Kimagure Orange Road
"Let's Run the Marathon!"
Volume 4, Story 4
WB Volume 2, Story 14
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation and full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Spencer Hastings
Peter Norby
Andrew Wilson
Tony Schrick
Last revision : 11-10-94
NOTE: [WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()]
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga. So there may be a few
extra's to those of you not having them.
Example: (The subtitles on page 289 (73) are only in the WB'S!)
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p 289 (73)--TITLE PAGE
[Dream-image facial portrait of Madoka.]
MAIN TITLE (at top) _______
Let's Run the Marathon! marason shimasho!
marathon let's-do
SUB-TITLE (at bottom) ____
When You Notice the Secret HIMITSU no sain ni KI zuitara
Sign, Transform the Glass secret 's sign (IO) when-notice
Thorn Stuck in Your Heart
into a Star with Drops of KOKORO ni SAsatta
Love! in-heart/mind stuck/be-stuck
______
garasu no TOGE o
glass 's thorn (O)
KOI no shizuku de
by-using-drops/trickle-of-love
HOSHI ni shite!
into-a-star making
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p 290 (74)
1
[Shot of the blackboard.]
narration:
Suddenly, the time for the TOTSUZEN desu ga mou sugu TAIIKU-SAI desu!
athletics festival was upon suddenly is (S) soon ath.-fest. is
us!
blackboard: [top left] ______
Relay race. <3 student rire--
names are listed below> relay-(race)
blackboard: [top right, mostly blocked by narration panel]
<3 more student names>
blackboard: [middle] ________
80-meter hurdles. <4 names #80m# ha--doru
listed below> 80-m hurdles
blackboard: [bottom]
High jump.
2
[View pans back slightly. We see a boy and a girl standing in front of the
blackboard.]
Boy class president:
And now all that remains sate ato NOKOtta no wa
is to name a boy and girl now later/back remained
to run in the marathon...
DANJO KAKU ICHIMEI
man-&-woman each/various another-name
_______
no marason desu ga
's marathon is
Is there a volunteer? DARE-ka RIKKOUHO wa?
someone announcing-one's-candidacy
blackboard: [left]
blackboard: [right] _______
Marathon. marason
3
[Pov shifts to point behind boy and girl. Over their shoulders, we see the
entire class seated. No one speaks or moves.]
class FX:
shi~~~n
4
Kyousuke: [to Komatsu] _______
Hey, how come no one nee dooshite marason wa DARE-mo
wants to take part in say why marathon (T) no-one
the marathon?
DEta garanai no?
took-part-in not-appear-to
5
Komatsu: [disinterestedly] _______
It's because the marathon marason dake wa ICHI-I ni natte
is the only event where marathon only (T) 1st-place (IO) getting
you don't get points--even
if you come in first. mo TENSUU moraenai kara da yo
even not-getting-points because be
Kyousuke:
Points? TENSUU?
6
Komatsu: [in surprise]
Oh, that's right. a so-- ka
You're a transfer student omae wa TENKOU -SEI
so it's your first athletics you (T) changing-schools student
festival.
da kara kono GAKKOU no TAIIKU-SAI wa
that's-why this-school's athletics- (T)
festival
HAJImete nan da na
for-the-1st-time it-is
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p 291 (75)
1
[Exterior shot--a bird's-eye view looking down at students engaged in
various athletic events--well, actually it's a boy-girl three-legged
race... I hear it'll be an Olympic event in 1996. ^_^]
Komatsu: [off] ______
In the festival, the TAIIKU-SAI wa kurasu TAIKOU no
school's top classroom ath-fest (T) class confrontation 's
is decided by a class
competitive scoring TOKUTEN -SEI de
system. points-obtained system by
______
GAKKOU ICHIBAN no kurasu o KImeru
school number-1 's class (O) to-decide
n da kedo
(explan) but
_______
But only in the marathon marason dake wa SHUTSUJOU NINZU ga
do so few people compete. marathon only (T) no-of-people-appearing
Most people avoid it
because the scoring system SUKUnai shi TOKUTEN-SEI kara
doesn't award points in few/seldom and because-of-scoring-system
that event.
hazusarete-ru n da yo
be-avoiding/evading (explan)
2
[Kyousuke's pov of Komatsu and Hatta.]
Komatsu:
That is, even if you come tsumari ICHI-I ni natte mo
in first, it would have that-is-to-say even-getting-1st-place
no bearing on the class' ______
chances of winning the kurasu no YUUSHOU ni wa
school championship. class 's winning-the-championship (IO/T)
MUSUbitsukanai tte wake
not-become-connected reason
Hatta:
What a hassle... kattarui yo na--
a-hassle-(slang) (mild-emph)
____
To run 10 kilometers in MACHI naka o #10# kiro mo
the city! inside-the-city (O) 10-km (considered-
large-no.)
HASHIru n da ze_!
to-run (explan/strong-insistence)
The mere thought makes me KANGAeta dake de memai ga shite-ku raa
dizzy! in-thought-only feeling-dizzy/giddy
3
Komatsu:
Huh? Kasuga, you haven't are? KASUGA omae mada ISSHUMOKU mo
signed up for even one you yet one-event even
event yet!
KImattenai n da na~~~_!
not-being-decided (explan)
[Kyousuke sweats...]
4
Boy class president: [checking a list]
The only guys not signed ato OTOKO de KImattenai no wa
up are Komatsu and Kasuga. of-the-guys-remaining not-being-decided
KOMATSU to KASUGA dake da na
and only be
Kyousuke & Komatsu heartbeat FX: _____
dokin
5
Komatsu: [leaping to his feet, hand raised high]
I hear that Kasuga-kun is KASUGA-kun ga DEru so-- desu_!!
volunteering!! (S) to-take-part (hearsay)!!!
Kyousuke FX: _____
gatan
6
Komatsu: [with an earnest look]
At his last school, they nan-to MAE no GAKKOU de wa
used to call him "Old how! at-former-school (T)
Rapids" Kyousuke... SE KO KYOUSUKE
current/torrent/rapids old/ancient
to YObarete-ita to ittemashita...
was-being-called-that said-that
class: [quite impressed]
Ooohh! o---_
Kyousuke: [to Komatsu]
Not! ittemasen
did-not-say
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p 292 (76)
1
[Tight shot of the blackboard. A hand chalks in...]
blackboard: _______
10-km marathon. #10 Km# marason
Boy--Kasuga. OTOKO NO KO KASUGA
Girl... ONNA...
2
[Komatsu turns and flashes Kyousuke the victory sign.]
Kyousuke:
(While shutting him up it (uyamuya no uchi ni
was all decided...) hush-up time-while
KImerarete-shimatta..........)
was-decided-(finality/regret)
3
Girl class president:
All that's needed is one ato ONNA NO KO ICHIMEI
girl's name... the-rest girl another-name
da kedo..........
be however
Isn't there someone? DARE-ka imasen ka
someone isn't-there (?)
4
girl #1: [standing]
How about Ayukawa-san? AYUKAWA-san ni demo shite-oitara
(IO) even if-do-(for-
future-sake)
do-- desu ka
how is (?)
Considering the fact kono BA ni wa inai
she isn't here... in-this-situation (T) isn't-here
koto da shi
thing be consider/besides
5
[A shot of Madoka's empty seat. Nearby, a girl whispers to her neighbor...]
girl #2: _________
She's playing hooky ano KO mata esuke--pu yo
again. that-girl again escape
6
girl #2: [speaking up louder]
But I wonder if she'll demo ano HITO DEru kashira
show up. but that-person emerge I-wonder
She's a selfish person TAIIKU-SAI ni wa ima made KAO mo
who has never even shown at-ath-fest (T) until-now even-face
her face at an athletics
festival. DAshita koto nai KATTE na HITO yo
exposed not selfish-person
girl #3:
Yeah! That's right! She's so-- yo so-- yo HONNIN ga
never participated with the-person-herself
us and shows no concern!
DEnakutta tte atashi-tachi ni wa
not-participated with-us (T)
KANKEI nai mon ne!
no-concern person
girl #4: ______
C'mon, it's okay. Anyway, i-- ja nai do--se kurasu no TENSUU
that athletic event has no in-any-case class'-score
bearing on the class'
score... ni wa KANKEI no nai
on (T) connection 's not
KYOUGI nan da shi
that-athletic-event be consider
7
[Kyousuke is irritated by the sniping...]
Girl class president: [off]
Then, for now, we've de wa ICHIOU ONNA NO KO
decided on Ayukawa-san as in-that-case for-the-present girl
the girl.
wa AYUKAWA-san ni KImarimashita
(T) on-Ayukawa was-decided
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p 293 (77)
1
[Street-level view of a house and power lines.]
Kyousuke: [off] ____
10 kilometers... #10# kiro kaa......
2
Kyousuke: [walking home from school]
That's gonna be tough... TAIHEN da yo na--
difficult be
___
I'm not athletic enough ore sonna ni UNDOUSHINKEI
for that, and... I that-kind-of (IO) motor-nerves
ii ho-- ja nai shi...
good (comparison) be-not and/consider
...I don't have the KONJOU mo nai shi...
determination... spirit/guts too not and
Well, I guess it'll be ma-- tekito-- ni HASHIttereba
okay if I just run it out... well competent-to-do (IO) if-be-running
ii ka......
passably-well
3
Kyousuke:
And I'll be running together sore ni AYUKAWA to ISSHO ni
with Ayukawa... moreover together-w/Ayukawa (IO)
HASHIreru n da shi..........
to-be-running (explan) consider
Ah, wait! ha MAte yo_!
4
[Kyousuke pauses to visualize the scene in panel 292-6.]
girl #2: [flashback]
But I wonder if she'll demo ano HITO DEru kashira
show up. but that-person emerge I-wonder
She's a selfish person TAIIKU-SAI ni wa ima made KAO mo
who has never even shown at-ath-fest (T) until-now even-face
her face at an athletics
festival. DAshita koto nai KATTE na HITO yo
exposed nothing selfish-person
5
Kyousuke: ______
(Sure enough, everyone (kurasu no minna tte yappari
in class misunderstands everyone-in-class (T) sure-enough
Ayukawa.)
AYUKAWA no koto GOKAI shite-ru yo na)
be-misunderstanding
6
[View from down-the-street as Kyousuke walks away.]
narration:
No one understands her minna AYUKAWA no koto yoku wakattenai
well! everyone well not-understand
n da!
(explan)
Kyousuke: _
All right. I'm going to yo--shi minna o a_
make everyone say "wow"! everyone (O) "ah!"
to iwasete-yaru_!
to-make-(someone)-say-that-(give-favor)
sign on pole:
Fujita Store FUJITA SHOUTEN
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p 294 (78)
1
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]
Madoka: [off]
Forget it! DEnai!
not-taking-part
2
[A resolute Madoka wipes a plate.]
3
[She works behind the counter. Kyousuke stands at the counter.]
Kyousuke:
Wh-why? do do--shite?
Madoka:
That's none of your atashi no KATTE desho
business. my own-convenience poss-be
4
Madoka:
But why are you trying so demo nan-de sonna ni atashi o
hard to get me to run? but why in-that-kind-of me (O)
HASHIrasetai no
want-to-run
5
Kyousuke: [blushing]
That... That is... sono... tsumari
[Madoka looks expectantly at him, blushing very slightly.]
narration:
I want to run together AYUKAWA to ISSHO ni HASHIritai n da
with Ayukawa. together-w/Ayukawa (IO) want-to-run (explan)
6
Kyousuke: [lowering his gaze] ______
I think that some of your kurasu no minna tte AYUKAWA no koto
actions are being everyone-in-class (T) your-matter
misunderstood by everyone
in class. GOKAI shite-ru tokoro ga aru
be-misunderstood but there-is
to OMOu n da
to-think-that (explan)
That's why, if you run... da kara AYUKAWA ga HASHIreba......
that's-why (S) if-run
[Madoka's eyes widen...]
7
Kyousuke: [embarrassed, with forced grin]
Isn't it to your own ne JIBUN no tame ja nai ka
benefit? So let's run! one's-own-personal benefit is-not (?)
HASHIro-- yo_!
run-(imperative)
8
[Madoka looks at him with a slightly hurt look.]
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1
Madoka:
That sort of thing doesn't sonna koto..........
matter to me either way... that-kind-of-thing
do-- demo i-- wa yo
not-matter-either-way
I've said this before... MAE ni mo itta desho
before too this-be-said
Such things don't cross nan-to mo OMOttenai tte...
my mind... even-that not-thinking-about
2
Madoka: [exploding, gaze lowered]
Well! If it's like that, yareyare sonna koto nara
then I refuse! oh-boy! if-it's-that-kind-of-thing
o-kotowari yo!
(hon)-refusal
Once more, I... atashi wa mata...
I (T) again
3
Kyousuke: [flinching back, wide-eyed]
"Once more..." what? mata... nani?
4
[Madoka facial portrait--slight blush, slightly lost look.]
5
[Kyousuke facial portrait--wide-eyed and clueless.]
6
[Madoka leans over the counter to get in his face. Kyousuke, eyes bulging,
sways back under the onslaught.]
Madoka:
Anyway! I'm saying it's tonikaku! atashi ga ii tte itte-ru
fine. anyway I (S) fine be-saying-that
n da kara
(for-that-reason)
And that's all! sore de i-- ja nai
and/then okay that's-not
Thanks but no thanks for so-- yatte oshitsukerareru
forcing that on me! doing-like-that be-compelled
notte gomen da wa_!
feeling-like-doing be-sorry
7
[Madoka turns her back to him, and goes back to wiping dishes.]
Kyousuke FX: ______
8
Kyousuke: [angry, with gaze lowered]
Stubborn. hesomagari
perverseness/having-a-crook-in-one's-
character
Madoka: ___
Hmphh! Pretending so hard fun majime burikKO!
to be a serious boy! seriousness manner-boy-(trying-to-be)
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1
[Kyousuke facial portrait--irritated.]
2
[Madoka facial portrait--irritated.]
3
Kyousuke: [pausing at the door for a parting shot]
Fine. i-- yo
Do as you please! KATTE ni shiro yo
do-as-you-please-(imperative)
___
I, on the other hand, can ore hitori no ho-- ga
run freely when I'm alone! I one-person (comparative)
kaette nobinobi
on-the-contrary free-from-care
HASHIreru yo!
be-running
Madoka: [angrily]
Then fine. Please do your ja se--ze--
best to take first place! then try-to-the-best-of-one's-ability
ICHI-I demo totte -kudasai!
1st-place or-something take/get please
4
Kyousuke:
All right. wakatta yo
understood
First place would be fine. ICHI-I toreba i-- n desho
1st-place if-take fine (poss-explan)
door FX: _____
karan
5/6
[In panel 5, Kyousuke stands outside ABCB, his back to the closed door. He
sweats and looks to have cooled his anger. In panel 6, Madoka stands with
arms crossed, still looking peeved.]
narration:
That stubborn... ano wakarazuYA----
that obstinate-person
7/8
[In panel 7, Kyousuke walks down the street.]
narration:
But... demo----
8/9
[In panel 8, Madoka looks a little worried perhaps, and slightly hurt.]
narration:
...a strange stubbornness... hen na IJI wa tte----
strange obstinacy
9
Kyousuke: [sweating, walking away, still just outside ABCB]
What's more, what was sonoue ICHI-I ni naru nan-te
I doing, talking about what's-more getting-1st-place etc.
winning the race.
itchatte do-- shiyou
(=itte-shimatte) what poss-do
saying-(finality/regret)
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1
[Kyousuke, in "Converse" warmups, jogs out the school entrance.]
narration:
The next day, after school... YOKUJITSU HOUKAGO---
next-day after-school-is-over
sign: [top kanji blocked from view]
ryou Secondary School ...RYOU GAKUEN CHUUTOU
Section ...imperial-tomb school secondary-grade
BU
section
2
[A street-level view looking up at some tall buildings.]
Kyousuke: [off] ________
Starting from the playground guraundo kara
and leaving school, I beginning-from-playground
pass through the street ________
in front. suta--to shite GAKKOU o DEte
starting leaving-school
MAE no TOUri o nukeru
street-in-front (O) go-thru
All the way through, I found kono aida wa HITODOUri
that pedestrian traffic was all-through-this (T) pedestrian-traffic
too heavy to allow me to use
the Power to teleport. mo OUku _CHIKARA_ o
even abundantly (kanji = NOURYOKU)
Power ability
TSUKAtte hito_tobitte
using person-flying/jumping
i.e.,-teleport
wake ni wa ikanai
cannot-very-well
Too heavy even to easily amari ni mo HITOME ni
escape public view. too-much-too public-gaze (IO)
tsuki-yasui
easily-strike-against
3
[He runs past a public restroom near a park.]
Kyousuke:
If I'm going to do that da to sureba kono HEN da!
then I should check out if-do-this this-vicinity/side be
this area!
Kyousuke FX: ___ ___
ta_ ta_
4
Kyousuke: _____
If I rush into this kono toire ni kakekomeba..........
restroom... this-toilet (IO) if-rush-into
5
[He stops to peer into the restroom--the ladies' side. From the street,
Hikaru spots him.]
6
Hikaru: [off]
SEMPAAAI!! sempa~~i_!!
[Kyousuke nearly jumps out of his skin.]
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
doki_
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1
[Full-portrait pic of Hikaru standing in school uniform and holding her
schoolbag.]
Hikaru:
What are you doing?! nani shite n desu ka--_?
what doing (explan) (?) !?
2
Kyousuke: [forcing a grin, acting nonchalant]
Nothing really... Ha ha. betsu ni...... ha ha
_____
Truly, this is a splendid jitsuni rippa na toire da na
restroom. truly/indeed fine/splendid-toilet be
And what an entrance, too! kono IRIKUCHI ga nan-to mo
this-entrance (S) what!/how! too
Also... mata...
Hikaru: [interrupting]
That's the women's side. soko JOSEIYOU desu yo
that-place for-ladies'-use is
3
Kyousuke: [stopping short, blushing]
Oh... Right. a...soo
crows-in-background FX:
4
Hikaru: [clasping him by the hands]
Congratulations! omedeto-- gozaimasu_!
congratulations (formal-form)
Hikaru: ____ _______
You're in the 10-km marathon, #10# kiro marason DEru
aren't you! 10-kilometer-marathon take-part-in
n desu tte ne_!
(explan) (hearsay) (right?)
5
Hikaru:
I'm sure you'll take first kitto SEMPAI nara machigai naku
place without fail! surely if-it's-Sempai without-fail
ICHI-I da wa--_
1st-place be
Kyousuke: [highly embarrassed] ______
No... That... Ha ha ha. iya-- sonna hahaha
6
Hikaru:
But, this is great! demo... erai na--
but excellent!/great!
You have so much athletic SEMPAI hodo no UNDOUSHINKEI no
ability, yet you're still to-this-extent 's motor-nerves 's
training...
MOchiNUSHI demo
possessor/owner or-something
___________
sono tame-ni tore--ningu shite-ru
that-benefit/sake be-training
nan-te
etc.
Kyousuke: [glancing off to the side] _____
(Yeah, to rush (kono toire ni kakekomu
into this restroom...) this-toilet (IO) to-rush-into
__
tame no ne...)
in-order-to (confirmation-stressed)
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1
Hikaru:
But, even if you come in demo... tatoe ICHI-I ni natte mo
first your class won't but even-if-come-in-first
benefit from the marathon ______
--so why the heck did you kurasu no tame ni wa naranai
feel like entering? class's-benefit (T) not-getting
_______
marason nan-ka ni
marathon somewhat (IO)
doushite mata DEru
why also to-enter
KI ni nan-ka natta n desu ka?
felt-somewhat-like (explan) (?)
2
[Kyousuke considers this...]
3
[...thinking deeply upon it...]
4
Kyousuke:
Why... Well, if anything... doushite tte...... maa shiite ieba
why (T) well if-anything
5
[Shot through a fish-eye lens at the sky--trees, streetlamps and some
buildings are also visible.]
Kyousuke: [off]
I guess it's for a certain aru HITO no tame..........ka na
someone's sake... a-certain-person 's sake I-wonder
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1
Kyousuke: [embarrassed and laughing it off]
What am I saying! nan chatte
what (= itchatte)
(= itte-shimatte)
saying-(finality)
Kyousuke: ______ ____ __
Ha ha ha. For a moment hahaha chotto kiza deshita ne!
there, I was being a a-little showy/conceited (right?)
little melodramatic, huh?! was
2
[Looking at Hikaru's dewy eyes, Kyousuke is aghast...]
Hikaru FX:
uttori
3
[She springs at him.]
Hikaru: __
It's like that after all! yappari so-- datta no ne!
after-all like-that was
I've been earnestly longing atashi sono kotoba _MAJI_
for those very words! I those-words (kanji = HONKI)
earnestness
matte-ta n desu!
was-waiting-(for) (explan)
Hikaru FX: ____
zui_
zunzun = rapidly/fast
4
Hikaru:
SEMPAI, I LO-O-O-OVE YOU!! SEMPAI da~~~iSUki!!
great-fondness-for
[She leaps into him and they fall into a bush.]
Kyousuke and Hikaru FX: _____
zusa_
zusan = careless/slipshod
old man:
Oh! o_
5
[A huge crowd gathers. All are astonished by what they hear emanating from
the bush.]
Kyousuke: [off]
W-wait a minute, Hikaru-chan! chi chotto hikaru-chan!
crowd:
HUUUHHH? o~~i
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1
[Madoka leans back against the school building, talking to Hikaru.]
Madoka: ____ _______
What?! Kasuga-kun is e_ KASUGA-kun ga #10# kiro marason
training for the 10-km (S) 10-kilometer-marathon
marathon?!
no tame no TOKKUN o?!
's sake 's (go-through)-special-training
2
Madoka:
No way... masaka..........
3
Hikaru:
He really is. HONTOU desu yo
Running without saying a mokumoku to HASHItte-yuku
word--Sempai is so cool... with-silence/mute running-(process-of)
SEMPAI tte kakko yokatta na--
(T) cool/stylish
4
Madoka:
Hmm... soo...
5
Hikaru: [winking]
Still, the athletics iyoiyo ashita desho
festival is tomorrow. still/all-the-more tomorrow poss-be
TAIIKU-SAI
athletics-festival
In order for Sempai to atashi ashita wa SEMPAI ni ICHI-I o
come in first, tomorrow I tomorrow (T) (IO) 1st-place(O)
I'll make him a super-deluxe,
stamina-boosting bento totte-morau tame ni
lunch! receiving-(get-favor) in-order-to
________
totteokino sutamina BENTOU
super/deluxe stamina box-lunch
tsukutte ageru n da-- _!
to-make-(give-favor) (explan)!!
6
Hikaru: [leaving]
Bye now. ja kore de
7
Hikaru: [stopping, with a tickled-pink look on her face]
Oh, that's right. a sou sou
_______
When I asked Sempai why he SEMPAI ni doushite marason nan-ka
was participating in the (IO) why marathon somehow
marathon...
DErukatte kiitara ne
participating when-asked
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1
Hikaru: [eyes closed in joy]
...he said it's for a aru HITO no tame nan datte!
certain someone's sake! a-certain-person 's sake that-is
2
[Madoka's eyes grow wide.]
3
Hikaru: [racing off, fist raised in the air]
I'm so happy... ureshii na--
To think he likes me that sonna ni atashi no koto
much! that-kind-of (IO) about-me
OMOtte-kurete-ru nan-te
to-be-thinking-(get-favor) how!
ONWARD to make the bento! o--shi bento-- tsukuru zo
push to-make (strong-insist.)
4
[Madoka facial portrait--considering this bit of news.]
5
[View pans back to show her leaning back against the building, deep in
thought.]
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p 303 (87)
1
[Shot of some kids cheering, standing under a canopy outside on school
grounds.]
narration:
Then finally, it was the soshite iyoiyo TAIIKU-SAI
day of the athletics and-then finally athletics-festival
festival...
TOUJITSU----
the-appointed-day
2
[The 80-meter hurdles...]
3
[The ever-popular eating-a-donut-that-dangles-on-a-string-without-using-
your-hands track-and-field event... Well, it's probably not a donut, but
you get the idea...]
4
[View of a bento feast.]
bento FX: ______
zura~~
zurari = in-a-row
5
[They stand in a classroom, Hikaru's bento spread out on a desk.]
Kyousuke: [aghast]
Ehhh! Eat all of this?! e----_ kore ZEMBU TAberu no_?!
! these entirely to-eat
Hikaru: [smiling]
Exactly. Because I want so_ SEMPAI ni wa zettai ICHI-I ni natte
to be absolutely sure you ! (IO/T) absolutely-getting-1st
come in first!
hoshii n desu mono_!
desire is-the-reason
6
Hikaru: [tickled with joy]
(This is how a wife helps (kore ga NAIJOU no KOU tte
out.) this (S) one's-wife's-help 's assistance
mono nan da wa)
thing what be
7
Hikaru: [feeding him] ______ ______
Turtle soup, garlic and suppon no su--pu ni
yam salad, liver and leeks, soft-shelled-turtle 's soup (IO)
and vitamin-fortified miso _______ ______
soup. ninniku to YAMAimo no sarada
garlic and yam 's salad
____ ____
nira reba itame soshite
chive/leek liver fried and-then
_______
yunkeru ko--te-- EKI no
herbal-vitamin ?a-march? juice 's
omiotsuke
miso-soup
Hikaru:
Say "ah"... a--n
Kyousuke:
(S-somehow I also feel a bit (na nan-ka chotto chigau
different...) somewhat a-little different
KI mo suru ga...)
also-feel/think
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p 304 (88)
1
[Shot of students in the toss-the-small-balls-into-the-basket-on-a-pole
contest.]
students:
Waaahh! wa~~~~_
2
[View pans back to show Kyousuke looking on with determination.]
3
Kyousuke: [holding a strip of cloth in his hands]
(Now that that's over...) (are ga owareba iyoiyo......)
that(one) (S) if-be-over finally
announcer: [off] ____ _______
Participants in the 10-km #10# kiro marason ni SHUTSUJOU suru
marathon, please meet in 10-km-marathon (IO) to-participate
front of the gymnasium.
SENSHU wa TAIIKUKAN-MAE ni
player (T) in-front-of-gymnasium
SHUUGOU shite kudasai
meeting please
4
[Kyousuke ties the cloth around his forehead.]
announcer: [off] ____ _______
I repeat. Participants in kurikaeshimasu #10# kiro marason ni
the 10-km marathon...
SHUTSUJOU no SENSHU wa
5
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]
6
[Inside, Madoka, dressed in jeans and T-shirt, sits at the counter, studying.]
7
[She looks up from her book.]
8
[View shifts to a point behind her. We see that she's looking out the window.]
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p 305 (89)
1
[View looking down at the marathon runners gathering at the starting line.]
2
[Kyousuke takes a deep breath.]
starter: [off]
Take your positions. ICHI ni tsuite
position concerning
Kyousuke:
Phew! fuu_
3
[He smiles and waves to his sisters, who cheer from the side.]
Kurumi:
Do your best, oniichan! gambatte ne--_ oni--chan
4
[Hand still raised in a wave, his smile slowly fades...]
5
[View of Madoka's book on the ABCB counter. She's no longer there.]
6
[A pair of legs comes into view on the track surface.]
7
[Kyousuke is speechless.]
8
[A very fit and shapely lower body, in shorts and T-shirt, comes into view.]
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p 306 (90)
1
[Full portrait of Madoka, in a panel that runs down the entire right side of
the page. She walks toward us with a very tiny smile on her face and a
headband on her head. She sure changed out of her jeans and T-shirt in
a hurry!]
2
starter pistol FX: ___
don
3
[The students begin running...]
4
[Well, all except for Kyousuke and Madoka, who stand and look at each other.]
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p 307 (91)
1
[Kyousuke facial portrait--surprise hasn't quite worn off yet.]
2
[Madoka facial portrait--gaze slightly downcast, slightly sad.]
3
[Madoka gives a stern look as she starts running, and pushes him aside with
her hand.]
Madoka:
Hey! C'mon, everyone's hora_ moo minna itchatta ja nai
gone already. look! already (= itte-shimatta)
everyone gone-(finality/regret)
Madoka push FX: ___
pon
4
[Kyousuke is jarred into action.]
5
[He runs to catch up to her. Madoka looks at him out of the corner of her
eye.]
6
[Their classmates stand together and watch.]
Komatsu:
What...! Isn't that are~~_ AYUKAWA ja nai ka?!
Ayukawa?!
girl:
Really. I wonder what honto do-- yu-- KAZE no fukimawashi
caused this? what-kind-of developments
kashira
I-wonder
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p 308 (92)
1
[View of Madoka's and Kyousuke's legs as they run side-by-side.]
2
[Madoka looks over at Kyousuke, but Kyousuke stares straight ahead.]
3
[They look at each other.]
Madoka: ________
Falling behind at the suta--to kara konna ni
start like this makes from-the-start this-kind-of (IO)
finishing in first
impossible. okurecha totemo ICHI-I wa muri ne
(= okurete wa) possible (T) imposs.
falling-behind 1st-place
4
Madoka:
Can I ask you one thing? demo hitotsu kiite ii?
but one-(thing) asking okay
5
Madoka: [smiling]
You're running for a certain aru HITO no tame ni HASHIrutte...
someone's sake... a-certain-person's-sake (IO) running
Whose? DARE no koto?
[Kyousuke blushes slightly.]
6
[Madoka facial portrait--she looks over at him with a gentle smile.]
7
[Kyousuke facial portrait--he looks back, and considers what to say.]
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p 309 (93)
1
Kyousuke: [smiling]
Of course... mochiron..........
2
[But he suddenly seizes up.]
Kyousuke FX: __
u_
3
Kyousuke: [clutching his stomach]
(Wh-what's this? Somehow my (na nan da nan-ka HARA no CHOUSHI ga
stomach feels strange! what's-this somehow stomach's-condition
okashii zo
strange (strong-insistence)
It's that lunch Hikaru-chan sakki hikaru-chan ga
just fed me!) a-little-while-ago (S)
kureta BENTOU da na--_!)
gave box-lunch be
[Madoka looks on in surprise.]
4
[At the finish line, a boy from classroom 3-C breaks the tape. In second
place is a boy from 2-B. No sign at all of either 3-A runners...]
crowd FX:
wa--_
5
[At the restroom, Madoka leans back against the entrance, waiting. In triple
corner insets we see Kyousuke's face looking pale and sweaty, Madoka's face
looking irked and sweaty, and Hikaru back at school, looking perplexed...]
Kyousuke: _____
I feel sick! kakko wari--_!
look-uncool
Madoka:
..........! ..........!
Hikaru:
What happened to Sempai... do-- shita n daro SEMPAI...
what did (poss-explan)
It's already the closing HEIKAI-SHIKI na noni......
ceremonies... closing-ceremonies though
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