Kimagure Orange Road
"A Suspicious Hikaru-chan"
Volume 4, Story 5
WB Volume 2, Story 15
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation and full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Spencer Hastings
Peter Norby
Leo Hourvitz
Scott Henry
Melinda Miller
Tony Schrick
Last revision : 11-10-94
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga. So there may be a few
extra's to those of you not having them.
Example: (The subtitles on page 311 (95) are only in the WB'S!)
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p 311 (95)--TITLE PAGE
[Madoka walks along a forest path, dressed in khaki shorts and top, headband,
wristbands, plaid socks and hiking shoes. She looks back at us over her
shoulder. Ahead of her is a sign that says "Orange Road"; beyond that
lies a lake with an inn on the far shore.]
MAIN TITLE (at top)
A Suspicious Hikaru-chan GIWAKU no hikaru-chan
a-suspicion 's
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
When You Hear the Signs MIDORI no zawameki
of Autumn--the Telepathic green/verdure 's a-stir/rustlings
Murmurings of the Forest ___________
Green--Deeply Breathe in terepashi--
the Feelings of Love...! telepathy
SHUUSHOKU KEHAI ga KIkoetara
autumn-scenery sign/indication when-hear
KOI no KIBUN o SHINKOKYUU...!
feelings-of-love (O) deep-breathing
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p 312 (96)
1
[Exterior shot of the school building.]
bell FX: ___ ___ ___ ___
kin kon kin kon
2
Komatsu: [running off]
Got it? i-- ka
okay (?)
Two o'clock sharp. 2-JI kikkari ni
2-o'clock exactly
Front of the train station. EKIMAE da zo
front-of-station be (strong-insistence)
Don't be late! okureru na yoo!
Kyousuke: [running in another direction]
You too! omae koso!
you indeed!(emphasis)
3
Kyousuke: [glancing at his watch]
Oh god! I only have another hie--_ ato #30# FUN shika nai ya_!
30 minutes! another-30-minutes only-have
4
Kyousuke: [rushing out the school gate]
Gotta hurry! ISOganakya!
(= ISOganakereba)
if-not-hurry
sign: [part of school sign]
...TOU BU
Section section
Kyousuke FX: ___
da_
[Hikaru, who waits just around the corner of the gate...]
5
[...pops out.]
Hikaru:
WAH! wa
[Kyousuke seizes up and stops short.]
Kyousuke FX: _____
giku_
6
Hikaru: [beaming]
Where are you going in such sonna ni ISOide doko
a hurry, Sempai?! in-that-kind-of hurrying to-where
iku n desu ka SEMPAI!
going (reason) (?)
Kyousuke: [trying to recover]
.......... ..........
7
Hikaru: [clinging to his arm and looking up at him]
Wellll... Since today is sa--te KYOU wa DOYOUBI da shi
Saturday let's go out on a well today (T) Saturday be consider
date! ______
kore kara SEMPAI to de--to
since-this-(one) with-Sempai date
demo shichao-- ka na--_
or-something (= shite-shimao--) !
let's-do I-wonder
Kyousuke:
Eh?! e?!
Kyousuke: [flashing a quick look at his watch]
A-another 29 minutes... a ato #29# FUN
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p 313 (97)
1
[In sadness, Hikaru turns away from him...]
Hikaru:
That's what I thought, but... to OMOtta kedo...
thought-that but
Unfortunately, I'm also in atashi mo KYOU wa chotto isoide-ru
a bit of a hurry today! I-too today (T) a-bit be-hurrying
n de ZANNEN!
(explan) unfortunate
______
I can't go out with you. de--to wa dekinai n desu
date (T) can't-do (explan)
Kyousuke: ___
Phew! ho_
2
[...and when she turns back to him, her eyes are large and glisteny. Tears
are pooling in them...]
Hikaru: [sadly]
Sempai, this is farewell... SEMPAI o-WAKAre desu...
(hon)-farewell is
Hikaru FX: _______
(jiwajiwa = gradually/inch-by-inch)
Kyousuke:
HUH! he
3
Hikaru:
To think...that I won't ashita asatte
be able to see your face tomorrow the-day-after-tomorrow
for the next two days...
SEMPAI no KAO ga mirenai nan-te...
your-face (S) not-be-seeing how!
Kyousuke: [nervous smile]
Oh, it's that sort of thing. a sou so-- yu-- koto
oh like-that that-sort-of-thing
narration: _______
Hikaru-chan is exaggerating aikawarazu o--ba--
as usual. as-usual "over"-(i.e.,-exaggerating)
da naa hikaru-chan
be
4
Madoka: [exiting school through the gate]
What are you doing, Hikaru? nani yatte n no yo hikaru
what doing
There's not much time. mo-- JIKAN nai wa yo
not-much-time (mild-emphasis)
5
[Madoka and Hikaru walk off.]
Kyousuke:
Going somewhere? doko-ka iku no?
somewhere to-go
Madoka:
Sorta. Bye, Kasuga-kun. maa ne ja ne KASUGA-kun
Hikaru: [waving, smiling]
This means farewell, Sempai! to yu-- koto de sayonara--! SEMPAI
for-that-matter farewell
6
[Kyousuke waves back.]
narration:
Hmm... They're going he-- AYUKAWA-tachi mo doko-ka
somewhere, too, huh...? they-too somewhere
iku no ka...
to-go (?)
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p 314 (98)
1
[Exterior shot of the train station.]
narration:
Actually, because it's the jitsu wa nan-to
anniversary of the school's actually how!
founding, this weekend has
back-to-back holidays! GAKKOU no SOURITSU KINEMBI de
on-account-of-anniv.-of-school's-founding
KONSHUU no SHUUMATSU wa NI RENKYUU!
this-week 's weekend (T) 2-consec.-
holidays
2
[Kyousuke stands ready and waiting in front of the station, duffel bag beside
him. He looks at his watch.]
3
Komatsu: [running up, embarrassed]
Hi! Sorry, sorry. I'm ya wari-- wari-- okurechimatta
late. hi (= okurete-shimatta)
was-late/delayed
Kyousuke: [peeved]
Well...! ano ne~~_!
4
[They race for the train door. Komatsu carries a bag and a cannister
containing a fishing rod-and-reel.]
narration: ___
I decided to go to a ore wa KOMATSU ni tsukiatte KOUGEN no
highland's pension with _______
Komatsu. penshon ni iku koto ni natte-ru
pension<*> (IO) to-go be-decided-that
n desu
(explan)
sign: [partially blocked from view]
West- on other side. NISHI atchi / HIGASHI...
East... west the-other-side east
5
[Kyousuke and Komatsu sit in the train, facing each other.]
Kyousuke: [big smile] ____
But I didn't know your shikashi kimi no SHUMI ga
hobby was fishing. but your hobby/liking (S)
tsuri to wa shiranakatta
w/fishing (T) not-came-to-know
Now that I look at you, you ko-- shite-miru to yappari
really don't strike me as when-try-doing-like-this sure-enough
the type... ___
pin to konai na--
"ping!" not-come
Are you really only going HONTOU ni SAKANA shika tsuranai no ka~~_?
to catch fish?! really fish only-catch-
(w/hook-&-line)
Komatsu: [big smile] ______
Catching cute little kawaii KINGYO-chan no ho-- ga
goldfishies is my cute goldfish-(dim.) comparative
specialty.
TOKUI dattari shite
one's-specialty or-be doing
6
[Kyousuke's expression changes to one of surprise as he realizes what
Komatsu is REALLY talking about...]
narration:
Not seeing Ayukawa and AYUKAWA ya hikaru-chan ni Aenai no wa
Hikaru-chan makes me feel and (IO) not-meeting
sad, but every now and
then... sabishii ga tama ni wa----
desolate/lonely (S) once-in-a-while
Komatsu: [leering]
Now I wonder what sort of sa--te donna KINGYO ga
goldfish I'll catch...! well what-kind-of-goldfish (S)
tsureru ka na---_
be-caught I-wonder!
7
Kyousuke: [sweating, eyes closed]
(All the same, maybe I (yappari yame-tokya
shouldn't have come (= yamete-okereba)
along...) if-abandoning-(a-planned-
activity)-(for-future's-sake)
yokatta ka na---)
okay I-wonder
Komatsu: [grinning]
You? an?
(short for "anata")
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p 315 (99)
1
[Exterior shot of a lake and the country inn with all the separate "pensions"
spread out through the forest/meadow.]
Komatsu: [off]
Ooo-ohh...! The air is so uwa--_ KUUKI ga umai!
sweet! ! air (S) good/nice
2
[They climb the stairs to one such "pension". Komatsu reads from a map or
flyer in his hand. Kyousuke looks about him in wonder.]
Komatsu: _______ ____ ________
Pension "Petite Fleur". penshon puti - furu--ru
Oh! This is it, this is it! o koko da koko da!
here-it-is
3
[A couple of cute girls walk by. Komatsu smiles, wide-eyed.]
4
Komatsu:
My god, there's quite a hee-- korya mata
nice catch here!! goodness! moreover
kekko-- TAIRYOU ja nai kai!!
quite a-good-catch is-not (?)
Komatsu: [scanning the horizon for more "cute fishies"]
I wonder if those goldfish ano KINGYO ni shou ka na
will do. those-goldfish (IO) I-wonder-if-do
Oh! Those goldfish are o ano KINGYO mo i-- nee
fine, too. those-goldfish also fine (right?)
Kyousuke: [eyes closed, sweating]
Just as I thought... .......... yappari ne
5
[Kyousuke turns at the sound of a familiar voice.]
Shuu: [off]
Hey, Yukari! Give me a o--i yukari TE kashite kure yo!
hand! hand
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p 316 (100)
1
[He sees Shuu, Yukari and Mitsuru (the drummer) unloading a van.]
2
[Closer view of Shuu.]
3
Kyousuke:
Huh? are?
4
Kyousuke:
Haven't I seen him aitsu doko-ka de MIta yo-- na...
somewhere... that-person at-somewhere saw likelihood
5
[Flashback pic of Madoka and Shuu onstage--from "Jealousy with a Beat!"
volume 4, chapter 1.]
6
[Kyousuke's eyes grow wide.]
narration:
That's right. so-- da
I'm sure he was playing TASHIka AYUKAWA to ISSHO ni
with Ayukawa in that certainly together-with-Ayukawa
band... _____
bando yatte-ta----
was-playing-on-band
Kyousuke:
B-but why are they at this de demo do--shite konna tokoro ni......
sort of place... but why at-this-kind-of-place
7
[Pov shifts to point behind 2 familiar girls. Over their shoulders we see
Kyousuke, who's turned his head to look back at us. Beyond Kyousuke,
Shuu looks up at the sound of...]
Hikaru:
Oh! Sorry! a gomen nasa--i
We're here to lend a hand ima TETSUDAi masu kara!
now! now help/assistance have that's-why
Shuu:
Thanks! That'll help! o-- tasukara yo!
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p 317 (101)
1
[They realize who stands between Shuu and themselves. Madoka is dumbfounded.
Hikaru smiles, wide-eyed.]
2
[Kyousuke is speechless.]
3
Madoka:
Kasuga-kun! KASUGA-kun!
Hikaru:
Sempai! SEMPAI!
narration:
What, again?! hata mata
yet-again/all-over-again/once-more
This is either a dream or YUME ka maboroshi ka---
an illusion... either-dream or-illusion
4
Hikaru: [leaping, arms around his neck]
I'm so happy! This sort ureshii! konna koto tte
of thing does happen! happy/glad this-kind-of-thing (T)
aru mono na no ne
to-happen thing (doesn't-it?)
[Madoka blushes in surprise at Hikaru's reaction.]
5
Hikaru: [beaming]
I'm sure this happened so-- yo kitto KAMISAMA ga
because God has granted two like-that surely God (S)
people this chance meeting.
futari o meguriawasete
2-people (O) being-able-to-meet-by-chance
kureta n da wa
granted/took-the-trouble-(to-do) (explan)
Just as I thought, we're atashi-tachi tte yappari
securely tied together by we (T) just-as-I-thought
a red string of destiny.
de UNMEI no AKAi ITO shikkari to
by-destiny's-red-string with-secureness
MUSUbarete-iru no yo
be-tied/connected
Kyousuke: [sweating, forcing a grin]
(String, she says, but it (ITO to yu-- yori
feels more like an iron string say-that since
chain...) ______
TETSU no kusari no you na
iron 's chain 's resemblance
KI ga suru ga......)
think/feel but
6
[Exterior shot of a table and chairs.]
Kyousuke: [off] _____
Oh, so the band is staying he-- ja bando no GASSHUKU de
here? indeed then band 's lodging-together
koko ni?
here
7
[The three sit around the circular table. Hikaru rests her chin in her
hands and smiles across at Kyousuke. Madoka looks at Kyousuke out of the
corner of her eye. Kyousuke sits and sweats.]
Hikaru:
Right. And since they so-- sore de tsuide ni
were at it I tagged along and-so while-one's-at-it
just to get in the way.
atashi mo o-jama shichatta
I-too (hon)- (= shite-shimatta)
disturbed/obstructed-(finality)
to yu-- wake desu
for-that-reason
Madoka:
Surprised...? ODOROita......
Kyousuke:
Completely... mattaku......
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p 318 (102)
1
[Kyousuke portrait.]
narration:
Well, but... maa demo----
2
narration:
To tell the truth, being AYUKAWA ya hikaru-chan to Aeru
able to see Ayukawa and with-Ayukawa-&-Hikaru be-able-to-meet
Hikaru-chan makes me
happy. nan-te SHOUJIKI itte ureshii yo na
etc. telling-truth happy/glad
3
Hikaru: [standing and pulling at Kyousuke's arm]
Sempai, there's a very SEMPAI MUkou ni sun-goku kirei na
lovely lake over there. on-other-side very-very beautiful
MIZUUMI ga aru n desu yo
lake (S) there-is (explan)
Shall we go see it? Itte-mimasen ka
not-try-and-go
4
Kyousuke: [glancing back at Madoka]
Y-yeah... u un...
Kyousuke FX: ______
chira_
5
Madoka: [eyes downcast]
Well, I have to rehearse sate... sorosoro RENSHUU shinakya
soon. soon rehearsal must-do
6
[Madoka looks up to see Yukari and Shuu walk by, dressed in tennis whites
and with tennis rackets in hand.]
7
Madoka: [standing]
Shuu-chan, where are you SHUU-chan-tachi doko iku no?
guys going? (plus-assoc.) where go
Shuu: [beaming] ______ _____
Since it looks like gita-- no shige ga OKUreru
Shige is guitar 's (S) be-late/delayed
late, we're going to
play a little. so-- da kara chotto
look-as-if since a-little
ASOnde-ku raa
play-(process-of)
8
[Shuu and Yukari walk away, hand-in-hand. Madoka watches them leave,
sweating...]
Shuu: [to Yukari]
We might not be able to kyou wa OTO DEsenai
rehearse today.
ka mo na
might-be
Yukari:
Come on, it's okay. i-- ja nai
Since we're here, we sekkaku kita n da
may as well have fun. took-special-trouble came (explan)
shi ASObimasho
consider let's-play
Madoka:
Wha... na...
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p 319 (103)
1
Kyousuke: [swiveling his head from one girl to the other]
Th-then, Ayukawa can come ji ja AYUKAWA mo ISSHO ni...
with us, too... then too together
2
Hikaru: [whisking Madoka away by the arm]
Let's go, Madoka-san! iko-- madoka-san_!
Hikaru FX: ___
sa_
3
[Kyousuke just stands and watches them walk away.]
4
Hikaru: [looking back at him]
What are you doing? nani shite n desu ka--
what doing (explan) (?)
Sempai, we're going! SEMPAI ikimasu yo--_!
go
Kyousuke:
Y-yes! ha hai_!
5
[Lovely view from the deck of one pension, looking down the hill to the
next pension.]
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p 320 (104)
1
[This isn't really a panel--full-portrait pics of Madoka and Hikaru are
splashed across the upper 3/4 of the page, overlaid on all the other panels.
Hikaru completes a 2-handed fore-hand shot. Madoka sets up for a one-hand
fore-hand.]
2
[A bird's-eye view of the tennis court. Hikaru plays with Kyousuke as
Madoka watches from the side.]
3
[Shot of Hikaru as she sits and watches... She turns to look one way...]
tennis ball FX: _____
po--n
4
[...and then the other way, following the path of the ball.]
tennis ball FX: _____
po--n
5
[Shot of Kyousuke set to return the ball to Madoka.]
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p 321 (105)
1
Hikaru: [yawning]
(Now that the match is (SEMPAI to madoka-san ni natte
between Madoka-san and Madoka-w/Sempai (IO) becoming
Sempai, it's become
awfully long...) kara yake ni NAGAi na...)
since/after awfully long/lengthy
Hikaru FX:
afu_
2
[Kyousuke facial portrait.]
Kyousuke FX: _____
niko_
3
[Madoka facial portrait.]
Madoka FX: _____
niko_
4
[Hikaru watches, cheek in hand.]
narration:
On top of that, they're sore ni WARAi atte nan-da-ka
both smiling for some besides-that smiling for-some-reason
reason, like they're
having fun... TANOshi sou...
like-having-fun
5
[Kyousuke portrait as he sets up for a return.]
narration:
Ayukawa's really tough! AYUKAWA KOWAi na--_
tough/hard
But it would be embarrassing shikashi ONNA no KO AITE ni
to look serious while but girl opponent (IO)
playing a girl... ____
maji na KAO ni natcha
(= natte wa)
having-serious-expression
hazukashii shi na----
be-ashamed-of consider
6
[Madoka portrait as she follows through on a forehand shot.]
narration:
I wonder if he's purposely WARAtchatte YOYUU
laughing and holding (= WARAtte-shimatte) surplus/margin
something back...! laughing/smiling/grinning-(finality)
DAshite-ru tsumori
be-exhibiting intentionally
na no kashira...!
I-wonder
7
[View of Hikaru as she sits, resting her chin in both hands, looking a bit
sad and neglected.]
tennis ball FX: _____
po--n
8
[Shuu stands and waves his racket from behind Madoka. Madoka turns to look.]
Shuu: _____
Hey. Shige arrived. o--i shige ga tsuitatte yo
(S) arriving
Shall we go back soon? sorosoro modoro-- ka
soon shall-return (?)
9
Madoka:
Huh? are?
10
[Kyousuke and Madoka look at the empty chair.]
Madoka:
Hikaru's gone. hikaru ga inai
(S) not-here
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p 322 (106)
1
[View of a path that travels along the edge of the lake. In the distance
are two pensions. On the path, Hikaru walks toward us, alone, hands
clasped behind her back.]
2
Hikaru: [looking up at the trees with a truly forlorn expression]
(I'm so bored...! They (tsumannai na----_ atashi no koto
ignored me...) (= tsumaranai) ! about-me
uninteresting
hottarakashi ni shite----)
neglecting
3
[Hikaru spies Komatsu sitting on a pier, fishing.]
4
Hikaru: [bending over his shoulder]
Fishing? tsureru?
be-catching
Komatsu: [looking back in surprise]
AH! a_!
5
Komatsu: [wide-eyed]
I-is that you, Hikaru? o omae hikaru ja nai ka
What are you doing in a do-- shita n da yo konna tokoro de...!
place like this...?! what did (reason) in-this-kind-of-place
fishing pole FX:
kui kui
(kuitsuku = bite/take-the-bait)
Hikaru: [pointing at the pole]
Look! You got something! hora hi--te-ru!
look! be-pulling
6
Hikaru: [grabbing the pole]
Hey, let me try. chotto kashite goran yo
a-little try-lending (mild-insistence)
fishing pole FX: ___
sa_
Komatsu: [in horror]
Ah!! a!!
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p 323 (107)
1
Hikaru:
Th-this one's humongous! ko kore wa OUkii!
this-(one) (T) large/mighty/heavy
fishing pole FX:
gu gu gu gu
2
[Hikaru loses her footing.]
Hikaru FX:
tsuru_
(tsurutsuru = slippery)
3
[Elsewhere, in the forest, Kyousuke runs in search of Hikaru. He wears a
black T-shirt with the words, "T-Bird from Komatsu" on it. I note this
only because of the related T-shirt Kyousuke is seen wearing at the end
of this chapter.]
Hikaru: [off]
Kyaa! kya--_
Hikaru FX: _______
dobu--n
4
[He turns, in shock at what he sees.]
5
[Hikaru flails about in the water.]
Kyousuke: [running onto the pier]
H-Hikaru-chan! hi hikaru-chan
Hikaru FX: ______
zabua_
(zabuzabu = w/splashes)
6
Kyousuke: [turning in anger at Komatsu, who stands there doing nothing]
Wh-what are you doing?! na nani yatte n da yo?!
what doing (explan)
Komatsu: [embarrassed] _ ___
I-I can't swim! o ore OYOgenai n da!
I not-swim (explan)
Kyousuke:
This isn't the time to sonna koto itte-ru BA-AI
be saying that!! that-kind-of-thing be-saying occasion
ja nai daro!!
is-not poss.-be
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p 324 (108)
1
Kyousuke FX: ___
ba_
(baribari = energetically)
Kyousuke: ___
I can't swim either! ore datte OYOgenai sa_!
even-I not-swim
2
[Bird's-eye view of the pier. Komatsu stands on it. Hikaru is still
flailing about. The only sign of Kyousuke is the splash he's made.]
Kyousuke FX: _____
dobun
Komatsu:
Kasuga!! KASUGA_!!
3
[Closeup view of the pier.]
pier board FX: ______
mishi_
(mishimishi = creak/squeak)
4
[The entire pier collapses in a magnificent crash. Komatsu does a header
into the water. Kyousuke, swimming towards Hikaru, looks back at the
commotion.]
pier FX: ________
dobua~~n
5
Komatsu: [flailing]
I can't swim...! ore wa oyogenai n da--- _!
I (T) not-swim (explan)!
Kyousuke: [shouting, holding the now unconscious Hikaru]
I know! wakatte raa!
knowing
6
[Kyousuke swims with Hikaru in his arms.]
narration: ___
It's amazing how I always mattaku ore tte OYOgenai noni
end up having to help like truly/really I (T) not-swim although
this when I can't even
swim. tsukuzuku ko-- yu--
utterly/always this-kind-of
YAKU ga OUi yo naa
help/use/service many/abundant/frequent
Kyousuke FX: ___
za_
7
[Kyousuke sees a boat.]
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p 325 (109)
1
[He flashes with the Power.]
2
[The rowboat starts to move.]
boat FX: __ ___
gu gu_
3
[Overhead view of the collapsed pier, the 3 in the water and the rowboat.]
boat FX: __ __ __
za za za
4
Kyousuke: ______
Everyone grab onto this minna kono bo--to ni tsukamare_!!
boat!! everyone this-boat (IO) grab-on-(command)
[Komatsu pauses in his flailing to look at Kyousuke and the boat.]
5
[Kyousuke grabs onto the side of the boat, just as Hikaru regains
consciousness.]
narration:
S-Sempai... se SEMPAI----
6
[A "grey" panel; overlaid is...]
Kyousuke: [off]
AH-CHOO! hekkushon
7
[Komatsu and Hikaru stand side-by-side, looking wet, solemn and berated.]
8
Kyousuke: [venting his adrenaline]
Really, now. mattaku mo--
really already
Kyousuke:
Ah-choo! hekkushon
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p 326 (110)
1
Kyousuke: [angry]
You're so careless, sosokkashi-- na-- hikaru-chan wa
Hikaru-chan. careless/thoughtless
2
Hikaru FX: ___
mu_
(mukureru = get angry)
3
Hikaru: [turning her head away] ____
pui_
(puito = in-a-huff)
narration:
It's because Sempai only SEMPAI ga madoka-san to bakkari
wants to play tennis with (S) w/Madoka only
Madoka-san... ______
tenisu shite-ru kara yo---
be-playing-tennis that's-why
4
[Hikaru spins about and walks away.]
narration: ______
Sempai, you idiot! SEMPAI no ba--ka!
narration:
He enjoys being with atashi to iru yori madoka-san to iru
Madoka-san more than than-being-with-me be-with-Madoka
being with me.
ho-- ga TANOshii n desho
more-fun/joy/cheer (poss-explan)
Hikaru FX:
suta suta
walk-briskly
Kyousuke: [wide-eyed and no longer angry]
EH? e
5
Hikaru FX: _____
pita_
[Hikaru turns to look back with a glare.]
6
Hikaru: [sticking out her tongue]
Bleah!! be--da!!
7
[Kyousuke watches, stunned. Behind him, Komatsu rubs his nose.]
Hikaru FX: [off]
suta suta suta
Kyousuke:
Wh-what? What the heck was na nan nan da ittai?
that? what what is-that in-the-world
Komatsu FX:
gusu_
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1
[Exterior shot of a pension at night.]
2
[Interior shot--the gang plus the band sit around the living room, eating
and drinking. Madoka sits with Hikaru on the couch. Kyousuke doesn't
appear in the frame, and appears to be the only one not present...]
3
[Hikaru leans forward to get her glass filled by Shuu. She has an angry
expression on her face.]
narration: _______
What the heck's the matter nani sa da--rin nan-ka----
with Darling, anyway...? what somewhat/something
Shuu: [smiling]
Go on. Gulp it down. sa sa gutto
gulp
pouring FX: ____ ____
toku toku
4
Hikaru: [tossing it back with authority]
I don't care! shiranai!
not-know
drink FX:
gu--_
Shuu:
Oh! Fine drinking o-- ii nomippuri
. fine drinking
5
Madoka: [concerned]
Hikaru, stop already. hikaru moo yoshinasai yo
already stop-(command)
You've been acting a little anta KYOU wa chotto HEN yo
strange today. you today (T) a-bit-strange
6
Hikaru: [red-faced and furious]
Please just leave me alone! hottoite kudasai
be-feeling-relieved please
narration:
Even Madoka-san doesn't madoka-san mo shiranai_
understand! too not-know
7
[Madoka portrait--concern.]
8
Madoka: [getting up to leave]
Okay then. I'm going to hai hai ja atashi mo-- neru
sleep already. Good-night. then I already to-sleep
kara oyasumi
that's-why good-night
Please take care of Hikaru hikaru no koto yoroshiku ne
. about-Hikaru
Yukari/Mitsuru: [beaming]
No-o-o problem. ho--i
(hoi hoi = no-trouble)
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1
[Yukari looks off to the side.]
door FX: _____
patan
2
Shuu: [smiling]
Come to think of it, that so-- ieba sa AYUKAWA-san to
noon tennis match between come-to-think-of-it w/Ayukawa
Ayukawa-san and Kasuga-kun... ______
KASUGA-kun no o-HIRU no tenisu
's (hon)-noon 's tennis
honto IKI mo tsukasenu
truly w/o-giving-any-respite
3
[Hikaru stands up abruptly...]
Shuu: [off]
...was truly epic. KOU -SHOUBU datta yo ne
good game/bout was
Hikaru FX: _____
suku_
(sukusuku = grow-up-quickly)
4
[...and storms off. The band members watch her go with surprise.]
Hikaru: ___
(Hmphh. This is not (fun omoshirokunai)
amusing.) not-amusing/not-interesting
Hikaru:
Even this is all Darling's kore to yu-- no mo minna
fault. this-(one) saying-that even all
_______
da--rin ga WARUi n da wa
(S) at-fault (explan)
And since it's come to this, kaku naru UE wa......
I'd better... be-lacking/fail/neglect
to-become better
5
[Exterior shot of Kyousuke's and Komatsu's pension.]
6
[An angry Hikaru bursts into the bedroom.]
door FX: _____
batan
Hikaru: _______
Darling! da--rin!
7
[Kyousuke lies asleep.]
Hikaru FX:
tsukatsuka
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Kyousuke: [asleep, with a smile on his face]
Ahhh... u~~n
2
Hikaru:
What's this! Sleeping with nani yo shiawase so-- na
such a happy expression on happiness looks-as-if
his face!
KAO shite NEchatte!
face/expression making (= NEte-shimatte)
sleeping
Hikaru FX:
puku_
3
[Hikaru grabs the sleeping Kyousuke by the collar and yanks him upright.
He remains asleep.]
Kyousuke FX:
gaba_
spring-up-from-bed
Hikaru: _______
Darling, am I the one you da--rin wa HONTOU ni atashi no koto ga
really li... (T) really about-me (S)
__
su......
(probably, "suki" = like)
4
[Hikaru facial portrait.]
Kyousuke: [off]
...karu-chan... ...karu-chan...
5
Kyousuke: [still asleep, but now lying back in bed and frowning]
Hikaru-chan...is drowning! hikaru-chan... oborechau!
(= oborete-shimau)
drown-(finality/regret)
6
[Hikaru freezes in surprise...]
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[...then breaks out in a smile.]
narration: _______
Darling...! da--rin...!
2
[Fly-on-the-ceiling view of Hikaru kneeling at Kyousuke's bedside.]
narration:
That's right. As I was so-- datta oboreta TOKI
drowning. was-like-that drowned moment/occasion
_______
Darling about me... da--rin atashi no koto----
about-me
3
[Hikaru facial portrait--look of realization.]
narration:
Even though he can't swim OYOgenai noni TObikonde-kureta----
he jumped right in... not-swim although plunged-into-
(favor-to-me)
4
[Kyousuke sleeps peacefully.]
narration:
And yet I've only been sore na noni atashi
thinking of myself. and yet I
wagamama bakari itte
selfishness only saying
5
[Hikaru facial portrait--she blushes and sheds tears of joy.]
6
[Gently, she leans over him and gives him a tender kiss on the cheek.]
narration:
I'm sorry... gomen ne---
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1
[Outside the pension, on the steps, Hikaru runs into Komatsu, returning
from the party.]
Komatsu: [arm raised in greeting]
Oh! Hika... oya hika...
[Hikaru smiles as she runs down the stairs.]
Hikaru footsteps FX: ___ ___
ton ton
2
[She stiff-arms him, still smiling, and Komatsu flips over the railing.]
Hikaru:
Good-night...! oyasumi---_!
Hikaru stiff-arm FX: ___
don
Komatsu:
Wah...! wa---_
3
[Kyousuke wakes with a goofy smile on his face. He touches a hand to the
cheek that was kissed.]
narration:
Wh-what in the world na nan da ittai do-- shita n da?
happened? what be in-the-world what did (explan)
I don't know for certain, yoku wakan nai kedo----
but... fully not-understand but
narration:
...I'm sure that was... ima no wa TASHIka ni... hikaru-chan!
Hikaru-chan! present (T) certainly/surely
4
[Over in Madoka's and Hikaru's room, the two sit on a bed and clink their
glasses together. Hikaru holds a bottle of sake.]
Hikaru: [wide grin]
Well, let's have another sa--te NOminaoshimasho-- ka madoka-san!
well let's-drink-again-(but-
drink, Madoka-san! this-time-properly)
Madoka:
Sure enough, you're strange anta KYOU wa yappari HEN yo~~~~_!
today...! you today (T) sure-enough strange
Madoka: [rubbing her eyes]
Yawn. Sleep...! fua-- nemu--_
5
[Kyousuke sits up in bed and visualizes a dream he just had. In it,
he and Hikaru are in the water, with Hikaru gleefully wrapped around his
neck. He flails about.]
dream Kyousuke:
So painful... kurushi~~~
painful/tormenting/difficult
Kyousuke: [rubbing his head]
(But, in that dream a little (shikashi sakki no YUME
while ago...) but a-little-while-ago 's dream
ni..........)
in
Kyousuke's T-shirt:
"Mentampin"--Komatsu mentampin komatsu
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