Kimagure Orange Road
"Shopping Boogie!"
Volume 2, Story 2
WB Volume 1, Story 10
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi

Translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
                                 Craig Nishida
                                 Spencer Hastings
                                 Gary Kacmarcik
                                 Wes Shull
                                 Ramon Galindo
                                 Ka-Ping Yee

Last revision : 02-07-95

Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:
     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu

NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()
NOTE: Translation is done from both the normal and WB manga, so there may
      be a few extras to those of you not having one or the other.
      Example: The subtitles on page 215 (29) are only in the WB's!
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p 215 (29)

[Madoka stands in a phonebooth, leaning back against the wall, dressed
 in shirt and shorts.]

MAIN TITLE (at top)               _________   ____
  Shopping Boogie!                shoppingu - bugi!
                                  shopping    boogie

SUB-TITLE (at bottom)                       ______     _______
  That Cute Girl, out of a        KOKORO no pe--ji ni  kyu--to na ano KO!
  Page from My Heart!             heart  's page  (IO) cute       that-girl

  A Photograph of a Dazzling      mabushii  SHOKA               no
  Start of Summer...              dazzling  beginning-of-summer 's
                                  __________
                                  fotogurafu...
                                  photograph

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p 216 (30)

1
[Half-page panel of Madoka, walking down the street, in minidress.]

2
[1/4 rearview as she walks past our pov.  Guys walking in the opposite
 direction find their eyes strangely attracted to her...]

3
[A ball flies through the air...]

4
[...lands and rolls to a stop near Madoka.]
ball FX:                          ___
                            pon

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p 217 (31)

1
[Madoka looks off in slight surprise...]

2
[It's a small kid, who smiles and waves his baseball glove, inviting her to
 toss it to him.]
kid:
  Sorry!                          suimase--n!

3
[She frowns slightly.]

4
[The kid loses his smile.]

5
Madoka FX:                        _____
                          niko_

6
[She picks up the ball...]

7
[...and throws a sparkling toss, as only Madoka can.  ^_^]

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p 218 (32)

1
[The kid makes a rather unorthodox catch--well, go look at the pic!]
kid:
  Thanks, oneechan!               arigato_  one--chan

2
[Madoka smiles cheerfully and waves...]

3
[...but stops suddenly to stare at her waving hand.]

4
[She inspects the hand closely.]
narration:
  I never used to do this sort    IZEN    dattara      konna koto
  of thing before...              before  when-it-was  this-kind-of-thing

                                  shinakatta----
                                  not-done

5
[She wipes her brow and looks off into the distance.]
narration:
  I've been cheerful lately!      SAIKIN  atashi  akarui!
                                  lately  I       cheerful

6
[Isolated shot of some downtown buildings.]

7
[Kyousuke waits on the sidewalk, leaning back against the side of a building.
 He is dressed semi-formally.]

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p 219 (33)

1
Madoka: [off]
  Waited long?                    MAtta?

2
Kyousuke:
  N-no.  I just got here.         i iya  IMA  kita  tokoro
                                    no   now  came  place

narration:
  Actually, I arrived             HONTOU wa  30-FUN      MAE ni  kite-ta
  30 minutes ago...               really        minutes  before  did-come

                                  n da      kedo----
                                  (explan)  but

Madoka:
  Oh.                             soo

3
[Kyousuke's pov as Madoka leans in close and inspects his attire.]
Madoka FX:                        _____
                          jiro_

Madoka:
  Hmm...                          fu----n

4
[Madoka's pov of Kyousuke tugging his coat on straight.]
Kyousuke:
  Eh?!  S-something...            e?!    na nani-ka...

5
Madoka:
  Pretty flashy, huh?             taishita                 kakkou    ne
                                  great/important/serious  appearance

Kyousuke: [nervous]
  I-is that so?                   so soo?

6
Madoka:
  But, that's okay!               ma......  i--   kedo  ne_!
                                            okay  but   (rhet)

Kyousuke:
 (M-maybe I should have worn      (ya yappari    futsu-- no      kakkou no
  my regular clothes after            after-all  ordinary/usual  appearance
  all.)
                                  ho-- ga yokatta  ka na)
                                  was-better       I-wonder

narration:
  Actually, yesterday...          jitsu wa  kinou----
                                  in-fact   yesterday

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p 220 (34)

1
[Exterior shot of ABCB.]
sign:
   Pub & Restaurant         #PUB & RESTAURANT#  abakabu
  "Abakabu"

2
[Inside, Madoka and Master lean on the counter in discussion over a list
 she's holding.]

3
Kyousuke:
  Hello!                          konchiwa!

[Master and Madoka turn to look at him without expression.]

4
[Master facial-portrait.]

5
Master: [smiling merrily]
  Kyousuke-kun, I hear that       KYOUSUKE-kun  ashita    AYUKAWA-kun ga
  Ayukawa-kun wants to go                       tomorrow              (S)
  on a date with you tomorrow.    ____      ______
                                  kimi to   de--to shitai tte
                                  with-you  want-to-date  (hearsay)

Kyousuke: [stunned]               ___
  Da--?!                          de_?!

Madoka: [indignant]               __________
  Masterrrr!!                     masuta----_!!

6
Master:
  Just joking.                    to yu-- no  wa   jo--dan de
                                  saying-that (T)  being-a-joke

  I'm sending Ayukawa-kun         ashita    AYUKAWA-kun ni   MISE de
  shopping tomorrow to buy        tomorrow             (IO)  in-store
  the little things we use
  here in the restaurant...       tsukau  KOMONO          o
                                  employ  small-articles (O)

                                  KAi ni itte-morau         n da      kedo...
                                  go-to-buy-(favor-for-me)  (explan)  but

7
Master:                           ________
  But it seems that the           depa--to          ni   TODOkete-morau to
  department store would take     department-store (IO)  if-deliver-
  a week to have the things                                  (favor-for-me)
  delivered...
                                  ISSHUUKAN wa   kakaru  sou da    shi
                                  a-week    (T)  require (hearsay) and-besides

  And I have to be here in        washi wa   MISE  ga   aru      shi
  the restaurant.                 I     (T)  store (S)  be-here  consider

  So we were just saying          dekireba    DARE-ka
  that it would be nice to        if-able-to  somebody
  get a guy to lend a hand
  for this!                       OTOKO no TE o karitai
                                  ask-for-guy's-helping-hand

                                  to HANASHI shite-ta  toko      nan da yo!
                                  did-say-that         occasion  that-is

8
Master: [off]
  How's that sound, if I might    do-- da       tanomarete-kurenai       ka?!
  ask?!                           how  is-that  not-be-asking-(favor-to-me)

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p 221 (35)

1
Madoka: [angrily]
  I'll be fine by myself!         atashi  hitori    demo  DAIJOUBU  yo!
                                  I       1-person  even  all-right

Kyousuke: [ticked]                ___
  I'll go!                        ore  Ikimasu_
                                  I    go     !

2
Master:
  Oh, thank you!                  so-- ka    arigatai!
                                             meriting-gratitude

  It's because you're a guy.      nan datte  OTOKO no KO  da  kara      na
                                             guy          be  that's-why
                                           _____
  Well, have a glass of cold      maa--    ohiya      demo  ippai
  sake.                                    cold-sake        one-cup

Kyousuke: [embarrassed]
  No...  Ha ha ha.                iya--   hahaha

3
Madoka: [seriously]
  Let me make it clear that       Ittoku        kedo
  we won't be going for fun!      (= Itte-oku)  but
                                     say-(for-future's-sake)

                                  ASObi ni   Iku n ja nai  kara       ne!
                                  play (IO)  not-going     that's-why

4
[Isolated shot of a department store building.]

5
[Shot of various pans in a display case.]
Madoka: [off]
  Then, this one, and...          ja    kore       to
                                  then  this-(one) and

  Oh, and that, too...            a  sotchi no yatsu  mo  ne
                                     that-way         too

store clerk: [off]
  Yes.  Very well, Miss!          hai  kashikomarimashita!
                                  yes  very-well/all-right-(sir/madam)

6
[Madoka points out her choices as a smiling female clerk looks on.  Kyousuke
 watches in silence and wonder.]

7
narration:
  Ayukawa's so reliable.          shikkari shite         n da     na  AYUKAWA
                                  being-steady/reliable  (explan)
                                             ___
  When she's like this no one     kore de    ore to   DOUji
  would ever believe we're        with-this  with-me  simultaneous
  both in junior high.
                                  CHUUGAKUSEI      da  nan-te
                                  jr-high-student  be  etc.

                                  SHINjirarenai     na--
                                  not-be-believing

8
store clerk: [handing a stack of packages to Kyousuke]
  Here you go!  Please take       hai!  kore        o-negai   ne
  this.                           yes   this-(one)    request

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p 222 (36)

1
store clerk: [smiling]
  How admirable...                KANSHIN           ne--
                                  admiration/wonder (rhet)

  Helping your big sister         KYOU  wa   oneesan no      o-TETSUDAi?
  today?                          today (T)  older-sister's  (hon)-assistance

2
[Kyousuke stops in surprise.]
crows-in-background FX:           ____
                            kaa_

Madoka FX:                        ___ ___
                ku_ ku_

3
Kyousuke: [exploding]                                  _ ___
  Y-you're mistaken!              chi_ chigau yo--_    o ore wa...!!
  I-I'm...!!                                             I   (T)

[The packages held in his arms jostle and fall to the floor.]

packages FX:                      ____ ____
                         bara bara

4
Kyousuke:
  Ahhhhh!                         a~~~~_

5
[As Kyousuke kneels to pick up all the packages...]
Madoka: [loudly]
  PULL YOURSELF TOGETHER,         shikkari shite yo   KYOUSUKE-chan!
  KYOUSUKE-CHAN!

lady customers:                   ________
  Tee-hee.                        kusukusu

lady customer:
  Heh!                            pu_

6
Kyousuke: [holding it in]
 (Sh-shit!  If it's going to      (ku kuso--_   konna koto nara
  be like this, I shouldn't           shit  !   if-it's-this-kind-of-thing
  have come!)
                                  konakya         yokatta!)
                                  (= konakereba)  was-good
                                     if-not-come

7
[Kyousuke watches as Madoka points out more items to a different clerk.]

8
[Madoka looks back at the now somber Kyousuke.]

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p 223 (37)

1
Madoka:
  You're still bothered by        mada   KI ni shite  n desho
  what the salesclerk said        still  minding      (poss-explan)
  a while back, aren't you.
                                  sakki no     TEN'IN no  KOTOBA
                                  while-ago's  clerk's    words

2
Kyousuke: [meekly]
  ..........                      ..........
                                  ___
  Do I look so immature?          ore tte  sonna ni      kodomo ppoku
                                  I   (T)  that-kind-of  childish

                                  mieru         no ka na?
                                  see/appear       I-wonder

3
Madoka: [forced smile]
  W-well...  But on the other     so soo ne demo sore       ga  GYAKU ni
  hand, isn't that your charm?       well   but  that-(one) (S) on-the-contrary

                                  MIRYOKU            nan  ja nai?
                                  charm/fascination       not-have

Kyousuke: [quietly indignant]                     ___      ____
 (In other words, you'd like      (yo-- suru ni   ore ga   gaki  da
  to say that I'm a brat...!)      in-effect      I   (S)  brat  am

                                  tte i--tai        n darou..........!)
                                  want-to-say-that  (poss-explan)

4
[Madoka portrait--she gives him a gentle smile.]

5
Madoka: [turning and smiling back at him]
  Well, we're done shopping...    sate   KAIMONO mo    sunda     shi
                                  well   shopping-too  finished  and-besides
                                  ________
  Let's go drink coffee or        ko--hi--  demo          nomi  ni
  something.                      coffee    or-something  drink

                                  Ikou      ka
                                  shall-go  (?)

  Today, it's my treat!           KYOU  wa   atashi ga   ogoru yo!
                                  today (T)  I      (S)  treat

6
[Isolated shot of the cafe inside the department store building.]

7
[Two jerks spot Madoka sitting at a table.]

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p 224 (38)

1
[They approach Madoka from behind her.  Kyousuke looks on with dismay.]
jerk 1:                           ____
  You're cute...                  kimi  kawaii ne
                                  you   cute

jerk 2:
  We're students at Nakagawa      boku-tachi  NAKAGAWA  KOUKOU no
  High School...                  we              high-school's

                                  mono     da  kedo sa
                                  persons  be  but
                                  ______
  Why don't we go on a date?      de--to shina--i?
                                  not-date

2
jerks FX:                         ___ ___
                       nya nya

3
Kyousuke: [standing]
  J-just a minute, you guys!      chi chotto  omaera_!
                                              you-(plural)

  Aren't you being rude?!!        SHITSUREI  ja nai   ka_!!
                                  rudeness   be-not   (?)

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                           gatan

4
jerk 1:
  Who's this jerk?!!              nan da       koitsu      wa   yo~~~~_!
                                  what's-this  this-fellow (T)

jerk 2:
  Oh, shouldn't you be going      otto   SHICHIGOSAN    no  KAEri
  home for the November 15               Nov-15-Ceremony    returning-home
  Ceremony, kid?                          ______
                                  kai?    bo--ya
                                  (?)     kid/boy



Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                     muka_

5
jerk 1:                                            ______
  Hey, hey.  Rather than          ne-- ne--  konna bo--ya
  hanging out with a little                  this-kind-of-kid
  kid like this...
                                  AITE ni shite-nai             de  sa--
                                  be-having-nothing-to-do-with
                                  ___
  Come with us...!                ore-tachi to  sa----_
                                  with-us

jerk 2:
  Yes, that's right.              so-- so--

Kyousuke:
  C-can't...let you say...!       ko kono...   iwasete-okeba......!
                                     this      if-allow-to-say-
                                                   (for-future-sake)

[Madoka sits quiet and stone-faced through all this...]

6
jerk 2: [sternly at Kyousuke]
  What's that?                    nan da yo

Kyousuke FX:                      _____
                          biku_

7
[Kyousuke sweats and glances at Madoka.]
Kyousuke FX:                      ______
                           chira_

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p 225 (39)

1
[A hand waves the check at Kyousuke's cheek from over his shoulder...]
bill FX:                          ___
                          su_

2
[It's Madoka, who heads to the exit.  Kyousuke clutches the check in his
 hand.  ]
Madoka:
  Thanks for the hospitality!     gochisou-sama!

Kyousuke:
  Ah, w-wait!                     a  ma MAtte!

3
[The jerks frown as they watch Kyousuke chase after the departing Madoka.]
jerk 1:
  Damn!                           che_

4
[Kyousuke, carrying the packages, walks 2 paces behind Madoka.]
Kyousuke FX:                      ____ ____
                   tobo tobo

5
Madoka: [from inside elevator]
  What are you doing?             nani  yatte  n no yo
                                  what  doing
                                  ________
  If you don't hurry the          motamota shite-ru to  shimaru     wa yo!
  doors will shut on you!         if-being-slow         close/shut

Kyousuke: [running]
  R-right!                        ha hai

6
[Inside the elevator, Madoka stands with eyes closed, wearing a frown.
 Kyousuke studies her out of the corner of his eye.]
narration:
  Ayukawa...  She sure seems      AYUKAWA----  yappari      OKOtte-ru
  angry.                                       sure-enough  is-angry

                                  mitai da     na
                                  seems-to-be

Kyousuke FX:                      ______
                           chira_

7
Kyousuke:
 (How pathetic!                   (nasakenai         na--_
                                   shameful/miserable    !

  If this keeps up--more          konna koto ja
  and more, I'll be treated       in-this-kind-of-thing (T)
  coldly like a little
  brother...)                     masumasu       oto--to      atsukai da....)
                                  more-and-more  kid-brother  treat-coldly-
                                                                    (like-a)

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p 226 (40)

1
Madoka:
  Huh?                            are?

2
Madoka:
  That's odd.  Don't you smell    hen ne    nan-da-ka  kinakusaku     nai?
  something burning?              odd       somehow    burning-smell  not-be

Kyousuke:
  N-now that you mention it...    so so-- iwarete-mireba....
                                     try-and-come-to-think-of-it

3
[The elevator comes to an abrupt halt and the two go flying.]
elevator FX:                      _____
                            gatan

Kyousuke and Madoka:
  WAH!!                           wa_!!

4
elevator lights-off FX:           ___
                          pa_

5
elevator cabling FX:              ______
                      jijiji...

elevator lights-on FX:            ___
                          pa_

6
Kyousuke: [spotting smoke entering the elevator from under the door]
  AH!                             a_!

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p 227 (41)

1
Kyousuke:
  F-fire!!                        ka_  KAJI da!!

2
Kyousuke:
  Wh-what'll we do?!              do_ do-- shiyou?!

Madoka:
  There's a telephone!            DENWA     ga   aru      wa!
                                  telephone (S)  there-is

3
Kyousuke: [grabbing phone]
  Oh, yeah.  Hello!               sou ka    moshimoshi!

4
Kyousuke:                                                  ___________
  Hello.  Right now we're         moshimoshi  bokura  IMA  erebe--ta-- no
  in an elevator...               hello       we      now  elevator    's

                                  NAKA    ni......
                                  inside (IO)

voice: [off]
  Okay.  Be patient a little      wakarimashita  mo-- sukoshi  no
  while longer.  Help is          understood     a-little-more 's
  definitely...
                                  shimbo--  desu  kanarazu      TASUke ni...
                                  patience  is    by-all-means  assistance

5
voice: [off]
  Wahhhhh!  Smoke over here,      wa------_    kotchi ni mo     kemuri ga...!
  too...!                                 !    on-this-side-too smoke  (S)

Kyousuke:
  Eh?                             e?

[Kyousuke stares at the receiver in his hand.]

voice FX:                         ______
                      putsun

6
Madoka: [concern on her face]
  What is it?                     nan da tte?

Kyousuke:
  It's a fire after all...        KAJI  da yo   yappari...
                                  fire  be      after-all

7
Kyousuke:
  It looks as if it's out         do--yara        SOTO demo
  there as well, so they          it-looks-as-if  outside-as-well
  may not have time to rescue
  us...                           bokura o TASUkeru  yoyuu
                                  rescue-us          time-to-spare

                                  wa nai       mitai da......
                                     not-have  seems

8
Madoka: [wide-eyed]
  Oh...                           soo...

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p 228 (42)

1
[Madoka holds her handkerchief to her mouth as smoke begins to fill the
 elevator.]
Madoka FX:                        _____
                           gohon

2
Kyousuke: [reaching up]
  Even the ceiling panel          TENJOU       mo   akanai_!
  won't open!                     ceiling/top  too  not-open

3
[He jumps back down.  ]
Kyousuke FX:                      ___
                            ton

4
Madoka:
  It isn't going right, like      EIGA no you ni wa
  the way it does in the          like-a-movie   (contrast)
  movies.
                                  umaku ikanai mitai  ne
                                  seem-to-go-wrong

5
[Kyousuke looks at her with concern.]

6
narration:                        _chikara_
  If I use the Power, both        NOURYOKU tsukaeba  futari tomo
  of us could escape with         if-use-the-Power   both-people
  ease...
                                  nukedasu     gurai
                                  slip-out-of  to-the-extent

                                  wake    nai  n da      kedo----
                                  reason  not  (explan)  but

  But, if I do, then that         demo    so-- sureba      AYUKAWA tomo
  would mean Ayukawa...           but     if-do-like-that  including-Ayukawa

                                  kore de----
                                  now/with-this



7
Kyousuke: [flash thought]
 (Shit!  What should I do?!)      (kuso----_    do-- sureba  i--   n da_?!)
                                   shit    !    how  if-do   okay  (explan)

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p 229 (43)

1
narration:                                       ____
  But...  If she thinks of        da kedo----    gaki da  to OMOwarete-ru
  me as a brat, then...              but         am-brat  be-thinking-that

                                  you ja
                                  seems

  I've no chance at a             AYUKAWA to no NAKA         mo
  relationship with her.          relationship-with-Ayukawa  even

                                  NOZOmi      wa   nai        shi
                                  chance/wish (T)  not-there  consider

2
Madoka:
  The smoke's this bad            moo      kemuri ga   konna ni...
  already...                      already  smoke  (S)  like-this

3
Madoka FX:                        ____ ____
                     goho goho

Kyousuke:
  A-are you all right?!           da_ DAIJOUBU?!

4
Madoka:
  I wonder...                     atashi-tachi...    SHInjau      no ka na....
  If we'll die...                 we              (= SHInde-shimau)  I-wonder
                                                     die-(finality/regret)

Kyousuke:
  Eh?!                            e_?!

5
Madoka: [gaze downcast]
  Kasuga-kun...                   KASUGA-kun no koto......
                                  about-you

  I don't think of you as         OTOUTO           da nan-te  OMOtte-nai yo
  a kid brother.                  younger-brother  be         not-be-thinking

[Kyousuke goes wide-eyed.]

6
[Madoka looks up at the ceiling.]

7
narration:                        ___
  I'll have to change schools     ore mata  shite mo TENKOU          kaa----
  again.                    I   again even-if  transfer-school

Kyousuke:
  Ayukawa...  Don't be            AYUKAWA...    bikkuri shinai   de
  surprised, but please                         not-be surprised
  listen to me!
                                  kiite-kure!
                                  listen-(favor-to-me/command)
                                            ___
  I'm really...                   jitsu wa  ore...
                                  truth     I

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p 230 (44)

1
[Kyousuke begins to flash with the Power.]

2
Kyousuke:
 (I-I hear something!!            (na nani-ka      OTO   ga   kikoeru zo_!!
                                      something    sound (S)  hear

  Someone's voice?!)              HITO no KOE?!)
                                  person's-voice

3
Kyousuke: [flash thought]                     _chikara_
 (That's it.  If I                (so-- da    NOURYOKU o   MIMI ni
  concentrate the Power                       Power   (O)  to-ear
  on my ears!)
                                  SHUUCHUU sureba!)
                                  if-concentrate

4
Madoka: 
  What?  What's the matter?       nani?    do-- shita no

Kyousuke: [concentrating]
  Shh!  Be quiet!!                shi_  DAMAtte!!
                                     !  silently

5
[Madoka portrait--surprised and perplexed.]

6
Madoka:
  Kasuga-kun?!                    KASUGA-kun......?!

[Kyousuke continues to concentrate with eyes closed.]

7
[Their pov of the elevator doors, smoke wafting in the air.]
narration:
  No mistake about it...          machigai   nai----
                                  a-mistake  not-be

  I faintly hear...!!             kasuka ni      kikoete-kure       zo------
                                  faintly/dimly  hear-(favor-to-me) !!

  Someone's voice!                HITO no KOE    ga!
                                  person's-voice (S)

narration:                        ___________
  It's from outside the           erebe--ta-- no SOTO     kara  da!
  elevator!                       elevator    's outside  from  be

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p 231 (45)

1
Kyousuke: [eyes popping wide]
  Eh?!!                           e!!

2
[Kyousuke breathes a sigh of relief.]
narration:
  G-good...!                      so so-- ka------!

Kyousuke:                         ___
  Whew!                           ho_

3
Kyousuke: [brightly]
  It's all right!  I'm sure       DAIJOUBU  da yo!    kitto   TASUkaru  sa!!
  we'll be rescued!!              all-right be        surely  rescue

4
[Madoka looks at him.]

5
Kyousuke: [embarrassed]
  I-I mean, I feel that way       i iya  sonna KI ga suru  n da
  for some reason...                     feel-like-that    (explan)

                                  nan-da-ka...
                                  for-some-reason

6
Kyousuke:
  So let's be a little more       da kara     mo-- chotto no  shimbo--  da yo
  patient.                        that's-why  a-little-more   patience  be

  Look!  Even the smoke isn't     hora   kemuri mo  mou
  coming in anymore.              look!  smoke-too  already

                                  haitte-kite-nai   shi
                                  not-be-coming-in  consider

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1
[Madoka studies him...]

2
[...then gives a small hopeful smile.]
Madoka:
  Uh-hmm!                         un!

3
Madoka: [gaze downcast, tossing her hair back]
  You're a guy after all,         yappari    OTOKO no KO  da  ne
  hmm, Kasuga-kun?                after-all  guy          be

                                  KASUGA-kun wa

4
[Kyousuke portrait--bemused smile.]
narration:
  Now...                          kore de----

5
Kyousuke: [forced smile]
  Really?  I'm so happy you       soo?    sou OMOtte-kurete
  think so.                               thinking-like-that-(favor-to-me)

                                  ureshii yo
                                  happy

Madoka:
  You're holding that             kekkou  NE ni motte          n no  ne----_!
  against me, huh?!               quite   bearing-a-grudge-against   (rhet)

6
Madoka: [sternly]
  Well, putting that aside,       a  sore       wa   sou to
  what were you about to             that-(one) (T)  if-that-way
  say a little while ago?
                                  sakki             nani  Iou to
                                  little-while-ago  what  when-shall-say

                                  shite-ta   no?
                                  did-do     (?)

 "Not be surprised" about         nani  o   bikkuri shinai    de     tte?
  what?                           what (O)  not-be-surprised  being  (quote)

narration:
  I wonder if Ayukawa thinks      SUKOshi      wa   OTOKO to shite
  a bit better of me  now.
                                  minaoshite-kureta
                                  looked-at-it-again-(favor-to-me)

                                  ka na     AYUKAWA----
                                  I-wonder

Kyousuke: [placatingly]
  Eh?!  N-no.  That was...        e?!    i iya  are        wa...
                                           no   that-(one) (T)

  Don't worry about that.         KI ni shinai de yo
                                  not-mind

  It wasn't important...          taishita koto    ja nai  n da      kara...
                                  important-thing  is-not  (explan)  that's-why

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1
Madoka: [gentle smile, another toss of her hair back]
  Whaaat?  I was quite sure       naan da      atashi wa   tekkiri......
  that...                         what's-that  I      (T)  quite-sure

2
Kyousuke:
  Quite sure...  What?            tekkiri...  nani?

3
Kyousuke: [leaning towards her]
  Hmmm?!                          ne_

4
Madoka: [small smile]
  Nothing.                        nan demo nai yo

Kyousuke:
  Ah, that's not fair!            a  zurui na--_  so-- yu-- no!
                                     unfair       that-kind-of

5
[View looking down at Madoka talking to elevator repairmen/rescuers.  Kyousuke
 exits the elevator carrying the packages.  Two security guards stand nearby.]
narration:
  And 10 minutes later...         sore kara   10-FUN      GO------
                                  after-that  10-minutes  later-on
                                                      ___________
  We were safely rescued          bokura wa   BUJI    erebe--ta-- kara
  from the elevator...            we     (T)  safety  from-elevator

                                  TASUkedasareta       no da     kedo
                                  were-rescued-(from)  (explan)  but

sign:
  Chuugoku Department Store       CHUUGOKU
                                  China/Hiroshima-area/middle-of-a-country

                                  OUMONO     SAN               IE
                                  big-thing  fortune/property  house
                                                               

  7th Floor Romeo-20              7-KAI     SAI      TEI         BA
  Restaurant                      7-floors  meeting  restaurant  place

                                  #ROMEO 20#

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p 234 (48)

1
[Isolated shot of scorched table and chairs.]
narration:
  The truth was...  This          jitsu wa...  kono SOUDOU
  disturbance originated at       the-truth    this-disturbance
  the restaurant inside the       ________        _________
  department store.               depa--to NAI no resutoran de     Okotta
                                  in-restaurant-within-dept-store  took-place
                                  ____
  Smoke from a small fire got     boya       no kemuri ga   TSUUFUUKOU o
  into the ventilation and        small-fire 's smoke  (S)  vent-hole (O)
  entered the elevator.                            ___________
                                  tootte           erebe--ta-- ni haitta
                                  getting-through  entered-elevator

  That's all it was!              dake no koto      datta  n desu!
                                  nothing-but-that  was    (explan)

2
Madoka:
  Hey, Kasuga-kun...              chotto  KASUGA-kun......

Kyousuke:
  Eh?                             e

3
Madoka: [with angry expression]
  Because of that phone call,     sakki no DENWA de
  you knew it was no big deal,    on-account-of-the-phone-call-a-while-back
  didn't you!
                                  taishita koto    naitte    SHItte-ta
                                  important-thing  secretly  did-know

                                  n desho!
                                  (explan)

4
Kyousuke:
  EH?!                            e?!

5
Madoka: [turning to go, looking back over shoulder]
  Unbelievable!  Troubling        akireta!    HITO    sawagase         ni mo
  someone like that.  There's     amazed      person  trouble/disturb (IO)
  a limit to how far you can
  go!                             hodo   ga   aru      wa!
                                  extent (S)  there-is

  If you knew, why didn't you     SHItte-ta nara   nande  Iwanakatta   no
  say so?                         if-you-did-know  why    did-not-say  (?)

  That's sneaky!                  hikyo--  yo!

6
[Madoka heads for the doors as Kyousuke chases after her, burdened by the
 packages.]
Kyousuke:
  W-wait just a minute!           chi chotto  MAtte yo!

  I tell you I really didn't      HONTOU ni  SHIranakatta  n da     tteba!
  know!                           really     did-not-know  (explan) I-tell-you

narration:
  Actually, I say that, but       HONTOU ni  to yu-- no  wa   mochiron
  of course it's a lie...         really     saying-that (T)  of-course
                                  ___
                                  uso  de wa aru  ga------
                                  lie  is         but



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1
[Outside, he stumbles and the packages go flying.]
Kyousuke:
  Wah!                            wa_!

2
[From high overhead we see Madoka walking away, Kyousuke chasing after.]
Kyousuke:
  Wait!  Ayukawaaa!               MAtte yo--_!    AYUKAWA----_!

sign:
  ...no       ...NO   SHOUJI
  Commercial Affairs                commercial affairs
                                  _______     ____   ___
  Happy 5F Snack & Pub            sunakku  &  pabu   run       #5F#
                                  snack-and-pub      runrun?
                                                     = happy

[But splashed over the left side of the page is a front view of Madoka.  And
 we see that she is smiling.]

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