Kimagure Orange Road
"The Suspicious Flickering Light Beam!"
Volume 3, Story 9
WB Volume 2, Story 10
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi

Translation by Craig H. Nishida
Compilation by Spencer C. Hastings
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
                                 Craig Nishida
                                 Spencer Hastings
                                 Peter Norby
                                 Jay Harvey
                                 Ramon Galindo

Last revision : 9-19-94

NOTE: [WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()]
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga. So there may be a few
extra's to those of you not having them.
Example: (The subtitles on page 201 (179) are only in the WB'S!)
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p 201 (179)--TITLE PAGE

[Madoka stands, hand on hip, other hand toys with her hair which is
 tied up on top; her midriff is bare, thus the subtitles.]

MAIN TITLE (at top)                                       _______
  The Suspicious Flickering       GIWAKU     KOUSEN   /   yuratsu!
  Light Beam!                     suspicion  light-beam   <*>

<* yuratsuku = to flicker/waver/shake/tremble/jolt/vibrate/sway/rock>



SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
  With Hair Up and Spirits        KAMI      o  #UP#  ni   KIBUN   wa #HIGH#!
  High!                           the-hair (O)  up  (IO)  spirit  (T) high
                                  ______
  I Want to Feel the Nuance       binkan     SUHADA to
  on My Sensitive Skin...         sensitive  with-bare-skin
                                  _______
                                  nyuansu  shitai...
                                  nuance   want-to-be-felt

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p 202 (180)

1
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]
phone FX:                         _______
                       riri--n

2
Madoka:                                 _______
  Yes, this is ABCB.              hai   abakabu desu

3
[Madoka listens to whomever is on the other end of the phone.]

4
Madoka:
  Shuu-chan!                      SHUU-chan!

5
Madoka: [smiling]
  It's been a long time,          HISAshiburi            ne--
  huh?                            after-a-long-interval  (right?)

  Yeah, fine!                     un GENKI!
                                     vitality

6
[Madoka glances at the clock, which reads 9:40.]
Madoka:                           _____
  Work?                           baito?

  ...yeah.  I'm done soon.        ...... un   mo-- sugu  Owaru    kedo
                                              soon       be-over  but

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p 203 (181)

1
Madoka:
  WHAT?  TONIGHT?!                e  KON'YA?!

2
[Master looks on, curious.]

3
Madoka FX:                        ______
                           chira_

Master FX:                        _____
                            gohon

4
Madoka: [writing on a pad]
  Yeah...  I got it.              un......  wakatta
                                                      ________
  The record store in front       EKIMAE           no reko--do  -YA ne
  of the station.                 front-of-station 's record     store

  I'll be there.  Bye.            iku yo ja

5
[On the streets at night, Madoka looks about.]

6
[From behind, we watch her walk away, past some night spots.]
sign 1:                           _______
  Kitty Cat Lounge                nyannin
                                  meow-person  

sign 2:
  A.H Hat-chan                    #A.H# hatchan

sign 3:                           _______
  Tracy Snack Bar                 sunakku #TRACY#

sign 4:
  A.M Mitsuru-kun                 #A.M#  mitsuru-kun

sign 5:                           ________
  Tremolo              toremoro   ????
                                  a-tremolo

sign 6:                           ____     _________
  Music Woman Pub & Restaurant    pabu #&# resutoran  #MUSIC WOMAN#
                                  pub      restaurant

sign 7:                           ____
  White Water Bar                 ba--  SHIROMIZU
                                  bar   white-water-left-after-washing-rice



sign 8:
  A.G. -chan              #A.G# <2-undeciphered-kanji> -chan

sign 9:                           _____
  Seventh Heaven                  runru
                                  (= runrun?)
                                     in-7th-heaven/on-cloud-9

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p 204 (182)

1
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]
narration:
  The next day...                 YOKUJITSU----

Master: [off]
  Welcome!                        irasshai!

2
[Kyousuke sits at the counter and looks about.]

3
Master:
  What can I get you today?       nan   ni   nasaimasu ka   KYOU wa?
                                  what (IO)  do       (?)   today

Kyousuke:                             ________  ___
  Oh, I'll have an ice cafe.      a   aisukafe  ore
                                      ice-cafe  I

4
Kyousuke: [looking about again]
  Uh...                           ano...

5
[Master studies him.]

6
Master: [smiling]
  Sorry, she's not here!          ZANNEN  datta ne!    AYUKAWA-kun
  Some important business         regret  was
  came up, and so she's
  taking a break from work.       DAIJI na YOU      ga  dekita toka   de
                                  important-errand (S)  can-do somehow

                                  YASUnde-ru         n da
                                  be-taking-a-break  (explan)

7
Kyousuke:
  Oh...                           haa......

narration:
  I got hold of some movie        EIGA no KEN   ga
  tickets so I thought I'd        movie-tickets (S)
  invite her...
                                  TE ni haitta kara
                                  since-came-into-my-possession

                                  sasoou        to OMOtte kita     noni---
                                  shall-invite  began-thinking-that

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p 205 (183)

1
[Kyousuke spies a piece of paper on the counter.]

2
Kyousuke:
 (That's Ayukawa's                (AYUKAWA no JI           ja nai ka!)
  handwriting!)                            's handwriting  is-not(?)

 (Hmm, let me see...)             (nani nani)

3
[Closeup of the paper.]
memo:
  Shuu-chan                       SHUU-chan

  10:30 PM                        #PM 10:30#

  front of station                EKIMAE

  in front of record store        reko--do-- -YA MAE

4
[Kyousuke's eyes grow wide.]

5
Kyousuke:
 (Shuu-chan?!)                    (SHUU-chan?!)

 (Who might that be?)             (DARE no koto darou)
                                   who          poss.-be

6
Kyousuke: [still staring at the paper]
 (Since she wrote "chan",         (chan tte  kaku      kara ni wa
  they must be pretty close.)      "chan"    to-write  since

                                  kekko-- SHITAshii  NAKA   nan daro-- naa)
                                  rather-friendly    terms  what-poss-be

7
Kyousuke:                          ________
 (So she's meeting this guy       (reko--do -YA MAE          tte  koitsu to
  in front of the record           in-front-of-record-store  (T)  w/this-guy
  store?)
                                  MAchia               wake shite-ru
                                  wait-for-each-other  be-the-reason

                                  tte koto  ka)
                                      thing (?)

 (And this late...                (shikamo      konna OSOku ni...
                                   furthermore  at-this-kind-of-lateness

  Who in the world might          ittai DARE        nan darou SHUU-chan te)
  "Shuu-chan" be?)                who-in-the-world  what-poss-be

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p 206 (184)

1
[Master sets down Kyousuke's order...]

drink FX:                         ___
                            ton

2
[...and notices what Kyousuke is reading.]
Master FX:                        ______
                           chira_

Kyousuke FX:                      ___
                             ha_

3
Kyousuke: [setting it down]
 (Oh no, oh no!)                  (ikenai ikenai!)

memo FX:                          _____
                        pasa_

4
Kyousuke:
 (Again, as usual, my worries     mata   itsu mo no  SHIMPAISHOU ga...
  run away with me...             again  always      worry-habit (S)
                                  ___
  It's a bad habit of mine!)      ore no  WARUi kuse  da!)
                                  my      bad-habit   be

5
[Kyousuke sips his drink.]
narration:
  Hey!  This is nothing to        kora_!   kore gurai de
  get worried about.  Right,      hey !    about-this
  Kyousuke?!
                                  SHIMPAI suru koto nai
                                  not-a-thing-to-get-worried-about

                                  ja nai ka  KYOUSUKE!
                                  is-not(?)

6
[Portrait of Madoka.]
narration:
  It's Ayukawa.  It must          AYUKAWA no koto da mon       kitto
  certainly be a legitimate                       is (explan)  surely
  errand!
                                  chanto shita            YOUJI     ni
                                  proper/up-to-standards  business  at

                                  KImatte-ru yo!
                                  be-settling/deciding

narration:
  That's what this "Shuu-chan"    da kara           SHUU-chan   to yu-- no
  is all about...                 for-that-reason  "Shuu-chan"  saying-that

                                  mo----

7
[Kyousuke looks up at the ceiling, in thought.]

8
[Exterior night shot of ABCB.]
narration:                                                     ___
  But I don't really know         da kedo     AYUKAWA no koto  ore
  everything about Ayukawa...     be however  about-Ayukawa    I

                                  HONTOU ni  SHIranai na---
                                  really     not-know

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p 207 (185)

1
[Madoka stands and unties her ABCB apron.]
narration:
  And again, the next day...      soshite  sono  mata   YOKUJITSU----
                                  and      that  again  the-next-day

Madoka:
  Oh!                             ara

2
Madoka:
  You came yesterday.             kinou      kita  n datte
                                  yesterday  came    even

Kyousuke: [embarrassed]
  Ha ha!                          ha ha_

narration:
  Ayukawa's here!                 AYUKAWA wa ita!

3
narration:
  All right!  Today indeed...!    yoshi      KYOU   koso----!
                                  all-right  today  indeed/precisely

Kyousuke:
  I have two movie tickets.       EIGA no KEN   ga   2 MAI        aru
  If tomorrow's okay...           movie-tickets (S)  2-(counter)  exist

                                  n da      kedo    yokattara  ashita...
                                  (explan)  but     if-okay    tomorrow

4
[Madoka looks at him.]

5
Madoka: [small (apologetic) smile]
  I'm sorry.  I have to run       gomen ne  ashita   wa   chotto YOU    ga
  a little errand tomorrow.                 tomorrow (T)  small  errand (S)

                                  aru no
                                  exists

6
Kyousuke:
  Oh.                             asoo

Master:
  Ayukawa-kun, it's almost        AYUKAWA-kun sorosoro  JIKAN        da yo
  time.                                       soon      time/period  be

7
Madoka:                                               ________
  Oh, you're right.  I'm sorry    HONTOU da  suimasen masuta--
  about this, Master.             really be  sorry    Master

  Well, I'll be going!            ja o-saki ni!
                                       beforehand

Madoka: [waving]
  Bye, Kasuga-kun.                ja ne KASUGA-KUN

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p 208 (186)

1
[Kyousuke sits stunned.]
door FX:                          _____
                          karan

[Master touches him on the shoulder.]

touch FX:                         ___
                             ton

2
Master:
  Worried?                        SHIMPAI kai?

Kyousuke: [blushing]
  Eh!  N-no.  Not really...       e  i ie  sonna         betsu ni...
                                       no  that-kind-of  in-particular

3
Kyousuke:
  But...  What in the world       demo......  do-- shita n desu
  is going on?                    but         what-is-the-matter

                                  ka ittai?
                                     in-the-world

4
[Master thinks about it.]

5
[Shot of the ABCB wall.]
Master: [off]
  Well.  I didn't hear what       saa ne   donna YOUJI ka wa
  kind of errand, but ever                 what-kind-of-errand/business
  since that phone call (on
  the evening of) the day         kiite nai    kedo  tada  ototoi
  before yesterday...             not-hearing  but   just  day-before-
                                                                yesterday

                                  no YORU     DENWA  ga  atte   kara......
                                  's evening  telephone  having because

6
Kyousuke:
  Ah!                             ha_

narration:
  Telephone...                    DENWA----

7
[Kyousuke visualizes Madoka waving and leaving the ABCB. Overlaid on this is
 the memo.]
memo:
  Shuu-chan                       SHUU-chan

  10:30 PM                        #PM 10:30#

  front of station                EKIMAE

  in front of record store        reko--do-- -YA MAE

narration:
  Ayukawa was called by that      AYUKAWA----
  "Shuu-chan" guy in that             ____
  memo?!                          ano memo  ni  atta
                                  that-memo     existed

                                  SHUU-chan toka yu--  yatsu ni
                                  called-"Shuu-chan"   that-person

                                  YObi-dasarete?!
                                  be-calling-up

  I guess I was right.  But       yappari       so-- na no ka  shikashi
  what in the world is this       as-I-thought  seeming-like   but
  all about...
                                  ittai nan          no tame ni----
                                  what-in-the-world  due-to

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p 209 (187)

1
[Exterior night shot of Komatsu's home.]
narration:
  The day my worries              SHIDAI ni  SHIMPAI ga
  gradually grew...               gradually  worry  (S)

                                  tsunotte kita               aru     HI---
                                  began-growing-more-intense  happen  day

sign:
  Komatsu                         KOMATSU

2
[Inside, Kyousuke tries to do the homework, but Komatsu flashes him a
 centerfold pinup.]
narration:                        ___
  ...I spent the night at         ore wa  NATSUYASUmi no SHUKUDAI    no
  Komatsu's house in order        I  (T)  summer-vacation's-homework 's
  to cram and finish up the
  summer vacation homework.       Oi-komi               no tame ni
                                  final-lap/last-spurt  because-of

                                  KOMATSU no IE ni    TOmari ni itta
                                  at-Komatsu's-house  went-stopping-for-
                                                                the-night

3
[Daylight.  And Kyousuke walks home, through a rather questionable
 neighborhood...]
Kyousuke:
  Yawn!                           fua_

narration:
  The next morning.               sono YOKUASA

sign #1:
  Mahjong                         MAAJAN

 

sign #2:
  Dirty Bookstore                 ikagawashi SHOTEN
                                  indecent   bookstore

sign #3:
  Pachinko                        ________
                                  pachinko

 

sidewalk sign:                    ______
  Kabuki                          kabuki
  

4
Kyousuke: [looking around at the signs]
 (Come to think of it, this       (so-- ieba        koko da na
  is where that record store       if-that-kind-of  this-place-be
  is...)                                    ________
                                  EKIMAE no reko--do -YA tte)
                                  record-store-in-front-of-station

 (...it's in a rather indecent    (kekko-- ikagawashii BASHO da naa)
  neighborhood.)                   quite   indecent    area  be

sign #1:                                                   _________
  Super-Extreme MASSAGE           CHOU-   KAGEKI-NA        massa--ji
                                  super-  extreme/radical  massage

sign #2:                                    _____
  Dirty Videos                    iyarashi  bideo
                                  lewd      videos

sign #3:
  Super-Perverted Books           CHOU-  sukebe    SHO   #adults only#
  "Adults Only"                   super- perverted books

sign #4:
  Perverted Tea House             sukebe KISSA  #2# KAI 
  2 floors (up)                          tea-house  floors

sign #5:
  Crows too                       KARASU      -HAJI
                                  crow/raven   including/as-well-as



5
[Kyousuke walks down the street.  From behind him, comes a voice...]
Madoka: [off]
    Looks like it's         to--to--  ASA    ni natchatta ne
  morning already.                rapidly   morning   (= natte-shimatta)
                                                         became-(regret)

sign:
  Large servings                  OUMORI
                                  large-serving/heaping-measure

6
[Kyousuke turns to look.]
narration:
  That voice just now?!           IMA no KOE wa?!
                                  now 's voice

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p 210 (188)

1
[Shot of Madoka and Shuu leaving a building.]

2
[Shot of Kyousuke in shock.]
narration:
  A-AYUKAWA!!                     a  AYUKAWA!!

3
[Kyousuke zips around the corner of a building.]
narration:
  Who's that guy next to          tonari ni       iru    OTOKO wa----?!
  her...?!                        in-area-beside  to-be  man

Kyousuke FX:                      ___
                            sa_

4
Shuu:
  Shall we get something          nani-ka    TAbete-iku?
  to eat?                         something  to-eat-(process-of)

5
Madoka:
  That's okay.  Right now I'm     i-- yo  kono mama    KAEtte
  going home and straight to              this-moment  returning-home
  bed.
                                  NEru          kara
                                  to-go-to-bed  that's-why

Madoka:
  Yawn!                           afu_

6
[They walk past the alley in which Kyousuke is hiding.]
Shuu:
  Whew!  It's already morning,    yareyare  ASA      KAEri       kaa
  and we're only now going home!  whew      morning  return-trip (?)

Kyousuke:
  !                               !

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p 211 (189)

1
[Shuu tries to stifle a yawn.]
Madoka:
  A-ha!  Shuu-chan, you           ara ara  SHUU-chan NEMU so-- na
  have a sleepy face.                                looking-like-to-sleep

                                  KAO shichatte
                                      (= shite-shimatte)
                                  having-expression-(finality)

2
Shuu: [smiling]
  You have a pretty sleepy        omae          datte   kekko--
  face, too!                      you(familiar)         quite

                                  NEMU so--na
                                  looking-like-to-sleep

                                  KAO shite-ru          ze
                                  be-having-expression  (strong-insistence/
                                                          used-among-friends)

Madoka: [smiling]
  I put you through an            o-tsukare-sama deshita!
  exhausting time!*                 fatigue      was

<*Cultural note and commentary:  This phrase is difficult to translate into
 English.  Madoka here says "o-tsukare-sama deshita!"--said by one after
 a long day, and is almost-but-not-quite an apology or offer of thanks
 to another for putting the other through such a long day.>



3
[Kyousuke watches as Madoka and Shuu walk away.]
sign 1: [partial view]
  ...Perverted                    ...sukebe

sign 2:
  Cabaret                         kyabaree

sign 3:
  Obscene                         waisetsu

sign 4:
                             chauhai 
                                          

4
[Kyousuke is stunned.]

5
narration:                                _____
  I felt like I'd been hit        marude  hamma de  ATAMA o   nagurareta
  on the head with a hammer...    as-if   w/hammer  head (O)  was-hit

                                  you na        KANji    datta----
                                  it-resembles  feeling  was

6
narration:
  After all, that man--that       yo--suru ni         ano OTOKO ga
  so-called "Shuu-chan" guy--     after-all/in-short  that-man (S)
  looks to be around college
  age.                            SHUU-chan toka       yu--    yatsu de
                                  a-certain-Shuu-chan  to-say  that-person

                                  TOSHI wa  DAIGAKU  -gurai  de
                                  age  (T)  college  or-so   being

narration:
  Also, their relationship        shikamo      AYUKAWA no koto o
  allows him to address           furthermore                 (O)
  Ayukawa informally...
                                  omae            da  nan-te
                                  you-(familiar)  be  etc.

                                  yobisute-ru koto ga
                                  being-a-don't-mister-him-thing

                                  dekiru  TACHIBA ni  iru      koto---
                                  can-do  situation   to-have  thing



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p 212 (190)

1
[Kyousuke looks up at the business signs.]
narration:
  And...                          soshite----

2
[Shot down the street.]
sign #1:
  Come-Along Tea House            DOUHAN SURU        KISSA
                                  go-with/accompany  tea-house

sign #2:
  Indecent Bookstore              iyarashi SHOTEN

sign #3: [partial]
  Studi...  Stage...           #STUDI...#  sutajio

narration:
  They came from down that        futari   wa   asoko kara
  way...                          2-people (T)  from-down-there

                                  DEte-kite---
                                  beginning-emerging

3
[Tilted shot down the street.]
narration:
  Oh!  I don't understand         aa moo  nan-da-ka  wake   ga
  any more!                               somehow    reason (S)

                                  wakaranai     ya!
                                  not-understand

sign #1:                                  _____
  Best Humble Tea House           itchan  hikui   KISSA
                                  best    humble  tea-house
                                  (ichiban-diminutive)

sign #2:
  Student Reading Room            GAKUSEI  KAIDOKU
                                  student  reading/discussion/meeting

4
[Madoka portrait.]
narration:
  Ayukawa...!!                    AYUKAWA---!!

5
[Kyousuke stands and stares down the street.]
narration:
  What in the world is this       kore      wa   itta          do-- yu--
  all about?!                     this(one) (T)  in-the-world  what-kind-of

                                  koto   nan   da?!
                                  thing  what  be

sign #1:
  ??????                          ...doeji

sign #2:                                               _____
  Intensely Perverted Videos      HAGESHII  sukebe     bideo
                                  intense   perverted  video

sign #3:
  Dirty Bookstore                 hiwai          SHOTEN
                                  obscene/dirty

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p 213 (191)

1
[Exterior shot of a movie theatre and associated billboards/posters.]
Hikaru: [off]
  SEMPAI!!                        SEMPAI!!

sign #1: [partial]
 



billboard sign:                   ________
  Love Comedy "I'm Sorry"         rabukome     tte      gomen ne
                                  love-comedy  (quote)  I'm-sorry

small billboard sign:             ________              ___________
  Love Comedy "I'm Sorry"         rabukome tte gomen ne ro--dosho--
  Road Show

left poster:
  Coming Soon to a Theater        KINJITSU  KOUKAI SURU
  Near You                        soon      present-to-the-public



2
[A hand jars Kyousuke to his senses.]
Hikaru: [off]
  SEMPAI!!                        SEMPAI!!

3
[Hikaru and Kyousuke sit in their theatre seats.]
Kyousuke:
  A-ah!  What is it?              a aa  nan dai

Hikaru:
  ..........                      ..........

4
Hikaru:
  Sempai, you're looking very     SEMPAI nan-ka    KAO IRO
  pale and unwell.                       somewhat  complexion

                                  WARUi           mitai      massao
                                  bad/indisposed  look-like  very-pale

                                  desu yoo
                                  are

5
Kyousuke:
  Eh?!  I-I see.                  e?!  so soo

6
narration:                                                    ______
  Well, that makes a lot of       sorya  so-- da yo na   anna shi--n
  sense--after seeing a scene     that   to-be-that-way  that-kind-of-scene
  like that...!
                                  MOKUGEKI shita  n da mon...!
                                  observed        (the-reason-is)

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p 214 (192)

1
Hikaru:
  But...  Thank you very much.    demo...  arigato-- gozaimasu

2
Hikaru: [brightly]
  To be invited by you...         SEMPAI ni  sasotte moraeru           nan-te
                                  by-Sempai  be-invited-(favor-to-me)  etc.

  I've wanted to see this         atashi  kono EIGA   mitakatta     n desu
  movie.                          I       this-movie  should-like-(to-see)
                                                                    (explan)

3
[Kyousuke watches her.]

4
Kyousuke:
  Aren't you hungry?  Shall       onaka sukanai?       nani-ka
  we get something to eat?        not-feeling-hungry   something

                                  TAbete-iku?
                                  to-eat-(process-of)

Hikaru: [happily]
  Wow, Sempai!  You're so         waa_  KYOU no SEMPAI  KIMAE
  generous today!                       today's-Sempai  generosity

                                  mo   i-- ya!
                                  too  good

5
narration:
 "Shall we get something to       nani-ka TAbete iku...?!
  eat...?!"

Kyousuke:
  Ah!                             ha_

6
[Shot of Kyousuke covering his ears as flash-bubbles appear around him.]
Flashback #1:
  Shall we get something to       nani-ka TAbete iku?
  eat?

Flashback #2:
  That's okay.  Right now I'm     i-- yo  kono mama KAEtte NEru kara
  going home and straight to
  bed.

Flashback #3:
  A-ha!  Shuu-chan, you           ara ara  SHUU-chan NEMU so-- na
  have a sleepy face.
                                  KAO shichatte

Flashback #4:
  You have a pretty sleepy        omae datte kekko-- NEMU so-- na
  face, too!
                                  KAO shite-ru ze

7
Kyousuke:
  ENOUGH ALREADY!!                mo--     yamete-kure_!!
                                  already  stop

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p 215 (193)

1
[Outside on the street, Kyousuke, hands on ears, comes to his senses.
 Hikaru looks at him in surprise.]
sign: [view of left side of same billboard seen in panel 213-1]
  Screen-Projection               JOUEI
                                  ______
  Road...                         ro--do...

2
Hikaru:
  Something happened after        yappari    nani-ka    atta      n desu  ka
  all?                            after-all  something  happened (explan) (?)

Kyousuke: [embarrassed]
  N-nothing, nothing!             na...  nan demo nai nan demo nai!

3
[Hikaru looks on with concern.]

4
Hikaru: [brightly, grabbing his arm]
  Well, today I was thinking      tokoro de        KYOU  wa   SEMPAI o
  of taking you to a nice         well/by-the-way  today (T)        (O)
  place.
                                  ii toko     ni   TSUrete-tte       ageyou
                                  nice-place (IO)  taking-(someone)  (favor)

                                  to OMOtte-ta       n desu
                                  was-thinking-that  (explan)

5
Hikaru: [resting her head on his shoulder]
  Would you do that with me?      tsukiatte-moraemasu                     ka
                                  doing-together/going-along-(favor-to-me)

narration:
  Usually, Hikaru-chan sticks     itsu-mo  dattara  tajirogu     hodo
  so close that I shrink          usually  when-be  shrink-back  an-extent
  back...
                                  hikaru-chan ga  kuttsuite      kuru no
                                             (S)  adhering-(to)  beginning

                                  mo
                                  too

6
Kyousuke: [small smile]
  ...yeah.                        ......un

narration:
  ...but today, for some          IMA  wa  naze-ka          kokochi
  reason, it feels nice...        now (T)  for-some-reason  feeling

                                  yoi----
                                  good/nice

7
[They walk off down the street, Hikaru clinging to his arm.]
narration:
  Today, I think I want to        KYOU  wa   zutto
  spend the entire day with       today (T)  the-whole-time
  Hikaru-chan!
                                  hikaru-chan to ISSHO ni  itai
                                  together-w/Hikaru        want-to-be

                                  KIBUN!
                                  feeling/mood

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p 216 (194)

1
[Exterior shot of "Mersey Beat" nightclub.]

2
[Inside the lobby, they stand and Kyousuke looks around him.]
Kyousuke:                         _____   _______
  Live spot?!                     raibu / supotto?!
  

Hikaru:                                  _____
  Sempai, you like rock           SEMPAI rokku  suki  desho!
  music!                         rock   like  poss-be

3
Kyousuke:
  ...yeah.                        ......un

sign (top):
  Today's Presen...               HONJITSU no SHU...
                                  today    's ?????

sign (bottom):                    ________
  Apple T...                      appuruta...

narration:                                          _____
  But...  Now I don't feel        demo----  IMA wa  rokku o   kiku   tte
  like listening to rock          but       now (T) rock (O)  listen
  music.
                                  KI ni wa narenai         na
                                  not-feeling-inclined-to

4
Hikaru: [looking worried]
  I don't know what happened,     nani ga   atta    ka   atashi
  but you're in poor spirits!     what (S)  there-is(?)  I

                                  SHIranai             kedo
                                  not-know/understand  however

                                  SEMPAI GENKI nai mon
                                         vigor not

5
[Kyousuke looks at her in surprise.]

6
Hikaru:
  When I see you like this,       sonna SEMPAI         mite-ru    to
  even I become sad.              this-kind-of-Sempai  be-seeing  when

                                  atashi made  sabishiku natchau
                                  I      even  lonely    (= natte-shimau)
                                                            become-(regret)

Kyousuke:
  Hikaru-chan!                    hikaru-chan!

marquee sign:                                                   _____
  ????            ???? Band       ?????                ikugashi bando
                                                       ???????? band
                                  ___________          _______
  Monty Python    The Doors       montepaison          doa--zu

                                  ________             ____________________
  ????            ???? Band       ratoruzu             a--sharutakka--bando
                                  ????????             ???????????????band

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p 217 (195)

1
Hikaru: [brightly]
  I'm sure listening to this      kitto   ko-- yu--     OTO    kikeba
  kind of sound will put you      surely  this-kind-of  sound  if-listen
  back on top of the world!       _______
                                  sukatto shimasu           yo
                                  be-free-from-bad-feelings/feel-great

2
[Kyousuke looks at her, wide-eyed...]

3
[...and smiles.]
narration:
  Thanks, Hikaru-chan!            arigatou hikaru-chan!

narration:
  That's so nice.                 yasashi-- n da ne

4
Hikaru: [starting to walk off]
  Actually, in here...            sore to         jitsu wa  koko  ni...
                                  with-that(one)  actually  here (IO)

  ...is a secret!  A secret!      atto HIMITSU HIMITSU!
                                       secret

5
Hikaru: [running towards the entrance to the nightclub proper]
  Sempaaai.  Hurry, hurry.        SEMpa--i  HAYAku HAYAku  mo--
  It's already started!                     hurry          already

                                  HAJImatte-masu yo!
                                  is-starting

6
[The two enter.]
rock music FX:                    ________
                        gyaaaaan

Hikaru: [in glee; hands to ears]
  Heyyy!  They're playing!        hyaa--_  yatte-ru yatte-ru!
  They're playing!

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p 218 (196)

1
[This panel is splashed across the tops of pages 218-219.  The band,
 including Madoka on keyboards and Shuu on lead guitar stands onstage.
 The female vocalist, as we later find out, is Yukari.  The bass player
 (Shige) and drummer (Mitsuru) round out the band.]

2
[Kyousuke stands in amazement.]

3
[His pov of Madoka at keyboards.]

4
narration:
  Wh-what...                      a are wa----

5
[Another view of Madoka performing.]

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p 219 (197)

1
[This panel is splashed across the tops of pages 218-219...  See description
 for 218-1 above.]

2
[Kyousuke is speechless.]

3
[Another view of Madoka.]
narration:
  Ayukawa...?!                    AYUKAWA---?!

4
Hikaru: [waving]
  Madoka-saaan!                   madoka-sa--n!

5
Madoka FX:                        _____
                          niko_

6
[Kyousuke stands and stares.]
narration:                                   __________
  Ayukawa's in a rock band?!      AYUKAWA ga rokkubando ni?!

narration:
  Wh-what in the world is this?   ko kore wa   ittai  do-- yu-- koto  da
                                     this(one) in-the-world           is
                                                      what-kind-of-thing

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p 220 (198)

1
[The band ends their number and Shuu takes to the microphone.]
Shuu:                                        _______
  Hey, I'd like to introduce      e--  SHIN- memba-- o   SHOUKAI shimasu
  a new member.                        new   member (O)  introduce

2
[Kyousuke visualizes the conversation overheard on the street.]
narration:
  H-him!                          a aitsu!

Shuu flashback:
  You have a pretty sleepy        omae datte kekko-- NEMU so-- na
  face, too!
                                  KAO shite-ru ze

3
Shuu:                             __________
  Ken-chan on keyboards is        ki--bo--do no KEN-chan ga
  injured, so filling in          keyboard   's (name)  (S)
  for him is...                   ____
                                  kega o shimashite  RINJI ni
                                  is-injured         temporary

                                  TETSUDA     tte-morau  koto ni narimashita
                                  assistance             thing   became

4
[Isolated shot of Madoka standing at keyboards.]
Shuu: [off]
  ...Madoka-kun!                  madoka-kun desu!

crowd: [off]                                      ______
  Wah!  Soooo cute!               wa--_  i-- zo-- kawaii

5
[Madoka facial portrait.]

6
[Kyousuke looks on.]
narration:
  Ayukawa...                      AYUKAWA----

7
Shuu:
  Because she only practiced      nan se KANOJO ni wa   ICHIYAzuke de
  overnight  on the stage
  in front of the station,        EKIMAE no sutajio de
  and on the way here, we ask     on-stage-in-front-of-station
  for your courtesy!
                                  RENSHUU shite moratta dake    nan de
                                  practiced             merely  what
                                  _____
                                  tochi ttari      suru no wa   go-aikyou!
                                  on-the-way-here  doing   (T) (hon-)courtesy

crowd: [off]                      ______ ____
  She's cute, so we forgive       kawaii kara   yurushichau!
  her.                            because-cute  permission-given
                                  _____
  Waaah!                          wa--_

8
Shuu:                             ___
  I also went through that        ore mo   sono MOU       TOKKUN        ni
  grueling crash-course           I   too  that wildness  crash-course (IO)
  training, didn't get much
  sleep, and practiced on the     tsukiaimashite  amari NEtenai  mon de
  way here too, so out of         doing-together  not-much-sleep
  consideration for my            _____
  cuteness, I need your           tochi ttari      shite mo
  forgiveness!                    on-the-way-here  doing too
                                  _____
                                  kawai-sa  ni menjite
                                  out-of-consideration-for-my-cuteness

                                  YURUshite            hoshii!
                                  permitting/granting  in-need-of

crowd:                            ______
  Wah ha ha.                      wahaha

  We don't forgive men!!          OTOKO wa yuru-san   zo--_!!
                                  man  (T) permission-not-granted

drum FX?:                         ___
                        do_

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p 221 (199)

1
[Madoka gives us a wink and a thumbs-up.]

2
[Kyousuke smiles.]
narration:
  Wh-what's this?!                na nan da!

  That's what it was?!?           so-- yu-- koto      datta no kaa
                                  that-kind-of-thing  was      (?)

3
[Shot of part of the audience.]

4
[Kyousuke glares, his eyes flashing.]
narration:
  But...                          demo---

Shuu: [off]                                 _______   _____
  For our second song!            de    wa  sekando / songu!
                                  being (T) second-song

5
[Shuu looks over to Madoka as the band begins to play.]
narration:
  ...that familiar way they       ano SHITAshige na  YOUSU    wa----
  behaved...                      that-familiar      behavior (T)

6
narration:
  What in the world sort of       AYUKAWA to wa   ittai         do-- yu--
  relationship might he have      w/Ayukawa  (T)  in-the-world  what-kind-of
  with Ayukawa?!
                                  KANKEI        nan darou?!
                                  relationship  what-poss.-be

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