Kimagure Orange Road
"The Unfortunate Unrequited Love!"
Volume 2, Story 8
WB Volume 2, Story 1
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
Translation by Craig H. Nishida
Compilation by Spencer C. Hastings
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Spencer Hastings
Andrew Wilson
Ed Korthof
George Robbert
Jerry Lee
Jay Harvey
Station Zebra
Last revision : 8-08-94
NOTE: [WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()]
NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga. So there may be a few
extra's to those of you not having them.
Example: (The subtitles on page 161 are only in the WB'S!)
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p 7 (161)--TITLE PAGE
[Full-page panel of Madoka in tennis outfit posing near the net, racket
over her shoulder.]
MAIN TITLE (at top)
The Unfortunate Unrequited ainiku KATA-OMOi !
Love! unfortunately unrequited-love
SUB-TITLE (at bottom)
The Mysterious Eye Is NAZOmeku HITOMI wa
Emerald Green; mysterious eye-(lit.,-pupil) (T)
_________
emerarudo
emerald
________
Temptation Smashed; YUUWAKU sumasshu
temptation smash-(as-in-tennis,-etc.)
Winning Move for the Heart; KOKORO ni KImete
heart/mind/feeling (IO) winning-move/
deciding-factor
Love's Maneuvering; KOI no kakehiki
love 's maneuvering/
advancing-&-retreating
____ _____
Love Game rabu geemu
love game
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p 8 (162)
[The story opens with a flashback.]
1
[Young Madoka and young Hikaru race towards a tree in the park.]
Hikaru:
YUU-chaaan!! YUU-cha--n !!
2
Hikaru:
YUU-chaan, hurry up! YUU-cha--n HAYAku oide yo-- _ !
(name) hurry come (emph) (!)
3
Yuusaku: [lagging far behind]
Hikaru-chaan, Madoka-saan, hikaru-cha--n madoka-sa--n MAtte yo--
wait! wait
4
Madoka: Hikaru: _______ _______
Kya-ha-ha A-ha-ha-ha kyahaha ahahaha
5
Madoka: [at tree]
I'm first. atashi ichiba--n
I number-1
6
Hikaru:
I'm second. atashi niba--n
I number-2
7
Hikaru:
Yuu-chan's last! YUU-chan ga biri--_ !
(subj) last (!)
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p 9 (163)
1
[At school, Yuusaku gets pummelled by a boy who sits on Yuusaku and
punches away.]
Yuusaku: wa--_
Waah!
Boy 1: [watching]
Oh boy. yareyare
Boy 2: [watching]
That's it. soko da--
that-place is
2
[Yuusaku takes a blow to the face.]
3
Hikaru: [running up]
Heyy! kora--_
4
[Boys flee as Hikaru chases]
Boy 3:
Ah! Look out! It's Hikaru! a ike ne hikaru da
Can't beat her! Ah! watch-out is
aitsu ni wa kana wa ne-- ya
that-person (IO)(T) no-match-for
Boy:
Run! nigero--_
Hikaru:
Stop picking on Yuusaku!! YUUSAKU o ijimeru na--_ !!
(obj) to-bully/pick-on
5
Yuusaku FX: __ __
Boo-hoo! u_ u_
6
Hikaru: [slapping Yuusaku]
Boys don't cry, Yuusaku! OTOKO no kuse-ni naku na yo YUUSAKU !
boy(s) even-though (confirm.)
to-cry (emph)
7
[Yuusaku wipes away tears as Hikaru stands wide-eyed.]
Yuusaku: ____
But they were making fun datte aitsura boku no koto
of me because I play with but those-people of-me
you so much. They said
I'll turn into a girl. OTOKO no kuse-ni
boys even-though
hikaru-chan-tachi to bakkari
only-with-Hikaru-(&-associates)
ASOnde-ru OTOKO onna tte
am-playing tomboy (quote/hearsay)
____
baka ni suru n da mon
make-a-fool (explanation)
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p 10 (164)
1
[Hikaru is silent with eyes wide.]
2
Hikaru: [wiping Yuusaku's face]
Be brave. hara KAO doro ke
There's mud on your face. courage face mud
3
Yuusaku: [blush] FX: arigato... kaa_
Thanks...
4
Yuusaku: ____
But I still don't like the demo boku yori hikaru-chan no KATA ga
fact that you're stronger but me than (name) 's person
than me, Hikaru-chan.
TSUYOi nan-te ya da na
strong how/what (= iya da) (confirm.)
is-unpleasant
5
Hikaru FX: _____
niko_
6
Hikaru:
If you get stronger, I'll YUU-chan ga motto motto TSUYOkunattara
marry you. (S) more if-strong
hikaru YUU-chan no o-yome-san ni
's bride (IO)
nattageru
(= natte-ageru)
becoming-(favor-to-you)
7
Yuusaku:
Really?! honto~~_?!
Hikaru:
Yeah! Promise. un! YAKUSOKU ne
promise
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p 11 (165)
1
[Yuusaku in martial arts training]
narration: ___
And ever since that day, soshite ore wa sono HI kara tada
I've tried my hardest to after-that I (T) since-that-day however
become stronger!
hitasura TSUYOku naru tame ni
earnestly strong become in-order-to
________
ganbatta !
strived
2
[Apparently, we return to the present. On the street, the boys avoid
Yuusaku in obvious fear.]
narration:
Now those bullies don't make itsu shika ijime-kKO mo ore no koto
fun of me anymore. when only also of-me
children-who-bully-others
____
o sore te baka ni shinai
that-one not-make-a-fool
you ni natta
came-about-that
3
Yuusaku: [sees Hikaru sitting] ___
Hikaru-chan, I'm stronger hikaru-chan ore TSUYOkunatta yo !!
now!! I became-strong (emph)
4
Yuusaku: [notices she's sitting real close to a guy]
Agh! Who's that? are sono HITO dare ?
(interjection) that-person who
Hikaru: [looks back to face Yuusaku]
I'm... atashi nee...
I (colloq.)
5
Hikaru:
...going to be his bride!! kono HITO no o-yome-san ni naru no--!!
this man 's bride becoming
[Kyousuke turns to beam a smile at Yuusaku as Hikaru clings to his arm.
Yuusaku turns red.]
6
Yuusaku:
Y- ki...
7
Yuusaku: [grabbing the smiling Kyousuke by the shirt]
Y-you bastard! K-Kasuga!! ki kisama ka KASUGA--_!!
you (!)
(crude)
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p 12 (166)
[Oops. It was all a Yuusaku daydream.]
1
Yuusaku: [grabbing teacher by the shirt]
Y- ki...
2
Teacher:
What the hell's wrong with nani ga kisama da? HINO...
you? Hino... what you is (name)
(crude)
Girl classmate:
Tee hee. kusukusu
giggle/titter-sound
Yuusaku:
Ah!! a_!!
Classmate:
He's growing senile again, aitsu mata ne bokete ya n no
huh? that-person again becoming-senile
3
Yuusaku:
Shit! kuso--_
4
Yuusaku: [standing in the hall]
Did it again! mata yatchimatta...
again (= yatte-shimatta)
did-(finality/regret)
5
Yuusaku:
Hikaru-chan... hikaru-chan...
6
Yuusaku: [dreaming of Kyousuke and Hikaru again]
This too, Kasuga Kyousuke... kore to yuu no mo KASUGA KYOUSUKE...
even-this also
The things that I go through subete wa minna ano YAROU no sei da!!
are all because of you!! everything all that-guy 's fault be
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p 13 (167)
1
Kyousuke:
Ah-choo! hekushon!
2
Kyousuke:
Something just now sent nani-ka IMA SENAKA ni OKAN ga...
chills up my back... something now on-back chilly (S)
(i.e., body part)
3
[Yuusaku walks down the hall.]
4
[Yuusaku sees someone ahead.]
Yuusaku heartbeat FX: _____
doki_
5
[Hikaru walks down the hall.]
6
[She stops and her eyes open wide.]
7
Hikaru:
Hey! ara_!
Hikaru FX: _____
niko_
8
Yuusaku: [raises hand in greeting]
H-hi! ya yaa_
Yuusaku FX: ___
po_
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p 14 (168)
1
Hikaru: [overjoyed]
SEMPAAAI! SEMpa~~i
2
[Kyousuke is standing behind Yuusaku; Yuusaku realizes this.]
Kyousuke: _____
giku_
Oh! ara!
3
Hikaru: [pushing a stacked lunch smack into Kyousuke's face]
Please look at the lunch I MIte kudasai KYOU no o-bento--_!!
made today!! looking please today's-lunch !!!
4
[a crowd starts to gather]
Hikaru:
It has 5 stacks! GO DAN maku no UCHI!
5 stacks partition within
crowd FX:
Ahh! a~~_
5
[now surrounded by many students]
Kyousuke:
Although this happens all MAIDO no koto nagara tereru na--
the time, it's still while-a-common-occurrence get-
kinda embarrassing. embarrassed
6
Classmates (right):
They're at it again--and aitsura mappiruma kara yoku yaru
it's only early afternoon! they often-engage-in
from-morning/early-afternoon
yo na
(slight-disbelief)
Classmates (left):
What a show-off! misetsuke yagatte
displaying coming-to-be-distasteful
7
[Hikaru blushes and clings to his arm.]
Kyousuke:
I-it's not that I'm showing da DARE-mo MIsetsuke yo-- to shite-ru
off... everyone be-trying-to-show-off
wake ja nai n da kedo na
not-the-case-(that) (explan) but
It's embarrassing. hazukashii na
embarrassed
8
Kyousuke: [seeing Yuusaku enraged]
Ah. a
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p 15 (169)
1
Yuusaku FX: ________
buruburu
boiling-mad
2
Kyousuke:
That's the guy from aitsu... kinou no
yesterday... that-person yesterday (confirm.)
3
[Yuusaku turns and walks away, staring back at Kyousuke over his shoulder.]
4
Kyousuke:
(Oh boy! What's with him?) (yareyare! dooshita mo
oh boy what-is-matter also
n daro ittai?)
(poss-explan) in-the-world
5
[An empty school courtyard.]
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p 16 (170)
1
[Exterior shot of school.]
School bell FX: ___ ___ ___ ___
Ding-dong ding-dong kin kun kan kun
2
[Kyousuke walks out through the school gate alone.]
3
[Yuusaku tails him.]
4
Yuusaku:
There's no way Hikaru-chan hikaru-chan ga anna YAROU ni
could love a guy like that. (S) with-that-kind-of-guy/rogue
Surely I can spare a little horeru hazu wa nai
time! fall-in-love no-reason-to-think-that
kitto da ma kirete-ru dake nan da!
surely time-to-spare it-is
be can-cut a-little
5
Yuusaku:
Just wait and see! I'm MItero aitsu no HONSHOU o
going to expose his true look! that-person's-real-character
character.
tsukitome te yaru
get-to-the-bottom-of
6
[Kyousuke looks to the side with a start.]
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p 17 (171)
1
[It's just his sisters... Kyousuke stops to chat.]
2
Yuusaku: _____
Huh! mumu_
3-4
[Kyousuke cheerfully parts company with his sisters. They wave good-bye.]
5
Yuusaku:
Oh! Aren't those the cute a_ are wa #C# KUMI de
twins from Class C?! Ah! those (T) from-C-class
______
kawaii to hyo--ban no futago ja nai ka!
twins-of-the-cute-reputation are not (?)!
____
So, at last he shows his yaro-- toutou HONSHOU o
true colors. guy/rogue at-last real-character (O)
arawashita na--
showed/expressed (confirm.)
6
Yuusaku:
How could he have eyes hikaru-chan-IGAI no ONNA no ko -tomo
for anyone other than other-than all
Hikaru-chan?! girls
(i.e., all girls other than Hikaru)
anna ni narenareshiku shagatte
to-that-kind-of (displeasure)
familiar/too-free
__________
He's just interested in shikamo muchakucha kawaii ja nai ka
them because they're so besides incredibly-cute are-not (?)
incredibly cute!
He's just a playboy! aitsu ONNA-ttarashi da na!
that-person ladykiller/playboy
is
7
[Exterior shot of a bookstore.]
Store name: [partially out-of-frame]
--kawa Bookstore ?-KAWA SHOTEN
Banner at entrance: _____
Shounen Jump SHOUNEN jampu
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p 18 (172)
1
[Inside the bookstore, Kyousuke stands reading a men's magazine; yup, just
reading the stories... Ahem.]
2
[Yuusaku watches, pretending to read a book.]
Yuusaku FX: ______
chira_
3
[Kyousuke puts down the magazine and leaves.]
magazine pages FX: _____
pasa_
4
[Yuusaku rushes over to find out what Kyousuke was reading.]
5
Yuusaku:
(Geez, he must be really (u_ konna ni iyarashi-- HON o...
perverted to read a dirty (exclam.) (IO) indecent/lewd (O)
magazine like that.) this-kind-of book
______
aitsu so-- to-- sukebe da na)
that-person etc. perverted
in-that-way is
6
[Yuusaku's eyes bug out as he flips through the pages of the magazine.]
Yuusaku: FX: _____
OH!! oo_!! para_
7
Yuusaku: _____
(But--this is amazing!!) (shikashi... kore wa sugoi!!)
but... this amazing
Yuusaku FX:
Ah... ji--
Woman observer: [to companion]
Goodness, that little boy-- ya-- ne ano KO KODOMO no kuse-ni
what's he reading?! that-child even-though-a-child
unpleasant
nani mite n no!
what-looking (explan)!
8
Yuusaku:
(I'd better buy it...) (kekkyoku KAUtchatta.......)
after all (= KAUtte-shimatta)
buy-(finality/regret)
Cashier:
That will be 180 yen. 180 yen ni narimasu
consists-(semi-formal)
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p 19 (173)
1
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]
2
[Inside, Kyousuke sits at the counter; Madoka works behind it.]
Kyousuke: [drink in hand]
Who was that boy who came ano HITOTOSE no OTOKO no KO
some time ago? that some-time-ago boy
nan-te itta kke
how/what went/came
3
Madoka:
Oh, that's Yuu-kun. a-- YUU-kun ne
4
Kyousuke: ___
Today, I was startled by that aitsu KYOU datte ore no koto
guy when he glared at me. that-person even at-me
today
sugoi KAO shite niramu n da mon na
startling to-glare-at
face/expression (the-reason-is)
coming-to-have
4
Madoka:
Aren't you just getting what JIGOU-JITOKU ja nai ?
you deserve? reaping-what-one-sows are-not?
5
Kyousuke:
EH?! e
Madoka:
But that's probably not the demo manzara demo nai n desho
entire reason. but not-wholly being-not (probable-
explan)
6
Madoka:
It's because boys like datte hikaru no koto SUki na
Hikaru, but she only has the-reason-is liking
eyes for a special someone. of-Hikaru
OTOKO no KO gaite mo hikaru wa
boys coming-to-show-signs-of
also Hikaru (T)
DARE-ka -san dake o MIteru n da kara
someone-(hon.) only see that's-why
7
Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____
doki_
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p 20 (174)
1
Madoka:
If you're really a man, then kono hen de OTOKO nara hakkiri
act like one! from-area-near-here clearly
if-are-a-man
sasetara doo!?
if-make-do how/what
Decide whether you really HONTOU ni hikaru no koto
like Hikaru or... really of-Hikaru
SUki na no ka sore-tomo
liking/fond-of (?) or
2
Kyousuke: [eyes widen]
EH! e
3
[Madoka's eyes grow wide and she blushes.]
4
Madoka: [turning her back to Kyousuke]
Oh! Not that! I feel sorry a dakara YUU-kun ga kawaiso--
for Yuu-kun because he cares oh! for-that-reason (S) pitiable
so much for Hikaru...
ja nai anna ni hikaru no koto
is-not that-much about-Hikaru
OMOtte n noni...
thinking although
5
[Kyousuke sweats and stares wide-eyed at Madoka's back.]
narration:
Or...?! sore-tomo...?!
What in the world was she sono ato no KOTOBA---
going to say after that? that time-after 's words
ittai AYUKAWA wa nani o
in-the-world (T) what (O)
io-- to shita n darou?
shall-say did (probable-reason)
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p 21 (175)
1
Kyousuke: [mischievous smile]
Ayukawa... AYUKAWA...
2
[Madoka turns and looks at him askance.]
3
Kyousuke: [with some merriment]
Is it only for Yuu-kun's sake hakkiri saseru no wa YUU-kun no tame
that I have to decide? clearly to-make-do (T) 's sake
dake?
only
Madoka:
EH! e
4
Madoka:
Oh! What other reason is ara hoka ni nani ga aru wake?
there? oh! besides what unspecified-reason
5
Kyousuke:
Joke, joke. jo--dan jo--dan
You're getting pretty good tokoro de chikagoro AYUKAWA
at making coffee, aren't you? at-place lately you
________
ko--hi-- Ireru no
of-making-coffee
umaku natta n ja nai?
became-skillful (rhetorical)
6
Madoka:
Oh? Thanks. soo? arigato
7
Madoka: [with a smile] ____ ____
But flattery will get you demo... goma suttatte roha ni wa
nowhere! but even-if-flattering (T)
gratis/for-free
nara nai kara ne--_!
if-are-not that's-why (confirm.-&-
friendliness)
Kyousuke:
Oh, rats! Just another a--a! mo-- chotto datta noni naa--_!
moment longer! Oh! another was (boy!)
moment in-order-to
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p 22 (176)
1
[Yuusaku peers in through ABCB's window to see the two in good cheer.]
2
Yuusaku:
W-what?! That guy's so na nan daa ano YAROU madoka-san
friendly with Madoka-san, what's-this that-guy/rogue
too!
tomo anna ni SHITAshiku shi yagatte!
friend that-much friendly (unpleasant)
Yusaku FX:
ji~~
3
Yuusaku:
Just as I thought. yappari hikaru-chan wa ano
Hikaru-chan is being just-as-I-thought (T) that
deceived by that playboy.
ONNA-tarashi ni damasareteta n da
playboy/flirt (IO) deceived-by (explan)
All right, just wait and yo--shi mitero!!
see!! all-right watch!!
4
Yuusaku: [walking away from ABCB]
But... I thought Madoka-san shikashi... madoka-san motto kowai
was meaner than that... but more scary
Ika to OMOtte-ta kedo...
had-thought-that however
5
Yuusaku:
I've never seen her with such anna ni yasashii KAOtte
a nice expression before. to-that-extent easy/nice expression
HAJImete MIta na
for-the-1st-time saw (confirm.)
6
Yuusaku:
When Madoka-san was a child, kodomo no koro no madoka-san tte
she never smiled cheerfully when-a-child 's Madoka (T)
like that!
anna TANOshi-so-- na EGAO tte
that-kind-of-seemingly-cheerful (T)
smiling-face
sou wa MIse-nakatta yo na
like-that not-shown (emph.)
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p 23 (177)
1
[The next day...]
Kyousuke: [off]
What do you want... nan no YO da yo
what 's business be (!)
2
[Kyousuke and Yuusaku stand in what appears to be the school courtyard,
near a drinking fountain.]
Kyousuke:
...at a place like this? konna TOKORO ni yobiDEshitari shite
at-this-kind-of-place
summoning-over-(altern.)
3
Yuusaku: ___
I saw it. ore... MIchimatta n da
I (= mite-shimatta) (explan)
saw
4
Kyousuke:
Eh? e
5
Yuusaku:
I'm talking about yesterday, o-mae ga kinou madoka-san to
when you and Madoka-san were you (S) yesterday with-Madoka
enjoying yourselves at ABCB.
_______
abakabu tte TOKORO de
ABCB (T) when
futari de TANOshi-so-- ni
with-2-people seemingly-cheerful
HANAshite-ru tokoro o na
be-talking-right-now (confirm.)
6
Kyousuke:
Oh! a
7
narration:
Why did it have to be this yori ni yotte ya na yatsu ni
guy! than by-means-of unpleasant by-jerk
ni MIrare-chimatta na---- _
was-seen (confirm.) !
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p 24 (178)
1
Yuusaku:
You were cheating on Hikaru, yappari o-mae hikaru-chan no koto
weren't you?! just-as-I-thought
you on-Hikaru
taburaka-shite-ita n da na
were-cheating (explan) (confirm.)
2
Kyousuke:
T-that's not true! so sore wa chigau yo
that-is to-differ (emph.)
Yuusaku:
What do you mean, not true?! nani ga chigau _?!
what to-differ !
3
Yuusaku: [rubbing his fists together]
No more . I can't mo-- yurusan
handle this anymore... any-longer not-forgive
dekireba TSUKAi-taku wa nakatta ga...
if-able to-not-handle
Yuusaku knuckles FX: _____ _____
boki_ biki_
4
Kyousuke FX: _____
gowa_
5
[Kyousuke looks around and sees a cute girl.]
Kyousuke FX: _____