Kimagure Orange Road
"A Premonition Dream in the Starry Sky"
Volume 4, Story 8
WB Volume 3, Story 2
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi

Translation and full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
                                 Craig Nishida
                                 Spencer Hastings
                                 Gary Kacmarcik
                                 Peter Norby

Last revision : 11-11-94

NOTE: [WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()]
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga. So there may be a few
extra's to those of you not having them.
Example: (The subtitles on page 29 (161) are only in the WB'S!)
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p 29 (161)--TITLE PAGE

[Against the backdrop of a spiral galaxy, Kyousuke and Madoka sit together.
 Kyousuke looks up at the sky.  Madoka looks down at her knee or foot.]

MAIN TITLE (at top)                                 ________
  A Premonition Dream in the      HOSHI-ZORA  ni   _DORI--MU_
  Starry Sky                      starry-sky (IO)   dream

                                  (kanji = YOCHI-MU)
                                           premonition-dream

SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
  I Concentrated on a Wish        NEGAi        o  kometa
  and It Seemed Like I'd          wish/desire (O) concentrated-on
  Be Able to See a Dream-
  Tinged Future in the            HOSHI-ZORA  ni   YUME   IRO
  Starry Sky...                   starry-sky (IO)  dream  color/tinge

                                  MIRAI   ga  mie             sou de
                                  future (S)  be-able-to-see  look-as-if

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p 30 (162)

1
[Madoka facial portrait.]
Madoka:
  Kasuga-kun...                   KASUGA-kun...

2
[Kyousuke blushes and looks back at her.]
Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            _____
                          doki_

3
Madoka: [leaning close, her hands behind her back]
  I'll give you something         ii mono     a - ge - ru...
  ni-i-ice...                     nice-thing  to-give

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p 31 (163)

1
[Madoka leans in for a kiss, eyes closed.  Kyousuke stands frozen and
 wide-eyed.]
Kyousuke:
  Ah!  Ayukawa...                 a_  AYUKAWA......

Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            ____ ____
                     doki doki

2
[A fractured view of the night sky.]
Kyousuke: [off]
  Ah!                             a

3
[Cut to the Kasuga residence.  Kurumi and Manami peer around the corner of
 a door.]
Kyousuke: [off]
  Oh, no.  Can't be...            dame     sonna...
                                  no-good

  More!                           motto!
                                  more/much-more/longer

4
[Closeup.  Kyousuke comes wide awake with a start.]

5
[View pans back to show Kyousuke kneeling in bed, tightly hugging his
 pillow to his chest.  His sisters stand and stare.]
Kyousuke:
  ..........                      ..........

6
Kurumi:
  More...?  More whaaat...?       motto...?  motto naani--?

Kyousuke: [deeply blushing]
  A-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha    ahahahahahahahahaha

narration:
  A dr-dream...?                  yu YUME ka----

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p 32 (164)

1
[Kyousuke stands on the sidewalk outside a bowling alley.]
narration:                                                   ________
  I'm going bowling with          KYOU  wa   hikaru-chan to  bouringu!
  Hikaru-chan today!              today (T)  w/Hikaru        bowling

2
[He visualizes the almost-climactic moment from his dream.]
Kyousuke: [blushing]
  But this morning's dream,       shikashi...  kesa no YUME
  for a dream, felt strangely     but/however  this-morning's-dream
  real...
                                  YUME ni shite wa
                                  considering-it-was-a-dream
                                           _____
                                  myo-- ni riaru  datta na...
                                  strangely-real  was
                                             ________
  My heart's still beating        imada ni   dokidoki shite-ru...
  wildly...                       still/yet  be-thrilling/heart-throbbing

3
Kyousuke:
  Wait.  Is it due to the         mate yo    _CHIKARA_ no sei   ka
  Power?                          wait        Power    's fault (?)

  I had a dream that felt         YOUCHIEN no TOKI ni     mo
  like this back in               at-kindergarten's-time  too
  kindergarten, too.
                                  konna KANji          no YUME
                                  this-kind-of-feeling 's dream

                                  mita  koto   atta zo
                                  saw   that   had

  That time, for some reason,     ano TOKI  wa   naze-ka          SENSEI ni
  I dreamt I was scolded by       that-time (T)  w/o-knowing-why  by-teacher
  the teacher, and when I
  went to school...               shikarareru    YUME   o   mite
                                  to-be-scolded  dream (O)  seeing

                                  GAKKOU  iku    to...
                                  school  to-go  when

[Young Kyousuke stands in a puddle.  His classmates gather 'round and
 stare.]

little Kyousuke FX:
                         jo~~_

little girl:
  Sensei...  Kyousuke-kun...!!    sense--  kyo--suke-kun ga----_!!

4
Kyousuke:
  If that's the case, that        da to   sureba    are       wa
  was a..."premonition            w/that  if-to-do  that(one) (T)
  dream"?!
                                  "YOCHI-MU"?!
                                  "premonition-dream"

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                           goku_

5
[View down an open mall.]
Kyousuke: [off]
  But, it can't be!               demo  masaka!

  I'll be with Hikaru-chan        KYOU  wa   hikaru-chan to issho  da  shi
  today, and Ayukawa is           today (T)  together-w/Hikaru     be  and
  unlikely to do that sort
  of thing.                       daiichi    AYUKAWA ga   anna koto
                                  the-first          (S)  that-kind-of-thing

                                  suru   hazu nai    yo na
                                  to-do  not-likely

6
Madoka: [off]
  Kasuga-kun!                     KASUGA-kun!

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p 33 (165)

1
[Not really a panel.  A full-length view of Madoka, standing in jersey top
 and jeans, is splashed down the right half of the page, overlaying panels
 2, 3 and 6.]

2
[Kyousuke stares.]

3
[Overhead view of the two in conversation.]
Madoka:                                     _______
  Why are you standing            nani  o   boke--tto        tsutTAtte-ru  no
  around in a daze?               what (O)  (from 'bokeru')  be-standing-up
                                             becoming-senile

Kyousuke:
  Eh?!  Today, Hi...              e_    KYOU  wa   hi...
                                   !    today (T)

4
[Kyousuke stops short, smile frozen on his face.]

5
narration:
  Danger, danger!                 abunai abunai!

Kyousuke:
  ...because I have time to       hima na    mon     de
  spare, and I'm idly...          leisurely  person  on-account-of
                                  ________
                                  burabura     to...
                                  idly/lazily  and

" as "hima na" = idly/leisurely.>

6
[Kyousuke visualizes his dream again.]

7
[Madoka sun-splashed portrait.]
narration:
  Ayukawa's clothes...            AYUKAWA no FUKU----
                                          's clothes

narration:
  ...are the same as in the       YUME no NAKA     to ONAji  da!
  dream!                          inside-of-dream  same-as   be

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p 34 (166)

1
narration:
  Th-then that dream...           ji ja    ano YUME    wa..........
                                     then  that-dream (T)

narration:
  ...is something that will       GENJITSU ni          KYOU   okoru
  actually happen today?          as-a-matter-of-fact  today  happen

                                  koto  na no ka
                                  thing      (?)

2
Madoka:                                _____________
  Say, why don't we go to         nee  puranetariumu  ikanai?
  the planetarium?                say  planetarium    not-go

3
Kyousuke:                         _____________
  Planetarium?                    puranetariumu?

4
[View pans back to show a building that's next to the bowling alley.]
Madoka:                                           ____
  Look!  It's in this             hora    koko no biru de   yatte-ru no yo
  building.                               in-building-here  be-doing
                                             ______
  It just opened recently.        kono aida  o--pun shita  bakari nan da tte
                                  recently   opened        just   it  be

5
Kyousuke: [pondering]
 (Huh?  Ayukawa's inviting me.    (hee--   AYUKAWA ga  sasotte-kureru
  How unusual.)                                   (S)  inviting-(favor-to-me)

                                  nan-te  mezurashii)
                                  how     unusual/novel

6
Kyousuke:
 (B-but Hikaru-chan is coming     (de demo  mo-- sugu         hikaru-chan ga
  soon.                               but   soon/before-long             (S)

                                  kuru
                                  to-come

  I can't very well stand         suppokasu  wake ni wa ikanai...)
  her up...)                      stand-up   can't-very-well

7
Kyousuke: [flash thought]
 (But if that dream was a         (shikashi  ano YUME    ga
  premonition dream, then,         but       that-dream (S)
  as usual, my only choice
  will be to use the Power        YOCHI-MU nara
  to cheat on them.)              if-it-was-a-premonition-dream

                                  kono BA        wa   yahari  itsu-mo no
                                  this-situation (T)  as      usual

                                  _CHIKARA_ o TSUKAtta  kakemochi
                                   used-the-Power       in-2-or-more-places*
                                   <*connotes-cheating-on-girlfriend/wife)

                                  shika nai)
                                  only-be

Kyousuke fist FX:                 ___
                         gu_

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p 35 (167)

1
[Hikaru shows excellent form as she releases her bowling ball.]
narration:
  So, as usual, I'm going         to yu-- wake de        REI ni yotte
  back and forth between          it-is-for-this-reason  as-is-usual
  Ayukawa and Hikaru-chan,
  but...                          hikaru-chan to  AYUKAWA no
                                  Hikaru      and Ayukawa 's

                                  aida     o   ittarikitari shite-ru
                                  between (O)  be-going-to-and-fro

                                  wake    da  kedo----
                                  reason  be  but

2
[Her ball levels the pins.]

3
[Hikaru leaps and grabs Kyousuke by the neck.]
narration:
  ...somehow, sneaking around     KONKAI    no kakemochi           wa
  this time leaves me with        this-time 's in-2-or-more-places (T)
  more leeway!
                                  naze-ka  YOYUU                   desu!
                                  somehow  leeway/time-(to-spare)  is



Hikaru:                                  _________
  I did it!  A strike!            yatta  sutoraiku!
                                  did    strike

4
[Overhead view of Kyousuke as he addresses the pins.  He awkwardly holds
 the ball.]
Kyousuke:
 (I wonder if it's this way?      (ko--       ka na     iya  ko--      ka...)
  No.  Like this...?)              like-this  I-wonder  no   like-this (?)

5
[Hikaru watches him.  Kyousuke continues to address the pins, though his
 attention is more on the ball he holds up in his hands.]
Hikaru: [blushing]
 (Wow.  He must be checking       (sugoi   wa   kitto   TAMA  o
  over the ball.                   amazing (T)  surely  ball (O)

                                  ERAnde-ru    n da     wa
                                  be-choosing  (explan)

  I guess when one is as          SEMPAI hodo           no HITO    ni
  good as Sempai, one has                greater-extent 's person (IO)
  to worry about a ball's
  good and bad points, too.)      naru    to      TAMA no  YOshi Ashi
                                  become  when    ball's   good-&-bad-points

                                  mo   KI ni suru             mono  na no ne)
                                  too  care/be-nervous-about  thing

Kyousuke:
 (How do you hold this ball?      (kono TAMA  do--  yatte  motsu
                                   this-ball  how   doing  to-hold

                                  n daro?
                                  (poss-explan)
                                           ________
  It's because I haven't          nani se  bouringu  hajimete
  bowled before.)                 because  bowling   for-the-1st-time

                                  da  kara na)
                                  be  that's-why

6
[Hikaru races past and behind him, thumping him on his back as she passes by.]
Hikaru:
  Sempai, I'll bring you          SEMPAI atashi  betsu no   TAMA  o
  another ball.                          I       different  ball (O)

                                  mottekite-agemasu
                                  bring/fetch-(favor-to-you)

Hikaru FX:                        ___  ____
                   zun  don_

[Kyousuke drops the ball on his foot.]

7
[Hikaru runs for the ball rack.]
Kyousuke: [hopping about]
 (Good!!  Now's my chance!)       (yoshi!!  ima no uchi ni!)
                                            now 's time to

ball FX:                          ________
                   pyonpyon
                                  hop/skip/romp

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p 36 (168)

1
[Kyousuke materializes just outside the planetarium entrance.]
Kyousuke teleport FX:             ____
                          shu_

sign (top/partial):                  _________
  ...netarium                     ...netariumu

sign (door):                      ________ _____________
  Sunshine Planetarium            sanshain puranetariumu

sign (post):                      _____________
  Planetarium Entrance            puranetariumu IRIGUCHI   #Planetarium
  
                                  Entrance#

2
[He looks both ways...]

3
[...brushes off his hands...]

4
[...and clears his throat.]
narration:                                                          ______
  I'll straighten up here...      koko       wa   hitotsu           bishitto
                                  this-place (T)  one-(place/time)  sharply

                                  KImete...  to
                                  setting    if/and

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                            kohon

5
Kyousuke: [entering, waving]
  Hi.  Wait long?!                yaa  omatase!
                                  hi   keep-waiting

[Madoka sits waiting and turns at his voice.]

6
Madoka:
  It's just starting now.         choudo      ima kara        yo
                                  just/right  beginning-now

Madoka FX:                        _____
                          niko_

7
[Kyousuke gives a small smile back.]
narration:
  That smile tickles me with      kono  KITAI
  anticipation!                   this  anticipation/expectation

                                  saseru           hohoemi!
                                  make-do/have-do  a-smile

Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            ________
                     dokidoki

sign (partial):
  ...International...             ...KOKUSAI...

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p 37 (169)

1
[They walk into the darkened planetarium theatre.  Madoka leads the way.]
Madoka:
  Watch out for that step...      KI o tsukete
                                  being-careful/be-on-the-lookout

                                  soko        DAN   ni...
                                  that-place  step (IO)

2
[Kyousuke trips on that very step...]
Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                            gawa_

3
[...and pitches forward...]
Kyousuke:
  AH!                             a_

4
[...crashing into the back of Madoka.  She goes wide-eyed with surprise.]

5
[Closeup of Kyousuke's face pressed into Madoka's hair.]
Kyousuke FX:
             fusaa
                                  (fusafusa = abundant-hair/in-tufts)

6
[Closeup of the surprised look on Madoka's face.]

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p 38 (170)

1
Kyousuke: [leaping away]
  Ah!  S-sorry!                   ha_  go gomen!

Kyousuke FX:
                      suza_

2
[Madoka takes him in tow, walking to their seats.  Kyousuke blushes.]
Madoka:
  That's why I said look,         hora  itte-ru    soba         kara
  you klutz.                      look  be-saying  near/beside  that's-why

                                  otchokochoi
                                  rash-fellow

Madoka FX:
                            gui_

3
[Kyousuke facial portrait.]
narration:                                         ________
  The smell of shampoo from       AYUKAWA no KAMI  shampu-- no kaori ga
  Ayukawa's hair, and an                  's hair  shampoo's-smell  (S)
  indescribable warmth from
  the nape of her neck...         shite    KUBIsuji kara          wa
                                  doing    from-nape-of-the-neck  (T)

                                  nan-to mo ienai           nukumori  ga...
                                  one-can't-tell/God-knows  slight-warmth

4
[Madoka facial portrait.]

5
[Madoka still has Kyousuke in tow, grasping him by his wrist.  In the
 background is Kyousuke's dream, as dream-Madoka leans in for a kiss.]
narration:
  That dream...                   ano YUME...

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p 39 (171)

1
[View of the star-projector which projects the images of the stars on the
 black ceiling.]

2
[Madoka and Kyousuke sit in aisle seats.  They look up.]
sign:
  Danger                          KIKEN

3
Kyousuke FX:                      ______
                           chira_

4
[Kyousuke's pov of Madoka looking up at the ceiling.]

5
narration:
  Soon, I have to follow up       sorosoro  hikaru-chan no HOU  mo
  on Hikaru-chan, too.            soon      Hikaru's-direction  too
                                  _______
                                  fuoro-- shinai        to na
                                  not-follow-up-

6
[Kyousuke claps a hand to his mouth and peeks over at Madoka.]
narration:
  I'd better hold my breath       barenai       you ni        IKI     o
  or I'm gonna be busted...       not-disclose  as/"purpose"  breath (O)

                                  koroshite----
                                  killing

7
Kyousuke teleport FX:             ____
                          shu_

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p 40 (172)

1
[Kyousuke releases the ball.  His form needs a little work.]

2
[The ball heads straight for the gutter.]
ball FX:                          ________
                          gorogoro

3
[Kyousuke flashes with the Power...]
narration:
  Oops!                           otto!

4
[...and the ball veers away from the gutter, taking a classic "hook"
 trajectory...]
ball FX:
                           kui

5
[...right into the 1-3 pocket for a strike.]
ball FX:                          _______
                            doko--n

6
[He dusts off his hands.]
narration:
  This sort of thing is so        _CHIKARA_ o TSUKAeba  konna mon
  easy if I use the Power!         if-use-the-Power     this-kind-of-thing

                                  karui    karui!
                                  simple/easy

Hikaru: [hugging him about the neck]
  Amaaazing, Sempai!!             sugo--i sempai!!

observer:
  OHHH                            o---

7
[Kyousuke bowls.  Splashed over the panel is a closeup of his smiling face.]
narration:
  For some reason, I'm            KYOU  wa   naze-ka          TANOshii KIBUN
  having such a good time         today (T)  w/o-knowing-why  pleasant-mood
  today, that I keep using
  the Power unintentionally!      OMOwazu         _CHIKARA_ o TSUKAtte-shimau!
                                  unintentionally  use-the-Power-(regret)

8
[View of the crowd that gathers.]
crowd:                            ________
                   zawazawa
                                  be-astir/noisy/rustle

narration:
  Is even this because of         kore to yu-- no mo  ano YUME   no sei---?!
  that dream...?!                 even-this           that-dream 's fault

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p 41 (173)

1
[Kyousuke releases another ball.  Hikaru watches from the scorer's desk.]
narration:
  Well, soon I have to return     sa--te  sorosoro  AYUKAWA no tokoro ni
  to Ayukawa.                             soon      to-Ayukawa's-place

                                  modoranakutte wa
                                  must-return

ball FX:                          ___
                            don

2
[He flashes with the Power.]
narration:
  Now!                            hoi!

3
ball teleport FX:                 ____
                          shu_

4
Hikaru: [goggle-eyed]
  Huh?                            n?

[Kyousuke looks back at the empty lane with dismay.  He blushes, sweats.]

narration:
  Yikes!                          arya

5
narration:                                   ______
  Oh no!  I meant to nudge        shimatta!  bo--ru o  MAgeru     tsumori ga
  the ball, but I                 finished   ball  (O) bend/curve intention
  accidentally made it
  disappear .                            making-a-mistake  in-a-rush

                                  tobashichatta
                                  (= tobashite-shimatta)
                                     hurried-(finality/regret)

Hikaru: [still goggle-eyed]
  ?                               ?

Kyousuke: [forcing a smile]
  Well, that's okay.              ma ii ka

6
[View of the bowling alley.]

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p 42 (174)

1
[View of the planetarium entrance.]
sign on wall:                     ________ _____________
  Sunshine Planetarium            sanshain puranetariumu

  Constellation Show              TEI     -ZA
                                  exhibit  constellation
                                  _________
  All-New Time-Lapse              orijinaru  TEI-ZA  HAYA-ASHI
  Constellation Show              original           quick-pace



2
Madoka: [reaching over to touch Kyousuke's shoulder]
  Hey, Kasuga-kun.                nee KASUGA-kun

  That star...                    ano HOSHI..........

3
[Her hand falls to rest atop a...  Bowling ball?!]

4
[Madoka goes goggle-eyed...]

5
[...and she turns to look.]

6
Madoka: [holding the ball]
  Wh-what's this...!!             na nani yo  kore----_!!
                                     what     this-(one)

7
Madoka: [looking around]
  Huh?  Kasuga-kun.               are?  KASUGA-kun



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p 43 (175)

1
[Out on the street, Hikaru waves good-bye as she runs off.]
Hikaru:
  Bye, Sempai.                    ja ne-- SEMPAI

narration:
  Now...  Back to Ayukawa...      sate...  AYUKAWA no HOU wa...  to
                                  now              's direction  and/when

2
Kyousuke teleport FX:             ____
                          shu_

3
[He materializes in the lap of a woman.]
Kyousuke:
  Huh?                            n

4
Kyousuke: [swiveling his head around]
  Eh?!  Eh?!                      e  e

woman with Kyousuke in her lap:
  KYAAAA                          kya~~~~

5
Kyousuke: [running out of the theatre room]
  Wh-what's this?  The audience   na nan da       moo      tsugi no KYAKU
  for the next show is already       what's-this  already  next  's visitors
  here?
                                  to irekaete-ta     no ka
                                  was-replaced-with    (?)

6
Kyousuke:                         ___
  Ah!                             ha_

Kyousuke:
  In that case, Ayukawa...!!      to yu-- koto wa  AYUKAWA......!!
                                  it's-said-that

7
Madoka: [standing behind him]
  Where did you go?               doko      itte-ta     no?
                                  to-where  were-going

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                           giku_

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p 44 (176)

1
[Kyousuke is horror-struck.]
narration:
  D-damn!!                        ma mazui!!

2
[Not meeting her eye, he blushes...]
Kyousuke:                                  ____
  Being discovered here,          koko de  barecha        sekkaku
  the special dream I had         at-here  (= barete wa)  special-trouble
  disappears like bubbles                     discovering/be-disclosed
  on water...        mita YUME  ga   MIZU no awani...
                                  saw  dream (S)  water's-bubbles/foam
                                                  -come-to-

Kyousuke FX:                      __________
                          butsubutsu
                                  mutter

3
Madoka:
  What dream?  Water?             nani YUME?    MIZU  ga
                                  what-dream    water (S)

  Is something wrong?             do--ka shita no?

[Realizing he spoke out loud, Kyousuke belatedly slaps a hand over his mouth.]

Kyousuke:                         ___
  Ah!                             ha_

4
Kyousuke: [embarrassed]
  Water...  Like, I went past     MIZU...  sou   SUIBUN
  some water a moment ago, in     water    like  water
  the restroom...                                                  _____
                                  torisugichatte            chotto toire ni...
                                  (= tourisugite-shimatte)  a-moment
                                     passing-by/going-beyond       in-restroom

narration:
  Liar, liar!                     gomakashi      gomakashi!
                                  deception/trickery

5
[She considers his words...]
Madoka contemplation FX:
                         ji--_

6
[He looks back and sweats.]

7
Madoka: [turning to go outside]
  Oh, well.                       maa ii ka

Kyousuke:                         ___
  Phew!                           ho_

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p 45 (177)

1
[View of the street.]
Madoka: [off]
  Hey, then what about the        nee  ja    YUME  tte      nani?
  dream?                          say  then  dream (quote)  what

2
Kyousuke:
  Huh?                            n?

3
[He gazes seriously into the distance.]
Kyousuke:
  This morning...  I saw you      kesa......  AYUKAWA no YUME   o  mita n da
  in a dream.                     this-morning        's dream (O) saw (explan)

crows-in-background FX:
                             kaa

4
[Madoka looks at him askance, wide-eyed and with a small smile.]

5
Kyousuke: [blushing, looking up at the sky]
  And so...                       sore de...

narration:
  A-and so, I can't simply be     so sore de tte  masaka    HONNIN ni
  saying that to her face...         and-so  (T)  can't-be  to-person-herself

                                  ieru       wakenai yo----
                                  be-saying  simple/easy

6
[Smiling, she tosses back her hair.]
Madoka:
  What kind of a dream?           do-- yu--      YUME?
                                  what-kind-of   dream

Kyousuke: [horror-struck, blushing deeply]
  Wha...                          do...

7
Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            ____ ____ ____
               doki doki doki

8
[Madoka facial portrait--she smiles sweetly.]

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[She clings to his arm and rests her head against his shoulder.]
Madoka:
  It's chilly...                  samui...
                                  cold/chilly

[Kyousuke's eyes bug out.]

2
[His pov of her face resting against his shoulder.]

3
Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            ____ ____ ____ ____
         doki doki doki doki

4
[Kyousuke blushes deeply as he thinks.]
narration:
  It was a premonition dream      yappari    are       wa   YOCHI-MU?!
  after all?!                     after-all  that(one) (T)  premonition-dream

5
[He turns to her and she looks up.]
narration:
  Today, by now, Hikaru-chan      KYOU  wa     moo           hikaru-chan mo
  has returned home...!           today (T)    by-this-time              too

                                  KAEtta         koto  da  shi...!
                                  returned-home  that  be  and/consider

Kyousuke:
  Ayukawa...                      AYUKAWA......

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1
[From behind, two guys walking down the street recognize Kyousuke.]
guy:
  Hi...!                          yoo--_
                                                _________
  Aren't you the guy who was      sakki         sutoraiku REMPATSU shite  ni
  just now rolling strike         a-little-     firing-strikes-in-rapid- (IO)
  after strike?                      while-ago                  succession

                                  oni--chan    ja nai ka
                                  brother/guy  (aren't-you?)

  You were still there.           mada       ita      no
                                  still/yet  there-was

2
guy:                                       ________
  Your bowling skill is           anta no  bouringu no UDE
  impressive.  I mean...!         your     bowling  's skill/ability

                                  taishita mon    da  nee      iya---_
                                  great    thing  be           no

  It's truly awesome.             JITSU ni      subarashii
                                  truly/really  magnificent

Kyousuke: [sweating and swiveling his head from Madoka to the guy]
  Wah!  Hold on...!               wa  chotto...!

Madoka: [surprised]               ________
  Bowling?!                       bouringu?!

3
guy FX:
                            jirojiro
                                  stare/look-over

guy:
  Huh...?                         he--?

4
guy: [holding up his pinkie finger*]
  Just a while ago you were       sakki               anta to ISSHO   datta
  with a nice short-haired        a-little-while-ago  together-w/you  was
  girl, and now you're with       ___________
  this beautiful girl.            sho-tokatto      no GENKI na  KO   to  ii
                                  short-cut-(hair) 's fine      girl with

                                  kono BIJIN no  one--san         to   ii
                                  this-beauty's  big-sister/girl  with

  You're pretty good at this      kotchi no HOU mo  nakanaka  taishita
  sort of thing, too.             even-in-this-way  quite     great

                                  mon    ja nai
                                  thing

<*A secret sign known only to members of the Royal Order of Girl-Chasers...>

Kyousuke: [motioning for silence]
  Shh!  Shh!                      shi-- shi--

5
[Madoka facial-portrait--wide-eyed.]

6
[The two guys turn to wave as they walk away.]
guy:
  Bye...!                         ja ne~~~_!

sign:
  Oota Commercial Affairs         OOTA SHOUJI  (indecipherable-kanji)
  

narration:
  Good-for-nothing bums...!!      rokudenashi----_!!
                                  good-for-nothing/scoundrel

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Madoka:
  Kasuga-kun.                     KASUGA-kun

2
Kyousuke: [in obvious fright]
  Y-yes...!                       ha hai...!

Kyousuke FX:                      ____
                           biku
                                  (bikubiku = be-nervous/jumpy)

3
[But she smiles sweetly.]
Madoka:                           _____
                          niko_

4
Madoka: [leaning in close, her hands behind her back]
  I'll give you something         ii    mono   ageru...
  nice...                         nice  thing  to-give

5
Madoka: [still smiling, presenting the bowling ball]
  Something you left behind!      WASUreMONO!
                                  a-thing-left-behind



Kyousuke: [smiling]
  HUH?!                           he?!

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Madoka: [feigning clumsiness]
  Oops.  Sorry.                   atto  gomen

ball FX:                          _____
                           poro_

narration:
  And in the end...               KEKKYOKU----

2
[The ball lands on his foot.  He grabs it in pain.  Madoka walks off.]
narration:
  ... the dream         kesa          mita YUME   ga
  I had this morning was          this-morning  saw  dream  (S)
  going to be like this...
                                  ko-- yu-- koto      datta  nan-te
                                  this-kind-of-thing  was    or-such/etc.

  What's more, it was too         amari     to ieba      anmari na!
  good to be true!                the-rest  speaking-of  too-much/too-hard

3
[He watches her walk away.]
narration:                              ___              ______
  But if I hadn't had             demo  ore ga  HEN na   sukebe
  strange, lecherous thoughts,    but   I  (S)  strange  amorous/lecherous
  or been sneaking around...
                                  KOKORO    DAshite
                                  thoughts  putting-out/exposing

                                  kakemochi            nan-ka
                                  in-2-or-more-places  somewhat

                                  shinakattara
                                  if-not-do

4
[Overhead view.]
narration:
  Perhaps...                      arui wa----

5
[Pov shifts to show Madoka's expression as she walks away.  She looks hurt.]
narration:
  Perhaps she might have...?!     moshi-ka-shite  ka mo----?!
                                  perhaps         it-might-be-that

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