Kimagure Orange Road
"Kyousuke-kun Transforms!"
Volume 5, Story 1
WB Volume 3, Story 3
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi

Translation by : Albert Nakano
Additional translation by : Timothy H. Clapin & Craig Nishida
Full-script typesetting by : Timothy Clapin & Craig Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
                                 Timothy Clapin
                                 Craig Nishida
                                 Spencer Hastings
                                 Peter Norby
                                 Melinda Miller
                                 Tony Schrick

Last revision : 02-07-95

Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:
     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu

NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few
      extras to those of you not having them.
      Example: The subtitles on page 51 (7) are only in the WBs!
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p 51 (7)--TITLE PAGE

[Madoka in a leotard warms up for ballet.  She is on tiptoe with her hand
 on a barre.]

MAIN TITLE (at top)
  Kyousuke-kun Transforms!        KYOUSUKE-kun  HENSHINsu!
                                                transforms

SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
  Now That I've Stretched, My     SEnobi o shitara          KIBUN       wa
  Feelings Are Ready--Gazing      when-stretching-yourself  the-feeling (T)
  Excitedly at My Silhouette,     _______                        _________
  and Taking Delicate Steps--     redei--  MItsumete  tokimeki   shiruetto
  One, Two, Three!                ready    gazing-at  thrilling  silhouette
                                                   _______  __ ___ ______
                                  shinayaka        suteppu  an-dou-torowa!
                                  delicate/supple  step     
                                                            one-two-three

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p 52 (8)

1
[Kyousuke's pov of his sister.]
Manami:                                      ________
  Onii-chan, coffee or milk?      oni--chan  ko--hi--  soretomo  GYUUNYUU?
                                             coffee    or-else   milk

2
Kyousuke:                                         ________
  W-well...  Coffee.  Ah, no.     so so--da naa   ko--hi--   a  iya  MAte yo
  Wait.  Milk, I guess.  But...      well         coffee        no   wait

                                  yappari    GYUUNYUU  ka na       shikashi...
                                  after-all  milk      I-wonder    but

3
Kyousuke: [lowering his head in thought]
  Hmm!                            u~~~~n!

Kyousuke at-wit's-end FX:
                         hatato

4
[View pans back to show Manami at the stove, frying some eggs.  Kurumi and
 Kyousuke sit at the table, eating.]
Manami:
  Oniichan, you're so             oni--chan tte  tsukuzuku   YUUJUUFUDAN
  indecisive.                              (T)   completely  indecisive

                                  na no ne--
                                       (rhet)

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                            zukin

5
Kurumi:
  Didn't you know?                shitte-ru--?
                                  be-knowing

  Oniichan was just lost in       oniichan  ttara       sakki
  thought for over 5 minutes                I-tell-you  a-little-while-ago
  over what shirt to wear!               ______
                                  datte  shatsu  kiru     no ni
                                  even   shirt   to-wear  in-order-to

                                  5 FUN      ISHOU      KANGAekonde
                                  5-minutes  more-than  lost-in-thought

                                  n da      yo
                                  (explan)  (mild-emph)
                                  ____
  How stupid!                     baka    mitai!
                                  stupid  -seeming

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                            zukin

6
Manami:
  Don't you know that girls       ONNA no KO tte  hakkiri shinai OTOKO no KO ga
  really hate boys who are        girls      (T)  not-decisive   boys       (S)
  indecisive?
                                  ichiban  KIRAi    datte   SHItte-ta?
                                  most     dislike  reason  did-know

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                            zukin

narration:
  It all began with this          kono  hitoKOTO    ga  kikkake de
  statement.                      this  single-word (S) in-the-beginning

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p 53 (9)

1
[Kyousuke washes his face at the bathroom sink.]
narration:
  I can't believe that it would   masaka    anna koto ni
  lead to that...                 can't-be  into-that-kind-of-thing

                                  narou to            wa...
                                  if-shall-turn-into

Kyousuke FX:                      ____
                          jabu

2
narration: [flashback]
  Girls really hate boys who      ONNA no KO tte  hakkiri shinai
  are indecisive...               girls      (T)  not-decisive

                                  OTOKO no KO ga   ichiban  KIRAi...
                                  boys        (S)  most     dislike

Kyousuke:                          ___
 (I'm so indecisive.)             (ore tte YUUJUUFUDAN  da  kara       naa)
                                   I   (T) indecisive   am  that's-why (emph)
3
[He visualizes Madoka and Hikaru.]
Kyousuke:
 (Wait...!                        (mate yo...
                                   wait (emph)

  Speaking of girls, Ayukawa      ONNA no KO  to ieba      AYUKAWA ya
  and Hikaru-chan might be        girls       speaking-of          and
  thinking that way as well.
                                  hikaru-chan  datte  yappari  so--
                                               even   as-well  like-that

                                  OMOtte-ru    no de     wa
                                  be-thinking  ('cause)

  Even if they're not thinking    tatoe    IMA wa  mada  OMOtte-nakute mo
  it now, sooner or later...)     even-if  now (T) yet   even-tho-not-thinking

                                  izure            wa...)
                                  sooner-or-later

4
[He imagines them averting their faces from him in disdain.]
narration:
  I hate you!!                    ichiban  KIRAi!!
                                  most     dislike/hate

Madoka and Hikaru FX:
                           tsu--n

Kyousuke FX:
                         zo_

5
[He stares intently at himself in the mirror.]
narration:
  I-I must not be like this...    i ikenai    ko--yu-- koto       de   wa....
                                    must-not  this-kind-of-thing  being

narration:
  I want to be more DECISIVE!     motto  TSUYOi  KETSUDAN RYOKU  ga  hoshii!
                                  more   strong  decisiveness    (S) want

Kyousuke contemplation FX:
                          ji----_

6
[Strange ripples emanate from the mirror.]
narration:
  DECISIVE!!                      TSUYOi  KETSUDAN RYOKU ga!!
                                  strong  decisiveness   (S)

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p 54 (10)

1
[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]
Manami:
  We're leeeaving!  Oniichan,     itte-kima--su    oni--chan mo  HAYAku!
  hurry up!  We're going to       begin-going                    hurry
  be late!
                                  CHIKOKU shichau          yo
                                          (= shite-shimau)
                                  be-late-(finality/regret)

2
[At the front door, Manami and Kurumi look back as Kyousuke approaches.]
Manami:
  Huh?                            e

3
Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                          niko_

4
Kyousuke: [sternly]
  Why walk especially if we're    naze  CHIKOKU shisou na  no ni
  about to be late?               why   look-to-be-late    even-though

                                  wazawaza    ARAite-iku   n da
                                  especially  go-and-walk  (explan)

  Isn't this the kind of          ko--yu-- TOKI               koso
  situation where we should       this-kind-of-time/occasion  indeed
  use the Power?                  _chikara_
                                  NOURYOKU  o   TSUKAu-beki  ja nai  no ka
                                  Power    (O)  should-use   is-not     (?)

  Why can't you realize that      nan-de  sore        gurai   no koto
  much?                           why     that-(one)  extent  's thing

                                  KI ga tsukanai    n da
                                  cannot-realize    (explan)

5
Manami:
  HUH?                            e

Kurumi:                           ______
  You idiot!  What are you        baka--    nani itte    n no
  talking about?                  idiot     what saying

  Aren't you the one who          HITOMAE de  TSUKAu na             tte itta
  said not to use our Power       in-public   do-not-(neg-command)  said-that
  in public, oniichan?
                                  no wa  oni--chan  ja nai  no
                                                    are-not

Kyousuke:
  WHO CARES!                      SHIran!

6
Kurumi:
  OH!                             a

Manami:
  Huh?!                           e_

Kyousuke:
  So I'm outta here!              to yu-- wake de  o-SAKI ni!
                                  for-that-reason  beforehand

Kyousuke teleport FX:             ____
                          shu_

7
Kurumi:
  Oniichan, that's not faaair!    oni--chan  zuru--i

Kurumi teleport FX:               ____
                          shu_

Manami:
  Hey, you just said...           to i-- tsutsu      chotto
                                  tho-you-said-that  hey

  Now you're going, too...        kurumi  anta made...
                                          you  even

8
Manami:
 (But...  Wasn't he acting a      (shikashi...  nan-ka    HEN      datta na...
  bit strange...?)                 but          somewhat  strange  was

                                  oniichan...)

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p 55 (11)

1
[Hikaru walks down the street, on her way to school.]

2
[Kyousuke materializes in midair, about 30 feet above her...]
Kyousuke teleport FX:             ____
                          shu_

3
[He crashes down on her back.]
collision FX:                     ________
                         doshi--n

Hikaru:
  GYAA!                           gya~~

4
Kyousuke:
  S-sorry.                        go gomen

Hikaru:
  Ow ow ow...                     itatata..........

5
[Hikaru starts yelling...]
Hikaru: [angel-of-death expression]
  Y-you asshole!  What are        ba bakkyaro----_  nani shiya         ga
  you looking at?!                               !  what field-of-view (S)
                                                    _______
  You idio...                     n dai        kono o-tanko...
                                  (explan)     this-idiot

6
[...and then notices who she's yelling at.]
Hikaru:
  O...                            na...

7
Hikaru: [embracing him]
  O-ohh...  So it's you,          na naan da     SEMPAI  ja nai  desu ka!
  Sempai!                            what is-it          is-not  is   (?)

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p 56 (12)

1
[Hikaru takes Kyousuke's arm and they walk down the street.]
Hikaru:
  But...  This is pretty          shikashi  mezurashi--  desu ne
  unusual, isn't it?              but       unusual      is   (rhet)

  You heading for school so       SEMPAI ga   konna         HAYAku
  early.                                 (S)  this-kind-of  early

                                  TOUKOU shite-kuru      nan-te
                                  begin-going-to-school  the-likes-of

  Did something happen?           nani-ka    atta      n desu    ka?
                                  something  happened  (explan)  (?)

2
[Kyousuke locks eyes with her.]
Kyousuke:
  I flew down here as soon        sukoshi   demo         HAYAku...
  as possible...                  a-little  even-though  soon

3
Kyousuke:
  ...because I wanted to see      hikaru-chan no kao   mitakutte
  your face.                                  's face  wanting-to-see-(and)

                                  tonde-kita    no sa
                                  began-flying

4
[Hikaru goes wide-eyed.]
Hikaru heartbeat FX:              _____
                          doki_

5
Hikaru:
  Y-you  about me that      so sonna ni   atashi no koto o...
  much...?  S-Sempai...              that-much  about-me      (O)

                                  se SEMPAI...



6
[Hikaru looks up at Kyousuke...]

7
[...who looks back at Hikaru.]

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p 57 (13)

1
[They embrace tightly.]
Hikaru:
  Sempai!                         sempai!

Kyousuke:
  Hikaru-chan!                    hikaru-chan!

hug FX:
                            shikka

2
[As they continue hugging, students on their way to school stare at them.]

3
[Pov pulls back to show a lot of people looking at them.]

4
[Hikaru looks around and blushes deeply.]
Hikaru:                           ___
  Ah!                             ha_

crowd FX:
                           jirojiro

5
Hikaru:
  W-wait, Sempai.  Everyone's     chi chotto SEMPAI    minna     kotchi
  looking...                                           everyone  this-way

                                  mite-masu    kedo......
                                  are-looking  but

Kyousuke:
  Good!  It's a chance for        yoshi    ii    KIKAI   da  motto
  them to take a good look!!               good  chance  be  more

                                  misetsukete-yarou!!
                                  shall-show-off/display-(favor-to-them)

6
[Hikaru is surprised and blushes.]
Hikaru:
  HUH?                            e

7
Hikaru: [sweating, blushing, and closing her eyes]
 (I-I wonder what's wrong?        (do do-- shita n darou

  Today, Sempai is...             KYOU no SEMPAI...
                                  today's

  It's good that he's so          sugoku                daitan      na no wa
  incredibly bold, but it's       wonderful/incredible  bold/daring
  a little embarrassing!)
                                  i--   kedo  hazukashi--  yo--)
                                  good  but   embarrassing

crowd FX:
                            zawa zawa

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p 58 (14)

1
[Madoka walks down the hall to class.]

2
[Kyousuke spots her.]

3
Kyousuke:
  Good morning, Ayukawa-kun!      ohayou AYUKAWA-kun!

4
Madoka: [wide-eyed]
 (Ayukawa-"KUN"?!)                (AYUKAWA-kun?!)

  Good morning.                   ohayou

5
Kyousuke:                         ____             _______
  You're off work from ABCB       kimi  KYOU  wa   abakabu YASUmi   desho
  today, right?*                  you   today (T)  ABCB    day-off  poss-be

Madoka: [still astounded]                           ____
  Um, well, yeah...  ("You"?!*)   e ee  maa...    ("kimi"?!)

<*He is using an intimate form of the pronoun for "you".>

6
Kyousuke:                                       ______
  How about we go to a disco      doo  KON'YA   disuko  ikanai?
  tonight?                        how  tonight  disco   not-go

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p 59 (15)

1
Madoka: [surprised]
  WHAT?!                          e

2
Kyousuke:
  Just the two of us, of          mochiron   futari kkiri      de    ne
  course.                         of-course  two-people-alone  being

3
[Madoka blushes.]

4
Madoka:
  W-well.  Okay, but...           ma maa     ii   kedo..........
                                     well    okay but

  What on earth has come over     ittai         do-- yu--
  you?!                           in-the-world  what-kind-of

                                  KAZE no fukimawashi?!
                                  out-of-the-blue/a-curious-turn-of-events

5
[Kyousuke starts to leave...]
Kyousuke:                                        _______
  All right.  Later.  Meet        yoshi    ja    mebiusu MAE de
  you in front of Moebius at                     in-front-of-Moebius
  7 o-clock!
                                  7-JI ni!
                                  at-7-o-clock

6
Kyousuke:
  Oh, now I remember...           a sousou

7
Kyousuke: [with a wink]           ________  ____
  Dress *sexy*!                   batchiri "kimete"-oide         yo ne!
                                  dressing-sharp/sexy-(for-future's-sake)

8
Kyousuke:
  See ya later!                   ja ne!

9
[Madoka is in complete shock.]
Madoka:
  Huh...?!                        na_...

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p 60 (16)

1
[In the classroom, a teacher lectures at the blackboard.]
narration:
  Today, at school, Kyousuke      sono HI no  GAKKOU de no  KYOUSUKE wa...
  was...                          that-day's  at-school 's           (T)

blackboard:
  Time for a Learning Drill       ma,                    suru
                                  time/interval/pause    do

                                  [KOU/KAMA(ERU)/KAMA(U)/     KAMA(E)]
                                      build/    mind/pay-     construction/
                                      pose-as   attention-to  style/posture/
                                      assume-an-attitude      appearance

                                  [GAKU/MANA(BU)/            MANA(BI)]
                                   learning/study/science    knowledge

  1.  Something that is           1. GYAKU      SANKAKUKEN   dearu   ko(to)
      opposite to a triangle.        opposite/  triangle     is      thing
                                     converse

  2.  Something that's  a blood vessel        blood-vessel (S) come-up/rise  thing
      rising to the surface.



2
[Kyousuke raises his hand to answer a question as Komatsu looks on in shock.]
book:                                          __________
  Elements of Topology  --E. D.   SHOHO no     toporoji--    #E. D.#
  Zachary                         elements-of  topology
                                  ________
                                  zakari--

3
[Madoka stares at him in surprise.]

4
[Kyousuke flirts with some girls.]

5
[The boys look on in shock.]
narration:
  ...a completely...              marude------

6
[Kyousuke scores a goal in a soccer game.]

7
[Madoka and some other girls look on in shock.]
narration:
  ...different person!            BETSUJIN          no you datta!
                                  different-person         was

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p 61 (17)

1
[Madoka in a mini-skirt leans back against the wall outside the street-level
 entrance to Moebius.]

2
[Kyousuke waves as he approaches.]
Kyousuke:
  Wait long?                      MAtta?

3
[Kyousuke puts his arm around Madoka's shoulder which startles her.]
Kyousuke:
  Let's go in.                    saa   ikou      ka
                                  well  shall-go  (?)

4
Madoka contemplation FX:
                        ji--~~...

Kyousuke:
  What?                           nani?

5
[Kyousuke and Madoka walk down the stairs into Moebius, his arm still
 around her shoulder.]
Madoka:
  Oh...  Nothing.                 uun...  nan demo nai

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p 62 (18)

1
[Madoka and Kyousuke dance.]

2
[Madoka looks at Kyousuke...]

3
Kyousuke FX:                      ______
                           pachi_

4
[Madoka is startled.]

5
[A guy crashes into the back of Madoka, sending her into the arms of
 Kyousuke.]
man:                                _____
  Oh, sorry.                      a gomen

man FX:                           ___
                            don

Madoka:
  OH!                             a

6
[Kyousuke puts his arms around her.]
Kyousuke FX:                      ____
                        gyu_

7
[She blushes.]
Madoka heartbeat FX:              _____
                          doki_

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p 63 (19)

1
[Kyousuke pulls back slightly to look into her eyes.]
Kyousuke:                                    _______ _____
  It's not "cheek time"...        mada...    chi--ku taimu  ja nai  yo
  Yet.                            yet        cheek-time     is-not

2
Madoka: [spinning out of his grasp]
  I'm thirsty!                    nodo    kawaita  na--
                                  throat  was-dry

Madoka FX:                        ___
                          su_

3
[At the bar.]
Madoka: [off]                             _______ ______
  I'll have a Bloody Mary.        atashi  buraddi mari--
                                  I       Bloody-Mary

  And you, Kasuga-kun?            KASUGA-kun wa?

4
[He leans casually on an elbow at the bar.]
Kyousuke:                               ___
  I'll have the same!             ja    ore mo   sore!
                                  then  I   too  that-(one)

5
[Madoka looks startled at his request.]

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p 64 (20)

1
[Kyousuke starts drinking the Bloody Mary.]
Kyousuke:
  Hmm?!                           n?!

2
Madoka:
  Hey, what on earth has come     nee  ittai do--         natte-ru        no
  over you today?                 say  what-in-the-world  be-turning-into

                                  KYOU wa
                                  today

3
Kyousuke:
  About what?                     nani ga

4
[Madoka has a questioning look.]

5
[Madoka smiles, blushes and tosses back her hair.]
Madoka:                           _____ __
  Pretty cool, aren't you.        kakko ii   ja nai
                                  cool       are-not

6
Kyousuke: [suave smile]
  If it seems like that...        moshi  so-- mieru
                                  if     seems-like-that

                                  to shitara  sore   wa...
                                              that-(one)

7
Kyousuke:                         ____
  ...it's all because of you.     kimi no  sei    sa
                                  your     fault

[Madoka is surprised yet again.]

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p 65 (21)

1
[She blushes and averts her gaze in embarrassment.]
crows-in-background FX:           ____
                            kaa_

2
[She gets up and leaves the bar.]
Madoka:
  Excuse me a moment!             chotto SHITSUREI!

3
[Kyousuke continues drinking.]
girl: [off]
  Hey there!                      nee

4
[Kyousuke looks over at a cute girl who leans in close to him.]
girl:                             ____
  Despite being young, you're     kimi  WAKAi  no ni
  good at holding it down,        you   young  even-though
  aren't you.
                                  ii    nomippuri           ja n
                                  good  drinking-technique  are-not

5
[In the ladies' restroom.]
faucet FX:                        ____
                         kyu_

6
[Madoka looks at herself in the mirror.]
Madoka:
  Oh no...  My face is red.       ya da...   KAO   akai
                                             face  red

7
Madoka:
 (I'm feeling a little strange    (KYOU  wa   atashi mo   sukoshi HEN     ne
  myself today, too.               today (T)  I      too  a-little-strange

  For some reason, I'm more       naze-ka  aitsu no koto
  conscious of him than usual.)   somehow  about-him

                                  ISHIKI shichau)
                                        (= shite-shimau)
                                  being-conscious-of-(finality)

8
[Madoka is walking back to the bar and sees...]
Madoka:
  !                               !

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p 66 (22)

1
[...Kyousuke drinking and surrounded by 3 girls.]

2
girl: [with a wink]
  When I take a good look         anta  yoku   miru     to
  you're pretty cute.             you   fully  look-at  when
                                           ______
                                  nakanaka kawaii  ja n
                                  very     cute    are-not

3
Kyousuke: [face flushed and wagging a finger]
  If it seems like that...        moshi  so-- mieru
                                  if     seems-like-that

                                  to shitara  sore   wa...
                                              that-(one)

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                             hikku

4
[He puts his arm around the girl's shoulder.]
Kyousuke:                         ____
  ...it's all because of you!     kimi no sei  da     zo~~~~!
                                  your-fault   it-is

girl: [grinning]
  Kyaaa!  You playboy, you!       kya---    kono ONNAttarashi  kono kono!
                                            this ladykiller/playboy

5
Madoka: [enraged]                          ____
 (Th-that idiot!)                 (a_ anno baka!)
                                    ! that idiot

Madoka FX:                        ___
                     mu_

6
[Madoka approaches and starts yelling at Kyousuke.]
Madoka: [exploding]
  What are you doing?!            nani  yatte  n no yo!
                                  what  doing

Kyousuke: [slurring]
  Oh!  This is Madoka-san.        oya  kore       wa   madoka-san  sa sa_
                                       this-(one) (T)
                                  ____
  Why don't you come over         kimi mo   kotchi e...!
  here, too...!                   you  too  to-here

7
[Two of the girls look on in surprise.]
Madoka: [off]
  Come over here for a bit!!      chotto  irasshai!!
                                  a-bit   come-here

8
[Madoka drags Kyousuke by the collar as he waves goodbye to the 3 girls.]
girl:
  Come again!  Next time, I'll    mata   oide    yo ne----_
  stay with you 'til morning!     again  coming

                                  KONDO     wa   ASA made
                                  next-time (T)  until-morning

                                  tsukiattageru        wa yo--
                                  (= tsukiatte-ageru)
                                     associate-with-you-(favor-to-you)

Kyousuke heels FX:                ________
                     zuruzuru

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p 67 (23)

1
[Now outside, Madoka pulls Kyousuke towards a fountain.]
Kyousuke: [slurring]
  W-wait, Madoka-san.  What are   chi chotto madoka-san    nani  su  n da
  you doing?                          wait                 what  do  (explan)

  I want to drink s'more!         motto  nomi--  yo
                                  more   drink
                                  _______
  I'm happy!                      happi--  da  ze
                                  happy    am

Madoka:
  Anyhow, you can use a           tonikaku  chotto...
  little...                       anyway    a-little

2
Madoka:
  ...cooling off!                 atama o   hiyashina!
                                  head (O)  cool-off

[She plunges his head into the fountain.]

dunk FX:                          ________
                        basha--n

3
Kyousuke:
  Wh-what are you doing?!         na nani  suru  n da     yo--_!
                                     what  do    (explan)

Kyousuke surfacing FX:            ____
                          pua_

4
Madoka:
  What the heck am I doing?!      ittai do--         shichatta         no yo!
                                  what-in-the-world  (= shite shimatta)
                                                        did-(finality/regret)

  This isn't Kasuga-kun!          konna no      KASUGA-kun  ja nai  yo_!
                                  this-kind-of              is-not

  Usually you're...               itsu-mo  wa...

5
Madoka:
  ...indecisive!                  YUUJUUFUDAN na  kuse ni!
                                  indecisive      in-habit-of-being

6
[Kyousuke is looking down at his reflection in the fountain as Madoka's voice
 echoes in his head.]

Madoka's voice: [echoing]
  Indecisive.  Indecisive.        YUUJUUFUDAN  YUUJUUFUDAN  YUUJUUFUDAN
  Indecisive.  Indecisive.        YUUJUUFUDAN  YUUJUUFUDAN
  Indecisive.

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1
Kyousuke:                         ___
  AH!                             ha_

2
[View pans way back as Kyousuke looks about at his surroundings.  Madoka
 sits at the edge of the fountain, watching him.]
Kyousuke:
  Wh-what's this?!  Here...       a are_    koko...  doko?
  Where am I?

3
[He realizes Madoka is there.  She looks at him with her arms crossed and a
 small smile on her face.]
Madoka:
  Have you come to your senses?   ME ga sameta?

Kyousuke:
  Ayukawa...                      AYUKAWA...

4
Kyousuke:                          ___
 (Why am I here?                  (ore  nan-de  konna TOKORO ni  iru
                                   I    why     in-this-place    be-here

                                  n da
                                  (explan)

  And with Ayukawa.)              shikamo  AYUKAWA to ISSHO ni)
                                  and      together-with-Ayukawa

5
[Madoka looks quizzically at Kyousuke.]

6
Kyousuke:                                        ___
 (That's right.  I looked in      (so-- da       ore  ASA
  the mirror this morning...       that's-right  I    morning

                                  KAGAMI o mite-te......
                                  be-looking-in-mirror

  Huh?  I wonder what happened    are?    sono ato    do-- shite-ta
  after that?)                            after-that  what did-happen

                                  n daro?
                                  (poss-explan)

[He visualizes himself concentrating at the mirror that morning.]

Kyousuke contemplation FX:        _______
                          ji----_

7
Kyousuke:                         ___
  I...  What on earth have I      ore  ittai nani         yatte-ta  no
  been doing?                     I    what-in-the-world  did-do

Madoka: [smiling]
  Look!                           hora ne!

8
[Madoka stands with a disapproving expression, hands on her hips.]
Madoka:
  A drunkard!                     yopparai!

Kyousuke:
  Oh!                             ha_

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1
[She turns her back to him, but smiles.]
Madoka:
  But I'm glad you're back to     demo  MOTO       ni modotte    yokatta
  normal.                         but   beginning     to-return  was-good

2
[Shot of the surrounding buildings.]
Madoka: [off]
  For a time, I was worried       ICHIJI     wa   do-- naru       koto
  what might happen.              for-a-time (T)  how  turn-into  thing

                                  ka to OMOtte  kedo
                                  worrying      but

  Sure enough, the regular        yappari      itsu-mo no KASUGA-kun no
  Kasuga-kun is the one I...      sure-enough  usual                 's

                                  HOU       ga   atashi...
                                  direction (S)  I

sign: [lower right]
                       <3-unknown-kanji>



sign: [middle]                    ______ ______
  Loose Belt Shoe Store           ru--zu beruto kutsu mise
                                  loose  belt   shoe  store

sign: [upper left]
   Main Store           HONTEN

sign: [upper left]
  Tako Chrysanthemum Branch       TAKO  KIKU  SHITEN
  Store                                 'mum

sign: [middle left]
  Mit-chan          mitchan

sign: [lower left]
  Fire Hydrant                    SHOUKASEN

sign: [lower left]
   Store                TEN

3
[Kyousuke looks at Madoka in surprise.]

4
[Madoka pauses with an embarrassed look.]

5
[Madoka gives Kyousuke a merry little smile.]
Madoka:
  Err, so being indecisive is     a da karaa    YUUJUUFUDAN mo
  okay, isn't it?                   that's-why  indecisive  too

                                  ii    n ja nai?
                                  okay

narration:
  Too much is as bad as too       SUgitaru wa   OYObazaru ga   gotoshi----
  little.                         exceed   (T)  reach     (S)  appear/look

6
[Madoka clings to his arm and gazes into his eyes.]
Madoka:
  Well, after this...  Do         sate  kono ato...  KAErimasu ka
  you want to go home?            well  after-this   go-home   (?)

  Or go somewhere else?           soretomo  doko-ka e?
                                  or-else   to-somewhere

Kyousuke:
  HUH?!                           e?!

narration:
  Sometimes I'm thankful I'm      tama ni wa    YUUJUUFUDAN ni KANSHA!
  indecisive!                     sometimes     indecisive     thankful
                                  __ __
  I think...                      ka na
                                  I-wonder

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