Kimagure Orange Road
"The Thrilling Amusement Park!"
Volume 3, Story 8
WB Volume 2, Story 9
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation by Craig H. Nishida
Compilation by Spencer C. Hastings
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Spencer Hastings
Peter Norby
Last revision : 9-19-94
NOTE: [WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()]
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga. So there may be a few
extra's to those of you not having them.
Example: (The subtitles on page 179 (157) are only in the WB'S!)
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p 179 (157)--TITLE PAGE
[Full-panel pic of Madoka sitting on the ground in warmup outfit & shorts.]
MAIN TITLE (at top) ________
The Thrilling Amusement Park! dokidoki YUUENCHI!
beating-of-heart amusement-park
(thrilling)
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
Stopped by the Stitching HIKARI to KAGE ni
of Light and Shadow. light and/with shadow in/at/by
nui tomerarete
sewing/embroidery being-able-to-stop
A Summer's Day on Which utsumaki kagen no NATSU no HI wa
You Hang Your Head, <*> summer's-day (T)
Deliberately Behaving
with Cheerfulness. waza-to YOUKI ni furumau no
on-purpose in-cheerfulness to-behave
<* utsumaku = to lie face-down, upside-down, prone, hang your head...
kagen = mood, atmosphere, environment>
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p 180 (158)
1
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]
Master: [off]
A lunchstand at the YUUENCHI ni DEMISE o?!
amusement park?! at-amusement-park branch-store (O)
2
Master:
Hmm... soo
3
[Shot of Kyousuke, looking on wide-eyed.]
Master: [off] ___________
There's been talk of running hamba--ga-- nan-ka no
a hamburger-type fast-food hamburger somewhat 's
stand inside the amusement _________ ______
park. fua--suto + fu--do o Uru MISE o
fast-food (O) booth/stand (O)
YUUENCHI-NAI de yaranai ka tte
w/in-an-amusement-park doing
HANASHI ga atte ne
story (S) existing
It turns out that I'll #1# HI dake AYUKAWA-kun ni itte morau
need to send you, but 1-day-only (IO) go-(favor)
just for a day.
koto ni natta n da
became-decided (explan)
4
[Shot of Madoka sitting at the counter in ABCB apron, likewise looking on
wide-eyed.]
Master: [off]
But... tokoro-ga
5
[Kyousuke sits at the counter about 2 stools away from Madoka. Master is
behind the counter.]
Master: [leaning and stage-whispering to Kyousuke]
...she's complaining that KYOUSUKE-kun to ISSHO ja nakya
she won't go without you, if-not-be-together-with-Kyousuke
Kyousuke-kun. ____
iya datte dada o konete-ru
even-if-unpleasant be-throwing-a-tantrum
Kyousuke: [turning head to look wide-eyed at Madoka]
Eh?! e?!
[Madoka is likewise surprised.]
6
Madoka: ________
Master!! I said no such masuta--_!! atashi sonna koto
thing! Master ! I that-kind-of-thing
ittemasen yo_
not-say !
narration:
These days continue to be TANOshii MAINICHI ga
cheerful ones... pleasant/cheerful every-day (S)
tsuzuite imasu----
are-continuing
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p 181 (159)
1
Master: [smiling]
Anyway, joking aside... ma-- sore wa jo--dan to shite......
oh that(one) joking
Kyousuke: [blushing]
(It's a joke?) (nan da jo--dan ka)
2
Madoka:
...And we've had you work KASUGA-kun dattara
here before... when-be
_____
koko de baito yatte-moratta
did-work-here
koto mo aru shi......
thing too there-is and-besides
3
Madoka:
...and as for me... atashi to shite mo...
as-for-me too
4
[Kyousuke facial portrait--the idea appeals to him...]
5
Kyousuke: [standing]
Okay, I'll help! ii yo TETSUDAu yo_!
OK help/take-part-in !
6
[Kyousuke walks away, looking back at Madoka.]
Madoka:
Then, I'll see you ja ashita YUUENCHI de ne!
tomorrow at the amusement well tomorrow at-amusement-park
park!
narration:
I've got to admit, a summer nante ttatte
vacation with Ayukawa is what! even-though-saying
just the thing!
AYUKAWA to ISSHO no NATSUYASUmi
together-w/Ayukawa 's summer-vacation
da mon!
be thing
7
[Madoka smiles and gazes at Kyousuke as he leaves.]
door FX: _____
karan
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p 182 (160)
1
[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment complex.]
2
[Kyousuke starts to enter his apartment, but Hikaru comes up from the side.]
Hikaru:
Sempai... SEMPAI......
3
[Full-portrait of Hikaru standing in the hall.]
4
Kyousuke:
Hikaru-chan! hikaru-chan!
5
Hikaru: [looking quiet and a bit sad]
Sempai, there's something atashi SEMPAI ni kiki-tai
I wanted to ask you about... I (IO) want-to-ask
koto ga aru n desu...
there-is-something (explan)
6
Kyousuke:
Eh?! e?!
narration:
Somehow, this was a nan-da-ka
different Hikaru-chan... somehow
itsu-mo-no hikaru-chan to chigau na----
different-from-the-usual-Hikaru
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p 183 (161)
1
Hikaru: [glaring]
Is there someone new that DARE-ka hoka ni SUki na HITO
you like? someone-else fond-of person
demo dekita
or-something was-capable-of-doing
n desu ka?
(explan) (query)
2
[Kyousuke goes into cardiac arrest.]
Kyousuke FX: _______
zuga--n
3
Kyousuke:
Wha... Wha...! Wha...!! na...... na......! na......!!
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ ____ ____ ____
doki doki doki doki
4
Kyousuke: [sweating]
What are you talking about!! nani o yu-- n dai!!
what (O) to-say (explan)
Hikaru:
Because...! dattee~~~~
5
Hikaru: [leaping into him, arms about his neck]
We haven't seen each other koko FUTSUKA ICHIDO
in the past two days, and these-past-2-days on-one-occasion/once
still, you haven't even
phoned me. mo Attenai noni SEMPAI DENWA mo
too not-meet although phone-too
kurenai shi
not-give and-besides
And on top of that, _three_ MIKKA mae ni Atta TOKI mo
_days_ ago, I only got to on-3-days-before met occasion-even
spend a single hour with
you! tatta no #1# JIKAN ja nai desu ka !!
a-mere 1-hour be-not (?)!!
Kyousuke:
EH?! e?!
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p 184 (162)
1
Kyousuke:
O-oh, is thaaat all?! na naa--n da sonna koto ka!
Again, I was with Ayu... what be that-kind-of-thing
___
ore wa mata AYU...
I (T) again
Hikaru:
?! ?!
2
Kyousuke:
Uh, nothing... a iya...
3
Kyousuke:
Th-that's right. Next so so-- da KONDO doko-ka
time, let's go somewhere that's-right next-time somewhere
and have fun!
ASObi ni iko-- yo!
at-play/recreation let's-go (emph)
4
Hikaru:
HUH? e
Kyousuke:
Where shall we go? doko iko-- ka?
where shall-go
Let's spend a full day #1# HI tappuri JIKAN o kakete
together! 1-full-day (O) spending
tsukiau yo!
to-do-together
___
If I'm with you, anywhere hikaru-chan to dattara ore doko
is fun!! if-I-am-with-Hikaru where
ittatte TANOshii kara!!
even-though-going fun that's-why
5
[Hikaru lets that sink in.]
6
Hikaru FX: _____
niko_
Hikaru:
Well, let's see then...! e--to ja ne--_
well/let's-see then
7
Hikaru:
Let's go to the amusement ashita YUUENCHI ni ikimashou!!
park tomorrow!! tomorrow to-amusement-park let's-go !!
Kyousuke:
Yeah, fine! un ii yo_!!
8
narration:
Amusement park...?! YUUENCHI----?!
Madoka: [flashback]
Then, I'll see you tomorrow ja ashita YUUENCHI de ne!
at the amusement park!
Kyousuke:
Ah! ha_
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p 185 (163)
1
Kyousuke:
T-tomorrow... a ashita wa......
And there... shikamo soko wa...
furthermore there
Wait now... chotto mazu...
2
Hikaru:
I'm so happy. Actually, ureshi-- na--
I've been wanting to go
to an amusement park jitsu wa zu--tto mae kara
for a long time now. actually the-whole-time since-before
YUUENCHI ikitai
want-to-go-to-amusement-park
tte OMOtte-ta n desu!
was-thinking-that (explan)
3
[Hikaru clings to his arm in happiness.]
narration:
...On one hand, she's so ---- konna ni yorokonde kurete-ru
happy, I can't tell her to-this-extent am-becoming-glad-about
no, but on the other hand, ____
it's already too late to noni dame da nan-te ienai shi
take back my promise to although be-no-good-or-such not-say and
Ayukawa!
ka to itte AYUKAWA to no
but-on-the-other-hand w/Ayukawa 's
YAKUSOKU mo IMAsara
promise too at-this-late-hour
KOTOWArenai!
not-declining/not-giving-notice
4
narration:
Well, all right, then. ma ii ka
___
I have the Power in me!! ore ni wa _CHIKARA_ ga
in-me (T) (kanji = NOURYOKU) (S)
Power ability
aru n da!!
have/exists (explan)
Kyousuke:
(And besides, an amusement (YUUENCHI to ittatte
park is such a large place, amusement-park even-though-saying-that
that they won't cross
paths.) HIROi toko da shi
is-a-spacious-place and-besides
Au koto mo nai darou)
to-meet matter-even not-be-possible
5
[Shot of the entrance to the amusement park.]
Big sign:
Toshima En TOSHIMA EN
mature-woman/ garden/yard/farm
middle-aged-woman
sign at left:
Ticket Office NYUUKOKU -BA
1000 yen entering-a-country place/spot
500 yen
1000 -EN 500 -EN
<2nd sign at left is unreadable by me>
sign at gate:
Entrance IRIKUCHI
<2 unreadable kanji> KUCHI
message sign at right:
You visited the entire place NYUUKOKU to subete no MAIta ga.
with admission, but how often w/admission total/entire 's visited <*>
does it take to get used to
visiting? nan KAI demo
how-often/how-many-times or-such
o-MAIri ni naremasu
visit-shrine (IO) get-used-to/skilled-at
<*Could be a "ka" with a smudge... And there is a period after it...>
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p 186 (164)
1
[Shot of several of the rides at the amusement park.]
narration:
While secretly dating kakushite hikaru-chan to
Hikaru-chan, I'm also... hiding/concealing w/Hikaru
______
de--to shinagara DOUJI ni----
while-dating coincident-with
narration:
...selling hamburgers ONNAji YUUENCHI-NAI de AYUKAWA to
with Ayukawa in the same same w/in-an-amusement-park w/Ayukawa
amusement park. ___________
hamba--ga-- o Uru to yu--
hamburgers (O) sell to-say-that
______ __________
In other words, I began ha--do sukeju--ru ga hajimatta!
a tough schedule! hard schedule (S) began
2
[Exterior shot of the deserted concession stand.]
3
[Madoka is inside the stand, working the grill. Kyousuke takes orders
outside.]
Kyousuke: ___________ ______
Two hamburgers, two cokes. hamba--ga-- futatsu ni ko--ra futatsu
2-hamburgers 2-colas
Madoka: [smiling]
Hey, you're pretty good. umai ja nai sono CHOUSHI yo!
Way to go! good isn't that way-of-doing/
spirit/rhythm
4
[Kyousuke nervously glances at the clock.]
narration:
It's almost time! sorosoro JIKAN da!
soon point-in-time be
Kyousuke FX: ______
chira_
5
Madoka:
Why are you so nervous? nani sowasowa shite n no?
what becoming-nervous/restless
Kyousuke: _____
O-one moment. I need to chi chotto toire
use the restroom. toilet
6
Kyousuke FX: [searching]
kyorokyoro
goggle-one's-eyes
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p 187 (165)
1
[He sees the Ferris wheel.]
narration:
That'll do fine! are ga i-- ya!
that(one) (S) fine
2
Kyousuke: [running towards the Ferris wheel car]
Wait! Let me on, please! chotto NOsete!
letting-one-take-part-in
Ticket attendant: _____
Uh, sir. Your ticket? a o-KYAKU-san kippu
oh (hon-)customer(-hon) ticket
3
[Kyousuke returns to the ticket booth, embarrassed.]
Kyousuke:
One junior high student. CHUUGAKUSEI hitori
jr-high-school-pupil one
Oh, do you sell books of a KAISUUKEN arimasu ka?
tickets? oh ticket-book have (query)
Ticket attendant:
What?! he_?!
4
[Long-range view of the Ferris wheel. Kyousuke is at the top.]
narration:
All right. Right about yo--shi kono hen de...!
now...! all-right in-this-vicinity
5
Kyousuke teleport FX: ____
shu_
6
[Hikaru waits at the amusement park entrance.]
sign: ___ ______
Entrance... iru... pu--ru...
Pool... go-in/come-in pool
7
[Kyousuke walks up.]
sign: ______
Free... furi--
Hikaru:
Sempaaai! sempa--i_
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p 188 (166)
1
[Tilted view of Hikaru and Kyousuke walking inside the park. Kyousuke
points to the roller coaster.]
2
[They ride in the front car of the roller coaster. Hikaru clenches her eyes
shut.]
roller coaster FX: _____
go--_
3
Kyousuke FX: ______
chira_
4
narration:
Now's the time... IMA no uchi ni----
now 's time to
5
narration:
...to go to Ayukawa! AYUKAWA no tokoro e!
to-Ayukawa's-place
Kyousuke:
(I'll be right back, (sugu modotte kuru kara ne hikaru-chan!)
Hikaru-chan!) right-away-returning
6
Kyousuke FX: ____
shu_
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p 189 (167)
1
[Kyousuke reappears in the Ferris wheel car.]
Kyousuke FX: ____
shu_
2
[He steps off the Ferris wheel.]
Kyousuke FX: ___
ton
3
Kyousuke:
I feel sick! a-- KImochi warukatta!
oh feeling was-bad
___ _____ __________
I'm no good with roller ore jetto + ko--suta-- nigate
coasters...! I roller-coaster bad-at
nan da yo na----_
what-be (confirm)!
4
Ticket attendant: _____ ___________
(Roller coasters...?!) (jetto + ko--suta---_?!)
5
[Exterior shot of the concession stand.]
Madoka: [off]
That's not right! hetta kuso da na--_!
no-good/unskilled shit be
6
Kyousuke: [working the grill]
Eh?! e?!
grilling FX: _____
ju--_
7
Madoka:
That hand technique is for sono TEtsuki ja
preparing crepes! that-way-of-using-hand being (T)
oKONOmiYAki tte kanji ne!
crepe-type-dish impression
___________ ___________
These are hamburgers. kore wa hamba--ga-- yo hamba--ga--!!
Hamburgers!! these (T) hamburgers hamburgers
Kyousuke:
...oh. ......haa
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p 190 (168)
1
[She grasps his hand...]
Madoka:
Okay... Do it this way. ii...... ko-- yaru no yo
fine this-way to-do
2
[...and comes oh-so-close-up behind him...]
3
[Tight shot of their upper torsos as she presses up against his back.]
4
[Kyousuke looks back and catches an eyeful of her cleavage.]
Kyousuke FX: _____
doki_
5
[He blushes a deep, well, grey... When are they gonna colorize these things,
anyway! ^_^]
narration:
O-oh no!! I have to be i ikenai!! mo-- ikanakutcha!
going soon! unacceptable soon (= ikanakutte wa)
not-going
Madoka:
See, hold it more firmly! hora motto shikkari motte!
look! more firmly holding
crows-in-background FX: ______
kaa--_
6
Kyousuke: [jumping away from her] ______
Th-that's right. There's so so-- da so--su ga TArinakatta
not enough sauce, right? that's-right sauce (S) wasn't-enough
n da kke!
(explan)
7
Kyousuke: [leaving, looking back over his shoulder]
One moment. I'll see if chotto CHIKAku no o-MISE de
the next stand will let nearby 's (hon.-)stand at
us have some.
wakete-moratte-kuru yo
begin-sharing-(receive-favor)
Madoka:
Ah, Kasuga-kun! a KASUGA-kun!
8
[Madoka lets out a sad sigh.]
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p 191 (169)
1
[Kyousuke teleports onto the roller coaster tracks.]
Kyousuke teleport FX: ____
shu_
2
[Kyousuke portrait--his life flashes before him...]
3
[The roller coaster approaches him at high speed.]
Kyousuke:
Wah!! wa--_!!
4
roller coaster FX: _____
go--_
5
[Kyousuke lands in his seat.]
narration: ________
Timing was a bit off! chotto taimingu zure chimatta!
moment timing shifted-in-space/time
Kyousuke teleport FX: ____
shu_
6
Hikaru:
Oh! I was scared! a-- kowakatta!
safety bar FX: ____
shu_
safety bar FX: _____
goton
7
[They stand after exiting the ride.]
Hikaru:
I had my eyes closed the atashi zutto
whole time. I the-whole-time
ME tsubutte mashitaa
had-eyes-closed
narration:
Just in time! KIKI-IPPATSU!
critical-moment
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p 192 (170)
1
[Hikaru leaps into Kyousuke's arms. They stand next to a really funky-
looking graveyard. Must be "Obake-Land". ^_^]
2
[In the concession stand, Madoka reaches past Kyousuke for a bowl. Kyousuke
blushes at one of the benefits of working with a beautiful girl in tight
quarters...]
3
[Kyousuke zips off the Ferris wheel, past the watching ticket attendant.]
4
[He rushes back onto the Ferris wheel, again past the attendant.]
5
[Shot of a soft-drink vending machine.]
Hikaru: [off]
I'm getting hungry! onaka hetta naa~~_!
the-insides/stomach decreased
6
Kyousuke: [pointing]
W-well... Shall we go to ji ja... ano SHOKUDOU ni demo iko-- ka
that lunch counter? well to-that-dining-place let's-go
or-something
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p 193 (171)
1
Hikaru:
Someone was saying a sore yori sakki
little while back that than-that-one a-little-while-ago
there's a stand that ___________
serves tasty burgers! oishii hamba--ga-- -YA -san ga
tasty-hamburger-seller (hon.) (S)
DEte-ru tte
is-being-served(meals) (hearsay)
DARE-ka itte-mashita ne!
somebody was-saying
[Kyousuke is horror-struck.]
2
Hikaru:
Let's try there! itte-mimashou yo!
let's-try-and-see-by-going (emph)
3
narration:
A-anything but that...! so sore dake wa mazui----!
that(one) only (T) embarrassing/
awkward
4
[He sees the ventilation fan to the nearby concession stand.]
5
[He flashes with the Power.]
narration:
That's it!! so-- da_!!
6
[The fan starts blowing hard.]
fan FX: ______
buo~~n
7
Hikaru:
Ah! Smells good! a_ ii nioi!
oh! good smell
Kyousuke:
Doesn't it? deshou?
I'm sure that lunchstand ano SHOKUKOU no HOU ga oishi--
is better! that dining-place more-tasty
yo kitto!
surely
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p 194 (172)
1
Hikaru:
Is that so? so-- desu nee
Kyousuke:
Right! ne_
2
fan FX: _____ ___________
3
explosion FX: ____
bon_
4
[Kyousuke and Hikaru stare at the smoke billowing out from where the
spinning fan once was.]
smoke FX: ________
mokumoku
5
Hikaru: [walking off] ___________
Let's get some burgers, yappari hamba--ga-- ni shimasho
after all. after-all let's-do
Kyousuke:
.......... ..........
6
Hikaru:
O-oh, that stand there! a ano MISE da!
[Kyousuke slaps a hand to his face and thinks dark thoughts.]
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p 195 (173)
1
[Long-distance shot of the ABCB concession stand. Many customers surround
it.]
2
Hikaru:
It's pretty crowded. kekkou _KO_ndemasu ne
quite (*kanji = KON)
confound/confuse
<*odd use of this kanji. "kondemasu" (using another kanji not used here)
means "is-crowded" Is the phrase "It's pretty confused." a standard
phrase? Or is there a double-meaning here, that it's both pretty crowded
AND confused...>
Kyousuke: [pointing off]
Hey! Since it is, how ne_! dakara MUko-- no o-MISE e...
about that stand over for-that-reason to-opp.-dir.-booth
there...
3
Hikaru: [heading for the ABCB stand]
But everyone knows that demo oishi-- MISE hodo
longer lines mean better but delicious-booth to-that-extent
food.
RETSU ga dekiru tte yu-- shi
queue/line (S) be-done say-that and
Kyousuke:
Ah, H-Hikaru-chan. a hi hikaru-chan
4
Kyousuke: [retrieving and depositing Hikaru into a seat]
W-well, you sit and wait ji ja koko ni suwatte MAtte-te
here while I go buy them! well taking-a-seat-here be-waiting
___
ore KAtte-kuru kara!
I begin-buying that's-why
Hikaru FX: ___
ton
5
[He runs off to the lunchstand.]
narration:
S-somehow I've got to do na nan toka futari o Awasenai
something to stop them somehow 2-people (O) cannot-meet
from meeting!
yo--ni shinakerya!
so-that (= shinakereba)
if-not-do
6
[Inside the stand, Kyousuke searches... Madoka turns to look.]
Kyousuke: ___________ ___________
(Well, let's see... (e--_to hamba--ga-- hamba--ga--
Hamburgers, hamburgers.) well-let's-see... hamburgers
7
Madoka: [off]
KASUGA-KUN! KASUGA-kun!
Kyousuke:
Y-yes! ha hai!
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p 196 (174)
1
Madoka:
Where were you! The doko itte tanoyo--_
customers have formed a where going shall-ask-for
line and are waiting,
you know! o-KYAKU-san RETSU tsukutte
(hon)-customers-(hon) line-growing
MAtte-ru no yo!
be-waiting
Kyousuke:
R-right! "I'm back!" ha hai_ tadaima!
2
Kyousuke: [working the grill]
(What in the world am I (ittai nani o yatte
doing...) what-in-the-world (O) doing
___
n daro ore......)
(poss.-reason) I
grill FX: ____
ju--
3
Hikaru:
(Sempai's so late.) (SEMPAI OSOi naa)
late
4
Hikaru: [approaching the stand]
(I wonder if he's still in (mada KAenai no ka na)
line.) still not-buying I-wonder
5
grilling FX: ______
shu--_
6
[Surprise registers on Kyousuke's face.]
7
[He ducks out of view below the counter. Hikaru is outside looking about.]
narration:
Oh no! mazui_!
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p 197 (175)
1
Madoka:
What are you doing, nani yatte n no? KASUGA-kun
Kasuga-kun? what doing
[Hikaru is right up to the counter, but not looking inside, or she'd see
Madoka's back.]
2
[Close shot of Hikaru.]
3
[Tight shot of Kyousuke grabbing Madoka by the wrist.]
4
[He yanks her to the floor on top of him.]
5
[Closeup as she lands on him.]
6
[He flashes with the Power.]
7
[Shot of the gas used for the grill. In inset we see the valve being turned
telekinetically.]
valve FX: ____
kyu_
tank: _______ ____
L. P. G. Propane Gas #LPG# puropan gasu
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p 198 (176)
1
Kyousuke: [pointing under the grill]
Look at this. The flame hora HI ka KIete-ru yo
went out. look! flame be-extinguished
Madoka:
Ah, it's true! a HONTOU da!
2
Madoka: [examining it closely]
Strange, huh... hen nee......
[Kyousuke slips away.]
3
[Someone taps Hikaru on her shoulder.]
hand FX: ___ ___
ton ton
4
Kyousuke: [with burgers]
Okay. Here you go! hai omachidoo!
long-in-coming
Let's eat in the shade MUkou no KOkage de tabeyou ka
over there. in-opp.-dir.-tree-shade let's-eat (?)
5
narration:
And so, somehow, somehow... to yu-- wake de nan toka
for-that-reason somehow
nan toka
somehow
narration: ______
...this date ended without BUJI ni de--to mo owari----
incident... safely date too end
6
[Hikaru waves good-bye as she leaves. Kyousuke beams a smile.]
narration:
And it also looks as if do--yara hikaru-chan no KIGEN mo
Hikaru-chan's mood is it-looks-as-if Hikaru's-mood/humor too
cured!
naotta yo-- da!
set-to-rights/cured likelihood
7
Kyousuke: [sweating]
Oh no! Ayukawa... atto ikenai! AYUKAWA...
oh bad
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1
[Shot of Madoka, standing quiet and subdued inside the concession stand.
There are no customers about.]
2
Kyousuke:
S-sorry. do do--mo
narration:
I wonder if she happened hyotto shite hikaru-chan no koto
to notice Hikaru-chan?! happen-to-do
KI ga tsuita no ka na----?!
was-aware-of I-wonder
3
Madoka: [unemotionally]
It's obvious why the flame HI ga tsukanai no mo atarimae yo
won't light. The gas flame (S) not-using too obvious
valve is shut. ____
gasu sen shimatte n da mon
gas plug closing (reason-be)
Thanks to that I had a okage de o-KYAKU-san ni
terrible time because I thanks-to-(that) customers (IO)
couldn't serve any ___________
hamburgers to the hamba--ga-- DEsenakutte
customers. hamburgers could-not-be-served
TAIHEN datta no yo
difficult/serious was
4
Madoka: [with a glint of irritation]
And besides, what were you sore ni shite mo NANDO mo nukedashite
doing, sneaking out so for-all-that often slipping-out-of
often?
Where in the world were ittai doko itte-ta no yo!
you going?! where-in-the-world were-going
5
Madoka: [turning aside in displeasure]
Well, I realize we're at maa YUUENCHI da kara
an amusement park, and you well amusement-park that's-why
may want to play...
ASObi-tai no mo wakaru
wanting-to-play too to-realize
kedo sa--
however !!
______
You're such a little boy! mattaku bo--ya nan da kara_!
absolutely a-boy/baby that's-why
unsophisticated-youth
[Kyousuke clenches his eyes shut and sweats.]
narration:
S-saved! ta TASUkatta!
6
Madoka: [setting down a stack of dishes]
Here! These had better all hai! kore ZEMBU ARAttoku koto
be washed [by the time I get all-these (= ARAtte-oku) matter
back], since it's my turn will-wash-(for-future-
to play now! result)
KONDO wa atashi ga ASObi ni
this-time (T) I (S) at-play
itte kuru kara ne
begin-going since
stack of dishes FX: ___
don
7
[Exterior shot of concession stand. Madoka walks away, tossing her hair
back. Back at the concession, Kyousuke stands alone, chin in hands,
elbows on the counter, watching her walk away.]
narration:
Looks like I made her choppiri okorasechatta
a bit angry, but [all in a-little (= okorasete-shimatta)
all] it looks like it's displeased/made-angry-(regret)
all right!
mitai da kedo--
seems-like be however
maa yokatta yokatta!
well was-good
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