Kimagure Orange Road
"The Island of Forbidden Love"
Volume 3, Story 5
WB Volume 2, Story 6
Written and illustrated by Izumi Matsumoto

Translation by Craig H. Nishida
Compilation by Spencer C. Hastings
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
                                 Craig Nishida
                                 Spencer Hastings
                                 Andrew Wilson
                                 Station Zebra
Last revision : 8-08-94

NOTE: [WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()]
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga. So there may be a few
extra's to those of you not having them.
Example: (The subtitles on page 115 (93) are only in the WB'S!)
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p 114 (92)

Title at top margin:
  The Island of Forbidden Love    KINjirareta    KOI   no  SHIMA
                                  was-forbidden  love  's  island

1
[panoramic view of a deserted and idyllic beach]
Kyousuke: [off]
  Ouch!                           achi_!
                                  hot !!

2
[Kyousuke, lying on the sand, shades his eyes from the sun.]

3
Kyousuke: [sitting up]
  And it's so hot.                sore ni shite mo        ATSUI
                                  but/still/for-all-that  hot

narration:
  How long has it been?           are kara    NAN JIKAN       tatta-rou---?
                                  since-then  how-many-hours  have-elapsed

4
[Pov pulls way back and we see Madoka from behind, standing in shallow water,
 adjusting her bikini bottom--yi yi!]
Madoka:
  Hey, are you only going         nee  NEte bakkari  inai     de...
  to nap...?                      say  only-napping  not-be

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p 115 (93)--TITLE PAGE

1
[Full-panel full-portrait of Madoka standing in shallow water in bikini.]
Madoka:
  Let's swim!                     oyogo_!

MAIN TITLE (at top)
  The Island of Forbidden Love    KINjirareta  KOI  no  SHIMA

SUB-TITLE (at bottom)             ________
  The Key to the Heart Is         giragira      NATSU no TAIYOU ni
  Stolen in the Dazzle of         dazzle/glare  in-the-summer's-sun
  the Summer Sun.
                                  KOKORO          no  KAGI  o
                                  heart/feelings  's  key  (O)

                                  NUSUmarete
                                  being-stolen

  My Feelings Almost Laid         KIMOchi       mo   HADAKA      ni
  Bare...                         feeling/mood  too  naked-body (IO)

                                  sare        -sou de...
                                  be-removed   looking-as-if

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p 116 (94)

1
Kyousuke: [blushing]              _____
  Ha ha!  Okay!                   haha_  so-- da ne!

2
[Madoka sits next to him on the sand.]
narration:
  Definitely...                   TASHIka ni---
                                  surely/definitely

3
[Madoka stares off into the sea.]
narration:
  ...if I came this far,          koko made  kurya       OYOgu    shika
  there's nothing else to         to-here    (= kureba)  to-swim  only
  do but swim...                                if-come

                                  yaru koto nai                yo na---
                                  not-give-thing-(to-someone)

Kyousuke:
                           fua_

4
[aerial view of the island]
narration
  ...here on this                 _KOKO_ (kanji = MUJIN) TOU   ja---
  uninhabited island...            here           uninhabited-island

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p 117 (95)

[This and the following 2 pages are black-bordered, denoting a flashback.]

1
[We get Hikaru's pov as Madoka, Kyousuke and Yuusaku stare back at us...]
narration:
  Hikaru-chan was the one         i--dashippe  wa  hikaru-chan datta!
  to suggest it!                  suggesting  (T)              was

Madoka/Kyousuke/Yuusaku:
  A race?!                        kyousou_?!

2
Hikaru: [smiling]
  Yeah!                           sou!
                                  like-that

3
[A view across the waves with Hikaru's arm pointing.]
Hikaru:
  Let's split into 2 groups       ano OKI no MUJINTOU
  and row over to that            that-offshore's-uninhabited-island
  uninhabited island.
                                  made       #2# -GUMI ni wakarete
                                  as-far-as  dividing-into-2-groups
                                  ______
                                  bo--to de  Itte   mimasen ka
                                  in-boats   going  visit   (?)

4
Yuusaku:
 (Good time to show off in        (hikaru-chan ni  i--  toko      miserareru
  front of Hikaru-chan.)                      (IO) good occasion  be-showing

                                  ka mo shirenai na)
                                  it-may-be-so/it-is-possible

Kyousuke:
 (What if the boat flips          (do--   shou
  over...)                         how    be-known-as
                                  ______
                                  bo--to hikkurikaettara....)
                                  if-boat-is-overturned

Madoka:
  Sounds interesting.             omoshiro     so--     ne
                                  interesting  seem-like

5
Hikaru: [grabbing onto Kyousuke's arm]                       _______
  It's settled!  Then I'll        KImatta!  ja    atashi wa  da--rin to
  team up with Darling.           settled   then  I     (T)  w/Darling

                                  KUMUnde
                                  joining-with

6
[Kyousuke looks over at Madoka  and Yuusaku ]
Kyousuke:                         ___
  Ah!                             ha_

7
Kyousuke:
  S-say.  Why don't we draw       ne nee   sore  kujibiki de
  lots?                                    that  by-drawing-lots

                                  KImenai?
                                  not-decide

[Hikaru frowns.]

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p 118 (96)

1
[Aerial view looking down on 2 rowboats in the open sea...]
narration:
  The outcome of that was...      kujibiki      no  KEKKA----
                                  drawing-lots  's  outcome

2
[A closeup of one boat...]
narration:
  ...Ayukawa with me...           ore wa  AYUKAWA to----
                                  I  (T)  w/Ayukawa

Madoka: [holding up a sack as Kyousuke mans the oars]
  What's this bag?                naani?  kono FUKURO?
                                  what    this-bag/sack

3
Madoka:
  Emergency kit?!                 kyu--me--yo--gu?!

Kyousuke:                                        ___
 'Cause I can't swim...           datte          ore  OYOgenai  kara...
                                  the-reason-is  I    not-swim  that's-why

4
[...and a closeup of the other boat.]
narration:
  ...and Yuusaku paired with      soshite hikaru-chan wa  YUUSAKU to
  Hikaru-chan.                    and                (T)  w/Yuusaku
                                  ___
                                  pea ni nari
                                  pair

Hikaru: [shouting, with stern look]
  Hey!  C'mon, go faster!         hora   motto hayaku  koi de!
                                  look!  faster        come!

  If you get water on me,         MIZU kaketara      sho--chi shinai
  I won't forgive you!            if-sprinkle-water  won't-forgive-you

                                  kara         ne!
                                  that's-why  (confirm.)

Yuusaku: [shouting]
  R-right!                        ha hai_!

5
Yuusaku: [glancing to his right]
 (Just watch!  I'm going to       (mitero!  hikaru-chan no MAE de
  make him look real bad in        watch!   in-Hikaru's-presence
  front of Hikaru-chan.)                                  ____
                                  aitsu     ni   OUINI    hazu
                                  that-guy (IO)  greatly  should

                                  kakesete-yaru)
                                  causing-to-fail(-strong-will)

Yuusaku FX:                       _____
  <(sinister) smile!>             niko_

6
Kyousuke: [glancing to his left]
 (No way am I losing to a         (nanno!       ICHINENSEI nanka ni
  first-year student!)             not-at-all!  by-a-1st-year-student

                                  MAkete         -tamaru      ka)
                                  being-defeated-(receiving)  (?)

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
  <(sinister) smile!>             niko_

7
Kyousuke & Yuusaku:
  Arg...!                         uo---_!

rowing FX:                        ____ ____
                  zabu zabu

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p 119 (97)

1
[Facial portrait of Madoka looking off to the side.]
narration:                                                    ______
  Out there, our boat fell        tokoro ga ore to AYUKAWA no bo--to  wa
  into the grip of a powerful     place (S) I-and-Ayukawa's-boat     (T)
  current.
                                  HAYAi  SHIO  no  NAGAre ni
                                  fast   tide  's  flow   in

                                  notte                 -shimai
                                  falling-into-(a-trap)  completed

Madoka:
  We're rapidly heading out       dondon   OKI ni  NAGAsarete-ru  wa
  to sea.                         rapidly  to-the-open-sea
                                                   be-carried-away

2
[Kyousuke & Madoka look across the waters at a shrinking Yuusaku & Hikaru.]
narration:
  Our two boats became            hikaru-chan-tachi to  wa  KAIJOU de
  separated...                    from-them            (T)  overseas

                                  hanarebanare ni  natchatte---
                                  separated        (natte-shimatte)
                                                    completely-becoming

Hikaru: [waving arms]
  Sempaaai!  Madoka-saaan!        sempa--i  madoka-sa--n

3
Madoka: [leaning and pointing]
  Oh well, let's head for         toriaezu     ano SHIMA e!
  that island!                    immediately  to-that-island!

4
Kyousuke: [paddling like crazy]
  N-no good.  The current         da dame da     NAGAre ga   hayaku tte
  is too strong!                     be-no-good  flow   (S)  fast   (T)
                                  ______
  The boat won't do what I        bo--to  ga  yu-- koto kikanai       ya!
  tell it to do!                  boat   (S)  disobedient/unyielding

rowing FX:                        ______
                         zabua_

5
[Kyousuke's body flashes with the Power...]
narration:
  Shit!  The secret isn't         kuso--_  INOCHI ni wa  kaerarenai_!!
  worth the cost of our           shit  !  living   (T)  not-be-returning
  lives!!

6
[...which energizes his arms.]

7
Madoka: [falling back as the boat accelerates]
  Kya!                            kya_!

boat/rowing FX:                   _____  ______
      guton  zazaza

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p 120 (98)

1
[End of flashback.  Madoka and Kyousuke sit on the beach.]
narration:
  And that's why I'm all          to yu-- wake de  kono SHIMA de
  alone with Ayukawa on           for-that-reason  on-this-island
  this island!
                                  AYUKAWA to  futari kkiri!
                                  w/Ayukawa   just-2-people

Madoka:
  But I'm worried about them...   shikashi hikaru-tachi SHIMPAI da na--
                                  but      them         worry   be

2
Kyousuke:
  They'll be all right.           daijo--bu  da yo
                                  all-right  be

  Surely by now they've           kitto   IMA-goro   HAMA ni
  returned to the beach!!         surely  about-now  to-beach

                                  hikikaeshite-ru                sa
                                  be-returning-to-where-started (strong-emph)

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                          niko_

3
Madoka:
  ...I suppose.                   ....  soo ne

4
Kyousuke: [getting up]
  Well, let's go swimming.        saate  OYOgo--     ka na
                                  well   let's-swim  I-wonder

narration:                              ______
  Well...  Besides, we also       maa   bo--to mo    aru   koto   da  shi
  have the boat, and the sun      well  boat   also  have  thing  be  besides
  is still high...
                                  HI   mo   mada  TAKAi  shi--
                                  sun  too  yet   high   and besides...

5
Madoka: [standing]
  Hey, aren't you afraid of       ara  MIZU   kowai   n ja nakatta  no?
  the water?                      hey  water  afraid       there-wasn't

6
[Madoka gives Kyousuke a faceful.]
water FX:                         _____
                          basha

7
Madoka: [running off]
  C'mon!  I'll give you           irasshai  OYOgi  OSHIetageru
  swimming lessons!               come!     swim   (= OSHIete-ageru)
                                                      give-lessons-to-you

                                  kara_
                                  that's-why

Madoka FX:                        _____
                          basha

Kyousuke: [chasing after her]
  Sure!                           yattara!

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p 121 (99)

1
[A tilted view of the beach.]
narration:
  No one else on this white       DARE-mo -inai   matsu
  sand and blue water...          there's-nobody  to-wait-for

                                  SHIROna KAIGAN  to   AOi UMI---
                                  white-beach     and  blue-sea

2-3
[Split panel of Madoka and Kyousuke at play.]
narration:                                      ___
  There's only Ayukawa and        iru no   wa   ore to AYUKAWA  dake
  me.                             existing (T)  me-and-Ayukawa  only

4
[They splash in the water.]
narration:
  The two of us alone on          futari kkiri no
  an island paradise.             just-2-people's
                                   _________
                                  _paradaisu_ (kanji = MUJINTOU)
                                   paradise            uninhabited-island

narration:
  Somehow, this seems just        nan-da-ka  -IZEN    EIGA   da
  like the movie...               somehow    earlier  movie  be

                                  mitai    to    aru       na----
                                  be-like  with  there-is  (confirm.)



5
[Full-profile of Madoka in bikini.]
narration:
  ...where a boy and a girl       MUJINTOU de         ko--       yatte
  lived alone together on         on-deserted-island  like-this  doing
  a deserted island just
  like this!                      WAKAi  DANJO        ga  futari kkiri de
                                  young  man-&-woman (S)  w/just-2-people

                                  Ikite-yuku    HANASHI!
                                  go-on-living  story

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p 122 (100)

1
[Picturesque view of the calm sea, fluffy clouds and setting sun.]
narration:
  Well, if we don't return        sate  sorosoro  KAEra-nakya----
  soon...                         well  soon      (= KAEra-nakereba)
                                                     if-not-returning

Kyousuke: [off]
  Huh?!                           are_?!

2
Madoka:
  What is it?                     naani?

3
Kyousuke:                         ______
  The boat is...  Gone.           bo--to ga ...nai
                                  boat  (S)    not-there

Madoka:
  What!                           e_

4
Kyousuke: [standing near water's edge]
  T-that's strange.  I'm sure     o okashi--na  tashika ni  kono HEN ni
  it was right here.                strange     if-I-remember-correctly
                                                            at-this-place

5
Kyousuke:
  AH!                             a

6
Kyousuke:                                    ___  ______
  I forgot to tie up the boat.    ano TOKI   ore  bo--to  tsunagu no
                                  that-time  I    boat    tethering

                                  WASUreta  n da
                                  forgot    (explan)

narration:                        ______
  Because I used up too much      bo--to kogu noni          CHIKARA o
  Power to move the boat, I       in-order-to-row-the-boat  Power  (O)
  was barely conscious when
  we arrived here...              TSUKAi-sugite   SHIMA ni
                                  using-too-much  to-island

                                  tsuita TOKI  wa   ISHIKI         ga
                                  when-arrived (T)  consciousness  (S)

                                  mo--ro-- to    shite-ta   kara na--
                                  with-dim/hazy  was-doing  that's-why

7
Madoka:
  You didn't...                   ......  akireta
                                          exasperated

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p 123 (101)

1
[Shot of waves lapping at the sand.]
Madoka: [off]
  What are we going to do?        do--sun no yo  KAErenai       ja nai!
  We can't go back!               what-do        not-returning

2
Kyousuke:
 (An island like this             (konna SHIMA ja       MIZU ya KUiMONO
  probably doesn't have            this-kind-of-island  water-and-food
  food or water.
                                  nante  nai  daro--       na)
                                  etc.   not  possibly-be  (confirm.)
                                                         _________
  Oh god, this is turning         (korya      HONTOU no  sebaibaru ni
  into one of those survival       goodness!  really     into-survival-(test)
  tests!!)
                                  natte-kita          zo)
                                  began-turning-into  !!

3
[Madoka stands silent.]

4
Kyousuke: [slightly worried]
  Uh, well, by tomorrow a         demo...  maa    ashita ni nareba
  ship or something might         but...   well   if-by-tomorrow
  pass nearby...
                                  CHIKAku ni  FUNE demo          tooru
                                  nearby      ship-or-something  pass-by

                                  daro--       shi
                                  possibly-be  and-besides

5
Madoka: [exploding]
  Get real!  Are you saying       jo--dan ja nai  wa   ja  KON'YA   wa
  it'll be okay to spend the      it's-not-a-joke          tonight (T)
  night here?!
                                  ii de  akasu         tte  no
                                  okay   spend-a-night      (confirm.)

  Hikaru and Yuusaku would        hikaru-tachi datte  SHIMPAI suru yo
  be worried!                     they         even   be-worried

6
[Kyousuke stands perplexed at her outburst.]

7
Madoka: [sternly]
  Anyway...                       tonikaku.....
                                  at-any-rate

8
Madoka:
  We have to get back             nan-toka                   KAEra-nakya
  somehow.                        managing-somehow-or-other  if-not-return-
                                                                       home

[Madoka spins about and heads off down the beach.]

  I'll start looking over         atashi  MUkou no HOU        mite-kuru!
  this way!                       I       opposite-direction  begin-looking

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p 124 (102)

1
Kyousuke:
  Oh!  That way's rocky--         a    sotchi   wa   IWA BA de      abuna...
  it's dange...                   ah!  that-way (T)  on-rock-place  dange...

2
[He watches her retreating backside.]

3
narration:
  Ayukawa...                      AYUKAWA----

Kyousuke:                          ___
 (It's _my_ responsibility...!)   (ore no  sekinin         da .....!)
                                   my      responsibility  be

4
[Kyousuke looks off across the waters.]

5
narration:
  All right, it's do-or-die       yoshi!     ichikabachika  HAMA-made
  time.  If I can just make       all-right  sink-or-swim   as-far-as-beach
  it to the beach...
                                  tadoritsukereba--
                                  if-find-one's-way-to-(beach)-at-last

Kyousuke teleport FX:             ____
                          shu_

6
[A spectacular splash.]
re-entry FX:                      _______
                      dobu~~n

7
Kyousuke:
  Phew.                           puu

surfacing FX:                     ______
                        zabua_

narration:                                         ______
  I-it's hopeless...  I used      da dame da----   bo--to o   koi da
  up an awful lot of my              is-useless    boat  (O)  come
  Power getting here on the
  boat.  I can't teleport as      TOKI ni  KANZEN ni   CHIKARA o
  far as the beach!               in-time  thoroughly  Power  (O)

                                  SHOUMOU shite-ite  totemo
                                  being-used-up      awfully

                                  asoko-made            tobenai
                                  as-far-as-that-place  not-leap/fly

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p 125 (103)

1
[Someone walks on the sand.]
footstep FX:                      ___
                           za_

2
[It's Kyousuke.  On the sand he spies the sack Madoka held up on the boat.]

3
Kyousuke: [flash thoughts!]
  T-that's right.  This!          so so-- da       kore da_!
                                     that's-right  this-is

  We have this!!                  kore ga   atta     n da!!
                                  this (S)  existed  (explan)

4
[Meanwhile, Madoka climbs a vertical rockface over the pounding surf.]
wave FX:                          ______
                          zabua_

5
Madoka:
 (Perhaps there's a house on      (moshi-ka-shitara SHIMA no mukou gawa ni
  the other side of the            perhaps          on-island's-opp-backside
  island.  Maybe we could
  borrow their boat...)           JINKA ga  aru    ka mo shirenai
                                  house (S) exist  it's-possible
                                              ______
                                  soshi-tara  bo--to ga  karireru...)
                                  if-accomplish-my-purpose
                                              boat   (S) be-borrowed

6
[The rock on which her right foot rests breaks off...]
rock FX:                          _____
                        gara_

7
[...and she falls...]
Madoka:
  AH!!                            a

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p 126 (104)

1
[Kyousuke, gathering firewood, turns at the sound of her scream.]
Madoka: [off]
  Kyaa!                           kya--_

2
Madoka grasp FX:                  ___
                           ga_

3
[Madoka clings to the cliff by her left hand.]
rocks FX:                         _______ _______
                  dobu--n dobu--n

4
Kyousuke: [dropping the wood and running]
  !                               !

5
Madoka: [eyes closed; a flash thought!]
  K-Kasuga-kun...!!               ka KASUGA-kun...!!

6
breaking rock FX:                 _____
                          boko_

7
[Madoka plunges past a climbing Kyousuke.]
Madoka:
  Kya!                            kya_

Kyousuke:
  Ayukawa!!                       AYUKAWA_!!

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p 127 (105)

1
[With a burst of Power, Kyousuke dives off the cliff face after her...]
Kyosuke FX:                       ___
                           da_

2
[...catching her in mid-plunge.  They plummet head-first.]

3
[Kyousuke sees that their heads are about to become intimate with Mr.
 Jutting Rock.]
narration:
  W-we're going to hit!!          bu butsukaru_!!
                                     strike-(person)-on-head

4
narration:
  Please, even if it's only       tanomu!
  a little bit, let there be      to-ask-to-take-care-of
  some Power left!!
                                  hon-no SUKOshi           demo  ii
                                  only-a-little-something  even  okay

                                  CHIKARA yo NOKOtte-te   -kure_!!
                                  Power      is-remaining  favor-to-self

5
exploding rock FX:                _____
                          bako_

6
Kyousuke/Madoka FX:               _______ _______
                  dobu--n dobu--n

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p 128 (106)

1
[Later, they lie exhausted on the beach.]
gentle wave FX:                   ___
                            za_

2
[Madoka kneels beside him as he lies back on the sand.]
Madoka & Kyousuke:
                    ha_ ha_

Kyousuke:
  That was dangerous!             abunakatta     na!
                                  was-dangerous  (confirm.)

3
Madoka:
  W-why did you do such a         na nan-de  anna          mucha na koto
  crazy thing!                       why     that-kind-of  absurd   thing

                                  shita  no yo!
                                  did    (confirm./emph.)

4
Madoka:
  What if you were killed too!    anata made  SHIndara  dou   suru  no!
                                  you   even  if-die    what  to-do

5
Kyousuke:                         _____
                          niko_

6
Kyousuke: [glowing, looking heroic]      ___
  But I'm the man!                datte  ore  OTOKO  da mon!
                                  but    I    man    (is-the-reason)



narration:                                 ___
  Over here, if I don't           koko de  ore ga  AYUKAWA no koto
  protect you...                  at-here  I  (S)  you

                                  MAMOn-nakya-------
                                  (= MAMOn-nakereba)
                                     if-not-protect

7
[Madoka is momentarily speechless.]

8
Madoka: [humbly]
  ...thank you.                   ......  arigatou

narration:
  ...who else will?!              ittai         DARE ga  MAMOru   n da!
                                  in-the-world  who (S)  protect  (explan)

[The stars twinkle in the sky.]

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p 129 (107)

1
[Madoka looks down the beach and sees the fire that Kyousuke had been
 working on previously.]

2
[They walk over to it.]
Madoka:
  Oh!  A fire...                  are  kono  HI...
                                       this  fire

3
Kyousuke: [tossing her the sack]
  See this?!                      kore      sa
                                  this-one  (you-see!)

4
Madoka: [looking inside]                    ______
  It's the emergency kit I        kore...   bo--to de mita  KYUUMEIYOUGU!!
  saw in the boat!!               this-one  saw-in-boat     emergency-kit
                                             _______   _______
  There's medicine, a lighter,    KUSURI  /  raita-- / kanzume
  and even some canned food!      medicine   lighter   canned-food

                                  made  aru!
                                  even  there-is

5
Kyousuke:
  If we keep the fire going       ko-- yatte       HI    o
  we can keep warm, and           doing-like-this  fire (O)
  besides...
                                  tayasa-nakereba         DAN mo
                                  if-not-let-fire-go-out  warmth-too

                                  toreru      shi
                                  be-getting  and-besides

  ...it's only for a while.       toori   ga   kari no     FUNE ga
  A passing ship might see        as/like (S)  temporary   ship (S)
  us and come to help!
                                  KIzuite   TASUke ni kite kureru
                                  noticing  come-to-help

                                  ka-mo-shirenai!
                                  it-may-be-that

fire FX:                          _____ _____
                   pachi pachi

6
[Madoka portrait.]

7
[Pov from down the beach--they sit side-by-side next to their blazing fire]

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p 130 (108)

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Madoka:
  It's so quiet!                  shizuka ne!

Kyousuke FX:                      ____
                           doki

2
Kyousuke FX:                      ________
                         dokidoki

Kyousuke: [gazing at her, but Madoka doesn't meet his look]
 (T-true.  This is a deserted     (so so-- datta  koko wa   MUJINTOU
  island, and it's night...           true was    this (T)  deserted-island

  Just the two of us...!)         nan da   shikamo      YORU...
                                  what-be  furthermore  night

                                  futari kkiri...!
                                  only-2-people...!

3
fire FX:                          ______
                            pachi_

4
Madoka: [flinching away from the flying ember]
  Ouch!                           atsui_!
                                  hot  !!

5
[She falls against him, her hand on his chest.]

6
[Romantic moment looms...]

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p 131 (109)

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Madoka: [tenderly]
  At this moment...               kono mama......
                                  just-as-this-is

2
[Kyousuke is silent.]

3
Madoka: [clinging close]
  ...not being rescued            zutto        TASUkannai    no mo
  wouldn't be too bad.            all-through  not-be-saved     also

                                  WARUku nai  wa ne
                                  not-bad     (mild emph/confirm.)

4
Madoka: [gazing into his averted face]
  If that should happen...        soshitara
                                  if-to-happen

5
[They lock eyes.]

6
Kyousuke:
 "If that should happen..."?      soshitara...?

7
Madoka:
  ...I'd probably...              atashi  tabun...
                                  I       most-likely

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p 132 (110)

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[The young would-be lovers stop at the sound of...]
Hikaru: [off]
  Yuusaku, come on...             yu--saku kite    mina yo--
                                           coming  all

2
[Hikaru and Yuusaku appear by the fire.]
Hikaru:
  See?  I told you someone's      hora yappari      HITO   ga   iru
  here.                           see  as-expected  people (S)  present

3
Kyousuke: [freaked]
  H-Hikaru-chan?!                 hi hikaru-chan?!

4
Hikaru: [ecstatic]
  Oh!!                            are_!!

5
Hikaru: [executing a flying tackle]
  Sempaaai!!                      sempa--i!!

Hikaru FX:                        _____
                         gaba_

6
Hikaru:
  Sure enough, you're alive!      yappari      Ikite-ta     n desu   ne!
                                  sure-enough  were-living  (explan)

7
[Hikaru hugs him tightly about the neck.]
narration:
  W-what's this?  What in the     na nan da       do--  natte      n da
  world's happening?!                what's-this  what  becoming  (explan)

                                  ittai?!
                                  in-the-world

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Hikaru: [stepping back to explain]
  We drifted ashore on the        atashi-tachi kono SHIMA no URA gawa ni
  other side of this island!      we           on-this-island's-backside

                                  NAGAre-tsuita           n desu!
                                  drifted-to/was-washed-ashore

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[Madoka stands behind Kyousuke, who sits; both are wide-eyed.]

3
Hikaru: [sadly]                                   ______
  We saw your boat drift          SEMPAI-tachi no bo--to ga  NAGArete kita
  by, and I thought the           your-boat             (S)  began-drifting
  two of you fell into
  the ocean...                    n de ICHIJI      wa   atashi futari-tomo
                                       temporarily (T)  I      both-of-you

                                  UMI ni        OCHI-kkochita  no ka to....
                                  in-the-ocean  fall-in/sank         and

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Hikaru: [hugging Kyousuke]
  But it's so good to see         demo  yokatta   Ikite-ta   n desu   ne--
  you alive.  I'm so happy!       but   was-good  was-alive  (explan) 

                                  ureshii  
                                  happy/glad

5
[Kyousuke, sweating and in a daze, glances over at Madoka.]
Kyousuke FX:                      ______
                           chira_

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Madoka: [tossing her hair back]
  Well...  I think it's time      satte to  ......  KAEro-- ka na
  we went home.  After all,       well              return! I-wonder
  we found the boat...            ______
                                  bo--to mo  mitsukatta  koto    da  shi
                                  boat also  was-found   matter  be  besides

7
[Madoka storms off as Hikaru hugs Kyousuke.  Kyousuke watches wide-eyed as
 Madoka walks away.  Yuusaku sits grimly by the fire.]
Hikaru:
  Ooohh, a campfire is so         uwa~~~~   taki BI    da  nante
  romantic, don't you think?                woodfire   be  or-such
                                  ___________
                                  romanchikku  desu ne~~~
                                  romantic     is   (right?)

  Since we're here, let's         tsuide da kara     mo-- #2~3# -KA
  stay another 2 or 3 days,       since-we're-at-it  another-2-or-3-days
  okay, Darling?                                          _______
                                  imasho--    yo      nee da--rin
                                  let's-stay  (emph)

Yuusaku:
  Shit!  I thought for sure       kuso~~_  aitsu        tekkiri
  he'd croaked.                   shit  !  that-person  feel-quite-certain-
                                                                       that

                                  SHInda  to OMOtta     noni
                                  died    thought-that  although

7 (inset)
Kyousuke: [grimacing/sweating, with Hikaru wrapped around his neck]
  Ah...  Whatever you like!       moo      katte ni       shite kure!
                                  already  as-you-please  doing-(for-me)

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