Madoka FX: __ __
su za...
5
narration:
I-if I don't somehow come na nan-to-ka ii wake shinakya
up with a good excuse, I'm somehow excuse (= shinakereba)
ruined! if-not-done
HAMETSU da!
destruction/ruin be
Kyousuke:
I-it's a misunderstanding. go gokai da yo
misunderstanding is
6
Kyousuke: ____
The reason I touched your AYUKAWA no mune sawatta no wa...
breast is... 's breast touched (nom) (T)
[His face goes all goofy.]
7
[Madoka doesn't like this expression at all. She continues to back away, her
arms still crossed over her chest.]
Kyousuke:
Ah! ha_
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p 46 (156)
1
[She backs into the bed and topples over.]
Madoka:
Ah! a_
2
Madoka fall FX: [off] _____
dosa_
Kyousuke heartbeat FX:
doki
3
[His pov of the lovely maiden. Her eyes are wide with fear, and her skirt
has ridden up, showing her legs and a bit of her panty.]
4
Kyousuke: [racing forward]
Ah! Are you all right?! a DAIJOUBU?!
Kyousuke FX: ___
da_
5
[His knee hits the side of the bed.]
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p 47 (157)
1
[He falls...]
2
[Madoka winces, prepared for the impact...]
3
[...as Kyousuke's chin hits the side of the bed.]
Kyousuke:
Yelp. gyan
Kyousuke chin FX: ___
ga_
4
[He looks up at her from the edge of the bed...]
Kyousuke:
.......... ..........
5
[...and his face crashes to the floor.]
Kyousuke chin FX:
zuru
6
Madoka: ___
ho_
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p 48 (158)
1
[Night shot of a dimly-lit street.]
2
[Kyousuke, rubbing his neck, walks home with his sisters.]
Kyousuke:
Huh?! are_
3
Kyousuke:
My neck, which felt out of zurete-ta KUBI ga
whack, is back to normal was-slipped-out-of-place neck (S)
again!
moto ni modotte-ru!
origin (IO) is-returning
4
narration:
Out of... Out of whack?! zurete... zurete-ta?!
Kyousuke:
Oh! That's it!! a_ so-- ka!!
5
diagram:
1. When I tried to get the AMAZAKE o torou to shitara...
sweet sake... sweet-sake (O) when-try-to-get
2. I saw through things! TOUSHI shita!
_______
3. When I tried to see torampu o TOUSHI shiyou to shitara...
through the cards... cards (O) when-try-to-see-through
__________
4. I teleported! terepo--to shita!
__________
5. When I tried to terepo--to shiyou to shitara...
teleport...
___
6. The door closed! doa ga shimatta!
door (S) closed
door FX: _____
batan
6
[View down the dark street.]
Kyousuke: [off] _chikara_
Was it because of my neck nanto NOURYOKU ga
that my Power was out of what! Power (S)
whack...?
zurete-ta no wa
was-slipping-out-of-place (T)
KUBI no sei datta no ka......
neck 's fault was (?)
But... shikashi...
Why did it return to normal? nande moto ni modotta n daro?
why to-origin returned (poss-explan)
7
Kyousuke:
(As I recall... Getting (TASHIka... yopparatte
drunk, falling asleep...) if-I-recall-correctly getting-drunk
nechatte...)
(= nete-shimatte)
sleeping-(finality/regret)
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p 49 (159)
1
narration:
Aaahh!! Th-that-s it! a----_!! so so-- da!
[He visualizes grabbing Madoka's breast, her look of nervousness, his view
of her as she lay back on the bed...]
2
narration:
Th-that terrible thing did e erai koto shichatta!
it! great-thing (= shite-shimatta) = did
3
Kyousuke: [nervously]
Umm... Didn't Ayukawa say ano... AYUKAWA nani-ka
anything? umm something
itte-nakatta?
wasn't-saying
Manami: [thinking about it]
Oh, now I remember. a so-- so--
now-I-remember
I don't know what to make nan-da-ka shiranai kedo...
of it, but... somehow not-know but
[Kurumi smiles merrily.]
4
narration:
March 3rd, Girls' Day... 3-GATSU 3-KA hinamatsuri...
March-3rd Girls'-Day
____
Today was just a mess, but... KYOU wa doji bakkari
today (T) just-a-bungle/blunder/mess
datta kedo
was but
______
Manami: _saite--_
She said, "You're the pits"! "SAITEI" da tte!
the-lowest be (quote)
[The sisters turn and walk away. Kurumi stifles a laugh. Kyousuke has done
a pratfall.]
narration:
It was quite pleasant being ONNA no KO ni kakomarete kekkou
surrounded by girls for a surround-by-girls quite
whole day...
TANOshii ICHINICHI datta......
fun/pleasant one-day/whole-day was
I wonder...? no ka na?
I-wonder
--Kyousuke KYOUSUKE
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