Kimagure Orange Road
"I Drew the Ace of Hearts!"
Volume 4, Story 7
WB Volume 3, Story 1
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation and full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Spencer Hastings
Peter Norby
Scott Henry
Gary Kacmarcik
Tony Schrick
Last revision : 11-11-94
NOTE: [WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()]
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga. So there may be a few
extra's to those of you not having them.
Example: (The subtitles on page 7 (139) are only in the WB'S!)
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p 7 (139)--TITLE PAGE
[Hikaru looks us right in the eye and stands in dress, coat and hat, hands
in her coat pockets.]
_____
MAIN TITLE (at top) ______ _e--su_
I Drew the Ace of Hearts! ha--to no #A# o hiichatta!
hearts 's Ace (O) (= hiite-shimatta)
drew/pulled
SUB-TITLE (at bottom) ______
On the Day One Person Grows aitsu no ka--do o
Fond of Autumn and a Young that-person's-card (O)
Lady, He's Unable to Read
Her Card, and His Heart Is YOmenakute
Dyed in Sepia. not-reading/perceiving
_____
KOKORO ga sepia ni SOmaru
heart/mind (S) sepia (IO) be-dyed
HI wa hitori ga SUki na
day (T) 1-person (S) like/grow-fond
AKI / SHOUJO
autumn young-lady/daughter
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p 8 (140)
1
[Outside, Kyousuke stands in a lamp-lit area, in front of a vending machine.]
narration:
2:00 A.M. The dead of night. #AM 2:00# SHIN'YA
2
[Out pops his selection.]
canned drink FX: _____
gatan
canned drink:
Suntory Coffee KOUHII #SUNTORY# ko--hi--
<"Suntory" is a brand-name> coffee coffee
3
[He looks off in the distance and takes a sip.]
Kyousuke FX: ___
zu_....
Kyousuke:
Oo-ooh! It sure is getting u--_ sasuga ni hiekomu na----_
cold...! ! indeed get-cold
4
Kyousuke: [looking over at ABCB--windows unlit]
At this hour even Ayukawa moo konna JIKAN ja
has gone home. already at-this-kind-of-hour (T)
AYUKAWA mo KAEtchatta yo na
even-Ayukawa (= KAEtte-shimatta)
returned-home-(finality)
5
[A woman in high heels and a dress exits ABCB, locking the door behind her.
She carries a small shopping bag by its handles. We are too far away to
identify her.]
door FX: _____
batan
Kyousuke:
! !
6
[Part of a leg and high heels. In the distance is Kyousuke, watching.]
footsteps FX: ___ ___
ko_ ko_
Kyousuke:
Ayukawa. AYUKAWA
narration: _________
Sounds like high heels! haihi--ru no OTO!
high-heels 's sound
Is that her? AYUKAWA ka na?
I-wonder
7
[Kyousuke's pov.]
Kyousuke: [off]
Well... Guess not... de wa... nai mitai da na...
not-seem to-be
8
[He walks away, looking back at the receding figure.]
narration:
Someone else, hmm... HITO chigai ka
different-person (musing)
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p 9 (141)
1
[Exterior daylight shot of ABCB.]
Kyousuke: [off]
A thief broke in?! dorobo-- ga haittaa?!
a-thief (S) broke-in
2
[Kyousuke and Hikaru sit at the counter. Madoka serves them water.]
3
Kyousuke:
So what was stolen? de nani o TOrareta no
what (O) was-stolen
Shouldn't you report this KEISATSU ni todoketa HOU ga ii n ja...
to the police...? be-reported-to-police better (explan)
Madoka:
It... sore ga...
4
[Madoka portrait.]
Madoka:
...was only several plates o-SARA SUU -MAI to
and the shop's key. (hon)-plates several (counter) and
____
o-MISE no kagi dake
(hon)-shop 's key only
5
Hikaru:
Whaaat?! naan da!
Master: ____
But as long as they've shikashi kagi o torareta IJOU
taken the key, they might but key (O) was-stolen as-long-as
break in again.
mata hairareru ka-mo-shiren
again be-breaking-in it-may-be-that
Next time they may not be sono TOKI wa o-SARA dake de wa
satisfied with just plates. that-time (T) plates only (T)
sumanai ka mo
not-get-by it-may-be-that
6
Hikaru:
When the heck did they ittai itsu haitta n desu ka
break in? in-the-world when broke-in (explan) (?)
Madoka:
Last night, some time after kinou no YORU
closing. yesterday's night-time
HEITEN -GO
close-one's-shop afterward
7
[Kyousuke visualizes the late night episode with a woman leaving ABCB.]
narration:
Last night...?! kinou no YORU----?!
8
Kyousuke: [standing abruptly]
Ahhh! a----_
Then that...?! ja are ga_?!
then that-(one) (S)
Kyousuke FX: _____
gatan
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p 10 (142)
1
Master: [arms crossed, resolute]
Okay, so the culprit is a so-- ka HANNIN wa JOSEI ka...
woman, huh... culprit (T) a-woman (?)
Kyousuke:
I'm sure it would be better yappari KEISATSU ni todoketa
to report this to the surely be-reported-to-the-police
police...
HOU ga...
better...
2
[Master solemnly looks off to the side. The background is jet black.]
Master:
No. Now that we know it's iya HANNIN ga JOSEI to wakatta
a woman we don't need to culprit (S) a-woman known-that
go that far.
IJOU soko made suru
more-than that-far to-do
HITSUYOU mo nai darou
necessity too not poss-be
It's not as if anything betsu ni taishita MONO mo
really important was not-particularly serious/great things too
stolen...
TOraretenai koto da shi
not-stealing things be and-besides
____
Besides, the matter will kagi o KAereba sore de
be settled once the lock key (O) if-replace for-that-reason
is changed.
sumu koto da kara ne
to-get-by thing that's-why
3
Master: [smiling]
For now, I'll spend tonight toriaezu KON'YA wa
here. for-the-time-being tonight (T)
washi ga koko ni TOmarikomu yo
I (S) here (IO) staying-overnight
Can't have her breaking in mata hairarecha kanawan
again. again (= hairarete wa) can't-have-wish-
be-breaking-in fulfilled
kara na
that's-why
4
Kyousuke: ________
But, Master... demo masuta--..........
[Kyousuke gives a glance off to his right--at Hikaru and Madoka...]
Kyousuke FX: _____
chira
5
Kyousuke:
Women nowadays are quite SAIKIN no JOSEI tte
strong... recently/lately 's women (T)
kekkou TSUYOi desu yo---
quite strong are
Madoka: [slightly indignant]
..... Just what do you .......... do-- yu-- IMI yo
mean by that? what-kind-of meaning
6
Madoka: ________
Then, shall I stay too, ja atashi mo TOmarou ka masuta--
Master? well I too shall-stay (?)
This time, the culprit KONDO wa HANNIN datte
may not necessarily be this-time (T) culprit even-if-it-is
coming alone.
hitori de kuru
1-person to-come
to wa KAGIranai
it-is-not-necessarily-the-case-that
shi ne
consider
Master:
I am grateful, Ayukawa-kun. arigatai
With you here I feel meriting-gratitude
reassured.
AYUKAWA-kun ga ite kureru to
w/you-being-there-(favor-to-me)
KOKOROZUYOi na--
feeling-reassured/confident
Hikaru: [in glee]
Hey! That sounds like fun! n ma_! omoshiroso---_!
! fun/interesting/amusing
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p 11 (143)
1
Hikaru: [rushing into Darling's arms]
Sempai, why don't we stay SEMPAI atashi-tachi mo ISSHO ni
over, too?! we too together
TOmarimasen ka--_?!
not-stay-over (?)
[Kyousuke flinches back and looks unnaturally stiff.]
Kyousuke: ___
Eh?! Me too? e?! ore mo
2
Hikaru: [happily]
With everyone staying datte minna de ISSHO ni
over together, it'll be the-reason-is w/everyone together
fun--just like a school
excursion. TOmaru tte nan-ka SHUUGAKURYOKOU
stay-(at) (T) somewhat (go-on)-school-
excursion
mitai de TANOshii ja nai desu ka
being-like fun be-not
3
Hikaru: [waving as she exits]
All right. If that's yoshi so-- to KImareba
settled, then we'll need all-right in-that-way if-be-settled
to get sweets and other
stuff. o-KASHI toka
(hon)-sweets/candy and-such
iroiro soroe toka
in-great-variety collect and
nakutcha
(= nakutte wa )
must-have
Bye. See you later...! ja mata ato de ne--_
bye at-later
4
Kyousuke: [eyes closed, sweating]
(Somehow... She (nan-ka...... kanchigai shite-ru na)
misunderstood...) somehow be-misunderstanding
door FX: _____
karan
5
[Exterior night shot of ABCB--lights off.]
narration:
Thus, that night... to yu-- wake de YORU----
for-that-reason night
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p 12 (144)
1
[In ABCB's attic is a nicely furnished room. Master sits cross-legged on
the floor at the kotatsu (foot-warming table) and twiddles his thumbs.
Madoka sits and leans back against the sofa front, reading a magazine.
Kyousuke sits on the floor and looks up at the ceiling.]
Hikaru: [just entering]
So there was a room like YANEURA ni ko-- yu-- HEYA ga
this in the attic... in-attic/loft this-kind-of room (S)
atta to wa...
there-was
Master:
When I can't go home I IE ni KAErenai TOKI ni ne
sometimes use this place. not-return-to-home at-times
koko o TSUKAu koto ga aru
this-place (O) have-used
n da yo
(explan)
narration: _______
...it was decided that minna de abakabu ni TOmarikomu
everyone would stay over everyone stay-overnight-at-ABCB
at ABCB, but...
koto ni natta n da kedo
was-decided-that (explan) but
2
Hikaru: [in wide-eyed contemplation]
I hope the thief will come HAYAku dorobo-- konai ka na--
soon... soon thief not-come I-wonder
Hikaru FX: ________
wawawawa
Master: [eyes closed and sweating]
.......... .......... kite-moratcha komaru
That would be troublesome... coming-(favor) be-troubling
n da kedo......
(explan) but
3
[Kyousuke facial portrait--contentment.]
narration: ___
...as for me... ore to shite wa
I as/for (T)
4
[Madoka intently reads her "non-no" magazine.]
5
[Kyousuke smiles and watches Master and Hikaru, both sitting at the table.]
narration:
...I get to spend one AYUKAWA-tachi to hito BAN issho ni
night together with w/Ayukawa-and-others one-night-together
Ayukawa and the others,
and, in some way, I also sugosu tte IROiro to
have a feeling of spend/pass in-various-ways
anticipation that we'll
have a lot of fun. KITAI KAN mo ari
anticipation feeling too have
kekko-- TANOshikattari shite
quite fun-(among-other-things) doing
[Master pours himself a drink.]
Hikaru: [wheedling] ________
Hey, Master. All by are masuta-- hitori dake i-- na!
yourself. Gee, that's nice! 1-person only nice/fine
Master: [smiling] ______
Ah! Ha ha ha. Okay, if a_ hahaha yokattara do--zo--_!
you like! ! if-okay if-you-please!
6
Hikaru: [taking a drink from a tall glass] _______
(If it was just Darling and (kore de da--rin to futari kkiri
me here, it would be here/now w/Darling 2-people-only
terrific...)
nara SAIKOU na noni na--)
if-it-was "awesome" although
7
[Madoka continues to read her magazine, ignoring all else.]
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p 13 (145)
1
[Hikaru turns to Kyousuke with the bottle.]
Hikaru:
How about a drink for you, SEMPAI mo do-- desu ka ippai
too, Sempai? too how-are-you a-drink
Kyousuke: [holding up both hands] _ ___
Eh? No. I-I... e iya o ore wa...
no I (T)
2
[Madoka looks up to see Hikaru pouring a bottle into Kyousuke's glass.
Master watches and beams.]
Hikaru:
Come on... Don't be so sa-- katai koto iwazu ni
stuffy. Let's get wild! stiff-manner tacitly
___ ___
patto yarimasho-- patto
wild/fun let-us-do
pouring FX:
toku toku toku
Kyousuke: [looking unwell]
G-get wild, huh... pa patto nee...
Master:
Wah ha ha! wa_ ha_ ha_
Sheesh, what a lightweight...! ttaku URANARI TOSHI ga---_
really weak-looking-fellow !
geez considering-his-age
3
Hikaru: [pulling out a deck of cards]
Weeeelllll! It's gonna be saa--tte! YORU mo NAGAi koto da
a long night, so let's play night too long-affair be
some cards...! _______
shi torampu demo
and cards/trumps or-something
yarimasho-- yo----_!
let's-do
Master:
Wow, Hikaru-chan! You came otto hikaru-chan nakanaka
really well-prepared, huh?! very/quite
YOUI ga ii nee...!
preparations (S) good/fine (right?)
4
[Exterior shot of the night sky over a residential street. A lamp casts its
light on a sign on a pole.]
sign:
Oota Dispensary OOTA I-IN
dispensary/doctor's-office
5
[Madoka looks up from her magazine.]
Master/Hikaru/Kyousuke: [off] __ __ __ __ __
Wah-hahahaha! wa ha ha ha ha
6
[Pov shifts so we can see what she's looking at. The other 3 sit around
the table and play a game. Probably gin rummy.]
Hikaru: [grabbing a card]
That's it! That's it! kita kita itadaki----_
Miiiine!
Master: [intently staring at the cards in his hands]
You cheeky girl...! onore chokozai na---_
you cheeky/impudent !
Kyousuke: ___
(What did I come here for?) (ore nani shi ni kita n darou)
I what consider (IO) came (poss-explan)
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p 14 (146)
1
Hikaru: [holding the deck in her hands]
Now, this time we'll do sate kono HEN de chotto
something a little amusing-- now on-this-occasion a-little
fortune-telling.
omashiroi URANAi o shimasu
amusing/fun fortune-telling (O) do
cards FX: ____ ____
cha_ cha_
(chanchan = methodically)
2
[Shot of some cards, fanned out, face-down.]
Hikaru: [off]
Sempai. Draw just one card, SEMPAI ICHI-MAI dake hiite-kudasai!
please! one-(counter) only drawing-(please)
3
Kyousuke:
Eh? What? e nani?
Hikaru: [smiling] ______ _____
The best thing to draw is ha--to no e--su o hiku to
the Ace of Hearts. Ace-of-Hearts (O) to-draw if
SAIKOU nan desu
the-best/highest that-is
4
Kyousuke: ______ _____
Ace of Hearts, hmm... ha--to no e--su ka...
narration:
Allll right! yo--shi!
5
[Kyousuke flashes with the Power.]
narration:
This is easy if I use the kore na no _CHIKARA_ o TSUKAeba wakenai!
Power! this Power (O) if-use easy
6
[His pov of the cards. The Ace of Hearts comes into view through the back
of the fanned-out cards.]
7
Kyousuke: [yanking it out dramatically]
Here it is! hai kore_!
card FX:
sha_
Hikaru: [wide-eyed]
Kyaa! You did it! kya-- yatta!
8
Hikaru: [leaping on him] ___
I'm so happy! I can't ureshi--_ uso mitai!
believe it! happy ! seems-like-a-lie
Hikaru FX:
don
[Madoka looks up at the ruckus.]
Madoka magazine FX: ____
basa
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p 15 (147)
1
Hikaru: [beaming]
That was a fortune-telling SEMPAI to atashi no AISHOU URANAi!
of love between Sempai and w/Sempai my-affinity fortune-telling
me! ______ _____
If the Ace of Hearts appears ha--to no e--su ga DEru to
that means the two have an Ace-of-Hearts (S) if-appear
awesome relationship.
futari no NAKA wa SAIKOU nan desu
2-people's-relationship (T) "awesome" is
Kyousuke:
EH?! e_!
2
[Looking unwell, Kyousuke glances over at Madoka.]
Kyousuke: ______
chira_
3
[She looks prim and goes back to reading her magazine.]
Madoka magazine masthead:
"non-no" 307 Shuueisha #non-no 307# SHUUEISHA
4
Kyousuke:
(N-no way... I can't believe (ma masaka... konna koto to wa....)
this...) this-kind-of-thing
Master: [reaching to draw a card]
Th-then, me too. ji ja washi mo
then me too
Hikaru: ________ _____
The worst thing to draw is supe--do no e--su ga DEru to
the Ace of Spades. Ace-of-Spades (S) if-draw
SAIAKU nan desu
worst-possible that-is
5
Master: [looking at card] ________ _____
.......... .......... supe--do no e--su da
It's the Ace of Spades. Ace-of-Spades is
Hikaru:
Huh? ara...
6
Master: [smiling at Madoka]
Oh, that's right. You try so-- da AYUKAWA-kun mo do-- ka ne
it too, Ayukawa-kun. too (request)
Madoka: [looking up in surprise]
What?!! e_!!
7
[Kyousuke portrait--he looks at Madoka.]
8
[Madoka portrait--she looks back at Kyousuke.]
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p 16 (148)
1
[All are startled by the sound of...]
FX: [off] ______
gashan
2
[Madoka and Hikaru leap into action. The guys just freeze.]
Master:
Th-the thief?! do dorobo-- ka?!
Madoka: [turning to exit]
I'll go look! mite-kuru!
begin-to-look
Madoka FX: ___
su_
Hikaru: [face flushed, getting up shakily]
M-me too!! a atashi mo_!!
Hikaru FX: _____
fura_
(furafura = unsteady/stagger)
3
[Downstairs, Madoka goes out the door. She turns to talk to Hikaru.]
Madoka:
Hikaru, check inside the hikaru wa o-MISE no NAKA mite-te
shop. (T) shop 's inside be-looking
Hikaru: [spinning about to go check]
Right. a--i
Hikaru FX: _____
fura_
Kyousuke:
(Hikaru-chan is rather (hikaru-chan so--to-- yotte...
tipsy... I wonder if she's rather getting-drunk/tipsy
all right.)
DAIJOUBU ka na)
all-right I-wonder
4
[Tight shot of the welcome mat at the front door. Madoka steps out.]
door FX: _____
karan
5
[Madoka portrait--she looks about, determination on her face.]
6
[She turns at a sound around the corner.]
FX: _____
gata_
7
[Looking around the corner she sees a toppled garbage can.]
cat: [sitting on can]
Meow... nya~~
Madoka:
(Wh-what's this...?) (na nan da......)
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p 17 (149)
1/2/3
Hikaru: [off]
KYAAA! kya---
1
[Madoka portrait--she turns at the sound of Hikaru's scream.]
2
[Kyousuke races towards Hikaru's voice, serious look on his face.]
3
[Master sweats and stands in surprise.]
4
Kyousuke: [racing up to Hikaru]
Hikaru-chan! hikaru-chan!
Hikaru: [looking fearful]
Sempai! sempai_
5
[Hikaru leaps to grab Kyousuke around the neck.]
Hikaru: ________
A cockroach!! gokiburi!!
Hikaru FX: ___
da_
Kyousuke:
Eh! e
6
Madoka: [running towards the back of ABCB]
Hikaru!?! hikaru_?!
Madoka FX: ______
doshin
door FX: ____
gara
7
[Madoka portrait--anger.]
Madoka FX:
mu_
8
[Kyosuke lies on his back on the floor with a sleeping Hikaru resting her
head on his chest.]
Kyousuke: [giving a friendly wave and a forced smile]
H-hello... do do--mo...
Hikaru:
Zzzzz ku--_ ku--_
(kutakuta = tired/exhausted/collapsed)
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p 18 (150)
1
[Up in the attic, Kyousuke and Madoka turn at the sound of...]
phone FX:
ri--n ri--n
2
[Madoka portrait--surprise/apprehension.]
3
[Kyousuke portrait--surprise.]
4
[Madoka looks on.]
Master: [on the phone]
What? I see. I'll leave nani? wakatta sugu iku
at once. understood at-once to-go
5
Master: [leaving the attic through the trap-door]
Well, Kasuga-kun. I'm going ja KASUGA-kun washi KAEru kedo
home. I'll leave the rest I go-home but
to you.
ato o tanomu wa
the-rest (O) entrust-you-with
[Kyousuke bends near Hikaru, who lies asleep under a blanket on the couch.]
6
Kyousuke: ________
Master. What's the matter? masuta-- do-- shita no
what's-the-matter
suspense FX: ___ ___
ton ton
7
Madoka:
Your wife is suddenly okusan ga KYUU ni NETSU o DAshite
running a fever and is wife (S) suddenly fever (O) putting-out
sick in bed?
nekonjatta rashii no yo
(= nekonde-shimatta) it-seems
was-sick-in-bed-(regret)
Kyousuke:
..... What next?! ..... nan-to mo haya
what! even now/so-soon/already
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p 19 (151)
1
[Upstairs, Hikaru sleeps a peaceful sleep.]
2
[Madoka comes down the stairs. Kyousuke turns to look.]
Madoka footsteps FX: ___ ___
ton ton
3
[Madoka wipes her brow, wearily. Kyousuke watches her wide-eyed.]
narration: ________
Master went home, masuta-- wa KAEtta shi hikaru-chan wa
Hikaru-chan fell asleep, (T) went-home and (T)
and...
NEchatta shi----
(= NEte-shimatta) and
fell-asleep-(finality)
4
[The two of them sit side-by-side at the counter. Both stare straight
ahead.]
narration:
...in the end it was just to--to-- AYUKAWA to futari kkiri ni
the two of us. in-the-end w/Ayukawa just-2-people
natchatta
(= natte-shimatta)
became-(finality/regret)
FX:
shi~~n
5
[Shot of the cash register on the other end of the counter. Posters (in
English) paper part of the wall. Two are ads for guitar stores: "Norman's
Rare--6735 Tampa Ave. and "Stars Guitars"--818 Folsom St.]
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p 20 (152)
1
Madoka: [turning to him, yawning into her hand]
Getting a bit sleepy? nan-ka NEMUku natchatta ne
somewhat sleepy (= natte-shimatta)
became-(finality)
Why don't we go to bed moo NEyo-- ka
already? already let's-lie-down/sleep (?)
Madoka FX:
afu
[Kyousuke blushes...]
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
doki_
2
[...and visualizes Madoka and himself in bed together, under blankets,
holding hands (and apparently unclothed)...]
narration:
G-go to bed...?! ne NEru----?!
lie-down/sleep
3
Madoka: [smiling]
We can't really be doing to yu-- wake ni mo ikanai yo ne
that, huh, since Master say-that also-can't-very-well
is counting on us. ________
masuta-- ni tanomarete-ru n da mon
be-entrusting is-the-reason
Kyousuke: [blushing, wide-eyed]
Eh? Ah. Tha... e a so... soo da ne
That's right.
crows-in-background FX:
kaa---_
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ ____ ____
doki doki doki
Kyousuke:
(Wh-what am I thinking of...) (na nani o KANGAete-ru n da
of-what be-thinking (explan)
___
ore wa..........)
I (T)
4
[Kyousuke, still blushing, sits and stares at the counter in front of him.
Madoka nonchalantly does somewhat the same.]
FX:
shi~~~n
5
Kyousuke: [getting up and reaching for the radio] _____
Th-that's right. Hikaru-chan so so-- da hikaru-chan ga rajio
brought a radio. (S) radio
mottekite-ta n da
had-brought (explan)
narration:
For some reason, whenever do--mo futari kkiri da to
we're alone, I imagine for-some-reason just-2-people when-it-is
strange things...
hen na SOUZOU shite
strange imagining
How terrible! ikan!
deplorable/regrettable
6
radio caller: ___
...and I finally did it de ore yuube tsuini
with my classmate Keiko I last-night finally
last night...! ______ ___
kurasu no keiKO to yatchatta
class's-Keiko with (= yatte-shimatta)
did-(finality)
n da yo ne----_
(explan)
radio host:
Really? So, what did it he--- sore de donna KANji
feel like? and-so what-kind-of-feeling
datta no
was
[Kyousuke's hair bolts up, he blushes and his eyes widen. Madoka stops
in surprise as well.]
Madoka & Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
doki_
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p 21 (153)
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[Kyousuke leaps to shut it off.]
Kyousuke FX: ___
da_
radio caller: ___
It felt great... tottemo KIMOchi no i-- ...
very feeling 's fine FX
2
[He thinks hard...]
narration:
Wh-what the heck kind of na nan-te HANAshite n da ittai_!
conversation was that?! what! talking (explan) in-the-world
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ ____ ____
doki doki doki
3
[...and spies the deck of cards, sitting on the counter.]
4
Kyousuke: [quickly reaching over] _______
Oh! Then how about some a ja torampu demo......
cards... then cards/trumps or-something
5
[His hand reaches the deck, but Madoka gently places hers on top of his.]
6
[Kyousuke portrait--wide-eyed surprise.]
7
[Madoka portrait--in thought.]
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p 22 (154)
1
Madoka: [holding up the deck]
I'll go first...! atashi ga SAKI NI......!
I (S) beforehand
2
Madoka: [shuffling]
There's still a long way to madamada YORU mo NAGAi
go tonight, and... still-more night too long/lengthy
koto da shi...
thing be and-besides
card shuffling FX: _____
sa--_
3
[Kyousuke blushes and stares.]
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ ____ ____
doki doki doki
4
[Exterior shot of Master's home. His car sits in the driveway.]
5
Master: [looking in a cabinet] _______ _______
Uh, icebag, icebag... etto aisunon aisunon wa..........
<*> (T)
<*Brand name for a gel-based coolant in a bag...>
6
[Turning he spots a stack of plates on a countertop.]
Master:
Huh? n?
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p 23 (155)
1
Madoka: [fanning out some cards in her hand, face-down so neither can see]
Pick one... ICHI -MAI totte......
one (counter) choosing/picking
2
[Madoka's pov--he stares back at her.]
3
[Kyousuke's pov--she looks him right back in the eye.]
4
[Kyousuke stares at the cards, blushes and sweats.]
narration:
It's the love fortune-telling hikaru-chan to yatta KOI
I did with Hikaru-chan! w/Hikaru did love
URANAi da!
fortune-telling be
A little while back, without sakki wa SHIrazu ni
realizing that, I used the a-little-while-ago (T) unknowingly (IO)
Power to draw a card, but...
_CHIKARA_ de hiita kedo
using-the-Power drew/pulled but/however
Kyousuke FX: _____
gowa_
5
[His pov of Madoka looking back at him.]
narration:
This time I can't do that KONDO wa sonna koto
sort of thing! this-time (T) that-kind-of-thing
dekinai!
not-be-able-to
I want to draw a card on MIZUka de hikitai...
my own... by-oneself want-to-draw/pull
6
[Tight shot of his hand as he begins to draw a card.]
Kyousuke: [flash hope] ______ _____
(Ace of Hearts!!) (ha--to no e--su!!)
card FX: ___
su_
7
[But he spasms at the sound of...]
phone FX:
ri~~n
[...and the card goes flying off.]
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1
[Isolated shot of the card as it settles to the ground face-down.]
2
Kyousuke: [searching about] _______
Huh? Where'd that card go?! are torampu doko itta?!
card where went
Madoka: [on the phone] ________
Master?! masuta--?!
3
Master: [embarrassed]
Those plates that, uh... ano SARA nan da kedo...
those-plates that-be
...they weren't stolen... NUSUmareta n ja nakutte
were-stolen not-there
My wife brought them home. uchi no yatsu ga IE ni
household's-fellow (S) to-home
mottekite-ta n da yo
had-brought (explan)
I feel bad...! wari---_!
It was my mistake! washi no HAYA tochiri datta!
my hasty blunder was
4
Madoka: ____
Th-then the key?! ji ja kagi wa?!
then key (T)
And that strange woman sore ni KASUGA-kun ga mita FUSHIN na
that Kasuga-kun saw?! moreover (S) saw strange
JOSEI tte yu-- no wa?!
woman say-that
Kyousuke: [on the floor, still searching]
Thaaat's strange... okkashi--na--
(= okashina)
5
[Under a table, Kyousuke finds a set of keys.]
Master: [off]
That was my wife. sore mo uchi no yatsu nan da
that-too home's-thing that-be
6
Madoka: [into the phone]
WHAT! e--_
Kyousuke: [standing, holding the set of keys]
AHH! a--_
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p 25 (157)
1
Kyousuke: [holding the keys up to Madoka] ____
A-aren't these the shop's ko kore o-MISE no kagi ja...
keys...? these shop 's keys being
2
[Isolated shot of the keys.]
3
[Later... Exterior shot of the sunlit front of ABCB.]
Kyousuke: [off]
Oh boy... yareyare..........
4
Kyousuke: [pulling on his school uniform jacket] ________
It was only Master's false mattaku HITOSAWAgase na masuta--
alarm. completely false-alarm
da naa
be
Madoka: [sitting at ABCB's counter, now in school dress]
Well, but it didn't turn maa demo DAIJI ni
into a serious affair, well but serious-affair (IO)
so that's okay.
itarazu yokatta ja nai
not-leading-to okay/fine being-not
5
Madoka:
But... demo...
6
Madoka: [smiling and turning to him]
...it's a little too bad! chotto ZANNEN!
a-little unfortunate/too-bad
Kyousuke: [surprised]
Eh? e?
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p 26 (158)
1
[His pov. A closeup of Madoka as she looks back.]
2
[Kyousuke stares at her.]
narration:
The confusion over the thief dorobo-- SOUDOU mo KAIKETSU
was settled, and the keys thief confusion too settlement
were found, but... ____
tsuite kagi mo mitsukatta
about/concerning keys too were-found
keredo----
but
3
[Hikaru emerges sleepily, having come down the stairs. She is still dressed
in last night's blouse, jacket and pants.]
narration: ___ _______
...in the end, the card I KEKKYOKU ore no hiita torampu wa
drew wasn't found... in-the-end my drew/pulled card (T)
mitsukarazu -jimai
not-finding (situation)
Hikaru:
fua_
Huh? Were you awake all are-- zutto okite-ta n desu ka~~
along? all-along was-awake (explan) (?)
Madoka:
Well. maa ne
4
Madoka: [smiling and looking over her shoulder at us]
I want to go home and sleep, KAEtte NEtai toko
but... returning-home want-to-sleep place
da kedo...
be but
...right now... toriaezu..........
immediately
5
Madoka: [dramatically]
Shall we head for school? GAKKOU iko-- ka
school shall-go (?)
[Madoka holds the front door open as Kyousuke and Hikaru--now in school
dress--race for the door. The sunlight streams in.]
narration: _______
Sure enough, that card... hatashite ano torampu wa---
sure-enough that-card (T)
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p 27 (159)
1
narration:
...several days later... SUUJITSUGO----
[Madoka sweeps the floor of ABCB.]
2
[She spies a card lying face-down under a chair.]
3
[Madoka portrait--a "what's this?" look on her face.]
4
[She picks up the card...]
5
[...and, wide-eyed, she turns it over...]
6
[Still not showing us the card, she looks up at us with a soft smile.]
7
[Card placed face-down on the counter, she continues on with her sweeping.
She looks back over her shoulder at the card (and us) and smiles.]
narration:
I wonder if that guy... moshi-ka-shite aitsu...
perhaps that-person
_______
...uses magic or majikku demo..........
something...?! magic or-something
TSUKAeru no ka na?!
be-using I-wonder
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