Kimagure Orange Road
"Lucky Birthday!"
Volume 5, Story 3
WB Volume 3, Story 5
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi

Translation by : Larry Greenfield (special thanks to Takayuki Karahashi)
Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
                                 Larry Greenfield
                                 Craig Nishida
                                 Spencer Hastings
                                 Ramon Galindo
                                 Matthew Klippenstein
                                 Wes Shull
                                 Jordan Lampe
                                 Scott Henry

Last revision : 02-07-95

Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:
     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu

NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
      extras to those of you not having them.
      Example: The subtitles on page 93 (49) are only in the WBs!
---------------------------------------------------
p 93 (49)--TITLE PAGE

[Separate circular panels show Kyousuke sweating wide-eyed, and--in four
 other circular panels--Madoka, Hikaru, Manami/Kurumi, or Hatta/Komatsu
 hold presents, but appear to ignore him.]

MAIN TITLE (at top)               ______     _________
  Lucky Birthday!                 rakkii  -  ba--sudei!

SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
  Even Though It's My             TANJOUBI na  no ni
  Birthday Ev-v-veryone Is        birthday     even-though
  Giving Me the Brush-Off!
                                  mi~~nna   #SOPPO#!
                                  everyone   look-aside/turn-away

---------------------------------------------------
p 94 (50)

1
[Kyousuke stands in his room in his pajamas, pushing aside the curtains and
 looking out his sliding glass door at the rising sun.]
narration:
  Today, November 15th, is        KYOU   11 -GATSU  15 -NICHI   wa   nan-to
  my--Kasuga Kyousuke's--         today  11  15 -th-day  (T)  how/what
                                  ___
                                  ore  KASUGA KYOUSUKE no
                                  I                    's

curtain FX:                       ____
                          sha_

2
narration:
  --15th birthday.                15 KAI -ME no  TANJOUBI----
                                  15     -th 's  birthday

Kyousuke: [stretching]            ___
                            fua

3
[Out in the kitchen, Kyousuke cheerfully greets Manami and Kurumi.]
narration:
  In any case...                  nani wa tomoare

Kyousuke:
  Good morning!                   ohayo--

narration:
  ...a joyful occasion!           medetai!

4
[Kyousuke beams and visualizes a smiling Madoka and Hikaru.]
narration:                        ___
  I've been moving all the        ore  HIkKOshi  bakari de  IMA made
  time and never had the chance   I    removal   just       up-to-now
  to settle down and have a                             ________
  birthday party, but not this    Ochitsuite     TANJOU pa--ti--  nan-ka 
  time!                           settling-down  birthday-party   somehow

                                  yatta  koto   nakatta  kedo
                                  done   thing  had-not  but

                                  KONKAI    wa   chigau   zo!
                                  this-time (T)  different

Madoka and Hikaru: [daydream]
  Happy birthday!                 omedeto

5
Kyousuke:
  Hey, Manami.  By the way,       naa    manami  tokoro de   KYOU...
  today...                                       by-the-way  today

[Manami elbows her way past him.]

Manami FX:                        ___
                            don

Manami:                                     _______
  Dad, you forgot your necktie!   oto--san  nekutai  WASUrete-ru    wa yo
                                  father    necktie  be-forgetting

6
Kyousuke:
  ..........                      ..........

7
Kyousuke: [smiling at the calendar]
  Kurumi, what day is today?      kurumi  KYOU  wa   nan   HI   da  kke
                                          today (T)  what  day  is  (?)

---------------------------------------------------
p 95 (51)

1
Kurumi: [looking at the wall calendar]       ____
  Are you stupid, oniichan?       oni--chan  baka    ja nai   no--?
                                             stupid  are-not

  You read this as the "15th".    kore       wa  ne    juu-go nichi  tte
                                  this-(one) (T)       15th          (quote)

                                  yomu  no yo--
                                  read

Kyousuke: [sweating]
  Ah.  No, not that, but...       a  iya  sonna koto          ja nakute
                                     no   that-kind-of-thing  not-being

2
Kyousuke:
  I see...                        so-- ka

  Maybe they forgot.              WASUrete    n no  ka na
                                  forgetting        I-wonder
                                                       ____
  All right, I'll just circle     yoshi    ko-- yatte  maru
  it.                                      doing-this  circle

                                  JIRUSHI o tsukete
                                  marking

[He circles the 15th...]



3
[...and turns around, bright-eyed.]
Kyousuke:
  Heyyy!  What do you suppose     oya----_    kono SHIRUSHI wa   nan  daro--?
  this mark means?                       !    this-mark     (T)  what poss-be

4
[Kurumi's out the door...]
Kurumi: [off]
  I'm leeeaaving...               itte-kima--su

door FX:                          _____
                            batan

Takashi: [also about to leave]
  What are you doing?             nani  yatte  n da      omae
                                  what  doing  (explan)  you

5
Takashi:
  If you don't hurry,             omae mo   HAYAku ikanai to
  you'll be late, too!            you  too  if-not-go-soon

                                  CHIKOKU suru         zo
                                  be-late-(for-school) !

  Oh yeah, I won't be coming      so-- so--    washi  KON'YA  wa   SHIGOTO de
  home from work tonight, so                   I      tonight (T)  at-work
  I won't need a meal.                                    _____
                                  KAEranai         kara   meshi wa   iran  yo
                                  not-return-home  since  meal  (T)  not-need

6
Takashi: [off]
  Ah, busy, busy.                 a--  isogashi isogashi

door FX: [off]                    _____
                            batan

7
[Kyousuke stands there, shell-shocked.]
narration:                                                ___
  Wait everyone...  My            minna     chotto----    ore no  TANJOUBI
  birthday!                       everyone  wait-a-sec    my      birthday

---------------------------------------------------
p 96 (52)

1
[Shot looking into classroom 3-A.]
sensei:
  Stand!                          KIRITSU!

2
Komatsu: [stretching]
  Oh, that was a good sleep!      fua--_   yoku  nemutta
                                    well  slept

  Well, it's lunchtime,           saate  o-HIRU      da     o-HIRU da
  lunchtime!                      well     lunchtime it-is

3
Kyousuke: [bright-eyed]                     ___
  Um...  I...                     ano  saa  ore...

Komatsu chair FX:                 _____
                        gata_

Komatsu:
  Hey, Hatta!                     o--i  HATTA
                                  ___
  Let's go get some bread!        pan    kai ni  iko--     zee
                                  bread  to-buy  shall-go  !

4
Kyousuke:
  W-wait a sec!                   chi chotto matta!

5
[Komatsu and Hatta turn around and look at him questioningly.]

6
Komatsu: [wide-eyed]
  What is it?                     nan da yo--
                                                      ___
  If we don't hurry...  The       HAYAku ikanai to    pan......
  bread...                        if-not-go-soon      bread

7
Kyousuke:                         ____
  Do you guys know what day       kimi-tachi    KYOU  wa   nan no HI    ka
  today is?                       you-(plural)  today (T)  what   today (?)

                                  SHItte-ru?
                                  be-knowing

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                          niko_

8
[Komatsu and Hatta stare at him uncomprehendingly.]

9
Komatsu: [slapping Kyousuke on the shoulder]
  Oh, right...                    a so-- ka

  I didn't notice.                so-- datta     KI ga tsukanakatta  yo
                                  was-like-that  did-not-notice

Komatsu hand FX:                  ___
                             pon

narration:
  Oh, they knew?!                 o  SHItte-te-kureta        no  ka!
                                     did-know-(favor-to-me)      (?)

  It's a good thing to have       ureshii naa    yappari    motsu-beki
  friends after all!              happy          after-all  should-have

                                  mono   wa   TOMO    desu  ne!
                                  person (T)  friend  are

---------------------------------------------------
p 97 (53)

1
Komatsu: [grinning]               _____   ______           _______
  The pro-wrestling match         sutan - hansen  TAI      jaianto
  between Stan Hansen and         Stan    Hansen  versus   giant
  Giant Baba?
                                  BABA            no  #PWF#  SEN    daro?
                                  riding-ground/  's         match  poss-be
                                  race-course          Pro-Wrestling-Fed.

Kyousuke:
  ..........                      ..........

2
[Komatsu and Hatta walk off.]
Hatta:
  Ah, really...  Is that so?      a  so-- ka   so-- datta    no ka
                                               was-like-that    (?)

3
[A hand rests on Komatsu's shoulder.]
Kyousuke: [off]
  Hey.                            n

4
Kyousuke:                                  ____
  You free tonight?!              KON'YA   hima?!
                                  tonight  free-time

Komatsu:
  I'm busy!                       isogashii!

5
Kyousuke: [crestfallen]
  Oh...  I see...                 a.......    soo...

6
[View pans back to show Madoka staring out the classroom window, alone.]
narration:
  Damn!  Well, who cares about    che_   nan-dee  nan-dee!    OTOKO nan-ka
  the guys!                       damn!  why      why         guys  somehow

                                  do-- demo i--          yai!
                                  not-matter-either-way  hey

7
Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                            chira

8
[Pov from outside the window looking in at Madoka.  She rests her cheek in
 her hand.]
narration:
  Just as I thought, I should     yappari            sasoun      nara
  have invited a girl from the    just-as-I thought  not-invite  if-it-is
  start!
                                  SAISHO kara     ONNA no KO ni
                                  from-the-start  girl      (IO)

                                  suru-beki  datta  n da!
                                  should-do  was    (explan)

Kyousuke:
  Good, good.                     yoka yoka

 (All right...  I'll speak to     (yoshi      KAErigiwa           ni  demo
  her right before going home.)    all-right  just-as-one-leaves (IO)

                                  KOE o kakete-miyou)
                                  shall-try-and-call-out

---------------------------------------------------
p 98 (54)

1
[Exterior shot looking up at a school building.]
school bell FX:                   ___ ___ ___ ___
         kin kon kan kon

2
Kyousuke FX:                      __________
                            kyorokyoro

3
[Kyousuke asks 2 female classmates...]
Kyousuke:
  Have you seen Ayukawa--         AYUKAWA...  iya  AYUKAWA-kun  minakatta?
  I mean, Ayukawa-kun?                        no                not-seen

girl:
  Her?  It looks like she's       ano HITO     nara..........
  gone home already.              that-person  if-it-is

                                  moo      KAEtchatta           mitai  yo
                                  already  (= KAEtte-shimatta)  seems
                                              went-home-(finality)

4
Kyousuke: [stricken]
  WHAT?!                          he_

5
[His imagined candlelight dinner with the elegantly dressed Madoka.  They
 clink their wineglasses together.]

6
[The image in panel 5 develops huge cracks.  Overlaid on this is a mortified
 Kyousuke.]
narration:
  Well, my plans for a nice       YOTEI shite-ita  AYUKAWA to no
  party with Ayukawa are          did-plan/intend  w/Ayukawa  's
  collapsing with a crash!                   ________
                                  TANOshii  pa--ti-- ga   OTO o tatete
                                  pleasant  party    (S)  noisily

                                  kuzurete-iku!
                                  go-and-crumble/collapse

shattered-dream FX:               ______ ______ _____
             pishi_ pishi_ pishi

---------------------------------------------------
p 99 (55)

1
[An unhappy Kyousuke walks home from school.]
narration:
  Wh-what's this?!                na nan-te  koto    da
                                     what!   matter  is
                                              ___
  There's no one left to...       moo         ore ni wa          DARE-mo----
                                  any-more    for-me (contrast)  nobody

Kyousuke FX:                      ________
                   tobotobo

2
[Hikaru walks towards him on the sidewalk, hands in her skirt pockets...]
Kyousuke/Hikaru encounter FX:
           battari

3
[...and she flashes him a brilliant smile!]
narration:
  --ASK!                          ita!
                                  there-was

, but Hikaru appears in mid-thought, so  became .
 The new sentence, , means "There was someone.">

Hikaru:
  Oh!                             ara_!

4
[Kyousuke goes wide-eyed with hope...]
narration:
  That's right!                   so-- da yo
                                  ___
  I still had Hikaru-chan!        ore ni wa          mada      hikaru-chan ga
                                  for-me (contrast)  still/yet             (S)

                                  ita        n da!
                                  was-there  (explan)

5
[...and grabs her by her hands.  Hikaru is taken by surprise.]
narration:
  But to make double-sure...      demo  NEN        ni   wa
                                  but   a-feeling (IO) (contrast)

                                  NEN o Irete
                                  being-careful

Kyousuke:                                      ___
  Hikaru-chan, look into my       hikaru-chan  ore no ME o   mite-kure!
  eyes!                                        my-eyes  (O)  look-(command/
                                                               favor-to-me)

narration:                        _chikara_
  Maybe I should try using the    NOURYOKU o TSUKAtte
  Power to give her a hint...     using-the-Power

                                  ANJI o kaketokeba...
                                         (= kakete-okeba)
                                  if-suggest-(for-future's-sake)

hand-clasp FX:
                        gyu_

6
[He stares intently into her eyes.]
narration:
  *PLEASE*!  Come to my           tanomu!   ore no TANJOUBI  kite-kure!
  birthday!                       beg/      my     birthday  come-(command/
                                  implore                        favor-to-me)

Kyousuke concentration FX:
                       ji----_

7
Hikaru FX:                        ___
                 po_

8
[She hugs him around the neck.]
Hikaru:                           _______
  Darling!                        da--rin!

Hikaru FX:
                            shikka

---------------------------------------------------
p 100 (56)

1
Hikaru: [still hugging]
  I understand purr-rr-fect-ly!   yo--_ku  wakarimashita
                                  fully    understood

Kyousuke:
 (S-so she got it...)             (so so-- ka  wakatte-kureta ka)
                                               understood-(favor-to-me)

2
Hikaru: [still hugging]                     _______
  That you think of me this       konna ni  da--rin ga   atashi no koto
  much, Darling...                so-much           (S)  about-me

                                  OMOtte-kureru        nan-te......
                                  think-(favor-to-me)  the-likes-of
                                  _______
  Your gaze...                    da--rin no sonna manazashi...
                                          's that-kind-of-look

  I'm so happy!                   atashi  ureshii!
                                  I       happy

narration:
  Sh-she didn't get it!           tsu TSUUjite-nai!

3
Hikaru: [running off]
  But I'm a little busy right     demo  atashi  IMA  chotto    isogashi--
  now...                          but   I       now  a-little  busy

                                  n de
                                  since

  Excuuuse me!                    SHITSUREI shima--su!

Kyousuke:
  Eh?!                            e?!

4
Hikaru running FX:                ___ ___ ___
                  ta_ ta_ ta_

Kyousuke:
  Ah, Hika...                     a  hika...

5
narration:
  Maybe it doesn't work on        hikaru-chan mitai na   SEIKAKU no KO ni wa
  people with personalities                   look-like  a-girl-of-personality
  like Hikaru-chan's.
                                  konna mon            TSUUjinai
                                  that-kind-of-person  not-understood

                                  no ka naa
                                     I-wonder

Kyousuke FX:
              gakkuri

6
[Evening shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]

7
[Kyousuke enters his apartment--it is dark inside.]
door FX:                          _____
                           kacha

---------------------------------------------------
p 101 (57)

1
[At the entryway, he stops to remove his shoes.]
narration:                                   ___
  Today's my birthday...          KYOU  wa   ore no  TANJOUBI----
                                  today (T)  my      birthday

Kyousuke:
 (What's this...                  (nan da

  Kurumi and the others still     kurumi-tachi        mada
  haven't come home...)                 (and-assoc)   still

                                  KAEtte-kite-nai     no ka...)
                                  have-not-come-home     (musing)

2
[He pauses to visualize the joyous birthday party he had hoped to have.]
narration:
  A happy birthday with           minna de       TANOshiku  TANJOUBI----
  everyone...                     with-everyone  pleasant   birthday

3
[He kicks viciously at the umbrella stand, sending it flying.]
Kyousuke:
  DAMMIT!                         kuso----_

kick FX:                          ___
                          ga_

4
[His pov of an empty, neat and dark living room.]

---------------------------------------------------
p 102 (58)

1
FX:
                         shi~~n

2
[He angrily pulls out a bottle of liquor from a cabinet...]
narration:
  Where the heck are Kurumi       kurumi ya manami mo  ittai doko
  and Manami?!                           and           where-in-the-world

                                  itta  n da!
                                  gone  (explan)

cabinet door FX:                  _____
                           kacha

3
narration:                                                ___
  Hmph!  Anyhow, no one cares     hen!  do--se  minna     ore no koto
  about my feelings!                    anyhow  everyone  about-me

                                  nan-ka   do-- demo i--
                                  somehow  not-matter-either-way

                                  to OMOtte    n daro!
                                  think-that  (poss-explan)

Kyousuke FX:                      ____ ____
                       goku goku

4
[He sits on the floor with his bottle and flashes violently with the Power.]
Kyousuke:
  Hmph!!                          he--n da!!

living room devastation FX:
         byu_  gachan  byu_

5
[Isolated shot of her lower skirt and legs...]
girl FX:                          ___ ___
                     ko_ ko_

---------------------------------------------------
p 103 (59)

1
doorbell FX:                      ___ _____  ___ _____
             pin po--n  pin po--n

Kyousuke: [taking another gulp]
  What a pain...  Who is it       usse-- na--  DARE da     IMAgoro
  now?!                           (urusai)     who  is-it  now
                                   bothersome

2
[He takes a look out the front door.]
narration:
  A newspaper solicitor?          SHIMBUN no   KAN'YUUIN  darou
                                  newspaper's  canvasser  poss-be

door FX:                          ______
                          gacha_

Kyousuke:
  We don't need a paper...        SHIMBUN   nara      uchi      wa
                                  newspaper if-it-is  household (T)

                                  maniatte...
                                  can-do-without/can-dispense-with

3
[Madoka enters in dress and overcoat.]
door FX:                          _____
                            batan

---------------------------------------------------
p 104 (60)

1
Kyousuke: [face flushed]
  Wh-what's this?                 na nan da

  A paperboy that looks like      AYUKAWA ni  NIta       KAN'YUUIN  da naa
  Ayukawa?                               (IO) resembled  canvasser  is



 was replaced with "newspaper solicitor"  or just "solicitor" .>

Kyousuke drunken FX:              _____
                             hikku

Kyousuke:
  Hi!                             yoo!

2
Madoka: [wide-eyed]
  "PAPERBOY"?!                    KAN'YUUIN?!

3
Kyousuke:
  The paperboy looking like       SHIMBUN no   KAN'YUUIN ga   AYUKAWA ni
  Ayukawa...                      newspaper's  canvasser (S)         (IO)

                                  mieru   nan-te
                                  appear  the-likes-of
                                  _____
                             hikku

  This is great!                  korya  SAIKOU  daa~~~~_
                                         great   this-is

Kyousuke:
  Oh, it doesn't matter who.      ma--  dare  demo  i-- ya
                                        who   even  fine

  Come in, come in!               agatte  agatte
                                  come-in

Madoka:
  Eh?                             e

4
Madoka:
 (Kasuga-kun's drunk?)            (KASUGA-kun yopparatte n no kaa...)
                                              drunk           (?)

Kyousuke:
  Yes, I'm glad you came.  Heh    iya  yoku  kita  ne    he_ he_ he_
  heh heh, stay for a drink!           good  came

                                  ma--  agatte   ippai
                                        come-in  one-cup-(i.e.,-a-drink)

5
[Madoka removes her coat and views the trashed living room while Kyousuke
 goes into the kitchen.]
Madoka:
  Qu-quite a room...              su sugoi    HEYA......
                                     amazing  room

Kyousuke:
  The newspapers are getting      konna beppin-san          ga
  sharp, sending someone          this-kind-of-beauty-(hon) (S)
  good-lookin' like you.
                                  kite-kureru           to wa
                                  coming-(favor-to-me) (define)

                                  SAIKIN no KAN'YUUIN mo  SHOUBAI        ga
                                  latest 's canvasser     trade/business (S)

                                  umai
                                  skillful/good/promising

---------------------------------------------------
p 105 (61)

1
Kyousuke: [yanking her down to sit on the couch]
  Hey, come here and have         hora  kotchi ni kite  oshaku shite!
  a drink!                        look  come-this-way   serving-you-sake

Kyousuke FX:
                           gui_

Madoka:
  Ah!                             a

2
[With two bottles, he pours her a drink.  The glass in Madoka's hand
 overflows.]
Kyousuke:
  Well, drink, drink.             sa-- sa--  nonde    nonde
                                  well       drinking

  Be merry!                       moriagarimasho!
                                  shall-swell/rise

pouring FX:
                  toku toku toku

3
Kyousuke FX:
                          gubi~~

4
Madoka:
 (What in the world happened?)    (ittai nani         ga   atta      n darou)
                                   what-in-the-world  (S)  happened

Kyousuke: [getting angry]
                            puha~~

  Listen...                       kiku--

5
Madoka: [worried]
  Hey.  What is it?               nee    do-- shita no?

Kyousuke: [exploding]
  WHAT IS IT?!                    do-- shita?!

6
Kyousuke: [screaming]
  IF YOU WANT TO KNOW...          do-- shita da       too
                                  what-is-the-matter  (quote)

7
Madoka:
 (When he drinks too much         (koitsu...   o-SAKE nomu to   KYOKUTAN ni
  sake, his personality            this-guy    if-drink-liquor  to-an-extreme
  changes radically...)
                                  SEIKAKU      KAwaru  n da      kara...)
                                  personality  change  (explan)  that's-why

8
Kyousuke: [quiet and weepy]
  Today...                        KYOU  wa   nee......
                                  today (T)

---------------------------------------------------
p 106 (62)

1
Kyousuke: [screaming]
  TODAY IS MY BIRTHDAY, THAT'S    KYOU wa    ore no tanjo--BI  nan da    zoo_
  WHAT!                           today (T)  my-birthday       that's-what  !

2
[Madoka portrait--happy realization.]

3
Madoka:
  I see...  Happy birthday!       soo...  omedeto

Madoka FX:                        _____
                          niko_

4
[Kyousuke pours himself another drink, but forgets he doesn't have a glass
 in hand.  The liquor ends up in his lap.  Madoka's eyes grow large.]
Kyousuke:
  A-and in spite of that,         so_  sore       na no ni
  everyone's ignored my                that-(one)    even-though
  feelings...                                      ___
                                  sonna shite      ore no koto
                                  doing-like-that  about-me

                                  shiran    puri shite......
                                  not-know  pretending-to

Kyousuke drunken FX:              ____ ____
                           dobo dobo

5
Kyousuke: [off]
  How cold-hearted!               hakujo--                 mo--n
                                  cold-hearted/heartless   person

Madoka: [nervous smile]
 (He's uncontrollable.)           (TE ga tsukerarenai  wa ne)
                                   be-uncontrollable

6
[Madoka gets up and goes through a doorway.]
Madoka:
  Where are the kitchen towels?   chotto  fukin                wa   doko?
                                          towel-(dish/paper/   (T)  where
                                          whatever)

Kyousuke:
  You're certainly an             omae  omoshiroi    KAN'YUUIN  da naa
  interesting paperboy.           you   interesting  canvasser  be

7
[Madoka spies a partly-open door.]

---------------------------------------------------
p 107 (63)

1
Madoka:
  Hmmm.  So this is               fu--n    koko       ga   KASUGA-kun no
  Kasuga-kun's room...            hmm      this-place (S)             's

                                  HEYA  kaa
                                  room  (musing)

2
[From nowhere, a fork hurtles through the air...]
flying fork FX:                   ____
                          shu_

3
[...embedding itself through Madoka's skirt and into the wall.  Her legs and
 part of her panties are exposed.]
fork-in-wall FX:                  ___
                          ka_

4
Madoka: [angry, pulling at the fork]
  Wh-what are you doing?!         na nani  sun no  yo
                                     what  doing

5
[Kyousuke approaches close.]
Kyousuke:
  Funny...  What's a paperboy     okashii...    KAN'YUUIN ga   do--shite
  doing with sexy legs like       funny         paperboy  (S)  why
  those?!
                                  sonna         IROppoi  ASHI  shite-ru  n da
                                  that-kind-of  sexy     legs  be-doing (expl)

Kyousuke approach FX:             ____
                            zui_

---------------------------------------------------
p 108 (64)

1
[She backs into his room.]
Kyousuke: [screaming]
  Are you really a paperboy?!     omae  HONTOU ni  KAN'YUUIN  kaa_?!
                                  you   really     canvasser  (?)!

Madoka: [screaming]
  I told you, I'm not!            da kara     chigau   tte!
                                  that's-why  mistaken

2
Kyousuke:
  Hey, come here...               chotto  kotchi e  ko......
                                          to-here

[He steps on a 5-kilo dumbbell, lying on the floor...]

Kyousuke FX:
                           tsuru_

3
[...and pitches forward into Madoka.  They topple over backwards.]
Madoka:
  Ah!                             a

4
landing-on-bed FX:                ____
                           dosa

5
[Madoka, flat on her back, stares up wide-eyed at the ceiling--past Kyousuke
 who lies atop her.]
Madoka heartbeat FX:              _____
                          doki_

---------------------------------------------------
p 109 (65)

1
[Her face grows flushed as Kyousuke rests his head next to hers.]
Kyousuke:
  Uh-hmm.                         u--n

Madoka heartbeat FX:              ____ ____ ____ ____
         doki doki doki doki

2
Madoka:
 (I don't have the time to        (atashi  koko de  konna koto
  be doing stuff like this         I       to-here  this-kind-of-thing
  here...)
                                  shite-ru  BA-AI     ja nai    no yo ne...)
                                  be-doing  occasion     not-have

Kyousuke: [blurting out, drunkenly]
  Hey, paperboy!                  yai  KAN'YUUIN!

3
Madoka: [snapping out of it]
  !                               !

4
[Isolated shot of her hand grabbing a hefty tome.]

5
[It's another variation of the "Ayukawa Slap".]
book FX:                          _____
                            bashi

Kyousuke:
  OW!                             a ita_!!

book title:
  Encyclopedia, "A"-"UI"          DAI    HYAKKA JITEN    a - ui
                                  great  encyclopedia    "a"-to-"ui"



---------------------------------------------------
p 110 (66)

1
Kyousuke: [snapping out of it]
  Ah!                             a

2
Kyousuke: [leaping back]
  AYUKAWA?!                       AYUKAWA?!

Kyousuke FX:
                            sasa_

3
Kyousuke: [wide-eyed]
  Wh-what are you doing here?     na nani  do--shite  mata  koko  ni...
                                     what  why        also  here (IO)

Madoka: [angrily]
  I see you've come to your       do--yara        SHOUKI     ni
  senses.                         it-looks-as-if  soberness (IO)

                                  modotta   you ne
                                  returned  seems

Madoka:
 (This drunk!)                    (kono  SHURAN!)
                                   this  vicious-drinker/drunken-frenzy

4
[With a frown, she grabs him by the hand and drags him along.]
Madoka:
  Come on!                        chotto kinasai yo!

  I came to take you somewhere.   atashi anata o  YObinikita  n da karaa
                                  I      you  (O) came-for   (for-that-reason)

Madoka FX:
                           gui_

5
[Outside, she continues to drag him down the street.]

6
[Exterior night shot of ABCB.]
Madoka: [off]
  Open your eyes, and take a      i-- koto!  yo--ku  ME o akete-miteminasai
  good look!                      look-here  fully   try-and-open-eyes-
                                                                  (command)

7
[Standing at the entryway, Kyousuke looks in.]
door FX:                          _____
                          karan

---------------------------------------------------
p 111 (67)

1
[Manami, Kurumi, Master, Hikaru, Hatta and Komatsu stand and face him.  Some
 uncork their party-poppers.]
everyone: [facing Kyousuke]       _________  _________
  Happy Birthday!                 happi----  ba--sudei!

party-poppers FX:                 ___ ___
                         pan pan

2
[Everyone's pov of Madoka and Kyousuke.  Madoka smiles pleasantly.  Kyousuke
 looks on, stunned.]

3
[He looks over at Madoka, who gives a friendly nod.]
Madoka FX:                        _____
                            koku_

4
[Pov over Kyousuke's shoulder shows everyone turning back to Hikaru...]
everyone:
  ...HIKARU-CHAN!                 hikaru-chan!

Kyousuke pratfall FX:             _____
                           zuru_

Hikaru:
  Thank you!!                     do--mo arigato!!

[Madoka smiles merrily.]

---------------------------------------------------
p 112 (68)

1
[Hikaru races over with arms outflung.]
Hikaru:                           _______
  Darling!                        da--rin!

2
Hikaru:                                                   _______
  I knew Darling and I were       yappari      atashi to  da--rin to wa
  tied by a red string !
                                  AKAi ITO de    musubarete-ita  n desu   ne
                                  by-red-string  were-tied       (explan)



Kyousuke:
  Eh?                             e

3
[Kyousuke looks over at Komatsu and his sisters.]
Manami/Kurumi/Komatsu FX:         ________
                           nikoniko

4
Kyousuke:
  Ah!                             a_

narration:
  C-could it be...                mo moshi-ka-shite...
                                                  ___
  Hikaru-chan and I have the      hikaru-chan to  ore  onnaji  TANJOUBI?!
  same birthday?!                             and I    same    birthday

5
Manami: [to Kyousuke]                                          _________
  This is Dad's present, and      kore        oto--san kara no purezanto
  this one is from Kurumi and     this-(one)  from-father   's present
  me...
                                  soshite  kore       wa   atashi to kurumi
                                  and      this-(one) (T)  I      and

                                  kara...
                                  from

Kyousuke: [happily]
  Y-you two...                    o oMAEra...

6
Komatsu: [grinning]
  Here, take these dirty          omae no hoshigatte-ta  iyarashi~~ HON
  books you wanted!               your    did-want       dirty-books

                                  motte-ke
                                  go-and-take/carry

  You scoundrel!                  dorobo--!

Hatta: [grinning]                      ______
  You lech!                       kono sukebe!

Kyousuke: [testily]
  I never said that...            ittemasen

7
[Portrait of Kyousuke, arms piled high with gifts.  He beams a smile.]
narration:                                                    ____
  Wh-what's this?  Everyone       na naan da        minna     guru
  was in this together?!             what's-this    everyone  conspire/
                                                              in-league-with

                                  datta  no kaa
                                  was       (?)

book titles:
  Dirty book                      iyarashi HON
                                  ___
  Porno book                      ero HON
                                             ______
  Extremely Perverted             muchakucha sukebe

8
[Madoka solemnly places a present on the stack in his arms.]
Madoka:
  Here's mine!                    atashi wa   kore      _
                                  I      (T)  this-(one)!

---------------------------------------------------
p 113 (69)

1
Madoka: [tossing her hair back]
  Kasuga-kun's favorite           KASUGA-kun no DAISUki na    o - sa - ke!
  o-sa-ke!                           's favorite      liquor

2
Hikaru:                                      _________
  My present, of course...        atashi no  purezanto wa   mochiron...
                                  my         present   (T)  of-course

[Hikaru hugs him around the neck and puckers up.  Kyousuke goes bug-eyed.]

Kyousuke FX:                      ____
                            giku

3
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]
Kyousuke: [off]                   ___
  !!  Heyyy!  Hikaru-chan!        do_    chotto~~~~~~_  hikaru-chan

everyone:                         ____________
  Wah-haha-hahaha                 wahahahahaha
                                  ______ ______
                   yan'ya yan'ya

4
[Overhead view of the party.  Madoka talks to Master.  Hikaru hugs Kyousuke.
 Komatsu nervously approaches Manami.  Hatta looks on.  Kurumi munches at
 the buffet table.  In left inset, a closeup of Hikaru as she's about to
 kiss Kyousuke on his cheek.  In right inset, Madoka looks on with a sweet
 smile.]
narration:
  Kasuga Kyousuke, 15 years       KASUGA KYOUSUKE  15-SAI------
  old...

  A happy, happy birthday!        TANOshii     TANOshii  TANJOUBI!
                                  fun/pleasant           birthday

---------------------------------------------------