Kimagure Orange Road
"Let's Change!"
Volume 6, Story 1
WB Volume 3, Story 12
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation by : Hitoshi Doi (27 Feb 1992)
Additional translation and full-script typesetting by : Craig Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Spencer Hastings
Leo Hourvitz
Matthew Klippenstein
Last revision : 04-10-95
Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to:
kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
extras to those of you not having them.
Example: The subtitles on page 245 (7) are only in the WB's!
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p 245 (7)--TITLE PAGE
[Kyousuke walks past Madoka, who stands on the sidewalk with hands in her
coat pockets, watching him. He looks back at her while walking away.]
MAIN TITLE (at top) ______ ______
Let's Change! rettsu - chenji!
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
I Want to Gaze at You mitsumete-itai itsu made mo...
Forever... want-to-be-gazing forever
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p 246 (8)
1 & 2
[In panel 1, Madoka starts walking out the main entrance of the school
building.]
school bell FX: ___ ___ ___ ___
kin kon kan kon
2
[Kyousuke heads away from his shoe locker.]
sign:
SHIGOTO wa shiku
work/employment (T)
ruku!!
3
[Madoka spots him...]
4
[...and raises a hand in friendly greeting.]
5
[But he's gone. She swivels her head in search of him.]
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p 247 (9)
1
[Madoka walks home, casting a final glance back over her shoulder. In the
extreme foreground we see someone plastering himself against the lockers,
out of her sight.]
narration:
Even if I say so myself, ware nagara tsukuzuku----
I really... though-oneself utterly
2
[It's Kyousuke.]
narration:
...don't like this kind of ko-- yu-- SEIKAKU ga
personality... this-kind-of-personality (S)
iya ni naru kedo----
become-unpleasant but
3
[Flashback panel of previous chapter. Madoka gives Kyousuke a shove and
storms off the ice.]
Madoka: [flashback]
Who cares! SHIranai!
not-know
Madoka hand FX: ___
don
narration:
It seems like Ayukawa is AYUKAWA ga mada OKOtte-ru you na
mad at me again... (S) still is-angry seems
KI ga shite----
feeling/thinking
4
Kyousuke: [sweating]
(Somehow, it seems like (KYOUSHITSU demo nan-da-ka
Ayukawa is ignoring me classroom also for-some-reason
during class, too.
MUSHI sarete-ru mitai na n da yo ne
is-ignoring seems is (explan)
She's really scary when ano HITO OKOraseru to kowai
she gets mad.) that-person when-make-angry scary
n da mon)
(is-the-reason)
5
a voice: [off]
FOUND YOU! mitsuketa!
WHAT ARE YOU SLINKING AROUND nani o kosokoso KAKUrete n no!
AND HIDING FROM?! what (O) sneakingly hiding
[Kyousuke flinches, covers his head with his arms, and takes a surprised
jump.]
Kyousuke FX: ___
da_
Kyousuke:
WAHH! I'M SORRY!! waa_ gomennasai!!
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p 248 (10)
1
[He takes a nervous peek from around his arms.]
2
Kazuya: [smiling]
You're still the same. aikawarazu da ne
as-usual are
Have you done something to mata one--chan ni KIRAwareru koto
make oneechan hate you again (IO) be-disliked thing
again?
demo shita no?
also done
Kyousuke: [livid]
H-HEY! THAT WAS YOU, KAZUYA! ko kora_! omae ka KAZUYA!
hey you (?)
3
[Exterior shot of a school building.]
Kyousuke: [off]
Jeez. mattaku
4
Kazuya:
You're such a coward. oni--chan wa okubyo-- sugiru yo
(T) cowardice to-excess
Kyousuke:
Who asked you? yoke-- na o-sewa da
uninvited/uncalled-for help is
5
Kazuya:
What's there to be jumpy takaga ONNA no KO hitori ni
over just one girl? merely girl one-person (IO)
________
nani o bikubiku shite-ru no sa
what (O) be-trembling-with-fear/be-jumpy
It's better for a man to be ONNA no KO nanka ni wa
a little forceful toward girls somewhat (IO) (contrast)
girls!
chotto GOUIN ni DEta
a-little forcibly appeared
ho-- ga OTOKO to shite cho--do ii
better-just-as-a-guy
n da yo!
(explan)
6
Kazuya:
Sometimes it's necessary to TOKI ni wa OOKAMI ni naru koto
become a wolf. at-times (T) become-a-wolf matter
datte HITSUYOU na n da
even necessity is (explan)
Kyousuke: [appalled]
Is that something a sore ga YOUCHIEN JI no
kindergarten kid says?! that-(one) (S) kindergarten child's
______
serifu ka!
speech/words (?)
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p 249 (11)
1
Kyousuke: [yelling]
Never mind that. What are sore yori nande omae wa
you doing here?! rather-than-that why you (T)
konna TOKORO ni iru n da!
be-in-this-sort-of-place (explan)
Kazuya:
I came to see the pretty BIJIN no one--chan ni Ai ni kita no!
oneechan! beautiful-oneechan (IO) came-to-meet/see
Kazuya FX: _______
kippari
2
Kyousuke:
There are also girls in .......... YOUCHIEN ni mo
kindergarten, aren't there? in-kindergarten-too
ONNA no KO wa iru darou
girls (T) poss-are-there
Kazuya: ____
But they're still brats so datte madamada gaki de
that's no fun. but much-more brats on-account-of
tsumannai yo
uninteresting
Kyousuke: ____
You're a brat, too! omae mo gaki daro!
you-too brat poss-be
narration:
True... TASHIka ni----
3
narration:
...if I had the shameless koitsu mitai ni zu--zu--shii
courage that this kid has... this-guy be-like (IO) shameless/impudent
made no takumashisa ga
as-far-as 's strong-minded (S)
attara naa
if-have
Kazuya: [indignant]
Please say, *positive- SEKKYOKU -TEKI da to itte-kudasai!
thinking*! positive/energetic is say-that-(please)
sign:
Clean in Earnest!! souji wa majimeta!!
cleaning/sweeping (T) in-earnest
4
Kyousuke: ________
(Oh, that's right. He's (a so-- ka koitsu terepasu na n da...)
telepathic...) this-guy telepathy is (explan)
5
Kyousuke:
(That'd be great... (i-- naa...
________
If I was telepathic, I could terepasu dattara AYUKAWA no KOKORO
read Ayukawa's thoughts, and if-be-telepath Ayukawa's-mind
then I wouldn't have to sneak
around and hide like this.) datte yomeru kara
even can-read that's-why
________
kosokoso kakurenakute sumu shi)
sneakingly not-hiding can-do consider
6
Kazuya:
Then do you want to switch ja boku to Irekawaranai?
places with me? then with-me not-change-places-(with)
Kyousuke:
What?! e?!
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p 250 (12)
1
[Kyousuke gives a blank look.]
sign:
Founder Student ... GANSO SEI...
founder = student-assembly
Notice o-SHIra...
= notice
Knock down... BUTTAOSU...
knock-down
Originator Student HONKE SEI...
... main-family/originator
student-assembly
Behind Student... URA SEITO...
back/reverse-side/rear student/pupil
2
Kyousuke:
Th-there's no way you can so sonna koto dekiru hazu ga...
do... that-kind-of-thing can-do likely but
narration: ___
B-but if I was Kazuya, I'd de demo moshi mo ore ga KAZUYA dattara
be telepathic... but if I (S) if-be-Kazuya
___________
terepashi-- wake da kara...
telepathy reason that's-why
3
Kazuya:
It's possible! DAIJOUBU!
_chikara_
'Cause we both have the boku ya oni--chan wa NOURYOKU ga
Power. I and (T) Power (S)
aru kara
have that's-why
First, close your eyes mazu ME o tsubutte
and grit your teeth. first closing-eyes-(and)
HA o kuishibatte
clenching-teeth/with-one's-teeth-set
4
[Kyousuke does. Kazuya leans back...]
Kazuya:
Ready? Here we go. ii? iku yo
okay go
Kazuya FX: ___
gu_
Kyousuke:
I-is this for real? ho honto ka yo
real (?)
5
[...and hurls his head at Kyousuke's. Both grit their teeth in pain.]
collision FX: ______
gochin
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p 251 (13)
1
[Exterior shot of a walkway on school grounds.]
@Kazuya: [off]
Ouch... i......
2
@Kazuya:
That hurt! itai ja nai ka_!
What are you doing... nani o suru...
what (O) do
@Kazuya sit-up FX: _____
gaba_
[As he sits up he and Hikaru--who was walking out the door--notice each other.]
3
Hikaru:
Oh! ara--_!
4
Hikaru: [smiling, patting him on the head]
Oh Kazuya-kun, you were KAZUYA-kun kite-ta no
here? was-coming (?)
Hikaru FX: ________
nadenade
narration:
Kazuya? KAZUYA?
5
[He stares at his tiny hands.]
6
narration:
I'M KAZUYA! KAZUYA ni natte-ru!
be-turning-into-Kazuya
7
@Kyousuke: [looking decisive]
Good timing, oneechan... cho--do yokatta one--chan...
precisely was-good
I mean... ja nakatta
______
Hikaru-chan, why not go on a hikaru-chan boku to de--to shinai kai
date with me? with-me not-date (?)
Hikaru:
Oh! maa
8
[She leaps and hugs him around his neck. @Kazuya is aghast.]
Hikaru:
Hooray! yatta--_!
Hikaru FX: ____
gyo_
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p 252 (14)
1
@Kazuya: [aggravated]
H-heyyy! ko koraa!!
2
[@Kazuya stops to think over the situation.]
narration: ___
But since Kazuya is me, and to itte mo KAZUYA ga ore de
I'm Kazuya... even-tho-say-that (S) being-me
___
ore ga KAZUYA na n da kara----
I (S) is (explan) that's-why
@Kazuya FX:
u~~~~
@Kazuya:
(I shouldn't be jealous of (JIBUN ni yakimochi yaite mo
myself...) self (IO) even-though-being-jealous
sho-- ga nai naa)
no-use-
3
telepathic message:
(Yeah! It's no good being (so-- so--! JIBUN ni yakimochi yaite
jealous of yourself, of-self being-jealous
oniichan.)
sho-- ga nai yo oni--chan)
no-use-
4
[@Kazuya watches wide-eyed as @Kyousuke and Hikaru exit the building.
@Kyousuke smiles and has his arm draped over Hikaru's shoulder.]
narration:
That voice just now was IMA no KOE KAZUYA?!
Kazuya's?! now 's voice
@Kyousuke: [beaming]
See ya, Kazuya-kun! ja ne KAZUYA-kun!
5
[@Kazuya portrait--horrified realization.]
6
narration:
Wh-whaaat?! na nan daa~~~_?!
S-so we just switched bodies ka karada ga Irekawatta dake de
and I'm still Kyousuke-- body (S) changed-places-(with) only
which means...?! ___
ore wa KYOUSUKE no manmatte koto ka~~~_!!
I (T) 's completely thing (?)
Kazuya: [chasing after]
H-hey, wait. chi chotto mate yo
This isn't what you said!! HANASHI ga chigau ja nai ka!!
conversation (S) different
@Kyousuke/Hikaru FX: ___
da_
@Kyousuke: [dragging Hikaru along]
Let's go. ikou
7
narration:
H-he tricked me!! da damasareta----_!!
Kazuya: [shouting]
Give it back! kaese--_
___
Give my body back! modose--_ ore no karada!
give-back! my-body
[Hikaru looks back strangely at this weird kid...]
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p 253 (15)
1
[@Kazuya walks down the sidewalk, looking off to the side.]
narration:
Shit! Where did that kuso---_ KAZUYA no yatsu doko itta
Kazuya go? shit ! about-Kazuya where-gone
n da
(explan)
I have to find him soon HAYAku mitsuke-dashite moto ni
and get my body back...! soon begin-to-look-for-(and) to-origin
modosanakereba......!
(modosanakereba-ikenai)
must-return
2
collision FX: ___
don
3
[@Kazuya ends up on the ground, sporting a bruised knee and a sore chin.]
man: [angrily] ______
Don't wander around, kid! urochoro suru na bo--zu!
don't-wander-about/roam-(neg-command) kid
4
[Tight shot of a hand grabbing the man by his elbow.]
Madoka:
Hold it right there! machi na yo!
Madoka hand FX: _____
munzu
5
[View pans back to show Madoka idly twisting his arm in an armlock.]
Madoka:
You shouldn't say that to konna chitcha na KOdomo ni
such a little kid. this-kind-of-teeny-weeny child (IO)
sore wa nai daro_
that-(one) (T) not-poss-have
Apologize to him! kono KO ni ayamari na!
to-this-child apologize
man:
Ow-ow-ouch... itete ite...
6
[She smiles at a surprised @Kazuya.]
Madoka FX: _____
niko_
7
narration:
Ayukawa...! AYUKAWA......!
man: [sweating]
I-I'm very sorry. do domo suimasen
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p 254 (16)
1
[At a fast-food joint, @Kyousuke and Hikaru enjoy their burgers.]
2
[On the street, they come upon 2 theatres. @Kyousuke points to one as
Hikaru drags him to the other...]
billboard: [right]
A Giant Mysterious Beast DAI/OU KE/KOI JUU
Appears in Tokyo great mystery/apparition beast
TOUKYOU ni ARAWAREru
in Tokyo appears/turns-up
CHIKU/TAKE
_____ ______ _______
All-Star Cast!! o--ru suta-- kyasuto!!
all star cast
two signs: [middle & right]
Orion Theatre orion -ZA
billboard: [left] _______
Berlin of Love AI no berurin
love 's Berlin
sign: [left] ______
Palace Theatre paresu -ZA
3
[Inside the theatre, @Kyousuke looks bored. Hikaru is nestled against his
arm, contented.]
4
@Kyousuke:
fua
5
[Passing a toy store, @Kyousuke pauses outside the window display. Hikaru
is perplexed.]
6
[Exterior shot of a coffee shop.]
Hikaru: [off] ________
I'll have an American atashi amerikan
coffee. I "American"-
@Kyousuke: [off]
I-I'll take that, too. bo boku mo sore...
I too that-(one)
7
@Kyousuke: [taking a sip and grimacing]
(So bitter!) (niga--_)
8
@Kyousuke: ______
(I thought that dates were (motto de--to tte TANOshii mono
much more fun... much-more dates (T) fun-things
ka to OMOtte-ta kedo...
did-think-that but
I wonder if Kyou-niichan is KYOU-ni--chan itsu-mo
always doing things this always
boring?)
konna tsumaranai koto
these-kinds-of-uninteresting-things
yatte-ru no kaa)
be-doing (?)
Hikaru: [chattering away amiably]
Uhh, isn't it? But... sore ga ne-- demo tte
uhh (rhet) but (T)
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p 255 (17)
1
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]
2
[Tight shot of @Kazuya's bandaged knee.]
Madoka: [off]
There! yoshi!
3
[She smiles back at him as she takes away the first aid kit. They are in
the changing room of ABCB.]
Madoka:
It doesn't hurt any more, mo-- itakunai wa yo!
right?! already not-hurt
Let's see, you're Kazuya-kun? etto KAZUYA-kun da kke
let's-see is (?)
4
@Kazuya:
Eh? Ah. Yeah, thank you... e a un arigato...
narration: ___
That's it, I'm Kazuya now! so-- datta ore wa IMA KAZUYA na n da!
that's-it I (T) now am (explan)
5
[Something off-panel is turning his face red.]
@Kazuya heartbeat FX: _____
doki_
6
[His pov of Madoka as she prepares to pull off her school uniform.]
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p 256 (18)
1
[Madoka hums a tune while she undresses down to her bra, panties and
pantyhose. Behind her, @Kazuya's face undergoes circulatory overload.
His eyes are bright saucers...]
@Kazuya heartbeat FX: ____ ____ ____ ____ ____ ____
2
narration:
Wh-what a privilege! na nan-to yu-- TOKKEN!
what-kind-of privilege/special-rights
I guess it's worth being KOdomo tte tama ni wa yatte-miru
a kid every now and then...! child (T) occasionally (T) try-and-do
mon da na--_
reason is
3
@Kazuya: [lowering his gaze]
(But... (demo......
Somehow, I feel nanka nozokiMI shite-ru
self-conscious, like somewhat be-peeping
I'm sorta peeping.)
mitai de KI ga hikeru)
seem-like-(and) feel-self-conscious
4
[He looks up again as he hears...]
Madoka: [off] ____
Were you with your mama? mama to ISSHO datta no?
together-with-mama were
@Kazuya:
Eh? No. e iya
5
[She's now dressed in her ABCB sweatshirt.]
Madoka: [looking apologetic]
I'd like to take you home... okutte-itte-agetai
want-to-go-and-escort-home-(favor-to-you)
kedo......
but
_____
But I have to work now, and atashi wa IMA kara baito da
so... I (T) starting-now work be
shi na--
and-besides
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p 257 (19)
1
Madoka:
Yeah--if Kasuga-kun were so-- da KASUGA-kun demo ireba...
around... as-well if-be-here
2
[@Kazuya's face takes on a happy look.]
@Kazuya heartbeat FX: _____
doki_
3
@Kazuya:
Y-yeah, I wonder where so so-- da ne oni--chan doko ni iru
oniichan is now? that's-right is-where
n darou ne
(poss-explan)
4
Madoka:
He could be anywhere by IMAgoro doko ni iru no yara...
now... now/by-this-time is-where even-tho
That klutz! ano otchokochoi!
@Kazuya FX: _____
zuki_
5
[Isolated shot of a wall in the changing room.]
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p 258 (20)
1
[Madoka looks at him as she heads towards the door.]
narration:
S-so she's still mad at me. ya yappari mada OKOtte-ru
after-all still is-mad
@Kazuya:
I-is he that much of a klutz? so sonna ni otchokochoi ka na
that-much scatterbrain I-wonder
2
Madoka: [forcefully]
Yeah, he is. And he's much so-- yo otchokochoi de HITO-ICHIBAI
more indecisive than anyone like-so being-scatterbrain more-than-
else! all-others
YUUJUUFUDAN nan da kara!
indecisive that's-why
@Kazuya FX: _____
zuki_
3
narration: ___
Y-yah, so I'm indecisive... do do--se ore wa YUUJUUFUDAN da yo
in-the-end I (T) indecisive am
@Kazuya: [blushing and mad]
Y-yeah, he is! so so-- da ne!
4
@Kazuya: [really mad] ____
What's more, he's always sonoue doji de
messing up, he's a what's-more bungling/blundering
blockhead, and he sulks ______
like a child... noroma de
being-a-blockhead/simpleton
____
KOdomo mitai ni dada koneru shi...
like-a-child sulking/fretting and
And on top of that, he's omake ni chikagoro wa
been acting like a pervert moreover recently/lately (T)
lately! ______
sukebe to kite-ru!
pervert/lech is-coming
narration:
Oo-ooh... Somehow, I'm uu... nanka itte-te JIBUN ni
beginning to get mad at somehow be-saying at-self
myself.
hara ga tatte-kita
started-to-get angry
@Kazuya:
He's hopeless, that's what!! mattaku do-- shiyou mo nai
really what-shall-do even not-there
to wa ano koto da!!
(define) that-matter is
5
[Madoka looks back with surprise.]
6
Madoka:
But he has some good points, demo kekko-- i-- tokoro mo aru wa yo
too. but quite good-points too has
On New Year's OOMISOKA no YORU datte nani-mo
Eve he didn't do anything... New-Years-Eve 's night even anything
shinai de...
don't-do
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p 259 (21)
1
Madoka: ___
AH! ha_
@Kazuya:
Eh?! e?!
2
Madoka: ____
Oh, you don't understand a da kara kimi wa mada KOdomo da
because you're still a oh because you (T) still child are
child.
kara wakannai no yo
that's-why not-understand
narration:
B-because back then I didn't a ano TOKI nan-ni-mo shinai de tte...
do anything... that-time anything don't-do (quote)
What? What? e? e?
crows-in-background FX: ____
kaa_
3
Madoka: [wistfully]
It's strange... hen na no...
When he suddenly stopped KYUU ni konaku naru to nanka
coming here I somehow felt suddenly when-stop-coming somehow
lonely...
sabishii naa
lonely
_______
He could at least drop by abakabu kurai kureba ii no ni...
ABCB... ABCB extent if-come okay although
4
Madoka: [with an unhappy look]
It's not like I'm truly mad. atashi HONKI de hara o tatete-ru
I seriously am-getting-angry
wake ja nai no ni na
reason is-not even-though
5
[@Kazuya portrait--wide-eyed surprise.]
6
narration: ___
Ayukawa doesn't... ore kesshite----
I not-at-all
Doesn't hate me at all! kesshite AYUKAWA ni KIRAwaretenai!
by-Ayukawa not-be-hated
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p 260 (22)
1
narration:
Okay! If that's the case... yoshi! so-- to kimareba----
if-come-to-be-like-that
@Kazuya: [running off]
Good-bye! sayonara_
2
[Outside ABCB, he runs off...]
narration:
I have to hurry and change HAYAku aitsu to Irekawatte
bodies and then make up with soon with-that-guy changing-places-with
Ayukawa!
AYUKAWA to NAKA
relationship-with-Ayukawa
naori suru n da!
set-to-rights (explan)
3
[...but suddenly stops.]
4
[His pov of @Kyousuke, who stands before him.]
@Kyousuke:
O-ohh. So this is where na nan da koko ni ita no
you were. at-this-place were-here
5
@Kazuya:
C'mon, return my body! saa moto ni modose_!
to-origin give-back!
@Kyousuke:
I-I should! so so da ne_!
6
@Kazuya:
What? e
7
@Kyousuke: ______
Dates are pretty tough. de--to tte kekko-- TAIHEN
dates (T) quite hard/troublesome
na n da ne
are (explan)
I didn't have any fun at all. boku chittomo omoshirokunakatta yo
I -at-all was-not-fun
@Kazuya: [hopping mad]
Then return my body at once! ja sugu moto ni modose!
then at-once to-origin give-back
sign:
Akira Perm paamanento #AKIRA#
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p 261 (23)
1
@Kyousuke: [with a sinister look]
But before I do, I'll do one da kedo sono MAE ni hitotsu
favor for you. but that-previous (IO) one-thing
o-YAKU ni tatte-ageru yo
be-of-use-to-you
You're so impatient. I'll jirettai oni--chan ni kawatte ne
take your place, oniichan. impatient taking-the-place-of
2
[@Kazuya's face takes on an expression of impending doom.]
3
[@Kyousuke walks away as a stunned @Kazuya merely stands and watches.]
telepathic message:
(I learned from the romantic (sakki REN'AI EIGA o
film that I just saw... a-little-while-ago love movie (O)
tappuri MIte wakatta n da...
fully see-(and) understood (explan)
____
If you just give a girl ONNA no KO nante kisu no hitotsu mo
one kiss...!) girl how! kiss 's once even
kurawasetokya......!)
(= kurawasete-okereba)
if-able-to-give-(for-future-sake)
4
@Kazuya: [running]
W-wait! ma MAte!
[But @Kyousuke has shut the door to ABCB.]
door FX: _____
batan
5
[Inside ABCB, @Kyousuke stands at the door.]
door lock FX: ______
kachan
6
@Kazuya/door FX: ___ ___
don don
@Kazuya: [off]
Open up! Heyyy. akero-- kora--
[Madoka, behind the counter, turns in surprise.]
7
Madoka:
Kasuga-kun... KASUGA-kun...
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p 262 (24)
1
[Her pov of a decisive-looking @Kyousuke.]
2
[Looking out the window we see @Kazuya pounding his fists against the glass.]
@Kazuya/window FX: ___ ___
don don
3
@Kyousuke: [moving in close]
Ayukawa... Close your eyes. AYUKAWA... ME o tsubutte
Madoka: [a bit surprised]
What? e?
4
@Kazuya: [utterly horrified]
AH! a
5
[As she closes her eyes, @Kyousuke moves in very close for a kiss...]
@Kyousuke: ____
There's some dirt on your mabuta ni gomi ga......
eyelid... on-eyelid dirt/dust (S)
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p 263 (25)
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[Suddenly, @Kazuya hurls his head at @Kyousuke's. Madoka covers her head
and flinches at the impact.]
@Kazuya:
I won't let you do it! saseru ka--_!!
let-do !
collision FX: ______
gochin
2
@Kazuya:
(...from nowhere. (doko kara......
= (appear)-from-nowhere
___________
I can't use telepathy, but I terepashi-- wa TSUKAenai kedo
can teleport!) telepathy (T) not-use but
__________
terepo--to nara dekiru n da ze!)
teleport if-it-is can-do (explan)
3
[Both guys end up face-up on the floor.]
Kyousuke/Kazuya FX: _____
batan
4
Madoka FX:
kyoton
vacant-look/stupefied
5
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]
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p 264 (26)
1
[The three sit at the counter, Kyousuke between the other two. He
smiles at Madoka, who smiles back. Kazuya sits bored.]
narration:
And so, I was happily to yu-- wake de medetaku JIBUN no
reunited with my body... for-that-reason happily self 's
KARADA ni modoremashite------
body (IO) returning
2
Kyousuke: _______ ________
ABCB's coffee sure is the yappari abakabu no ko--hi-- ga
best. sure-enough ABCB 's coffee (S)
ICHIBAN umai ya
most-delicious
Madoka:
Oh, thank you, Mr. Customer! ara ara do--mo o-tokui-san!
oh (hon)-customer-(hon)
3
[Madoka portrait--cheerful smile.]
narration: ___
For now, I'm satisfied and toriaezu wa ore kono mama de
content with the way things for-the-time-being (T) I in-this-state
are.
jiyu-- bun na n da
free one's-part/duty is (explan)
4
Kazuya FX: ______
busu~~
5
telepathic message: ___________
(Ouch, what's with this (itete nan da yo kono banso--ko--
band-aid? what's-this this-bandaid
Oniichan, you were treating oni--chan HITO no KARADA da
my body very roughly because person's body is
it wasn't yours...!)
to OMOtte rambo-- ni atsukatta na----_
thinking-that treated-with-violence !
[Kazuya peels off the bandage.]
Kyousuke: [wincing]
Don't take it off. hagasu na yo
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Kyousuke: ___________
Wait. I'll get you a new MAtte na ATARAshii banso--ko--
one. Ayu... wait new/fresh bandaid
motte-kite-yaru kara AYU...
bring/fetch-(favor-to-you) that's-why
[He turns to her, but she's gone.]
7
Kyousuke:
Oh? Where did she go? are? doko itta n daro?
huh where-went (poss-explan)
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p 265 (27)
1
[He sticks his head into the back room, where Madoka has just removed her
ABCB sweatshirt, and stands in her underwear.]
Kyousuke: ___________
As I recall, the bandaids tashika banso--ko-- wa
were in this room... if-I-remember-correctly bandaid (T)
kono HEYA ni...
in-this-room
2
Madoka: [covering up]
AH! ha_!
3
Kyousuke: ___________
Oneechan, where are the one--chan banso--ko-- wa?
band-aids?
4
[No art, just stars...]
narration:
Th-that's right. I'm not so so-- datta mo-- KAZUYA ja nakatta
Kazuya anymore. now was-not
n da
(explan)
Madoka FX: _____
patsu
5
[As he reels away from the door, clutching his tender cheek, Madoka covers
up with her sweatshirt and sticks out her tongue.]
Madoka:
I HATE YOU! dai_kirai!
narration:
Sheesh. She worries when I mattaku konai to SHIMPAI suru
don't come, but what the really when-not-come be-worried
heck is this?!
kuse ni ittai do--
although/when what-in-the-world
natte n no?!
becoming
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